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Update no :- 142
Aakhir kaya or karan k bich bahas ka kya kaaran tha , kyu karan kaya ko apne sath k liye mana ker raha tha , aaiye jante h
Short flashback
Karan or jyoti ko mata chaya or aman ne ne karan ko unke kamre me kuch der k liye akele chod diya , taki abhi jo incident hua h un dono k sath ,usse wo thoda ubhar sake.
Aman ne karan ko sahara de bistar se tek lagaker bethaya or kaya ne karan k side me hi leta diya or wo sab waha se chale gaye.
Unke jate hi jyoti uthker bethne ki kosis kerti h , jisme usko taklif hone lagi , to karan ne use sambhalte hue bola.
Karan :- are ye kya ker rahi h gudiya , uth kyu rahi ho , kuch chahiye to mujhe bata.
Lekin jyoti kuch na boli or jhat se apni thodi himmat juta ker karan k sine se lag gayi or ese chipAk gayi , ki yadi usne karan ko choda to uska bhai use chod k kahi chala jayega.
Esa ni tha ki jyoti kamzor dil ki thi ya darpok thi , balki wo karan se jyada majbut thi , lekin goblin ka jahar keval insan ko sharirik hi ni , balki mansik roop se bhi kamzor ker deta h or dusra kaaran karan ka suicide attempt kerna bhi tha.
Jyoti ki ye halat karan samjh raha tha uska dil roya ja raha tha , use lag raha tha ki aaj uski hi ek choti laparwahi k kaaran uski jan , uski gudiya ki ye halat hui h , jiske kaaran use khud pe gussa aaraha tha or uske ankho se ansu bahate hue jyoti k kandho pe girne lage.
Jyoti ne jese hi karan k ansuo ko mahasus kiya to usne jhat se apna sir utha ker dekha or karan ko jese rote hue dekha to wo tadaf uthi or apne kampte hatho se karan k chahre ko pakad boli.
Jyoti masumiyat se :- bhaiya aap ro kyu rahe ho , aapko chot to ni lagi , jisse aapko dard ho raha h
Ye bol jyoti karan ko check kerne lagi , jyoti ki is masumiyat ko dekh karan ka rona or tez ho gaya h.
Karan kuch ni bolta bas rote hue apni gardan hilata h , jese bol raha ho ki chot or pida uske sharir me ni uske dil m h.
Uski ankho se nikalte hui ashrudhara chikh chikh ker gawahi de rahi thi ki wo jhuti glani ki pida m jal raha h.
Jyoti apne bhai ki pida bina bole hi samjh gayi or wo boli.
Jyoti :- bhaiya please mat roiye, jo hua usme aapki koi galti ni h , ye to humara bhagya tha.
Karan :- kab tak yu hi bhagya or niyati ka sahare lete hue tum.meri galti ko chupaogi gudiya.
Sach to yahi h na ki aaj tera bhai har gaya , wo ek nakamyab insan h , are jo rakshak apne bahan ki hi raksha na ker saka wo is sansar ki raksha na ker sakta .
(Sisakte hue) mujhe maf ker de gudiya , meri laparwahi k kaaran hi teri ye haalat hui , kesa bhai hu m jo apni gudiya ki hi raksha na ker saka.
Mane jo ma ko vachan diya tha ki tere pe aane wale khatre ko pahale mujhse bhidna hoga , wo bhi nibha saka.
Ese hi ul julul bolte hue karan roye ja raha tha ,jyoti usko shant kerwane ki koshis ker rahi thi , per karan to chup hi ni ho raha tha , tab jyoti k pas ek hi rasta bacha.
Usne turant apne hoth karan k hoth pe rakh diye or bade hi passionate way me karan ko kiss kerne lagi.
Karan ne piche hatne ki kosis ki to jyoti ne uske chahre ko kas k pakad liya or kuch hi second m karan bhi sab kuch bhul jyoti ka sath dete hue prem ras m dub gaya.
Kuch der baad dono ki sans fulne lagi , to wo alag hue , karan fir kuch bolne hua , lekin usse pahale hi jyoti ne karan k sir ko apne sine me chupa liya or uske sir ko sahalate hue boli.
Jyoti (karan k sir ko sahalate) bola na babu ,jo hua aapki koi galti ni h usme , aap apne didu k ache bache ho na , chalo chup ho jao , ni to aapki didu bhi rone lag jayegi.
Kitna adhbhut pyar tha dono bhai bahan ka , janm se to dono judwa the , lekin fir bhi kabhi koi problem hoti ya dono me se koi bhi ese dukhi ya udas hota to dusra uska bada bhai ya bahan banker sambhalte .
