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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

Story achhi hai aur aage likhna chahiye

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  • Total voters
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  • Poll closed .

Jaguaar

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Bhai ak bat kahna chahta hu aapko asi lage to hi manna q ki me aapki story ke bis me kus bol nhi sakta qki yadi hm bis me bolenge to jo aapne sosa hai vo edhar udhar ho jayga but ak bhat bhai aap sosiyega bhai ki mujhe lagta hai ki aap story ke jo part hai unke liye photo upload karo bhai to story or mst hogi or dusri bat bhai aapki story bahut mast hai aap use likhte ho tb aap normal tiping me likhte ho to mujhe lagta hai aap use thoda colour ke sath me thode jayda mote word me likhe to padne me jayda aasani hogi

sorry bhai bura lage to so sorry
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ragish7357

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nice update bro................
to bnda business krega or uske liye paisa collect krne k liye underground fight bhi karega...............
chlo dekhte h aage kya hota h.............
 

Jaguaar

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Update 6
Agle subah jaldi uth ke woh ready hota hai woh college ke first day late nhi hona chahta tha. Phir woh nashta karne aata hai. Toh waha Sanjay aur Sanjana ke saath nashta karta hai. Tab Sanjana usse bolti hai tumhare liye ek surprise hai jaldi nashta karo.

Aryan: Kuch bolta nhi. Bas chup chap jaldi jaldi nashta kar leta hai.

Uske baad Sanjay aur Sanjana usse ghar ke garage mein le jaate hai waha usse 1 bike aur 1 car dikhti hai jo bilkul latest model thi.

Sanjana: Kaisa laga surprise.

Aryan: Surprise toh bahot achha hai. But iski kya jarurat thi bike toh already hai mere pass.

Sanjay: Aree toh kya hua. Humne tumhe apna beta maana hai toh kya humlog tumhare liye itna nhi kar sakte. Ab tum hi toh humare liye sabkuch.

Aryan yeh sunn thoda emotinal hojaata hai. Woh undono ko kaske gale laga leta hai.

Woh dono bhi thode emotional hojaate hai. Kuch der baad woh normal hote hai.

Phir Sanjay usse ek smart watch deta hai aur kehta hai.

Sanjay: maine iss car aur bike ko fully modify kardiya hai. Aur tum inko iss watch se access kar sakte ho aur yeh mobile bhi humhe pata hai tumhare pass nhi hai yeh mobile aur watch humesha connect rahega maine isse bhi modify kiya hai. Tum mobile se bhi isse access kar sakte ho.

Aryan: Thank You so much. But yeh sab karne ki kya jarurat thi.

Sanjay: Are bilkul jarurat thi pahli baat tum Dr. Sanjay aur Dr. Sanjana ke bete ho aur dusri baat tum koi normal insaan nhi ho. Aur special logo ke liye special chize.

Aryan: Ek baar phir unko gale laga leta hai.

Phir woh car mein baith jaata hai. Jaise hi woh car mein baith taa car se awaaz aati hai WELCOME ARYAN SIR.

Aryan yeh awaaz sunke shock hota hai toh Sanjay usse bolta hai shock mat ho yeh car se aayi hai. Tum isse voice command de sakte ho aur yeh sirf tumhare orders hi manegi. Same yehi chiz bike mein bhi hai.


Aryan ko aaj bahot khushi horahi hoti hai.

Jab woh car start karta hai tab Sanjay usse bolta hai agar college mein koi bhi problem ho toh sidha trustee ke paas jaana woh mere bhai jaisa hai tumko waha pe koi problem nhi hone dega. Waise maine usko inform kardiya hai.

Aryan: Thik hai main dekh lungaa. Thank You once again.
Yeh bolke woh college ki taraf nikal jaata hai.

Ghar se uske college ka distance 45 mins ke duri pe tha. Abhi time tha isiliye woh aaram se chala rha tha. Phir bhi woh 40 mins mein college aajaata hai aur waha se parking mein jaake car ko park karta hai.

Jab Aryan car leke college mein aata hai tab sab uski Car ko hi dekh rahe hote hai kyoki woh ekdum latest model ki thi shayad kuch din pahle hi launch hui thii.

Phir jab Aryan car se bahar nikalta hai tab sab car chor usko dekh rahe hote hai. College mein sabhi ladkiyon ki nazar sirf Aryan pe thi sab usko ghure jaa rahi thii. Kyoki Aryan lag bhi ekdum kisi Hollywood hero ki tarah thaa. Blue Denim jeans,white t-shirt, white jacket with blue bag.

