Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

[Tony stark]

Dil jeet liya mere bhai. Ek baar maine kaha tha ke Rekha par ungli nahi utha sakte, as a reader. Wo sarthak karta hai aapka ye kehna. Arjun jis Aag me hain usko sirf Rekha samet sakti thi lekin aisa karne par wo galat ho he gayi. Tapasya toot he gayi lekin matratva jo hai wo samaaj nahi banata. Anginat raatein Arjun masoom beta bana raha us seene se lag kar.

Shankar ek premi hai aur unko galat nahi keh sakte. Kadapi nahi.

Munni ka itihaas saamne aayega tabhi pata lagega ke wo Shakuni hai, cleopatra ya fir shravan kumar ka stree-ling

Aur bhai firefox 404 hai toh main ye likh paya. Pata ni ye bhai kaun hai lekin apna he hai. Gajju-Bhole jaise samajh lo ??

Enigma SIR,

MAIN BAS ISI SAWAL KE JAWAB KE INTEZAR ME HOON, AAKHIR KYUN MUNNI AUR BINDU BADLE KI AAG ME JAL RAHI HAIN, BADLE KI AAG ME JALKAR INHONE NE HAR WO CHIJ DAON PE LAGA DI JO INKI HAD ME AATE HAIN

JAHAN TAK MAIN SAMJHA HOON, SHANKAR YA INDAR SE INKA KOI BAIR NAHI HAI, YE DONO BAS EK JARIYA MATRA HI HAIN, ASLI BAIR TO INKA RAMESHWAR JI SE HAI

ATIT ME RAMESHWAR JI NE JANE ANJANE ME AISA KON SA KAND KIYA HAI YE TO AAP HI BATA SAKTE HAIN

SHRAWAN KUMAR KE FEMALE VERSION WALE KATHAN SE MAIN THODA SOCH ME PAD GAYA HOON

BAKI TO AAP HI IS NAIYA KE KHEWANHAAR HAIN....

 

[kari]

Lajwaab hai aapke abhi tak ki is kahani ke nichod se prabhu 404
Jitni samajh har kirdaar ki aapne dikhai hai Firefox bhai shayad he koyi aisa kar sake. Har insaan kisi ek kirdaar ko apna rukh deta hai lekin aapke jawaab me sabhi shamil the wo bhi apne sakratmak-nakratamak paksh ke sath. Main charitra vishleshan par jyada kuch nahi kahunga kyonki mere liye bhi wo sabhi khaas kirdaar hai aur lekhak ke najariye se main pakshpaat karunga toh kahani se wo nyaye nahi kar paunga jo hona chahiye. Yaha bahut baar jikar hota hai 'Hero' ya villain ka lekin mere liye toh Avdhesh Mishra bhi bas ek jaruri kirdaar hai aur kahi nahi kahi kuch ghatnakramo me baaki sabhi bhi samjhenge ki vyakti ki paristhiti, mahol, majburi aur chahat kya kuch karwa jaati hai.

Manjile yu sakaar nahi hoti ye jara ehtiyaatan fir samajh lije
Safar me mom tapakta hai, resha jalta hai bas ek mand lau ke liye

Baat karte hai sabse pehle toh is kahani ke shuruwaati 16 updates ki jaha par main mool kahani me phir se kaam kar raha hu kyonki waha sirf Lalita ji, Arjun ki umar ya kuch charitro ka sahi vishleshan he nahi, nirantarta me bhi sudhaar hona hai. Jaisa ki wo samay aisa tha jab maine pehli baar he kuch likhne ki cheshtha ki thi wo bhi udhedbun me. Khayaal, kahani ka saar, jitna maine bhaag banane aur vistaar karne ka anumaan lagaya wo sab bas pehli he baar ho raha tha. Kalam kabhi chalai thi toh kavitaaye, hasya-ras, laghu-kahaniya ya samajik vyang tak wo simit raha jisme saamne wala aapko kuch keh nahi sakta, jariya kaha hota hai aise lekhan me.

Yaha likhna shuru kiya toh vichar mile, sujhaav aaye, protsahan aur margdarshan bhi mila. 60 updates lage tab samajh aaya ke pyaare ab tum likhna seekh rahe ho, is se pehle toh bas bata rahe the aur mastraam ki chhaya bhar the. Haan ab thoda is cheej ko barkaraar rakho namak ka pata chal gaya hai toh ab masaledani ke sabhi swaad bhi chakho aur anusaar prayog karo. Toh apni he kahani phiri se padhi lekin tab tak jiwan me bahut kuch ghat chuka tha.