Wahi abhi ho raha tha , indono ka pyaar duniya se alag ththa , jab bhi karan ese udaudas ho rota ya kabhi pareshan hota to jyoti ka ek badi bahan wala roop jag jata or wo apne bhai ko yu hi lad pyar kerke shant karwati jese uski judwa ni balki badi bahan ho or us time wo karan ko bhai ni balki babu kahakar bulati, kyunki asha bhi apne ankho k tare ko hamesha babu hi kaha kerti thi or us tarah jyoti apne bhai ko ek badi bahan k sath ek maa ka prem bhi deti , jiske kaaran karan turant shant ho jata
Or ba
Or jyoti ka ye tarika aaj bhi kamyab raha , jyoti k matratv or badi bahan k pyaar se bhare us alingan se karan turant shant hone laga or bacho ki tarah .
Karan. :- lo didu m chup ho gaya , please bas aap mat Lona mumma.
Jyoti muskurate hue karan k gal chumte :- ye ki na mele ache babu wali baat.
Karan ab jyoti k sneh k kaaran halka mahasus ker raha tha , jiske kaaran usne jyoti se or kaske chipak gaya , per usne yaha ek galti ker di.
Karan ne jeSe hi jyoti ko kaske uski pith se pakad apne se chipkana chaha uska hath , galti se uski us chot p lag gaya , jo chot use jab pahunchi thi , jab us saye ne uspe pith piche war kiya tha.
Jiske kaaran jyoti ki chikh nikal gayi.
Jyoti :- aaahhhhhhhhh bhaiiiii....
Or u
Or ye bolte hue vo karan k kaske chipak gayi or uski ankho m dard k ansu aagaye
jyoti ku chikhne se karan ghabra gaya or bola .
Karan :-. Gudiya tujhe or bhi kahi chot lagi h dikha to.
Karan ne ye bolte hue jyoti ko ghumaya or uske top ko utaar diya
( Jyoti ki nighty fat chuki thi yudh me to mata chaya ne use yaha late time hi magic se uske kapde change ker diye the) .
Jyoti ab uper se bilkul nirvastra thi , lekin karan ko sirf abhi apni bahan ki chinta thi.
Usne jese hi jyoti ki pith dekhi to uski ankho se fir ansu bahane lage , uski najuk si bahan , jiska sharir phulo se bhi komal tha , uspe ek ni bhaut se ghav the chote chote (goblins keval talvar se hi ni tiro se bhi lad rahe the or kamzor jyoti khud ko.unse defend na ker payi or jiske kaaran ye ghav ho gaye).
Lekin jab usne wo jagah dekhi jaha uska hath laga tha uski to mano ruh kamp gayi , apni jan apni gudiya k kharoch ane per bhi jo karan pura ghar sir pe utha leta tha , chot bhale hi jyoti ko lagti per dard use jyada hota.
Aaj usi bhai k samne uski bahan is dasha me thi , us saye ka waar itna khatarnak tha ki jyoti ki puri pith lahuluhan ho rakhi thi , ek bahut vada ghav ho chuka tha uski pith per.
Or goblin k jahar ki vajah se jyoti ki heal power bhi nishkriy ho chuki thi.
Karan k to anansu ruk hi ni rahe the , lekin ffir usne khud ko sambhala or uthne laga , lekin karan ko esa kerte dekh jyoti turant usse chipak gayi jese bol rahi ho ki bhai mujhe chod k mat jao.
Karan :- meri gudiya mera bacha , bhaiya aapko chod k kahi ni ja rahe m to bas aapke liye dawa lene ja raha tha
Per jyoti na kerte hue karan se chipki rahi , tabhi ek aawaz aayi.
Jab meri bachi bol rahi h to ruk jao n putra.
Is aawaz k sath waha mata chaya aaphunchi.
Karan :- per mata dekho na kitni chot lagi h ise dawai to lagani hogi na.
Mata chaya :- wahi to m leker aayi hu, lo laga do apne hatho se apne gudiya k dawai.
Jyoti ko tabhi dhyan aaya ki wo uper se nirvastra h or wo turant sharma k apna top dhundne lagi , tab mata haste hye boli .
Chaya :- are are ye to badi galat baat h , apni mata se bhala koi sharmata h , maa or beti to saheliya hoti h or saheli se bhala kya sharmana.
Vese bhi bache chahe kitne bade ho jaye maa k liye chote hi rahate h.
Mata chaya k samjhane se jyoti samjh gayi or relax hui , tab karan bola .
