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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Location :- patal lok

Vp betha apne khyalo me khoya hua tha .

Vp :- bss kuch samay or fir mera beta tapasya se lot aayega , or fir is sansar me keval hum asuro ka raaj hoga.

Parantu usse pahale mujhe us rakshak ka kuch kerna hoga , taki mera beta lote to uski rah me koi badha na bane.

Uske liye bas ek baar meri ye yojna safal ho jaye , or uske baad (jor jor se haste hue ) hum asuro ka raaz hoga is pure brahmaand pe.

(Aaksh ki or dekhte hue )Sun raha h na shani , keval hum asuro ka raaz. Tab mujhe na tu rok payega na tera wo ansh or na hi mera vo sabse bada shatru vo chaliya vishnu

Tabhi vaha ek doot aata h.

Doot :- pranam mahaprabhu.

Vp :- kaho kya suchna laye doot.

Doot :- maharaj guptacharon se abhi abhi suchna praapt hui h ki , vo rakshak karan or uski bahan urf premika jyoti rasatal lok k liye prasthan ker chuke h

Vp khus hote hue :- ye suchna satya to h na , ager ye baat mithya hui to tere pure kul samet tera nash ker dunga m.

Doot :- jjjji prabhu.

Vp :- hmm ,(ek sone k sikko ki potli us doot ki or fekte hue ) thik h jao or aanand lo.

Doot inam ko dekh ker khus ho jata h , or waha se khushi khusi nikal jata h

Vp ki ye khasiyat h , vo inam ho ya dand , wo samne wale ko turant deta h.

Vp jor jor se haste hue :-hahaha hahaha , meri yojna ka pratham charan aakhir purn ho hi gaya.

Fas hi gaya na ek baar fir tu mere chal me rakshak , ab m esa dohra waar karunga tujh per ki tu ager jivit bach bhi gaya to , khud mrityu ki bhik mangega.

Haha haha.

Wahi dusri or

prathvi se bahut door antarik k bilkul madhya ek bahut hi bhayanak danav jesa dikhne wala aadmi ek tang pe khade tap me lin tha.
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Uske sharir se mahabhayanak per nile rang ki jawalaye nikal rahi thi or uske baal or dhadi much bhi kafi bas chuki thi .

Use dekh kee hi pata chal raha tha ki vo apne hi sharir se nikal rahi jwalao ko vash me kerne k liye tap ker raha h.

Ye banda or koi humari kahani ka main villain yani kal bhanu tha , jo apne pita yani vp k kahe anusar antriksh k bicho bich tap ker raha tha

Vp k is aadesh k piche do kaaran the .

1 . Kal bhanu k sharir se jo nili jwalaye nikal rahi thi , vo or kuch ni wohi halahal tha , jisne usne narayan k rokne k bavjud bhi apne ander samahit kiya tha .

Usne us vish ko dharan to ker liya lekin use niyantrit me kerne k liye tap ki aavashyakata thi or us tap ko kerne k doran uske sharir se bahut bhayanak garmi nikalne wali thi , jo na kaal bhanu k liye uchit thi na us jagah k liye jaha tap kiya jaye , isliye vp ne use antriksh me tap kerne ko kaha , jaha ki shitalata se use rahat mile

2sra or sabse mahattvapoorn kaaran ye tha ki vp ne use navgraho k madhya m jakar tap kerne ko kaha tha.

Jiska kaaran tha ki bilkul madhya me hone k kaaran kaal bhanu keval apne halahal ko hi niyantran me ni ker payega , balki sath ki sath vo pure antariksh me feli hui jitni bhi nakaratmak urjaye h ,unhe bhi apne ander samahit ker payega , apni or khich.

Or esa ho bhi raha tha , jese jeSe kaal bhanu apne tap ki purntah ki or agrasar ho raha tha , wo or bhi jyada shaktishali banta ja raha tha.

Location :- shani lok.

Shani dev k sath upasthit naradji ye sab dekh chintit ho rahe the.

Shani dev :- kya baat h devrishi aap bade chintit najar aarahe h.

Naradji :- chinta ki to baat h hi na prabhu, jese jese samay bit raha h , ye dusht tap k madhyam se or bhi jyada balshali hota ja raha h.

Yadi esa chalta raha to rakshak dwara iska ant bahut kathin hoga prabhu.

Shani :- baat to apne uchit kahi devrishi.

Naradji :- yadi mera kathan aapko uchit laga to aap kuch kerte kyu ni bhagwan , kuch kijiye prabhu kuch kijiye , kese bhi kerke is dusht ko or balashali banne se rokiye.

Shani :- ni devrishi m eesa kadapi ni karunga.

Naradji :- narayan ! Narayan , parantu kyu bhagwan.

Shani :- wo isliye bhagwan m karan ka dharm pita hone se pahale is sansaar ka karmfal data hu.

M kisi ko anuchit marg pe jane se pahale savdhan ker sakta hu , parantu rok ni sakta.

Mera karya kisi ko karm kerne se rokna ni devrishi , apitu mera karya h us vyakti ko uske karmonusar dand ya puraskar dena.

Ab ye karm kerne wale vyakti pe nirbhar kerta h devrishi wo uchit marg pe chal ker puraskar prapt karega , ya kaal bhanu jese paap karm ker usiki bhanti nikal bhavishya me dand payega.

Narad ji :- aapka kahana uchit h bhagwan , parantu.

Shani :- parantu kya devrishi.

Narad ji :- m ye kahana chahta hu bhagwan ki ek or jaha kaal bhanu nirantar apni shaktiyo ko bhadane me laga hua, to aapko ni lagta ki karan or jyoti ko bhi ab apni shaktiyo ko bhadane m lag jana chahiye.

Shani :- aapka shanka to uchit h devrishi , parantu uski aavashyakata hi kaha h , karan k paas uski sabse jyada shresht shaktiya to uske sath humesha se hi h .

Uski pratham or uski sabse shaktishali shakti , uska dharam ka marg. Or itihas sakshi h devrishi dharm k marg p chalne wala kabhi parajit na hua.

Dwitiya shakti h bhakti . Bhakti wo shakti h devrishi jisse prani swayam ishwer ko bhi apne vash me ker le or ye shakti roopi gun unhe apni mata asha se virasat k roop me mili h

Tritya or sabse mahatvapoorn shakti jo dand nayak k jivan ka sabse mahatvapoorn bhag h , yani ki uski aatma , uski prem jyoti.

Jyoti jo karan ki bahan hi ni uski sakhi , uski prerna , uska prem , yaha tak ki uski aatma h , jo.shakshat adishakti mata parvati ka ansh h .

Jyoti or karan ki deh bhale hi alag alag h devrishi parantu vo anek ho ker bhi ek hi h , vo do tan or ek aatma h , karan jyoti k bina adhura h or jyoti karan k bina.

Or in dono kA ye prem hi inka sabse badi kavach h , jiske hote hue sansar ki koi bhi nakaratmak urja ina kuch ahit ni ker sakti devrishi.

Naradji :- uchit kaha bhagwan aapne , parantu.

Shani haste hue :- or kitne parantu abhi shesh rah gaye devrishi.

Naradji :- bas ye antim prashn h bhagwan ki.

Shani :- yahi na devrishi ki karan apni antim shakti ko kab praapt karega.

Naradji ha me apni gardan hilate h

Shani :- karan or jyoti ki apni antim shakti yani ki naina se bhet k ghatnakram ka aarambh ho chuka h devrishi

Ab jyada samay shesh ni raha jab na keval karan or jyoti apni antim shakti se bhet karenge , apitu sath hi sath apne jivan k ek bade satya se bhi vo avgat honge.

Narad jj :- ye to khushkhabri h na bhagwan ki dand nayak k jivan me unka ek or mahatvpurn bhag ka aagman hoga , fir aap yu itne chintit kyu pratit ho rahe h

Shani :- chinta ka vishay to h devrishi, aap wo ni dekh pa rahe h jo m dekh raha hu , jo nikat bhavishya me ghatit hone wala h.

