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Update 31
Hotel wapis aake sab apne kamre mein aajate hai phir sham ko ghumne nikalte.
Ritika aaj bahot khush thi. Woh toh apne kamre mein aake naachne lagti hai.
Ritika: Yes yes yes aaj mujhe mera pyaar mil gaya. Mujhe toh yakeen hi nhi horaha hai ke mujhe mera Aryan mil gaya. Aur Meera ko bhi koi problem nhi hai. Thank You God Thank you meri dil ki sunne ke liye. Ab main Aryan ke dil mein apna pyaar jaga ke rahungi. Aur woh bhi yaha se jaane ke pahle.
Phir aise hi yeh log 2 din alag alag jagah ghumte hai. Inn 2 din mein innlogo ne bahot masti ki Ritika ne bhi khulke enjoy kiya Aryan ko apna pura pyaar dikhaya. Par usse shak tha woh Aryan ke dil mein abhi bhi pyaar nhi jaga paayi. Aur kal inko wapas mumbai bhi aana tha.
Isi soch mein Ritika apne room mein baithi hui thi tabhi uske room mein knock hota hai.
Ritika jaake dekhti hai toh waha Aryan khada tha.
Ritika: Tum iss waqat yaha.
Aryan: Kuch baat karni thi. Garden mein chale.
Ritika: Kaun kaun jaa raha hai.
Aryan: Sirf humdono aur koi nhi.
Ritika: Thik hai chalo.
Phir dono hotel ke garden mein aate hai.
Aryan: Main jaanta hu Ritika tum mujhe bahot pyaar karti ho aur kahi na kahi main bhi shayad tumse pyaar karne laga hu. Par tum jaanti ho Main Meera ko bhi bahot pyaar karta hu.
Ritika: Main jaanti hu Aryan. Aur mujhe Meera se koi problem nhi hai bas mujhe mere hisse ka pura pyaar chahiye.
Aryan: Par pyaar karne ke pahle tumhe mere baare mein sab janna hoga. Phir tum chaho toh apna decision badal sakti ho.
Ritika: Chahe kuch bhi ho ab mera yeh decision kabhi nhi badlega.
Aryan: Main aur Meera tumlogo ki tarah normal insaan nhi hai.
Ritika: Normal insaan nhi ho matlab.
Phir Aryan usse sab batata hai apne baare mein apni family ke baare mein.
Aryan: Ab bolo kya ab bhi tum aise insaan ke saath rehna chahogi jiske family ko uske upar bharosa nhi jiske sang rehne mein harwaqat jaan ka khatra hai.
Ritika: Mujhe tumhare past se ya family se koi matlab nhi hai. Maine tumse pyaar kiya hai tumhare past se nhi. Aur rahi baat jaan ki toh yeh jaan ab tumhari hai. Tumhe dekhna hai tum isse kaise sambhalte ho.
Aryan: Kya tumhe yeh bura nhi laga ke maine Meera ko ek supergirl bana diya aur tum ek normal ho.
Ritika: Mujhe isse koi fark nhi padhta bas tum mere saath ho yehi mere liye bahot hai. Mujhe aur kuch nhi chahiye.
Aryan usko apne seene se laga leta hai. Ritika uske seene se lag ke sabkuch bhul gayi usko jaise isi ka intezaar tha.
Ritika: Kab se maine iss pal ka intezaar kiya hai aaj finally mera intezaar khatam hua. Thank You Aryan mujhe mera pyaar dene ke liye.
Aryan: Tum mujhse itna pyaar karti ho agar maine tumhe tumhare pyaar se durr kiya toh woh bhagwan mujhe kabhi maaf nhi karega.
Bas kabhi mujhe dhokha mat dena.
Ritika: Kabhi nhi Aryan. Main kabhi tumhe chorke nhi jaungi. Main aur Meera humesha tumhare saath rahenge.
Aryan: Achha tumhara birthday kab hai.
Ritika: Kyo.
Aryan: Bolo naa.
Ritika: Kuch din baad.