Karan :- chalo bate bahut hui ab davai lagaao.
Jyoti :- ni bhaiya isse bahut jalan hogi.
Karan :- kuch ni hoga mera bacha ,aapke bhaiya h na.
Karan ye bol jara sa lep apne hatho me laga jese hi jyoti ka ghav chuta h to jyoti dard se chihunkh uthi or karan k gale lag gayi.
Karan ne jyoti ko samjhaya per wo alag na hui to karan apni bahan ko apne sine se lagaye hue hi uske dawa lagane laga, jyoti ko jalan or dard to ho raha tha , lekin apni bhai ki baho me hone se use thodi rahat bhi mahasus ho rahi thi.
Lekin apni jyoti se jyada taklif karan ko ho rahi thi apni gudiya ko is halat me dekh , or sath sath uski ankho me gussa bhi saf saf najar aaraha tha.
Karan man hi man :- mahadev ki sogandh gudiya , teri ye halat kerne walo ko ager khun k ansu na rulaye to m tera bhai ni .
Ek ek ko mot se bhi buri jindagi dunga , koi ni bachega ab meri jaan p hath dalne wala koi ni bachega.
Karan ye sab sochte hue hi karan k ghavo per maraham ker use apni god m sulata h or jab jyoti so jati h to karan bola.
Karan :- mata ratri bahut ho gayi h , ab aap bhi vishram ker lijiye.
Chaya :- jyoti k ghavon per to malham tumne laga di putra per tumhare ghavon ka kya , chalo betho m tumhare ghavo per oshadhi laga deti hu
Karan kuch na bola or chupchap beth gaya or chaya karan k ghavo pe dawai lagane lagi.
Chaya :- putra apne uper k vastra utaro.
Lekin karan sharmane laga, lekin mata chaya ne apni shakti se karan ki t shirt gayab ker di or dawai lagate hue boli.
Chaya haste hue :- tum bilkul shani pe gaye ho, bilkul us jese hi ho , or ho bhi kyu na aakhir ansh bhi to usike ho
Karan ne jese hi shani dev ka naam suna uska mood off ho gaya or use vo din yaad aane laga , jab shani dev ne uski maa k hatyare yani k uske baap ko hi uske hatho se bachaya tha , jise karan kabhi ni bhul sakta tha or wo abhi tak shani dev se rusht tha.
Karan baat badalte hue :- mata ab mujhe nind aarahi h .
Mata chaya sab samjh gayi or wo bhi dukhi ho gayi.
Chaya man me :- putra m samjh sakti hu tum per kya bit rahi h , parantu jis din tumhe satya ka gyan hoga usdin swatah hi tumhari sari narajgi khatm ho jayegi.
Chaya muskurate hue :- thik h mere bacha .
Chaya karan ko bed pe letati h or use pyaar se sahalate hue sula deti h.
Aaiye ek najar markesh pe bhi daal lete h.
Markesh or kubdi dono ek sath ek bahut hi bhayanak jungle k bicho bich prakat hote h.
Kubdi :- malik hum yaha kyu aaye h.
Markesh :- apna muh band rakho or chalo mere sath.
Itna bol markesh chalne laga or kubdi uske piche piche chalne lagi.
Kuch dur chalne k baad aage ka rasta band tha , kyunki samne ek pahad tha.
Lekin markesh muskurate hue apna hath aage kerta h jisse ek roshni nikal samne pahad pe padi or tabhi dekhte hi dekhte waha un dono k.samne ek gufa najar aane lagi.
Darasal ye gufa ka dwar adrishy tha , lekin markesh ne apni shakti se esa ker dikhaya.
Markesh gufa k ander chal pada or piche kubdi bhi.
Gufa k ander pahunch markesh ander chilaya
Markesh :-Vrishchika....
Markesh ki aawaz k sath ek bahut hi bhayanak bhesh bhusa , parantu dikhne me sunder orat prakat hui, lekin ye kya wo markesh k samne ni balki uske pith piche thi.
Orat :- vrishchika ka pranam swikar kare yuvraj.
Kubdi gusse se :- teri ye majal ki tu maharaj se ese baat karegi.
Ye bol kubdi uski or ghumne hi wali thi ki markesh ne uska hath pakad bola.
Markesh :- ni kubdi.esi galti bilkul bhi mat kerna , verna bahut buri mot marogi.
Ye bol markesh.esa kyu tha uska kaaran batata h , jise sun kubdi bhi kamp gayi.
Markesh :- vrishcika or kubdi suno filhal to wo insan jo bhi h vo bhale hi hamari najar se bache hue h , per m itna to samjh chuka hu unka maksad trishastra ko hasil kerna h .
