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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Update no :- 107
Location :- shani lok.

Karan or jyoti k jane k baad mata chaya udaas bethi thi , tabhi shani dev waha aaye or apni mata k pass ghutno k bal beth apna sir unki god me rakh bolo.

Shani :- kya hua mata , aap itne udaas kyu bethe ho .

Mata chaya pyaar se shani k balo me ungliya ferte hue boli :- putra mahadev k vardaan k kaaran , sansar ki esi koi ghatna ya baat ni jisse tum anbhigya ho , fir sab jante hue bhi ye prashn kyu.

Shani god se apna sir utha ker apni ma ko prem se dekhte hue bola.

Shani :- bas isliye mata , kyunki jo anand aapke mukh se putra sunne ka mujhe praapt hota h , wo anand to sahastra varsho k pyase ko amrit paan m bhi praapt na ho mata.

Man kitna bhi ashant or adhir kyu na ho mata , aapke anchal ki chaya me aaker mera man or meri atma purntah tript ho jati h.

Mata chaya ka hriday apne putra k prem ko dekh gad gad ho jata h .

Devi chaya shani ka mukh prem se chum :- putra m mahadev ka kis prakar dhanyawad karu jo unhonne tum jesa putra mujhe pradaan kiya , mera bacha mujhse kitna prem kerta h.

(Tabhi unki ankhe nam ho gayi ) or ek m hu kitni buri maa hu m , jisne apne putra ka kuch dosh hote hue bhi use itna bada dand de dala tha bhut kaal me , jis kaaran kitna kasht saha tumne putra , mujhse tumhe itne varsho dur rahana pada , meri ghrina bhi jheli , mujhse buri maa koi hogi hi ni na putra.

Ye bol mata chaya rone lagi , darasal unhe bhut kaal ki ek ghatna ka smaran ho gaya tha, jisme ek galatfehmi ki vajah se shani or mata chaya ek dusre se dur ho gaye the. thik vese hi jese aaj radha or karan h.

Shani dev per devraj indra k shadyantra k kaaran apni hi bahan ki hatya ka iljaam laga tha , or sachayi ye thi ki shami dev ki bahan bhadra ne apna ant swayam ker liya tha , lekin jis ashtra se unhone esa kiya , wo shani k hath me tha or bhadra ne shani k hath ko pakad k hi khud k uper prahar kerwa liya , lekin devo chaya ko dur se laga tha ki shani ne hi apni bahan ko mara.

Or isi kaaran galatfahmi ki vajah se unke rishte me darar pad gayi thi or chaya ne shani ko dev lok se nikalwa diya tha.

Lekin varsho baad bhadra jo ki ab ek samay ka roop ban chuki thi , usne aaker apni bhai ki nirdoshta ko pramanit kiya , tab devi chaya ko bahut glani hui , lekin itna sab kuch hone k baad bhi shani k man me apni maa k liye jara sa bhi dwesh utpan na hua tha or unhone apni mata ko usi samay shama ker diya tha.

Shani apni maa k ansu poochte hue :- ni mata kripya esa mat kijiye , mane aapko kitni baar kaha h na ki m kuch bhi sahan ker sakta hu per apni mata k ankho m ashru ki ek bund bhi ni.

Ap kyu us ghatna ko leker dukhi hoti ho , jo bit chuki h , mane kaha tha na mujhe apni mata se na us samay koi shikayat thi na aaj h , isliye ye rona band kijiye or muskuraiye.

Mata :- parantu putra.

Shani :- kaha na mata aap ni royenge , aapko meri saugandh .

Shani ki kasam sun mata shant ho jati h or shani k galo ko khichte hue boli.

Mata :- acha mere bache ni royungi , parantu mujhe ye batao ki tumhare mukh pe ye chinta ki rekhaye kyu h putra .Ab to sab kuch sahi ho chuka h , karan or jyoti to apne kartavya ko purn kerne ko bhi tatpar ho chuke h or prathvi pe bhi lot chuke h or shayad ab unko apne jivan k ek bade satya ka bhi gyan hone wala h.

