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Kuch der baad police aagayi or ranvir ko utha ker le gayi , police ki van k aankho se ojhal hone tak sabhi van ki or dekhte rahe
Or jese hi van waha se chali gayi , garima ghutno k bal girker buri tarah rone lagi ,aakhir roye bhi kyu na bechari , jis bhai ko wo apne maa baap se bhi jyada pyaar kerti thi , use manti thi , usi bhai ka esa nich karm dekh wo kaha bardasht ker sakti thi .
Geeta radha or sonam use sambhalne me lage hue the , wahi kavya to karan k liye pareshan ho rahi thi , kyunki karan ko dekh saaf saf pata chal raha tha ki wo abhi shant na hua h.
Or ye baat sach bhi thi , karan abhi vichlit or ashant tha , kyunki aaj uske hatho me uski maa or hone wale bhai ya bahan ka hatyara tha fir bhi na chahte hue bhi use us hatyare ko chodna pada .
Or us hatyare ki raksha bhi unhone ki jise wo mahadev k baad sabse jyada manta tha , jinka wo ansh tha , yani ki shani dev ne .
Kavya karan k pass jane ko hui ki pahale hi karan bina kuch bole ghar se bahar chala gaya.
Sonam karan ko yu jate Dekh ghabra gayi or sath me uski baki sari bahane bhi sivay jyoti k , kyunki wo karan ki manosthiti ko bhali bhanti samjh sakti thi , kyunki uska haal bhi kuch vesa hi tha.
Sabhi bahane jab karan ko rokne gayi to kavya ne unhe roka or jyoti se boli
Kavya :- ja beti , ab tu hi apne bhai ko sambhal sakti h , mujhe is baat ka pura yakin h.
Jyoti kuch ni bolti bas apni gardan ha me hila ker nikal gayi karan k Piche , bahar ja ker dekha to paya karan to waha h hi ni , jyoti samjh gayi ki karan kaha gaya hoga.
Usne pahale dekha ki koi aas pas to ni h na , fir usne apni ankh band ki or teleport ho pahunch gayi us jagah jaha se jyada shanti or aanand to unhe swarg lok me bhi na mila
Yani apni ma dwara banwaye gaye usi pyare se ghar me , jaha pahunchte hi wo apne bhai ko dhundne lagi.
Wahi dusri or
Naina vidhi ko ghar leker aayi , jaha sumitra vidhi ko sahi salamat dekh fule na sama rahi thi or na hi wo naina ka dhanyawad kerte kerte thak rahi thi.
Naina ne pahale vidhi ki shuddhi ki or fir use aaram kerne ko bhej diya or wo khud bhi apne dosto k sath aram kerne chali gayi.
Lekin naina k man me uth rahe sawal usko sone kese dete , usko samjh ni aaraha tha , akhir uske sath hi esa kyu ho raha tha.
Pahale wo ek sadharan si ladki thi , jiski duniya sirf uski padhai or pita tak simit thi ,lekin us hadse ne to uski duniya or uske jine ka maksad hi badal diya tha.
Uper se jese jese vo aage bhad rahi thi , usko sawalo k jwab kam or kayi naye sawal mil rahe the , jinke utter ka use koi andaza ni tha.
Tabhi uski najar pass me so rahi preety p jati h , or jo aaj ki ladayi se thak ker chur ho gayi thi or lette hi so gayi thi.
Sawal to preety k bare m bhi bahut the naina k dimag me , jese uski shaktiyon or uske tritiya hone ka etc
Lekin uske dil me ab is baat ku fikar bhi hone lagi thi , ki jese aage age vo badh rahe h , sankat or bhi khatarnak roop me samne aarahe h , jiske kaaran uske sath sath uske dosto ki jaan bhi khatre me padti ja rahi h
Isliye usne than liya , ki ab vo jald hi is baare me kuch karegi.
Yu hi naina vaha kuch din or ruki vidhi ko sambhalne k liye , jo lagna bhi tha , bechari k sath niyati ne esa khel jo khela tha.
Ab vidhi kafi had tak normal ho chuki thi , isiliye ab naina or uske dosto ka vidai ka samay aacuka tha , sumitra or vidhi ne unhe kuch din or rukne ko kaha , per ab unke liye or rukna mushkil hi tha , isliye unhonne vapas aane ka wada ker nikal pade haryana border ki or.
Raat hone tak wo haryana border k pass bane dhabe p khana kha rahe the .
Veer :-. Border pe to hum aachuke naina , ab hume kaha chalna h uska kese pata kare.
Naina :- bhul gaye veer kabristan me preton k leader ne hume upaay bataya tha , or ab usi upaay ka time aagaya h.
Preety :- to chalo sister, fir der kis baat ki.
Naina :- are moti , pahale khana to kha le , har time ghode pe savar rahati h.
is tarah hasi majak me khana khate h ,fir naina or uske dost bahar gadi k pas jate h jo dhabe k piche khadi thi , or jaha jungle tha.