Markesh trishastra ki janch kerne d2 or vikral k pas gaya tha , jaha use pata chal gaya ki usne trishastra k 2 hise kho diye h or uske khas aadmiyo ko insano ne hi mara h.
2 hisse to unko mil chuke h , or vo ab 3sra hissa lene bhi jarur aayenge.
Vrishchika :- lekin is baar vo bach ni payenge yuvraj , kyunki ab unka samna dayano ki rani se hoga .
Markesh :- m bhi yahi chahta hu vrishchika, or uske liye mane ek upay bhi socha h.
Ye bol vo apna idea kubdi or vrishchika ko bhi sunata h , jise sun vo 3no hasne lage or apne plan ko anjam dene ki teyariyo me lag gaye.
Back to the hero.
Subah karan or jyoti apne aadat anusar jaldi uthe ,karan ne jyoti ko aaram kerne k liye khub bola ,per aaj somvar tha or vo humesha ki tarah aaj mandir jana chahti thi.
Jyoti jab na mani to karan ne use god me leker madir gaya or puja kerne laga.
Puja k baad vo dono sabke sath nashta kerte h , lekin aaj koi hasi majak ni hota kyunki sab jyoti ki halat ko leker tension me the.
Nashte k baad karan jyoti ko sula deta h or fir sab aman k kamre m milte h
Karan :- mata ab bataiye kya kerna hoga mujhe apni gudiya ko pahale jesa kerne k liye
Mata chaya :- putra mahadev ki kripa se putri jyoti us vish se bach to gayi h parantu , vo vish uske tam me abhi bhi vidyaman h jo use swasth ni hone de raha
Isliye yadi hume ager jyoti ko swasth kerna h to us vish ko uske tan se nikalna hoga , or vish ko nikalne ka ek hi upaay h vo ye h ki yadi lekin uske liye tumhe pishach lok jana hoga , jo goblins ki rajdhani h.
Karan :- ager meri jyoti ko bachane k liye mujhe yamalok bhi jana pade to m jaunga mata , aap kripya upaay bataiye.
Chaya :- to suno putra ,pishach lok jaker tumhe goblin k raja ko prast kerna hoga ,or ........
Parantu dhyan rahe putra pishach lok bahut hi mayavi sthan h or jyoti k shaktihin hone se tum bhi kamzor ho gaye ho , isliye tumhe waha har kaam badi savdhani se kerna hoga, waha sankat bahut jyada ho sakta h
Karan :- sankat chahe jitna bhi bada ho mata , ye karan apni jyoti ko bachane k liye use jarur par karega or un papiyo ko unke karmo ka dand dega ye dandnayak.
Pishach lok k shetano karmo ka fal pane ko saj ho jao.
Ye bolte hue karan apne dand nayak roop m aagaya .
Tabhi kaya jid kerte hue bol padi.
Kaya :- m bhi aapke sath chalungi.
Jis per karan or kaya ki bahas ho gayi.
Tab karan ko chaya ne samjhaya.
Chaya :- kaya ko apne sath le jao karan , kyunki is safar me tumhe kaya ki avashyakta padegi .
Kaya unme se hi ek thi to vo waha tak pahuchne ka or pishach lok k har ek marg se bhi parichit h , uska sath tumhare liye labhdayak hi hoga.
Chaya mata k samjhane per karan maan gaya or kaya ko sath lejane ko teyar ho gaya.
Wahi dusri or.
Vp ek baar fir apni haar ko dekh bhokla chuka tha or wo tod fod kerte hue chila raha tha.
Vp :- shaniiiiiiiiiiiiii , ni chodunga tujhe , ek baar fir tune meri yojna ko vifal ker diya.
Parantu samjh ni aaraha ki wo jyoti us vish k prabhav se bachi kese , aakhir konsi shakti h vo jo meri najro se chupi hui h , jabki is sansar ki har ek vyakti har ek shakti se m bhali bhanti parichit hu.
Kher jo bhi ho shani tune or tere us rakshak jyoti k prano ki raksha to ker li , lekin m janta hu ki vo rakshak apni bahan ko swasth kerne k liye kya karega.
Vp :- jalasur prakat ho.
Tabhi waha pani ka daitya prakat hua.
Vp :- jao jalasur yahi uchit samay h vo rakshak abhi nirbal h , ant ker do uska marg me hi , dhyan rahe wo pishach lok ni pahuchna chaiye
Jalasur :- ji maharaj.