Aryan time dekhta hai toh abhi class start hone mein 30 mins time thaa isiliye woh Canteen mein chala jaata hai. Waha bhi sab usse ghure jaa rahe thee. Aryan yeh notice karta hai toh woh sochta hai sab usse aise ghur kyo rahe hai kya chehre pe kuch laga hai isiliye woh apne mobile ka front camera on karke dekhta hai toh sab thik thaa. Phir Aryan ignore kar aage badhta hai aur jaake ek table pe baith jaata hai.

Wahi college mein ek ladkiyon ka group aapas mein baat kar rahi thi. ( Inka jyaada kaam nhi hai sivaay 1 ko chor ke isiliye unka naam nhi deraha hu)

G1: Yaar yeh banda kaun hai. Pure college mein iske jaisa koi nhi hoga.

G2: College. Mujhe toh lagta hai pure mumbai mein iske jaisa koi bhi hoga.

G3: Sahi keh rahi hai yaar kitna hot,dashing aur handsome hai.

G4: Chehra dekh kitna masoom hai aue body dekh kitni khatarnaak hai. Kyo Neha sahi bol rahi hu naa.

G1( Neha): Haa yaar ekdum correct. Isko toh main apna bana ke rahungi chahe kuch bhi hojaaye.

G3: Tujhe lagta hai. Tu isse pata legi.

Neha: Neha Kapoor naam hai mera. Jaha pura college mere pichhe pagal hai. Meri ek smile ka diwana hai. Uss Neha se tu yeh puch rahi hai.

Ab toh main isse agar apne pichhe paltu kutte ki tarah naa ghumaya toh mera naam bhi Neha Kapoor nhi.

Neha Kapoor- Maa Baap ki ek lauti beti. Maa janam dete hi guzar gayi. Sauteli maa aur baap ke pyaar ne itna bigaad diya hai ke yeh apne aage kisi ko kuch nhi samajti. Sabhi ko apne pairr ki dhul samajti hai. Duniya ka aisa koi nasha nhi hai jo isne aur iske bhai ne nhi kiya hai yeh dono har bura aur ghatiya kaam saath karte hai bole toh crime in partners. Par inke parents ko inki khabar nhi hai woh inko bahot sareef samajte hai.

Rahul Kapoor- ( Neha's StepBrother) Yeh Neha ko apni sauteli nhi sagi behen maante hai. Aise toh yeh 1 saal chote bade hai par ek dusre ko naam se hi bulate hai. Yeh Neha ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai. Dono bhai behen ne milke pure college mein naajaane kitni ladkiyon ki zindagi barbaad kar ki hai. Kuch ne toh suicide karliya badnaami ke darr se aur kuch ne sehar chorr diya.

Neha apne group ke paas se Aryan ki table pe aati hai aur usse baat karne lagti hai.

Neha: Hi! Kya mein yaha baith sakti hu.

Aryan: Haa sure baithiye naa. Yeh bolke Aryan phir apne mobile mein lag jaata hai.

Neha ko yeh apni beizaati lagti hai. Usse lagta hai college ki sabse sundar ladki iske saamne baithi hai aur yeh apna attitude dikha hai. Usse gussa toh bahot aata hai but woh shant hoti hai

Neha: Kya tum fresher ho. Pahle kabhi dekha nhi iss college mein.

Aryan: Ji haa. Aaj hi mera first day hai. Lagta hai aap Pahle se hi hai iss college mein.

Neha: Haa mein 3rd year mein hu. Btw tumne abhi tak apna naam nhi bataya.

Aryan: Aapne pucha hi nhi. Waise mera naam Aryan Malhotra hai.

Neha: Oh nice name. Waise mera naam Neha hai. Neha Kapoor.

Aryan jaise hi yeh naam sunta hai uske aankho mein gussa utar aata hai uski aankhe gusse se laal hone lagti hai. Usse uske saath hue ghatnaye yaad aane lagti hai. Woh gusse mein mutthi bhinch leta hai.

Phir usse dhyaan aata hai woh college mein hai. Toh usne jaldi hi apni aankhe band kar apne gusse ko shant karta hai hai.

Uske baad woh Neha ko dekhta hai jo apne aap mein hi thii. Aryan ko gussa toh ab bhi aaraha thaa isiliye woh class ka time horaha hai bolke waha se nikal jaata hai.


Neha ko yeh bahot hi shocking lagta hai. Usse yeh dobara apni beizaati lagti hai.
Woh gusse se puri laal hojaati hai. Woh soch leti hai isse toh apna paltu kutta bana ke humesha apne pairo ke nichhe rakhegi.

Isiliye woh waha se uth Rahul ko call karke waha bulati hai phir usse saari baat batati hai. Ab Rahul bhi thehra ulti khopdi ka isiliye woh bhi Neha ka saath dene ki soch leta hai. Aur bolta hai recess mein uski aisi ragging lenge ke woj tumhare pairo meim girr kar maffi mangega.