Naina ne waha ek bada sa chapta pathar dekha or uske uper map bicha diya , jo haryana border se jude states ka tha, or map k charo kono p padhar rakh diye , taki map hile ni.
Fir naina ne apne bag se ek locket nikala , jo komolika ka tha , jo naina ne uske antim sanskar se pahale nikal liya tha .
Naina :- friends , ab hume samrat tak yahi locket pahuchayega .
Preety :- per kese sister.
Naina :- samraat tak pahuchne k liye hume pahale uske bhai markesh tak pahuchna hoga.
Or komolika ka ye locket jo use markesh ne diya tha , ab yahi uska pata batayega.
(Preety se ) preety lo pahale apni trittya shakti ko jagrit kero or fir isko muthi me bich ker ese todo ki , iska chura ban jaye.
Preety bilkul wesa hi kerti h , or fir naina us chure ko map pe fela ker apna yantra uske charo or ghumate hue kuch mantra bolti h or fir boli.
Naina :- bata he kali shakti kaha milega tujhe banane wala markesh
Naina k esa bolne k pach minute bad hi map per fela sara locket ka chura apne aap khisata hua ek point pe aaker fel gaya or fir gayab ho gaya , or wo jagah chamakne lagi.
Naina :- lo veer mil gayi humari manjil ka rasta , yahi h wo location ab jaha jana h.
Veer :- hmm , iske according ab hume rajasthan jana hoga.
Preety :- hmm rajasthan k kisi kulbhata ganv me ki location h ye to.
Naina :-. To chalo der kis baat ki.
Fir 3no dost nikal pade rajasthan ki or ek or nayi musibat ka samna kerne , per is baat se anjan ki , ab jo khatra unke samne aane wala h , uske aage piche wale sare khatre kuch bhi na the
Location :- kulbhata
Rajasthan jo mashoor h apne amulya dharohar , mahan itihas , veero ki bhumi or santo k karmbhumi hone k kaaran .
Ye wahi bhumi h jaha , rana pratap, rana sanga , bappa rawal jese veero ne janm liya , ye vahi bhumi h jaha panna dhay or hadi rani jesi verangnao ne apna balidan diya , yahi h vo bhumi jaha meera bai , sudas jese mahan santo ne janm liya.
Is bhumi ki mahima ka vanan kerne k liye shabd ni h mere pas , lekin jaha rajasthan apne mahan itihas or sanskriti k liye mashoor h .
Utna hi mashoor h apne rahasmayi sthano or dantkathao k liye.
Esi hi ek katha judi hui h kulbhata se bhi.
Chaliye jara najar marte h kulbhata pe bhi.
Kulbhata jo kabhi ek hasta khelta khushal ganv tha , ab vo bilkul veeran hone ki kagar pe tha
Esa kyu vo aage hi pata chalega , lekin yaha ki sthithi sahi na thi , aaye din yaha logo ki mot ho rahi thi , jiska kaaran medical science k according to atyadhik pyaas thi , matlab yaha k log kafi dino se pani ni pi rahe the .
Lekin main kaaran kuch or hi tha , darasal yaha pine k pani ka keval ek hi sadhan hi tha , wo tha yaha ganv k bicho bich mojud ek kua.
Esa ni tha ki ye kua sukh chunka tha , balki kua to upper tak pani se laba lab bhara hua tha.
Lekin fir bhi log katrate the is kue se pani bharne k kiye , yaha tak ki vo log milo dur dusre ganv se bhi pani lane ko teyar the, is kue k aas pas bhi ni fatakte
Ab log bhi pani k liye itni dur jate jate thak chuke the , isliye wo ab ganv chod ker jane lage the, lagbhag 70% ganv ab khali ho chuka tha or kue k as pas k sare ghar to bilkul khali the.
Tabhi ek musafir jo rajasthan ki garmi m kahi ja raha tha , lekin raste pyaas ki vajah se vo Yaha aapahucha tha , to usne jese hi kue ki or dekha , wo turant bhaga bhaga waha aaya or bina der kiye kue se pani nikal pine laga.
Jab usne pet bhar k pani pi liya to achanak uske gale me ek second dard hua , or fir usne apne hosh gava diye .
Matlab ki ab uska sharir uske vas me na tha, vo kisi ke vashikaran me aachuka tha.
Tabhi kue se ek bhayanak aawaz aayi.
Awaaz :- bahar kya kar rahe ho , ander aajao , mane tumhari pyas bhujayi , ab tum meri pyas bhujao.
Wo admi itna sunte hi kue me kud gaya or fir uska kuch pata na chala.
Us aadmi ko kudte hue 2 ganv valo ne dekha , in logo ne us admi ko jab pani pite dekha to use rokne ki koshis ki thi, lekin unke pahuchne tak kafi der ho chuki thi or ye hadsa ho chuka tha.
Admi 2 :- hey bhagwan kab tak chalega esa , kab tak yu hi masumo ko apne pran gavane padenge.
