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firefox420

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Hi Enigma Bhai,
Kuchh bolna chahta hoon kuchh jayda bol doon to choto bhai samajh ke maaf kar dijiyega.
Bhai maine xfroum sirf aapki story ko follow kar ne ke liye join kiya tha, haan kuchh soch ke pata nhi kyon abhi tak comment ya replay nhi de paya, aapke itne achhe post hone ke bavjood iske liye aap se mafi chahta hoon.
Jaise ki maine padha ki aap continue nhi karna chahte hain kuchh visesh asamajik tatvon ke karan to iske liye aapse itna hi request karunga ki jaise aapne apne story me Arjun ko sirf positive chijo ko hi important dete dikhaya hai waise hi aap vi sirf unn positive logon par hi dhayan den aur har jagah Lata jaisi/jaisa vi rahta hai jo ki hamesa har chijon me negative khoj hi leta hai, chahe aap unke liye kitna vi kuchh kar de.Haan, main manta hoon iss se bura to lagta hai aur lagna vi chahiye. Lekin unn ke baaton par dhayan deke apne chahne walon ka dil dukhana vi to achha nhi hoga.

Isiliye me aapse itna hi nivedan karunga ki aap vi unn logon ko nazar andaz karke, Arjun jaisa hi sirf positivity ko leke aage badhe.
Bas yahi ek request hai. Aap break lena chahte hain to jarur le ye aapka hak aur adhikar vi hai, lekin chhodne ki na sochen.
Aap ki story kamal ki hai sirf iss story ke liye me din me kam se kam 4-5 iss site par visit karta hoon ye jante huye vi ki aap Tuesday, Thursday aur Saturday ko hi update denge fir vi man nhi manta aur baar baar check karta rahta hoon.
Kuchh din pahle maine padha tha ki aapki story movie ke liye producers se baat chal rahi thi iss ke liye aapko bahut bahut badhai.
Aur aaj ka Update vi kamal ka tha, chahe wo staring ka samndar ka varnan ho ya preeti ke sath masti majak ho ya Arjun ka Romela ke sath modeling ka ho ya komal ke sath chase khelna sab Bahut hi behtreen tha.
Bas itna hi kahunga ki kirpa karke isse aap continue karen aur complete vi karen, kuchh jayda bol diya ho to chhota bhai ya ek abodh prasanshak samajh ke maaf kar dijiyega.

Thank you so much for wonderful story.
Waiting for next.
Hopefully you will consider this request from one of your fan.
Thank you once again.
Bye Good Night Sir.

request accepted .. ab jaldi se REview likhna shuru kar do .. aur update padhte he review post kiya karo .. nahi to punishment milegi :D

waise bolte bada meeta-meeta sa ho .. isse jyaada meeta mat ho jaana .. nahi to apne Enigma bhai ko pyaar ho jaayega ...
 

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Jiska sukshma kann bhi sarvopari ho uska varnan khud Brahma na kar sake aur banane wale Vishwakarma bhi. Til(sesame seed) samaan anu bhi uttam hai tabhi wo Tilottama hai. Jaane kitne he asur us khoobsurti par mohit ho jaan ganwa baithe aur sakhshaat Devraj Indra samet kitne he devgann hansil karne ko bekarar. Tilottama ko pana kisi chahvaan ke vash ka na tha, wo sirf Tilottama swayam nirnaya le ya phir koyi aisa jiske liye wo ek kaam-bhog se badhkar hridya se laga kar rakhne wali preyasi ho.

Vaisakh ka ye samay utna bhi ushmit na tha aur is ekaant kamre me prajwalit halki sunehari roshni jaise yaha upasthit is Tilottama se phoot rahi ho. Gehan shaanti se labrej ye mahol Arjun ki dil ki dhadkan bhi bata deta. Yaha uski maujdgi aaj khaas thi jisme wo ek niranya liye aaya tha. Rekha ka dil bhi samajh chuka tha Arjun ka uddeshya aur pehli baar usko apne bete ke sameep hone par ghabrahat thi. Arjun dwara wo 2 kadam ka fansla poora karte he Rekha ke mehakte badan par asankhya ouns ki boonde ubhar aayi. Ghabrahat ka asar tha ya Arjun ki chahat, parantu spasht tha ki Rekha aaj Arjun ko rokne nahi wali tha.

Wo ghane kamar tak aate baalo ka Arjun ke hatho khulna he Rekha ki aankhen band karwane ke liye bahot tha. Farsh par Arjun ki taraf peeth kiye khadi Rekha ki dhadkan aaj aniyantrit thi. Jald he us mulayam kandhe par Arjun ke tapte hontho ki chhuhan ne is khamoshi ko bhang karke ka kaam kiya.

"Aahh.. Tum jaante ho na iska parniaam kya ho sakta hai.? Ekadhikar chahte ho mujh par?", Rekha ki saansein aaj pehli baar Arjun ke sirf sparsh se he ukhad rahi thi. Sansarg pehle bhi hua tha lekin aaj Arjun unhe paane ki thaan chuka tha. Uske dono majboot hath kamar ko sehlate hue naabhi par aa ruke. Poora jism apne aagosh me liye Arjun un mehakte geele kesho ki sugandh seene me bharne laga.

"Ekadhikar nahi swayam ko saunp raha hu aapke pas. Aapki shoshit aatma agar mere aisa karne se purn hoti hai toh parinaam ki chinta nahi. Main ab aapka hu maa.", Arjun ke aisa kehne par Rekha ne har vichar ko pare kar diye. Beta agar maa ko poshit karna chahta hai toh sath dena swikaar hai. Kesh ek taraf karta Arjun bhi maa ki sehmati paa chuka tha. Makhmali tvacha par rengte honth gardan se gujarte un raktim mulayam gaalo par aa tike. Arjun har divya-ras ki ouns si boond grehan karta us pushpit gaal ko hontho me bharne laga.

Yaha jaise sansar ruk chuk tha. Majboot hath gehri naabhi sehlata us taral samaan sammohak jism ke uthaan tak aa pahucha. Ye samman se khada thos gumbad sa uroj sabske khaas ang tha Rekha ko uttejit karne ka. Panje ke ghere se kahi bada aur pusht stann majboot se dabate hue Arjun ne mohar laga di thi Rekha ke swamitva par.