Khair wapis aaye toh rooprekha pehle se behtar thi aur ab likhne me jo maja aane laga wo majburi jaisa nahi tha ke jaruri hai bhai, log kya kahenge. Kahani poori karni hai ek target hai. Sab bhool kar khud he kirdaaro se juddna shuru kar diya. Lekin khaamiya abhi bhi bahot hai jo samay milne par he sudhar sakengi.

Ab kuch jaruri tatvo par baat karte hai jinme se sabse pehle hai Rupali ko kya pata hai aur wo uske sath kitna nyaye kiya gaya. Toh filhal wo pariwar me dhal chuki hai aur ab wo behtar hai. Usko parde ke peeche rakhne ka maksad wahi hai ke inka role sahi samay par aayega lekin inhe jaankari bahut hai kyonki baap-beti he toh the bas waha gaanv me.

Umed ka kirdaar manmauji tha lekin 2 bhai marne ke baad aur pita ke sab logo se kinara kar lene par ye bas apne pariwar ko he bachane me lag gaya. Insaan khojbin tab karta hai uske pas wo samay ho aur wo sahuliyat ho. Yaha toh pariwar bikhra so bikhra apni zindagi bhi dusro ke naam ho gayi. Mehnat aur lagan se bas yahi sapna poora karne me lage hai ke wo Swargiya Raghubir Singh ke bete ke taur par khud ko sarthak kar sake. 2 pariwar jo ek hai woh ek rahe, surakshit rahe aur agar mitne ki bhi baari aaye toh sabse pehle goli inhe lage. Umed Singh ka filhal kirdaar aata-jata rahega lekin Bhaag 3 ke 20-22 updates me wo pramukh rehne wale hai, Shankar aur Inder ke sath.

Abhi itihaas bahut baaki hai aur waha ki vistaar se batane laayak kisse bhi toh kahni se us samay ye wala Arjun thoda thoda he dikhai dega. Mera pasandida bhaag wahi hai aur sabhi jade wahi dafan hai. Waha mahol bhi kahi behtar aur rochak rehne wala hai aur jo log 50-60-70 wale dashak se parichit nahi hai unhe jarur kuch naya jaan ne ko milega.

Annu walia ke kisse main jyada nahi khol kar kehta kyonki har baat ya toh kehni nahi chahiye ya fir bacha kar rakh lo baad me kaam aayegi. Waise bhi itna vistaar hua toh main agle 5 saal pyaar 100 bar he likhta milunga aur update honge koyi 1500

Filhaal toh yaha bhasad si machi hui hai aur ye aise he chalne wali bhi hai kuch samay tak lekin Narinder ke aate he yahi Bhole wale Shankar ji apni form me dikhenge, tabhi inke pita ji samjhate rehte hai. Shaadi byaah tak update kahi ek pehar bhi poora le lega toh kahi 4 din ka jiwan ek update me bhi dekhne ko milne wala hai.

Tahe dil se shukriya mere bhai 404 , aap pehle he update se sath ho jaise apne tintin bhaiya, 2-2 iron man, virat kohli bhai aur ye judaav mujhe hamesha prerit bhi kartta hai ki main nirbhik prastut kar saku jo main likhna chahta hu. Visham samay me mujhe toh kuch kehna he nahi pada kyonki aap he logo ne sab sambhala aur mahol barkaraar bhi rakha.

Title ke baare me main bhi ek baat kahunga ki pyaar jo hai wo 100 logo se ek ek baar karke 100 bar nahi ho sakta. haan 100 log pyaar kar sakte hai aur unke jiwan me us pyaar ka kya asar hota hai wo is shirshak ke peeche ka ek chhota sa rehasya hai. Aakhiri update me he iska khulasa karunga aur wo update sabse pehle likha ja chuka

ये १५०० की संख्या कुछ कम प्रतीत होती है अगर ये संख्या १५००० तक भी जाये तो भी कम ही होगा क्योकि जिस प्रकार ये कहानी लिखी जा रही है उससे तो यही प्रतीत होता है। आप बस लिखते जाइये केवल।
विशेष -भाभी श्री और परिवार को समय देने के बाद जो कुछ बचे तो वो हमारे लिए ४-५ पृष्ठों की कड़ियाँ लिखते रहिये और कुछ विशेष इच्छा नहीं है।
धन्यवाद

 

[Krish007]

Enigma SIR,

MAIN BAS ISI SAWAL KE JAWAB KE INTEZAR ME HOON, AAKHIR KYUN MUNNI AUR BINDU BADLE KI AAG ME JAL RAHI HAIN, BADLE KI AAG ME JALKAR INHONE NE HAR WO CHIJ DAON PE LAGA DI JO INKI HAD ME AATE HAIN

JAHAN TAK MAIN SAMJHA HOON, SHANKAR YA INDAR SE INKA KOI BAIR NAHI HAI, YE DONO BAS EK JARIYA MATRA HI HAIN, ASLI BAIR TO INKA RAMESHWAR JI SE HAI

ATIT ME RAMESHWAR JI NE JANE ANJANE ME AISA KON SA KAND KIYA HAI YE TO AAP HI BATA SAKTE HAIN

SHRAWAN KUMAR KE FEMALE VERSION WALE KATHAN SE MAIN THODA SOCH ME PAD GAYA HOON

BAKI TO AAP HI IS NAIYA KE KHEWANHAAR HAIN....

