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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

Story achhi hai aur aage likhna chahiye

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Aryan ko apne dadaji ke baare mein sunn bahot achha lagta hai. Par woh kuch keh nhi pata. Sanjay bhi yeh samaj jata hai toh woh bolta hai.
Sanjay: Dekho beta jo hogya hai usko toh hum badal nhi sakte. But unki achhi yaadon ke saath humhe apne jivan mein aage badhna chahiye. Tumhare dadaji tumko aisi haalat mein dekh ke khush honge kya. Unko bhi dukh hogaa tumko aise dekh. Isiliye ab dukhi hona chor do aur apne jivan mein aage badho.
Aryan: Ji.
Kuch der chup rehne ke baad Aryan bolta hai. Aap yaha mujhse kuch bolne aaye thee.
Sanjay: Aree haa. Main baton baton mein bhul gaya. Maine yeh puchne aaya thaa tum ab aage kya karna chahte ho. Mera matlab aage ki padhai se thaa.
Aryan: Mujhe business karna hai. So usi ke according mujhe addmission lena chahiye. But mere 12th ka marksheet aur certificate toh Delhi mein hi hoga. Aur shayad ab tak toh result out bhi hogya hoga.
Sanjay: Tum uski chinta mat karo. Delhi mein mera bachpan ka dost rehta hai main usse keh ke tumhare ceriticates yaha pe mangwa leta hu.
Aryan: Ji thik hai. Waise mujhe aapse aur bhi kuch puchna thaa.
Sanjay: Ha ha pucho kya puchna hai.
Aryan: Ji woh aapne bola thaa main ek superhuman ke jaisa hu.
Sanjay: Superhuman ke jaisa nhi tum Superhuman hi ho. Tumhari physical aur mental strength normal logo mukable hadd se bahot jyaada hai.
Aryan: Achha. Toh mujhe aapse ek permission leni thi.
Sanjay: Kaisi permission.
Aryan: Main apni inn shaktiyon ka istemal karna chahta hu.
Sanjay: Par. Agar tumne yeh shaktiyan istemal ki aur agar unlogo ko yeh pata chal gaya toh tumhare liye bahot mushkile aajayengi. Shayad tumhari jaan bhi jaa sakti hai.
Aryan: Ji main janta hu. Par mujhe business karna hai aur uske liye bahot bade amount ki jarurat padhti hai aur isiliye main Underground fight jaha betting hoti hai waha pe apni physical strength istemal kar sakta hu jisse mujhe amount bhi mil jayegaa aur shaktiyon ka use bhi.
Sanjay: Ummh. Thik hai par meri kuch sharte hai. Agar tum woh mante ho toh tum yeh kar sakte ho.
Aryan: Kaisi sharte.
Sanjay: Tum apni inn shaktiyon aur formula ke baare mein kisi ko nhi bataoge. Kabhi apni identity reveal nhi karoge. Apni taqat par ghamand nhi karoge. Kabhi bhi apni shaktiyan khule aam use nhi karoge. Uss formula ke wajah se tumhe gussa bahot jyaada aayega agar gusse mein tumne kisi ko maar diya toh woh wahi pe mar jayega isiliye kabhi bhi kisi jhagre mein nhi padoge jab tak bahot jaruri naa ho. Aur jab bhi apni yeh shaktiyan use karoge tab humesha mask pahen ke hi karoge. Aur ek aakhri shart tumhare business ke liye main bhi kuch amount dunga jiske liye tum mana nhi karoge.
Aryan: Mujhe aapki saari sharte manzur sivaay aakhri wali chor ke.
Sanjay: Kyo. Kya tum humlogo ko apna nhi mante. Jo mana kar rahe ho.
Aryan: Ji nhi aisi baat bilkul nhi hai. Maine aap dono ko pure dil se apna mana hai. Agar aap nhi hote toh shayad aaj main zinda bhi naa hotaa.
