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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

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Jaguaar

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nice update ...aryan ko 3 crore ke shares ke 200 crore mile 🤩..
aur yash preety ko dekhkar laar tapka raha hai 😁..lagta hai uska maamla set ho jayega ..
sonal bhi aryan ko pasand karne lagi par meera ne usko jata diya ko aryan sirf meera ka hai 😁..
ab ye naya formula kaise kaam karega dekhte hai 🤔..
Thank You
 

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Update 20
Aryan: Kya baat hai Uncle aapne mujhe iss waqat bulaya.
Harish Uncle: Tumse kuch baat karni thi.
Aryan: Boliye.
Harish Uncle: Sabse pahle toh Thank you. Tumne jo clues diye the mujhe uss case mein jo saare sahi thee. CM ko maarne wala unka bhai hi thaa. Woh CM ke post ki lalach mein unko maar diya.
Usne ek hacker ki madad se saare news channels hack karwaye phir usme ek fake news chalwa di. Jisme CM ke bahot saari mahilao ke saath sambandh theee. Yeh news woh sehan naa kar paaye aur unko second attack aaya aur woh chal base.
Jab humne uss driver ko pakda. Tab usne sab boldiyaa.
Aryan: Aree yeh toh achhi baat hai. Ke khooni pakda gaya.
Harish Uncle: Haa aur sab tumhare presence of mind ki wajah se hua hai.
Aryan: Uncle maine bola naa maine kuch nhi kiya maine sirf kuch doubts bole thee jo sahi lag gaye.
Harish Uncle: Achha toh phir tum uss drugs wale kaand ko leke kya kahoge jo tumne uss din kiyaa.
Aryan: Uncle maine kaha kiya. Woh toh kisi Black Beast ne kiyaa hai.
Harish Uncle: Aur yeh sawaal Black Beast se hi toh puch raha hu.
Aryan pahle toh thoda ghabra jaata hai par confidence ke saath bolta
Aree yeh aap kya bol rahe hai main aur Black Beast. Aapko koi galat fehmi hui hai.
Harish Uncle: Achha yani tumhare andar Dr. Sanjay ne koi formula insert nhi kiya jab tum maut se ladh rahe thee aur Doctor ne bol diya thaa ke tum bach nhi sakte.
Aryan puri tarah se ghabra jaata hai. Woh Harish ko shock se dekhne lagta hai.
Aryan: Aap kaun hai aur aapko yeh sab kaise pata. Kahi aap bhi toh usi group ka hissa nhi hai jo yeh formula paana chahta hai.
Harish Uncle: Nhi. Main uss group ka hissa nhi hu.
Main hu Raw Cheif Harish Verma. Par yeh baat meri family bhi nhi jaanti. Yaha tak ki CBI mein mere saath kaam karne wale mere collegues bhi nhi jaante.
Aryan: Toh aapne mujhe kyo bataya aur aapko formula ke baare mein kaise pata.
Harish Uncle: Batata hu.
Jab tumko goliyan lagi thi tab main wahi se jaa raha thaa. Tab maine tumko goliyan lagte hue dekh li thi. Aur maine tumhare saath Dr. Sanjay ko dekh liya thaa. Tumne uss aadmi ko toh maardiya jisne goliyan maari aur tum wahi girr pade. Jab tak main waha pahonch pata tab tak Dr. Sanjay tumhe lekar hospital chale gaye the. Jab main hospital aaya tab tumhara operation chal raha thaa. Main Dr. Sanjay ko jaanta thaa woh ek scientist hai aur unke upar pahle bhi jaanleva hamla hochuka thaa. Aur jab maine yeh investigate kiya ki kyo unke unpar baar baar janleva humla horaha hai tab mujhe uss formula ke baare mein pata chala.
Main wahi pe rukh gaya jab tak tumhara operation nhi hojaata.
Jab doctor bahar aaye tab unhone boldiya ke tum bach nahi paogee.
Par pata nhi kyo Dr. Sanjay tumko ghar le gaye. Mujhe shakk hua. Isiliye maine unke upar nazar rakhna start kiya.
1.5 Mahine guzar gaye but tumhara kuch pata nhi thaa. Par mujhe pata thaa tum zinda ho. Agar tum margaye hote toh Dr. Sanjay ek dead body ko toh apne saath nhi rakhenge.
1.5 mahine baad mujhe tum dikhe pahle se bhi fit aur ekdum thik. Mujhe dekh kar toh shock laga ke yeh kaise hogyaa. Jo insaan ke bachne ki koi umeed nhi thii woh ekdum aise khada hai jaise kuch hua hi naa ho.
Phir Dr. Sanjay ne tumhare liye fight teachers bulaye. Jo tum sikhne lage. Tumhari sikhne ki speed dekh kar toh main hairaan hogya. Jo fights sikhne mein insaan ko pata kitne mahine lag jaate woh saari fights tumne sirf 10 din mein hi sikh li. Isse mujhe pura yakeen hogya ke Dr. Sanjay ne apne barso ki mehnat tumko de di hai.
Tab maine apne ek agent ko tumhare pichhe laga diya.
Woh mujhe tumhare har ek pal ki khabar deta.
Usne mujhe bataya kaise tumne Undertaker ko maara. Kaise Meera ko bachaya. Mere liye ek chiz achhi hui ke tum aur Yash dost ban gaye. Isse mera tumne milne ka rasta aur easy hogyaa.