Admi 3 :- ha bhai , pata ni kab ishvar ko hum per daya aayegi or hume in dusht brahmrakshaso se mukti milegi
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Jyoti jungle wale ghar me pahunch karan ko yaha waha dhundne lagi , use karan ki bahut chinta ho rahi thi , kyunki karan ki manosthiti abhi thik ni thi .
Use is baat ki chinta ho rahi thi ki uska bhai , abhi dukhi hoga or kahi ro raha hoga , jise shant karwane k liye jyoti tadaf rahi thi.
Usne apne jhule ,mandir or garden charo or dhunda karan ko , per wo use kahi na mila .
Tabhi uske kano me karan ki aawaz aayi .
Karan :-. Gudiya m yaha hu , ander aajao.
Ye aawaz ghar k ander se aayi thi , jo almost normal hi thi , jise sun jyoti ko kuch shanti padi or wo turant ghar me bhagi .
Jaha karan unke or asha k room me betha tha , or uske hath me uski maa ki tasvir thi.
Jyoti jaker karan k gale lag gayi or rone lagi , karan tasvir ko side me rakhte hue jyoti ko shant karwate hue bola.
Karan :-. Ro kyu rahi ho meri pyari gudiya , tumhe to balki khush hona chahiye , aaj humne apne maa k hatyare ko uske anjam tak pahuncha hi diya h.
Jyoti karan ko itna shant dekh khush bhi thi or heran bhi.
Karan :- kya hua meri jaan , ese kyu ghur rahi ho mujhe.
Jyoti masumiyat se sisakte hue :- bhai jab aap achanak se ghar chod yaha aagaye to m dar gayi , mujhe laga...
Karan :- tumhe laga ki m abhi yaha dukhi ho ker rone aya hounga h na.
Jyoti gardan ha me hila deti h .
Karan :- ni gudiya , esa bilkul bhi ni h , m ashant jarur tha per udas ya dukhi ni , kyunki mane jo bhi kiya , wo bilkul sahi or uchit tha .
Or ager me sahi hu to kyu bina vajah dukhi ho aansu bahau.
Karan serious hote hue :- or vese bhi dandnayak karan ne vyarth me ansu bahana or vyarth k logo k liye ansu bahana usi din chod diya tha , jis din is matlabi sansar ki vastvikta se hum parichit hue.
Jyoti samjh gayi thi ki karan ka ishara us raat k hua hadse se h.
Karan :- m to bas yaha bas isliye aaya taki maa ki basayi hui humari is pyari duniya me aaker tumhare sath kuch samay bita ker apne ashant man ko shant ker saku.
Kyunki m janta tha ki meri pranpriya mere piche poche yaha jarur aayegi.
Ye bol karan ne jyoti k hotho ko halka sa chum liya .
Jyoti apne bhai ka naya roop dekh bahut khush thi , use khushi thi ki karan purani bato ko bhula ker , aage bhad raha h .
Fir kuch karan or jyoti yu hi ek dusro ki baho me pyar bhari baate kerte h , jyoti ne kavya ko phone kerke bol diya tha ki vo or karan ab normal h or kal subah tak wo ghar lot aayenge.
Raat ko karan apne hatho se khana banake jyoti ko us jhule pe bitha ker khilata h , jese kabhi asha un dono ko khilati thi.
Jyoti us pal ko yaad ker thodi bhavuk hui or uski ankh me ek bund aasu aagaya , jise dekh karan muskurate hue uske ansu pochta h or usko muskurane ka ishara kerta h.
Karan k is pyar bhare andaz se jyoti k chahre pe muskan aagayi , jise dekh karan jyoti ka mastak chum leta h or fir dono bhai bahan ek dusre ko khana khilate h.
Phir karan jyoti ko jhulane lagta h or kuch dee baad jyoti k sath beth jata h.
Jyoti :- bhai , ma k hatyare ko to humne uske mukam tak pahuncha diya h , ab humara aage kya kerna h.
Karan :- vahi gudiya , jiske liye humara janm hua h , ab bahut hua ye lukka chupi ka khel , ab vakt aagay h , dusht shaktiyo ko is baat ka gayan hone ka ki unka kaal aachuka h.
Bahut hua nakaratmak shaktiyon ka atyachar,ab samay achuka h ki is sansar k samaksh dand nayak k aane ka.
Ye sun jyoti k chahre pe muskan aagayi or karan k bhi.
Karan apni jagah se utha or apni ankh band ki or uske sharir se ek ati prakashaman tej nikalne laga or usike sath karan apne dand nayak roop me aagaya.
Karan :- m dand nayak karan mahadev k diye hue usk kavach ko ab khud se vilag kerta hu , jisne meri jivan urja ko chupaya hua tha .
Hey devadhidev mahadev apne is bhakt ki pprathna ko swikar kare.
Tabhi aasman se ek roshni karan or jyoti k tan pe padi or unke uper se vo kavach hat gaya.