"Aahhhh.. ", Is maadak siski ki wajah chuchak se chhalakta doodh tha jaha anguthe aur tarjani ka mardan is gulabi-kathai chuchak ko aakar dene lage. Jahir tha ki aaj Arjun apni maa ko bandhanmukt prem safar par le jaane wala tha. Nirantar ek motte ubhar ko masalta wo dusre hath se chehra apni taraf karta un madhbhare hontho ko ras bhi nichodne laga. Arjun ka is tarah adhikar yukt prem pradarshan jaise Rekha ke jism par ye pehla purush sparsh sa tha. Farsh par tapakta doodh aur jivha ras me lipte hontho ne dono ko is kadar uttejit kar dia ki bacha hua vastra ek jhatke me charr ki awaaj karta Rekha ke badan se jameen par ja gira.

"Aaj koyi bandhan nahi maa aur koyi hadd nahi. Ye aapke jiwan ka wahi pratham kshann hai jis se aaj tak aap vanchit rahi.", Rekha ka alokik divya swaroop vastraheen ho kar Arjun ke sammukh tha. Bejod dugdh kalash apni kshamta se adhik bhari hue is shresht yuvak ke chaude seene me dabe the. Balkhati meru (reedh) ke jodd se neeche vyapt wo kalpanik se Kaam-gaagar nitamb masalta Arjun aaj Rekha ke har kann ko apne wajood se bharna chahta tha. Itni jor se un matke se kulho ka mardan pehle na hua tha. Mulayam rubber se dono kulhe masalta hua wo Rekha ke ang-ang ko pulkit karne laga. Swatah Rekha ne he apne hontho ko Arjun se mila diya. Mukhras behta hua hontho tak aa chala toh kuch pal dono alag hote ek dusre ko dekhne lage.

"Tum mujhe is swaroop me swikaar ho Arjun bas ye rishta..", Arjun ne un mrignayano se pehle he jaan liya tha ki wo kya kehne wali hai.

"Ye rishta aapke anusar aur aapke daayre me rahega. Ab main waqt jaya nahi karna chahta, pyaar karna chahta hu.", Agle he pal ghutno par baithte hue Arjun ne jadd se he shuruwaat kar di. Wo chamakdaar bundo se ghiri kamlini si yoni ka sampoorn akaar Arjun ke hontho me bhar gaya. Itni maadak gandh kisi ki na thi jitni Rekha ke youvan se aaj baras rahi thi. Chumban jald he un kesri faanko se kasturi peene me badal gaya. Ek hath nirantar pusht uroj ko masalta aur dusra bhaari golakar kulho ko. Kaamras bahati yoni ka visphot jaise dono ko nihal kar gaya.

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"Aahhhhhh.... umm.... Arjunnnn..", Rekha ne skhallan ke bawjood Arjun ko na roka. Uska sar apni yoni par dabati jaise wo khud aaj is safar ke har pal ko jeena chahti thi, pagalpan ki hadd se pare. Uttejjana kam hone ki jagah badhne lagi toh apna dusra stann wo khud he dabane lagi. Tapakta doodh Arjun ke chehre par girne laga. Yaha samay se pare ho raha tha sabkuch. Unnat jaangho ko choom kar Arjun khada hua toh Rekha ne mukt prem par apni pehal kari. Tarasha hua jism alag he madakta se niche hua aur Arjun ki kamar se vastra sarkata jameen tak le gaya.

"Aap..", Arjun kuch kehta us se pehle he Rekha ne wo lehrata hua ashwa-ling majbooti se pakadte hue naa me sar hila diya.

"Pyaar ektarfa nahi hota jab dono sehmat ho. Khud ko saunp chuke ho na? Toh sawaal nahi.", Aaj apni maa ke hatho me khud ka ling dekh Arjun bhi chakit tha. Itni uttejjana aur sukh jaise pehli baar tha. Apni kshamta se kahi jyada vishaal akaar liye wo ang Rekha ke hatho me kahi jyada machal raha tha. Laal dehakta supada ujagar hote he Rekha ne apne honth chipka diye. Is halke chumban ne Arjun ko ehsaas karwa diya tha maa ke samarpan ka. Jald he wo zero ke bulb sa motta spada un laal hontho se gujarta garam mukh me aa ruka.

"Aaahhh.. maa... ummm.. araam se.", Maje ki inteha se Arjun ki aankhen band ho chuki thi lekin Rekha ke liye toh jaise aaj pehli prem-pariksha thi. Honth buri tarah faile us kalai se motte ling par jald he hilne lage. Naram jeebh ki ragad supade ko aur aanandit karne lagi, akaar mooh ke andar phoolne laga. Jald he aadhi lambai mooh me samaye Rekha ne mukh-maithun ki raftar badha di. Halak me lagne ke bawjood wo Arjun ko uttejjana ke shikar par le jaati rahi.

"Basss...", Arjun ne maa ka sar pakadte hue khud ko peeche kheench liya. Mukhras me buri tarah bheega supada madhyam roshni me kohinoor sa chamak raha tha. Arjun ne maa ki dono golakar naram baahen pakadte hue sammukh khada kar liya. Chuchak bhi doodh bahate dono ubharo ko bhigo chuke the aur ab Arjun antim kadam lene chala tha. Maa ke bheege hontho ko buri tarah choomta wo unhe baahon me bhare is bister par chala aaya. Rekha ne bhi khud ko Arjun ke niche kaaleen sa bichate hue dono gudaaj jaange faila li.

"Aap tayaar hai na?", Chumban rok kar Arjun ne itna he kaha tha aur Rekha ne uske dono panje apne dugdh kalasho par jama diye.

"Aaj se jyada tayaar toh kabhi na thi. Aaj wo sukh do Arjun ki savera mujhe meri ye pehli raat bataye.", Rekha ke itna kehte he dono ke honth punah chipak gaye. Dono motte ubharo ko masalte hue Arjun ne jaangho ke beech apne kaam-dand ka dabaav banaya toh Rekha ne he ling thaam kar apni kamlini ke muhane bhida diya. Aaj ling ki motaai bhi Rekha ke jism ki tarah charam par thi. Wo 2 gulaab ki bheegi pattiya bhi jaise sihar uthi thi is dehakte hue supade ke chumban se. Kshann ke sauve hisse me he Arjun ne ek karara vaar kar diya. Taral se bheegi yoni-surang bhi dard se bhar uthi is motaai aur dhakke par.