Aur bhi kuch janna hai ya hogyaa.
Aryan: Toh ab aap mujhse kya chahte hai.
Harish Uncle: Main chahta hu tum Raw join karo. Tumhare paas formula ka power bhi hai aur tum bahadur aur achhe insaan bhi ho.
Aryan: Aap sirf formula ke basis pe mujhe yeh offer kaise kar sakte hai.
Harish Uncle: Sirf formula ke basis pe nhi. Uss din jab tum woh CM wala case ko solve kar rahe thee. Meri pura dhyaan uss waqat sirf tumhare upar hi thaa. Tumhare kaam ko leke jo dedication hai woh dekh ke main khush hua.
Phir tumne first day college mein jo kiya thaa woh dekh kar bhi main tumhari taraf attract hua thaa.
Phir woh drugs wala kaand. Usme tumne jiss tarah apna dedication diya woh bhi kamaal thaa aur tumne apni identity bhi safe rakhi thi.
Phir tumne Ashok Kapoor ke saath jo kiya woh.
Par mujhe ek baat samaj nhi aayi tumne drugs wale din Ashok, Rahul aur Neha ko chorr kyo diya.
[ Uss din godown mein woh teen log yehi thee. Aur inka main dhandha tha colleges mein drugs supply karna]
Aryan: Uncle maine unko asaan maut nhi dena chahta. Pahle unko barbaad karunga. Phir ek ek karke unko marunga.
Harish Uncle: Achha samjha. Toh tumne mere offer ke bare mein kya sochaa.
Aryan: Agar main naa kahu toh.
Harish Uncle: Main tumko force toh nhi karunga. Agar tumhara jawab naa hai toh tum jaa sakte ho.
Aryan: Aur agar maine bahar jaake aapki identity leak kardi toh.
Harish Uncle: Main Raw Cheif aise hi nhi bana. Tum aisa nhi karoge main jaanta hu. Tumhare andar jo power hai tum use agar galat kaam mein uss karoge toh tumhe koi rokh nhi paayegaa. Par tumne aisa nhi kiyaa. Isi se yeh proof hota hai. Tum ek sachhe aur achhe insaan ho.
Aryan: Main baba se puche bina koi faisla nhi kar sakta. Yeh shaktiyan unki di hui hai. Woh jaisa kahengee waisa hi karungaa.
Harish Uncle: Unko pahle se hi pata hai. Tum jab hospital mein aaram karne gaye thee tabhi maine unse saari baate karli thi. Aur unhone faisla tumhare upar chora hai.
Aryan: Aap sirf mera aaj jaante hai. Mera kal nhi jaante.
Harish Uncle: Main nhi janna chahta tum apni family se kitni nafrat karte ho. Aur kab tak karoge. Yeh tumhara personal hai. Aur rahi baat Meera ki mujhe pata hai tum usse kuch bhi nhi chipaoge. Agar tum haa kehte ho. Toh tum kuch time baad usse bata sakte ho. Tab tak tumhari training bhi puri hojayegi.
Aryan: Thik hai main taiyaar hu.
Harish Uncle: Mujhe pata thaa tum naa nhi kahogee. WELCOME TO RAW AGENT BLACK BEAST.
Monday se tumhari training start hojayegi. So get ready.
Aryan: Toh kya mujhe college miss karna hogaa.
Harish Uncle: Nhi college miss nhi karna hogaa. Tumhari training raat 12 baje ke baas yehi pe start hogi.
Aryan: Thik hai Uncle. I mean Sir.
Harish Uncle: Sir only in headquater or in any mission.
Aryan: Okk Uncle. Toh ab main chalu.
Harish Uncle: Okk Good Night.
Aryan: Good Night.
Aryan waha se chala aaya. Woh raste mein sochta raha ke usne haa bolke sahi kiya ya galat.
Woh ghar wapas aaya. Sanjana ne dinner karne diya. Sanjay usse soch mein dekh.
Sanjay: Tum jyaada socho mat. Tumne sahi faisla kiya hai. Tum inn powers ka sahi istemaal wahi pe karoge. Yaha pe aise tumhare powers ka koi use nhi.
Aryan: Aapko sab pata thaa toh aapne mujhe bataya kyo nhi.
Sanjay: Yeh sab Harish Ji ka hi plan thaa unhone ne hi batane se mana kiya thaa. Woh khud tumhe batana chahte hai.
Aryan: Samjhaa.
Sanjay: Chalo ab jyaada socho mat. Jaake so jao.
Aryan: Ji.
Phir Aryan apne room mein aata hai toh uske mobile mein Meera ke bahot saare missed calls thee.
Aryan: Aree marr gaya. Ab yeh sherni mujhe kachha khaa jayegi.
Aryan call lagata hai. 1st ring mein hi call uth gaya.
Meera: Kaha the ab tak. Kitne calls kiye hai maine tumhe koi andaza bhi hai. Tum superhuman honge apne ghar mein tum mere saamne aao tumhari taange naa todd di toh mera naam Meera nhi. Ab bolte kyo nhi.
Aryan: Meri sherni mujhe bolne de tab toh bolu.
Meera: Ha ha bolo.
Aryan: Sabse pahle sorry. Phone silent thaa aur main Yash ke papa se milne gaya thaa unhone bulaya thaa.
Meera: Achha kis liye bulaya thaa.
Aryan: Woh unhone mujhe uss CM case ko leke bulaya jisme maine unki thodi help ki thi.
Meera: Achha kya hua. Uss case ka.
Aryan: Wahi jiska mujhe shakk thaa. Isiliye unhone mujhe Thank you bolne ke liye bulaya thaa.
Meera: Waah meri jaan toh ab CBI ki bhi help karne lag gaya
 