Aryan: Uss din tumhe ek bahot bada surprise dunga. Bas ready rehna.
Ritika: Mujhe tum mil gaye aur kuch naa chahiye.
Aryan: Jo tumhe dene wala hu woh tumhara hi adhikaar hai. Par kya tumhari family iske liye ready hogi.
Ritika: Meri maa toh pahle se hi ready hai aur dad ko maa mana lengi.
Aryan: Achha hai chalo ab chalte hai.
Ritika: Nahi mujhe kuch der aur tumhare seene se lag ke rehna hai bahot intezaar kiya hai maine.
Aryan: Ab toh saari zindagi aise hi rehna hai par humhe kal ghar wapas jaana hai.
Ritika: Meri ek baat manoge.
Aryan: Tum order karo.
Ritika: Woh maa ne kaha tha tumko aur Meera ko saath ghar laane ko kaha tha toh kya kal tum yaha se sidha mere ghar chaloge.
Aryan: Aree kyo nhi jarur chalenge.
Ritika: Thank You thank you so much.
Aryan: Chalo chalte hai.
Phir dono waha se apne apne room mein aajate hai.
Room mein aate hi Ritika ne apni maa ko call kiya.
Sangeeta: Kaisi hai meri bachhi.
Ritika: Maa maa maaa aaj main bahot khush hu. Mujhe aaj sab kuch mil gaya maa.
Sangeeta: Aisa kya hogya beta.
Ritika: Maa Aryan bhi mujhse pyaar karta hai aur Meera ne mujhe accept karliya maa. Mujhe mera Aryan mil gaya maa. I am so happy.
Sangeeta: Aree waah yeh toh bahot achhi baat hai. Yeh sab hua kaise beta.
Phir Ritika Sangeeta ko sabkuch batati hai.
Sangeeta: Chalo bahot achha hua. Tum khush ho naa.
Ritika: Bahot khush hu maa. Aur aapko pata hai Aryan ke maa baba bhi sab jaante hai aur unhe bhi mujhse kuch problem nhi hai. Par maa kya dad maanenge.
Sangeeta: Unko main mana lungi tum tension mat lo. Tumhari khushi ke liye kuch bhi karenge hum.
Ritika: Thank you maa. Aur haa kal hum teen ghar aayenge toh aap dad ko bol dena woh ghar mein rahe.
Sangeeta: Tum bilkul chinta mat karo main sab dekh lungi aur kal tumhare dad bhi ghar mein rahenge. Chalo ab so jao kal milte hai.
Ritika: Byee maa good night.
Phir call cut hojaata hai. Idher Sangeeta Raghav ke paas jaati hai.
Sangeeta: Raghav kuch baat karni thi.
Raghav: Haa bolo naa.
Sangeeta: Woh Ritika ko uska pyaar mil gaya hai par.
Raghav: Aree waah yeh toh bahot achhi baat hai par kya.
Sangeeta: Uss ladke Aryan ke naseeb mein 2 ladkiyan hai.
Raghav: Kyaaa.
Sangeeta: Haa aur Ritika yeh jaanti hai aur Aryan Meera ne yeh bata ke hi Ritika ko accept kiya hai.
Raghav: Yeh kaise hosakta hai humne apni beti ko bade hi laad pyaar se pala hai woh kaise yeh seh payegi.
Sangeeta: Aap shayad bhul rahe hai iski bhagya mein bhi yehi likha tha iske pati ki 2 shaadiyan hongi aur yeh apne jeevan mein humesha khush rahegi.
Raghav: Jaanta hu main. Par ek baap hu main aur apni beti ki khushi mein koi aanch nhi aane dunga.
Sangeeta: Aur isi liye woh kal unhe ghar laa rahi hai aur aapko ghar mein rehne ko bola hai.
Raghav: Thik hai. Shayad yeh karne se WOHLOG khush rahe. Waise bhi humne koshish toh bahot ki par unki ek ichha puri naa kar paaye.