Devi chaya ka ishara veer or naina ki or tha.

Shani :- ni mata ye samay uchit ni h unka naina se milne ka or us satya se avgat hone ka .

Or rahi baat meri pareshani ki to mata kaaran to aap bhi janti hi ho na , manta hu ki aapka mantavya uchit tha , parantu aapko karan or jyoti ko abhi us satya se avgat ni karwana chahiye tha or vo bhi visheshkar ardh satya se

Kyunki mata karan ki ek bhul ka parinam burayi ko aprajit bana sakti h.

Mata chaya :- parantu putra , aaj ni to kal unhe satya ka gyat to hona hi tha na , uper se mere pas koi marg bhi shesh na tha, or putra jesa bhi ho ek din to undono ko satya se avgat to hona hi tha , bhale hi ardh satya hi kyu na ho , baaki ka satya to unhe bhavishya me apne aap gyaat ho hi jayega , jab unka milan naina se hoga.

Shani :-. Wahi to chinta ka vishay h mata , us milan k baad hi us ghatna karam ka arambh hoga jis kaaran m or narayan chintit h or gurudev k man me pata ni kya lila kerme ka vichar h , jo vo kuch bata bhi ni rahe

Mata chaya muskurate hue :- tum chintit kyu hote ho putra , tum hi to kahate , sansaar me ghatit hone wali har ghatna ka ek kaaran avashya hota h jo jan kalyan k liye avashyak h.

Or mujhe mahadev pe purn vishwas h , wo jo karenge wo uchit hi hoga.

Back to the hero.

Engine me kuch kharabi aagayi thi , isliye station pe train 2 ghante ruki rahi , tab tak karan jyoti or veer me achi dosti ho gayi thi.

Veer :- vese manna padega dost , aap dono bhai bahan ka pyaar dekh ker jalan to bahut ho rahi h , bachpan se meri khwaish thi ki meri bhi ek bahan hoti , jise m khub pyaar kerta , usko apni palko pe bitha k rakhta , uski har ek khawaish puri kerta, per yaha to.

Veer bolte bolte ruk gaya , uski ankhe nam ho gayi , kyunki usko apne parivar ki yaad ane lagi ,uske maa baap ki jo,Ek hadse me chal base the.

Jyoti veer ki ansu pocte hue :- are aap rone kyu lage , kisne kaha ki aapki bahan ni h , m hu na apki bahan veer bhai.

Jyoti k muh se bhai sun veer emotional ho gaya to jyoti use shant karane lagi , use gale laga.

Karan :- o mr rotulal , bahan hi ni ek bhai bhi h tumhara .

Ye bol karan ne veer ko gale laga liya , tabhi mahol ko halka kerne k liye jyoti boli.

Jyoti :- bas kero bhai ,or kitna royoge,ese hi rote rahe or bhabhi ko is bare me pata chala to verna preety bhabhi kya sochegi , kesi nanad mili h unhe , jo unke balma ko milte hi rulane lagi .

Jyoti ki baat sun veer k chahre pe muskan aagayi or vo kuch der k liye to karan or jyoti k sath rah apne dukh ko bhul sa hi gaya.

Per Karan or jyoti ne ek baat notice ker li thi ki veer bhale hi khud ko normal dikhane ki koshis ker raha h , per sach to ye h ki wo bahut pareshan h.

Train chal padi thi or raat bahut ho gayi thi to karan ne kal is baare me veer se baat kerne ki sochi , kyunki veer ko jaha jana tha , vo area unke advocate k ghar k pass me hi tha.

Karan or jyoti bhi so gaye , dopahar ko 12 baje gadi delhi station pe pahunch gayi .

Karan jyoti or veer station se utare or taxi k liye dhundne lage , taxi to ni per unhe auto rikshaw mila wo bhi badi muskil se , lekin yaha apni heroine ne har aam ladki wali aadat ka parichay dene lagi.

Hua darasal ye ki karan veer or jyoti jese hi ek rikshaw ke pas gaye to karan bola.

Karan :- bhaiya ashok nagar chaloge kya .

Driver :- ha ha chalega na sahab , per 300 lunga.