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Aryan: Kya baat hai Uncle aapne mujhe iss waqat bulaya.
Harish Uncle: Tumse kuch baat karni thi.
Aryan: Boliye.
Harish Uncle: Sabse pahle toh Thank you. Tumne jo clues diye the mujhe uss case mein jo saare sahi thee. CM ko maarne wala unka bhai hi thaa. Woh CM ke post ki lalach mein unko maar diya.
Usne ek hacker ki madad se saare news channels hack karwaye phir usme ek fake news chalwa di. Jisme CM ke bahot saari mahilao ke saath sambandh theee. Yeh news woh sehan naa kar paaye aur unko second attack aaya aur woh chal base.
Jab humne uss driver ko pakda. Tab usne sab boldiyaa.
Aryan: Aree yeh toh achhi baat hai. Ke khooni pakda gaya.
Harish Uncle: Haa aur sab tumhare presence of mind ki wajah se hua hai.
Aryan: Uncle maine bola naa maine kuch nhi kiya maine sirf kuch doubts bole thee jo sahi lag gaye.
Harish Uncle: Achha toh phir tum uss drugs wale kaand ko leke kya kahoge jo tumne uss din kiyaa.
Aryan: Uncle maine kaha kiya. Woh toh kisi Black Beast ne kiyaa hai.
Harish Uncle: Aur yeh sawaal Black Beast se hi toh puch raha hu.
Aryan pahle toh thoda ghabra jaata hai par confidence ke saath bolta
Aree yeh aap kya bol rahe hai main aur Black Beast. Aapko koi galat fehmi hui hai.
Harish Uncle: Achha yani tumhare andar Dr. Sanjay ne koi formula insert nhi kiya jab tum maut se ladh rahe thee aur Doctor ne bol diya thaa ke tum bach nhi sakte.
Aryan puri tarah se ghabra jaata hai. Woh Harish ko shock se dekhne lagta hai.
Aryan: Aap kaun hai aur aapko yeh sab kaise pata. Kahi aap bhi toh usi group ka hissa nhi hai jo yeh formula paana chahta hai.
Harish Uncle: Nhi. Main uss group ka hissa nhi hu.
Main hu Raw Cheif Harish Verma. Par yeh baat meri family bhi nhi jaanti. Yaha tak ki CBI mein mere saath kaam karne wale mere collegues bhi nhi jaante.
Aryan: Toh aapne mujhe kyo bataya aur aapko formula ke baare mein kaise pata.
Harish Uncle: Batata hu.
Jab tumko goliyan lagi thi tab main wahi se jaa raha thaa. Tab maine tumko goliyan lagte hue dekh li thi. Aur maine tumhare saath Dr. Sanjay ko dekh liya thaa. Tumne uss aadmi ko toh maardiya jisne goliyan maari aur tum wahi girr pade. Jab tak main waha pahonch pata tab tak Dr. Sanjay tumhe lekar hospital chale gaye the. Jab main hospital aaya tab tumhara operation chal raha thaa. Main Dr. Sanjay ko jaanta thaa woh ek scientist hai aur unke upar pahle bhi jaanleva hamla hochuka thaa. Aur jab maine yeh investigate kiya ki kyo unke unpar baar baar janleva humla horaha hai tab mujhe uss formula ke baare mein pata chala.
Main wahi pe rukh gaya jab tak tumhara operation nhi hojaata.
Jab doctor bahar aaye tab unhone boldiya ke tum bach nahi paogee.
Par pata nhi kyo Dr. Sanjay tumko ghar le gaye. Mujhe shakk hua. Isiliye maine unke upar nazar rakhna start kiya.
1.5 Mahine guzar gaye but tumhara kuch pata nhi thaa. Par mujhe pata thaa tum zinda ho. Agar tum margaye hote toh Dr. Sanjay ek dead body ko toh apne saath nhi rakhenge.
1.5 mahine baad mujhe tum dikhe pahle se bhi fit aur ekdum thik. Mujhe dekh kar toh shock laga ke yeh kaise hogyaa. Jo insaan ke bachne ki koi umeed nhi thii woh ekdum aise khada hai jaise kuch hua hi naa ho.
Phir Dr. Sanjay ne tumhare liye fight teachers bulaye. Jo tum sikhne lage. Tumhari sikhne ki speed dekh kar toh main hairaan hogya. Jo fights sikhne mein insaan ko pata kitne mahine lag jaate woh saari fights tumne sirf 10 din mein hi sikh li. Isse mujhe pura yakeen hogya ke Dr. Sanjay ne apne barso ki mehnat tumko de di hai.
Tab maine apne ek agent ko tumhare pichhe laga diya.
Woh mujhe tumhare har ek pal ki khabar deta.
Usne mujhe bataya kaise tumne Undertaker ko maara. Kaise Meera ko bachaya. Mere liye ek chiz achhi hui ke tum aur Yash dost ban gaye. Isse mera tumne milne ka rasta aur easy hogyaa.
Aur bhi kuch janna hai ya hogyaa.
Aryan: Toh ab aap mujhse kya chahte hai.
Harish Uncle: Main chahta hu tum Raw join karo. Tumhare paas formula ka power bhi hai aur tum bahadur aur achhe insaan bhi ho.
Aryan: Aap sirf formula ke basis pe mujhe yeh offer kaise kar sakte hai.
