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Update 57
Phir Aryan Ritika aur Meera ghar ke andar aate hai. Aryan waha se sidha apne dadaji ke kamre mein chale jaata hai. Meera aur Ritika bhi uske pichhe pichhe chali jaati hai.
Aryan waha apne dadaji ki photo dekh kar rone lagta hai. Meera aur Ritika usse sambhalti hai.
Phir woh log waha se sidha apne kamre mein jaate hai. Waha jaake apne kapre set karte hai. Aur thoda rest karne lagte hai.
Thodi der baad unke door pe knock hota hai.
Meera door kholti hai toh saamne Neha thi.
Meera: Ji kahiye.
Neha: Woh bhai.
Meera: I am sorry yaha aapka koi bhai nhi rehta.
Neha: Please Meera aisa mat bolo.
Meera: Dekhiye hum aapke ghar mein toh hai but as a paying guest hum free mein nhi rahenge hum pay kardenge. Toh isiliye humari aapse guzarish hai please humse kisi bhi tarah ka rishta naa rakhe. Aap landlord ki tarah rahe. Aur humhe as a renter rehne de.
Neha: Tum aisa kyo bol rahi ho. Yeh tumlogo ka ghar hai. Yeh mere bhai ka ghar hai. Tum meri bhabhi ho.
Aryan: Meera maine tumse kaha thaa yaha pe kisi bhi anjaan se baat naa karna. Aur jo rishta banane aaye unse toh durr hi rehna. Kahi woh log tumhe bhi characterless ka certificate naa de de.
Neha: Bhaiiii. Please aisa mat bol. Mujhe maaf karde. Mere se galti hui hai main maanti hu. But please mujhe maaf karde. Mujhse teri yeh nafrat sehan nhi hoti.
Aryan: Gudiyaaa. Bolke chillata hai.
Thodi der mein Soniya aaj jaati hai.
Soniya: Ji bhaiyaa aapne bulaya.
Aryan: Gudiya mujhe yaha nhi rehnaa. Main apne ghar jaa raha hu. Tumhari baat rakhne ke liye main yaha aagaya. But tumne meri baat nhi rakhi.
Soniya: Nhi bhaiyaa aap please mat jaiyee. Ab se main dhyaan rakhungi.
Aap jaiye yaha se agar aaplogo ki wajah se mere bhaiya aur bhabhi yaha se gaye toh main bhi kahi chali jaungi. Jaiye yaha se.
Neha waha se rote hue jaane lagti hai.
Aryan: Suniye. Aap apne gharwalo se baat karke humara rent bol dijiyegaa. Aur pichli baar ka kuch baaki reh gaya ho toh woh bhi bol dijiyegaa. Humhe kisi ka koi aihsaan nhi chahiye.
Durr se baakilog yeh sab sunn rahe thee. Unki aankho mein bhi aansu the.
Aryan Soniya ko andar le unke muh pe door band kardeta hai.
Aryan: Gudiya maine tumhe bola thaa naa.
Soniya: Sorry bhaiya. But maine unhe achhi tarah se samjhaya thaa. But woh nhi maane. Isme meri koi galti nhi.
Aryan: Choro gudiya yeh aadat se majbur hai. Inko samjha ke kuch nhi hogaa. Inko ignore hi karna hoga. Chalo kahi ghum ke aate hai.
Phir Aryan Ritika aur Meera ready hote hai. Soniya bhi ready hoti hai. Meera Ankit aur Ragini ko bhi saath chalne bolti hai.
Phir yeh log ghumne nikal jaate hai. Yeh ek mall mein jaate hai. Waha thodi shopping karte hai movie dekhte hai aur bahar hi dinner karke wapas ghar aate hai.
Jab yeh log ghar aate hai toh Rashmi bolti hai.
Rashmi: Aao beta khaana khaa lo. Sab tumhari pasand ka hi banaya hai.
Aryan bina kuch bole Meera aur Ritika ka haath pakad ke room mein chala jaata hai. Rashmi ko bahot hurt hota hai. Kisi ka bhi khaane ka man nhi hota hai ab. But Vikram jabardasti sab ko thoda khane ko bolta hai.
Phir sablog apne room mein aajate hai.
Rashmi: Vikram yeh sab kab tak thik hoga. Mujhse ab Aryan ki nafrat nhi sahi jaati. Uske muh se maa sune kitne saal hogye. Jab woh maa keh ke bulata tha toh maine usse kitna maara thaa. Aur ab jab main taras rahi hu toh woh bolta nhi.
Vikram: Thik hojayegaa Rashmi. Humne usko jo chott pahonchayi hai uske ghaav bahot gehre hai. Jo dheere dheere hi bharenge. Humhe koshish karti rehni padegi.