"Aahhhh..ummm..", Rekha ye ling pehle bhi le chuki thi par aaj jaise prem-dard ka bharpoor ehsaas hua tha. Aadha ling buri tarah se us sahej kar rakhi kasi hui yoni ko cheerta andar ja chuka tha. Arjun ne turant he dusre vaar me samoocha ling pravesh karwate hue garbh tak ka rasta maap liya.

"Mmmm.. aaahhh.", Ye ghuti ghuti si awaaj Rekha ke poora hone ka sandesh tha. Yoni ka andruni maansal naram hissa buri tarah failaye wo bheemkaye ling gehrai tak fans chuka tha. Honth alag karta Arjun bhi ab dono chucho ko masalta ek nipple chusakne laga. Saanse niyantrit hote he Rekha ne kamar ko hilate hue ek siksari bhari.

"Aap sarovottam ho... huhhhh..", Arjun itna kehte he aadhe ling ko bahar kheench kar fir se andar karta hue Rekha ki gardan ka maans hontho me bharne laga. Rekha ke laalima chadhe lambe nakhoon bhi in jordar dhakko se Arjun ki majboot peeth par dhansne lage. Har dumdaar dhakka yoni patal ko jaise udhedne laga tha. Bhaari vrishan (andkosh) nitambho ki darar par takrate aur yoni ras choomte. Kuch he pal me kamre me bas Rekha ki lambi aahen aur kaamras ki mehak bhar chuki thi. Rubber si faili hui yoni ki andruni gulabi rangat laal hoti hui ling ke bahar aate hue sath khinchi aati.

"Aaahhh.. aise he .. ummm.. maahhh.. koi uth jayega.. Arjun..", Rekha awaaj rokna bhi nahi chahti thi aur majboori bhi thi. Is sabse bekhabar Arjun toh jaise apni chahat ke sannidhya me jordar sansarg karta raha. Ab dhakko se bister charmarane ke sath Rekha ke stanno ki bhi bharpoor ragdai hone lagi. 'Thapp-Thapp' ki awaaj kaamras ne badal kar 'Fachh-Fachh' bana di. Har bar supada garbh par lagta aur itne kaamras se guda-dwaar ke sath bister bhi bheegne laga.

"Palat jao aap. aahhh..", Arjun ki awaaj ke bawjood Rekha ko halki pareshani mehsoos hui. yonras se sarobaar ling bahar nikalte he jaise yoni ne gehri saans lete hue bharpoor ras bahar udel diya. Rekha ne himmat karte hue karwat li he thi aur Arjun ne majbooti se wo patli kamar thaam kar pichle hisse ko uncha utha diya. Wo golakar gore bedaag nitambh choomte hue Arjun ne daant gadaye toh Rekha karaah uthi. Arjun aaj sachmuch us par adhikar jata raha tha.

"Ek minute.. abhi matt daalna.. aahh..", Rekha ne chaupaya mudra me he odhne wali chaadar ko khinch kar mooh me daba liya. Arjun ne bhi ishara milte he dono bade kulho ke beech us gulabi ras bahati yoni par ling tikate hue ek bharpoor dhakke se poori gehraai paar kar di. Ubhar kar bahar nikal aayi yoni jaise halka chirr he gai thi. Yaha 2 bejod nar-maada ka jordar milan ab tufaani raftaar chal pada. Arjun samagam karne ke sath sath dono chucho ko dabata maa ki peeth choomne laga. Rekha jaisi anupama ko aaj apne stritva ka purn ehsaas hua tha. Arjun sharir ke sath ab aatma par bhi naam likh chuka.

"Aaahh.. dhire.. kaat matt Arjun. .. aahh.. aisa pyaar.. aahhh.", Apni he baat galat sabit hui Rekha ko Arjun dwara peeth par kaatkne se. Wo us hisse ko halka kaatne ke baad choomne laga toh Rekha jaane kaunsi baar charamsukh prapt karne lagi thi. Bister par doodh ki dhaare idhar udhar barasti aur umas bhadane lagi. Kanak roopi wo gulabi yoni paune ghante ke sansarg aur us vishaal ling se bade 'O' me badal chuki thi. Ashwa-shakti sa Arjun jaise jism ki har urja is pal me lagata avilamb dhakke lagata raha. Bister ke sirhane rakha sajawat ka samaan bikhar chuka tha aur lakdi ke paayo ki chuu chuu ka bhi Arjun par koyi asar na hua.

"Aahhh.. maaaa..", Ab kahi Rekha ke is jordaar sakhallan par Arjun bhi ghode ki tarah hinhinata buri tarah Rekha se lipat gaya. Jadd tak ling fansaye wo reh reh kar hilta hua apne veerya ki aakhiri boond tak garbdwar par udelne laga. Rekha us garam bauchaar se past ho chali thi. Arjun ke alag hote he raktim sooji hui yoni ne sara veerya chaadar par udel diya. Yonimukh ling bahar nikalne ke baad bhi sikke se jyada chauda khulkar safed dhaar bahar nikal raha tha.

Arjun ne barabar leit kar Rekha ko apne seene se laga liya. Na bister ke bheege hone ki parwah thi aur na bikhre hue dono ke kaamras ki. Apne nirvastra majboot jism par apni maa ka phulo sa najuk jism litate hue Arjun unhe bade pyaar se choom raha tha. Hath peeth aur kulho ko sehlate hue saari thakaan mitane lage.

"Aap sirf pyaar karne ke liye bani ho aur mujhe dukh hai ki itne saalo tak aap sirf aur sirf upekshit rahi. Abse aapka poora dhyaan main rakhunga aur apni har pareshani aap mujhse kahengi. Vaada karta hu ki gujra waqt pooch kar aapko kabhi dukhi nahi karunga.", Arjun ne sar ko sehlate hue kaha. Rekha ko aaj Arjun ke upar letna itna bha raha tha ki wo kuch kehna he nahi chahti thi. Arjun ki dhadkan jaise uski khudki he thi. Ye majboot jism is waqt us insaan ka tha jiske sapne vivah se pehle dekhe the. Sirf pyaar aur parwah karne wala ek khoobsurat dil. Aankhen moondne lagi toh Arjun ne fir se yoni ko sehla diya.