Harish Uncle: Sirf formula ke basis pe nhi. Uss din jab tum woh CM wala case ko solve kar rahe thee. Meri pura dhyaan uss waqat sirf tumhare upar hi thaa. Tumhare kaam ko leke jo dedication hai woh dekh ke main khush hua.
Phir tumne first day college mein jo kiya thaa woh dekh kar bhi main tumhari taraf attract hua thaa.
Phir woh drugs wala kaand. Usme tumne jiss tarah apna dedication diya woh bhi kamaal thaa aur tumne apni identity bhi safe rakhi thi.
Phir tumne Ashok Kapoor ke saath jo kiya woh.
Par mujhe ek baat samaj nhi aayi tumne drugs wale din Ashok, Rahul aur Neha ko chorr kyo diya.
[ Uss din godown mein woh teen log yehi thee. Aur inka main dhandha tha colleges mein drugs supply karna]
Aryan: Uncle maine unko asaan maut nhi dena chahta. Pahle unko barbaad karunga. Phir ek ek karke unko marunga.
Harish Uncle: Achha samjha. Toh tumne mere offer ke bare mein kya sochaa.
Aryan: Agar main naa kahu toh.
Harish Uncle: Main tumko force toh nhi karunga. Agar tumhara jawab naa hai toh tum jaa sakte ho.
Aryan: Aur agar maine bahar jaake aapki identity leak kardi toh.
Harish Uncle: Main Raw Cheif aise hi nhi bana. Tum aisa nhi karoge main jaanta hu. Tumhare andar jo power hai tum use agar galat kaam mein uss karoge toh tumhe koi rokh nhi paayegaa. Par tumne aisa nhi kiyaa. Isi se yeh proof hota hai. Tum ek sachhe aur achhe insaan ho.
Aryan: Main baba se puche bina koi faisla nhi kar sakta. Yeh shaktiyan unki di hui hai. Woh jaisa kahengee waisa hi karungaa.
Harish Uncle: Unko pahle se hi pata hai. Tum jab hospital mein aaram karne gaye thee tabhi maine unse saari baate karli thi. Aur unhone faisla tumhare upar chora hai.
Aryan: Aap sirf mera aaj jaante hai. Mera kal nhi jaante.
Harish Uncle: Main nhi janna chahta tum apni family se kitni nafrat karte ho. Aur kab tak karoge. Yeh tumhara personal hai. Aur rahi baat Meera ki mujhe pata hai tum usse kuch bhi nhi chipaoge. Agar tum haa kehte ho. Toh tum kuch time baad usse bata sakte ho. Tab tak tumhari training bhi puri hojayegi.
Aryan: Thik hai main taiyaar hu.
Harish Uncle: Mujhe pata thaa tum naa nhi kahogee. WELCOME TO RAW AGENT BLACK BEAST.
Monday se tumhari training start hojayegi. So get ready.
Aryan: Toh kya mujhe college miss karna hogaa.
Harish Uncle: Nhi college miss nhi karna hogaa. Tumhari training raat 12 baje ke baas yehi pe start hogi.
Aryan: Thik hai Uncle. I mean Sir.
Harish Uncle: Sir only in headquater or in any mission.
Aryan: Okk Uncle. Toh ab main chalu.
Harish Uncle: Okk Good Night.
Aryan: Good Night.
Aryan waha se chala aaya. Woh raste mein sochta raha ke usne haa bolke sahi kiya ya galat.
Woh ghar wapas aaya. Sanjana ne dinner karne diya. Sanjay usse soch mein dekh.
Sanjay: Tum jyaada socho mat. Tumne sahi faisla kiya hai. Tum inn powers ka sahi istemaal wahi pe karoge. Yaha pe aise tumhare powers ka koi use nhi.
Aryan: Aapko sab pata thaa toh aapne mujhe bataya kyo nhi.
Sanjay: Yeh sab Harish Ji ka hi plan thaa unhone ne hi batane se mana kiya thaa. Woh khud tumhe batana chahte hai.
Aryan: Samjhaa.
Sanjay: Chalo ab jyaada socho mat. Jaake so jao.
Aryan: Ji.
Phir Aryan apne room mein aata hai toh uske mobile mein Meera ke bahot saare missed calls thee.
Aryan: Aree marr gaya. Ab yeh sherni mujhe kachha khaa jayegi.
Aryan call lagata hai. 1st ring mein hi call uth gaya.
Meera: Kaha the ab tak. Kitne calls kiye hai maine tumhe koi andaza bhi hai. Tum superhuman honge apne ghar mein tum mere saamne aao tumhari taange naa todd di toh mera naam Meera nhi. Ab bolte kyo nhi.
Aryan: Meri sherni mujhe bolne de tab toh bolu.
Meera: Ha ha bolo.
Aryan: Sabse pahle sorry. Phone silent thaa aur main Yash ke papa se milne gaya thaa unhone bulaya thaa.
Meera: Achha kis liye bulaya thaa.
Aryan: Woh unhone mujhe uss CM case ko leke bulaya jisme maine unki thodi help ki thi.
Meera: Achha kya hua. Uss case ka.
Aryan: Wahi jiska mujhe shakk thaa. Isiliye unhone mujhe Thank you bolne ke liye bulaya thaa.
Meera: Waah meri jaan toh ab CBI ki bhi help karne lag gaya
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Introduction

