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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

Story achhi hai aur aage likhna chahiye

  • Haa

    Votes: 93 96.9%
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    Votes: 3 3.1%

  • Total voters
    96
  • Poll closed .

Akil

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Aur yeh Neha toh pahunchi hui cheez nikli apne hi bhai ko aise ghar se nikalvaaya ki aaj woh apne ghar ke naam se bhi nafrat karta hai
Khair dekhte hain aage kya hona hai
 

Jaguaar

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Agle din woh uth te hai ready hoke breakfast karke college ke liye nikal jaate hai.
College pahonch woh sidha canteen jaate hai. Waha pe Rishi pahle se hi baitha tha.
Tabhi waha pe woh kal wali ladki aati hai.
Ladki: Hii. Kya main yaha pe baith sakti hu.
Meera: Haa baitho naa.
Ladki: Actually main woh kalke liye sorry bolne aayi thi.
Aryan: Koi baat nhi tumhe apni galti ka aihsaas hogya wohi bahot hai. Waise tumhara naam kya hai.
Ladki: Ji mera naam Maya hai.
Ritika: Tum toh humare naam jaanti hi ho aur yeh hai Rishi humara devar.
Maya: Hii Rishi.
Rishi: Hii Maya.
Maya: Waise aaplogo ki shaadi jaldi nhi hogyi.
Aryan: Haa humhe ek emergency ki wajah se jaldi karni padhi
Kya woh Emergency hum jaan sakte hai Devarji.
Sablog iss awaaz ka pichha karte hai toh saamne Ankit aur Ragini khade the.
Maya waha se byee bolke chali gayi.
Ragini: Haa toh kya hum woh emergency jaan sakte hai.
Aryan khade hoke Ankit ke gale milta hai Meera aur Ritika bhi Ragini ke gale lagti hai.
Rishi yeh sab shock mein dekh raha thaa.
Ankit: Kaisa hai bhai tu toh bilkul badal gaya hai.
Aryan: Bas halat ne badal diya bhaiyaa aap kaise hai.
Ankit: Bas tere saamne hu.
Aryan: Namaste Bhabhi. Kaisi hai aap.
Ragini: Main thik hu devarji. Aap bataiye.
Aryan: Bas chal rahi hai aapki devraniyon ke raaj mein.
Ragini: Kaisi ho Meera Ritika
Dono: Main thik hu bhabhi. Namaste Bhaiyaa.
Ankit: Kaisi ho Meera Ritika
Dono: Thik Bhaiya.
Ragini: Haa toh devarji. Jara aap emergency batayenge. Maanti hu meri devraniyan laakho mein ek hai.
Aryan: Bhabhi baat hi kuch aisi hogyi thi. Phir Aryan unko sab batata hai kis halat mein unki shaadi hui.
Ankit: Tumne thik kiya bhai.
Rishi jo abhi yeh sab shock mein dekh raha tha. Toh usko Aryan bolta hai. Jada hairan mat ho sab batata hu.
Phir Aryan usko Ankit ki saari kahani batata hai.
Rishi: Ooo. Par Soniya ka dhyaan toh main bhi rakhta tha.
Aryan: Haa main jaanta hu. Par ghar ke andar bhi toh kisi ka hona jaruri hai naa.
Tabhi waha Rashmi aur Neha aajaate hai.
Ankit: Achha bhai main chalta hu tumhari class ka time horaha hoga. Chalo Ragini.
Aryan: Chalo Meera Ritika humlog kahi bahar chalte hai mujhe 1st class mein koi interest nhi hai.
Meera: Jaisi tumhari marzi.
Aryan: Rishi tu chalega yaa class karega.
Rishi: Ab tum pati patni ke bich main kya karunga. Main class mein jaata hu.
Aryan: Thik hai.
Phir woh log nhi waha se chale jaate hai. Aryan aur Ankit ne aisa behave kiya jaise Rashmi aur Neha waha ho hi nhi.
Aryan aur Ankit ki berukhi dekh Rashmi aur Neha ki aankho mein aansu aajate hai. But woh kuch kar bhi nhi sakte thee.