"ouch.. abhi aur nahi Arjun.. Aaj ye dard kar rahi hai aur mujhe araam karna hai.",Rekha hamesha pehel bister aur baad me khud ko saaf karti thi. Lekin itni tagdi chudai aur uske baad Arjun ke upar araam karna aaj baaki sab bhula raha tha.

"Pata hai aap abhi aur nahi kar paogi aur main bhi aapke sath araam se sona he chahta hu. Lekin aap naha lo maa aur main bister thik kar deta hu. Subah jawaab nahi de paayengi agar didi ya chachi me se koyi andar chala aaya toh.", Arjun ne dono ke samajik rishtey ki yaad dilai toh Rekha ne uske chaude seene par kohni rakhte hue ek geela chumban diya aur uthne lagi. Arjun ne bhi ek stann ko halke se dabaya toh wo sisak padi.

"aahhh.. inki halat kharaab kar di hai tumne. Doodh piya kam aur giraya jyada hai aaj.. Ye bhi dukh rahe hai aur wo bhi. Saaf chaadar almari se nikal lo tum, main naha kar aati hu.", Rekha bister se utari toh chaal me ladkhadahat dekh Arjun muskura diya. Dono maansal jaanghe thodi failani padd rahi thi.

"Abhi se ye haal hai toh subah tak halat kharab hone wali hai aapki.", Arjun ne kharaab chaadar samet kar store me rakh di aur nayi chaadar bichane laga. Rekha ne wo farsh pe gira hua gown uthaya toh uski halat Arjun ko dikhane lagi.

"Isliye dilwaya tha na tumne ye gown? Aur meri halat chhodo, khud bhi pajama pehan lo pehle."

"Monday ko dilwa dunga dher saare jab aap mere sath market chalogi. Filhal dusra pehan lo koyi bhi.", Rekha ne almari se ek dheela gown nikal kar pehna aur toliya utha kar bathroom ki taraf chali gayi. Arjun sirf pajama pehan kar bister ke beech leit gaya. Raat ka 1 baj chuka tha aur sharir abhi bhi jaise thaka nahi tha. Thode he samay baad uski maa halke geele badan par gown pehne kamre me dakhil hui aur darwaja lagate he Arjun ki baahon me sama gayi.

"Thank you. Umaahhh.", Hamesha Arjun ko apni baah par sulane wali Rekha aaj uski baahon me thi. Sone se pehle dono he halke chumban karte ek dusre ko sehlate rahe aur jald he Rekha sukoon se Arjun ke aagosh me so chuki thi. Tilottma ko uska Divya Nar prapt ho chuka tha itni tapasya ke baad.
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4 baje ghar ka mukhya dwar khulne ki awaaj par Rameshwar ji ke sath sath Narinder ji bhi jaag gaye. Bagal me apne bade bhai ko chain se soya dekh wo muskura kar uthte hue bahar aangan me chale aaye jaha mausam khushnuma tha aur halka andhkaar bhi. Jism jaise prafulit sa ho utha itni pyaar subah dekh. Rameshwar ji bhi paani lauta liya aangan me aaye toh Narinder ko hath panv kholte dekh apne bete par pyaar aa gaya.

"Lagta hai neend atchi poori hui hai tumhari. Waise Shankar bhi is samay tak uth he jata hai, shayad jyada he thakk gaya ho kal.", Kursi par baith kar wo paani peene lage toh Narinder ji farsh par baithte hue unke panje ko halke halke dabane lage, jaisa aksar wo karte the sath hone par.

"Haan atchi neend aayi thi papa aur Banwari mama wali charpayi hai bhi badhiya. Waise Shankar bhi 11 baje so gaya tha mere sath he. Ye Arjun har roj itni jaldi uthta hai kya?"

"Kabhi kabhi toh kambakht is se pehle bhi nikal jata hai aur dil na ho toh 5 baje ghar se nikalta hu jabardasti. Aaj jaldi gaya hai toh nehar ki aur gaya hoga. Uske baad apne gurudev ke pas.", Idhar Kaushalya ji bhi nahane jaane se pehle Narinder ke sar par hath ferte hue gilas aur paani ki bottle pakda gayi. Gilas bharte hue Narinder ji ne jaise aur jaankari leni chahi.

"Wo nehar pe jata hai toh aap usko mana nahi karte? Waise hairani toh mujhe bhi hui thi yaha Aacharya Hans ko dekh kar lekin unki baaton se lagta hai ke Arjun bhi bahot kuch seekh chuka hai adhyatam ke baare me. Bina security ke pehli baar dekha aur wo bhi maa ke hath ki chai peete hue."

"Hahaha.. Meri toh pehchaan bhi bahot chhoti si rahi thi Shastri ji se, passport wala ek kaam tha bas bahot pehle. Phir Arjun ko wo apne aap he mil gaye aur ab vairagi ko jaise naya raag mil gaya Arjun ke roop me. Bahot kuch sikhate rehte hai usko jo shayad main khud bhi nahi sikha pata. Bete ye niswarth moh hai na, is se badhkar kuch nahi. Khair tum log jab nehar me jaate the toh school ki diwar faand kar aur wo bhi kam-umar me sirf masti maarne. Arjun ghadi leke jaata hai aur waha bhi koyi lakshya banaye hue hai. 30 minute tak wo sirf aur sirf abhyaas karega aur aisa karke wo khud ko he nikhaar raha hai."

"Aur kitna nikharega papa? Pehle he aapne usko saand bana diya hai. Inder se 3 inch upar ho gaya aur sharir dekh kar gyarhavi ka kahi se nahi lagta. Waise aaj main bhi club ja raha hu swimming ke liye Inder ke sath. Dekhte hai stamina kitna baaki hai isme.", Shankar ji bhi idhar aate he farsh par tek laga kar pasar gaye. Chai mile bina toh unhone bathroom bhi nahi jana tha.