Yeh kahani hai Delhi sehar ke ek jaane maane businessman
Mr. Vikram Malhotra,Malhotra group of companies ke malik ke family ki.

Jeet Malhotra- (Father of Vikram Malhotra) Malhotra group ki neev inhone hi rakhi thi. Filhaal retire hochuke hai. Inke 2 bete hai aur 1 beti hai. Bada beta Vikram aur chota beta Suraj aur beti Supriya. Inki Shaadi hochuki hai.

Vikram jaha bahot hi suljha hua aur shant aadmi hai wahi suraj bahot hi khurafat dimaag wala aadmi hai.

Vikram Malhotra- Ek bahot hi khush mizaaz insaan hai jo apne family ko bahot pyaar karte hai. Inke paas paise ki koi kami nhi hai bahot hi shaan-o-shaukat ki zindagi hai inki.

Rashmi Malhotra- (Wife of Vikram Malhotra) Ek bahot hi suljhi hui aurat hai. Inki duniya inki family hai. Inki aur Vikram ki love marriage hui thi. Aur inka pyaar aaj bhi waisa hi hai jitna pahle thaa,infact aur jyaada badh gaya hai. Yeh ek college mein MBA ki professor hai. Ek businessman ki wife hone ke baad bhi woh college mein lecturer ki job karti hai.

Suraj Malhotra- Yeh bahot hi chalak aur lalchi kisam ka insaan hai. Apne bade bhai se hadd se jyaada nafrat karta hai(Reason baad mein pata chalega)lekin yeh chiz kabhi bhi jahir nhi hone di.

Meenakshi Malhotra- (Wife of Suraj Malhotra) Yeh bhi apne pati ki tarah hi chalak kisam ki aurat hai aur but apne family se pyaar bhi bahot karti hai.

Supriya Khanna- Yeh thodi ghamandi kisam ki aurat hai. Inke pati ka bhi achha khasa business hai. Yeh hero ko sehan nhi kar sakti. Kyoki usse lagta hai uski wajah se uske bachho ki uske maayke mein koi value nhi hai. Mauka milte hi usse nichha dikhane ki koshish karti.

