Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

[Jaguaar]

Update 1​

Ek aadmi Hospital mein operation theatre ke bahar tension mein chakar laga raha tha. Uske saath uske pita bhai aur bhai ki biwi thi. Kyoki uski biwi ot mein thi delivery ke liye. Uss aadmi ka pita kehta hai Vikram tension matlo sab kuch achha hi hogaa. Vikram yeh sunn ek tension mein bhari smile pass karta hai aur phir se chakar lagane lagta hai.​

​

Kuch der baad ot ka door open hota hai aur doctor bahar aakar kehte hai :-​

​

Doctor: Mr. Malhotra mubarak ho aapko beta hua hai.​

​

Yeh news sunte hi sabke chehre mein ek khushi ki lehar aajati hai sab khushi se nachne lagte hai.​

​

Vikram: Doctor meri wife toh thik hai naa.​

Doctor: Ji aapka beta aur apki wife dono bilkul fit hai. Aap thodi der baad unse mil sakte hai.​

Vikram: Thank You Doctor.​

Doctor: Your Welcome and Congratulations.​

Yeh bol doctor waha se chala jata hai. Thodi der baad bachhe aur maa ko cabin mein shift kar dete hai. Phir sabse unse milne cabin mein aate hai.​

​

Sabse pahle sab bachhe se milte jo bagal ke palne mein so raha thaa.​

Uske chehre mein duniya bhar ki masoomiyat thi ek alag sa hi tej thaa.​

Bachhe ko dekh kar sabki aankho mein khushi ke aansu thee.​

​

Uske baad sab Rashmi se milte hai jo bed mein aaram kar rahi thi. Uski aankho mein bhi khushi ke aansu the. Sabkoi usse congratulate kar raha thaa. Vikram uske paas mein uska haath pakar ke baith jata hai aur bolta hai Thank You Rashmi aaj tumne mujhe complete kardiya itna pyaara beta dekar.​

Phir aise hi sablog thodi der maa bete ke paas reh kar cabin ke bahar jaake hospital mein baaki ki formality puri karte hai.​

​

Doctor ne kal tak ke liye maa bete ko observation mein rakh lete hai. Raat ko kisi ek ko rukhne ka kaha jaata hai toh Meenakshi raat ko rukh jaati hai aur baaki sab ghar wapas aajate hai.​

​

Ghar aakar Jeet Malhotra ne apne kul pandit ko phone kar yeh khush khabri di aur apne pote ke naamkaran ke liye ek mahapuja ka aayojan bhi karte hai jo 3 din baad ki thi.​

​

Subah sab wapas hospital jaate hai aur waha se Rashmi aur bachhe ko leke wapas ghar aate hai.​

​

Ghar mein bachhe ko leke Neha ke bagal mein sula dete hai. Neha uss bachhe ko dekhe hi jaa rahi thi. Aur phir apne chote chote haatho se uske haatho ko pakad leti hai jaise agar uska haath chor diya toh woh kahi chala jayega.​

​

Sab Neha ke iss behave ko dekh kar hase jaarahe thee.​

​

Ankit thoda bada hogya thaa woh bhi apne chote bhai ke paas aake uske saath khelne lagta hai.​

​

Jaise hi Ankit ne Neha ka haath apne chote bhai ke haath se hataya waise hi Neha ne rona suru kardiya jaise usse kisine uska khilona chinn liya ho.​

​

Aise hi hasi mazaak mein 3 din guzar jaate hai.​

​

Subah subah Kulpandit mahapuja ki taiyaari kar rahe thee. Rashmi, Meenakshi ,Vikram, Suraj sab unki madad kar rahe the. Wahi ek palne mein bachhe ko sulaya gaya thaa​

Ankit ko Jeet Malhotra ne apne paas rakha thaa.​

​

Neha toh apne chote bhai ke paas hi thi. Usko aisa lag raha thaa agar woh usse durr gayi toh uske bhai ko koi le jayega.​

​

Aise hi 1 ghante ke baad mahapuja khatam hojaati hai. Phir Kulpandit ne Vikram aur Rashmi ko bachhe ke saath hawankund ke saamne baithaya aur uski kundli banane lage. Jaise jaise kundli ban rahi thi waise waise Kulpandit ke facial expression mein bhu badlav aarahe the jo Jeet Malhotra ne dekh liya tha but uss time unhone ne kuch nhi bola.​