Ha bhai iss kathan se main bhi sehmat hu
Jaisa ki kaha gaya shakuni ya shrawankumar
Dono ki apni kahani hai
Jaise shakuni ne hastinapur ka vinaash karne ki kasam khayi thi kyoki shaktishali hastinapur ke kul se darkar gandhari ke pita ne gandhari ki vivah andhe dhritarashtr se kiya isase aahat hoke shakuni ne hastinapur pur ki sarvanaash ki kasam khayi
Jaise munni ka bhutkaal issi unhoni ki aur koi ishara nahi kyoki yeh baat itani to nahi ho sakti ki sirf shankar se shadi na ho saki isiliye pure pariwarcse badla
Rameshwar ji yahi wo shaqs hai isane siddhant ya apne saral karya kiya ho aur usase munni ka pariwar aahat hua ho aur wo sidhe to shakuni ki tarha war nahi kar sakti issiliy aaps me matbhed bana ke chaaale chal rahi hai

Dusra pahilu shrawankumar
Yeh meri dimag upaj ki upaj yeh kehti hai shrawankumar to matr pitru bhakt tha yeh kaise ho sakta jo aurat apne maksad ke liye apne pita ishwar singh ko raste se hata sakti hai wo kaise shrawankumar hui
Aisa bhi ho ki wo ishwar ki beti ho hi na ya ki wo goad li ho ya ishawar ki dusri shadi ho
Ya jis tarh iska lagav bindiya se hai usase yeh lagta hai ki wo uski apni koi ho shayad bahan
Indono ne Apne jiwan ka yeh maqsad bana hai ki sharma pariwar ka ant to shayd inke mata pita ke sath koi ghatna ghatit hui
Jisme inko lagta sharma pariwar inki iss barbadi ki wajah hai
Yeh sirf tukka ?
Iss par aapki pratikriya chahate engima bhai...

 

[Sonia]

Can anyone tell the update no jisme arjun ne state champion ko haraya tha rameshwarji ke samne

 

[Sonia]

Can anyone tell the update no. Jisme arjun ne state champion ko haraya tha

 

[Mahesh007]

Enigma sir kahani ke prati mat bhed ka swagat he lakin man bhed ek galat sandesh he jo bisay se bhatkate he aur kahani ko prabhit karte he
Kahani mat bhed se aur bhi sundar ho ti he
Lakin jab man bhed peda hone lage to chahne balo me hi ulajh kar rah jaye gi to ye sab nahi hona hi thik he
Kisi prati kadba bolna mujhe pasand nahi
Hum ko sirf aap se matlab he aur aap ki kahani se

 

[Nano]

Enigma SIR,

MAIN BAS ISI SAWAL KE JAWAB KE INTEZAR ME HOON, AAKHIR KYUN MUNNI AUR BINDU BADLE KI AAG ME JAL RAHI HAIN, BADLE KI AAG ME JALKAR INHONE NE HAR WO CHIJ DAON PE LAGA DI JO INKI HAD ME AATE HAIN

JAHAN TAK MAIN SAMJHA HOON, SHANKAR YA INDAR SE INKA KOI BAIR NAHI HAI, YE DONO BAS EK JARIYA MATRA HI HAIN, ASLI BAIR TO INKA RAMESHWAR JI SE HAI

ATIT ME RAMESHWAR JI NE JANE ANJANE ME AISA KON SA KAND KIYA HAI YE TO AAP HI BATA SAKTE HAIN

SHRAWAN KUMAR KE FEMALE VERSION WALE KATHAN SE MAIN THODA SOCH ME PAD GAYA HOON

BAKI TO AAP HI IS NAIYA KE KHEWANHAAR HAIN....