Aryan Ritika aur Meera aise hi ghumne lagte hai. Thodi der mein 1st period khatam hojaata hai. Tab yeh teeno class mein enter karte hai. Aur jaake Rishi ke bagal mein baith jaate hai.
Recess hota hai tab bhi Rashmi aur Neha Aryan ke paas aate hai but Aryan inko completely ignore karta hai.
College khatam hota hai. Aryan Ritika aur Meera ghar aate hai. Lunch karke woh rest karne lagte hai.
Sham ko Soniya ka call aata hai.
Soniya: Bhaiyaa agar main aapse kuch maangu toh aap denge.
Aryan: Aisa kabhi hosakta hai meri gudiya kuch maange aur woh main naa du.
Soniya: Toh phir meri kasam khaiye. Main jo bhi maangugi aap mujhe denge aur mujhse naraz bhi nhi honge.
Aryan: Gudiya tum aisa kya maange wali ho.
Soniya: Pahle aap kasam khaaye.
Aryan: Thik hai main tumhari kasam khaata hu. Tum jo bhi mangogi woh tumhe dunga aur tumse naraz bhi nhi hounga.
Soniya: Mujhe ab humesha aapke saath rehna hai. Isiliye main chahti hu aap aur bhabhiyan yaha aajaye aur mere saath rahe. Aapko kisi se koi baat nhi karni. Bas mujhse bhabhi aur bhaiyaa se hi baat kariyega. But please yaha aajaaye. Main ab aapse durr nhi rehsakti.
Aryan: Gudiya yeh tumne thik nhi kiya. Tum unlogo ki baato mein aake mujhe apni kasam dilwake yeh chiz maangi. Kyoki woh yeh jaante hai main tumhari kasam nhi todungaa isiliye unhone tumhara istemaal kiya. Aur tumne bhi unki baat maanli. Yeh tumne achha nhi kiya.
Soniya: I am sorry bhaiyaa. But mujhe aapke saath rehna hai. Isiliye maine unki baate maanli. But please aap mujhse naraz mat honaa.
Aryan: Nhi gudiya main tumse naraz nhi hu. Aur naahi main tumhari kasam todunga. Main dekhta hu. Tum rakho.
Phir call cut hojaata hai.
Aryan Meera aur Ritika ke paas jaakar unhe apne kapre dheere dheere wapas pack karne ko bolta hai.
Ritika: Kya hua hum kahi ghumne jaa rahe hai jo packing karne ko bol rahe ho.
Aryan: Nhi ghumne nhi. Hum uss ghar mein jayenge rehne ke liye.
Meera: Kyaa. Achanak kya hua.
Phir Aryan unhe puri baat batata hai.
Meera: Toh kab chalna hai.
Aryan: Abhi nhi abhi time hai. Chalo aaj bahar dinner karte hai.
Phir woh log bahar dinner karke aake so jaate hai.
Agle din Aryan Meera aur Ritika college jaate hai. Waha bhi roj ki tarah hi din guzarta hai.
Sham ko Aryan apni team ko call karke apne next target ko trap karne ke liye plan kaha tak pahoncha woh puchta hai.
Avinash: Sir humara next target hai yaha ka local MLA. Uss jaisa darinda shayad hi koi hoga. Pata nhi aaj tak kitne murder kiye hai. Kitni ladkiyon ki zindagi barbaad ki hai. Aur uska main business drugs uski wajah se bhi usne bahot se youth ko barbaad kiya hai.
Aryan: Toh sabse pahle uske drugs ko hi khatam karte hai. Aur jara pata lagao humare targets mein aise kaun kaun hai jo drugs ka business karte hai. Unnsab ke drugs ko ek hi saath mein khatam karenge. Phir ek ek karke sabko uthayenge.
Avinash: Thik hai sir. Main pata karke bolta hu. Phir call cut hojaata hai.
Phir Aryan Meera aur Ritika Rishi ke ghar ghumne gaye. Waha unhone thoda time spend kiya aur dinner karke wapas aagaye.
Raat ko sote waqat unko Soniya ka call aata hai.
Soniya: Bhaiya Bhabhi aapne kya socha aap kab aarahe ho.