Idher Neha Aryan ki tasveer ko leke rote hue.
Neha: Bhai ab toh tu mere itne paas hai phir bhi main tujhse baat nhi kar paarahi. Aur naa tu meri shakal dekhna chahta hai. Pahle jab tu didi bolta tha toh tujhe kitna maara thaa. Aur ab tere muh se didi sunne ko taras gayi hu. Please humhe maaf karde bhai. Nhi sahi jaati teri yeh nafrat.
Phir sab apne kamre mein so jaate hai.
Agli subah Aryan ready hoke nichhe aata hai. Toh waha Meera Ritika uska wait kar rahi thi. Rashmi aur Neha uska breakfast pe wait kar rahe hote hai. Aryan bina khaana khaaye jaane lagta hai toh Rashmi bolti hai.
Rashmi: Beta bina khaaye ghar ke bahar nhi jaate.
Neha: Haa bhai. Dekh aaj maine apne haatho se tere liye nashta banaya hai. Tujhe toh mere haatho ka nashta pasand hai naa.
Aryan: Go to hell with your breakfast. Yeh bol waha se nikal jaata hai.
Aryan ke muh se yeh sunte hi Neha aur Rashmi ke aankho se aansu aajate hai.
Soniya: Aaplog kyo yeh sab kar rahe hai.
Neha: Yeh kaisa sawaal hai Soniya. Hum usse maafi maangna chahte hai.
Soniya: Kya aaplogo ko dikhai nhi deta woh aaplogo ko maaf nhi karna chahte. Woh aaplogo se sirf aur sirf nafrat karte hai. Kyo apna aur unka time waste kar rahe hai innsab mein.
Neha: Soniya woh humhe maaf karegaa. Jarur karega. Dekhlena.
Soniya: Mujhe toh nhi lagta. Aur meri nazar mein aap jaiso ko toh kabhi maaf karna hi nhi chahiye.
Yeh bol woh bhi school chali jaati hai.
Aryan Ritika aur Meera canteen mein jaake thoda sa nashta karte hai.
Meera: Aryan roj roj toh bahar ka khaaana nhi khaa sakte naa.
Aryan: Meera kuch toh karna padega.
Ritika: Agar tum chaho toh hum roj humare liye khaana bana sakte hai.
Aryan: Uske liye tumhe uss kitchen mein jaana hoga.
Meera: Toh jayenge. Par khaana sirf hum teeno ke liye hi banayenge. Thats it.
Aryan: Thik hai.
Phir yeh log classes khatam karke ghar aate hai toh waha Suraj Malhotra baitha hua tha.
Woh Aryan ko dekh kar uske paas aane lagta hai toh Aryan waha se sidha apne room mein chala jaata hai.
Suraj: Kaisa hai Aryan. Kya humhe maaf nhi karega.
Aryan waha se bina kuch bole jaana lagta hai
Soniya: Papa aapko bhi shayad maa ne bata diya hoga. Bhaiyaa se kisi bhi tarah ka rishta rakhne ki koshish naa kare.
Suraj: Soniya tum shayad bhul rahi ho tum apne papa se baat kar rahi ho. Isiliye tameez mein raho. Warna mujhe tameez sikhana aata hai. Tum shayad bhul gayi ho inn kuch saalo mein jab jab tumne badtameezi ki thi toh kya kiya tha maine.
Aryan jab yeh sunta hai toh uske aankh se angare barasne lagte hai.
Aryan: Gudiya yaha aana.
Soniya uske paas jaati hai toh uske aankho aansu the. Aryan uski aankhe poch kar uska haath pakad kar sirf ek baat puchta hai.
Aryan: Inn kuch saalo mein kya hua tha tere saath ek ek baat bata abhi. Bhaiya aapko sab pata thaa naa. Par aapne nhi bola.
Ankit: Soniya ne hi apni kasam di thi ke agar kabhi tu mile toh tujhe yeh baat naa batau.
Aryan: Soniya batao.
Soniya jab Aryan ke muh se apna naam sunti hai toh woh samaj jaati hai ke woh naraz hochuka hai. Isiliye woh darr ke maare sab bolne lagti hai.
Soniya: Jab bhi main aapko leke jidd karti toh papa mujhe maarte the. Kabhi haath se toh kabhi dande se.
Aryan gusse se sabki taraf nazre ghumata hai toh sabki nazre jhuk jaati hai. Aur jisne jisne college wala kaand dekha tha woh darr rahe the.
Aryan: Woh danda leke aana abhi ke abhi.
Ankit: Tu kya karega uss dande ka.
Aryan: Jo maine bola woh karo.