Deepak Khanna- (Husband of Supriya khanna). Yeh achha aadmi hai. Yeh sabse pyaar se peshata hai. Kisi se kabhi koi jhagra nhi. Hero ko pasand karta hai. But apni biwi ki wajah se naapasand karna ka naatak karta hai. Kyoki usse pata hai uske bachhe hi nalayak hai. Isme hero ki kya galti.

Vikram aur Rashmi ke 3 bachhe hai :-

1) Ankit Malhotra- Yeh Vikram aur Rashmi ka bada beta. Yeh bilkul apne Chacha ke upar gaya hai. Kyoki yeh bachpan se hi usse jyaada close raha hai isiliye uski sabhi aadat isme bhi hai. Padhai puri hochuki hai aur filhal dikhawe ke liye apne papa ke saath office join kiya hai.


2 ) Neha Malhotra- Yeh Vikram aur Rashmi ki badi beti. Yeh bilkul apne apni Maa ke jaisi hai bilkul uski parchai hai. Apne chote bhai mein iski jaan basti hai. Yeh abhi post graduation ke 2nd year mein hai.


3) Aryan Malhotra(Hero)- Yeh hai Vikram aur Rashmi ka chota beta. Apni family ke har member se beintehaan nafrat karta hai. Pahle aisa nhi thaa but iski zindagi mein ek aisa toofan aaya jisse yeh aisa hogya hai. Yeh abhi post graduation ke 1st year mein hai.

Suraj aur Meenakshi ke 2 bachhe hai :-

1) Raj Malhotra- Yeh Suraj aur Meenakshi ka bada beta. Thoda bewakoof type ka ladka hai. Apna dimaag kam use karta hai. Abhi school mein hai( 9th Standard).

2) Soniya Malhotra- Yeh Suraj aur Meenakshi ki choti beti. Yeh dimaag wali ladki hai. But bahot hi badmaash hai. Isme Aryan ki jaan basti hai. Isko koi bhi kuch bolne se darta hai kyoki isko dukh dena matlab Aryan ko dukh dena hota hai. Yeh bhi Raj ke saath school mein hai same standard.

Deepak aur Supriya ke 2 bachhe hai:-

1) Shivam Khanna- Yeh Deepak ka bada beta. Aryan ke same age mein hai. Yeh bhi apni maa ki soch hi rakhta hai. Galat sangat mein rehta hai isiliye har chiz mein pichhe hai. Yeh bhi apni maa ki tarah Aryan ko pasand nhi karta. Kyoki isko sabkoi usse compare karte hai. Jo isse bilkul pasand nhi.

2) Dipali Khanna: Yeh bhi Deepak ki choti beti. Yeh bhi Aryan ki age ki hai. Yeh padhai mein thik hai. Isse bas apne aap se matlab hai. Aryan se kabhi kabhi baat toh karti hai but thoda rudely apni maa ki wajah se. Yeh log bhi Delhi mein hi rehte hai.


Inka ghar ek 2 floor ka bunglow hai. Jisme nichhe ke floor mein 4 rooms hai aur upar ke floor mein 4 rooms hai.

(Hero ke relation ke respect mein)
Nichhe ke 4 rooms mein se ek room maa papa dusra chacha chachi teesra dadaji ka hai aur last wala guest room hai. Nichhe dining table hai jaha sablog ek saath khana khaate hai.
Upar ke 4 rooms mein se ek Neha ka dusra Ankit ka teesra Aryan ka aur last wala Raj aur Soniya ka hai but Raj usme akela hi sota hai kyoki Soniya ko Aryan ke saath sona hi pasand hai.
Nice introduction and nice start of the story....let's see....
story kitni mast h ....
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Aryan: Kya baat hai Uncle aapne mujhe iss waqat bulaya.

Harish Uncle: Tumse kuch baat karni thi.

Aryan: Boliye.

Harish Uncle: Sabse pahle toh Thank you. Tumne jo clues diye the mujhe uss case mein jo saare sahi thee. CM ko maarne wala unka bhai hi thaa. Woh CM ke post ki lalach mein unko maar diya.

Usne ek hacker ki madad se saare news channels hack karwaye phir usme ek fake news chalwa di. Jisme CM ke bahot saari mahilao ke saath sambandh theee. Yeh news woh sehan naa kar paaye aur unko second attack aaya aur woh chal base.

Jab humne uss driver ko pakda. Tab usne sab boldiyaa.

Aryan: Aree yeh toh achhi baat hai. Ke khooni pakda gaya.

Harish Uncle: Haa aur sab tumhare presence of mind ki wajah se hua hai.

Aryan: Uncle maine bola naa maine kuch nhi kiya maine sirf kuch doubts bole thee jo sahi lag gaye.