Ritika: Tumne toh bahot achhi chaal chali hai gudiya. Ghar mein bol do hum kal tumhare saath hi ghar aayenge. Par unko warn kardena Aryan se ya humse koi bhi rishta naa rakhe. Agar unhone kuch bhi kiya toh hum waha se sang sang wapas aajayenge.
Soniya: Ji bhabhi main boldungi. Aur aaj hi main aaplogo ka kamra saaf karwati hu.
Aryan: Thik hai kal tumhare school mein milte hai. Raj ko bhi apne saath rakhna.
Soniya: Ji bhaiyaa.
Phir call cut hojaata hai. Aur yeh log so jaate hai.
Subah uth ke Aryan Sameera ji call karke apni family ke baare mein batata hai aur unhe bolta hai woh ab iss ghar mein nhi rahega. Iss ghar mein caretaker appoint karde.
Aaj yeh log college nhi jaane wale the. Kyoki inko apni packing puri karni thi.
Dopahar tak yeh log apni packing puri karke Rishi ko call karke apne paas bulate hai.
Aryan: Tujhe toh pata hi hai. Mujhe Soniya ne kaise phasaya hai.
Rishi: Haa mujhe pata hai.
Aryan: Isiliye humlog aaj hi jaa rahe hai. Tu meri bike leke aajaa. Main aur Ritika ek car leke jaate hai aur Meera dusri car mein aajayegi.
Rishi: Thik hai main nikalta hu tu aajana.
Phir Rishi bike leke chala jaata hai.
Aryan Ritika aur Meera apni car leke Soniya ke paas jaate hai. Soniya sirf Aryan ko dekh kar.
Soniya: Bhaiyaa aapko aur bhabhi teeno ko jaana hai.
Aryan: Pata hai. Teri Ritika bhabhi ek car mein hai aur Meera bhabhi dusri car mein hai. Woh rahi dekh.
Soniya: Thik hai aap Raj ke saath chaliye main Meera bhabhi ko leke aati hu.
Yeh bol woh Meera ke paas chali jaati hai.
Aryan: Kaisa hai Raj.
Raj: Thik hu bhaiyaa aap kaise hai aur kaha the itne saal.
Aryan: Main bhi thik hu aur main Mumbai mein tha. Aur school kaisa jaaraha hai.
Raj: Thik jaa raha hai bhaiyaa. Kya main bhabhiyon se nhi milungaa.
Aryan: Kyo nhi milegaa jarur milega. Ghar mein mil lena.
Raj: Thik hai bhaiyaa.
Phir yeh ghar aajate hai.
Ghar ke bahar hi Rishi aur Ankit khade the. Aryan jaake Ankit ke gale lagta hai.
Ankit: Aakhir Soniya ne tujhe bula hi liyaa.
Aryan: Gudiya ne nhi unlogo ne gudiya ke sahare bulaya hai.
Ankit: Ab kaise control karega.
Aryan: Pata nhi. Par agar jyaada kiya toh main gudiya ko leke yaha se chala jaunga. Gudiya ka kehna tha usse mere saath rehna hai. Toh main usse apne saath hi rakhunga.
Ankit: Chal dekhte hai kya hota hai.
Phir Aryan Ritika aur Meera ghar ke andar jaane lagte hai toh Rashmi waha aarti ki thaali liye khadi thi.
Aryan: Gudiya maine tumse kaha tha naa mujhe kisi bhi tarah ka dikhawa nhi chahiye aur naahi mujhe inlogo ki shakal dekhni hai. Inlogo se bol do mere saamne naa aaye.
Soniya: Sorry bhaiyaa. Badi maa aap please hatt jaiye. Ragini bhabhi aap karlijiye yeh sab.
Rashmi yeh sunn ke rone lagti hai.
Phir Ragini Aryan Ritika aur Meera ki aarti utarke unka grahpravesh karwati hai kyoki shaadi ke baad pahli baar woh apne ghar aaye the.
Ragini: Aao Devar ji Devrani ji.
 

Jaguaar

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Small but nice one
Aur yeh Neha toh pahunchi hui cheez nikli apne hi bhai ko aise ghar se nikalvaaya ki aaj woh apne ghar ke naam se bhi nafrat karta hai
Khair dekhte hain aage kya hona hai
Thank You.

Neha ne chaal chali thi ghar se nikalwane ki jo dadaji ke kaaran success nhi hua. Usne ghar se nhi nikala tha. Aryan khud nikal gaya tha
 
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