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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

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  • Poll closed .

Jaguaar

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Abhi shayad raat hai isiliye kisi ko aane nhi diya. Chalo thik hai main bhi thoda so leta hu. Phir Aryan so jaata hai.
Sanjay aur Sanjana ko toh pata chal chuka thaa usko abhi tak hosh achuka hoga. Par phir bhi woh uske paas nhi jaate usko aaram karne dete hai.
Woh dono bhi wahi thodi der so jaate hai.
Abhi unko soye hue kuch der hua thaa ke Aryan ka phone baj utha. Sanjana dekhti hai Meera ka call thaa.
Sanjana: Aree baba re main toh isko bolna hi bhul gayi. Pata nhi iss pagal ne apna kya haal karliya hoga ab tak.
Woh jaise hi phone receive karti hai waise hi
Meera: Aunty ab kaisa hai Aryan. Doctor ne kya bola. Woh thik toh hai naa. Aap kuch bol kyo nhi rahi hai.
Sanjana: Aree ruko ruko mujhe kuch bolne toh do. Dekho treatment achhe se hogyaa. Chott jyaada nhi lagi thi. Pasli tooti thi par jyaada nhi. Abhi woh bilkul thik hai. So raha hai. Aur sorry main tumhe call karna hi bhul gayi.
Meera: Thank God ab woh thik hai. Aur aapko sorry bolne ki jarurat nhi hai main samaj sakti hu. Aap bhi tension mein thi naa.
Sanjana: Tum puri raat soyi nhi naa. Aur puri raat roti rahi hona tum.
Meera: Mujhe neend kaise aasakti hai aunty. Waha Aryan hospital mein hai aur yaha main so jau. Yeh toh kabhi possible hi nhi hai. Aur mere aankho se aansu rukh hi nhi rahe thee. Maine bahot koshish ki ke rona na aaye. But Aryan ke liye tension mein baar baar rona aa hi jaaraha thaa.
Sanjana: Itna pyaar kaise kar baithi tum Aryan se.
Meera: Yeh toh mujhe bhi nhi pata kaise mujhe Aryan se itna pyaar hogya. But ab mere jivan mein sirf aur sirf Aryan hi hai. Uske bina ab main jee nhi paungi.
Sanjana: Chup pagal ladki. Aisa nhi bolte. Chalo ab thodi der so jao. Warna agar tumhari tabyat kharab hogyi toh dono ko ek hi room mein admit karwana padega.
Meera: Nhi aunty jab tak Aryan ko ek baar dekh naa lu naa mujhe neend aayegi aur naa mujhe chainn aayegaa.
Aur waise bhi ab subah hone wali hai. Thodi der mein hi Yash aajayegaa. Phir main Aryan ke paas.
Sanjana: Pagal ladki. Ek tu pagal ek yeh pagal. Dono pagal ek jaise hai. Chalo thik hai sona mat thoda rest toh karlo.
Meera: Thik hai aunty.
Phir call cut hojaata hai.
Phir Meera Yash ko phone karke Aryan ki saari details deti hai.
Woh bhi thoda tension se free hota hai.
Meera thoda rest karne ke liye apni aankhe band karti hai toh usse neend aajati hai. Aur woh baithe baithe hi so jaati hai. 6:30 baje uske mobile ka alarm bajta hai tab uski neend toot jaati hai.
Meera: Aree 06:30 baj gaye aur main so kaise gayi. Mujhe toh hospital jaana hai.
Phir Meera jaldi jaldi fresh hoke ready hoti hai. Tab tak 7 baje chuke thee.
Udher Yash bhi jaldi jaldi ready hoke hospital jaane ke liye nikalta hai toh uske mom dad puchte hai itni subah subah kaha jaa raha hai. Tab woh unko sab batata hai. Toh woh bhi hospital jaane ke liye ready hote hai. Woh apne car se jaate hai Yash apni bike leke Meera ke ghar ki taraf jaata hai.
Meera ko 7:15 baje Yash call karke bolta hai woh uske ghar ke bahar khada hai.
Meera jaldi se waha aajati hai phir woh dono bhi Hospital pahonch jaate hai jaha pahle se hi Yash ke mom dad baithe thee.
Aryan bhi neend se jag chuka thaa aur sabse baate kar raha thaa.
Idher Sanjana hospital ke canteen se sabke liye chai lene jaati hai tab dekhti hai Meera aur Yash hospital mein enter kar rahe hote hai.
Meera Sanjana ko dekh daud ke uske paas jaati hai aur puchti hai. Kaise hai ab Aryan. Usko hosh aagaya. Kaha hai woh.
Sanjana: Aree shant shant Aryan deewani shant. Usko hosh aagyaa hai. Abhi thik hai. Aur room mein iske( Yash ) mom dad aur apne baba se baate kar raha hai.
Chalo le chalti hu tumhare Aryan ke paas. Pata nhi kaise saari raat kaati hogi tumne.
