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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

Story achhi hai aur aage likhna chahiye

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Ajay

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Update 35
Aur wahi udher innsab ka boss
Boss: Iss Black Beast ki toh. Saale mein pahle mere bhai Undertaker ko maara phir Mumbai mein mere drugs ka pura business hi khatam kardiya. Main isse chorungaa nhi. Pata nhi saala kaun hai kaha rehta hai kaisa dikhta hai. Jis din milgaya uss din uski jaan uske halak se nikalunga.
Yeh Boss usi Undertaker ka Bhai jiska naam Mike hai.
Tabhi Mike ke phone mein ek call aata hai jisko dekh kar uske paseene nikalne lagte hai. Kyoki phone Mike ke boss ka thaa.
Mike: Hello.
Boss: Soch raha hu tujhe kaisi maut du. Tune aur tere iss chamche ne mere mumbai mein drugs ka dhanda khatam karwa diya. Kaun hai yeh Black Beast.
Mike: Boss koi nhi jaanta kaun hai yeh Black Beast. Aur please mujhe ek mauka aur de issbaar aapko nirash nhi karunga.
Boss: Thikk hai. Ek kaam kar mumbai ke teen jagah mein aaj bomb plant kar aur usko parso blast kar. Iss India ko batana hoga yeh group abhi bhi zinda hai.
Mike: Hojayega boss.
Boss: Agar issbaar galti hui toh tere jism meim teri jaan nhi bachegi. Yeh blast uss Black Beast ki galtiyon ki saza hai.
Mike: Ji boss hojayegaa.
Mike: Tumlog mumbai ke 3 bhid wali jagah mein jaake kal bomb plant karo. Kisi ko bhi shak nhi hona chahiye. Warna tumhari laashe bhi kisi ko nhi milegi.
Aadmi: Thik hai boss hojayegaa. Phir woh waha se apne aadmi leke chala jaata hai.
Mike: Black Beast tune mere bhai ko maara mera dhandha khatam kiya mere aadmi Ashok ko maara. Tere liye ek gift bhej raha hu parso le lena.
Idher Aryan Meera aur Ritika se conference mein baat kar raha tha tha. Tabhi usko ek call aata hai.
Aryan: Achha ek call aaraha hai jara hold karna.
Meera: Iss waqat humare sivaa kaun call.kar raha hai.
Aryan: Tumlogo ki sautan ka call hai.
Ritika: Kyaaa kaha sautan didi yeh teesri laa raha hai kyaa.
Meera: Nahi iske office se call hai. Usko maine apni sabse badi dushman banaya hai aur sautan bhi jab dekho isko call aajata hai.
Ritika: Achhaaa.
Aryan: Ab main baat karlu.
Dono: Ha ha karlo.
Phir Aryan call receive karta hai.
Aryan: Haa bol kyo bulaya.
Khabri: Bhai khabar mili hai aaj raat iss dock se ladkiyon ko ship mein karke videsho mein bhejaa jaa raha hai. Aur sabh log dock no. 11 mein hai.
Aryan: Khabar pakki hai.
Khabri: 100 takka bhai.
Aryan: Thik hai tu waha pe pahonch mein aata hu.
Phir call cut kar deta hai.
Aryan: Achha mujhe jaana hogaa.
Ritika: Aapne thik hi kaha hai didi yeh job humari sautan hi hai call aaya aur ab bula bhi liya.
Aryan: Agar hogya toh main jau.
Dono: Ha ha jao. Aur sambhal ke rehna.
Phir Aryan ready hoke waha se nikal jaata hai. Aur waha pe pahonchta hai.
Aryan: Haa bol kaha hai.
Khabri: Bhai sab log dock no 11 mein hai.
Aryan: Thik hai tu nikal. Yaha se main dekh lungaa. Aur sunn jab mein tujhe missed call du tab tu media aur police ko call karke yaha ke baare mein bata denaa.
Khabri: Thik hai bhai.
Phir Aryan waha se dock no. 11 ke paas jaake apne chashme se scan karta hai. Toh waha pe 40 ladkiyan thi. Aur karib 15 gunde the haatho guns liye.
Aryan badi savdhani se andar jaata hai aur dheere dheere 1 gunde ki taraf jaake uske gardan ko maror deta hai aur usse dhayan se ek side mein sula deta hai. Phir dusre ki taraf jaata hai usse bhi aise hi marta hai.
Phir apni gun mein silencer fit karta hai aur jo log upar thee unko head shot karke wahi pe dherr kar deta hai. Ab waha pe sirf 3 gunde hi bachhe the jinme se ek shayad inka leader tha.
