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Update 72
Aryan sabke sone ke baad Neha ke kamre mein jaake usse baate karta hai par jab woh waha se nikal ke apne kamre mein jaata hai tab Suraj Malhotra usse dekh leta hai.
Suraj: Oo toh bhai ka pyaar wapas jaag raha hai behen ke liye. Issbaar kuch aisa karunga ke humesha ke liye hi yaha se nikal dunga. Ekbaar yeh yaha se nikle phir humesha ke liye hi isko iss duniya se nikal dunga. Aur yaha mere saare saathi pata nhi kaha chale gaye. Iss Black Beast ne toh mujhe barbaad kardiya. Koi bhi isse panga lena nhi chahta. Aur naahi kabhi kisi ne iska chehra dekha hai. Maarne ki koshish bhi ki toh har baar bach nikla. Aur woh Scientist bhi pata nhi apna formula kyo nhi bana rahe hai. Unka pura ghar chann mara naa koi data mila aur naahi kisi formula ke traces mile.
Lagta hai maut ke darr se banana chorr diya hai. Lekin ab main ek final attack karunga jisme woh Black Beast jarur phasega. Ekbaar woh Black Beast khatam hojaye phir innko dikhaunga.
Suraj gusse mein sab bolta jaaraha tha aur udher Base pe baith ke Radha sab sunn rahi thi. Kyoki jab Aryan ko Suraj ke baare mein pata chala tabhi usne ghar ke har kone mein Camera aur microphone chippa diye the. Jisse woh ghar mein harwaqt Aryan uski harqat pe nazar rakh sake.
Radha ne fauran Aryan ko call karke bata diya ke Suraj ne usse Neha ke room se nikalte dekh liya aur issbaar yeh koi final attack karne ka soch raha hai par kya yeh nhi pata.
Aryan bhi sochne lagta hai aakhir ab yeh kya karega. Iske drugs ka pura dhandha barbaad kardiya. Iske weapons smuggling ko bhi barbaad kiya. Infact iske saare dhandhe barbaad kiye hai. Aryan apna dimaag lagane lagta hai par uske dimaag mein kuch nhi aaraha tha. Woh yeh sochte sochte hi so jaata hai.
Agli subah woh uthta hai aur nichhe aata hai toh dekhta hai Suraj Malhotra bade gaur se TV dekh raha hai.
TV mein Independence day ki news aarahi hoti hai. Suraj woh news dekhta hai aur muskura raha hota hai.
Aryan jab yeh dekhta hai toh uski dimaag trigg karta hai.
Aryan man mein sochta hai. Kahi yeh Independence Day pe toh kuch karna nhi chahta. Kyoki ussdin Delhi mein saare Ministers,PM,President har bade se bada officer,lakho common people , media aur naajaane kitne police eksaath honge. Yeh sochte hi woh jaldi se nashta kar waha se nikal jaata hai base pe.
Aryan: Krish jaldi se apne khabri ko call karo aur usse bolo Suraj Malhotra ki ab pal pal ki report humhe de. Shayad uska final attack Independence Day ke upar hosakta hai. Aur use yeh pata lagane ko bolo uske paas aisa kaun sa weapon hai jisse agar woh yeh karna chahe toh kar sakta hai.
Krish: Yes Sir.
Aryan: Radha jaldi se Raw Cheif se contact karke yeh news unhe do aur unhe bolo PM se baat kare aur unse bolo woh Army se contact kare aur humhe join karne ke liye bole. Agar woh humare saath aaye toh bahot badi baat hogi. Kyoki usdin Red Fort pe Army hi sabkuch sambhalegi. Toh usse humhe bahot madad milegi aur hum waha pe apna jaal bichha payenge.
Radha: Okk Sir.
Sab apne apne kaam mein lag jaate hai.
Aryan: Avinash apne kuch aadmi jo bharose mand ho unhe meri family ki security ke liye 24 hrs unke pichhe laga do aur unse bol do agar kuch bhi garbar lage sidha action le. Aur uske jitne bhi aadmi abhi azaad hai sabpe nazar rakho. Ab unko uthana nhi hai sabko thokna hai.
Avinash: Okk Sir.