Ye bol jalasur waha se gayab ho gaya or vp bhi apne kaksh m chala gaya
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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Aakhir kaya or karan k bich bahas ka kya kaaran tha , kyu karan kaya ko apne sath k liye mana ker raha tha , aaiye jante h
Short flashback
Karan or jyoti ko mata chaya or aman ne ne karan ko unke kamre me kuch der k liye akele chod diya , taki abhi jo incident hua h un dono k sath ,usse wo thoda ubhar sake.
Aman ne karan ko sahara de bistar se tek lagaker bethaya or kaya ne karan k side me hi leta diya or wo sab waha se chale gaye.
Unke jate hi jyoti uthker bethne ki kosis kerti h , jisme usko taklif hone lagi , to karan ne use sambhalte hue bola.
Karan :- are ye kya ker rahi h gudiya , uth kyu rahi ho , kuch chahiye to mujhe bata.
Lekin jyoti kuch na boli or jhat se apni thodi himmat juta ker karan k sine se lag gayi or ese chipAk gayi , ki yadi usne karan ko choda to uska bhai use chod k kahi chala jayega.
Esa ni tha ki jyoti kamzor dil ki thi ya darpok thi , balki wo karan se jyada majbut thi , lekin goblin ka jahar keval insan ko sharirik hi ni , balki mansik roop se bhi kamzor ker deta h or dusra kaaran karan ka suicide attempt kerna bhi tha.
Jyoti ki ye halat karan samjh raha tha uska dil roya ja raha tha , use lag raha tha ki aaj uski hi ek choti laparwahi k kaaran uski jan , uski gudiya ki ye halat hui h , jiske kaaran use khud pe gussa aaraha tha or uske ankho se ansu bahate hue jyoti k kandho pe girne lage.
Jyoti ne jese hi karan k ansuo ko mahasus kiya to usne jhat se apna sir utha ker dekha or karan ko jese rote hue dekha to wo tadaf uthi or apne kampte hatho se karan k chahre ko pakad boli.
Jyoti masumiyat se :- bhaiya aap ro kyu rahe ho , aapko chot to ni lagi , jisse aapko dard ho raha h
Ye bol jyoti karan ko check kerne lagi , jyoti ki is masumiyat ko dekh karan ka rona or tez ho gaya h.
Karan kuch ni bolta bas rote hue apni gardan hilata h , jese bol raha ho ki chot or pida uske sharir me ni uske dil m h.
Uski ankho se nikalte hui ashrudhara chikh chikh ker gawahi de rahi thi ki wo jhuti glani ki pida m jal raha h.
Jyoti apne bhai ki pida bina bole hi samjh gayi or wo boli.
Jyoti :- bhaiya please mat roiye, jo hua usme aapki koi galti ni h , ye to humara bhagya tha.
Karan :- kab tak yu hi bhagya or niyati ka sahare lete hue tum.meri galti ko chupaogi gudiya.
Sach to yahi h na ki aaj tera bhai har gaya , wo ek nakamyab insan h , are jo rakshak apne bahan ki hi raksha na ker saka wo is sansar ki raksha na ker sakta .
(Sisakte hue) mujhe maf ker de gudiya , meri laparwahi k kaaran hi teri ye haalat hui , kesa bhai hu m jo apni gudiya ki hi raksha na ker saka.
Mane jo ma ko vachan diya tha ki tere pe aane wale khatre ko pahale mujhse bhidna hoga , wo bhi nibha saka.
Ese hi ul julul bolte hue karan roye ja raha tha ,jyoti usko shant kerwane ki koshis ker rahi thi , per karan to chup hi ni ho raha tha , tab jyoti k pas ek hi rasta bacha.
Usne turant apne hoth karan k hoth pe rakh diye or bade hi passionate way me karan ko kiss kerne lagi.
Karan ne piche hatne ki kosis ki to jyoti ne uske chahre ko kas k pakad liya or kuch hi second m karan bhi sab kuch bhul jyoti ka sath dete hue prem ras m dub gaya.
Kuch der baad dono ki sans fulne lagi , to wo alag hue , karan fir kuch bolne hua , lekin usse pahale hi jyoti ne karan k sir ko apne sine me chupa liya or uske sir ko sahalate hue boli.
Jyoti (karan k sir ko sahalate) bola na babu ,jo hua aapki koi galti ni h usme , aap apne didu k ache bache ho na , chalo chup ho jao , ni to aapki didu bhi rone lag jayegi.
Kitna adhbhut pyar tha dono bhai bahan ka , janm se to dono judwa the , lekin fir bhi kabhi koi problem hoti ya dono me se koi bhi ese dukhi ya udas hota to dusra uska bada bhai ya bahan banker sambhalte .