Karan abhi ha hi bolne wala tha ki bich me jyoti tapak padi.

Jyoti :- kya bhaiya , tourist samjh k bevkoof bana rahe ho kya , m yaha aati rahati hu or mujhe sab pata h kitna kaha ka lagta h.

180 m chalna h to chalo.

Driver :- are madam 180 me kese hoga , aap ese karo 250 dedo.

Jyoti :- kaha na 170 hi dungi .

Driver :- are madam abhi to apne 180 bola , aap 200 hi dedo or beth jao.

Jyoti :- 160.

Driver :- are madam

Jyoti :- 150

Driver samjh gaya usne galat ladki se panga leliya, or wo bola.

Diver :- are madam bas bas or jam mat kerna , aap to 150 m hi chal lo.

Jyoti style marte hue auto me bethate hue :- pahale hi baat man lete to 30 rs ka nuksan to na hota aapka bhaiya.

Karan or veer to muh fade herani se jyoti k is karname ko dekhe ja rahe the , kya bargaining skill the uske, ye khasiyat sirf ladkiyo me hi hoti h jo 500 k top ko bhi 150 m le aati h or yaha ladko ka bas chale to wo dukandar ko polythene k pese bhi alag se de aaye.

Jyoti :- are ab dono yu khade hi rahoge kya , chalo ander aao jana ni h kya.

Jyoti ki aawaz se karan or veer ko hosh aaya.Or vo dono bhi rikshaw me beth gaye or chal pade apni manjil ki or.

Jyoti man me :- bhai hum vakeel uncle k pass ja to rahe h , per hum unko sabit kese karenge ki hum hi unki.client asha k bache h.

Karan :- tum chinta mat kero gudiya , bhul gayi mummy ne uska bhi upaay cd m bataya tha.

Jyoti :- hmm

Kuch der baad karan or jyoti advocate k ghar pahunch gaye or veer ki manjil waha se 3 km ki duri pe thi to unhone kam hone k baad sham ko kam hone k baad milne ka tay kiya or veer usi auto me aage nikal gaya.

Karan or jyoti main gate pe jaker doorbell press kerte h , kuch der baad ek 24 25 saal ki ladki gate kholti h.

Ladki :- ji kahiye , aap kon or aapko kinse milna h.

Karan :- ji m karan or ye meri sister jyoti sharma h , hume advocate mr khanna se milna h, unse ek case k silsile me kuch baat kerni h .

Ladki :- papa se , per papa ne apni practice hi band ker di fir wo aapki kisi case me kese help karenge, or aapko koi preference chahiye to please aap baad me aaiyega, papa ki tabiyat thik ni h.

Advocate sahab ki tabiyat aajkal kuch kharab si rahati thi , isliye unko disturbance na ho isliye unki beti bahut hi kam logo se unhe milne deti or vese bhi ab unhonne practice to chod hi di thi.

Karan :- ji actually humari maa ,mrs asha sharma ji unki ek bahut hi purani client thi , or unhone hamari amanat ko aapke papa k pas sambhalaya tha , hum unse usi silsile me milna chahte h , please humara unse milna bahut jaruri h , please.

Karan ki request sun wo ladki kuch der sochti h or fir boli.

Ladki :- ok aap ander yahi rukiya , m papa se permission leke aati hu.

Ye bol ladki ander gayi or jese usne asha ka naam or pata khana sahab ko bataya , khanna sahab uchal pade or apni beti ko karan or jyoti ko bulane ko bola.

Karan or jyoti apne sanskaro k anusar ander jate hi khanna sahab k per chue.

Vakil sahab ne apni adat anusar shak kiya or saboot ki baat indirectly karan or jyoti se ki.

Or karan ne wo cd aage rakhte hue jyoti ko ishara kiya , or dono bhai bahan ne apne gale me mojud vo locket dikhaye.jise dekhte hi khanna sahab ko yakin ho gaya , or unhone bade hi pyaar se karan or jyoti ko gale laga liya.

Darasal asha ne cd me is baat ka jikra kiya tha ki , ager vakil sahab saboot mange to ye cd unhe dikha dena or sath me apne gale me mojud wo lockets bhi.