Sanjay: Toh bas main kuch nhi jaanta. Waise bhi ab humara tumhare sivaay aur koi nhi hai.
Isiliye tumhe meri saari sharte maani hogi. Warna tum apni shaktiyan use nhi karoge.
Aryan: Ji thik hai. Mujhe aapki yeh shart bhi manzur hai. Par jab mujhe zarurat hogi tab main aapse maang lunga. Tab tak ke liye main apne dum pe sab karungaa.
Sanjay: Thik hai.
Aryan: Achha kya aap kisi aise ko jaante hai jo mujhe fighting skills sikha sakta hai.
Sanjay: Tum chinta mat karo. Kal tumhare teacher tumhare samne honge.
Aryan: Thank You.
Sanjay: Chalo chalke khaana kha lo.
Aise hi woh din guzar jaata hai. Agle din se Aryan har tarah ki fighting skills sikhna start kardeta hai. Jise woh bahot hi achhi tarah se aur jaldi sikhta hai uss formula ki wajah se.
1 hafte baad Aryan ke documents bhi aajate hai aur uska Mumbai ke best Business college mein admission hojata hai kyoki Aryan ne apne school mein Top kiya thaa. Isiliye usse Scholorship bhi mili thi.
Mumbai mein human riots ke wajah se government ne saare schools and colleges band kar diye thee jiske wajah se abhi bhi addmissions chal rahe thee.
Toh Aryan bhi apna Addmission kara leta hai. Aur waha usse pata chalta hai ke classes 10 din ke baad start hongi.
Toh inn 10 dino mein Aryan apni saari fighting skills bahot achhe se sikh leta hai. Uske teachers bhi hairan the. Jo fights sikhne mein kisi insaan ko saalo lag jaate hai wahi Aryan ne woh fights bas kuch hafto mein hi sikh li woh bhi bahot achhe se.
Yeh saari fights sikhne se Aryan ki body jo pahle se hi strong thi woh aur bhi Strong hogyi thi.
Aise hi 10 din ke sham ko Aryan apne liye kuch shopping karne jaata hai kyoki agle din se college start horaha thaa.
Woh shopping karne ek mall mein jaata hai waha woh apne liye thodi shopping karta hai aur Sanjay aur Sanjana ke liye bhi shopping karta hai. Shopping ke baad jab Aryan ghar aaraha hota hai tab achanak uski bike ke saamne ek ladki road cross karte hue galti se uski bike ke saamne aajati hai. Aryan jaldi se break mar deta nhi toh accident pakka thaa. Phir bhi woh ladki ghir jaati hai.
Aryan jaldi se bike se utar kar usko paas jaata hai aur puchta hai
Aryan: Aree aap thik toh hai aapko chott toh nhi lagi.
Ladki: Ji main thik hu. Woh actually thoda jaldi mein thi isiliye road cross karne ke chakar mein galti se aapke bike ke saamne aagyi. Aap thik hai naa.
Aryan: Ji main thik hu. But aap thoda sambhal ke chaliye agar sahi time pe break nhi lagta toh aapko bahot chott lag sakti thii.
Ladki: Ji main dhyaan rakhungi. And I am sorry once again.
Aryan: Koi baat nhi. Agar aapko kahi jaana ho toh boliye main chorr deta hu.
Ladki: Nhi nhi. Main yaha pass mein hi rehti hu main chali jaungi. Aap pareshan naa ho.
Aryan: Achha thik hai.
Yeh bol Aryan apne raaste aur woh Ladki apne raaste nikal jaati hai.
Aryan ghar aakar Sanjay aur Sanjana ko unke liye ki gayi shopping ke shoppers pakda deta hai. Jisse dekh woh bahot khush hote hai.
Uske baad Aryan fresh hoke kuch der apni fight practice karta hai aur dinner karke so jaata hai.
 
