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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

Story achhi hai aur aage likhna chahiye

  • Haa

    Votes: 93 96.9%
  • Naa

    Votes: 3 3.1%

  • Total voters
    96
  • Poll closed .

Jaguaar

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Update 4
Sanjay aur Sanjana pahle usko shanti se baithne ko bolte hai.Aryan shanti se ek jagah baith jaata hai. Phir Sanjay aur Sanjana usko sab kuch bata hai ke kaise usne unki jaan bachayi,kaise woh hospital gaya waha doctor ne kya bola,phir formula,unke bete ke baare mein sab kuch.

Aryan yeh sab kuch sunn bilkul shock mein thaa usko samaj nhi aaraha tha ke woh kya react kare.

Kuch der shanti bani rehti hai koi kuch nhi bolta. Phir woh dono bolte hai dekho humhare paas tumhari jaan bachane ke liye aur koi rasta nhi thaa isiliye humlogo ko yeh karna padha. Ab agar tum chaho toh tum apni family ke paas wapas jaa sakte ho hum tumhe nhi rokenge par humhe ek promise karo humlogo ne jo tumpar vishvaas karke yeh formula use kiya hai tum uska kabhi galat istemaal nhi karoge.

Family ka naam sunn kar Aryan ki aankho mein gussa aur nafrat utar aati hai jisko Sanjay aur Sanjana ne saaf saaf dekh liya thaa.

Sanjana: Kya family ka naam sunkar tumhari aankho mein itni nafrat aur gussa kyo hai. . Humhe bhi tumhare andar apna khoya hua beta nazar aata hai. Agar chaho toh humse share kar sakte ho.

Aryan ki aankho mein aansu the toh Sanjana ne aage badh kar unko poch Aryan ko apns gale se laga leti hai. Aryan ko bhi isme maa ki mamta ke sparsh ka aihsaas hota hai toh woh Sanjana ko aur kaske pakad leta hai aur rone lagta hai.

Thodi der baad woh chup hota hai aur bachpan se lekar unse milne tak ka sabse unko bata deta hai.

Aryan ki kahani sunn Sanjay aur Sanjana ko bahot dukh hota hai. Woh sochte kaise koi apne bete ke saath aisa kar sakta hai.

Phir Sanjay usko bolta hai dekho jo hua woh toh hum badal nhi sakte par agar tum chaho toh yaha humhare bete bankar reh sakte ho isse tumhe bhi saath mil jayegaa aur humhe lage ga humhe humara khoya hua beta mil gaya.

Par main kaise aaplogo ke saath reh sakta hu. Aaplogo ko pareshani hogi.

Sanjana: Humhe koi pareshani nhi hogi. Maine tumhe pahle dinse hi apna beta mana hai. Aur ab tum yehi rahoge humhara bete ban kar. Main kuch nhi jaanti.

Aryan unko bahot manata hai par woh nhi maante. Phir aakhir mein Aryan waha unka beta ban ke rehne ke liye maan jaata hai.

Aise hi aur 1 hafta nikal jaate hai. Ek din Sanjay Aryan ke room mein aata hai toh dekhta hai woh kisi ki photo dekh ke aansu baharaha hota hai. Sanjay usks paas jaake woh photo dekhta hai toh shock hojaata hai. Woh Aryan se puchte hai yeh photo kiski hai toh Aryan bolta hai mere dadaji Mr. Jeet Malhotra ki.

Sanjay usko jhatt se gale laga leta aur bolta hai tum inke pote ho.

Aryan: Ji. But kya aap unko jaante hai.

Sanjay: Bahot achhi tarah se. Mere pitaji aur tumhare dadaji bahot achhe dost thee. Ekbaar mere pitaji ko meri padhai ke liye paiso ki kami hogyi woh mujhe aur padha nhi paate. Par uss waqat tumhare dadaji ne mere pitaji ki paiso se madad ki jiske chalte aaj mein scientist bana. Maine unko dhundne ki bahot koshish ki but woh mile hi nhi

Phir humlog bhi yaha Mumbai shift hogye aur aaj dekho itne saalo baad unka pota mere saamne khada hai aaj main bahot khush hu.
Yeh sab jo tum dekh rahe ho naa beta yeh sab tumhare dadaji ke wajah se hi hai

Agar woh naa hote toh aaj na main scientist ban pata aur naa yeh sab kuch hota.
 
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Jaguaar

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super hot update...............?
keep posting...................?
waiting for next...................?
Super update Bhai congratulations bhai

Bs aapse ak hi request hai ki story ko puri jarur karna qki yah par jaydatar story puri nhi hue koi bolte hai ki hme response nhi mila to me aapko ak bat jarur kahunga bhai ki aap aapni story par aapna 💯% denge to readers response bhi dene lagenge
readers response esliye nhi dete ki vo ye story padne lag jate hai fir unko us story se lagav ho jata hai to fir vo story complete nhi hoti to or ye unke sath me 3-4 bar hota hai tb ve bhi upset ho jate hai or response dena band kar dete hai


So sorry bhai bura laga ho to:sorry:
To bro. Mera bhi promice hai me aapki story ka har update padunga like karunga or comments bhi karunga
behatrin update bro...............
aakhir hero ko hosh aa hi gya with a lot's of changes.............
shayad kuch powers bhi aa gyi ho formula ki wjh se
dekhte h scientist couple kya khta h aaryan se is bare m...........

eagerly waiting for next update.............
story complete hogi ya dusri story ki jesa hall hoga writer ji aur update kese karoge aap
nice update ..1.5 month baad hosh aa gaya us ladke ko ..aur us dawa ki wajah se wo kaafi attractive ho gaya hai 😍..