Meera yeh sab sunn tension mein bhi thoda sharmaa jaati hai jise Sanjana dekh leti hai.
Sanjana: Dekho pahle toh kaise ro rahi thi aur ab kaise sharmaa rahi hai. Maine thik hi socha tha yeh ek number ki pagal hai.
Phir Sanjana unhe Aryan ke paas le chalte hai.
Meera jab Aryan ko dekhti hai toh ek pal ke liye uske aankho mein aansu aajaate hai. Jinhe Aryan bhi dekh leta hai.
Meera uske paas jaati hai Yash bhi uske saath hi thaa. Jab woh dono room mein hote hai toh Yash ke mom dad aur Sanjana bahar aajate hai kyoki room mein itne logo ka rehna thik nhi thaa.
Meera bas usko dekhe jaa rahi thi. Uski aankhe ab bhi nam thi. But kuch bol bhi nhi rahi thi.
Yash: Ab kaisa hai bhai.
Aryan: Thik hu.
Yash: Yeh sab kaise hogya bhai.
Aryan: Kuch nhi bhai bas bike se ghar jaa raha tha. Achanak raste mein mera balance bigad gaya aur accident hogya aur mere ribs wale part mein laga jisse mere pasliyon mein chott aayi thoda thoda toot bhi gaya.
Yash: Bhagwan ka shukra hai koi bada hadsa nhi hua. Warna pata nhi kya hojaata.
Chal ab tu rest kar main chalta hu. Meera tum yehi rukh jao Sanjana aunty ko bhi ghar jaane do. Woh bhi puri raat jagi hai thoda ghar jaake fresh hoke aane do. Main bahar hi hu kisi bhi chiz ki jarurat ho toh mujhe bata dena.
Meera: Thik hai.
Phir Yash room se bahar chala jaata hai. Ab room mein sirf Aryan aur Meera hi thee.
Meera ab tak chup thi woh ab bolna start karti hai.
Meera: Kaise ho.
Aryan: Bas ekdum fit. Kal shayad discharge de denge phir wapas parso se college.
Meera: Khabardaar agar tumne 1 hafte tak apne room se kadam bhi bahar rakha toh.
Aryan: Toh....
Meera: Toh.. toh main tumhare taange todd dungi.
Meera ki aankhe jo ab tak nam thi ab uske chehre pe ek muskurahat aagyi thi.
Aryan: Chalo achha hai. Agar mere taange tod dene se tumhare chehre pe hasi aati hai toh mujhe yeh bhi manzoor hai.
Aur waise tum ro kyo rahi thi.
Meera: Main kaha ro rahi thi.
Aryan: Achha toh tumhari yeh aankhe nam kyo thii.
Meera: Shayad aankho mein kuch kachra chala gaya thaa. Isiliye paani aagaya thaa. Tum mere kaun ho jo main ro dungi.
Aryan: Achha.
Meera: Ji.
Aryan: Waise tumhe pata hai kal mere accident ki real wajah kya thaa.
Meera: Tumne hi toh abhi bataya.
Aryan: Aree woh toh aadha bataya. Mere balance bigadne ki asli wajah toh kuch aur hi thaa.
Meera: Kya. Kya thi asli wajah.
Aryan: Actually kal jab main bike chala rha tha tab mein kisi ke khayalo mein ghum thaa. Aur mujhe koi hosh hi nhi thaa. Aur bike speed breaker mein lagne se balance bigad gaya aur main yaha pe aagaya.
Meera jab yeh sunti hai toh gusse se.
Meera: Kyaaa. Kaun thi woh jara mujhe naam toh batao jiske wajah se tumhari yeh halat hogyi. Main use chodungi nhii
Aryan: Khabardaar agar usse kuch kaha toh.
Woh toh mere dil mein bas chuki hai. Usse kuch karna yaa kehna matlab mere se dushmani karna.
Meera: Nam aankho se kaun hai woh.
Aryan: Woh itni khubsoorat hai. Ke jab usko pahli baar dekha tha tabhi mera dil uska hogya thaa but mujhe yeh pata hi nhi chala.
Dusri baar jab usse mila tab woh pareshani mein ro rahi thi jisse dekh kar mujhe bahot gussa aaya jinke wajah se woh royi thi. Maine unko bahot maara thaa. But tab bhi main confuse thaa.
Phir aise hi hum milne lage aur mera confusion durr hota gaya. Aur jab kal usse meri halat ka pata laga woh toh jaise pagal hi hogyi thi aur mera pura confusion durr hogya.
Meera ka chehra aisa hogya thaa ke woh ab bas ro hi degi. Phir bhi usne khud ko control kiya aur pucha
Meera: Kya naam hai uska aur woh tumse milne nhi aayi.
Aryan: Naam jaanke kya karogi. Main tumko milwa hi deta hu.
Woh uss wash room mein hai. Jao aur usse bahar le aao. Sab aagye the toh woh waha chup gayi thi.
Meera ne jab yeh sunna woh ladki usse pahle hi Aryan se milne aagayi hai aur abhi bhi hai. Toh uska dil toh jaise dhadakna hi band hogaya thaa. Woh waha pathar ke jaise khadi thi. Jaise usme koi jaan hi naa bachi ho.