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Aryan ko apne dadaji ke baare mein sunn bahot achha lagta hai. Par woh kuch keh nhi pata. Sanjay bhi yeh samaj jata hai toh woh bolta hai.

Sanjay: Dekho beta jo hogya hai usko toh hum badal nhi sakte. But unki achhi yaadon ke saath humhe apne jivan mein aage badhna chahiye. Tumhare dadaji tumko aisi haalat mein dekh ke khush honge kya. Unko bhi dukh hogaa tumko aise dekh. Isiliye ab dukhi hona chor do aur apne jivan mein aage badho.

Aryan: Ji.

Kuch der chup rehne ke baad Aryan bolta hai. Aap yaha mujhse kuch bolne aaye thee.

Sanjay: Aree haa. Main baton baton mein bhul gaya. Maine yeh puchne aaya thaa tum ab aage kya karna chahte ho. Mera matlab aage ki padhai se thaa.

Aryan: Mujhe business karna hai. So usi ke according mujhe addmission lena chahiye. But mere 12th ka marksheet aur certificate toh Delhi mein hi hoga. Aur shayad ab tak toh result out bhi hogya hoga.

Sanjay: Tum uski chinta mat karo. Delhi mein mera bachpan ka dost rehta hai main usse keh ke tumhare ceriticates yaha pe mangwa leta hu.

Aryan: Ji thik hai. Waise mujhe aapse aur bhi kuch puchna thaa.

Sanjay: Ha ha pucho kya puchna hai.

Aryan: Ji woh aapne bola thaa main ek superhuman ke jaisa hu.

Sanjay: Superhuman ke jaisa nhi tum Superhuman hi ho. Tumhari physical aur mental strength normal logo mukable hadd se bahot jyaada hai.

Aryan: Achha. Toh mujhe aapse ek permission leni thi.

Sanjay: Kaisi permission.

Aryan: Main apni inn shaktiyon ka istemal karna chahta hu.

Sanjay: Par. Agar tumne yeh shaktiyan istemal ki aur agar unlogo ko yeh pata chal gaya toh tumhare liye bahot mushkile aajayengi. Shayad tumhari jaan bhi jaa sakti hai.

Aryan: Ji main janta hu. Par mujhe business karna hai aur uske liye bahot bade amount ki jarurat padhti hai aur isiliye main Underground fight jaha betting hoti hai waha pe apni physical strength istemal kar sakta hu jisse mujhe amount bhi mil jayegaa aur shaktiyon ka use bhi.

Sanjay: Ummh. Thik hai par meri kuch sharte hai. Agar tum woh mante ho toh tum yeh kar sakte ho.

Aryan: Kaisi sharte.

Sanjay: Tum apni inn shaktiyon aur formula ke baare mein kisi ko nhi bataoge. Kabhi apni identity reveal nhi karoge. Apni taqat par ghamand nhi karoge. Kabhi bhi apni shaktiyan khule aam use nhi karoge. Uss formula ke wajah se tumhe gussa bahot jyaada aayega agar gusse mein tumne kisi ko maar diya toh woh wahi pe mar jayega isiliye kabhi bhi kisi jhagre mein nhi padoge jab tak bahot jaruri naa ho. Aur jab bhi apni yeh shaktiyan use karoge tab humesha mask pahen ke hi karoge. Aur ek aakhri shart tumhare business ke liye main bhi kuch amount dunga jiske liye tum mana nhi karoge.

Aryan: Mujhe aapki saari sharte manzur sivaay aakhri wali chor ke.

Sanjay: Kyo. Kya tum humlogo ko apna nhi mante. Jo mana kar rahe ho.

Aryan: Ji nhi aisi baat bilkul nhi hai. Maine aap dono ko pure dil se apna mana hai. Agar aap nhi hote toh shayad aaj main zinda bhi naa hotaa.

Sanjay: Toh bas main kuch nhi jaanta. Waise bhi ab humara tumhare sivaay aur koi nhi hai.
Isiliye tumhe meri saari sharte maani hogi. Warna tum apni shaktiyan use nhi karoge.

