Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

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Story achhi hai aur aage likhna chahiye

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Jaguaar

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Main yaha pe naya hu. Aur main koi writer bhi nhi hu. Yeh meri pahli story hai jisme kuch aapko copy paste bhi lagega. Par aadhe se jyaada meri imagination ke upar hi hai. Aur agar likhne mein koi galti hojaaye toh maaf kardena.
 

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Kisi insaan ko sabse jyaada pyaar or bharosa apni family ke upar hota hai. Aur uss family ke har members mein bhi beintehaan mohabbat aur bharosa hona chahiye. Lekin agar koi family apne family ke member aur woh bhi sabse khash member ke upar bharosa naa kar uske saath kisi apradhi ki tarah behave kare aur kisi bahar wale ke upar bharosa kare toh kaisa lagega.

Yeh kahani bhi thik aisi hi ek family ki hai jisne apne family member ke upar bharosa naa kar kisi bahar wale ke upar bharosa kiya aur phir uss member ki nafrat ko bardast bhi naa kar sakee.
 
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Introduction
Yeh kahani hai Delhi sehar ke ek jaane maane businessman
Mr. Vikram Malhotra,Malhotra group of companies ke malik ke family ki.
Jeet Malhotra- (Father of Vikram Malhotra) Malhotra group ki neev inhone hi rakhi thi. Filhaal retire hochuke hai. Inke 2 bete hai aur 1 beti hai. Bada beta Vikram aur chota beta Suraj aur beti Supriya. Inki Shaadi hochuki hai.
Vikram jaha bahot hi suljha hua aur shant aadmi hai wahi suraj bahot hi khurafat dimaag wala aadmi hai.
Vikram Malhotra- Ek bahot hi khush mizaaz insaan hai jo apne family ko bahot pyaar karte hai. Inke paas paise ki koi kami nhi hai bahot hi shaan-o-shaukat ki zindagi hai inki.
Rashmi Malhotra- (Wife of Vikram Malhotra) Ek bahot hi suljhi hui aurat hai. Inki duniya inki family hai. Inki aur Vikram ki love marriage hui thi. Aur inka pyaar aaj bhi waisa hi hai jitna pahle thaa,infact aur jyaada badh gaya hai. Yeh ek college mein MBA ki professor hai. Ek businessman ki wife hone ke baad bhi woh college mein lecturer ki job karti hai.
Suraj Malhotra- Yeh bahot hi chalak aur lalchi kisam ka insaan hai. Apne bade bhai se hadd se jyaada nafrat karta hai(Reason baad mein pata chalega)lekin yeh chiz kabhi bhi jahir nhi hone di.
Meenakshi Malhotra- (Wife of Suraj Malhotra) Yeh bhi apne pati ki tarah hi chalak kisam ki aurat hai aur but apne family se pyaar bhi bahot karti hai.
Supriya Khanna- Yeh thodi ghamandi kisam ki aurat hai. Inke pati ka bhi achha khasa business hai. Yeh hero ko sehan nhi kar sakti. Kyoki usse lagta hai uski wajah se uske bachho ki uske maayke mein koi value nhi hai. Mauka milte hi usse nichha dikhane ki koshish karti.
Deepak Khanna- (Husband of Supriya khanna). Yeh achha aadmi hai. Yeh sabse pyaar se peshata hai. Kisi se kabhi koi jhagra nhi. Hero ko pasand karta hai. But apni biwi ki wajah se naapasand karna ka naatak karta hai. Kyoki usse pata hai uske bachhe hi nalayak hai. Isme hero ki kya galti.
Vikram aur Rashmi ke 3 bachhe hai :-
1) Ankit Malhotra- Yeh Vikram aur Rashmi ka bada beta. Yeh bilkul apne Chacha ke upar gaya hai. Kyoki yeh bachpan se hi usse jyaada close raha hai isiliye uski sabhi aadat isme bhi hai. Padhai puri hochuki hai aur filhal dikhawe ke liye apne papa ke saath office join kiya hai.
2 ) Neha Malhotra- Yeh Vikram aur Rashmi ki badi beti. Yeh bilkul apne apni Maa ke jaisi hai bilkul uski parchai hai. Apne chote bhai mein iski jaan basti hai. Yeh abhi post graduation ke 2nd year mein hai.
3) Aryan Malhotra(Hero)- Yeh hai Vikram aur Rashmi ka chota beta. Apni family ke har member se beintehaan nafrat karta hai. Pahle aisa nhi thaa but iski zindagi mein ek aisa toofan aaya jisse yeh aisa hogya hai. Yeh abhi post graduation ke 1st year mein hai.
Suraj aur Meenakshi ke 2 bachhe hai :-
1) Raj Malhotra- Yeh Suraj aur Meenakshi ka bada beta. Thoda bewakoof type ka ladka hai. Apna dimaag kam use karta hai. Abhi school mein hai( 9th Standard).
2) Soniya Malhotra- Yeh Suraj aur Meenakshi ki choti beti. Yeh dimaag wali ladki hai. But bahot hi badmaash hai. Isme Aryan ki jaan basti hai. Isko koi bhi kuch bolne se darta hai kyoki isko dukh dena matlab Aryan ko dukh dena hota hai. Yeh bhi Raj ke saath school mein hai same standard.
Deepak aur Supriya ke 2 bachhe hai:-
1) Shivam Khanna- Yeh Deepak ka bada beta. Aryan ke same age mein hai. Yeh bhi apni maa ki soch hi rakhta hai. Galat sangat mein rehta hai isiliye har chiz mein pichhe hai. Yeh bhi apni maa ki tarah Aryan ko pasand nhi karta. Kyoki isko sabkoi usse compare karte hai. Jo isse bilkul pasand nhi.
2) Dipali Khanna: Yeh bhi Deepak ki choti beti. Yeh bhi Aryan ki age ki hai. Yeh padhai mein thik hai. Isse bas apne aap se matlab hai. Aryan se kabhi kabhi baat toh karti hai but thoda rudely apni maa ki wajah se. Yeh log bhi Delhi mein hi rehte hai.
Inka ghar ek 2 floor ka bunglow hai. Jisme nichhe ke floor mein 4 rooms hai aur upar ke floor mein 4 rooms hai.
(Hero ke relation ke respect mein)
Nichhe ke 4 rooms mein se ek room maa papa dusra chacha chachi teesra dadaji ka hai aur last wala guest room hai. Nichhe dining table hai jaha sablog ek saath khana khaate hai.
Upar ke 4 rooms mein se ek Neha ka dusra Ankit ka teesra Aryan ka aur last wala Raj aur Soniya ka hai but Raj usme akela hi sota hai kyoki Soniya ko Aryan ke saath sona hi pasand hai.
 
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