Aryan usko hila ke bolta hai jao bula lao.
Meera beman se bhari kadmo ke saath washroom ke taraf jaati hai. Uske aankho se aansu beh rahe thee. Woh unhe jitna poch rahi thi. Woh utna beh rahe thee.
Meera jab washroom mein enter karti hai toh pure washroom ke deewaro mein kaanch lage hue thee. Toh woh waha kisi ko nhi paati. Sirf waha pe apna hi reflextion dikh raha thaa. Meera yeh dekh khushi se jhoom uthti hai. Matlab Aryan itni der se jis ladki ke baare mein bol raha thaa woh main hu. Matlab woh bhi mujhse pyaar karta hai.
Woh washroom se bahar aati hai bhag kar jaake lete hue Aryan ke gale lag jaati hai.
Aryan bhi usko apni baahon mein le leta hai. Toh mil liya usse ladki se jisne pahli hi mulakat mein mera dil apne paas rakh liya.
Meera: Haa but woh bilkul bhi khubsoorat nhi hai.
Aryan: khabardaar agar meri jaan ke baare mein kuch bhi kaha toh.
Meera: Main toh kahungi.
Aryan: Chalo sirf tumhe hi permission deta hu.
Meera phir achanak usse marne lagti hai.
Aryan: Aree aree maar kyo rahi ho. Ab tumhe meri jaan pasand nhi aayi toh isme meri kya galti.
Meera: Bahot maza aata hai naa tumhe mujhe rulane mein mujhe pareshan karne mein. Yeh keh ke woh rone lagti hai.
Aryan usko wapas apne seene se laga leta hai. Aur uske baalon ko sehlane lagta hai.
Meera: Tumhe pata hai jab maine tumhare accident ki news suni toh uss waqat meri kya halat thii. Mere andar toh jaise jaan hi nhi bachi thi. Main toh tabhi yaha aana chahti thi par aunty ne mana kardiya. Puri raat pata nhi kaise kaise khayal aarahe the. 1 sec ke liye bhi chain nhi aaya mujhe.
Jab yaha aayi tumhe sahi salamat dekha tab jaake dil ko sukoon mila.
Par tum tumhe toh meri koi parwah hi nhi hai. Yaha par bhi mujhe pareshan kiya mujhe rulane lage. Yeh sab usne Aryan ke seene mein sar rakh kar kaha thaa.
Aryan: Mujhe pata hai meri jaan ke tum kitna pareshan hui ho. Kitna royi ho. Aur main bhi pagal tumhe wapas rula diya. Mujhe maaf kardo I Am Sorry.
Meera: Bas uske seene mein sar rakh baithi rahi. Tumhe maafi nhi iski saja milegi. Aur saja tumhari yeh hai ke tum pure 1 hafte sirf rest karoge. No college,no work,only rest.
Agar tumne yeh saza achhe se complete ki tabhi tumhari maafi ko grant kiya jayegaa.
Aryan: Yaar yeh 1 hafta kuch jyaada nhi hai
Meera: Kuch bola tumne.
Aryan: Nhi nhi main kya bolunga. Main toh bol raha tha mujhe saza manzur hai.
Meera: Hmm Good Boy. Chalo bahot baate hogyi ab rest karo main bahar hi hu.
Aryan: Yahi baith jao naa mere paas.
Meera bhi usko chor kar jaana nhi chahti thii.
Isiliye woh wahi par baith gayi.
Aryan bas usko hi dekhe jaa raha thaa
Meera: Aise kya dekh rahe ho.
Aryan: Dekh raha hu koi kitna khubsoorat hai.
Meera yeh sunke sharma jaati hai. Aur uske seene mein muh chupaa leti hai.
Aryan bhi usko baahon mein bhar leta rehta hai.
Aryan: Meera.
Meera: Hmm.
Aryan: Mujhse kitna pyaar karti ho.
Meera: Apni jaan se bhi jyaada.
Aryan: Kabhi mujhe chorogi toh nhi.
Meera: Aakhri saans tak nhi.
Aryan: Agar koi mujhpe kisi tarah ka koi ilzaam lagaye aur main usse us waqat galat sabit naa kar pau toh kya tum uss waqat bhi mera saath dogii.
Meera: Aisa kyo bol rahe ho. Koi aisa kyo karegaa.
Aryan: Karne ko toh insaan kuch bhi kar sakta hai.
Meera: Agar kabhi bhi aisi koi situation aati hai toh main har waqat tumhare saath rahongi. Kabhi bhi tumhe avishwas nhi karungi.
Aryan aage kuch nhi bolta bas uske baalon ko sehlane lagta hai aur Meera bhi uske seene mein aankhe band kar seene mein sir rakh kar baithi thi.
Kuch der yeh log aisi hi baithe the tabhi waha Sanjana aati hai.
Sanjana: Aree yeh hospital hai. Bedroom nhi.
Sanjana ki awaaz sunte hi woh ghabra jaate hai Meera tezi se uth ke khadi hojaati hai. Aryan bhi kare use kuch samaj nhi aata.
Sanjana unki halat dekh hasti hai aur bolti hai relax relax ghabrane ki koi jarurat nhi hai maine kuch nhi dekha.
Aryan aur Meera dono sharmaane lagte hai.
 