Aryan: Ji thik hai. Mujhe aapki yeh shart bhi manzur hai. Par jab mujhe zarurat hogi tab main aapse maang lunga. Tab tak ke liye main apne dum pe sab karungaa.

Sanjay: Thik hai.

Aryan: Achha kya aap kisi aise ko jaante hai jo mujhe fighting skills sikha sakta hai.

Sanjay: Tum chinta mat karo. Kal tumhare teacher tumhare samne honge.

Aryan: Thank You.

Sanjay: Chalo chalke khaana kha lo.

Aise hi woh din guzar jaata hai. Agle din se Aryan har tarah ki fighting skills sikhna start kardeta hai. Jise woh bahot hi achhi tarah se aur jaldi sikhta hai uss formula ki wajah se.

1 hafte baad Aryan ke documents bhi aajate hai aur uska Mumbai ke best Business college mein admission hojata hai kyoki Aryan ne apne school mein Top kiya thaa. Isiliye usse Scholorship bhi mili thi.

Mumbai mein human riots ke wajah se government ne saare schools and colleges band kar diye thee jiske wajah se abhi bhi addmissions chal rahe thee.

Toh Aryan bhi apna Addmission kara leta hai. Aur waha usse pata chalta hai ke classes 10 din ke baad start hongi.

Toh inn 10 dino mein Aryan apni saari fighting skills bahot achhe se sikh leta hai. Uske teachers bhi hairan the. Jo fights sikhne mein kisi insaan ko saalo lag jaate hai wahi Aryan ne woh fights bas kuch hafto mein hi sikh li woh bhi bahot achhe se.

Yeh saari fights sikhne se Aryan ki body jo pahle se hi strong thi woh aur bhi Strong hogyi thi.

Aise hi 10 din ke sham ko Aryan apne liye kuch shopping karne jaata hai kyoki agle din se college start horaha thaa.

Woh shopping karne ek mall mein jaata hai waha woh apne liye thodi shopping karta hai aur Sanjay aur Sanjana ke liye bhi shopping karta hai. Shopping ke baad jab Aryan ghar aaraha hota hai tab achanak uski bike ke saamne ek ladki road cross karte hue galti se uski bike ke saamne aajati hai. Aryan jaldi se break mar deta nhi toh accident pakka thaa. Phir bhi woh ladki ghir jaati hai.

Aryan jaldi se bike se utar kar usko paas jaata hai aur puchta hai

Aryan: Aree aap thik toh hai aapko chott toh nhi lagi.

Ladki: Ji main thik hu. Woh actually thoda jaldi mein thi isiliye road cross karne ke chakar mein galti se aapke bike ke saamne aagyi. Aap thik hai naa.

Aryan: Ji main thik hu. But aap thoda sambhal ke chaliye agar sahi time pe break nhi lagta toh aapko bahot chott lag sakti thii.

Ladki: Ji main dhyaan rakhungi. And I am sorry once again.

Aryan: Koi baat nhi. Agar aapko kahi jaana ho toh boliye main chorr deta hu.

Ladki: Nhi nhi. Main yaha pass mein hi rehti hu main chali jaungi. Aap pareshan naa ho.

Aryan: Achha thik hai.

Yeh bol Aryan apne raaste aur woh Ladki apne raaste nikal jaati hai.

Aryan ghar aakar Sanjay aur Sanjana ko unke liye ki gayi shopping ke shoppers pakda deta hai. Jisse dekh woh bahot khush hote hai.

Uske baad Aryan fresh hoke kuch der apni fight practice karta hai aur dinner karke so jaata hai.
उम्दा, शानदार और दिलचस्प कहानी है Jaguaar but I have small request to you that please increase the size of the update
 

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उम्दा, शानदार और दिलचस्प कहानी है Jaguaar but I have small request to you that please increase the size of the update
Thank You. And I am trying to increase the size of update
 

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Update 5
Aryan ko apne dadaji ke baare mein sunn bahot achha lagta hai. Par woh kuch keh nhi pata. Sanjay bhi yeh samaj jata hai toh woh bolta hai.