Karan :-. Hey shani dev , aaj aapne bhale hi apne is bhakt ko nirash kiya, jiske liye m aapse rusht abhi bhi hu, parantu is kaaran m aapke diye hu kartavy se khud ko vimukh kadapi ni
Karunga , ye asha putra or jyoti k bhai karan ka vachan h aapko.
Wahi dusri or.
Mata chaya bhojan ki thali le kabse shani dev ko dhund rahi thi , lekin pura shani lok dhundne k baad bhi wo unhe na mile.
Tabhi mata chaya ko kuch dhyan aaya.
Mata :- jarur mera putra wahi hoga.
Mata chaya gayab ho sidha pahunch gayi , surya lok me mojud usi van me , jaha unka dusra nivas sthan tha.
Mata chaya ka andaza sahi tha , shani dev vahi nadi k kinare bethe the or udas bethe , nadi me kankad phek rahe the.
Mata chaya unke pas gayi or boli :- putra.
Mata chaya ko dekh shani dev jaldi se apni udasi ko chupane ki nakam koshis kerte hue apne chahre pr jhuti muskan late h.
Mata chaya shani k side me beth :- itne yug bit gaye , parantu mera putra bilkul na badla , putra mata hu m tumhari , tum bhale hi karmfal data ho , parantu fir bhi mujhse kuch ji chupa sakte.
Putra karan tumhara hi ansh h , tum ek prakar se uske pita hi ho , jese hanuman pavan dev k putra h , or isliye putra k kahe katu shabdo ka kya bura manna , ye baat tum bhi samjh sakte ho ki jo bhi hua , usme keval dosh paristhitiyon ka tha.
Shani dev mata chaya k gale lag bole.
Shani :- mata kisne kaha karan ne jo mujhe katu vachan kahe uske kaaran m udaas hu , in sab vachno ko sunne ka to abhyas sa ho gaya h , vese bhi m chahe kuch bhi ker lu , parantu manushy mujhe dand adhikari hi samjhta h , jiska mujhe koi dukh ni , kyunki mere bhay k kaaran vyakti kuch bhi bure karm kerne se pahale hajar baar sochta h or ager wo chetna se kaam le to wo kabhi mere dandvidhan ka patra ni banta, or jesa ki aapne kaha , karan to mera putra h or usne jo bhi mujhe kaha , mujh per usne apna wahi adhikar samjh ker kaha jo ek putra apna pita pe samjhta h.
M to udaas or chintit bas is kaaran hu mata kyunki jisdin karan ko vastvikta ka gyaan hoga , to wo is shan ko smaran ker tut na jaye mata , m aaj karan k kahe gaye katu shabd ko sahan ket gaya mata parantu apne putra ko yu tutta hua na dekh paunga.
Mata chaya :- jab itna kuch samjhte hi ho putra , to itni si baat ko kyu ni samjhte putra jese tum apne putra ko yu hatash or dukhi ni dekh sakti vese hi tumhari mata bhi to apne putra ko yu udaas ni dekh sakti na.
Isliye putra jo abhi hua hi ni uski kyu vyarth chinta kerna , dekho putra mahadev ki kripa se karan apne marg se bhatka ni h , apitu ab vo purntah saj h , apne karmpath pe agrasar hone k liye.
Isliye mere pyare putra , chinta ko tyag do or apne guru dev pe vishwas rakho , mahadev jo bhi karenge , uchit hi karenge.
Mata chaya k samjhane se shani bhi shant ho gaye or apni mata k hatho bhojan ker , aage ki yojna pe kaam kerne lage.
Location :- patal lok
Vp yu hi apni aage ki dusht yojna banane me laga hua tha , ki tabhi pura patal lok dagmagane laga , mano jese bhukamp aagaya ho .
Asuro me bhadgad mach gayi or sab idher udher bhane lage.
Vp gusse se chilaya :- shant ho jao sab.
Vp ki aawaz sun sab shant ho gaye or bhukamp bhi ruk gaya.
Vp :- patal lok me esa bhukamp , ye koi sadharan baat ni ho sakti , avashya hi kuch to gadbad h.
Vp ne apni aankh band kr jese hi dhyan lagaya , to uski herani or gusse ki koi sima n rahi.
Kyunki mahadev k kavach k hatne se ab karan vapas sare sansar ki drishti me aachuke the.
Vp gusse :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
1 asur :- kya hua maharaj
Vp :- vo rakshak karan jivit h or sath me uski sangini bhi.
Asur :-. Asambhav , mrityu k mukh se koi bhi ni bach sakta , humne khud apni aankho se unke shav dekhe the na maharaj.
Vp :- tumhara kahana anuchit bhi ji h senik, parantu itne yugo me ek baat se m bhali bhanti parichit ho chuka hu , jaha wo kapti shani or vishnu mojud ho vaha kuch bhi asambhav ni.
Bhut kal ki tarah ek baar fir us shani ne hum sabko chala h .
(Gusse se chilaya) shaniiiii, bahut hua tera ye parpanch , ab dekh m kya kerta hu
Ye bol vp hasne laga or apni yojna banane m lag gaya.