Kyunki khanna sahab ko asha apna bhai jesa manti thi to usne keval is cd vale msg k bare me use hi bataya tha or karan or jyoti ki pahachan unke locket hi batayi thi , jinki tasvire khana ne dekhi thi.

Khanna :- apne mama ko maaf ker dena bacho jo tum per shak kiya , tumhare tez or tumhare sanskaro ko dekh k hi m samjh gaya tha ki tum asha bahan k bache hi ho , per kya keru vakeel hu na shak kerne ki aadat h.

Karan :- are ni ni mamaji , aap mafi mat mangiye , ye to aapki duty h or duty kerne k liye kesi mafi mangna.

Ulta thank u to mujhe aapko kahana h jo aapne itne saal humari maa ki amanat ko sambhala

Khanna :- usme thank u kesa beta vo to mera farz tha , per ek baat ka afsos aaj bhi h ki m bahan asha k na to dushmano ko dhund saka na hi unko bacha saka.

Ye baat khanna ne nam anko se afsos k sath boli.

Karan :- roiye mat mama ji , ab royega to wo , jinhone humse hamari ma ko china h

Khanna herani se :- kya tumhe pata chal gaya h ki kon h wo kamina.

Karan :-. Ha mamaji.

Or fir karan or jyoti ne ab tak ki sari kahani khanna ko suna dali or apne ka ek jhuta bahana bana dala.

Khanna :- kya ranvir ne esa kiya , impossible , rajvir to asha bahan se ji jan se pyar kerta tha , vo esa kese ker sakta h

Jyoti :- pyaar ni sirf dhong tha us kamine ka mamaji , sirf or sirf dhong , jo usne apna ulu sidha kerne k liye kiya.

Karan or jyoti k chahro k bhav se khanna samjh gaya ki vo sach bol rahe h.

Khanna ne to ek vakil hone k nate , legal tarika apnane ko kaha , per dand nayak kese itni aasan saja ranvir ko pane deta , usne saf saf bol diya ki ranvir ko saja kanun ni , balki vo khud dega.

Khanna :- thik h beta , per her kadam fuk fuk ker rakhna hoga tumhe .

Karan :- aap uski fikar mat kijiye mama ji mane sab soch liya h ki mujhe kya kerna h .

Per uske liye ab mujhe apni maa ki amant ki jarurat padegi.

Khanna ne karan or jyoti se kaha , wo.kaam aaj to ni kal hi ho payega , isliye aaj tum yahi ruk jao.

Karan or jyoti maan gaye or veer ko phone p is bare m bata ker , khanna ki beti k sath guest room m ki or bad gaye.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Guest room me thodi der rest kerne k baad karan or jyoti aage ki kuch planning ker rahe the.ki tabhi unke gate p knock hua .

Karan :- ander aajaiye gate khula h.

Karan k itna bolne pe gate khulta h or vakil sahab ki beti ander enter kerte h , jiske hath me nashte ki tray thi , jo wo karan or jyoti k liye layi thi.

Ladki :- sorry mane tum dono ko disturb to ni kiya na.

Jyoti :- are ni ni esi koi baat ni h ...

Jyoti bolte bolte ruk gayi , kyunki wo unka naam janti hi ni thi , tab wo ladki boli.

Ladki :- oh sorry m tum dono ko apna naam batana to bhul hi gayi , hi mera naam ridhima h , per tumne mere papa ko mama bola h , to is hisab se m tumhari didi hui , to tum mujhe ridhi di bol sakte ho.

Ridhima bahut hi simple ladki thi , usne apni graduation puri ker li thi or apne papa ka khayal rakhi thi or ek company ki manager thi , use kabhi bhi ye bf gf wale chakkr me koi interest raha hi ni tha , uska sara dhyan apne carrier or apne pita ki seva m laga rahata.