​

Kuch der baad Kulpandit bole yeh bachha bahot bhagyashaali hoga,iska dimaag baakiyon ke mukable bahot takatwar hogaa. Yeh jisse bhi mohabbat karega aur toot ke mohabbat karega but yeh jisse ek baar nafrat karle phir uske dil mein uske liye pyaar lana,bharosa lana hadd se jyaada mushkil hogaa phir chahe woh iske kitna bhi close kyo naa ho. Aur iss bachhe ka naam hoga ARYAN.​

​

Bachhe ka naam sabko bahot pasand aata hai. Phir sab ko khaane ke liye baithaya jaata hai.​

​

Khane ke baad Jeet Malhotra Kulpandit se akele mein baat karne ke liye unko apne kamre le jaate hai.​

 

[Jaguaar]

Start karo dost

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Waiting 4 next dhasu update

nice start ....waiting for next update ...
dekhte hai aisa kya hua ki hero sabse nafrat karne laga ..

Update Posted

 

[ragish7357]

Update 1​

Ek aadmi Hospital mein operation theatre ke bahar tension mein chakar laga raha tha. Uske saath uske pita bhai aur bhai ki biwi thi. Kyoki uski biwi ot mein thi delivery ke liye. Uss aadmi ka pita kehta hai Vikram tension matlo sab kuch achha hi hogaa. Vikram yeh sunn ek tension mein bhari smile pass karta hai aur phir se chakar lagane lagta hai.​

Kuch der baad ot ka door open hota hai aur doctor bahar aakar kehte hai :-​

Doctor: Mr. Malhotra mubarak ho aapko beta hua hai.​

Yeh news sunte hi sabke chehre mein ek khushi ki lehar aajati hai sab khushi se nachne lagte hai.​

Vikram: Doctor meri wife toh thik hai naa.​

Doctor: Ji aapka beta aur apki wife dono bilkul fit hai. Aap thodi der baad unse mil sakte hai.​

Vikram: Thank You Doctor.​

Doctor: Your Welcome and Congratulations.​

Yeh bol doctor waha se chala jata hai. Thodi der baad bachhe aur maa ko cabin mein shift kar dete hai. Phir sabse unse milne cabin mein aate hai.​

Sabse pahle sab bachhe se milte jo bagal ke palne mein so raha thaa.​

Uske chehre mein duniya bhar ki masoomiyat thi ek alag sa hi tej thaa.​

Bachhe ko dekh kar sabki aankho mein khushi ke aansu thee.​

Uske baad sab Rashmi se milte hai jo bed mein aaram kar rahi thi. Uski aankho mein bhi khushi ke aansu the. Sabkoi usse congratulate kar raha thaa. Vikram uske paas mein uska haath pakar ke baith jata hai aur bolta hai Thank You Rashmi aaj tumne mujhe complete kardiya itna pyaara beta dekar.​

Phir aise hi sablog thodi der maa bete ke paas reh kar cabin ke bahar jaake hospital mein baaki ki formality puri karte hai.​

Doctor ne kal tak ke liye maa bete ko observation mein rakh lete hai. Raat ko kisi ek ko rukhne ka kaha jaata hai toh Meenakshi raat ko rukh jaati hai aur baaki sab ghar wapas aajate hai.​

Ghar aakar Jeet Malhotra ne apne kul pandit ko phone kar yeh khush khabri di aur apne pote ke naamkaran ke liye ek mahapuja ka aayojan bhi karte hai jo 3 din baad ki thi.​

Subah sab wapas hospital jaate hai aur waha se Rashmi aur bachhe ko leke wapas ghar aate hai.​

Ghar mein bachhe ko leke Neha ke bagal mein sula dete hai. Neha uss bachhe ko dekhe hi jaa rahi thi. Aur phir apne chote chote haatho se uske haatho ko pakad leti hai jaise agar uska haath chor diya toh woh kahi chala jayega.​

Sab Neha ke iss behave ko dekh kar hase jaarahe thee.​

Ankit thoda bada hogya thaa woh bhi apne chote bhai ke paas aake uske saath khelne lagta hai.​

Jaise hi Ankit ne Neha ka haath apne chote bhai ke haath se hataya waise hi Neha ne rona suru kardiya jaise usse kisine uska khilona chinn liya ho.​

Aise hi hasi mazaak mein 3 din guzar jaate hai.​

Subah subah Kulpandit mahapuja ki taiyaari kar rahe thee. Rashmi, Meenakshi ,Vikram, Suraj sab unki madad kar rahe the. Wahi ek palne mein bachhe ko sulaya gaya thaa​

Ankit ko Jeet Malhotra ne apne paas rakha thaa.​

Neha toh apne chote bhai ke paas hi thi. Usko aisa lag raha thaa agar woh usse durr gayi toh uske bhai ko koi le jayega.​