"Ye le dekh le is doctor ko. 50 ka hone wala hai aur stamina ki baat aise kar raha hai jaise mukabala Arjun se ho.", Rameshwar ji ne hanste hue he aisa kaha tha aur unke sath Inder bhi hansne laga.

"Wo kal ka bacha hai papa jo sharir se bada ho gaya bas. Akele bhaago aur akele jeeto wali zindagi hai aapke laadle ki."

"Rehne de bhai bas kar. Papa sahi keh rahe hai ki mukabla banta he nahi hai. Wo hum dono se aage hai aur ye garv karne wali baat hai. Tu college me national tak boxing khela tha na, 8 kaksha se practice karte hue? Usne bina match abhyas state champion hara diya dedh mahine ki coaching se. Arjun ka gyaan aur kshamta tu behtar jaante hue bhi jaane kyu maanta nahi hai. Ab chhod ye sab aur chai bana ke le aa.", Narinder ke aisa kehne par Shankar nakhre se apne bhai ko dekhne laga.

"Ab thodi na sahab chai banayenge. Wo toh school college me jab lalach hota tha tab makkhan lagata tha ye chai bana kar. Ab baap ki pension se 100 guna jyada kamane wala doctor rasoi me kyu jaane laga.", Ab jhempte hue Shankar uthne he laga toh Komal bitiya ko tray liye aata dekh baith gaya. Sirf 2 cup the kyonki Pandit ji nahane ke baad pooja karke he chai peete the.

"Sahi kehte ho aap papa. Ye Shankar ki baari me pata nahi bholenath ne maa ko kya de diya jo isko kaam he nahi karna padta. Baithe bithaye he sahab ko maa khilati rahi aur ab kaam ke liye bhi darjano hath ghar me hospital me tayaar rehte hai. Waise Komal bhi badi jaldi uth jaati hai.", Chai ka cup Shankar ko dete hue Narinder ne apne bhai se ye kaha tha.

"Waise toh sadhe 4 baje tak bahu uth jaati hai aur Komal bhi. Aaj mehmaan aane wale hai kuch toh jaldi uth gayi hogi. Ab toh baaki bache bhi 5 baje tak uth jaate hai jo 7-8 baje tak uthete the pehle. Chalo Arjun ne sabki aadat toh badli.", Itna bol kar Rameshwar ji toliya aur kapde liye bathroom ki taraf chal diye.

"Sahi hai bhai. Aarti toh waha par college jaane se ghanta pehle uththi thi aur Pinki sadhe 6 baje tak. Yaha dono he 5 baje bister chhod deti hai.", Dono bhai kuch der tak aise he baatein karte rahe jabtak unke pita naha dho kar na aa gaye.

"Jaldi uth kar yahi baithna tha tum dono ne toh so he jaate. Club jana hai toh dono fresh ho kar niklo fir din me kaam bhi hai.", Baap ki jhidki sunte he Shankar ji bahar wale bathroom me aur Narinder ji andar wale ki aur nikal liye.
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"Bhediye (wolf) ko jyadatar log atche se nahi samajhte beta lekin wo ek kahi behtar samajik jeev hai jo sakht niyamo se jiwan-yapan karte hai. Waha jhund 7-8 se lekar 100 tak ka bhi ho sakta hai lekin andekhi kisi ki bhi nahi hoti chahe wo boodha ho ya bacha. Sabse diler aur taqatwar ko is bade pariwar ka mukhiya banaya jata hai jisko sehaj bhasha me shresth ya Alpha kehte hai.", Arjun aaj nehar jaane ki jagah seedh Aacharya ji ke pas he chala aaya tha. Eitwaar ka din tha aur aaj unhe university se paudhe bhi laane the. Samay bahot baaki tha aur dono he guru shishya sunsaan park me geeli doob par nange paanv chalte charcha me lage the.

"Aap bahot jaante hai bhediyo ke baare me dada ji. Mulakaat bhi ki hai kabhi unse?"

"Yellowstone me bhi mulakaat ki hai jaha sabse badi prajati paayi jaati hai aur Siberia me bhi, jaha sabse taqatvar bhediye apne se kahi bade shikari baagh (tiger) ke sath santulan banaye rehte hai. Lekin hum baat yaha kuch aur kar rahe hai."

"Haan aur mujhe bhi lag raha hai ke ye jaruri hai atche se samajhna. Aap bataye jara is Alpha ke baare me.", Arjun bhi utsuk tha kyonki ye jeev usne sirf television par dekha tha kuch kitabo me. Lekin jeev vigyaan abhi bhi jyada nahi tatola tha.

"Baad kar rahe the unke samajik jiwan ki bete. Alpha sirf taqatwar he nahi hota, wo hamesha he sabke liye rasta banata hai, shikar par bhi pehla aakraman wahi karta hai aur jitne bhi boodhe sadasya hote hai unko pura maan-samman diya jata hai. Wo hamesha aisi rann-niti ka upyog karte hai shikar ke waqt jis se koyi sadasya ghayal na ho. Tum kuch waisi he sthiti me ho kyonki ek bhara poora pariwar hai tumhara lekin Alpha tabhi bann sakte ho jab tumhe gharelu, samajik aur rann-niti ka poora gyaan ho jaye."

"Main Alpha kyu banunga dada ji. Papa aur chacha mere se pehle hai toh sahi."

"Hahaha.. kabhi kabhi na tum badi he bachkani baatein bhi kar dete ho. Pandit ji ke hisaab se tumhi ekmatra vyakti ho jisko har tarah ki jaankari hai aur aane wale waqt me pariwar ko banaye rakh sakte ho. Shankar ek majboot vyakti hai Inder ki tarah lekin gharelu aur samajik jiwan me taalmel nahi hai jaisa Pandit ji ka hai. Rajkumar ek behad he saral insaan hai jo seedhi lakeer par chalne me vishwas rakhta hai. Wapis bhediyo par aate hai hum."

"Thik hai jara milaye hamare taar toh main bhi samjhu.", Arjun ne hanste hue kaha toh Aacharya ji ne kandhe par hath rakh diya.