Ridhima ki baat sun achanak se karan ko riya ki yaad aagayi , use wo yaad aagaya jab wo pahali baar riya se mila tha or bilkul isi tarah riya ne use apna bhai bana liya tha , uski ankho k samne riya k sath bitaye pyar bhare pal aane lage , fir agle hi pal uski ankho k samne us hadse ka drishy bhi aagaya , jab riya ne usko buri tarah dutkarke or bina koi baat sune usse bura bhala bol sara rishta tod liya tha.

Uske kano me riya or radha k wo sare apshabd gunjane lage , jo un dono ne use bole the.

(Riya :- mat bol apni gandi juban se mujhe di , tu ek hawasi h)

Ye sab yaad aate hi karan ki ankho me ashru or mukh per krodh k bhav ubharne lage.

Jyoti apne bhai ki halat ko samjh gayi thi or use shant kerne k liye uske hath ko apne hath me tham liya , jyoti k sparsh ko paker karan dhire dhire shant ho gaya.

Ridhi pareshan ho :- kya hua bhai , mane kuch galat bol diya kya , ager esa h to please mujhse gussa mat hona , itne samay baad to mujhe koi mila h jise m bhai kah saku verna yaha to sabko ladkiyo se ek hi rishte chahiye.

Jesa ki mane bataya ki ridhi ek sidhi sadhi ladki thi , jo apne pita ki ekloti santaan thi to use hamesha ek bhai ya bahan ki kami khalti , usne aaspas k kisi ladke ko bhai apna muh bola bhai banane ki koshis bhi ki , lekin ridhi jesi khubsurat ladki ko ladke keSe aajkal k havas k pujari type ladke apni bahan man lete , isliye wo akeli hi rahi , aaj jab usne apne pita k liye usne karan or jyoti k muh se mana shabd suna to ye ummid leker aayi ki vo to use apni bahan k roop me apna lega, lekin karan k hav bhav k badlte dekh usko apni aakhiri ummid tutti najar aayi .

Karan ne ridhi k muh se uski masumiyat bhari baate suni to wo shant ho gaya.

Karan :- aapse kisne kaha ki m aapse gussa hu " didi ".

Ridhi to ye sun uchal padi or khushi se boli :- kya bole , ek baar or bolo na.

Karan :- kisne kaha m apse naraj hu

Ridhi :- ye ni iske aage jo bola tha vo.

Karan muskan k sath :- didi.

Ye sun ridhi khushi k mare karan k gale lag gayi , karan ne ridhi ki khushi k liye use apni bahan k roop me apna to liya tha, lekin uska dil abhi bhi naye rishte banane k liye ready na tha .

Or esa hona swabhavik hi h , jinse sabse jyada pyaar kare or vo hi vishwasghat kare to sab kuch sahi hona itna aasan ni hota.

Karan k dil me abhi bhi vo baate chal rahi thi , jiske chalte karan k ankho se ansu ki bunde nikalne lagi , jise jyoti ne jhat se puch diya , jo ridhi ko dekh khush thi , ridhi ko to karan k ansu ni dikhe gale lage hone ki vajah se , lekin jyoti ne dekh liye the or wo ni chahati thi ki ridhi ko jo itne salo baad khushi mili uspe pani fire isliye usne karan k ansu poochte hue , apne hoto ko apne hatho se fela , karan ko smile kerne ka ishara kiya.

Kuch der baad ridhi apne kamre m chali gayi or karan or jyoti bed pe let gaye .

Jyoti karan se ek side se chipki hui thi or vo boli.

Jyoti :- bhai kab tak un logo ko yaad kerke rote rahoge , jinse ab hamara koi nata hi ni , jane dijiye na bhai un purani yaado ko kyu taklif dete ho aap khud ko un logo ko yaad ker.

Karan :- kash ye itna aasan hota gudiya , bhale hi unhone humse banavati pyaar kiya , per hamara pyaar to sacha hi tha na gudiya unke liye , dil se apna mana tha na humne , to keSe bhula du unhe.

Jyoti gusse se :- bhai mane kab kaha aap sab bhul jaiye , jo un logo ne humare sath kiya , ye waqt bhulne ka ni balki apni nirdoshta sabit kerte hue , un logo ko is baat karane ka h ki unhone kitna bada paap kiya h mere bhai pe itna ghatiya iljam laga ke.