Aise hi 1 ghante ke baad mahapuja khatam hojaati hai. Phir Kulpandit ne Vikram aur Rashmi ko bachhe ke saath hawankund ke saamne baithaya aur uski kundli banane lage. Jaise jaise kundli ban rahi thi waise waise Kulpandit ke facial expression mein bhu badlav aarahe the jo Jeet Malhotra ne dekh liya tha but uss time unhone ne kuch nhi bola.​

Kuch der baad Kulpandit bole yeh bachha bahot bhagyashaali hoga,iska dimaag baakiyon ke mukable bahot takatwar hogaa. Yeh jisse bhi mohabbat karega aur toot ke mohabbat karega but yeh jisse ek baar nafrat karle phir uske dil mein uske liye pyaar lana,bharosa lana hadd se jyaada mushkil hogaa phir chahe woh iske kitna bhi close kyo naa ho. Aur iss bachhe ka naam hoga ARYAN.​

Bachhe ka naam sabko bahot pasand aata hai. Phir sab ko khaane ke liye baithaya jaata hai.​

Khane ke baad Jeet Malhotra Kulpandit se akele mein baat karne ke liye unko apne kamre le jaate hai.​

behatrin update dost..................

hero ka janm ho gya...............

dekhte h ye jeet pandit ji ko konsi ghutti pilane andar lekar gya h.........

 

[Vk248517]

Introduction awesome update hai
Waiting 4 next

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Update 1​

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Ek aadmi Hospital mein operation theatre ke bahar tension mein chakar laga raha tha. Uske saath uske pita bhai aur bhai ki biwi thi. Kyoki uski biwi ot mein thi delivery ke liye. Uss aadmi ka pita kehta hai Vikram tension matlo sab kuch achha hi hogaa. Vikram yeh sunn ek tension mein bhari smile pass karta hai aur phir se chakar lagane lagta hai.​

​

Kuch der baad ot ka door open hota hai aur doctor bahar aakar kehte hai :-​

​

Doctor: Mr. Malhotra mubarak ho aapko beta hua hai.​

​

Yeh news sunte hi sabke chehre mein ek khushi ki lehar aajati hai sab khushi se nachne lagte hai.​

​

Vikram: Doctor meri wife toh thik hai naa.​

Doctor: Ji aapka beta aur apki wife dono bilkul fit hai. Aap thodi der baad unse mil sakte hai.​

Vikram: Thank You Doctor.​

Doctor: Your Welcome and Congratulations.​

Yeh bol doctor waha se chala jata hai. Thodi der baad bachhe aur maa ko cabin mein shift kar dete hai. Phir sabse unse milne cabin mein aate hai.​

​

Sabse pahle sab bachhe se milte jo bagal ke palne mein so raha thaa.​

Uske chehre mein duniya bhar ki masoomiyat thi ek alag sa hi tej thaa.​

Bachhe ko dekh kar sabki aankho mein khushi ke aansu thee.​

​

Uske baad sab Rashmi se milte hai jo bed mein aaram kar rahi thi. Uski aankho mein bhi khushi ke aansu the. Sabkoi usse congratulate kar raha thaa. Vikram uske paas mein uska haath pakar ke baith jata hai aur bolta hai Thank You Rashmi aaj tumne mujhe complete kardiya itna pyaara beta dekar.​

Phir aise hi sablog thodi der maa bete ke paas reh kar cabin ke bahar jaake hospital mein baaki ki formality puri karte hai.​

​

Doctor ne kal tak ke liye maa bete ko observation mein rakh lete hai. Raat ko kisi ek ko rukhne ka kaha jaata hai toh Meenakshi raat ko rukh jaati hai aur baaki sab ghar wapas aajate hai.​

​

Ghar aakar Jeet Malhotra ne apne kul pandit ko phone kar yeh khush khabri di aur apne pote ke naamkaran ke liye ek mahapuja ka aayojan bhi karte hai jo 3 din baad ki thi.​

​

Subah sab wapas hospital jaate hai aur waha se Rashmi aur bachhe ko leke wapas ghar aate hai.​

​

Ghar mein bachhe ko leke Neha ke bagal mein sula dete hai. Neha uss bachhe ko dekhe hi jaa rahi thi. Aur phir apne chote chote haatho se uske haatho ko pakad leti hai jaise agar uska haath chor diya toh woh kahi chala jayega.​

​

Sab Neha ke iss behave ko dekh kar hase jaarahe thee.​

​

Ankit thoda bada hogya thaa woh bhi apne chote bhai ke paas aake uske saath khelne lagta hai.​