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Ek aadmi Hospital mein operation theatre ke bahar tension mein chakar laga raha tha. Uske saath uske pita bhai aur bhai ki biwi thi. Kyoki uski biwi ot mein thi delivery ke liye. Uss aadmi ka pita kehta hai Vikram tension matlo sab kuch achha hi hogaa. Vikram yeh sunn ek tension mein bhari smile pass karta hai aur phir se chakar lagane lagta hai.​

Kuch der baad ot ka door open hota hai aur doctor bahar aakar kehte hai :-​

Doctor: Mr. Malhotra mubarak ho aapko beta hua hai.​

Yeh news sunte hi sabke chehre mein ek khushi ki lehar aajati hai sab khushi se nachne lagte hai.​

Vikram: Doctor meri wife toh thik hai naa.​
Doctor: Ji aapka beta aur apki wife dono bilkul fit hai. Aap thodi der baad unse mil sakte hai.​
Vikram: Thank You Doctor.​
Doctor: Your Welcome and Congratulations.​
Yeh bol doctor waha se chala jata hai. Thodi der baad bachhe aur maa ko cabin mein shift kar dete hai. Phir sabse unse milne cabin mein aate hai.​

Sabse pahle sab bachhe se milte jo bagal ke palne mein so raha thaa.​
Uske chehre mein duniya bhar ki masoomiyat thi ek alag sa hi tej thaa.​
Bachhe ko dekh kar sabki aankho mein khushi ke aansu thee.​

Uske baad sab Rashmi se milte hai jo bed mein aaram kar rahi thi. Uski aankho mein bhi khushi ke aansu the. Sabkoi usse congratulate kar raha thaa. Vikram uske paas mein uska haath pakar ke baith jata hai aur bolta hai Thank You Rashmi aaj tumne mujhe complete kardiya itna pyaara beta dekar.​
Phir aise hi sablog thodi der maa bete ke paas reh kar cabin ke bahar jaake hospital mein baaki ki formality puri karte hai.​

Doctor ne kal tak ke liye maa bete ko observation mein rakh lete hai. Raat ko kisi ek ko rukhne ka kaha jaata hai toh Meenakshi raat ko rukh jaati hai aur baaki sab ghar wapas aajate hai.​

Ghar aakar Jeet Malhotra ne apne kul pandit ko phone kar yeh khush khabri di aur apne pote ke naamkaran ke liye ek mahapuja ka aayojan bhi karte hai jo 3 din baad ki thi.​

Subah sab wapas hospital jaate hai aur waha se Rashmi aur bachhe ko leke wapas ghar aate hai.​

Ghar mein bachhe ko leke Neha ke bagal mein sula dete hai. Neha uss bachhe ko dekhe hi jaa rahi thi. Aur phir apne chote chote haatho se uske haatho ko pakad leti hai jaise agar uska haath chor diya toh woh kahi chala jayega.​

Sab Neha ke iss behave ko dekh kar hase jaarahe thee.​

Ankit thoda bada hogya thaa woh bhi apne chote bhai ke paas aake uske saath khelne lagta hai.​

Jaise hi Ankit ne Neha ka haath apne chote bhai ke haath se hataya waise hi Neha ne rona suru kardiya jaise usse kisine uska khilona chinn liya ho.​

Aise hi hasi mazaak mein 3 din guzar jaate hai.​

Subah subah Kulpandit mahapuja ki taiyaari kar rahe thee. Rashmi, Meenakshi ,Vikram, Suraj sab unki madad kar rahe the. Wahi ek palne mein bachhe ko sulaya gaya thaa​
Ankit ko Jeet Malhotra ne apne paas rakha thaa.​

Neha toh apne chote bhai ke paas hi thi. Usko aisa lag raha thaa agar woh usse durr gayi toh uske bhai ko koi le jayega.​