Aryan dheere pahle aadmi ke paas jaakar uske muh ko pakad ke waha se dure le jaata hai. Aur usko maar deta hai. Phir dusre aadmi ke paas jaake bhi aise hi karta hai. Phir apne khabri ko missed call mar deta hai.
Phir Aryan uss leader ke paas jaake khada hojaata hai. Leader ko dekh kar ghabra jaata hai.
Leader: Abee tu kaun hai aur yaha kaise aaya. Aur mere aadmi kaha hai.
Aryan: Black Beast. Aryan sirf itna hi bolta hai. Ke uss aadmi ke pairon tale zameen hi khisak gayi. Woh Aryan ke pairon pe girr ke maafi maagne lagta hai.
Leader: Bhai mujhe maaf kardo. Mujhse bahot badi galti hogyi.
Aryan: Ladkiyan kaha hai.
Leader: Bhai woh uss container mein hai.
Aryan: Jaa jaake unko leke aa.
Leader jaldi jaata hai aur unn ladkiyon ko leke aajata hai.
Aryan: Ab aap sab safe hai darne ki jarurat nhi hai. Abhi police aati hi hongi. Woh aapsab ko aapke ghar pahoncha degi.
Phir Aryan leader se. Chal bata yeh sab ka asli mastermind kaun hai.
Leader: Bhai main nhi jaanta.
Aryan ek thappad lagata hai.
Leader: Bhai uska naam Mike hai. Woh India ke sabse bade terrorist group ka aadmi bhi hai. Aapne kuch saal pahle uske bhai Undertaker ko maara tha.
Aryan: Chal ab bata yeh Mike kaha milegaa.
Leader: Bhai woh Mumbai mein hi hai but kaha pe rehta hai yeh koi nhi jaanta humesha sabse phone mein hi baat karta hai.
Aryan: Bahot jald pata chalega jab usse pata chalega uska nuksaan hua hai. Phir Aryan usko behosh kardeta hai.
Abhi kuch der main police aur media yaha aajayegi. Main isko behosh kardiya hai. Agar police ya media kuch puchhe toh batana aap sab uss container mein band thi aapne kuch nhi dekhaa.
Ladkiyan: Thik hai. Kya hum aapka naam jaan sakte hai.
Aryan: Black Beast. Yeh bol Aryan waha se chala jaata hai.
Nice update bhai
 

Jaguaar

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Update 36
Kuch der baad waha pe Police aur Media aajate hai. Woh waha investigate karte hai. Media ne ladkiyon se pucha aap logi kisne bachaya. Saari ladkiyan bolti hai Black Beast.
Media aur Police ekbaar phirse yeh naam sunke sakte mein aajate hai. Kyoki aajtak usse kisi ne bina mask ke nhi dekha thaa. Woh aata apradhiyon ko marta aur unhe bula kar nikal jaata. Media walo ne sabkuch cover kiya. Police ne bhi puri investigation ki aur leader ko hosh mein laake usse puchtach ki aur usse unhe Mike baare mein bhi pata chala. Phir usse arrest kiya.
Police ne unn ladkiyon ko unke ghar pahonchane ka bandobast kardiya thaa.
Aryan bhi apne ghar aagaya thaa. Jab woh aaya tab raat ke 2 baj rahe the. Woh fresh hota hai so jaata hai.
Agli subah yeh news har jagah fail gayi.
Mike: Black Beast tune mera ek aur nuksaan kardiya. Kal tujhse apne har nuksaan ka hisaab lunga. Jab yeh sehar khoon ki holi mein duba rahega aur tu kuch nhi kar payega.
Mike: Apne aadmi se. Kaam hua.
Aadmi: Haa boss aaj raat tak hojayega.
Mike: Koi garbar nhi hone chahiye.
Aadmi: Ji boss.
Idher Aryan college aata hai toh Meera aur Ritika uske gale lag jaati hai.
Meera: Tumne toh kamaal kardiya.
Ritika: Haa Aryan tumne kamaal kardiya humhe aaj apne pyaar pe bahot proud feel horaha hai.
Aryan: Aree apne excitement pe control karo warna sabko pata chal jayega.
Dono: Sorry Sorry.
Sonal: Kyaa baat hai aaj kuch jyaada hi pyaar aaraha hai.
Ritika: Ab yeh hai hi aisa ki isko harwaqat pyaar karne ka man hota hai.
Sonal: Oh ho kyaa baat hai.
Preeti: Aryan tumhari kismat bahot achhi hai. 2 girlfriend mili dono hi hadd se jyaada pyaar karne wali. Dono ke bich koi problem nhi aur upar se dono sagi behene.
Aryan: Yeh toh bilkul sahi kaha iss mamle mein meri kismat bahot achhi hai.