​

Jaise hi Ankit ne Neha ka haath apne chote bhai ke haath se hataya waise hi Neha ne rona suru kardiya jaise usse kisine uska khilona chinn liya ho.​

​

Aise hi hasi mazaak mein 3 din guzar jaate hai.​

​

Subah subah Kulpandit mahapuja ki taiyaari kar rahe thee. Rashmi, Meenakshi ,Vikram, Suraj sab unki madad kar rahe the. Wahi ek palne mein bachhe ko sulaya gaya thaa​

Ankit ko Jeet Malhotra ne apne paas rakha thaa.​

​

Neha toh apne chote bhai ke paas hi thi. Usko aisa lag raha thaa agar woh usse durr gayi toh uske bhai ko koi le jayega.​

​

Aise hi 1 ghante ke baad mahapuja khatam hojaati hai. Phir Kulpandit ne Vikram aur Rashmi ko bachhe ke saath hawankund ke saamne baithaya aur uski kundli banane lage. Jaise jaise kundli ban rahi thi waise waise Kulpandit ke facial expression mein bhu badlav aarahe the jo Jeet Malhotra ne dekh liya tha but uss time unhone ne kuch nhi bola.​

​

Kuch der baad Kulpandit bole yeh bachha bahot bhagyashaali hoga,iska dimaag baakiyon ke mukable bahot takatwar hogaa. Yeh jisse bhi mohabbat karega aur toot ke mohabbat karega but yeh jisse ek baar nafrat karle phir uske dil mein uske liye pyaar lana,bharosa lana hadd se jyaada mushkil hogaa phir chahe woh iske kitna bhi close kyo naa ho. Aur iss bachhe ka naam hoga ARYAN.​

​

Bachhe ka naam sabko bahot pasand aata hai. Phir sab ko khaane ke liye baithaya jaata hai.​

​

Khane ke baad Jeet Malhotra Kulpandit se akele mein baat karne ke liye unko apne kamre le jaate hai.​

Awesome update..

 

[Aakash.]

Hello Everyone
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Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.

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[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

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[Jaguaar]

Update aaj raat tak aayega.

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update ..kulpandit kuch to chhipa raha hai aisa laga jeet ko ..
neha to hero ko chhodne ko hi taiyar nahi thi ..
pyar aur nafrat kis had tak karega aryan ye pandit ne bataya ...aur shayad bahut raaz ho hero ki kundali me ..

 

[Jaguaar]

Update 2​

Phir Kulpandit unko batate hai kyo kundli banate waqat unke chehre ke bhaav badal rahe the. Kulpandit ke baat sunne ke baad Jeet Malhotra ke chehre ke bhaav bhi badalne lagte hai. Yeh dekh Kulpandit bolte hai chahe kuch bhi hojaaye aap apne pote ke saath hi rahenge usse galat nhi samjhenge aur naahi aap baakiyon ko yeh baat batayenge kyoki yehi unki niyati hai unko yeh sehna hi padega. Aur isse unko ek sikh bhi milegi. Uske baad Kulpandit chale jaate hai aur Jeet Malhotra tension mein reh jaate hai.​

Kuch din baad Jeet Malhotra apne lawyer ke paas jaake kuch baat karte hai aur unko ek kaam dete hai.​

After 18 Years​

Ek Ladka mumbai ke ek hospital mein zindagi aur maut se ladh raha tha. 3 ghante se OT mein uska operation chal raha tha. Bahar ek aadmi aur aurat aansu bahaye jaa rahe thee. Aurat baar baar bol rahi thi humhari wajah se kisi nirdosh ki aaj yeh halat hai. Kaash woh waha nhi aaya hotaa toh aaj uski aisi halat nhi hoti.​

Aadmi uss Aurat ko sambhalne ki koshish kar raha tha but andar se woh bhi bahot dukhi thaa.​

Kuch der baad doctor OT se bahar aate hai. Aur kehte hai:-​

Doctor: Aap uss ladke ke kya lagte hai​

Aadmi(Thoda soch kar): Woh mera beta hai. Kya ab woh thik hai.​

Doctor: Dekhiye main aapko jhooti tasalli nhi dunga but ab uska bachna naa ke barabar hai. Goli uske dil ke bahot kareeb lagi thi. Humne goli toh nikal di hai but ab uski body mein blood generate nhi horaha hai aur uska jo blood group hai woh bahot hi rare hai. Ab uske bachne ke chances 5% se bhi kam hai I am Sorry.​