Aise hi 1 ghante ke baad mahapuja khatam hojaati hai. Phir Kulpandit ne Vikram aur Rashmi ko bachhe ke saath hawankund ke saamne baithaya aur uski kundli banane lage. Jaise jaise kundli ban rahi thi waise waise Kulpandit ke facial expression mein bhu badlav aarahe the jo Jeet Malhotra ne dekh liya tha but uss time unhone ne kuch nhi bola.​

Kuch der baad Kulpandit bole yeh bachha bahot bhagyashaali hoga,iska dimaag baakiyon ke mukable bahot takatwar hogaa. Yeh jisse bhi mohabbat karega aur toot ke mohabbat karega but yeh jisse ek baar nafrat karle phir uske dil mein uske liye pyaar lana,bharosa lana hadd se jyaada mushkil hogaa phir chahe woh iske kitna bhi close kyo naa ho. Aur iss bachhe ka naam hoga ARYAN.​

Bachhe ka naam sabko bahot pasand aata hai. Phir sab ko khaane ke liye baithaya jaata hai.​

Khane ke baad Jeet Malhotra Kulpandit se akele mein baat karne ke liye unko apne kamre le jaate hai.​

hmm.. so chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye lekin neha apne bhai ka saath kabhi nahi chhodegi.. chaahe kitne bhi muskile paida na ho jaaye...
Oh to hero ka naam Aryan rakha gaya hai... Pandit ji jo keh rahe the.. uske mutabik to yahi lage ki chaahe kuch bhi kar lo lekin bas Aryan ka vishvas mat todna... matlab saaf hai ki aage chalke vishvasghatio se sakht nafrat karega aaryan...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 

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Phir Kulpandit unko batate hai kyo kundli banate waqat unke chehre ke bhaav badal rahe the. Kulpandit ke baat sunne ke baad Jeet Malhotra ke chehre ke bhaav bhi badalne lagte hai. Yeh dekh Kulpandit bolte hai chahe kuch bhi hojaaye aap apne pote ke saath hi rahenge usse galat nhi samjhenge aur naahi aap baakiyon ko yeh baat batayenge kyoki yehi unki niyati hai unko yeh sehna hi padega. Aur isse unko ek sikh bhi milegi. Uske baad Kulpandit chale jaate hai aur Jeet Malhotra tension mein reh jaate hai.​

Kuch din baad Jeet Malhotra apne lawyer ke paas jaake kuch baat karte hai aur unko ek kaam dete hai.​


After 18 Years​


Ek Ladka mumbai ke ek hospital mein zindagi aur maut se ladh raha tha. 3 ghante se OT mein uska operation chal raha tha. Bahar ek aadmi aur aurat aansu bahaye jaa rahe thee. Aurat baar baar bol rahi thi humhari wajah se kisi nirdosh ki aaj yeh halat hai. Kaash woh waha nhi aaya hotaa toh aaj uski aisi halat nhi hoti.​

Aadmi uss Aurat ko sambhalne ki koshish kar raha tha but andar se woh bhi bahot dukhi thaa.​
Kuch der baad doctor OT se bahar aate hai. Aur kehte hai:-​

Doctor: Aap uss ladke ke kya lagte hai​
Aadmi(Thoda soch kar): Woh mera beta hai. Kya ab woh thik hai.​
Doctor: Dekhiye main aapko jhooti tasalli nhi dunga but ab uska bachna naa ke barabar hai. Goli uske dil ke bahot kareeb lagi thi. Humne goli toh nikal di hai but ab uski body mein blood generate nhi horaha hai aur uska jo blood group hai woh bahot hi rare hai. Ab uske bachne ke chances 5% se bhi kam hai I am Sorry.​

Yeh sab sunne ke baad aadmi toh jaise taise khud ko sambhal leta hai but woh Aurat toh behosh hogyi thi.​

Doctor usko check karte hai aur aaram karne ko kehte hai.​

Thodi der baad jab aurat hosh mein aati hai toh phir se rona start kardeti hai. Aadmi usko bolta hai​

Aadmi: Sanjana ab chup hojao. Humlog ab kuch nhi kar sakte.​

Sanjana: Kaise chup hojau Sanjay aaj humari wajah se ek nirdosh ki yeh halat hai. Naa woh humhe bachane aata aur naa uski yeh halat hoti. Yeh bol phir se rona start kardeti hai.​

Phir achanak uske dimaag mein ek idea trigg karta hai toh woh bolti hai​

Sanjana: Sanjay kyo na jiske liye yeh sab horaha hai woh chiz hum isko dede shayad yeh bach jaaye.​