Aryan waha se uth kar washroom chala jaata hai usko gussa toh abhi bhi bahot aaraha tha aur uski mutthi abhi bhi bani hui thii isiliyr usne gusse mein washroom ke deewar pe ek punch mar diya. Jisse deewar mein waha pe crack aajata hai. Par uske haath ko kuch nhi hota. Ab sab yeh formula ka hi kaam tha.

Kuch der woh wahi reh ke apna gussa thanda kar apni class ke taraf chal deta hai. Jab woh class mein enter karta hai toh puri class full thi bas middle mein aur last mein 1 bench khali tha. Jab woh class mein aata hai toh waha ki saari ladkiyan usko hi tadd rahi thii. Yaha tak ki ladke bhi tadd rahe the par jalan mein. Aryan jaake middle bench pe baith jaata hai jaha pahle se hi ek ladka baitha hua thaa. Aryan waha jaake chup chaap baith jaata aur phir se mobile use karna lagta hai.

Ladka: Hi! Mera naam Yash hai Yash Verma.

Aryan: Hi. Mera naam Aryan hai Aryan Malhotra.

Yash: Tum kaunse School se ho.

Aryan: Main Delhi ke St. Xaviers hu.

Yash: Oo toh tum Delhi ke rehne wale ho. Phir yaha kyo.

Aryan: Haa bachpan se hi Delhi explore kiya hai toh socha ab Mumbai ko explore kiya jaaye. Aur Hasne lagta hai.

Yash: Haste hue. Nice Answer man. So friends.

Aryan: friends.

Aise hi yeh log baate kar rahe the ke professor class mein enter karte hai.

Professor: Good Morning students. Mera naam Kunal Sinha hai main aap logo ka Accounts ka Teacher hu. Toh yeh thaa mera intro. Ab aap ek ek karke apna intro denge. Aaj koi padhai nhi hogi only intro hogaa. Waise aaplogo ko ek baat bata du. Mujhe class mein ekdum proper disipline chahiye kyoki aapsab jaante hai accounts easy subject nhi hai. So agar aap proper concentration se classes attend nhi karenge toh aapka hi loss hogaa. Aur haa class ke andar hi main aaplogo ka teacher hu. Class ke bahar main as a friend hi hu. So don't be panic. And lets start with the first bench right corner.

Aise sab ek ek karke intro dene lagte hai. Jab Aryan ka time aata hai tab sab ladkiyan uske baare mein janne ke liye badi hi utsukta se uski orr dekh rahi hoti hai.

Aryan: Mera naam Aryan Malhotra hai. Main Delhi se hu. 12th mein mera score 96% tha. Mujhe Cricket,football ka bahot shock hai. Bachpan se hi maine Delhi ko explore kiya hai aur ab Mumbai ko explore karna hai isiliye main Mumbai mein aaya hu. Thats all for me.

Kunal Sir: Thank You Aryan. Tumhare marks bahot achhe hai. Aur main yeh chahunga ke tum yaha isse bhi achha perform karo.

Aryan: Yes Sir. I will try my best.

Kunal Sir: Waise body bahot mast banayi hai. Hosake toh humhe kuch tips jarur dena. Yeh bol woh hasne lagte hai. Unke saath class ke kuch students bhi.

Aryan: Sir yeh toh aise hi ban gayi.

Kunal Sir: Chalo achha hai.
Phir Aryan baith jaata hai.

Uske baad Yash apna Intro deta hai. Phir ek ek kar ke sab apna apna intro dete hai. Aur aise hi yeh class khatam hojaati hai.

Next Class off thaa toh saare Students bahar chale jaate hai. Aryan bhi Yash ke saath canteen ki taraf chala jaata hai.

Jab yeh log canteen pahochte hai toh waha seniors freshers ki ragging le rahe thee. Jab Aryan waha aata hai tab Rahul aur Neha apne group ke saath waha kisi ladki ki ragging le rahe thee aur woh ladki dari hui thi aur shayad ro bhi rahi thi. Aryan jab yeh dekhta hai tab waha khade ek student se puchta hai kya hua hai yeh ladki ro kyo rahi hai. Tab woh ladka bolta hai yeh seniors uss ladki ki ragging le rahe hai aur usko uss ladke(Rahul) ko lip to lip kiss karne ko bol rahe hai. Aur woh ladki mana kar rahi hai toh usko dhamka bhi rahe hai isiliye woh dari hui hai aur ro rahi hai.

Jab Aryan uss ladke se puch raha hota hai tab Neha ki nazar uspe padh jaati hai aur woh Rahul ko ishaara karke dikhati hai aur bolti hai yehi hai woh ladka.