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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Kuch der baad police aagayi or ranvir ko utha ker le gayi , police ki van k aankho se ojhal hone tak sabhi van ki or dekhte rahe
Or jese hi van waha se chali gayi , garima ghutno k bal girker buri tarah rone lagi ,aakhir roye bhi kyu na bechari , jis bhai ko wo apne maa baap se bhi jyada pyaar kerti thi , use manti thi , usi bhai ka esa nich karm dekh wo kaha bardasht ker sakti thi .
Geeta radha or sonam use sambhalne me lage hue the , wahi kavya to karan k liye pareshan ho rahi thi , kyunki karan ko dekh saaf saf pata chal raha tha ki wo abhi shant na hua h.
Or ye baat sach bhi thi , karan abhi vichlit or ashant tha , kyunki aaj uske hatho me uski maa or hone wale bhai ya bahan ka hatyara tha fir bhi na chahte hue bhi use us hatyare ko chodna pada .
Or us hatyare ki raksha bhi unhone ki jise wo mahadev k baad sabse jyada manta tha , jinka wo ansh tha , yani ki shani dev ne .
Kavya karan k pass jane ko hui ki pahale hi karan bina kuch bole ghar se bahar chala gaya.
Sonam karan ko yu jate Dekh ghabra gayi or sath me uski baki sari bahane bhi sivay jyoti k , kyunki wo karan ki manosthiti ko bhali bhanti samjh sakti thi , kyunki uska haal bhi kuch vesa hi tha.
Sabhi bahane jab karan ko rokne gayi to kavya ne unhe roka or jyoti se boli
Kavya :- ja beti , ab tu hi apne bhai ko sambhal sakti h , mujhe is baat ka pura yakin h.
Jyoti kuch ni bolti bas apni gardan ha me hila ker nikal gayi karan k Piche , bahar ja ker dekha to paya karan to waha h hi ni , jyoti samjh gayi ki karan kaha gaya hoga.
Usne pahale dekha ki koi aas pas to ni h na , fir usne apni ankh band ki or teleport ho pahunch gayi us jagah jaha se jyada shanti or aanand to unhe swarg lok me bhi na mila
Yani apni ma dwara banwaye gaye usi pyare se ghar me , jaha pahunchte hi wo apne bhai ko dhundne lagi.
Wahi dusri or
Naina vidhi ko ghar leker aayi , jaha sumitra vidhi ko sahi salamat dekh fule na sama rahi thi or na hi wo naina ka dhanyawad kerte kerte thak rahi thi.
Naina ne pahale vidhi ki shuddhi ki or fir use aaram kerne ko bhej diya or wo khud bhi apne dosto k sath aram kerne chali gayi.
Lekin naina k man me uth rahe sawal usko sone kese dete , usko samjh ni aaraha tha , akhir uske sath hi esa kyu ho raha tha.
Pahale wo ek sadharan si ladki thi , jiski duniya sirf uski padhai or pita tak simit thi ,lekin us hadse ne to uski duniya or uske jine ka maksad hi badal diya tha.
Uper se jese jese vo aage bhad rahi thi , usko sawalo k jwab kam or kayi naye sawal mil rahe the , jinke utter ka use koi andaza ni tha.
Tabhi uski najar pass me so rahi preety p jati h , or jo aaj ki ladayi se thak ker chur ho gayi thi or lette hi so gayi thi.
Sawal to preety k bare m bhi bahut the naina k dimag me , jese uski shaktiyon or uske tritiya hone ka etc
Lekin uske dil me ab is baat ku fikar bhi hone lagi thi , ki jese aage age vo badh rahe h , sankat or bhi khatarnak roop me samne aarahe h , jiske kaaran uske sath sath uske dosto ki jaan bhi khatre me padti ja rahi h
Isliye usne than liya , ki ab vo jald hi is baare me kuch karegi.
Yu hi naina vaha kuch din or ruki vidhi ko sambhalne k liye , jo lagna bhi tha , bechari k sath niyati ne esa khel jo khela tha.
Ab vidhi kafi had tak normal ho chuki thi , isiliye ab naina or uske dosto ka vidai ka samay aacuka tha , sumitra or vidhi ne unhe kuch din or rukne ko kaha , per ab unke liye or rukna mushkil hi tha , isliye unhonne vapas aane ka wada ker nikal pade haryana border ki or.
Raat hone tak wo haryana border k pass bane dhabe p khana kha rahe the .
Veer :-. Border pe to hum aachuke naina , ab hume kaha chalna h uska kese pata kare.
Naina :- bhul gaye veer kabristan me preton k leader ne hume upaay bataya tha , or ab usi upaay ka time aagaya h.
Preety :- to chalo sister, fir der kis baat ki.
Naina :- are moti , pahale khana to kha le , har time ghode pe savar rahati h.
is tarah hasi majak me khana khate h ,fir naina or uske dost bahar gadi k pas jate h jo dhabe k piche khadi thi , or jaha jungle tha.