Karan or naina ka milan avashya hi is sansaar k liye mangal kari hoga ,parantu uske aage jo ghatna karm honge , vo karan or jyoti k sankato ko or badhayenge , unko ek bahut bade dharm sankat m phasa denge.

Kyunki yu hi mahadev narayan or meri icha k kaaran karan or jyoti ko naina se door ni rakha gaya devrishi.

Ek bahut bada kaaran tha devrishi jis kaaran naina ko karan or jyoti se itne varsho dur rakha gaya h devrishi.

Naradji :- narayan ! Narayan , ye baat bata ker aapne to hume or chinta me daal diya bhagwan , yadi mera anuman sahi h or m aapke sanket ko bilkul sahi dhang se samjh raha hu bhagwan to kripya kerke bataiye kya nikat bhawishya me aane wali us samasya ka.

Shani :- ni devrishi is vishay me hum kuch ni ker sakte , is samasya ka samdhan keval karan or jyoti k prem or naina k vivek or budhi per hi nirbhar hoga.

Wahi dusri or.

Location :- rasatal lok

Karan or jyoti jese hi rasatal lok pahunche to jesa ki karan ne jyoti ko yaha aane se pahale samjhaya tha vesa hi kerte hue dono ne apni bheshbhusha badal li.

Jyoti ne ek sidhe sadhe ganv ki ladki ki tarah sadharan lahenga choli pahani bhure rang ki, jisme wo bahut jyada khubsurat lag rahi thi,ankho me kajal , kano me jhumke or mathe pe ek bindi.
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Karan to apni jyoti k is roop ko dekh humesha ki tarah kho hi gaya , karan ki ye halat dekh pahale to sharmayi , phir uska khula muh band ker boli.

Jyoti :- muh band ker lijiye bhai verna makhi ghus jayegi .

Ye bol wo hasne lagi, or sath me karan bhi .

Karan :- kya baat h bhai , lagta h shonitpur ka har mard aaj ghayal hone wala h , din m chand jo nikla h.

Jyoti sharmate hue :- kya bhai aap bhi , ab chale .

Karan :- ha ha chalo.

Karan or jyoti pedal hi chal pade shonitpur ki ser per , dono ne paya ki har or khushali ka mahol h , sab bade khush najar aarahe h.

Jyoti :- bhai ek baat puchu.

Karan :- bolo gudiya.

Jyoti :- bhai jab hum sidha aapke dost , yani maharaj aman k mahal me pahunch sakte h to fir yu bhesh badal k yu ghumne ki kya jarurat.

Karan :- baat to sahi h gudiya lekin mane socha ki ab hum ek bnayi jagah pe aaye h to thoda ghum bhi liya jaye or sath sath yaha ka jayeja bhi le liya jaye.

Vese to mujhe apne dost aman p bharosa h ki vo rajya ka netritwa kushaltpurvak hi ker raha h jesa ki hum dekh sakte h , per..

Jyoti :- per kya bhai.

Karan :-. Per parso raat ko meri jhumki or aman se baat hui thi tab mane unke chahre pe chinta ki lakire saf saf dekhi thi, wo jarur koi na koi baat ko.leker pareshan h.

Or jaha tak m apne dost ko janta hu wo samne se hume is pareshani k baare m bilkul ni batayega , kyunki wo hume pareshan ni kerna chahta or na hi ek raja hone ka swabhiman use iski anumati dega.

Jyoti :- to bhai pareshani jaruri to ni rajya m ho , esa bhi ho sakta h ki pareshani ka kaaran unka koi family metter ho.

Karan :- ni jyoti ager esa hota to jhumki is baare me mujhe batati or ager pareshani aman or jhumki ka koi manmutav se judi hoti ya or koi baat hoti to kaya to is baare m jarur batati mujhe.

Jyoti :- hmm , lekin ye bhesh badalne ki kya jarurat thi bhai.

Karan ek or ishara kerte hue:- iska kaaran wo h gudiya.

Karan k ishare k or jese hi jyoti ne dekha to chonk gayi , kyunki samne ek choraye pe karan ki hi ek badi si murti lagi thi , jiske niche uske baare m or uski pichli baar ki rasatal ki kahani likhi thi.

Jyoti :- bhai ye kya h, apki murti yaha kyu

Karan :- isi vajah se hi mane bhesh badla h gudiya , kyunki yaha ka har ek vyakti mujhe janta h or mujhe apna hero manta h.

Mane aman ko mana bhi kiya tha ye murti lagwane ko ,per wo na mana .

Ager m apne normal roop me yaha ghumta to ye log hume ese gher lete jese hum celebrity ho ir hum apna kaam na ker pate .


Jyoti :- fir to aapne sahi kiya bhai , per .

Karan :- per kya jyoti.

Jyoti :- per in kaminiyo ka kya kare bhai , jo aapko ese ghur rahi h , jese aapko kha hi jayengi.

Jyoti ki baat sun karan ne aaspas dekha to paya ki nagar ki har ladki karan ko ghure ja rahi h.

Or ghure bhi kyu na karan tha hi itna aakarshak , usne ek tight fiting ka kutra or dhoti pahani thi or sir per pagdi or or kamar pe ek talvar latak rahi thi , karan k chahre pe halki dhadi much bhi achuki thi, isliye use koi pahachan to ni raha tha

Jiske karan wo kahi ka rajkumar pratit ho raha tha ,jis per shonitpur ki har ladki karan flat ho rahi thi or sath me jyoti ko dekh karan k vo jal bhi rahi thi

Esa hi kuch hal jyoti ka tha , un ladkiyo ko apni jaan ko yu ghurta dekh jyoti ka para bhi chad raha tha

Jise dekh karan ko masti sujhi or usne jyoti ko chidane k liye , ek ladki ko hath hilate hue ankh mar di , jisse wo ladki to sharm se lal ho apne ghar m bhag gayi.

Per karan ko ni pata tha ki itna hi kafi uski jyoti k hatho band bajwane k liye.

Abhi karan wapas aage ki or dekhne hua ki uske muh se chink nikal gayi.

Karan :- aah gudiya chod kya ket rahi h., Dard ho raha h.

Jyoti ne karan k kaan khichte hue :- dard ho raha h , abhi aap kya ker rahe the bhai .

Karan :- mane kya kiya gudiya.

Jyoti :- dekho to bhole ko , sharm ni aayi apni gf k samne hi dusri ladki ko line mar rahe ho.

Karan :- hehe meri gudiya to serious ho gayi , are yaar m to majak ker raha tha, bas tumhe ched raha tha.

Jyoti pakad tight kerte hue :- acha mujhe chedte ho , ab to aapki kher ni.

Karan :- aah , acha sorry baba sorry ab se esa ni karunga maaf ker de.

Jyoti :- thik h last warning deke chod rahi hu bhai , aage se esa hua na to aapki tange tod dungi , fir chahe mujhe log aaage langde ki hi bivi hi kyu na bole

Karan hath jode hue :- acha meri maa ni karunga esa ab apna mood mat kharab ker .

Jyoti :- hmm good boy.

Abhi kuch aage karan or jyoti ek jagah ruk gaye kuch dekh ker .

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Karan or jyoti abhi yuhi masti majak kerte hue aage badh rahe the ki tabhi unke panv ruk gaye or waha kuch esa hua ki karan ki muthi kas gayi or krodh k mare uski bhohe tan gayi.

Darasal wo nagar k thode bahri area se gujar rahe the to unhone paya ki ek admi jo bheshbhusha se koi raj adhikari lag raha h , vo ek chote se ghar k bahar khada ho ker ek garib orat pe chila raha h, uske sath kuch senik bhi the.

Admi :- tera ye roj roj ka natak h nila , chupchap kar chuka verna raj dand pane ko saj ho ja.