"Bhediye ke shaavak pariwar me he bade hote hai aur dusri badi maadaye bhi unka waisa he khayal rakhti hai jaisa taai-chaachi ya bua. Ye mahol banane wala bhi Alpha he hota hai jis wajah se jhund ka chhota aur bada hona pata chalta hai. Phir baat aati hai shikar ki toh sabse pehle shaavak wali maadaye, boodhe aur fir taqatwar jawaan bhojan karte hai. Bahar se hone wale hamle jaisa ki Bhalu ya baagh karte he rehte hai bhojan ki kami hone par, usme bhi saamne khada hone wala Alpha he hota hai aur uske peeche uske samaan he taqatwar sadasya. Sahi rann-niti aur bujurgo se jawaan tak ke sath se bhediye 10 me se 5 baar Bhaalu-Baagh ka shikar bhi kar lete hai, jo 5 baar vifal bhi hue toh galat Alpha ki wajah se. Wo thaka kar maarte hai aur mujhe nahi lagta ki tum abhi bhi nahi samjhe hoge.", Aacharya ji ke itne sahi tarike se batane par nasamajh bhi samajh jata tha ye toh fir bhi Arjun tha.

"Hmmm.. Matlab har cheej me sahi sadasya se gyaan lena, grihasthi samajhna, sabko ek-saar pariwar me banaye rakhna aur hamesha khud saamne rehna wo bhi ek niyojit neeti ke sath. Waise kabhi bhediye aapas me bhi ladte hai kya?"

"Bilkul sahi samjhe. All-rounder wo bhi best in every trade. Not like jack of all trades and master in none. Aapas me toh kabhi kabhar jhund ki maada ladd sakti hai lekin dusre jhund ke sath jhagda ho sakta hai ya fir koyi akela bahar se aaye aur davedari thok de Alpha ke liye. Waha fir nirnaya 2-2 hath karke hota hai aur agar Alpha haar jaye toh wo akela chala jata hai sabkuch chhod kar. Bahot kam he aisa hota hai."

"Insaano ke kabile bhi toh aise he hote the na dada ji purane samay me.? Bas waha mukhiya jyada he shaan dikhata tha.", Arjun ka mantavya samajh kar Aacharya ji thoda khull kar hansne lage jis par Arjun jhemp gaya. Wo galti se he aisa bol gaya tha.

"Koyi baat nahi tum jaankari wali baat he kar rahe ho. Aisa bhediyon se seekha gaya tha aur raja ki tarah Alpha bhi raub se he rehta hai bete. Uske bhi kayi sangini hoti hai aur bade pariwar me uska ek alag pramukh pariwar bhi. Alpha ke samkaksh he ek maada bhi hoti hai jo adhiktar janam se sath ho ya pichle Alpha ki bewa. Alpha apne pariwar ki maadaye sath he rakhta hai aur nar bade hone par ya toh joda bana le ya jhund se ja sakte hai pareshani hone par. Hum bahot baad me viksit hue hai Arjun lekin janwaro se seekhne ke baad hum galat insaan ki tulna janwar se karke jyada badi galti karte hai. Wo toh shikshak aur hamare hone ki wajah hai bhala unka apmaan kyu?", Arjun ke palle sabkuch padd gaya tha aur wo Aacharya ji se bhi kahi jyada samajh pa raha tha khud ke charitra ko. Anjaane he sahi wo kuch is dagar par he toh chal raha tha. Lekin saabit karne ke liye bahot waqt tha aur iske liye behtar hona jaruri tha.

"Tum ye waqt apno ke sath vyatit karo bete aur jiwan ka vistaar karne ke liye kuch samay tumhe bahar bhi jana padega. Bas hamesha ye yaad rakhna ki pyaar jiwan ki aatma hai aur sahi fainsle jyada majboot pyaar bhare pariwar ka sach. Aaj is pyaar ne he toh mujhe bhi tumhara bujurg sadasya bana diya hai.", Aacharya ji ne jab khud ko bhi Arjun ke pariwar ka sadasya bataya toh usne apnepan se unka hath thaam liya.

"Insaan viksit ho chuke hai dada ji aur ab toh chhote pariwar me he 2 davedar bann jaate hai shresht ki hodd me. Bahar se khatra barkarar ho aur upar se khud he ghar ke 2 hisse karke apne aap ko lachaar kar lo. Main hamesha mere dada ji ko shresth maanta hu jinhone aisa kuch kabhi mehsoos he nahi hone diya ek bhi vyakti ko. Pichle kuch mahino me dhero pariwar dekhe jaha unhe he sabkuch chahiye aur ya toh apno ko maar gaye, ya khud maare gaye. Pariwar ki ehamiyat samajhte toh apno se haar jaate lekin sabkuch barkaraar rehta. Wo pyaar, taqat, sammaan aur wajood. Maine yahi seekha hai aur mujhe aaj samajh aaya ki Sanjiv bhaiya ne bhi kyu sabkuch mere havale kar diya.", Arjun ab apni baat batane laga tha aur Aacharya ji bade dhyaan se sab sunn rahe the.

"Pehle dada ji ne aisa kiya tha fir daadi ji ne bhi. Bach gaye chacha aur tauji toh unhone bhi sabkuch mere havale kar diya. Kehne ko toh lagta hai ki main sabka maalik bann gaya lekin unhone mujhme wo dekha hoga jo is sampatti aur purvajo ki dharohar ko sambhaal sakta hai. Kabhi dhyaan he nahi gaya ki anjaane he main kab jimmewar bann gaya."

"Ye hai vishwas, prem aur heere ko tarashna. Tumhare sath thik waisa he toh pariwar hai aur sabhi log tumko niswarth majboot insaan ke roop me dekhna chahte hai lekin wo sabhi saath hai tumhare. Isliye toh aaj ye bhediya varnan kiya. Tum apne hunar ko aur nikharo mere bache, kade fainsle bhi liye jaayenge tumhari behtari ke liye jis se aane wale samay me tumhare pita aur dada ji ko maan ho ki unke vishwas aur pyaar ko sammaan dene wala sachmuch ek Alpha hai. Haan wo raja wali baat vyaktigat hai jiska nirnaya vyaktigat hai bas kshamta par farak nahi padna chahiye.", Arjun aaj dusri baar sharmaya tha unki baat par aur aise he halki fulki baatein karte dono wapis ghar ki taraf chal diye. University jaane ke liye car jo chahiye thi.
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"Kya baat hai Rekha aaj bahot alag lag rahi hai tu? Tabiyat thik hai na teri?", Nashta banate hue Lalita ji ne apni devrani ko asehaj roop se chalte dekh kar pooch he liya. Ab Rekha ji kya jawaab deti unhe ki raat ko Arjun ne bister ke sath unka bhi purja purja hila diya. Jaangho ke beech aayi halki soojan ki wajah se toh kachhi pehan na bhi dubhar tha aur khula rakhne par bhi chalne par hoti ragad alag si masti bhar rahi thi.