Naina ne waha ek bada sa chapta pathar dekha or uske uper map bicha diya , jo haryana border se jude states ka tha, or map k charo kono p padhar rakh diye , taki map hile ni.
Fir naina ne apne bag se ek locket nikala , jo komolika ka tha , jo naina ne uske antim sanskar se pahale nikal liya tha .
Naina :- friends , ab hume samrat tak yahi locket pahuchayega .
Preety :- per kese sister.
Naina :- samraat tak pahuchne k liye hume pahale uske bhai markesh tak pahuchna hoga.
Or komolika ka ye locket jo use markesh ne diya tha , ab yahi uska pata batayega.
(Preety se ) preety lo pahale apni trittya shakti ko jagrit kero or fir isko muthi me bich ker ese todo ki , iska chura ban jaye.
Preety bilkul wesa hi kerti h , or fir naina us chure ko map pe fela ker apna yantra uske charo or ghumate hue kuch mantra bolti h or fir boli.
Naina :- bata he kali shakti kaha milega tujhe banane wala markesh
Naina k esa bolne k pach minute bad hi map per fela sara locket ka chura apne aap khisata hua ek point pe aaker fel gaya or fir gayab ho gaya , or wo jagah chamakne lagi.
Naina :- lo veer mil gayi humari manjil ka rasta , yahi h wo location ab jaha jana h.
Veer :- hmm , iske according ab hume rajasthan jana hoga.
Preety :- hmm rajasthan k kisi kulbhata ganv me ki location h ye to.
Naina :-. To chalo der kis baat ki.
Fir 3no dost nikal pade rajasthan ki or ek or nayi musibat ka samna kerne , per is baat se anjan ki , ab jo khatra unke samne aane wala h , uske aage piche wale sare khatre kuch bhi na the
Location :- kulbhata
Rajasthan jo mashoor h apne amulya dharohar , mahan itihas , veero ki bhumi or santo k karmbhumi hone k kaaran .
Ye wahi bhumi h jaha , rana pratap, rana sanga , bappa rawal jese veero ne janm liya , ye vahi bhumi h jaha panna dhay or hadi rani jesi verangnao ne apna balidan diya , yahi h vo bhumi jaha meera bai , sudas jese mahan santo ne janm liya.
Is bhumi ki mahima ka vanan kerne k liye shabd ni h mere pas , lekin jaha rajasthan apne mahan itihas or sanskriti k liye mashoor h .
Utna hi mashoor h apne rahasmayi sthano or dantkathao k liye.
Esi hi ek katha judi hui h kulbhata se bhi.
Chaliye jara najar marte h kulbhata pe bhi.
Kulbhata jo kabhi ek hasta khelta khushal ganv tha , ab vo bilkul veeran hone ki kagar pe tha
Esa kyu vo aage hi pata chalega , lekin yaha ki sthithi sahi na thi , aaye din yaha logo ki mot ho rahi thi , jiska kaaran medical science k according to atyadhik pyaas thi , matlab yaha k log kafi dino se pani ni pi rahe the .
Lekin main kaaran kuch or hi tha , darasal yaha pine k pani ka keval ek hi sadhan hi tha , wo tha yaha ganv k bicho bich mojud ek kua.
Esa ni tha ki ye kua sukh chunka tha , balki kua to upper tak pani se laba lab bhara hua tha.
Lekin fir bhi log katrate the is kue se pani bharne k kiye , yaha tak ki vo log milo dur dusre ganv se bhi pani lane ko teyar the, is kue k aas pas bhi ni fatakte
Ab log bhi pani k liye itni dur jate jate thak chuke the , isliye wo ab ganv chod ker jane lage the, lagbhag 70% ganv ab khali ho chuka tha or kue k as pas k sare ghar to bilkul khali the.
Tabhi ek musafir jo rajasthan ki garmi m kahi ja raha tha , lekin raste pyaas ki vajah se vo Yaha aapahucha tha , to usne jese hi kue ki or dekha , wo turant bhaga bhaga waha aaya or bina der kiye kue se pani nikal pine laga.
Jab usne pet bhar k pani pi liya to achanak uske gale me ek second dard hua , or fir usne apne hosh gava diye .
Matlab ki ab uska sharir uske vas me na tha, vo kisi ke vashikaran me aachuka tha.
Tabhi kue se ek bhayanak aawaz aayi.
Awaaz :- bahar kya kar rahe ho , ander aajao , mane tumhari pyas bhujayi , ab tum meri pyas bhujao.
Wo admi itna sunte hi kue me kud gaya or fir uska kuch pata na chala.
Us aadmi ko kudte hue 2 ganv valo ne dekha , in logo ne us admi ko jab pani pite dekha to use rokne ki koshis ki thi, lekin unke pahuchne tak kafi der ho chuki thi or ye hadsa ho chuka tha.
Admi 2 :- hey bhagwan kab tak chalega esa , kab tak yu hi masumo ko apne pran gavane padenge.