Aryan: Kiran tum Malhotra Group of Companies mein jao as a PA of Ankit Malhotra aur waha pe har chiz pe nazar rakho. Kuch bhi galat lage toh usko sambhal lena.
Kiran: Thik hai sir.
Krish: Sir aapka andaza sahi tha yeh log bahot din se Independence day ko leke baat kar rahe hai. Aur abhi inke paas bahot jyaada amount mein RDX hai. Jisse yeh pure Delhi ko udaa sakte hai. Par woh aisa karega nhi kyoki yaha pe woh bhi rehta hai. Aur uske aadmi bhi. Isiliye shayad yeh Red Fort aur uske agal bagal ke area ko hi blast karna chahega. Aur shayad famous places mein bhi.
Aryan: My God. Ek kaam karo saare bomb disposal squad ko Delhi ke famous jagah jyaada bhidd wali jagah aur Red Fort ke charo taraf rehne ko bolo. Aur unhe aise rehne ko bolna jisse public mein koi problem naa ho.
Krish: Okk Sir.
Radha: Sir Raw Cheif se baat hogyi hai. Aur unhone Army se bhi baat karli hai. Aur woh humare saath hai. Aapko unka call aayega. Aap unse baat karlijiyega.
Aryan: Okk. Main nikal raha hu. Aur Suraj Malhotra ke har harqat pe nazar rakho koi bhi problem ho toh mujhe bolna aur haa Meera Ritika ke upar bhi dhyaan rakhna hosakta hai koi unko harm kare.
Isbaar iss group ko puri tarah se khatam karenge.
Phir Aryan waha se nikal ke Harish ko call karta hai aur unko bhi alert rehne ko bolta hai aur Sanjay Sanjana ki Safety ka bhi dhyaan rakhne ko bolta hai.
Phir usko Army Cheif ka call aata hai woh unse baat karke sab final karta hai aur best commando ko civil form mein pure Red Fort aur uske aaspaas rehne ko bolta hai.
Phir woh office jaata hai waha thoda bahot kaam dekhta hai aur wapas ghar aata hai. Meera aur Ritika bhi college se wapas aachuki thi.
Meera Ritika Aryan ko tension mein dekhti hai toh usse baat karne ka sochti hai.
Woh apne room mein aake.
Meera: Kya baat hai aaj humara sherr tension mein hai.
Aryan: Haa isbaar khatra bahot jyaada hai. Suraj Malhotra ne isbaar bahot bada plan kiya hai.
Ritika: Kyaa kiya hai usne issbaar.
Aryan usko sab batata hai. Jisse sunn Meera Ritika bhi tension mein aajati hai.
Dono: Toh ab kya karne ka socha hai.
Aryan: Maine taiyaari toh karli hai. Army se bhi baat hogyi hai. Par ek choti si galti bhi sab tabah kardegi. Aur agar pichhe se usne yaha kuch kardiya toh pata nhi kya hoga upar se ab tumhari halat bhi thik nhi hai.
Meera: Aryan humhe apni kamzori nhi taqat samjho. Tum bhool rahe ho humare andar bhi wohi hai jo tumhare andar hai. Infact humare bachhe se andar tumse jyaada hai. Isiliye humari fikr choro aur iss paapi ko khatam karo. Issbaar isse chorna mat.
Aryan: Issbaar yeh iska last plan hoga. Uske baad yeh kabhi kuch nhi kar payega.
Phir Aryan thoda rest karta hai phir nichhe aake dinner karta hai. Neha bhi Aryan ko tension mein dekhti hai par kuch keh nhi paayi.
Raat ko sabke sone ke baad Neha khud Aryan ke room mein jaati hai.
Ritika: Aree didi aap itni raat ko sab thik hai naa.
Neha: Wahi toh main tumse puchne aayi hu Ritika sab thik hai naa.
Ritika: Main samjhi nhi didi.
Neha: Aaj bhai itna tension mein kyu hai.
Ritika: Aree woh woh toh usko thoda sir dard tha aur didi ko leke bhi aajkal thoda tension mein rehta hai isiliye aapko laga hoga.
Neha: Kyaa bhai ko sir dard hai. Ab kaisa hai woh.
Ritika: Ab thik hai dawai leke thodi der pahle hi soya hai.