"Haan maa aur aaj toh aap uthi bhi 5 baje. Tabiyat thik nahi hai toh aap araam kar lijiye, main aur taai ji kar lenge sab kaam.", Komal andar chali aayi thi jo bahar sabko nashta paros rahi thi. Arjun abhi tak nahi aaya tha aur usne apne dada ji ko phone par bata diya tha ki Aacharya ji ke yaha wo paudhe lagwa raha hai.

"Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Tabiyat bilkul thik hai bas jaangh ki nass chadh gayi thi thodi toh iodex laga li."

"Iodex ka asar hai ye? Hahaha.. waha teil maalish karni thi pagli, ye iodex alag he kamaal kar deti hai jara si idhar udhar hui toh.", Lalita ji ke kehne ka tatparya samajhte hue Rekha ji ka chehra jo pehle se he damak raha tha wo gulabi ho gaya. Komal bina kuch bole sharmati hui parathe liye bahar nikal chali.

"Kuch bhi keh deti ho aap didi. Dekho Komal bhi samajh gayi.", Rekha ji khud chulhe ke saamne baithte hue bhi sharma rahi thi lekin hansti hui Lalita ji ne apni devrani ki gardan par bana wo halka sa nishaan dekh he liya. Wo Rekha ko atche se jaanti thi isliye aage kuch nahi boli. Unhe yahi laga ki raat Shankar ne chadhai ki hogi aur utt-pataang mudra banwate hue taang mudd gayi hogi.

"Waise kahi Shankar ne gulabo ki behan par toh vaar nahi kar diya kal raat.?", Ruki wo fir bhi nahi chuhal karne se aur is beech Krishna ji bhi andar chali aayi. Beshak kaam ki manahi thi lekin baith sakti he thi. Rekha ji toh pehle he jhemp rahi thi upar se Krishna jaisi badi behan ke aane par sar jhuka liya.

"Ab ye toh pata nahi ki gulabo par humla hua ya bhoori par lekin kuch girne ki awaaj toh jarur aayi thi.", Ab Krishna ji ne alag he jikar chhed diya tha.

"Aisa kuch bhi nahi hua didi. Raat mere pas Arjun soya tha aur nahane ke baad neend nahi aa rahi thi isliye kitaab padhne lagi. 12 ke baad bas thoda paanv finsal gaya toh bed ke sirhane rakhi alarm ghadi gir gayi thi. Nass bhi tabhi khinchi toh atche se so na saki. Ye toh ab baithak me sote hai isliye bache mere pas sone aa jate hai.", Rekha ji ne aadha sach aur aadha jhooth kaha tha. Wo kisi nayi premika ki tarah apne milan ko chhipa rahi thi aur dono ne sach maan liya.

"Bula lena chahiye tha na Rekha agar itni dikkat hui thi toh. Is Arjun ki khabar toh main leti hu, jo maa ka khayaal tak nahi rakh sakta.", Krishna ji ke aisa kehne par Rekha ji ne apni jethani ki taraf dekha aur jawaab diya.

"Itni raat ko aapko bulane aati toh wo jaag sakta tha aur usko batati toh thik nahi lagta. Wo jiddi hai aur nass galat jagah khinchi thi. Ab araam hai didi. Aap pareshan matt ho. Ye didi bhi maje lene se piche nahi hat-ti.", Rekha ko apni taraf baat ghumate dekh lalita ji dhithai se hansne lagi.

"Rekha teri jagah main hoti toh utha deti petikot Arjun ke saamne. Nass utarne me maahir hai mera Lalla aur wo dard dur kar chuka hai mera pehle bhi. Tu yaad rakhiyo Krishna, kabhi kahi khinch-taan ho jaye toh pasar jaaiyo uske saamne. Bade pyaar se thik karega aur fir kabhi iodex ya doctor vaidh ki jarurat na padne wali.", Lalita ji ki diwarthi baat wo bhi apne bete ke liye sunn kar Rekha toh bas paani ho gayi lekin Krishna ko toh isme bhi maja aa raha tha. Wo padhi likhi hone ke sath he swachhant majaak samajhti thi devrani jethani ka.

"Aur kis se kahungi didi. Arjun ne toh pehle he mujhe aaj zindagi jeena sikha diya hai. Fir petikot uthana ho ya blouse, nass chadhi toh main usko he bulaongi. Inhe toh maine pehle he keh diya ke wo meri dekhbhal kar sakta hai aur karta rahega. Haan ye Rekha aisi he hai jo har baat par gardan jhuka leti hai. Arjun ko aane do main khud he kahungi ki apni maa ki nass utaar jara.", Krishna ke sath Lalita ji bhi joro se hansne lagi thi lekin Kaushalya ji ke aagman par dono he khamosh ho gayi. Rekha aaj pehli baar nav-vadhu si sharma rahi thi jaise suhaagraat ke baad aaj wo fansi ho.

"Dharamvir bhai sahab aane wale hai thodi der me aur unki bahu ke sath Ruchi bitiya bhi hongi. Bhai sahab ke liye Rekha tu jara moong ki daal rakh de aur Krishna tu chal ke nashta le uske baad dava bhi leni hai. Arjun bhi aa gaya hai aur bahar naha raha hai. Rekha kapde deke kaam kar lena.", Aaj toh Arjun ko kapde dene wali baat bhi alag he umang jaga rahi thi Rekha me. Kahi hath pakad kar andar he na kheench le. Phir apni soch par he hansti wo khamoshi se khadi ho gayi.

"Abhi de aati hu maa ji. Didi aap uska nashta lagao phir main daal rakh dungi.", Rekha ki chaal dekhte hue Kaushalya ji ne Lalita ki taraf ishara kiya. Rekha jaise taise savdhani barat kar bahar nikal chali.