Sanjay: Bachho jaisi baate mat karo Sanjana. Humlog isko jaante tak nhi yeh kaisa ladka hai achha hai ya bura hai agar koi problem hogyi toh sab barbaad hojayegaa.​

Sanjana: Jo ladka bina kisi jaan pehchan ke kisi ajnabi ki madad kare uske liye apne seene mein 4 goliya khaaye uss hisab se isse achha ladka shayad hi koi hoga.​

Sanjay: Thik hai main yeh baat manta hu. But abhi tak humlogo ne woh properly test nhi kiya hai agar kuch garbar hogyi toh.​

Sanjana: Doctor ne toh bolhi diya hai iske bachne ke chances 5% se bhi kam hai. Agar uske baad isko kuch hota hai toh itna dukh nhi hoga. But agar sab thik raha toh yeh bach jayega aur humhara test bhi hojayegaa. Aur shayad humlogo ko humara beta bhi mil jaaye.​

Sanjay: Thik hai main doctor se baat karke isko ghar shift karwane ki koshish karta hu. Tum ghar jaake saari taiyaari dhayan se karo.​

Sanjay Singh- Yeh ek bahot bade scientist hai. Inhone bahot saare research aur experiments kiye hai jinme bahot saare successfull rahe hai. Ab yeh aur inki wife milke human body and brain ke upar ek research and experiment kar rahe hai. Agar yeh success hota hai toh ek human ke body and brain ko kisi bhi normal human ke body and brain se jyaada powerfull bana dega matlab ek tarah se usko super human mein convert kar dega.​

Sanjana Singh- (Wife of Sanjay Singh) yeh bhi ek scientist hai aur apne pati ke saath hi saare kaam karti hai.​

Inke iss research ke baare mein India ke sabse bade terrorist organization ko pata chal jaata hai aur woh iss research ko hatiyane ki koshish karte hai jinme inke ek laute bete ki jaan chali jaati hai. But yeh uss research ko unke haath nhi lagne dete. Phir bhi inke upar aaye din humle hote rehte hai. Aise hi ek humle mein inko ek ladke ne toh bacha liya par ab woh khud zindagi aur maut se ladh raha hai.​

Sanjay Singh Doctor ke baat karke uss ladke ko apne ghar lejaate hai. Ab Sanjay Singh ek jaane maane scientist hai unhe Mumbai mein sab hi jaante hain isiliye unko jyaada mehnat nhi karni padhi.​


Sanjay aur Sanjana uss ladke ko le apne ghar ke underground mein bane laboratory mein chale aate hai. Jaha bade bade machines lage hue the. Matlab Sanjana ne pahle hi sab taiyaariyan kar rakhi thi.​

Sanjay uss ladke ko waha ek bed pe leta deta hai. Aur sab kuch phir se ek baar check kar us ladke haath mein machines se kuch lagata hai aur uske sir mein kuch lagata hai aur aakhir mein uske chest ke paas dhyaan se lagata hai kyoki waha par pahle se hi ghaav the.​

Phir Sanjay computer mein kuch kaam kar uss ladke ke body mein woh research aur Experiment se bane formula ko insert karta hai. Jaise jaise woh formula uske andar jaaraha hota hai waise waise uski body vibrate honi start karti hai. Pure formula insert hone ke kuch der baad uss ladke ki body vibrate honi band kardeti hai aur dheere dheere uski heartbeat bhi band hone lagti hai yeh dekh woh Sanjay aur Sanjana dono ke aankho mein hi aansu aajate hai. Unko lagta hai ki ab yeh ladka nhi bachegaa yaani unki saari koshish aur mehnat barbaad hogyi.​

kahani ne dusri aurr karwat li hai ek dushre drisya mein yeh dikhaya gaya hai ki ek ladke ne niswarth hoke ek dampati ki jaan bachane ke chakkar mein khud ki jaan daav pe laga diya... ab us ladke ko bachane ke liye wo dampati kuch aisi science experimental formula uske andar injected kiye hai jiske chalte shayad ye ladka bach jaaye...
haalaki ki dangerous hai par kya kare jab saare hope khatam ho jaaye to...
Yeh ladka hi is kahani ka hero arayan hai shayad..
par family se dur, yahan karne aaya tha?
Let's see what happens next
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Abhi kuch time hi bita tha ke heartbeat reading machine mein kuch awaaz hone lagti hai aur jab woh dekhte hai toh unki khushi ka koi thikana hi nhi thaa​

Kyoki unke formula ne kaam kardiya tha uss ladke ki heartbeat phir se chalne lagi thi yaani woh ladka bach gaya thaa. Sanjay phir computer mein dekhta hai toh pata hai unke formula ki wajah se uss ladke ke body mein wapas blood circulation start hogya thaa aur jitne bhi damage ya kamzor cells the woh repair horahe thee. Filhal repairing ki speed kam thi par ek khushi thi ke woh ladka bach gaya aur unka formula successfull raha.​