Nila :- malik m garib kaha se lau itna pesa , aap to jante hi ho m akeli ho , mere pati or bete bhi us hadse m mare ja chuke h , m khud dane dane ko mohtaz hu.

Admi :- wo sab m ni janta nila , ager shonitpur m rahana h to kar(tax) dena hi hoga , anyatha nikal jao apni beti ko leker.

Chupchap 100 mudraye dede ni to.

Nila :- per malik maharaj ne to 20 mudrao ka kar nirdharit kiya tha na , to aap 100 mudraye kese mang sakte h.

Aadmi :- kamini ek.to ker na deker raj droh kerti h uper se mujhse jban ladati h.

(Saniko se ) bandi bana lo is orat ko or le chalo ise humare mahal , sali abhi tak puri kadak h , ye to ab mere bister ki shobha badayegi.

Nila gusse se :- kamine itne bade pad pe hote hue bhi ek vidwa k liye esi baat kahate sharm na aayi tujhe , kamine m aaj hi teri shikayat maharaj karungi.

Admi haste hue :- maharaj se meri sikayat tab karegi na nila jab humse bachegi , or vese bhi maharaj k pas tum jese 2 kodi k logo k liyE time hi kaha h.

Ye bol wo apne 2 senik ko nila ki or bhejta h , nila ni ni chillate hue ankh band ker leti h , per ye kya agle hi pal uske kano m kisi ki dardnak chinke gunjti h.

Lila ne ankh khola to paya ek sunder nojwan jiska bhesh rajkumar jesa h vo uske aage khada h or pass me hi wo 2 senik jo use pakadne aaye the wo jamin p pade karah rahe h , wo nojawan or koi ni karan tha.

Hua darasl yu tha ki jese hi wo do senik nila ki or badhe the ki tabhi karan teji se uske aage aagaya or apni furti se usne ek senik k muh p punch to dusre k sine pe laat de mari , ye sab itni jaldi hua ki waha mojud sab heran rah gaye siway jyoti k.

Admi gusse se :- kon h be tu teri himmat kese hui mere seniko p hath uthane ki.

Karan :- ye tumhare senik h ? mujhe to laga tha ki ye shonitpur rajya k veer senik h .

Ab samjh aaya ye to tere wo paltu kute h , jo haram ka kha kha ker haramkhor ho chuke h , jo sale mera ek waar jhel na sake.

Aadmi :- kutte tu janta bhi h tu kisse yu baat ker raha h , aakhir h kon tu.

Karan :- abe sutiye, pahale to tu khud pakka ker ki tu puchna kya chahta h , ye ki m kon hu , ya ye ki m tujhe janta hu ki ni.

Or ha m janta hu na m us mahan purush se baat ker raha hu jisne bachpan me hi chori jese mahan karya ko anjam dena aarambh ker diya tha , per bad kismati se bichare ek din apne hi ghar me chori kerte hue pakde gaye the , apne pita k dwara , jinke kaaran unke pitaji ne is maharath hasil ko kerne k liye puraskar rupi juto ki sutayi se inhe bich chorahe pe nawaja tha.

Karan k mukh se apne bachpan ka kissa sun wo admi pahale to chonk gaya or fir jab usne dekha ki aaspas log jama ho gaye h or usper has rahe h to sharm se pani pani ho gaya.

Karan :- kahane ko to raj adhikari per h anghutachap ye sahab , lekin inke bade brathasri jo khud mantri h , unki pahachan k badolat aj is pad pe swikar h.

(Haste hue logo se ) are bhaiyo hasiye mat sahab per, mana ki vo bachpan m chor rah chuke h or angutha chap bhi h , lekin bhai ki pahachan se pad prapt kerne k bavjood bhi sahab ne taraki to ki h.

Tabhi bhid m se ek aawaz aayi wo kese bhai.

Karan:- are bhaiya tum sasur andhe ho ka re , dikhayi ni de raha ka , sahab pahale to keval chor hua kerte the , ab tarakki k sath dakait or balatkari bhi ban chuke h .

Ab us aadmi ka control chut gaya or wo gusse se chilaya.

Admi :- kamine ab tu jinda ni bachega

Ye bol wo apne seniko ko karan pe aakraman kerne ko bolta h, uske sath karib 6 senik the , wo sab karan ki ir dode.

Karan kurte ki bajuo ko modte hue :- ab aayega na maja bhidu .

Ye bol karan bhi unki or doda or bhag ker ek spin kick chalayi , jisse agle hi pal 3 senik dher ho gaye.

Fir 2 jano ne karan ko 2 or se gherna chaha to karan ne jara sa jhuk ker ek k pet me apni kohni de mari jisse wo pet pakad k beth gaya , uske sambhalne se pahale hi karan ne dusre senik ka kaam tamam ker diya.

Or jab wo thoda sambhla to karan ne ek mukka mar uske aage k danto ko sahid kerte hue , use behosh ker diya.

6 senik jo wese hi ek phatu tha or uper se kamjor dil ka bhi uski to fat k hath me aagayi wo wahi jam chuka tha .

Jise dekh karan k chahre pe shetani muskan aagayi or wo gusse bhari ankhe kar uski or bhada , jisse dekh us senik k pasine chutne lage or patloon gili ho gayi , wo dar k mare waha se hil bhii ni pa raha tha.

Karan us k nadik gaya or bas itna bola.

Karan thodi tez aawaz me :- bhoooooo....

Or ye kya ye phatu maharaj to bas itne me hi behosh ho gaye .

Karan admi se :- haha to tere ye bhade k tatu mujhe marne wake the.

Admi gusse se chilaya. :- kamineeeeee

Ye bol wo apni talvar le karan ki or doda , per karan ne ek lat uske hath pe de mari , jisse talvar to uske hath se chut gayi or karan ne ek jordar thappad uske gaal p chipka diya jisse uski 5 ki 5 ungliya uske gal per chap gayi or uske hoth phat gayi.

Karan :- chalo bete ab ghar jao or apne bap ko bhejo , mujhse bhidna tere was ki baat ni h.

Admi :- pachtayega kamine dekh lunga tujhe.

Karan :- abe idher hi hu m dekh lena jab marji ho .

Aadmi waha se bhag gaya.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or uske dost mandir pahunch gaye jaha 3no ne maa ki puja ki or fir naina pandit ji se milne gayi .

Naina :- pranam pandit ji.

Pandit :- aayush man bhavah beti.

Naina :- pandit ji mujhe suresh sir ne bheja h , unki aapse baat hui hogi

Darasal naina ko apni special puja k liye mandir m kuch jagah chahiye thi , jiske liye usne apne teacher suresh se is bare me baat ki kyunki wo janjanti thi ki unki jan pahachan h jaipur m , to unhonne hi naina ko yaha bheja tha

Pandit ji :- ha beti suresh ji ne mujhe sab bata diya h ,mandir k piche hi yagyashala h , waha tum aaram se apni puja ker sakti ho ,or sari samagri ka intezam ho chuka h or kisi chij ki jarurat ho to bata dena beti.

Fir naina apane dosto k sath havan kund k pas gaye , jaha pandit ji ne sab samagri or jarurat ka samman pahale se hi rakh diya tha
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Naina waha jaker apni puja sthal pe bethi h or apne bag se ek tasvir nikalti h , jisme maa durga k 9 roop yani navdurga ki tasvire thi.
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Jinhe naina apne mathe se laga ker unhe ek sthan pe virajman kerti h or unki puja kerti h .

Ma ki tasvir dekh preety utsukta vash puchti h .

Preety :- sister bole to ye itni sari matao me se tum konsi mata ki puja kerne wali ho.

Preety ki nadani p naina hasti hui boli .

Naina :- are meri bholi laado , maa to ek hi h , ye to bas unhi ke 9 roop h , jo unhonne samay anusar sansar ka kalyan kerne k liye.

Preety :- acha , ye baat h , maa k in ruppo k naam to batao sister.