Sanjay: Dekho beta jo hogya hai usko toh hum badal nhi sakte. But unki achhi yaadon ke saath humhe apne jivan mein aage badhna chahiye. Tumhare dadaji tumko aisi haalat mein dekh ke khush honge kya. Unko bhi dukh hogaa tumko aise dekh. Isiliye ab dukhi hona chor do aur apne jivan mein aage badho.

Aryan: Ji.

Kuch der chup rehne ke baad Aryan bolta hai. Aap yaha mujhse kuch bolne aaye thee.

Sanjay: Aree haa. Main baton baton mein bhul gaya. Maine yeh puchne aaya thaa tum ab aage kya karna chahte ho. Mera matlab aage ki padhai se thaa.

Aryan: Mujhe business karna hai. So usi ke according mujhe addmission lena chahiye. But mere 12th ka marksheet aur certificate toh Delhi mein hi hoga. Aur shayad ab tak toh result out bhi hogya hoga.

Sanjay: Tum uski chinta mat karo. Delhi mein mera bachpan ka dost rehta hai main usse keh ke tumhare ceriticates yaha pe mangwa leta hu.

Aryan: Ji thik hai. Waise mujhe aapse aur bhi kuch puchna thaa.

Sanjay: Ha ha pucho kya puchna hai.

Aryan: Ji woh aapne bola thaa main ek superhuman ke jaisa hu.

Sanjay: Superhuman ke jaisa nhi tum Superhuman hi ho. Tumhari physical aur mental strength normal logo mukable hadd se bahot jyaada hai.

Aryan: Achha. Toh mujhe aapse ek permission leni thi.

Sanjay: Kaisi permission.

Aryan: Main apni inn shaktiyon ka istemal karna chahta hu.

Sanjay: Par. Agar tumne yeh shaktiyan istemal ki aur agar unlogo ko yeh pata chal gaya toh tumhare liye bahot mushkile aajayengi. Shayad tumhari jaan bhi jaa sakti hai.

Aryan: Ji main janta hu. Par mujhe business karna hai aur uske liye bahot bade amount ki jarurat padhti hai aur isiliye main Underground fight jaha betting hoti hai waha pe apni physical strength istemal kar sakta hu jisse mujhe amount bhi mil jayegaa aur shaktiyon ka use bhi.

Sanjay: Ummh. Thik hai par meri kuch sharte hai. Agar tum woh mante ho toh tum yeh kar sakte ho.

Aryan: Kaisi sharte.

Sanjay: Tum apni inn shaktiyon aur formula ke baare mein kisi ko nhi bataoge. Kabhi apni identity reveal nhi karoge. Apni taqat par ghamand nhi karoge. Kabhi bhi apni shaktiyan khule aam use nhi karoge. Uss formula ke wajah se tumhe gussa bahot jyaada aayega agar gusse mein tumne kisi ko maar diya toh woh wahi pe mar jayega isiliye kabhi bhi kisi jhagre mein nhi padoge jab tak bahot jaruri naa ho. Aur jab bhi apni yeh shaktiyan use karoge tab humesha mask pahen ke hi karoge. Aur ek aakhri shart tumhare business ke liye main bhi kuch amount dunga jiske liye tum mana nhi karoge.

Aryan: Mujhe aapki saari sharte manzur sivaay aakhri wali chor ke.

Sanjay: Kyo. Kya tum humlogo ko apna nhi mante. Jo mana kar rahe ho.

Aryan: Ji nhi aisi baat bilkul nhi hai. Maine aap dono ko pure dil se apna mana hai. Agar aap nhi hote toh shayad aaj main zinda bhi naa hotaa.

Sanjay: Toh bas main kuch nhi jaanta. Waise bhi ab humara tumhare sivaay aur koi nhi hai.
Isiliye tumhe meri saari sharte maani hogi. Warna tum apni shaktiyan use nhi karoge.