Wahi abhi ho raha tha , indono ka pyaar duniya se alag ththa , jab bhi karan ese udaudas ho rota ya kabhi pareshan hota to jyoti ka ek badi bahan wala roop jag jata or wo apne bhai ko yu hi lad pyar kerke shant karwati jese uski judwa ni balki badi bahan ho or us time wo karan ko bhai ni balki babu kahakar bulati, kyunki asha bhi apne ankho k tare ko hamesha babu hi kaha kerti thi or us tarah jyoti apne bhai ko ek badi bahan k sath ek maa ka prem bhi deti , jiske kaaran karan turant shant ho jata
Or ba
Or jyoti ka ye tarika aaj bhi kamyab raha , jyoti k matratv or badi bahan k pyaar se bhare us alingan se karan turant shant hone laga or bacho ki tarah .
Karan. :- lo didu m chup ho gaya , please bas aap mat Lona mumma.
Jyoti muskurate hue karan k gal chumte :- ye ki na mele ache babu wali baat.
Karan ab jyoti k sneh k kaaran halka mahasus ker raha tha , jiske kaaran usne jyoti se or kaske chipak gaya , per usne yaha ek galti ker di.
Karan ne jeSe hi jyoti ko kaske uski pith se pakad apne se chipkana chaha uska hath , galti se uski us chot p lag gaya , jo chot use jab pahunchi thi , jab us saye ne uspe pith piche war kiya tha.
Jiske kaaran jyoti ki chikh nikal gayi.
Jyoti :- aaahhhhhhhhh bhaiiiii....
Or u
Or ye bolte hue vo karan k kaske chipak gayi or uski ankho m dard k ansu aagaye
jyoti ku chikhne se karan ghabra gaya or bola .
Karan :-. Gudiya tujhe or bhi kahi chot lagi h dikha to.
Karan ne ye bolte hue jyoti ko ghumaya or uske top ko utaar diya
( Jyoti ki nighty fat chuki thi yudh me to mata chaya ne use yaha late time hi magic se uske kapde change ker diye the) .
Jyoti ab uper se bilkul nirvastra thi , lekin karan ko sirf abhi apni bahan ki chinta thi.
Usne jese hi jyoti ki pith dekhi to uski ankho se fir ansu bahane lage , uski najuk si bahan , jiska sharir phulo se bhi komal tha , uspe ek ni bhaut se ghav the chote chote (goblins keval talvar se hi ni tiro se bhi lad rahe the or kamzor jyoti khud ko.unse defend na ker payi or jiske kaaran ye ghav ho gaye).
Lekin jab usne wo jagah dekhi jaha uska hath laga tha uski to mano ruh kamp gayi , apni jan apni gudiya k kharoch ane per bhi jo karan pura ghar sir pe utha leta tha , chot bhale hi jyoti ko lagti per dard use jyada hota.
Aaj usi bhai k samne uski bahan is dasha me thi , us saye ka waar itna khatarnak tha ki jyoti ki puri pith lahuluhan ho rakhi thi , ek bahut vada ghav ho chuka tha uski pith per.
Or goblin k jahar ki vajah se jyoti ki heal power bhi nishkriy ho chuki thi.
Karan k to anansu ruk hi ni rahe the , lekin ffir usne khud ko sambhala or uthne laga , lekin karan ko esa kerte dekh jyoti turant usse chipak gayi jese bol rahi ho ki bhai mujhe chod k mat jao.
Karan :- meri gudiya mera bacha , bhaiya aapko chod k kahi ni ja rahe m to bas aapke liye dawa lene ja raha tha
Per jyoti na kerte hue karan se chipki rahi , tabhi ek aawaz aayi.
Jab meri bachi bol rahi h to ruk jao n putra.
Is aawaz k sath waha mata chaya aaphunchi.
Karan :- per mata dekho na kitni chot lagi h ise dawai to lagani hogi na.
Mata chaya :- wahi to m leker aayi hu, lo laga do apne hatho se apne gudiya k dawai.
Jyoti ko tabhi dhyan aaya ki wo uper se nirvastra h or wo turant sharma k apna top dhundne lagi , tab mata haste hye boli .
Chaya :- are are ye to badi galat baat h , apni mata se bhala koi sharmata h , maa or beti to saheliya hoti h or saheli se bhala kya sharmana.
Vese bhi bache chahe kitne bade ho jaye maa k liye chote hi rahate h.
Mata chaya k samjhane se jyoti samjh gayi or relax hui , tab karan bola .