Naina hath jodte hue maa k shlok bolti h :-

प्रथमं शैलपुत्री च द्वितीयं ब्रह्मचारिणी।तृतीयं चन्द्रघंटेति कूष्माण्डेति चतुर्थकम् ।।


पंचमं स्क्न्दमातेति षष्ठं कात्यायनीति च ।सप्तमं कालरात्रीति महागौरीति चाष्टमम् ।।


नवमं सिद्धिदात्री च नवदुर्गाः प्रकीर्तिताः ।।

( Prathamam Shailputri ch dwitiyam brahmcharini. Tritiyam Chandrghanteti Kushmandeti Chaturthakam.

Panchamam Skandmateti Shashtam Katyayniti ch. Saptamam Kalratri Maha Gauri ch Ashtmam.


Navmam Sidhidatri ch Nav Durga Prakirtitah. )

Or fir is mantra ka anuvaad kerke preety ko samjhati h , fir boli.

Naina :- wese to log sirf 2 navratro k bare m hi jante or mante h , per hum tantriko k anusar 2 or navratra hote h jinhe gupt navratra kaha jata h dosto.

Aaj navratra ka pahala din maa shailputri ko samarpit h , shail putri matlab parwat (himalay ) ki beti , ye maa ka woh roop h , jo unhone daksh k mukh Se apne swami yani bhagwan shankar ka apman sun lene k baad unhonne aatmdah ker liya tha , jab unhone parvatraj himalaya k yaha naye roop me janm liya.

Naina :- dosto ek baat or ye koi sadharan puja ni h , isliye tum is puja me subah to sammilit ho sakte ho , per raat k pahar m ki jani wali pooja m ni .

Veer or preety ha m gardan hilate h.

Tab naina pavitr agni prajvalit ker shri ganesh ka dhyan kerte hue , mantrocharan kerti h.

Naina :-

वन्दे वाञ्छितलाभाय चन्द्रार्धकृतशेखराम्। वृषारुढां शूलधरां शैलपुत्रीं यशस्विनीम्॥
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Vande Vanchhitlabhay Chandrardhkritshekhram. Vrisharudham Shuldharam Shailputri Yashswinim.

Or fir havan aarambh hota h.

Wahi dusri or.

Markesh gusse se apne aadmiyo pe chila raha tha .

Markesh :- nikame ho tum sab ke sab , sale haramkhoro ek kam bas chota sa ek kaam sompa tha tumhe ki un hatyaro pe najar rakhna or tum m#####do wo bhi na hua.

Ek pret :- malik hum to 24 ghante un logo pe najar rakh rahe the , lekin fir pata ni achanak se parso raat kya hua hum log apne aap behosh ho gaye or jab hum logo ko hosh aaya to vo log pata ni kaha chale gaye.

Markesh :- haramjado mujhe kya chutiya samjha h , jo kuch bhi bologe or m maan lunga.

Pret :- shetan ki kasam malik , hum sach bol rahe h.

Markesh ye sun serious ho gaya or man me sochne laga :- hmm , ye ho kya raha h , parso hi pahale us dayan se trishastra ka raaz ugalwa liya or ab inlogo ki ye halat bhi parso hui .

Kahi esa to ni trishastra ka raaz janne wala or in murkho ko behosh kerne wala ek hi ho, kuch to gadbad h jarur hum asuro k khilaf bahut bada shadyantra racha ja raha h.

Markesh :- ab mera muh kya dekh rahe ho haramkhoro dhundo un insano ko.

Markesh ka aadesh pate hi wo log waha se 9 2 11 hote hue apni jaan ki kher manane lage

Or chod gaye markesh ko uljhano me.

(Markesh ka andaza galat na tha , naina or uske dosto ka in preto.se picha ghora baba ne hi chudaya tha.

Hua darasal ye tha ki kulbhata se nikalte hi markesh ne in preto ko naina k piche laga diya tha

Pret udte hue invisible form m naina ki jeep ka picha ker rahe the , tabhi ghora baba waha road k ek kinare prakat hue or unhone kuch raakh un preton ki or fek di , jisse wo apni sudhbudh kho bethe or behosh ho gaye , or fir baba waha se gayab ho gaye.)

Back to the hero.

Karan nila k pas jaker puchta h aap thik to h na chachi .

Nila :- aapka bahut bahut dhanywad beta jo aapne us asahay ki ijaat bachai, per beta tumne mujhe bachane k liye itna bada khatra kyu mol liya, beta tum yaha se jitna jaldi ho sake nikal jao , isse pahale ki wo kamina apne bhai ko leke aaye .

Karan :- chachi aap ne mujhe beta bola to m kese apni maa ko apni ankho k samne beijat hote dekhta.

Jyoti :- ha chachi aap chinta mat kijiye , mere bhai k hote hue aapka koi kuch na bigad sakega , us adhikari or uske bhai jese lakh bhi aajaye to mere bhai k liye chinti samman hi honge.

Karan :- chachi wese ye sab ho kya raha tha , humne to suna tha ki maharaj aman bahut hi dayalu or nyay priya shasak h to unke rajya m ye sab kese.

Nila :- beta tumne sahi suna h , hamare maharaj bahut hi ache or nyay priya shasak h , parantu kuch samay se rajya pe sankat k megh mandra rahe h , jinke samadhan me maharaj bahut vyasth rahate h , is kaaran wo apna or karya ko ni dekh paa rahe.

Mujhe lagta h ki isi baat ka fayda ye lalchi log utha rahe h or hum garibo ko loot rahe h or koi shikayat kerna bhi chahe to ye kamine maharaj tak hume pahuchne hi ni dete.

Karan :- hmm , kya aap bata sakti h chachi kya pareshani h maharaj ko.

Nila :- beta mujhe jyada to gyat ni h per ha kinhi bahari shaktiyo ka khatra pure rasatal pe mandra raha h

Jyoti :- aap chinta mat kijiye chachi ab bhai aagaye h na wo sab sahi ker denge.

Nila :- per kese beta , wese tum dono ho kon beta , aaj se pahale to tumhe yaha kabhii ni dekha.

Karan muskurate hue :- jald hi jan jaogi chachi , per usse pahale kuch khane ko dijiye na badi bhuk lagi h.

Nila udaas man me :- kitni abhagin hu m jinhone mere pran bachaye , unko m pet bhar khana bhi ni khila sakti.

Kitne pyare or saaf dil k bache h ye ,Kya bolu in bacho se ki unki ye chachi to khud khane k dane dane ko taras rahi h.

Karan :- kya hua chachi jaldi kero na badi bhuk lag rahi h , kya apne hatho se bana bhojan na karaogi.

Nila :- esi baat ni h beta ki m tumhe bhojan ni karwana chahti , mera bas chale to tumhe apne hatho se 56 bhog bana ker khilayu beta , per tumhari chachi to khud dane dane ko mohtaz h , aaj un logo ki vajah se kaam p bhi na ja saki , jiske badle kuch rukha sukha khane ko mil jata.

Esa bolte hue nam ankho se nila ne apni vyatha karan ko sunayi.

Karan :- kyu jhoot bolti ho chachi , ye majak ka samay ni h mere or meri bahan k pet m chuhe kud rahe h , humne subah se kuch ni khaya , kripya jaldi se kuch banaiye na.

Nila man me :- hey bhagavan ab m kya karu , ye bache to samjhne ko teyar hi ni h or itne pyare bacho ko mana kerte hue mera khud ka dil ro raha h.

Nila :- beta tum.samjhte kyu ni ,m sach bol rahi hu , is garib k ghar m khane ka ek dana ni h.

Karan :- are chachi aap phir jhut bol rahi ho , rasoi to puri bhari padi h , jake dekhiye to.

Karan ki jid k kaaran nila rasoi me jati h or jo waha ka najara dekhti h to uski hairani ki sima na rahi , jis rasoi me kuch der pahale tak khane ka ek dana na tha , ab esi koi bhi sabji koi bhi masala ya rasoi se related esi koi bhi vastu na thi , jo waha mojud na ho.