Yeh sab sunne ke baad aadmi toh jaise taise khud ko sambhal leta hai but woh Aurat toh behosh hogyi thi.​

Doctor usko check karte hai aur aaram karne ko kehte hai.​

Thodi der baad jab aurat hosh mein aati hai toh phir se rona start kardeti hai. Aadmi usko bolta hai​

Aadmi: Sanjana ab chup hojao. Humlog ab kuch nhi kar sakte.​

Sanjana: Kaise chup hojau Sanjay aaj humari wajah se ek nirdosh ki yeh halat hai. Naa woh humhe bachane aata aur naa uski yeh halat hoti. Yeh bol phir se rona start kardeti hai.​

Phir achanak uske dimaag mein ek idea trigg karta hai toh woh bolti hai​

Sanjana: Sanjay kyo na jiske liye yeh sab horaha hai woh chiz hum isko dede shayad yeh bach jaaye.​

Sanjay: Bachho jaisi baate mat karo Sanjana. Humlog isko jaante tak nhi yeh kaisa ladka hai achha hai ya bura hai agar koi problem hogyi toh sab barbaad hojayegaa.​

Sanjana: Jo ladka bina kisi jaan pehchan ke kisi ajnabi ki madad kare uske liye apne seene mein 4 goliya khaaye uss hisab se isse achha ladka shayad hi koi hoga.​

Sanjay: Thik hai main yeh baat manta hu. But abhi tak humlogo ne woh properly test nhi kiya hai agar kuch garbar hogyi toh.​

Sanjana: Doctor ne toh bolhi diya hai iske bachne ke chances 5% se bhi kam hai. Agar uske baad isko kuch hota hai toh itna dukh nhi hoga. But agar sab thik raha toh yeh bach jayega aur humhara test bhi hojayegaa. Aur shayad humlogo ko humara beta bhi mil jaaye.​

Sanjay: Thik hai main doctor se baat karke isko ghar shift karwane ki koshish karta hu. Tum ghar jaake saari taiyaari dhayan se karo.​

Sanjay Singh- Yeh ek bahot bade scientist hai. Inhone bahot saare research aur experiments kiye hai jinme bahot saare successfull rahe hai. Ab yeh aur inki wife milke human body and brain ke upar ek research and experiment kar rahe hai. Agar yeh success hota hai toh ek human ke body and brain ko kisi bhi normal human ke body and brain se jyaada powerfull bana dega matlab ek tarah se usko super human mein convert kar dega.​

Sanjana Singh- (Wife of Sanjay Singh) yeh bhi ek scientist hai aur apne pati ke saath hi saare kaam karti hai.​

Inke iss research ke baare mein India ke sabse bade terrorist organization ko pata chal jaata hai aur woh iss research ko hatiyane ki koshish karte hai jinme inke ek laute bete ki jaan chali jaati hai. But yeh uss research ko unke haath nhi lagne dete. Phir bhi inke upar aaye din humle hote rehte hai. Aise hi ek humle mein inko ek ladke ne toh bacha liya par ab woh khud zindagi aur maut se ladh raha hai.​

Sanjay Singh Doctor ke baat karke uss ladke ko apne ghar lejaate hai. Ab Sanjay Singh ek jaane maane scientist hai unhe Mumbai mein sab hi jaante hain isiliye unko jyaada mehnat nhi karni padhi.​

Sanjay aur Sanjana uss ladke ko le apne ghar ke underground mein bane laboratory mein chale aate hai. Jaha bade bade machines lage hue the. Matlab Sanjana ne pahle hi sab taiyaariyan kar rakhi thi.​

Sanjay uss ladke ko waha ek bed pe leta deta hai. Aur sab kuch phir se ek baar check kar us ladke haath mein machines se kuch lagata hai aur uske sir mein kuch lagata hai aur aakhir mein uske chest ke paas dhyaan se lagata hai kyoki waha par pahle se hi ghaav the.​

Phir Sanjay computer mein kuch kaam kar uss ladke ke body mein woh research aur Experiment se bane formula ko insert karta hai. Jaise jaise woh formula uske andar jaaraha hota hai waise waise uski body vibrate honi start karti hai. Pure formula insert hone ke kuch der baad uss ladke ki body vibrate honi band kardeti hai aur dheere dheere uski heartbeat bhi band hone lagti hai yeh dekh woh Sanjay aur Sanjana dono ke aankho mein hi aansu aajate hai. Unko lagta hai ki ab yeh ladka nhi bachegaa yaani unki saari koshish aur mehnat barbaad hogyi.​