Admi 3 :- ha bhai , pata ni kab ishvar ko hum per daya aayegi or hume in dusht brahmrakshaso se mukti milegi
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Jyoti jungle wale ghar me pahunch karan ko yaha waha dhundne lagi , use karan ki bahut chinta ho rahi thi , kyunki karan ki manosthiti abhi thik ni thi .
Use is baat ki chinta ho rahi thi ki uska bhai , abhi dukhi hoga or kahi ro raha hoga , jise shant karwane k liye jyoti tadaf rahi thi.
Usne apne jhule ,mandir or garden charo or dhunda karan ko , per wo use kahi na mila .
Tabhi uske kano me karan ki aawaz aayi .
Karan :-. Gudiya m yaha hu , ander aajao.
Ye aawaz ghar k ander se aayi thi , jo almost normal hi thi , jise sun jyoti ko kuch shanti padi or wo turant ghar me bhagi .
Jaha karan unke or asha k room me betha tha , or uske hath me uski maa ki tasvir thi.
Jyoti jaker karan k gale lag gayi or rone lagi , karan tasvir ko side me rakhte hue jyoti ko shant karwate hue bola.
Karan :-. Ro kyu rahi ho meri pyari gudiya , tumhe to balki khush hona chahiye , aaj humne apne maa k hatyare ko uske anjam tak pahuncha hi diya h.
Jyoti karan ko itna shant dekh khush bhi thi or heran bhi.
Karan :- kya hua meri jaan , ese kyu ghur rahi ho mujhe.
Jyoti masumiyat se sisakte hue :- bhai jab aap achanak se ghar chod yaha aagaye to m dar gayi , mujhe laga...
Karan :- tumhe laga ki m abhi yaha dukhi ho ker rone aya hounga h na.
Jyoti gardan ha me hila deti h .
Karan :- ni gudiya , esa bilkul bhi ni h , m ashant jarur tha per udas ya dukhi ni , kyunki mane jo bhi kiya , wo bilkul sahi or uchit tha .
Or ager me sahi hu to kyu bina vajah dukhi ho aansu bahau.
Karan serious hote hue :- or vese bhi dandnayak karan ne vyarth me ansu bahana or vyarth k logo k liye ansu bahana usi din chod diya tha , jis din is matlabi sansar ki vastvikta se hum parichit hue.
Jyoti samjh gayi thi ki karan ka ishara us raat k hua hadse se h.
Karan :- m to bas yaha bas isliye aaya taki maa ki basayi hui humari is pyari duniya me aaker tumhare sath kuch samay bita ker apne ashant man ko shant ker saku.
Kyunki m janta tha ki meri pranpriya mere piche poche yaha jarur aayegi.
Ye bol karan ne jyoti k hotho ko halka sa chum liya .
Jyoti apne bhai ka naya roop dekh bahut khush thi , use khushi thi ki karan purani bato ko bhula ker , aage bhad raha h .
Fir kuch karan or jyoti yu hi ek dusro ki baho me pyar bhari baate kerte h , jyoti ne kavya ko phone kerke bol diya tha ki vo or karan ab normal h or kal subah tak wo ghar lot aayenge.
Raat ko karan apne hatho se khana banake jyoti ko us jhule pe bitha ker khilata h , jese kabhi asha un dono ko khilati thi.
Jyoti us pal ko yaad ker thodi bhavuk hui or uski ankh me ek bund aasu aagaya , jise dekh karan muskurate hue uske ansu pochta h or usko muskurane ka ishara kerta h.
Karan k is pyar bhare andaz se jyoti k chahre pe muskan aagayi , jise dekh karan jyoti ka mastak chum leta h or fir dono bhai bahan ek dusre ko khana khilate h.
Phir karan jyoti ko jhulane lagta h or kuch dee baad jyoti k sath beth jata h.
Jyoti :- bhai , ma k hatyare ko to humne uske mukam tak pahuncha diya h , ab humara aage kya kerna h.
Karan :- vahi gudiya , jiske liye humara janm hua h , ab bahut hua ye lukka chupi ka khel , ab vakt aagay h , dusht shaktiyo ko is baat ka gayan hone ka ki unka kaal aachuka h.
Bahut hua nakaratmak shaktiyon ka atyachar,ab samay achuka h ki is sansar k samaksh dand nayak k aane ka.
Ye sun jyoti k chahre pe muskan aagayi or karan k bhi.
Karan apni jagah se utha or apni ankh band ki or uske sharir se ek ati prakashaman tej nikalne laga or usike sath karan apne dand nayak roop me aagaya.
Karan :- m dand nayak karan mahadev k diye hue usk kavach ko ab khud se vilag kerta hu , jisne meri jivan urja ko chupaya hua tha .
Hey devadhidev mahadev apne is bhakt ki pprathna ko swikar kare.
Tabhi aasman se ek roshni karan or jyoti k tan pe padi or unke uper se vo kavach hat gaya.