Phir thodi der aise hi baat karke sab classes karne chale jaate hai. Phir chutti ke baad apne apne ghar.
Kuch der time Aryan ko Harish ka call aata hai.
Harish Uncle: Tumne kal raat jo kiya usse har koi bahot khush hai. Keep it up.
Aryan: Thank You Sir. Yeh meri duty hai.
Harish Uncle: Toh ab iss Mike ka kya socha hai.
Aryan: Sir agar humne isko bina kisi planning ke haath lagaya toh woh group active hojayegaa. Humhe full plan ke jariye yeh karna hoga. Aur iske liye mujhe ek team ki jarurat hogi jo sirf mere aur aapke orders follow karenge.
Harish Uncle: Achha aur tumhe tumhari team mein kaun kaun chahiye.
Aryan: Sir hacker jo kisi bhi chiz ko jaldi se jaldi hack kar sake. Ek weapon expert. Ek fighting expert. Ek planning expert. Aur ek source expert jiske paas sources ki kami naa ho.
Harish Uncle: Thik hai kal tak tumhe tumhari team mil jayegi.
Udher ek ladki gumsum si ek kamre mein baithi thi ek tasveer ko hath mein liye.
Ladki: Bhaiyaa aap toh bolte the naa kabhi mujhe chorr ke nhi jaogee. Aur aap chale gaye apni gudiyaa ko akela chorr ke. Maine aapke jaane ke baad aapke kamre mein kisi ko bhi nhi aane diyaa aur naahi main yaha kisi se baat karti hu. Main sirf Raj se hi baat karti hu.
Ji haa yeh ladki koi aur nhi Aryan ki gudiyaa yaani Soniya hai.
Tabhi door pe knock hota hai.
Soniya: Kaun hai aur kya chahiye. Mujhe kisi se koi baat nhi karni.
Tabhi uss side se awaaz aati hai. Gudiya main tere kiye khaana laayi hu.
Soniya gusse mein jaake gate kholti hai aur jo khaana liye khadi thi uske haath se plate leke fekk deti hai.
Soniya: Aapki himmat kaise hui mujhe gudiya bolke bulane ki. Yeh naam mujhe mere Aryan bhai ne diya thaa. Aur aaplog mujhe iss naam se bulane ka hakk bahot pahle khoo chuke hai. Aur mujhe aaplogo se koi baat nhi karni. Chale jaiye yaha se warna main bhi Aryan bhai ke tarah kahi chali jaungi. Aur yeh dukhi hone ka jhootha dikhawa kisi aur ke saamne karna mere saamne nhi.
Saamne jo ladki khadi thi uski aankho mein aansu aajate hai.
Ladki: Main maanti hu humlogo se galti hui hai.
Soniya: Galti nhi gunaah kiya hai aaplogo ne aur mere paas iss gunaah ki koi maafi nhi hai. Jab tak Aryan bhai nhi aate mujhe aaplogo se koi baat nhi karni. Chale jaiye yaha se.
Woh ladki rote hue chali jaati hai.
Aurat: Mat ro beta. Tujhe pata hai woh Aryan ke sabse jyaada kareeb thi. Main uski maa hokar bhi uspe vishwaas nhi kiya par usne usne humesha uska saath diya.
Ladki: Maa mujhse gudiya ki yeh berukhi sehan nhi hoti.
Rashmi: Neha. Humne jo paap hai shayad yehi uski saza hai. Humhe apne bachho se berukhi hi sehai hai.
Pata nhi tera bhai kaha se tere papa bhi uska pata nhi laga paarahe hai. Kitne saal hogye hai. Usse dekhe hue.
Neha: Sab humari galti hai. Naa hum usse galat samajte aur naa woh aaj humhe chorr ke jaata. Aur shayad sabse jyaada galti meri bhi hai. Maine bhi gusse mein uspe ek ilzaam laga diya jo shayad usne sapne bhi nhi kiya hoga kisi ke saath.
Rashmi: Mat ro beta. Sab thik hojayega. Tere dusre bhai ko toh koi parwa hi nhi hai. Woh toh apni zindagi aise ji raha hai jaise kuch hua hi nhi.
Neha: Mujhe toh usse apna bhaiya kehne mein bhi sharm aati hai. Bachpan se lekar aajtak pata nhi kischiz ka gussa hai bhai par. Harbaar usse beizaat karte. Aur ussdin ke baad se toh jaise unki lottery hi nikal gayi. Aur jab bhai ne ghar choraa toh unhone toh party hi karli. Aaj itne saalhogaye bhai ka kuch pata nhi hai par unhe koi tension hi nhi hai. Apne hi kaam mein mast hai. Unke jagah bhabhi ko bhai ki tension hoti hai jabki woh toh unhe jaanti tak nhi.