Rahul jab yeh dekhta hai toh usko waha bulata hai jaha pe woh ladki khadi thi. Aryan waha jaake khada hojata hai.

Rahul: Chal apna intro de.

Aryan: Kyo tum kya koi Professor ho jo tumko apna intro du. Agar mera intro janna hai toh jab sir class mein ho tab waha aake jaan lena.

Rahul: Tujhe kisi ne sikhaya nhi seniors se kaise baat karte hai. Chal Sorry bol.

Aryan: Sorry my foot.

Rahul ko bahot gussa aata hai. Aur woh apna gussa nikalne ke liye uss ladki ko jo itni der se chup khadi thi usko bolta hai tujhe kitni der pahle bola tha kiss karne hai lekin tune abhi tak nhi kiya isiliye ab tu sirf mujhe hi nhi mere saath khade saare ladko ko kiss karegi.
Phir Aryan se bolta hai aur tu yaha aake meri behen aur uske dosto ke jhoote ko apne jacket se saaf kar.

Ladki yeh sunke apna rona start kar deti hai.

Aryan ko gussa toh bahot aaraha hota hai par woh chup thaa kyoki usne promise kiya tha jab tak jaruri naa tab tak kuch naa karnaa.

Dono ko kuch naa karte dekh Rahul aur bhadak jaata hai isiliye woh apni jagah se uth kar ladki ki taraf aata hai aur ladki kaa haath pakad ke usko apne saath le jaane lagta hai.

Par Aryan ne us ladki ka haath pakad liya ab yeh jaruri tha kyoki ab kisi ladki ke izaat ka sawal thaa.

Rahul yeh dekh Aryan ko bolta hai ladki ka haath chorde. Par Aryan chup chap waise hi khada raha. Ab Rahul ka gussa hadd se jyaada barr gaya tha isiliye usne ladki kaa haath chor Aryan ka coller pakad leta hai.

Aryan: Coller chorr.

Rahul: Nhi chorta. Saala fresher hoke senior se badtameezi aur panga. Bahot hero banne ka shock hai naa aaj saare shock khatam hojayenge tere.

Neha yaha aana aur jo karna hai kar. Main bhi dekhta hu yeh kya karta hai.

Arya yeh naam sunke puri tarah bhadak jaata hai isiliye usne ghuma ke ek thapad diya Rahul ko( puri taqat se nhi warna woh wahi mar jaata )

Rahul sang sang uske pairo ke paas soya hua thaa. Yeh dekh uske saath ke saare ladke dang reh jaate hai. Aur woh bhi Aryan ko marne ke liye aate hai toh kuch der mein woh bhi zameen chaat rahe hote hai.

Tab tak Rahul khada hochuka hota hai. Woh Aryan ke muh pe ek punch marta hai toh uski nazar Neha ki taraf hojaati hai jisse uski aankhe gusse se laal hojaati hai aur woh thoda jorr se ek thapad Rahul laga deta hai jisse woh wahi girr se behosh hojaata hai.

Uske baad Aryan bolta isko leke hospital chale jao zinda hai bas behosh hua hai.

Uske baad woh waha se canteen mein ek table pe baith ke apne liye coffee order karta hai. Yash uske paas aake waha baith ke kehta hai

Yash: Waah bhai kya maara hai tune. Pura Akshay Kumar ka yaad dila diyaa.

Aryan: coffee piyegaa.

Yash: Tu pilayega toh jarur piyungaa.

Aryan: Uske liye bhi coffee order karta hai. Aur dono baate karne lagte hai.

Tabhi woh ladki jiski ragging horahi thi woh waha pe aajati hai aur Aryan ko Thanks kehne lagti hai.

Ladki: Thank You so much. Aaj tumhari wajah se main bach gayi warna main kisi ko muh dikhane ke layak nhi rehti.

Aryan: Aree isme Thanks kaisa yeh toh mera farz thaa. Waise mera naam Aryan Malhotra. Aur yeh Mera Dost Yash Verma.

Yash: Hi.

Ladki: Mera naam Meera hai.

Aryan: Meera ke saath.

Meera: Yeh sunke thoda sad face se main anath hu bachpan se hi anath aashram mein rahi hu.

Aryan: Ohh. I am sorry.

Meera: Aree tum kyo sorry bol rahe ho.

Yash: Aree tum khadi kyo ho baitho naa.

Meera wahi pe chair leke baith jaati hai.

Yash: Waise tum kaunse branch se ho.

Meera: Main business hu. Aur tumlog.

Yash: Humlog bhi wahi se hai. Waise aaj tumhe class meim dekha nhi intro dete waqat.
 
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