Karan uske piche aate hue :- dekhiye aap yuhi jhut bol rahi thi , rasoi to puri bhari hui h.

Nila samjh jati h ye chamatkar karan ne hi kiya h or wo uske panv pakdne ko hoti h to karan use rokte hue samjhata h or khana banane ko kahata h.

Nila pure man se karan or jyoti k liye khana banati h or unhe apne bache samjh ker khana prem purvak khilati h.

Wahi dusri or

Wo aadmi jisko karan ne full bejiti k sath dhoya tha wo bhagte hue apne bhai k pas gaya jo rajya ka ek mantri tha .

Wo mantri bhi apne bhai ki tarah ek ghatiya or lalchi aadmi tha , jo rishwat khor tha or aman ka dhyan dusri or hone ka khub fayda utha raha tha.

Adhikari jese hi apne bhai k samne jata h to apne bhai ki halat dekh mantri chonk jata h or bolta h

Mantri :- bhai tu yaha is halat m , kye sab kese hua.

Adhikari :- kese ni bhaiya puchiye ki ye kisne kiya , aaj aapke rajya me hi aapke bhai ko kisine bich chorahe pe beijjat ker mara h.

Ye bolte hue usne sari baat apne bhai ko bata di , jise sun ker mantri gusse se chilaya :- un haramjado ki ye majal , aaj us kamine ka aakhiri din hoga is duniya me.

Ye bol mantri apne seniko ko ikatha kerta h , or nikal pada nila k ghar ki or.

Karan or jyoti khana kha ker uthe hi the ki tabhi bahar se shoe sharaba hua.

Karan :- aagaye haramjade .

Nila :- beta tum unse mat uljho , tum piche k darwaje se bhag jao , mera jo hona hoga wo ho jayega , per m ni chahti beta mere kaaran tum dono ki jaan pe khatra pade

Karan :- ni chachi ab bhagne ka samay to in kutto ka tha , jo mane ininhe diya tha , per ye lato k bhoot bato se kaha manne wale h.


Mantri bahar se chilaya :- mere bhai ko marne wale kamine bahar nikal.

Karan pure style se bahar nikalte hue :- are o chacha , are o bh$$%@wale chacha , thoda awaz ko rest de lijiye , werna rest in piece ho jaoge .

Bol kya kam h kyu yu gale fad k chila raha h.

Adhikari karan ki or ishara kerte hue :- bhaiya ye hi h wo kamina .

Mantri :- kamine tujh ko to m....

Karan :- ha ha malum h chal apne baap ko mat sikha , pata h yahi bolega na ki tu muje jinda ni chodega ,chal ab ye backchodiya band ker or ek baap ki olad h to mukabla ker.

Ye bolte hue karan apni kamar pe lagi talvar ko Mayan se nikalta h .

Mantri bhi ye sab dekh gusse me apne seniko ko hamla kerne ko bolta h , jise sun sare senik karan ki or dode or or karan unki or.

Or ek jump k sath unper kudte hue karan ne talvaar sena p chalayi , jiske agle hi pal , char senik k sir ped se tute hue fal ki tarah kat ker gir gaye.

Jise dekh waha mojud sabki ankhe khuli ki khuli rah gayi siwaye jyoti k , jo aaram se ek bade se patthar pe bethi ye sab dekh rahi thi.

Or fir shuru hua agle hi pal ek sangram jisme karan k samne karib 50 senik the , jinhe karan gajar muli ki tarah kaatna shuru ker chuka tha.

Tabhi ek senik jo acha talvarbaji me mahir tha wo karan se yudh kerne laga , wo wakayi me acha yodha tha or karan ko achi takar bhi de raha tha , jisse karan impress hua usse ,wo badi tezi se karan pe prahar ker rahe the ki or karan use dodge ker raha tha, lekin fir karan ne jyada time waste na kerte hue, uski talwar ko apni talvar se rokte hue ghuma k door fek diya or uske gale pe talvar ko chalaya , us yodha ne apni ankh band ker li or apni mot ka intezaar kerne laga, lekin ye kya use kuch ni hua , usne apni ankh kholi to paya ki karan ne apni talvar uski gardan k pas rok di.

Karan :- yahi soch rahe ho na ki sabki tarah tumhe mane kyu ni mara.

Yodha gardan me ha hilata h

Karan :- wo isliye ki tum ek kushal yodha ho or is rasatal ko tum jeso ki jarurat h

Isliye aakhiri moka de raha hu , is kute ka sath dete hue jis beimani k raste p chal rahe ho use chod do or sahi raste p aajao , ni to agli baar meri talvar rukegi ni.

Ye bolte hue karan aage ko.badha , lekin kya kabhi konwo (crows) ki sangat me kabhi hans ho sakta h , esa hi haal us yodha ka tha , usne moke ka fayda uthate hye , apni talvar utha karan k pith piche war kerna chaha.

Lekin usse pahale hi karan ne piche mude apni talvar ko ghuma k uske sine me ghop di.

Karan :- to m galat tha , tum ek kushal yodha to dur ek yodha kahalane k layak ni ho , tumne ye acha yudh prashikshan to liya per shayad yudh ki niti sikhna bhul gaye apne guru se, kayar.

Fir karan aage bhadte hue kuch hi der me sare seniko ka safaya ker dala or wo un dono bhaiyo ki or bhadne laga

Mantri or uske bhai ki to karan k is bhayanak nar sanghar dekh halat kharab ho gayi thi , unko to esa pratit ho raha tha ki unke samne karan ni sakshat yamraj aaraha h.

Karan :-. Bas itna hi dam tha tum dono me kayaro , kya inhi bhade k tatuo k dam pe tum itni hekdi dikhate the in garibo pe.

Salo.tum dono ne keval na sirf in logo ko luta , balki rishwat khori kerke raj droh jesa gunah bhi kiya h.

(Karan ne apni ankhe band ki or jab usne apni ankhe kholi to ab uski ankhe nili ni balki red ho chuki thi , jiska matlab ye tha ki karan ab rakshak ni , dand nayak ban chuka h)

Or dn ki najar me deshdroh ki keval ek saja h , wo h keval mot.

Ye bol karan ne apni talvar ko apni mayan me rakha or apne kamar band me hath dal ek hunter jise karan ne apni jadui power se mangwaya
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Or karan me us hunter ko kholte hue ek baat jamin pe chalate hue , dusra waar un dono pe kiya .

Whip ki rassi ki mabut pakad ne dono bhaiyo ki gardan ko.ek second m jakad liya .

Or fir karan ne rasi samet unhe apni or khich liya jisse wo dono uske pero m aagire.

Mantri :- hume maaf ker do , chahe to humara sara dhan lelo , bas hume jane do

Adhikari :- ha hume jane do , hum wada kerte h ki aaj k baad is rajya m kabhi najar na aayenge.

Karan haste hue :- na muna na , abhi se mat royo, itni jaldi tumhe mot nasib ni hone wali , abhi to tumhe un paap kerm ka dand bhogna h , jo tumne nila chachi or unke jesi kitni lachar mahilao p atyachaar kerke kiya.

Ye bolne k sath hi karan ne apne hunter se non stop dono bhaiyo ki sutayi kerna shuru ker di, jiske sath hi us pure mahol me un dono ki bhayanak chikhe nikalne shuru ho gayi.

Lekin dand nayak k kano pe ju na rengi , kyuki dand nayak ko keval ek hi kaam aata h , wo h keval papiyo ko dand dena

Dand nayak marte hue bilkul ni dekh raha tha ki uska hunter kaha kaha lag raha h , na hi uske man me ek percent bhi daya thi.

Balki jitni tez wo dono bhai chilate, dand nayak ko or aanand milta or wo or bhi tez war kerta .

Karan k is bhayanak roop ko dekh nila bhi kampne lagi , lekin baad me use unhe un dono pe daya aane lagi or wo karan k pas jake boli.

Nila :- chod de beta , verna mar jayenge.