Bhulne ko to m us rishte ko bol rahi ho , jis kaaran aapne nirdosh hote hue bhi itna sab kuch suna , verna kisi me itna dam ni jo aapko bura bhala bol sake aap pe hath utha sake.

Bhul jaiye un swarthi rishto ko bhai , jinhone hume dukh diya , rishte wo hote h jo humari shakti bane hamara sahara bane na ki wo jo hume kamjor banaye , hume musibat k samay asahay chod de.

Jyoti ki ankho me radha or riya k prati rosh saf saf dikhlayi de raha tha. Jise dekh karan ne filhal k liye baat ko badalne ko hi uchit samjha.

Karan :- thik h meri maharani sahiba jesa aap kaho.

Karan :- vese kya m jaan sakta hu kya ms sharma aaj sham ko free h .

Jyoti nakhre dukhate hue :- hmm hu to sahi , per m jan sakti hu janab ki aap esa kyu puch rahe ho.

Karan halke s jyoti k hoth chum :- wo kya h na mane socha ki , aaj sham ko apni soni si gd ko date pe le jaya jaye.

Karan ki is harkat pe jyoti sharma ke karan k sine me muh chipa li.

Karan majak kerte hue:- oh oh dekho to bholi madam ko ese sharma rahi h jese first time ho , verna madam ka khud ka mud hota h to mere hoto ki to kha hi jati h.

Jyoti ye sun karan k sine me pyaar se mukke marte hue boli.

Jyoti :- chi kitne bigad gaye ho aap bhaiya , bhala apni bahan se ese koi bolta h , jaiye m aapse baat ni kerti.

Karan :- are yaar esa mat kero , apni to date h na sham ko.

Jyoti :- ji ni date vate sab cancel or aapko jana h to kisi or ko dhund lo.

Karan majak. Kerte hue :-ok jesi(sochne ka natak kerte hue) tumhari marji , ab or kise leker jau.

Hmm ha kyu na kaya ko bula lu , kaafi din ho gaye apni friend se mile isi bahane vo dharti lok bhi ghum legi.

Kaya ka naam sun to jyoti uchal padi , or boli.

Jyoti :- ji ni kisi ko bulane ki jarurat ni h m h ready hu date k liye.

Karan jyoti ki hadbadahat dekh hasne laga or jyoti sharmate hue fir karan p tut ladi.

Chaliye ab kaya ka jikar aahi chuka h to kyu na rasatal ka bhi ek chakkar laga liya jaye.

Location :- rasatal lok

Aman shonitpur k rajya ko bahut achi tarah se sambhal raha tha , Dracula k barbaad kiye hue un ganvon ko halat ab kafi had tak shdher chuki thi .

Dracula k dar se jinhone shonitpur chod diya tha , ab vo log vapas dhire dhire lotne lage the.

Kaya ne bhi apne pad ki garima or kartvya ka palan puri nishtha se ker rahi thi , vo aman k sath mil rasatal lok me bache baki shetani pishachon ko khatam kerne me lagi hui thi , jo ya to kisi dusre area m chupe hue the , ya jo bhag gaye the.

Kul mila k praja aman k raaj m khushali se apna jivan vyapt ker rahi thi , sab aman ko pure dil se apna maharaj k roop me apna chuke the.

Wahi kaya ne ek or acha kaam ka aarambh ker diya , wo ab rajya ki ladkiyo ko bhi ashtra.shastra ki vidya sikhane lagi , jiske liye usne ek vishesh vidhyalay bhi banwaya jisme jhumki k sath rajya ki sabhi ladkiya shastra vidya sikhne aati , kyunki kaya k sujhav pe hi aman ne ye niyam banaya tha ki rajya ki har kanya or yuvati ko astra vidya sikhna avashyak h taki vo apni raksha swayam kerne me samarth ho.

Lekin jaha ek or har jagh khushali thi , vahi dusri or aman , jhumki or kaya khud hamesha dukhi hi rahate , jabse unhe karan ki mrityu k bare me pata chala or mahadev k kavach k kaaran unki shaktiya aage ki sachai ka pata na laga payi thi.