Karan :- chalo bate bahut hui ab davai lagaao.
Jyoti :- ni bhaiya isse bahut jalan hogi.
Karan :- kuch ni hoga mera bacha ,aapke bhaiya h na.
Karan ye bol jara sa lep apne hatho me laga jese hi jyoti ka ghav chuta h to jyoti dard se chihunkh uthi or karan k gale lag gayi.
Karan ne jyoti ko samjhaya per wo alag na hui to karan apni bahan ko apne sine se lagaye hue hi uske dawa lagane laga, jyoti ko jalan or dard to ho raha tha , lekin apni bhai ki baho me hone se use thodi rahat bhi mahasus ho rahi thi.
Lekin apni jyoti se jyada taklif karan ko ho rahi thi apni gudiya ko is halat me dekh , or sath sath uski ankho me gussa bhi saf saf najar aaraha tha.
Karan man hi man :- mahadev ki sogandh gudiya , teri ye halat kerne walo ko ager khun k ansu na rulaye to m tera bhai ni .
Ek ek ko mot se bhi buri jindagi dunga , koi ni bachega ab meri jaan p hath dalne wala koi ni bachega.
Karan ye sab sochte hue hi karan k ghavo per maraham ker use apni god m sulata h or jab jyoti so jati h to karan bola.
Karan :- mata ratri bahut ho gayi h , ab aap bhi vishram ker lijiye.
Chaya :- jyoti k ghavon per to malham tumne laga di putra per tumhare ghavon ka kya , chalo betho m tumhare ghavo per oshadhi laga deti hu
Karan kuch na bola or chupchap beth gaya or chaya karan k ghavo pe dawai lagane lagi.
Chaya :- putra apne uper k vastra utaro.
Lekin karan sharmane laga, lekin mata chaya ne apni shakti se karan ki t shirt gayab ker di or dawai lagate hue boli.
Chaya haste hue :- tum bilkul shani pe gaye ho, bilkul us jese hi ho , or ho bhi kyu na aakhir ansh bhi to usike ho
Karan ne jese hi shani dev ka naam suna uska mood off ho gaya or use vo din yaad aane laga , jab shani dev ne uski maa k hatyare yani k uske baap ko hi uske hatho se bachaya tha , jise karan kabhi ni bhul sakta tha or wo abhi tak shani dev se rusht tha.
Karan baat badalte hue :- mata ab mujhe nind aarahi h .
Mata chaya sab samjh gayi or wo bhi dukhi ho gayi.
Chaya man me :- putra m samjh sakti hu tum per kya bit rahi h , parantu jis din tumhe satya ka gyan hoga usdin swatah hi tumhari sari narajgi khatm ho jayegi.
Chaya muskurate hue :- thik h mere bacha .
Chaya karan ko bed pe letati h or use pyaar se sahalate hue sula deti h.
Aaiye ek najar markesh pe bhi daal lete h.
Markesh or kubdi dono ek sath ek bahut hi bhayanak jungle k bicho bich prakat hote h.
Kubdi :- malik hum yaha kyu aaye h.
Markesh :- apna muh band rakho or chalo mere sath.
Itna bol markesh chalne laga or kubdi uske piche piche chalne lagi.
Kuch dur chalne k baad aage ka rasta band tha , kyunki samne ek pahad tha.
Lekin markesh muskurate hue apna hath aage kerta h jisse ek roshni nikal samne pahad pe padi or tabhi dekhte hi dekhte waha un dono k.samne ek gufa najar aane lagi.
Darasal ye gufa ka dwar adrishy tha , lekin markesh ne apni shakti se esa ker dikhaya.
Markesh gufa k ander chal pada or piche kubdi bhi.
Gufa k ander pahunch markesh ander chilaya
Markesh :-Vrishchika....
Markesh ki aawaz k sath ek bahut hi bhayanak bhesh bhusa , parantu dikhne me sunder orat prakat hui, lekin ye kya wo markesh k samne ni balki uske pith piche thi.
Orat :- vrishchika ka pranam swikar kare yuvraj.
Kubdi gusse se :- teri ye majal ki tu maharaj se ese baat karegi.
Ye bol kubdi uski or ghumne hi wali thi ki markesh ne uska hath pakad bola.
Markesh :- ni kubdi.esi galti bilkul bhi mat kerna , verna bahut buri mot marogi.
Ye bol markesh.esa kyu tha uska kaaran batata h , jise sun kubdi bhi kamp gayi.
Markesh :- vrishcika or kubdi suno filhal to wo insan jo bhi h vo bhale hi hamari najar se bache hue h , per m itna to samjh chuka hu unka maksad trishastra ko hasil kerna h .