Harish Uncle: Achha toh phir tum uss drugs wale kaand ko leke kya kahoge jo tumne uss din kiyaa.

Aryan: Uncle maine kaha kiya. Woh toh kisi Black Beast ne kiyaa hai.

Harish Uncle: Aur yeh sawaal Black Beast se hi toh puch raha hu.

Aryan pahle toh thoda ghabra jaata hai par confidence ke saath bolta

Aree yeh aap kya bol rahe hai main aur Black Beast. Aapko koi galat fehmi hui hai.

Harish Uncle: Achha yani tumhare andar Dr. Sanjay ne koi formula insert nhi kiya jab tum maut se ladh rahe thee aur Doctor ne bol diya thaa ke tum bach nhi sakte.

Aryan puri tarah se ghabra jaata hai. Woh Harish ko shock se dekhne lagta hai.

Aryan: Aap kaun hai aur aapko yeh sab kaise pata. Kahi aap bhi toh usi group ka hissa nhi hai jo yeh formula paana chahta hai.

Harish Uncle: Nhi. Main uss group ka hissa nhi hu.
Main hu Raw Cheif Harish Verma. Par yeh baat meri family bhi nhi jaanti. Yaha tak ki CBI mein mere saath kaam karne wale mere collegues bhi nhi jaante.

Aryan: Toh aapne mujhe kyo bataya aur aapko formula ke baare mein kaise pata.

Harish Uncle: Batata hu.
Jab tumko goliyan lagi thi tab main wahi se jaa raha thaa. Tab maine tumko goliyan lagte hue dekh li thi. Aur maine tumhare saath Dr. Sanjay ko dekh liya thaa. Tumne uss aadmi ko toh maardiya jisne goliyan maari aur tum wahi girr pade. Jab tak main waha pahonch pata tab tak Dr. Sanjay tumhe lekar hospital chale gaye the. Jab main hospital aaya tab tumhara operation chal raha thaa. Main Dr. Sanjay ko jaanta thaa woh ek scientist hai aur unke upar pahle bhi jaanleva hamla hochuka thaa. Aur jab maine yeh investigate kiya ki kyo unke unpar baar baar janleva humla horaha hai tab mujhe uss formula ke baare mein pata chala.

Main wahi pe rukh gaya jab tak tumhara operation nhi hojaata.

Jab doctor bahar aaye tab unhone boldiya ke tum bach nahi paogee.

Par pata nhi kyo Dr. Sanjay tumko ghar le gaye. Mujhe shakk hua. Isiliye maine unke upar nazar rakhna start kiya.

1.5 Mahine guzar gaye but tumhara kuch pata nhi thaa. Par mujhe pata thaa tum zinda ho. Agar tum margaye hote toh Dr. Sanjay ek dead body ko toh apne saath nhi rakhenge.

1.5 mahine baad mujhe tum dikhe pahle se bhi fit aur ekdum thik. Mujhe dekh kar toh shock laga ke yeh kaise hogyaa. Jo insaan ke bachne ki koi umeed nhi thii woh ekdum aise khada hai jaise kuch hua hi naa ho.

Phir Dr. Sanjay ne tumhare liye fight teachers bulaye. Jo tum sikhne lage. Tumhari sikhne ki speed dekh kar toh main hairaan hogya. Jo fights sikhne mein insaan ko pata kitne mahine lag jaate woh saari fights tumne sirf 10 din mein hi sikh li. Isse mujhe pura yakeen hogya ke Dr. Sanjay ne apne barso ki mehnat tumko de di hai.

Tab maine apne ek agent ko tumhare pichhe laga diya.

Woh mujhe tumhare har ek pal ki khabar deta.
Usne mujhe bataya kaise tumne Undertaker ko maara. Kaise Meera ko bachaya. Mere liye ek chiz achhi hui ke tum aur Yash dost ban gaye. Isse mera tumne milne ka rasta aur easy hogyaa.

Aur bhi kuch janna hai ya hogyaa.

Aryan: Toh ab aap mujhse kya chahte hai.

Harish Uncle: Main chahta hu tum Raw join karo. Tumhare paas formula ka power bhi hai aur tum bahadur aur achhe insaan bhi ho.

Aryan: Aap sirf formula ke basis pe mujhe yeh offer kaise kar sakte hai.

Harish Uncle: Sirf formula ke basis pe nhi. Uss din jab tum woh CM wala case ko solve kar rahe thee. Meri pura dhyaan uss waqat sirf tumhare upar hi thaa. Tumhare kaam ko leke jo dedication hai woh dekh ke main khush hua.

Phir tumne first day college mein jo kiya thaa woh dekh kar bhi main tumhari taraf attract hua thaa.

Phir woh drugs wala kaand. Usme tumne jiss tarah apna dedication diya woh bhi kamaal thaa aur tumne apni identity bhi safe rakhi thi.