Aryan: Ji thik hai. Mujhe aapki yeh shart bhi manzur hai. Par jab mujhe zarurat hogi tab main aapse maang lunga. Tab tak ke liye main apne dum pe sab karungaa.

Sanjay: Thik hai.

Aryan: Achha kya aap kisi aise ko jaante hai jo mujhe fighting skills sikha sakta hai.

Sanjay: Tum chinta mat karo. Kal tumhare teacher tumhare samne honge.

Aryan: Thank You.

Sanjay: Chalo chalke khaana kha lo.

Aise hi woh din guzar jaata hai. Agle din se Aryan har tarah ki fighting skills sikhna start kardeta hai. Jise woh bahot hi achhi tarah se aur jaldi sikhta hai uss formula ki wajah se.

1 hafte baad Aryan ke documents bhi aajate hai aur uska Mumbai ke best Business college mein admission hojata hai kyoki Aryan ne apne school mein Top kiya thaa. Isiliye usse Scholorship bhi mili thi.

Mumbai mein human riots ke wajah se government ne saare schools and colleges band kar diye thee jiske wajah se abhi bhi addmissions chal rahe thee.

Toh Aryan bhi apna Addmission kara leta hai. Aur waha usse pata chalta hai ke classes 10 din ke baad start hongi.

Toh inn 10 dino mein Aryan apni saari fighting skills bahot achhe se sikh leta hai. Uske teachers bhi hairan the. Jo fights sikhne mein kisi insaan ko saalo lag jaate hai wahi Aryan ne woh fights bas kuch hafto mein hi sikh li woh bhi bahot achhe se.

Yeh saari fights sikhne se Aryan ki body jo pahle se hi strong thi woh aur bhi Strong hogyi thi.

Aise hi 10 din ke sham ko Aryan apne liye kuch shopping karne jaata hai kyoki agle din se college start horaha thaa.

Woh shopping karne ek mall mein jaata hai waha woh apne liye thodi shopping karta hai aur Sanjay aur Sanjana ke liye bhi shopping karta hai. Shopping ke baad jab Aryan ghar aaraha hota hai tab achanak uski bike ke saamne ek ladki road cross karte hue galti se uski bike ke saamne aajati hai. Aryan jaldi se break mar deta nhi toh accident pakka thaa. Phir bhi woh ladki ghir jaati hai.

Aryan jaldi se bike se utar kar usko paas jaata hai aur puchta hai

Aryan: Aree aap thik toh hai aapko chott toh nhi lagi.

Ladki: Ji main thik hu. Woh actually thoda jaldi mein thi isiliye road cross karne ke chakar mein galti se aapke bike ke saamne aagyi. Aap thik hai naa.

Aryan: Ji main thik hu. But aap thoda sambhal ke chaliye agar sahi time pe break nhi lagta toh aapko bahot chott lag sakti thii.

Ladki: Ji main dhyaan rakhungi. And I am sorry once again.

Aryan: Koi baat nhi. Agar aapko kahi jaana ho toh boliye main chorr deta hu.

Ladki: Nhi nhi. Main yaha pass mein hi rehti hu main chali jaungi. Aap pareshan naa ho.

Aryan: Achha thik hai.

Yeh bol Aryan apne raaste aur woh Ladki apne raaste nikal jaati hai.

Aryan ghar aakar Sanjay aur Sanjana ko unke liye ki gayi shopping ke shoppers pakda deta hai. Jisse dekh woh bahot khush hote hai.

Uske baad Aryan fresh hoke kuch der apni fight practice karta hai aur dinner karke so jaata hai.
good update
 

DARK WOLFKING

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nice update ..ab aryan fight sikh raha hai aur bahut jaldi se sab sikh raha hai us formule ki wajah se ..
aryan ne delhi ke school me top kiya tha aur ab wo business karna chahta hai jiske liye paise undeground fight karke kamayega ....
par ye ladki kaun thi jo bike se takrate takrate bach gayi ...
 
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