Markesh trishastra ki janch kerne d2 or vikral k pas gaya tha , jaha use pata chal gaya ki usne trishastra k 2 hise kho diye h or uske khas aadmiyo ko insano ne hi mara h.
2 hisse to unko mil chuke h , or vo ab 3sra hissa lene bhi jarur aayenge.
Vrishchika :- lekin is baar vo bach ni payenge yuvraj , kyunki ab unka samna dayano ki rani se hoga .
Markesh :- m bhi yahi chahta hu vrishchika, or uske liye mane ek upay bhi socha h.
Ye bol vo apna idea kubdi or vrishchika ko bhi sunata h , jise sun vo 3no hasne lage or apne plan ko anjam dene ki teyariyo me lag gaye.
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Subah karan or jyoti apne aadat anusar jaldi uthe ,karan ne jyoti ko aaram kerne k liye khub bola ,per aaj somvar tha or vo humesha ki tarah aaj mandir jana chahti thi.
Jyoti jab na mani to karan ne use god me leker madir gaya or puja kerne laga.
Puja k baad vo dono sabke sath nashta kerte h , lekin aaj koi hasi majak ni hota kyunki sab jyoti ki halat ko leker tension me the.
Nashte k baad karan jyoti ko sula deta h or fir sab aman k kamre m milte h
Karan :- mata ab bataiye kya kerna hoga mujhe apni gudiya ko pahale jesa kerne k liye
Mata chaya :- putra mahadev ki kripa se putri jyoti us vish se bach to gayi h parantu , vo vish uske tam me abhi bhi vidyaman h jo use swasth ni hone de raha
Isliye yadi hume ager jyoti ko swasth kerna h to us vish ko uske tan se nikalna hoga , or vish ko nikalne ka ek hi upaay h vo ye h ki yadi lekin uske liye tumhe pishach lok jana hoga , jo goblins ki rajdhani h.
Karan :- ager meri jyoti ko bachane k liye mujhe yamalok bhi jana pade to m jaunga mata , aap kripya upaay bataiye.
Chaya :- to suno putra ,pishach lok jaker tumhe goblin k raja ko prast kerna hoga ,or ........
Parantu dhyan rahe putra pishach lok bahut hi mayavi sthan h or jyoti k shaktihin hone se tum bhi kamzor ho gaye ho , isliye tumhe waha har kaam badi savdhani se kerna hoga, waha sankat bahut jyada ho sakta h
Karan :- sankat chahe jitna bhi bada ho mata , ye karan apni jyoti ko bachane k liye use jarur par karega or un papiyo ko unke karmo ka dand dega ye dandnayak.
Pishach lok k shetano karmo ka fal pane ko saj ho jao.
Ye bolte hue karan apne dand nayak roop m aagaya .
Tabhi kaya jid kerte hue bol padi.
Kaya :- m bhi aapke sath chalungi.
Jis per karan or kaya ki bahas ho gayi.
Tab karan ko chaya ne samjhaya.
Chaya :- kaya ko apne sath le jao karan , kyunki is safar me tumhe kaya ki avashyakta padegi .
Kaya unme se hi ek thi to vo waha tak pahuchne ka or pishach lok k har ek marg se bhi parichit h , uska sath tumhare liye labhdayak hi hoga.
Chaya mata k samjhane per karan maan gaya or kaya ko sath lejane ko teyar ho gaya.
Wahi dusri or.
Vp ek baar fir apni haar ko dekh bhokla chuka tha or wo tod fod kerte hue chila raha tha.
Vp :- shaniiiiiiiiiiiiii , ni chodunga tujhe , ek baar fir tune meri yojna ko vifal ker diya.
Parantu samjh ni aaraha ki wo jyoti us vish k prabhav se bachi kese , aakhir konsi shakti h vo jo meri najro se chupi hui h , jabki is sansar ki har ek vyakti har ek shakti se m bhali bhanti parichit hu.
Kher jo bhi ho shani tune or tere us rakshak jyoti k prano ki raksha to ker li , lekin m janta hu ki vo rakshak apni bahan ko swasth kerne k liye kya karega.
Vp :- jalasur prakat ho.
Tabhi waha pani ka daitya prakat hua.
Vp :- jao jalasur yahi uchit samay h vo rakshak abhi nirbal h , ant ker do uska marg me hi , dhyan rahe wo pishach lok ni pahuchna chaiye
Jalasur :- ji maharaj.
Ye bol jalasur waha se gayab ho gaya or vp bhi apne kaksh m chala gaya
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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