Rashmi: Shayad pichle janam mein humne hi koi paap kiya thaa jiski saza humhe iss janam mein mil rahi hai.
Yaha pe Soniya ke kiye ek maid rakhi hui thi jo sirf uska hi kaam karti thi. Kyoki naa toh soniya nichhe aati aur naahi kisi se baat karti. Bas saara din woh Aryan ke kamre mein hi rehti. Usne toh Aryan ke kamre ko hi apna kamra bana liya thaa. Woh uss kamra mein kisi ko bhi nhi aane deti.
Vikram bhi apni puri source laga raha tha bit woh Aryan ko nhi khoj paaraha thaa. Kyoki Aryan formula ke baad change jo hogya thaa. Yaha tak ke uske chehre mein bhi thode changes aaye thee. Isiliye koi usse nhi dundh paaraha tha.
Idher Aryan Harish se baat karke kuch plan karne lagta hai kya karega kaise karega sabkuch. Tabhi uske dil mein ek dard sa utha aur usse aisa laga jaise uski gudiyaa usko yaad kar rahi hai.
Aryan: Kitne saal hogye gudiyaa ko dekhe hue. Ab tak toh woh bahot badi hogyi hogi. Pata nhi kaise rehti hogi mere bina. Par mere se durr rehne mein hi bhalayi hai warna wohlog uske upar bhi ghatiya ilzaam laga denge.
Phir Aryan apna dhyaan waha se hata wapas planning mein dhyaan deta hai.
Phir raat ko dinner kar unndono se baat kar woh so jaata iss baat se bekhabar kal uske liye kitna bada dhamaka hone wala hai.
Idher Mike apne aadmi se baat karta hai.
Mike: Kaam hogyaa.
Aadmi: Ji boss hogyaa.
Mike: Bahot achhe. Kal mumbai mein khoon ki holi kheli jaayegi Black Beast bacha sakta hai toh bacha le.
Subah Aryan college aata hai Meera Ritika aur baaki sab waha pe pahle se hi the.
Aryan: Good Morning.
Dono uske gale lag ke good morning wish karti hai.
Phir baaki sab bhi karte hai.
Yash: Aaja bhai baith jaa aaj 1st class off hai Sir nhi aaye hai.
Aryan: Oo. Aur batao kya chal raha hai.
Yash: Kya chalega. Bas college, pyaar aur dosti abhi toh yahi hai.
Tabhi Aryan ko kisi ka call hota hai jisse sunke uski halat kharab hojaati hai.
Meera: Kya hua Aryan kiska call hai.
Aryan: Mumbai mein 3 bomb blast hue hai jaldi se news dekho.
Sablog waha se canteen ke food corner mein jaate hai jaha TV tha waha pe pahle se hi sab news dekh rahe the.
News Reporter: Aaj mumbai ke 3 bhid wali jagah pe bomb blast hua hai jisme hazaro ki tadas mein log mare hai exactly kitne mare hai iska pata nhi chala hai. Kya yeh koi terrorist attack tha aur agar yeh terrorist attack tha toh kya yeh India ke sabse bade terrorist organization ka kaam hai yaaa kisi aur kaa. Kya wapas aisa koi blast hoga. Kya wapas mumbai mein 26/11 jaisa kuch hoga.
Ritika: Aryan kya tumhe iski koi khabar nhi thi.
Aryan: Agar mujhe pata hota toh yeh kabhi hota hi nhi.
Meera: Kya aur bhi attack honge.
Aryan: Abhi shayad aur nhi honge aur shayad yeh attack mere liye hi hua hai kyoki maine unke dhandhe jo barbaad kardiye.
Ritika: Yeh tum kaise keh sakte ho aur attack nhi hoga.
Aryan: Kyoki city puri high alert hogyi hai har jagah police aur special task force fail gayi hai isiliye abhi aisa kuch nhi hoga. Aur tum log ab jab tak main naa bolu ghar ke bahar mat nikalna.
Chalo sablog ghar chalo bahar jyaada rukhna khatre se khaali nhi hai.
Sab: Ha ha ghar chalo. Phir sablog ghar ki taraf nikal jaate hai kyoki unke ghar se bhi calls aachuke the.
Ritika apne car se ghar chali jaati hai aur Aryan Meera ko uske ghar chor deta hai. Usne ghar call karke boldiya tha woh kaam pe jaaraha hai.
Aryan ne Harish ko call karke usi ghar pe bulaya tha jaha woh milte hai aur saath mein apni team ko bhi wahi bulane ko kaha tha.
 
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