Phir tumne Ashok Kapoor ke saath jo kiya woh.

Par mujhe ek baat samaj nhi aayi tumne drugs wale din Ashok, Rahul aur Neha ko chorr kyo diya.

[ Uss din godown mein woh teen log yehi thee. Aur inka main dhandha tha colleges mein drugs supply karna]

Aryan: Uncle maine unko asaan maut nhi dena chahta. Pahle unko barbaad karunga. Phir ek ek karke unko marunga.

Harish Uncle: Achha samjha. Toh tumne mere offer ke bare mein kya sochaa.

Aryan: Agar main naa kahu toh.

Harish Uncle: Main tumko force toh nhi karunga. Agar tumhara jawab naa hai toh tum jaa sakte ho.

Aryan: Aur agar maine bahar jaake aapki identity leak kardi toh.

Harish Uncle: Main Raw Cheif aise hi nhi bana. Tum aisa nhi karoge main jaanta hu. Tumhare andar jo power hai tum use agar galat kaam mein uss karoge toh tumhe koi rokh nhi paayegaa. Par tumne aisa nhi kiyaa. Isi se yeh proof hota hai. Tum ek sachhe aur achhe insaan ho.

Aryan: Main baba se puche bina koi faisla nhi kar sakta. Yeh shaktiyan unki di hui hai. Woh jaisa kahengee waisa hi karungaa.

Harish Uncle: Unko pahle se hi pata hai. Tum jab hospital mein aaram karne gaye thee tabhi maine unse saari baate karli thi. Aur unhone faisla tumhare upar chora hai.

Aryan: Aap sirf mera aaj jaante hai. Mera kal nhi jaante.

Harish Uncle: Main nhi janna chahta tum apni family se kitni nafrat karte ho. Aur kab tak karoge. Yeh tumhara personal hai. Aur rahi baat Meera ki mujhe pata hai tum usse kuch bhi nhi chipaoge. Agar tum haa kehte ho. Toh tum kuch time baad usse bata sakte ho. Tab tak tumhari training bhi puri hojayegi.

Aryan: Thik hai main taiyaar hu.

Harish Uncle: Mujhe pata thaa tum naa nhi kahogee. WELCOME TO RAW AGENT BLACK BEAST.

Monday se tumhari training start hojayegi. So get ready.

Aryan: Toh kya mujhe college miss karna hogaa.

Harish Uncle: Nhi college miss nhi karna hogaa. Tumhari training raat 12 baje ke baas yehi pe start hogi.

Aryan: Thik hai Uncle. I mean Sir.

Harish Uncle: Sir only in headquater or in any mission.

Aryan: Okk Uncle. Toh ab main chalu.

Harish Uncle: Okk Good Night.

Aryan: Good Night.

Aryan waha se chala aaya. Woh raste mein sochta raha ke usne haa bolke sahi kiya ya galat.

Woh ghar wapas aaya. Sanjana ne dinner karne diya. Sanjay usse soch mein dekh.

Sanjay: Tum jyaada socho mat. Tumne sahi faisla kiya hai. Tum inn powers ka sahi istemaal wahi pe karoge. Yaha pe aise tumhare powers ka koi use nhi.

Aryan: Aapko sab pata thaa toh aapne mujhe bataya kyo nhi.

Sanjay: Yeh sab Harish Ji ka hi plan thaa unhone ne hi batane se mana kiya thaa. Woh khud tumhe batana chahte hai.

Aryan: Samjhaa.

Sanjay: Chalo ab jyaada socho mat. Jaake so jao.

Aryan: Ji.

Phir Aryan apne room mein aata hai toh uske mobile mein Meera ke bahot saare missed calls thee.

Aryan: Aree marr gaya. Ab yeh sherni mujhe kachha khaa jayegi.

Aryan call lagata hai. 1st ring mein hi call uth gaya.

Meera: Kaha the ab tak. Kitne calls kiye hai maine tumhe koi andaza bhi hai. Tum superhuman honge apne ghar mein tum mere saamne aao tumhari taange naa todd di toh mera naam Meera nhi. Ab bolte kyo nhi.

Aryan: Meri sherni mujhe bolne de tab toh bolu.

Meera: Ha ha bolo.

Aryan: Sabse pahle sorry. Phone silent thaa aur main Yash ke papa se milne gaya thaa unhone bulaya thaa.

Meera: Achha kis liye bulaya thaa.

Aryan: Woh unhone mujhe uss CM case ko leke bulaya jisme maine unki thodi help ki thi.

Meera: Achha kya hua. Uss case ka.

Aryan: Wahi jiska mujhe shakk thaa. Isiliye unhone mujhe Thank you bolne ke liye bulaya thaa.

Meera: Waah meri jaan toh ab CBI ki bhi help karne lag gaya

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