Formula insert kiye hue pure 2 din hogye thee but abhi bhi usko hosh nhi aaya tha yeh dekh kar Sanjana tension mein​

Sanjana: Sanjay isko hosh kyo nhi aaraha hai formula insert kiye hue toh 2 din hogye hai​

Sanjay: Shayad iski body ne formula ko thik se accept nhi kiya hai isiliye iski body aur brain abhi bhi kamzor hai aur isiliye yeh abhi tak behosh hai.​

Sanjana: Toh iski body kab tak formula ko puri tarah accept karegi.​

Sanjay: Yeh kehna mushkil hai 2 hafte bhi lag sakte hai 2 mahine bhi yaa uss jyaada bhi.​

Sanjana yeh sunn thodi tensed toh thi but usne kuch bola nhi.​
Aise hi 1.5 mahine guzar jaate hai but woh ladka abhi bhi behosh hi thaa but uski body se saare ghav bharr gaye thee aur uski body mein pahle ke mukable kaafi changes aaye thee. Ab uske 6 packs abs thee,uske muscles kuch jyaada hi ban gaye thee,uske face mein bhi thode changes hue the,Ab woh aur jyaada attractive hogya thaa. Matlab sidha bola jaaye toh ek complete package of hotness.​

Inn 1.5 mahino mein Sanjana roj usko dekhne aati uske body ko water sponge karti uska khayal rakhti. Aise hi ek din Sanjana uska daily work karne aayi toh dekhti hai uss ladke ko hosh aaraha hai toh usne fauran Sanjay ko bulaya. Sanjay aake usko dekhta hai toh woh hosh mein aaraha tha aur aate hi apne sir ko pakad ke chikne laga. Sanjay usko check karta hai aur usko ek injection de deta hai jisse woh wapas sojaata hai. Phir usko 2 ghante baad hosh aata hai toh ab woh normal thaa.​

Sanjay aur Sanjana usko dekh kar puchte hai ab tumhe kaise feel horaha hai.​

Ladka: Filhal achha feel horaha hai. But aaplog kaun hai aur main yaha pe kya kar raha hu.​

Sanjay: Tum filhal mere ghar mein ho aur yeh hai meri wife Sanjana aur main hu Sanjay. Humlog dono scientist hai. Tumhe shayad yaad hoga aajse 1.5 mahine pahle tumne 2 logo ki jaan bachayi thi aur tumhe goliya lagi thi.​

Ladka: Haa mujhe yaad hai.​

Sanjay: Haa toh hum dono wohi hai. Tumhe goli lagi thi toh hum tumhe hospital le gaye waha pe tumhara treatment hua aur tum pure 1.5 mahine baad aaj hosh mein aaye ho.​

Ladka: Ooo. Thank you meri jaan bachane ke liye.​

Sanjana: Thank You toh humhe tumhe bolna chahiye jaan toh tumne humhari bachayi thi. Waise tumne abhi tak apna naam nhi bataya.​

Ladka: Ji mera naam Aryan Malhotra hai.​

Sanjana: Bahot achha naam hai. Abhi tum aaram karo maim tumhare liye kuch khane ko bana ke laati hu aur uss side restroom hai jaake fresh hojaao aur yaha tumhare liye kuch kapre hai pehen ek bahar aajao.​

Aryan: Ji thik hai.​

Thodi der Aryan fresh hoke jab mirror ke saamne aata hai toh shock hojaata hai apne aap ko dekh kar kyoki uska pura naksha palat hogya tha. Uski body puri change hogyi thi. Muscles,6 packs abs, body ka har ek cut pura clear nazar aaraha thaa. Face bhi thoda change hogya thaa,aankhe thodi si blueish hogyi thi. Yeh sab dekh woh pura shock thaa.​

Jab kaafi der tak woh bahar nhi aaya toh Sanjana usko bulane aati hai toh dekhti hai woh mirror mein khud ko dekh raha hota hai.​

Sanjana: Aise kya dekh rahe ho Aryan yeh tum hi ho.​

Aryan: Ji par yeh sab kaise.​

Sanjana: Tension mat lo sab kuch pata chal jayega pahle chalo khaana khaa lo phir shanti se sab pata lag jaayega.​

Aryan ne bhi jyaada sawaal jawaab nhi kiye aur kapre pehen uske pichhe pichhe chal deta hai.​