Aryan yeh bahot hi zyaada gusse mein chillake bolta hai. Jisse Soniya jaldi se woh danda le aati hai.
Aryan: Isi dande se meri gudiya ko maara tha naa.
Suraj: Haa maara tha kya kar lega. Woh bado se baat karne ki tameez bhul gayi thi. Usko tameez sikhana jaruri tha.
Aryan: Aur jab tujh jaise maa baap tameez bhul jaaye toh hum jaise log tameez sikhane aate hai.
Yeh bol Aryan ne woh danda se usko maarne lagta hai. Jisse Suraj chillata hua bolne lagta hai.
Suraj: Yeh kya kar raha hai main tera chacha hu. Tu apne chacha ko maar raha hai.
Aryan yeh sunn aur gusse mein aajta hai aur usko andhadhun maarne lagta hai.
Meenakshi: Unhe chorr do beta. Main maafi maangti hu unki taraf se.
Aryan: Bhaiya jab iss neech ne meri gudiya ko maara tha tab kitne log uski bachav mein aaye the.
Ankit kuch nhi bolta. Jisse Aryan samaj jaata hai aur usse maarna jaari rakhta hai.
Aryan: Tujhe bahot shauk hai naa bachhon ko dande se maarne ka. Thoda chillake puchta hai gudiyaa kis haath se maarta tha yeh neech tujhe.
Soniya: Bhaiyaa unhe chorr do.
Aryan: Maine kuch pucha hai tumse Soniya.
Soniya: Darr se Right hand se.
Aryan: Aaj ke baad tera yeh right hand kisi kaam ka nhi rahega. Yeh bol Aryan dande ko phek Suraj ka haath pakadta hai.
Suraj: Darr se. Nhi Aryan mujhe maaf karde. Mujhse galti hogyi. Main aage se kabhi bhi Soniya pe haath nhi uthaunga. Mujhe maaf.....
Abhi Woh itna hi bolta hai ke uski chikhh pure ghar mein gunjne lagti hai. Aryan ne uska woh haath todd diya thaa.
Aryan: Aaj ke baad Soniya ke taraf kisi ne aankh utha kar bhi dekha toh uska haath nhi todunga sidha jaan le lunga. Chahe woh jo bhi ho. Chota ho bada ho koi bhi ho. Yeh baat apne jism ke kone kone mein basa lo.
Soniya aur kisne kisne maara tha yaa torcher kiya tha.
Soniya: Aur kisi ne kuch nhi kiya.
Aryan: Maine tumse sach bolne ko bola hai. Kyoki yaha pe insaan nhi rehte hai neech kisam ke jaanwar rehte hai. Sach sach bolo Soniya.
Soniya: Kabhi kabhi Neha didi maarti thi jab jab main unse badtameezi se baat karti thi.
Neha jab yeh sunti hai toh uska aisa haal hogya kaato toh khoon nhi.
Aryan uske paas jaake usko 2 thappad maarta hai jisse woh behosh hojaati hai.
Vikram: Yeh kya tarika hai apni behen ko maarne kaa. Kya yehi sikhaya hai tujhe.
Aryan: Mr. Vikram Malhotra apni hadd mein raho. Warna main aapki umar ka lihaaz bhul jaunga. Aur aaplogo ne sirf nafrat karna sikhaya hai. Jab iss ghatiya ladki ne meri gudiya ko maara tha tab kaha the aap aur aapke yeh ghatiya sanskaar. Tab kaha the aapki hi maan maryada woh naam izaat jab aapki iss beti ne mujhpe woh ghatiya ilzaam lagaya tha apna gussa aur frustration nikalne ke liye. Agar aaj ke baad kisine bhi Soniya ki taraf aankh utha kar dekha toh wahi usse jinda garr dunga.
Waha khade sablog Aryan ka yeh roop dekh ke darne lagte hai sivaay Meera Ritika ko chorke.
Aryan: Soniya abhi ke abhi mere kamre mein aao.
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Nice update bro
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Update achchha tha par Aryan ko bhi apni had nahin paar karni thi aur na uske chacha ko.....
Wese kulpandit ne jo uske chacha ke vishay mein uske dada se kaha tha woh is ghar mein aur kisi ko pata hai ki nahin?
Suraj roopi andhakaar khaamosh toh nahin baithega dekhte hain ab woh kya karega aur kaise yeh nafrat khatm hogi
Wese kulpandit ne jo uske chacha ke vishay mein uske dada se kaha tha woh is ghar mein aur kisi ko pata hai ki nahin?
Suraj roopi andhakaar khaamosh toh nahin baithega dekhte hain ab woh kya karega aur kaise yeh nafrat khatm hogi