Aman din raat pratishodh ki aag me jal raha tha or ek din uske sabra ka bandh tut gaya.

Aman or jhumki apne kamre me isi vishay pe baat ker rahe the , jaha kaya bhi mojud thi.

Aman :- bas , bahut ker li pratiksha , ab mujhse or ni ruka jayega , aakhir m kab tak shant rahu ye jante hue ki mere sabse ghanishth mitra ki praakritik mrityu ni , apitu hatya hui h or uske hatyare yu khule aam ghum rahe h.

Isliye mane ab fesla ker liya h ki ab m prathvi pe jarur jaunga .

Kaya :- per maharaj aapne yadi esa kiya to , niyamanusar aap apna rajya kho denge.

Jhumki :- ese rajya ka fayada bhi kya di , jo jiski vajah se mika h , hum uske liye hi kuch na ker sake to.

Aman :- gudiya sahi bol rahi h kaya ,ab chahe kuch bhi parinam ho m ab ni ruk sakta.

Kaya :- yadi esa h to m bhi aapke sath chalungi , karan sirf aapke hi ni mere bhi mitra the , unke hatyaro ka to m khun ki ek ek bund pi jaungi.

Aman ye sun man gaya or usne apni talvar ko yaad kiya or samne divar ki or ker jese hi ek portal kholne ko hua , tabhi ek aawaz unke kaano m padi.

" Are maharaj jara rukiye to sahi , dhiraj rakh jara apne is mitra ki baat sun lijiye"

Aawaz sun 3no chonk pade , or jese hi aawaz ki disha me dekha to unki khushi ka thikana na raha , kyunki unke samne karan khada tha.

Aman or jhumki ko to kuch der apni ankho pe vishwas na hua , tabhi karan fir bola.

Karan :- kya baat h gudia , kya apne bhaiya ko itni jaldi bhul gayi.

Jhumki karan ki aawaz sun jese hi hosh me aayi to karan ki or dodi

Jhumki :- bhaiya.........

Or ye bol karan k gale lag gayi or aman bhi sath me karan k gale lag gaya

Jyada apne dimag pe jor mat daliye friends, karan khud yaha rasatal ni pahuncha , ye to dand nayak ki nayi shakti thi jiski badolat karan ka hi ek chota sa ansh h jo aman ko rokne k liye karan ne bheja h verna rasatal me fir se asantulan fel jata.

Karan kaya se :- oh hello madam , ab aapko alag se invitation dena padega kya.

Y bol karan ne aman ko side me ker apni bahe fela di , or kaya bhi jhat se karan k gale lag gayi.

Kuch der yu 4ro dosto ka bharat milap hota raha , fir jhumki boli.

Jhumki :- bhai aap thik to hona, pata h hum kitna roye the jab aapki...

Ye bolte bolte rone lagi

Aman :- ha bhai , kya ho gaya tha tumko , jaha tak m janta hu ki tumhare samne vo sab kuch bhi ni the , fir he sab kese or tumhari jivan urja hum mahasus kyu ni ker paye.

Karan :- dost jiske sir per mahakal ka hath ho , uska kaal kya bigad sakta h.

Ye bol karan ne sari kahani aman or jhumki ko vistar purvak bata di , jise sun aman karan ko khushi se gale lagate hue .

Aman :- m janta tha ki esa tezvan or shaktishali jisne prachandasur ko hara diya , wo dand nayak mera dost hi ho sakta h.

Ha dost parilok or devalok k tumhare prakram ke kisse rasatal me bhi fel chuke h .

Karan majak :- are bas bas sale , thoda dur hoke baat ker m us type ka ni hu .

Fir kuch der karan k us ansh se un sab ka hasi majak yu hi chala , fir karan ne jald hi milne aanke ka wada ker or aman ko wahi rukne ka bol ker wapas wo ansh karan me aaker sama gaya.

Back to the hero.

Karan or jyoti sham ko veer se mile .

Karan ;:- kyu bhai , tumhara kaam ho gaya kya.