Dn bina dekhe apni bhayanak aawaz me :- ese logo ka jina bhi sirf dharti ka bhojh badhan hoga chachi

Nila :- beta in dushto ko maar ker tu apne hath gande kyu kerta h , inko inke kiye ka dand bhagwan dega

Dn :- to thik h chachi inko dand bhagwan hi dega

Ye bol karan ne dono ko ek sath apne dono hatho se gale ko pakad utha leta h or jor se ek or fek deta h or hunter wapas rakhte hue apni talvar ko nikalte hue bola.

Dn :- per inko bhagwan tak pahuchane ka intezaam kerna to padega na chachi .

Ye bol karan apni khun se sani talvar leker undono ki or bhada , dono bhaiyo ki halat bahut kharab thi , unme itni bhi jan na bachi thi ki wo khade bhi ho sake , bhagna to door.

Karan abhi kuch kadam hi unse door tha ki tabhi hava me udti hui ek talvaar aayi or karan or un bhaiyo k bich m aaker jamin me gad gayi.

Or ek aawaz aayi.

Wahi ruk jao nojawan .

jab sabne aawaz ki or dekha to karan or jyoti ko chod sab jhuk gaye or ek sath hath jodte hue bole.

Sabhi :- pranam maharaj.

Ji ha dosto dn k bich m aane wala or koi ni rasatal k raja , yani aman tha or sath me kaya bhi

Short flashback

Kaya gurukul me sab ladkiyo ko training de rahi thi .

Kaya :- abhi mane jo tum sabko danv sikhaya h uska abyas kero, m abhi aati hu.

Ye bol kaya apne karyalay (office) me jati h jaha bethe shaks ko dekh wo chonk gayi thoda, jo or koi ni aman tha.

Aman :- kya hua pradhanadhiyapika ji , kahi is samay yaha aaker hum aapke karya me badha to na bane .

Kaya :- pranam maharaj , are ni ni maharaj aap kesi baat ker rahe h , aap to humare maharaj h , aapne yaha aane ka kasht kyu kiya , apni is sevika ko ek sandesh bhej dete , m turant waha hajir hoti.

Aman :- pahali baat to aap humari sevika ni balki is rajya ki pradhan senapati or pradhan adhiyapika ho.

Or yaar kaya mane tumh kitni baar kaha h ki akele m ye opchariktaye mat kiya kero , sir karan ne hi ni humne bhi tumhe apni sakhi mana h or sakhi kabhi sevika hoti h.

Kaya :- ji maharaj.

Aman :- fir se wahi baat.

Kaya :- acha baba maaf kardo aman ji aage se esi bhul na hogi, vese kya hum apne sakha k yaha aane ka prayojan jan sakte h

Aman :- kya hum apni sakhi se sirf kam k liye hi mil sakte h.

Kaya :- esi baat ni h , parantu m janti hu ki mere sakha abhi rajya ko leker parshan h , isliye wo ek maharaj k roop me apni senapati se milne aaye h.

Aman :- sahi hi kahata h karan , tum lakho me ek ho sakhi .

Aman k muh se jab usne suna ki karan ne uski tarif ki to wo uchal padi khushi se man hi man.

Aman fir kaya se rajya ki us anjan samsya k bare m discuss ker hi raha tha ki tabhi ek doot waha bhagte hue aaya or bola.

Doot :- pranam maharaj , ek bahut bada gajab ho gaya.

Aman serious hote hue :- kya hua doot tum itne ghabraye hue kyu ho.

Doot :- maharaj kisi pardeshi ne aapke vishesh mantri ji or unke bhai pe aakraman ker diya, or ab un dono k pran sankat m h.

Aman :- kya , kiski itni himmat hui , jisne humare mantri p prahar kiya or senik waha kya ker rahe h.

Doot :- maharaj wo jo bhi h bahut shaktishali h , usne kuch hi samay me akele hi 70 se bhi jyada saniko ka vadh ker dala.

Mujhe to lagta h ki ye wahi buri shakti h maharaj , jiska khatra har jagah mandra raha h.

Aman :- tumhara kahana uchit h ya ni , wo to waha jane k baad hi pata chalega.

Kaya :- m bhi chalti hu aapke sath maharaj.

Or fir jab dono ne waha ka najara dekha to aman ne apni talwaar ko unke bich fek ker rok diya.

Flashback end.

Aman ne karan ko ni pahachana , shayad karan k bheshbusha ya karan ki maya k asar se ,
per na jane kaya karan ko kese pahachan liya .

Jise dekh wo khushi se uchal kuch bolne ko hui to karan ne jaldi se apna ishara ker chup rahane ko kaha , kaya bhi chup ho gayi.

Aman ab age kya karega or konsi h wo samsya jiske kaaran aman pareshan h janne k liye sath bane rahiye

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Aman ne special rath mangwaya tha , jispar bethkar wo log nagar ghumte hue jane wale the.

Karan jyoti se masti se :- aunty's first.

Jyoti chidte hue :- bhai aapko to m baad m.dekhti hu

Ye bolte hue chadi , fir karan ne kaya ko chadne ko bola , to kkaya jhijakte hue

Kaya :- ji m is rath pe kese beth sakti hu.

Karan :- kyu sakhi .

Karan :- sakha , ye rath keval rajaparivar ya unke rishtedaro k liye h or m thahri ek mamuli si senapati.

Isliye aap rath pe virajman hoiye , m piche piche chalti hu aapke.

Karan ne jese hi ye suna to thoda serious ho gaya or ek najar jyoti ki or dekha to karan ka ishara jyoti samjh jati h or wo rath se niche uter jati h

Kaya :- are jyoti ji aap rath se kyu uter gayi, humse koi bhul hui kya

Karan :- bhul aapse ni , bhul humse hui h kaya ji , jo hum is rath m sawar ho gaye ,(aman se) jiske liye m aapse shama chahunga maharaj

Aman :-. Ye tum kesi baat ker rahe ho mitra , mujhe to kuch samjh ni aaraha.

Kaya :- ha sakha , ye kya bol rahe ho aap.

Karan :- tumne hi to abhi kaha sakhi ki ye rath keval rajaparivar ya unse sambandh rakhne walo k liye hi h.

Iske hisab se to hum bhi is per bethne k adhikari ni , kyunki hum to raj parivar k sadasya ni h

Aman :- esa to mat kaho dost , kisne kaha tum rajaparivar k sadasya ni, balki tum to mere or jhumki k liye pariwar k sadasya se bhi bad ker ho, humare dost , humare bhai , humare sabkuch , aaj hum jo bhi h , keval tumhare kaaran hi to h , fir tum esa kyu kah rahe ho

Kaya :-. Aman ji bilkul sahi bol rahe h sakha , aap ka pad is rasatal me ishwer se kam ni h , to kripaya esa bol hume lajjit na kare , or is rath pe virajman ho iski shobha badhaye .

Karan :- hm ager aap jo bhi boli h vo satya h to fir aap kese is rath k ayogya kese hui sakhi. Abhi aapne hi kaha ki m janm se rajparivar ka sadsya na ho ker bhi is parivar ka hissa hu , kyu , kyunki mane apne karmo se ye samman paya

Usi prakar aap bhi is rath k yogya h kyunki jis uplabdhi k kaaran mujhe ye samman mila h , vo kabhi na mil pati mujhe yadi aap na hoti sakhi

Isliye yadi is samman k hum adhikari h to aap bhi is samman k pure adhikari h

Or yadi in baat ko side me rakh bhi diya jaye to m ye bilkul sahan ni ker sakta ki mere parivar k ek sadasya (jyoti ki or dekhte hue ) ko raj samman mile or dusri ko

Kaya :- per.

Karan kaya ka hath pakdte hue :- or kuch ni to apne sakha ki baat hi maan lo na sakhi , kya apne dost ki itni si baat bhi na manogi.