Neha: Achha thik hai sone do. Kal mil lungi. Tum bhi so jao ab. Good night
Ritika: Good Night didi.
Phir Neha apne room mein aake so jaati hai.
Subah jab Aryan nichhe aata hai toh Meenakshi waha nhi thi aur Suraj toh pahle hi nikal chuka tha.
Rashmi: Beta Neha bata rahi thi kal tera sir dard kar raha tha ab kaisa hai.
Aryan ek nazar Ritika ko dekhta hai phir jawab deta hai.
Aryan: Ab thik hai mummy. Raat ko dawai li thi jisse ab thik hai.
Neha: Par bhai achanak aise sir dard kaise hua.
Aryan: Pata nhi di. Shayad garmi ke wajah se hogya ho.
Phir yeh log nashta karte hai. Aryan Ritika aur Meera college chale jaate hai. Pichhe se Rashmi aur Neha bhi college aajate hai.
Yeh log jab college aate hai tab dekhte hai Rishi kisi ladki ka haath pakad ke baitha hai aur has has ke baate kar raha hai.
Yeh dekh Aryan Ritika aur Meera ke chehre pe hasi aajati hai.
Meera: Yeh kya horaha hai Devarji.
Rishi: Aree bhabhiyon aap. Aap kab aayi.
Meera: Hum jabhi bhi aayi pahle aap yeh bataye ki yeh kya horaha hai.
Rishi: Wohh bhabhi woh. Yeh iska naam Kajal hai. Aur hum ekdusre ko pasand karte hai.
Ritika: Achha toh humari devrani khoj li aur humhe bataya tak nhi. Yeh toh galat baat hai Devarji.
Kajal yehsab sunn ke sharma rahi thi.
Aryan: Kyaa bhai baat itni aage nikal gayi aur tune kuch nhi bataya. Gudiya ko batau teri yeh baat.
Rishi: Aree bhai marwayega kya. Usko pata chala toh mujhe jaan se maar degi. Main aaj hi uske school jaake usko sab bataunga. Warna agar kahi aur se pata chala toh woh shaadi ke pahle hi maar degi.
Aryan: Dekhte hai woh shaadi hone deti hai yaa nhi. Pahle mujhe isse baat karne de.
Tumko yeh gadha kaise pasand aagaya.
Kajal: Woh yeh mere pichhe padha tha kuch waqt se. Phir mujhe bhi dheere dheere pasand aane laga.
Aryan: Ghar mein bata diya.
Kajal: Nhi abhi tak nhi bataya hai.
Meera: Toh jaldi bata do. Yeh toh kuch batayega nhi. Iske liye humhe hi jaana hoga. Tum apne ghar mein bata do. Kahi woh tumhare liye kahi aur naa soch rahe ho.
Kajal: Ji. Thik hai main jaldi hi bata dungi. Waise kya aap teeno married hai jo yeh bhabhi bol raha hai.
Ritika: Haa. Humari shaadi ko 1 saal hone wala hai.
Kajal: Kyaa aap dono ne 1 se hi shaadi karli aur kuch jyaada jaldi nhi hogyi
Aryan: Ab kya kare hogyi galti.
Meera: Kuch kaha kyaa tumne. Maine thik se sunna nhi jara phir se bolna toh.
Aryan: Hadbada ke aree main keh raha tha ke mujhse raha nhi gaya tumdono ke bina isiliye jaldi karli. Aur hum teeno ek dusre se bahot pyaar karte hai. Aur inndono ko ekdusre se koi problem nhi thi isiliye shaadi hogyi.
Rishi aur Kajal hasne lagte hai.
Kajal: Toh uss hisaab se toh aap meri jethaniyan hongi. Toh kya main aapko didi keh sakti hu.
Meera: Ofcourse keh sakti ho. Chalo ab class mein chalte hai. Aur aap jaake gudiya se milwa dena. Warna woh kya karegi mujhe bhi nhi pata.
Rishi: Haa bhabhi college ke baad sidha uske paas hi jaunga.
Phir yeh log class karte hai. College baad Aryan Ritika aur Meera office Rishi aur Kajal Soniya ke paas chale jaate hai.
Dekhte dekhte 15th August nazdeek aaraha thaa. Aur sabka tension badh raha tha.
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