aur usne apna naam aryan malhotra bataya matlab hero ...
dekhte hai sanjay sach batata hai ya nahi aryan ko ..
Nice story

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Jaguaar

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nice update ..aryan ne kya bataya sanjay aur sanjana ko ye abhi pata nahi chala ..
dono aryan ko apna beta banakar rakhte hai ,,aur ab aryan ke dadaji aur sanjay ke pitaji dost the ye bhi pata chal gaya yo sanjay ka aryan ke liye pyar aur badh gaya hoga ..
Thank you
 

Lovingheart

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Intresting Sunjay to hero ke dada ka karazdar nikla katayi mast idea hai re bawa

Par han ek baat ho sakti thi yahan ki hero ka flasgback dikhaya jata yahan pe to best banta fir hero inke sath rehta aur ghar walo sabak sikhane ki sochta bhi

Baki tumne bhi kuch socha hoga mitra so abi dekhte hai kya hota hai age😐
 

Lp143

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Update 4
Sanjay aur Sanjana pahle usko shanti se baithne ko bolte hai.Aryan shanti se ek jagah baith jaata hai. Phir Sanjay aur Sanjana usko sab kuch bata hai ke kaise usne unki jaan bachayi,kaise woh hospital gaya waha doctor ne kya bola,phir formula,unke bete ke baare mein sab kuch.​

Aryan yeh sab kuch sunn bilkul shock mein thaa usko samaj nhi aaraha tha ke woh kya react kare.​

Kuch der shanti bani rehti hai koi kuch nhi bolta. Phir woh dono bolte hai dekho humhare paas tumhari jaan bachane ke liye aur koi rasta nhi thaa isiliye humlogo ko yeh karna padha. Ab agar tum chaho toh tum apni family ke paas wapas jaa sakte ho hum tumhe nhi rokenge par humhe ek promise karo humlogo ne jo tumpar vishvaas karke yeh formula use kiya hai tum uska kabhi galat istemaal nhi karoge.​

Family ka naam sunn kar Aryan ki aankho mein gussa aur nafrat utar aati hai jisko Sanjay aur Sanjana ne saaf saaf dekh liya thaa.​

Sanjana: Kya family ka naam sunkar tumhari aankho mein itni nafrat aur gussa kyo hai. . Humhe bhi tumhare andar apna khoya hua beta nazar aata hai. Agar chaho toh humse share kar sakte ho.​

Aryan ki aankho mein aansu the toh Sanjana ne aage badh kar unko poch Aryan ko apns gale se laga leti hai. Aryan ko bhi isme maa ki mamta ke sparsh ka aihsaas hota hai toh woh Sanjana ko aur kaske pakad leta hai aur rone lagta hai.​

Thodi der baad woh chup hota hai aur bachpan se lekar unse milne tak ka sabse unko bata deta hai.​

Aryan ki kahani sunn Sanjay aur Sanjana ko bahot dukh hota hai. Woh sochte kaise koi apne bete ke saath aisa kar sakta hai.​

Phir Sanjay usko bolta hai dekho jo hua woh toh hum badal nhi sakte par agar tum chaho toh yaha humhare bete bankar reh sakte ho isse tumhe bhi saath mil jayegaa aur humhe lage ga humhe humara khoya hua beta mil gaya.​

Par main kaise aaplogo ke saath reh sakta hu. Aaplogo ko pareshani hogi.​

Sanjana: Humhe koi pareshani nhi hogi. Maine tumhe pahle dinse hi apna beta mana hai. Aur ab tum yehi rahoge humhara bete ban kar. Main kuch nhi jaanti.​

Aryan unko bahot manata hai par woh nhi maante. Phir aakhir mein Aryan waha unka beta ban ke rehne ke liye maan jaata hai.​

Aise hi aur 1 hafta nikal jaate hai. Ek din Sanjay Aryan ke room mein aata hai toh dekhta hai woh kisi ki photo dekh ke aansu baharaha hota hai. Sanjay usks paas jaake woh photo dekhta hai toh shock hojaata hai. Woh Aryan se puchte hai yeh photo kiski hai toh Aryan bolta hai mere dadaji Mr. Jeet Malhotra ki.​

Sanjay usko jhatt se gale laga leta aur bolta hai tum inke pote ho.​

Aryan: Ji. But kya aap unko jaante hai.​

Sanjay: Bahot achhi tarah se. Mere pitaji aur tumhare dadaji bahot achhe dost thee. Ekbaar mere pitaji ko meri padhai ke liye paiso ki kami hogyi woh mujhe aur padha nhi paate. Par uss waqat tumhare dadaji ne mere pitaji ki paiso se madad ki jiske chalte aaj mein scientist bana. Maine unko dhundne ki bahot koshish ki but woh mile hi nhi​

Phir humlog bhi yaha Mumbai shift hogye aur aaj dekho itne saalo baad unka pota mere saamne khada hai aaj main bahot khush hu.​
Yeh sab jo tum dekh rahe ho naa beta yeh sab tumhare dadaji ke wajah se hi hai​

Agar woh naa hote toh aaj na main scientist ban pata aur naa yeh sab kuch hota.​

Super update bhai
 

Jaguaar

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Intresting Sunjay to hero ke dada ka karazdar nikla katayi mast idea hai re bawa

Par han ek baat ho sakti thi yahan ki hero ka flasgback dikhaya jata yahan pe to best banta fir hero inke sath rehta aur ghar walo sabak sikhane ki sochta bhi

Baki tumne bhi kuch socha hoga mitra so abi dekhte hai kya hota hai age😐
Thank You. Hero ka flashback mein abhi time hai
 
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