Thodi der khana khatam kar sab wapas usi lab mein aajate hai.​

Aryan aane ke saath saath unse ek hi sawal karta hai aakhir yeh sab kya hai.​

So finally aaryan ko hosh aa hi gaya..
lagta hai us formula le chalte Aryan Hercules jaisa ban gaya hai...
Lekin iski aankhein nili kyun.... lal hare bhi to ho sakte the
writer sahab zara batane ki kast karenge ki aankhein nile hi kyun ho gayi... lal ya hare kyun nahi..
Khair let's see what happens next
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Sanjay aur Sanjana pahle usko shanti se baithne ko bolte hai.Aryan shanti se ek jagah baith jaata hai. Phir Sanjay aur Sanjana usko sab kuch bata hai ke kaise usne unki jaan bachayi,kaise woh hospital gaya waha doctor ne kya bola,phir formula,unke bete ke baare mein sab kuch.​

Aryan yeh sab kuch sunn bilkul shock mein thaa usko samaj nhi aaraha tha ke woh kya react kare.​

Kuch der shanti bani rehti hai koi kuch nhi bolta. Phir woh dono bolte hai dekho humhare paas tumhari jaan bachane ke liye aur koi rasta nhi thaa isiliye humlogo ko yeh karna padha. Ab agar tum chaho toh tum apni family ke paas wapas jaa sakte ho hum tumhe nhi rokenge par humhe ek promise karo humlogo ne jo tumpar vishvaas karke yeh formula use kiya hai tum uska kabhi galat istemaal nhi karoge.​

Family ka naam sunn kar Aryan ki aankho mein gussa aur nafrat utar aati hai jisko Sanjay aur Sanjana ne saaf saaf dekh liya thaa.​

Sanjana: Kya family ka naam sunkar tumhari aankho mein itni nafrat aur gussa kyo hai. . Humhe bhi tumhare andar apna khoya hua beta nazar aata hai. Agar chaho toh humse share kar sakte ho.​

Aryan ki aankho mein aansu the toh Sanjana ne aage badh kar unko poch Aryan ko apns gale se laga leti hai. Aryan ko bhi isme maa ki mamta ke sparsh ka aihsaas hota hai toh woh Sanjana ko aur kaske pakad leta hai aur rone lagta hai.​

Thodi der baad woh chup hota hai aur bachpan se lekar unse milne tak ka sabse unko bata deta hai.​

Aryan ki kahani sunn Sanjay aur Sanjana ko bahot dukh hota hai. Woh sochte kaise koi apne bete ke saath aisa kar sakta hai.​

Phir Sanjay usko bolta hai dekho jo hua woh toh hum badal nhi sakte par agar tum chaho toh yaha humhare bete bankar reh sakte ho isse tumhe bhi saath mil jayegaa aur humhe lage ga humhe humara khoya hua beta mil gaya.​

Par main kaise aaplogo ke saath reh sakta hu. Aaplogo ko pareshani hogi.​

Sanjana: Humhe koi pareshani nhi hogi. Maine tumhe pahle dinse hi apna beta mana hai. Aur ab tum yehi rahoge humhara bete ban kar. Main kuch nhi jaanti.​

Aryan unko bahot manata hai par woh nhi maante. Phir aakhir mein Aryan waha unka beta ban ke rehne ke liye maan jaata hai.​

Aise hi aur 1 hafta nikal jaate hai. Ek din Sanjay Aryan ke room mein aata hai toh dekhta hai woh kisi ki photo dekh ke aansu baharaha hota hai. Sanjay usks paas jaake woh photo dekhta hai toh shock hojaata hai. Woh Aryan se puchte hai yeh photo kiski hai toh Aryan bolta hai mere dadaji Mr. Jeet Malhotra ki.​

Sanjay usko jhatt se gale laga leta aur bolta hai tum inke pote ho.​

Aryan: Ji. But kya aap unko jaante hai.​

Sanjay: Bahot achhi tarah se. Mere pitaji aur tumhare dadaji bahot achhe dost thee. Ekbaar mere pitaji ko meri padhai ke liye paiso ki kami hogyi woh mujhe aur padha nhi paate. Par uss waqat tumhare dadaji ne mere pitaji ki paiso se madad ki jiske chalte aaj mein scientist bana. Maine unko dhundne ki bahot koshish ki but woh mile hi nhi​

Phir humlog bhi yaha Mumbai shift hogye aur aaj dekho itne saalo baad unka pota mere saamne khada hai aaj main bahot khush hu.​
Yeh sab jo tum dekh rahe ho naa beta yeh sab tumhare dadaji ke wajah se hi hai​

Agar woh naa hote toh aaj na main scientist ban pata aur naa yeh sab kuch hota.​

Kuch to aisa hua hoga jiske chalte Aryan apne hi pariwar se ab behad nafrat karne laga hai.. shayad iske chalte ghar bhi chhod diya ho.. par khushi ki baat yeh hai ki ab wo akela nahi hai Sanjay aur sanjana ke roop mein mata pita mil gaya hai ushe..
even sabse badi baat to yeh hai ki Sanjay ke pita aur aaryan ke dada ji dost the..
Let's see what happens next
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