"Nass khinch gayi thi Rekha ki maa ji kal raat. Der tak kitaab padh rahi thi aur fir paanv finsal gaya. Awaaj toh Krishna ne bhi suni thi."

"Ab ye bhi girne lagi hai. Dhyaan se rehne ko bol jara isko aur Arjun ko keh dena dawa karwa layega. Shankar Inder toh daud gaye ghar se Richa ka aana sunte he.", Kaushalya ji jisko dhyaan rakhne ka bol rahi thi wo he jimmewar tha. In sabko kaha pata tha ki agar is baar wo Rekha ke kareeb aaya toh wo bister se utne bhi nahi wali.
 
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Desi Addy

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Bahot sahi jawab bhai..
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Kahani Meri hai dost aur narajgi Raja chouhan Bhai se. Tum Kangna Ranaut Bina wajah ban rahe ho. Meri narajgi par kahani beech me chhod du?
Rahi baat famous wali toh naam he enigma hai. Ye prasidhi ka farra daalo apne Gale aur shaant raho.
Wo kahani hafto pehle Maine khud yaha mention ki thi aur interview me bhi Raja ka naam behtareen lekhak ke Roop me liya tha.
Baat hai jaruri kadam uthane ki aur fir aap jaise mahanubhav kisi aur ki Chita par chale aate ho chuddiyan todne.
Dhanyavaad
Ekdum sahi jawab bhai..
Apne political example bhi ekdum sahi diya..
Bina wajah kaise bich mai aakar original problem chodke alag issue paida kar logo ka dhyan kaise bhatkaye isa sahi ex hai ye.
 

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Hi Enigma Bhai,
Kuchh bolna chahta hoon kuchh jayda bol doon to choto bhai samajh ke maaf kar dijiyega.
Bhai maine xfroum sirf aapki story ko follow kar ne ke liye join kiya tha, haan kuchh soch ke pata nhi kyon abhi tak comment ya replay nhi de paya, aapke itne achhe post hone ke bavjood iske liye aap se mafi chahta hoon.
Jaise ki maine padha ki aap continue nhi karna chahte hain kuchh visesh asamajik tatvon ke karan to iske liye aapse itna hi request karunga ki jaise aapne apne story me Arjun ko sirf positive chijo ko hi important dete dikhaya hai waise hi aap vi sirf unn positive logon par hi dhayan den aur har jagah Lata jaisi/jaisa vi rahta hai jo ki hamesa har chijon me negative khoj hi leta hai, chahe aap unke liye kitna vi kuchh kar de.Haan, main manta hoon iss se bura to lagta hai aur lagna vi chahiye. Lekin unn ke baaton par dhayan deke apne chahne walon ka dil dukhana vi to achha nhi hoga.

Isiliye me aapse itna hi nivedan karunga ki aap vi unn logon ko nazar andaz karke, Arjun jaisa hi sirf positivity ko leke aage badhe.
Bas yahi ek request hai. Aap break lena chahte hain to jarur le ye aapka hak aur adhikar vi hai, lekin chhodne ki na sochen.
Aap ki story kamal ki hai sirf iss story ke liye me din me kam se kam 4-5 iss site par visit karta hoon ye jante huye vi ki aap Tuesday, Thursday aur Saturday ko hi update denge fir vi man nhi manta aur baar baar check karta rahta hoon.
Kuchh din pahle maine padha tha ki aapki story movie ke liye producers se baat chal rahi thi iss ke liye aapko bahut bahut badhai.
Aur aaj ka Update vi kamal ka tha, chahe wo staring ka samndar ka varnan ho ya preeti ke sath masti majak ho ya Arjun ka Romela ke sath modeling ka ho ya komal ke sath chase khelna sab Bahut hi behtreen tha.
Bas itna hi kahunga ki kirpa karke isse aap continue karen aur complete vi karen, kuchh jayda bol diya ho to chhota bhai ya ek abodh prasanshak samajh ke maaf kar dijiyega.

Thank you so much for wonderful story.
Waiting for next.
Hopefully you will consider this request from one of your fan.
Thank you once again.
Bye Good Night Sir.
Dekh lijiye Bhai hum hajir hai . Dhanyavaad aapka ?
 

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बहुत अच्छा अपडेट, यह देख कर अच्छा लगा की आपने जो कुछ भी आज हुआ इसका असर कहानी पर नही आने दिया, अब आगे का इंतेज़ार
 

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बहुत अच्छा अपडेट, यह देख कर अच्छा लगा की आपने जो कुछ भी आज हुआ इसका असर कहानी पर नही आने दिया, अब आगे का इंतेज़ार
 

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Dekh lijiye Bhai hum hajir hai . Dhanyavaad aapka ?
YE hazari kabool hui kya nass chadhai hai adbhut likha hai bhai ji.
Aaj to acharya ji ne aage ke liye ran neeti banane amal karne ka gyan diya alpha ke roop me sath me hume bhi gyan mila.
Par shankar ji Bechare kahi na kahi na chahte hue Bhi arjun se pratidwandita pradarshit kar hi dete hai,chalo koi na ye to Alpha hai sabka baap bankar ubharega.
Mangal me dangal ho jaye .
आप की कूची(कलम) का जादू डोल रहा है
जो कभी ना बोला (साइलैंट रिडर) वो बातें तोल रहा है,
क्या कहे उनकी लाचारी और बेबसी को
देखो Xf पर हर कोई एनिगमा-एनिगमा बोल रहा है।
तेरी चाहत का जादू भेद सारे खोल रहा है
देखो गूंगा भी पट पट बोल रहा है।
Love you brother Enigma
Waiting for the next update eagerly.
Sab judo sare matlab saare
@Billi bhai
Tony bhai
@akaa bhai
@fakira bhai
404 bhai
Rajesh bhai.
Sabne Ram Ram.
 
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request accepted .. ab jaldi se REview likhna shuru kar do .. aur update padhte he review post kiya karo .. nahi to punishment milegi :D

waise bolte bada meeta-meeta sa ho .. isse jyaada meeta mat ho jaana .. nahi to apne Enigma bhai ko pyaar ho jaayega ...
Seriously you XLNC motivated in prime manner. Love is more about keeping things stable than uprooting. Thank for this pure class. ❤️?
 
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