Karan ne ye baat itna pyaar or apne pan se kahi thi ki kaya bhavuk ho gayi or wahi karan k sneh bhare sparsh se uske sharir me ek ajib si lahar hi dod uthi , jiske aanand ki vyakhya kaya k liye sambhav na thi

Kaya ki ankhe nam ho gayi , jise dekh karan bola

Karan :- kya yaar aman , kya kismat payi h humne ek saheli mili h , wo bhi rotdu

Ye bol karan ne kaya ko sine se lagate hue bola.

Karan :- dekho.sakhi , aaj to bol diya aage se esa kabhi mat bolna tum humare parivar ki sadasya ni ho, tum meri sakhi ho , meri parivar ka hissa ho tum , tumhari importance bhi mere liye vahi h jo mere liye, aman jhumki jyoti , ya yu kaho mere parivar k sadasyo ki h

Isliye aage se tumne esi baat ki na , to m.

Kaya :- to aap kya

Karan masti kerte hue kaya ki choti khichte hue :- to ye choti kaat dunga.

Ye bolte hue karan bhagne laga , or uske piche kaya bhi.

Kaya :- ruko sakha , aapko mana kiya tha na pahale bhi meri choti mat khicha kijiye , aaj to aap gaye.

Kaya ek lambi si choti rakhti thi , or use chid thi ki koi uske choti khiche , lekin karan humesha use chedne k liye yahi kerta.

Kuch der yu hi masti majak k baad aman ne chalne ko kaha to sabse pahale jyoti chadi , fir karan or fir karan ne hath aage bhada ker kaya ko rath per liya or last me aman k chadne k baad rath chal pada mahal ki or

Wahi dusri or

Location :- patal lok

Vp karan pe najar rakhe hue tha apne singhasan pe bethe samne ek screen pe ye drishya dekh raha tha.

Vp :- jitna khush ho sakta h rakhak , ho le , kyunki aaj ki raat esa grahan lagega teri jindagi pe , jiske baad tu kabhi sukh ka suraj ni dekh payega.

Vp ne apni ankh band ker kisi ko yaad kiya to samne divar pe ek or screen khul gayi .

Jisme sirf andhera andhera hi tha or najar aarahi to sirf 2 bhayanak laal ankhe .

Jo vp ko dekh pranam kerti h.

Vp :- vo log rasatal pahunch chuke h , jesa tumhe samjhaya tha vesa hi kerna samjhe , yadi kuch gadbad hui na to tumhari kher ni.

Vo jo koi bhi tha dar k maare ji malik kah ker waha se gayab ho gaya.

Wahi dusri or

(Friends m naina ki story ko ek din aage bhada raha hu ek baar k liye , means abhi k liye naina ki story karan se ek din aage ki hogi )

Agle din naina humesha ki tarah jaldi uth gayi or tabhi use yaad aaya ki aaj to preety ka janmdin h.

Naina man me :- kitni pyari lag rahi h meri bahan , lekin vidhi ka vidhan to dekho , itni pavitra aatma ne janm bhi liya to ek shetan k ansh se.

Per chahe kuch bhi ho , meri preety us shetan ki beti ni balki meri bahan h ye

Ye soch ker naina ne preety k gaal gaal ko chum liya, jisse preety ki nind khul gayi or wo angdai lelete hue uth gayi.

Preety :- badi jaldi subah ho gayi aaj , good morning sister.

Naina :- good morning meri laado and very very happy birthday to you my jaan

Ye bol wo preety k gaal chum leti h or uske gale lag jati h.

Preeti :- thank you meri jaan , per kiss kerni h to thodi dhang se kero na.

Naina :- dhang se matlab kese

Preety :- matlab ki ese .

Ye bol preety ne apne dono hatho se naina k gal pakad liye or uske hotho pe apne hotho pe rakh kiss kerne lagi.

Naina to ek baar chonk gayi ,lekin dhire dhire wo bhi uska sath dene lagi ,karib 5 min ki kissing k baad dono alag hui to naina hampte hue boli.

Naina preety k ek boob daba k :- kamini tu ni sudharegi,aapni tarah mujhe bhi lesbo bana k chodegi

Preety bhi kaha kam thi usne naina ko bed p patka or uske uper chad ker uske gardan ko chumte hue boli.

Preety :- kamini m koi lesbo ni hu , per kya karu jaan tujhe dekh ker control hi ni hota

(Naina k boobs dabate hue ) manto kerta h pura pi jau tere in amrit kalash k ras ko.

Naina bhi ab kaha piche rahane wali thi , thi to wo bhi moedern ladki or preety k sath rah ker wo bhi kafi open minded ho gayi thi.

Naina :- kamini ye sab aaj raat jiju k sath kerna , jab vo (preety ki pussy ko kapdo k uper se masalte hue ) teri is muniya ki ragdayi karenge ,apne chote veer se.

Preety :- aah kamini chod , abhi se hi waha aag kyu laga rahi h ,abhi raat hone m time h .

Ye bol wo naina ko dhakka deti h or bhag k sharmate hue bathroom m bhag gayi .

Naina haste hue :-. Are meri jaan ye to bata de ,mujhse kya gift chahiye tujhko .

Preety ander se hi :-wo m apne aap lelungi time aane per

Kuch der baad preety teyar ho ker aati h , usne ek red colour ka bahut hi sunder punjabi salvar suit pahana tha jisme wo bahut pyari lag rahi thi

Naina :- ye kya pagli ,aaj teri first date h or tu ye kapde pahanegi.

Preety :- are sister jitna tum samjh rahi ho , utni bhi bevkuf ni hu m , ye to aaj din ki pooja k liye h .

Sham ko to m vo hi dress pahanne wali hu , jiski humne kal shopping ki.thi.

Naina :-. Hmm good

Preety ko veer k pass jane ka bol naina bhi nahane jati h or kuch der baad vo ready ho ker waha pahuchati h to kya pati h.

Ki veer or preety to kissing m lage hue h or darwaja band kerna bhi bhul gaye.

Naina halka sa khasti h jise wo dono hosh m aaye or alag hote h.

Naina chedte hue :- jiju thoda to sabar rakhiye ,aaj sara din aap logo ka hi h or control ni hota to kamse kam gate to lock ker liya kijiye.

Veer :-. Ab kya kare sali sahiba aapki saheli h itni khubsurat jab bhi inhe dekhte h comtrol hi na hota.

Thodi hasi majak k sath 3no breakfast kerte h or fir mandir ki or nikal jate h ,jaha naina apni puja m lag jati h , lekin vo aaj veer or preety ko apne sath ni rahane deti or unhe ghumne bhej deti h.

Preety or veer pura din khub ghume or fir plan k hisab se preety wapas lot aayi naina k pas or veer apni special party ka arrangement kerne k liye nikal pada.

Naina :- to janeman kesa raha jiju k sath time spend kerna.

Preety :- kesi babaat kerti ho sister ,veer ka sath hi to mere jindGi ka sabse bada sukh h

Naina :- asli sukh lena to abhi baki h meri jaan , aaj tum dono k milan ki raat h , to uske liye teyar hona ki ni hona .

Preety :-. Are ha acha yaad dilaya, hume 6 baje tak hotel ****** m pahuchna h .

Naina :- off o fir der kyu ker rahi h jhali , jaldi chal bahut kam time h humare pas.

Fir naina preety ko leker beauty parlour leker jati h jaha use vo special dulhan ki tarah ready karwati h.

Karib 2 ghante baad jab preety bahar aati h to aaspas k sabhi ladko ki halat kharab ho gayi , wo kuch esi dikh rahi thi








Naina preety ko chedte hue :- haye najar na lage meri lado ko kisi ki, jiju to aaj gaye kaam se.

Preety kuch ni boli bas sharma gayi , fir naina or preety nikal padi veer k bataye address per


Restaurant me preety jese hi enter hui to uske uper gulab k fullo ki barish hui or sath me tabhi hi restaurant me happy birthday song bajne laga , low volume me, samne wall per bade hi sunder tarike se happy birthday preety likha hua tha or samne screen per preety or veer ki bachpan se leker aaj tak ki jitni bhi pics thi uska slideshow chal raha tha.