Sangeeta: Aap yeh baat kabhi bhi apne muh se mat nikaliye. Ritika ko yeh baat kabhi bhi pata nhi chalni chahiye.
Raghav: Par kya usse yeh sach chipana ab thik hogaa. Ab toh usne apne liye ladka bhi pasand karliya hai.
Sangeeta: Aur jab woh humse uske baare mein puchegi tab hum usse kya batayenge.
Kya aapke paas uska jawaab hoga. Aap itne bade businessman hokar bhi kuch naa kar paaye.
Raghav: Maine apni puri koshish ki par main kuch nhi kar paaya.
Sangeeta: Chahe kuch bhi ho Ritika ko yeh baat kabhi nhi pata chalegi. Nhi toh pahle woh kijiye uske baad usse bolenge warna nhi.
Raghav: Thik hai jaisa tum chaho. Chalo ab so jao. Kal woh aarahi hai.
Sangeeta: Hmmm.
Agli subah wohlog Mahabaleshwar se bus mein baithke mumbai ke kiye rawana hochuke the.
Aur ab bus mein 3 couple 3 alag jagah baithe the. Yash Preeti alag baithe apne mein busy the. Sonal Karan apne mein busy the aur last mein Aryan Meera aur Ritika apne mein busy the.
Meera: Kya baat hai Ritika kuch jyaada hi chipak rahi ho.
Ritika: Toh tum bhi chipak jao ispe humdono ka barabar ka haq hai. Aur ab mujhe disturb mat karo bahot intezaar kiya hai iska mujhe isko achhe se mehsus karne do. Yeh bol Aryan se seene ke lag kar baith jaati hai.
Meera: Haa haa le lo maze. Phir Meera bhi dusre side se chipak jaati hai.
Aise hi pyaar bhare safar ko inhone 6 ghante mein pura kiya. Sab log Aryan ke ghar hi aate hai apni apni car aur bike lene.
Sanjana: Toh aagaye meri dusri bahu leke. Kaisi ho Ritika.
Ritika: Sharma ke achhi hu aunty.
Sanjana: Chalo pahle thoda nashta karlo.
Karan: Nhi Aunty ab ghar jayenge. Maa ka bhi call aachuka hai.
Preeti: Haa aunty abhi chalte hai next time jarur karenge.
Sanjana: Thik hai jaisi tumhari marzi.
Aryan: Maa main nikalta hu mujhe aur Meera ko Ritika ke ghar jaana hai iske parents ne bulaya hai.
Sanjana: Thik hai aaram se jaana.
Phir yeh log nikalte hai.
Ritika: Meera kya tum meri car se aajaogi main Aryan ke saath jau.
Meera: Thik hai tum jao main tumhari car se aati hu.
Phir Ritika Aryan ke saath nikal jaati hai aur Meera Ritika ki car se jaati hai.
Thodi der mein yeh log Ritika ke ghar aajate hai.
Car hi awaaz sunn ke Sangeeta bahar aajati hai. Ritika car utar ke bhagg ke Sangeeta ke gale lag jaati hai.
Sangeeta: Kaisi hai meri bachhi.
Ritika: Bahot achhi hu. Dad kaha hai.
Raghav: Hum bhi yahi hai meri bachhi.
Ritika: Dad. I missed you so much kaise hai aap.
Raghav: Jaisa tum chor ke gayi thi.
Ritika: Maa dad yeh hai Aryan aur Meera.
Raghav aur Sangeeta Meera ko dekh kar hairan hojaate hai. Par woh kuch bolte nhi bas usko hi dekhte rehte hai.
Aryan: Namaste Uncle namaste Aunty.
Phir Meera unke pairr chune jaati hai toh woh uss rok lete hai.
Sangeeta: Aree nhi beta humare yaha bahu betiyan pairr nhi chuuti. Chalo andar chalo.
Phir sablog Andar aate hai. Sangeeta ne pahle se hi unke liye nashta taiyaar kar rakha tha.
Sab log pahle nashta karte hai phir baate start hoti hai.