Karan :-. Hey shani dev , aaj aapne bhale hi apne is bhakt ko nirash kiya, jiske liye m aapse rusht abhi bhi hu, parantu is kaaran m aapke diye hu kartavy se khud ko vimukh kadapi ni
Karunga , ye asha putra or jyoti k bhai karan ka vachan h aapko.
Wahi dusri or.
Mata chaya bhojan ki thali le kabse shani dev ko dhund rahi thi , lekin pura shani lok dhundne k baad bhi wo unhe na mile.
Tabhi mata chaya ko kuch dhyan aaya.
Mata :- jarur mera putra wahi hoga.
Mata chaya gayab ho sidha pahunch gayi , surya lok me mojud usi van me , jaha unka dusra nivas sthan tha.
Mata chaya ka andaza sahi tha , shani dev vahi nadi k kinare bethe the or udas bethe , nadi me kankad phek rahe the.
Mata chaya unke pas gayi or boli :- putra.
Mata chaya ko dekh shani dev jaldi se apni udasi ko chupane ki nakam koshis kerte hue apne chahre pr jhuti muskan late h.
Mata chaya shani k side me beth :- itne yug bit gaye , parantu mera putra bilkul na badla , putra mata hu m tumhari , tum bhale hi karmfal data ho , parantu fir bhi mujhse kuch ji chupa sakte.
Putra karan tumhara hi ansh h , tum ek prakar se uske pita hi ho , jese hanuman pavan dev k putra h , or isliye putra k kahe katu shabdo ka kya bura manna , ye baat tum bhi samjh sakte ho ki jo bhi hua , usme keval dosh paristhitiyon ka tha.
Shani dev mata chaya k gale lag bole.
Shani :- mata kisne kaha karan ne jo mujhe katu vachan kahe uske kaaran m udaas hu , in sab vachno ko sunne ka to abhyas sa ho gaya h , vese bhi m chahe kuch bhi ker lu , parantu manushy mujhe dand adhikari hi samjhta h , jiska mujhe koi dukh ni , kyunki mere bhay k kaaran vyakti kuch bhi bure karm kerne se pahale hajar baar sochta h or ager wo chetna se kaam le to wo kabhi mere dandvidhan ka patra ni banta, or jesa ki aapne kaha , karan to mera putra h or usne jo bhi mujhe kaha , mujh per usne apna wahi adhikar samjh ker kaha jo ek putra apna pita pe samjhta h.
M to udaas or chintit bas is kaaran hu mata kyunki jisdin karan ko vastvikta ka gyaan hoga , to wo is shan ko smaran ker tut na jaye mata , m aaj karan k kahe gaye katu shabd ko sahan ket gaya mata parantu apne putra ko yu tutta hua na dekh paunga.
Mata chaya :- jab itna kuch samjhte hi ho putra , to itni si baat ko kyu ni samjhte putra jese tum apne putra ko yu hatash or dukhi ni dekh sakti vese hi tumhari mata bhi to apne putra ko yu udaas ni dekh sakti na.
Isliye putra jo abhi hua hi ni uski kyu vyarth chinta kerna , dekho putra mahadev ki kripa se karan apne marg se bhatka ni h , apitu ab vo purntah saj h , apne karmpath pe agrasar hone k liye.
Isliye mere pyare putra , chinta ko tyag do or apne guru dev pe vishwas rakho , mahadev jo bhi karenge , uchit hi karenge.
Mata chaya k samjhane se shani bhi shant ho gaye or apni mata k hatho bhojan ker , aage ki yojna pe kaam kerne lage.
Location :- patal lok
Vp yu hi apni aage ki dusht yojna banane me laga hua tha , ki tabhi pura patal lok dagmagane laga , mano jese bhukamp aagaya ho .
Asuro me bhadgad mach gayi or sab idher udher bhane lage.
Vp gusse se chilaya :- shant ho jao sab.
Vp ki aawaz sun sab shant ho gaye or bhukamp bhi ruk gaya.
Vp :- patal lok me esa bhukamp , ye koi sadharan baat ni ho sakti , avashya hi kuch to gadbad h.
Vp ne apni aankh band kr jese hi dhyan lagaya , to uski herani or gusse ki koi sima n rahi.
Kyunki mahadev k kavach k hatne se ab karan vapas sare sansar ki drishti me aachuke the.
Vp gusse :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
1 asur :- kya hua maharaj
Vp :- vo rakshak karan jivit h or sath me uski sangini bhi.
Asur :-. Asambhav , mrityu k mukh se koi bhi ni bach sakta , humne khud apni aankho se unke shav dekhe the na maharaj.
Vp :- tumhara kahana anuchit bhi ji h senik, parantu itne yugo me ek baat se m bhali bhanti parichit ho chuka hu , jaha wo kapti shani or vishnu mojud ho vaha kuch bhi asambhav ni.
Bhut kal ki tarah ek baar fir us shani ne hum sabko chala h .
(Gusse se chilaya) shaniiiii, bahut hua tera ye parpanch , ab dekh m kya kerta hu
Ye bol vp hasne laga or apni yojna banane m lag gaya.
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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