Tabhi veer aage aata h or puchta h.

Veer :- kesa laga mera arrangement jaan .

Preety :- it's so pretty jaan , per itna sab kerne ki kya jarurat thi , mere liye to yahi sabse bada gift h ki aap mere sath ho.

Veer :- abhi to main kaam to baaki h meri jaan .

Ye bol ker veer preety k samne ek ghutne pe beth apni jeb se ek ring nikalte hue bola.

Veer :- preety m bata ni sakta ki m tumse kitna pyaar kerta hu , or ye pyaar aajka ni , jabki tabse h jab shayad mujhe pyaar ka matlab hi ni pata tha.

Mane jabse hosh sambhala , tabse tumhe hi apne sath paya ek ache dost , ek sathi k roop me or pata hi ni chala ki m kab apni sabse achi saheli ko hi apna dil.de betha.

Preety meri jaan tumhara ye dost tumhara veer tumhare bina jine ki kalpana bhi ni ker sakta, isliye aaj badi himmat kerke ye puch raha hu.

Preety , will u be mine , will u marry me.

Preety ki to khushi ki sima hi na thi , aaj use wo mil gaya tha , jiske khawab vo bachpan se dekhte aayi thi , yani ki uska pyar uska veer aaj khud use shadi k liye purpose ker raha tha.

Preety khushi k ansu k sath apna hath babadhate hue :- yes I will.

Ye sun veer bhi khushi se uchal pada or usne jaldi se ring pahana ker preety ko gale laga liya.

Wo kuch der yu hi gale lage rahe , jese ek dusre m sama lena chahte ho.

Unka dhyan naina ki tali ki aawaz se tuta , vo bhi aaj bahut khush thi ki aaj uski bahan ko sahi maine me uska sacha pyaar mil hi gaya.

Naina sitti marte hue :- kya baat h jiju , ab to aap mere officially jjiju bhi ban hi gaye.

Ab ye bataiye party sirf aapki mangetar k liye hi h , ya usme sali sahiba bhi allowed h.

Veer :- are bhai sali bhi to adhi gharwali hoti h sali sahiba , or bhala hume aapko naraj kerke jute thodi na khane h aapni hone wali wife se , kyu ji.

Preety :- ha or ni to kya

Fir veer ne cake mangwaya jo usne special order deker banwaya tha preety k liye.
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Preety candles bhujaker cake cut kerti h to naina veer ko ankh mar ke koi masti ka ishara kerti h , jise veer samjh jata h

Preety pahala tukda veer ko khilati h or fir naina ko or fir naina jese hi veer ko dobara isara kerti h to usike sath veer or naina mil ker cake ka ek ek piece leker preety k face pe laga dete h or hasne lage

Pahale to preety ne esa act kiya jese wo gussa ho gayi , per fir wo khud hi haste hue fatafat se dono k face pe cake laga dala.

Yu hi masti majak k sath party puri hui or fir naina ne time dekha to paya ki uski raat ko puja ka time ho gaya h.

Naina :- acha friends ab meri raat ki pooja ka time ho gaya h ab mujhe chalna chahiye , aap log enjoy kero , or(hashaste hue ) ha itna bhi enjoy mat ker lena ki subah hi mujhe good news mil jaye .

Preety sharmate hue naina k mukka marti h or bolti h.

Preety :- kutiya humesha hume chedti rahati h.

Naina kaan me :- kutiya to tu banegi meri jaan aaj jiju k liye.

Ye bol naina bhagi or piche preety bhi


Preeti :- ruk kamini tujhe m batati hu.

Thodi der masti majak k baad naina nikalne lagi or preety ko ek friend k tor pe uski first night k liye advice dete hue.

Ye bol naina nikal padi mandir ki or

Preety or veer bhi kuch der party kerte h or fir nikal pade apne hotel ki or.

Jab vo hotel pahunche to receptionist se apni chabi lene lage , jo unhone jane se pahale waha rakhwayi thi.

Receptionist :- many many happy engagement sir and mam.

Veer or preety ye sun heran ho gaye ki receptionist ko is baare me kkese pata chala

Receptionist :- heran mat hoiye sir naina mam ne hi hume call kerke yr baat batai taki hum aap ke liye special arrangement ker sake.

(Ek chabi dete hue ) ye lijiye sir ye aapke new room ki keys , jo specially naina mam ne aapke liye book kiya h.

Vese to humne aapki jarurat ki har chij ka intezam ker diya h ,fir bhi aapko kisi chij ki jarurat ho to.aap call ler lijiyega.

Veer preety ko chedne k liye :- or kisi chij ki jarurat ni h (ankh marte hue ) , bas room k bahar do not disturb ka board laga dena , taki hume koi disturb na kare , you know na why


Preety sharmate hue veer k ek mukka marti h.

Receptionist haste hue :- ya sure sir

Fir veer or preety nikal pade apne special room ki.or.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- rasatal lok.

Raat ka vakt ho raha tha lekin ye kya , jaha is samay pure rasatal me shanti honi chahiye thi , waha is samay hahakar macha hua tha.

Raaj mahal or uske aaspas k sthano me aag lagi hui thi or aman sahit puri rasatal ki sena asahay ye dekh rahi thi

Or sabse herani ki baat ye thi ki karan k hote hue bhi esa ho raha tha , ya yu kaho is sab ki vajah karan hi tha

Ji ha dosto harani ki baat to h per yahi sach , h karan jo abhi bahut jyada gusse me aachuka tha , usne apne sharir ka aakar itna bada ker liya tha ki pura raj mahal bhi uske aage ek khilona najar aaraha tha.

Uske ankho samet pure sharir se vinashakari jwalaye nikal rahi thi or wo bas ek hi shabd apni bhayanak garjana k sath dohraye ja raha tha.

Karan gusse se :- sarvanash , sarvanash , koi ni bachega aaj .

Ye bol karan ne apne hath uper kiye or uske hatho me ek aag ka gola aagaya or usne ek or wo gola feka.

Wo gola bahut dur ja ker gira lekin uske girne se itna bhayankar dhamaka hua ki uski aawaz or roshni mahal tak pahunchi.

Aman karan ko shant kerne ki koshis kerte hue :- shant ho jao bhai shant ho jao , tumhara ye krodh is pure rasatal ko nasht ker dega , kripya shant ho jao bhai, sab kuch sahi ho jayega .

Karan gusse se :- ho jane do aaj sarvanash , aajane do aaj pralay , lekin aaj dand nayak k krodh se koi ni bachega, bahut sah liya mane or mere apno ne anyay , aaj is sharsti ko is anyay ka utter dena hoga , anyatha isko nasht hona hoga

Kaya :- kripya shant ho jaiye sakha , krodh kerne se kuch ni hoga , hum mil ker is sankat ka hal avashya nikalenge , koi na koi upay to avashya hoga iska .

Lekin karan ka krodh shant hone ka naam hi ni le raha tha , jise dekh kaya ko.dar satane laga ki karan ko kuch ho na jaye , isliye wo aage bhadi karan ki or lekin karan ka tez use jala raha tha , lekin kaya iski bina parwah kiye aage bad rahi thi.

Lekin aman ne jab ye dekha to wo turant udte hye kaya ko khich ker karan se door lata h

Kaya :- mujhe mat rokiye maharaj mere sakha ko meri jarurat h.

Jhumki :- di ab ap ya hum kukuch ni ker sakte , bhai ko keval jyoti di hi shant ker sakti h

Kaya rote hue :- per jyoti ji to...

Ye achanak karan ko kya ho gaya , esa kya hua jo karan ka krodh is sima tak aapa huncha.

Or sabse bada sawal jo karan ko shant ker sakti h , yani ki uski shakti uski jaan uski jyoti h kaha

Janne k liye sath bane rahiye

Aj k liye bas itna hi

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