Aryan: Uncle Aunty aap jaante honge Ritika mujhe pyaar karti hai aur ab main bhi usse pyaar karta hu. But meri life mein woh akeli nhi rahegi usse agar meri life mein aana hai toh usko Meera ko accept karna hoga jiska liye woh ready hai. But aaplog uske parents hai toh last decision aapka hi hoga.
Raghav: Mujhe Sangeeta ne sab bataya hai beta. Aur mujhe tumhari yeh baat bahot pasand aayi ke tumne sab pahle hi sach bata diya. Mujhe meri beti ki khushi hi chahiye aur uski khushi tumhare saath hi hai toh humhe koi problem nhi hai.
Ritika: Thank you dad. You are the best.
Sangeeta jo tab se Meera ko hi dekh rahi thi.
Sangeeta: Meera if you don't mind tumhara parivaar mein kaun kaun hai.
Meera: Aunty main ek orphan hu. Bachpan mein mere maa baap ne mujhe jungle ne chorr diya tha tab ek anath aashram ke warden ne mujhe sambhala aur tab se woh hi mujhe maa ki tarah pyaar karti hai.
Sangeeta aur Raghav yeh sunke shock hojaate hai.
Sangeeta aur Raghav ek dusre ko dekhte hai. Unki aankho mein aansu the but woh chupa lete hai aur Aryan yeh dekh lete hai.
Sangeeta aage badh ke Meera ko apne seene se laga leti hai. Uski aankho mein ab bhi aansu the par woh unhe poch leti hai. Meera ko bhi unke seene se lag ke ek alag aihsaas hota hai.
Sangeeta: Kya hum tumhari maa se mil sakte hai.
Meera: Haa kyu nhi. Jarur. Maa bhi aaplogo se milke bahot khush hongi.
Sangeeta: Hum kal aayenge unse milne.
Meera: You are most welcome aunty.
Aryan: Achha Aunty ab hum chalte hai.
Sangeeta: Thik hai beta.
Phir Aryan aur Meera waha se chale jaate hai.
Ritika: Maa dad aap Meera ko aise kyo dekh rahe the.
Sangeeta: Woh shayad tumhe kal pata chal jaaye. Agar hum jo soch rahe hai woh sach hai toh tumne ek bahot badi khushi humhe di hai beta.
Ritika: Aisi kya baat hai.
Raghav: Woh kal pata chal jayega. Chalo ab tum jaake rest karo.
Ritika: Okk dad.
Phir Ritika apne kamre mein chali jaati hai.
Sangeeta: Raghav kya aapne dekha yeh shayad wohi hai.
Raghav: Hum abhi bhi sure nhi hai Sangeeta humhe kal iska pura sach jaana hoga.
Sangeeta: Agar yeh sach hua toh yeh bahot khushi ki baat hai.
Raghav: Haa Sangeeta. Jo hum naa kar paaye woh Ritika ne kardiya.
Sangeeta: Aakhir karegi bhi kyoki uske dil se jo judi hui hai.
Raghav: Haa sahi kaha kal jaake pata karenge.
Idher Aryan car mein baitha kuch soch raha tha.
Meera: Kya soch rahe ho jaan.
Aryan: Kuch nhi bas aise hi tum batao tum kya soch rahi ho.
Meera: Pata hai aaj jab Ritika ki maa ne mujhe gale lagaya aisa laga hi nhi ke main kisi anjaan ko gale lag rahi hu. Mujhe laga main kisi apne ko gale lag rahi hu.
Aryan: Hosakta hai aakhir woh bhi toh ek maa hai naa. Aur waise bhi saari maa ek samaan nhi hoti.
Meera: Tum please woh sab mat socho. Aur kal tum aaoge naa jab Ritika ki family aayegi ghar mein.
Aryan: Main aake kya karunga.
Meera: Nahi tumhe aana hoga and thats final.
Aryan: Okkk okk main aajunga. Chalo tumhara ghar bhi aagaya.
Meera: Byee kal milte hai.
Phir Meera ko ghar chor Aryan apne ghar nikal jaata hai.
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