Veer :- ha dost , or tumhara.

Karan :- abhi kaha bhai , hume to kuch din yahi rukna hoga.

Jyoti :- veer bhai aap bhi yahi ruk jaiye na kuch din hum sab milke thoda ghum bhi lenge.

Veer udaas man se :- ni jyoti , m is samay chahu bhi to ni ruk sakta.

Karan :- kyu bhai , esa kya hua , m kal se notice ker raha hu , ager koi pareshani h to hume batao dost.

Shayad hum.kuch madad ker sakte.

Veer :- ni ni bhai , vo baat .

Jyoti udaas man se :- lagta h veer bhai , apne abhi tak hume apna ni mana , ni to aap hume apni problem jarur batate.

Veer :- ni ni jyoti esa bilkul bhi ni h , m to bas is duvidha me hu ki meri problem sun tumhe vishwas na hua to .

Jyoti ne veer ko bharosa dilaya to veer ne abhi tak ki sari ghatnao k baare me batana shuru kiya

Fir veer bola

Veer :- isiliye hi m itna pareshan hu dost , pata ni achanak hamari itni achi saheli ko achanak se kya ho gaya .

Na jane kyu hamesha ache logo ko hi itna kasht sahana padta h , dekho na hamari naina ne kitne logo ki madad ki dusht aatmao se unki raksha ker , fir bhi aaj vo us halat me hospital me jhujh rahi h.

Veer nam ankho se ye sari baate karan or jyoti ko batata h , karan or jyoti ne jese hi ye naam suna to unke hriday me ek is naam se ek gahare rishta ek connection hone ki anubhuti hui. Naina ki is halat ka dun unko bhi bahut kasht hone laga , or karan duvidha me pad gaya ki vo kya kare , kya use naina ki madad k liye abhi jana chahiye, kyunki vo naina k abhi tak k safar k bare m sun itna to samjh gaya tha ki niyati ka ek bahut bade prayojan ko purn kerne k liye naina ko chuna gaya h , per usko ye samjh ni aaraha tha ki uska hastakshep kya uchit hoga.

Tabhi karan ko baba ki yaad aayi or usne man me baba ko yad kiya.

Karan :- pranam baba.

Baba :- yashasvi bhavah putra, prathvi pe tumhara swagat h dand nayak.

M janta hu tum kis duvidha me ho putra , tumhara sochna uchit h naina ki ye yatra jag kalyan k liye avashyak h or filhal k liye tumhara hastakshep uchit na hoga , or jab tumhari avashyakata hogi , niyati khud tumhe waha pahucha degi , parantu ha tum naina or apne naye mitra ki sahayata avashy ker sakte ho.

Karan baba ko dhanyawad kerta h or fir veer k sath karan or jyoti maa jhandewali k dwar me pahunch jate h.
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Karan veer or jyoti k sath maa k darshan kerta h or maa se ashirvad mangta h .

Pandit ji veer or karan ko maa p chadi hui ek mala dete h prasad k roop me.

Karan :- lo dost ye maa ka ashirwad h , ise tum apne sath le jaker apni dost ko pahana dena , mujhe maa ki shakti pe pura bharosa h , naina jald hi swasth ho jayegi.

Karan jab veer ko vo mala de raha tha , tab achanak se karam k ander se ek adrishy urja nikal mala me sama gayi , jiska pata na veer ko chala or na hi karan or jyoti ko.

Fir maa ka ek or baar darshan ker karan or jyoti veer k sath khanna sahab k ghar lot aaye thoda ghum fir ker , khanna sahab ne veer ko bhi ek kamra dediya, kyunki uski train kal ki thi

Lekin us mala k sath sath veer ko ek or khas chij milne wali thi, jiska andaza veer ko bilkul bhi na tha .

Vo kya tha , vo pata chalega next update me.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned
 
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Achha update tha bhai lekin wo jo baat sani dev aur vishnu jinka sata rahi he wo aaj bhi suspence me daal di aapne. Aur to is update me lhuch khash nahi hua he. Waiting 4 next update
Thanks for your support bhai
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