Bhai bilkul sahmat hu aapse lekin aapko pata hai ek choti kadi di thi hume lekhak mahoday ne jisme gajju ke haveli me sangwan ji kehte hai ki woh team se kaam karte the jisme col puri, pandit ji woh aur Raghubir ji the unhone kaam toh bahit kiye hai.(toh baat aati hai aatit ke panne jo arjun ko malum ho sakte hai lekin apne bhai aage chalkar bata denge)

 

[Nano]

Ha bhai iss kathan se main bhi sehmat hu
Jaisa ki kaha gaya shakuni ya shrawankumar
Dono ki apni kahani hai
Jaise shakuni ne hastinapur ka vinaash karne ki kasam khayi thi kyoki shaktishali hastinapur ke kul se darkar gandhari ke pita ne gandhari ki vivah andhe dhritarashtr se kiya isase aahat hoke shakuni ne hastinapur pur ki sarvanaash ki kasam khayi
Jaise munni ka bhutkaal issi unhoni ki aur koi ishara nahi kyoki yeh baat itani to nahi ho sakti ki sirf shankar se shadi na ho saki isiliye pure pariwarcse badla
Rameshwar ji yahi wo shaqs hai isane siddhant ya apne saral karya kiya ho aur usase munni ka pariwar aahat hua ho aur wo sidhe to shakuni ki tarha war nahi kar sakti issiliy aaps me matbhed bana ke chaaale chal rahi hai

Dusra pahilu shrawankumar
Yeh meri dimag upaj ki upaj yeh kehti hai shrawankumar to matr pitru bhakt tha yeh kaise ho sakta jo aurat apne maksad ke liye apne pita ishwar singh ko raste se hata sakti hai wo kaise shrawankumar hui
Aisa bhi ho ki wo ishwar ki beti ho hi na ya ki wo goad li ho ya ishawar ki dusri shadi ho
Ya jis tarh iska lagav bindiya se hai usase yeh lagta hai ki wo uski apni koi ho shayad bahan
Indono ne Apne jiwan ka yeh maqsad bana hai ki sharma pariwar ka ant to shayd inke mata pita ke sath koi ghatna ghatit hui
Jisme inko lagta sharma pariwar inki iss barbadi ki wajah hai
Yeh sirf tukka ?
Iss par aapki pratikriya chahate engima bhai...

Bhai bilkul sahi lekin Shrawan Kumar kaise ho sakti hai woh, toh lekhak mahoday ne iski bhi kadi di hai (shayad gheri chal me) jaha richa par humla hone ke bad usne munni se pucha tha ki kya papa me bhi kami thi jaise nanaji me thi (agar is baat ko dhyan se dekha jaye toh hume malum chal sakta hai ki asli baap shayad koi aur tha sath hi ye baat chandarbhan ko malum thi jisse woh munni aur uski maa ko blackmail kar raha tha)

 

[404]

Enigma SIR,

MAIN BAS ISI SAWAL KE JAWAB KE INTEZAR ME HOON, AAKHIR KYUN MUNNI AUR BINDU BADLE KI AAG ME JAL RAHI HAIN, BADLE KI AAG ME JALKAR INHONE NE HAR WO CHIJ DAON PE LAGA DI JO INKI HAD ME AATE HAIN

JAHAN TAK MAIN SAMJHA HOON, SHANKAR YA INDAR SE INKA KOI BAIR NAHI HAI, YE DONO BAS EK JARIYA MATRA HI HAIN, ASLI BAIR TO INKA RAMESHWAR JI SE HAI

ATIT ME RAMESHWAR JI NE JANE ANJANE ME AISA KON SA KAND KIYA HAI YE TO AAP HI BATA SAKTE HAIN

SHRAWAN KUMAR KE FEMALE VERSION WALE KATHAN SE MAIN THODA SOCH ME PAD GAYA HOON

BAKI TO AAP HI IS NAIYA KE KHEWANHAAR HAIN....

kaha rehte ho bhai .. ab to aapke comment aur reviews bhi padhne ko nahi mil rahe pichle bahut dino se .. sab kushal mangal to hai na bhai .. agar kisi aur kaam ki wajah se busy chal rahe ho to alag baat hai .. magar yaha hi-hello ya fir apni shakal to dikha diya karo .. waiting ke bahane ...

waise agar kahani ko lekar baat karu to .. aap likhte to kam he ho .. magar jo bhi likhte ho usko padhne ke baad har koi sochne par majboor ho jata hai .. ab yaha bhi aapne aisi aashanka jaahir kar di hai to ...

ab asal mudda kya tha ya kya hai .. wo to aage pata chal he jaayega .. par yaha aa kar milte raha karo ...

 

[Billi420]

Aaj shankar ji ki halt py kuch kyhny ko dill kr rha hy Enigma bhai
Na chhede kisah ulfat bri lambi khani hy
Mn zmany sy nhi hara bs ksi ki baat mani hy
Hr koi Jan a cha rha hy k lata ji ka kya hoga Jo kr rhi hyn q kr rhi hyn mujhy lgta hy yh kisa itni jaldi khatm nhi hony wala lata g ny Jo rekha ji py hamla krwaya boht glt kiya agr kisi ko ko target krti ksi ko b shakar ji ko drd dyny k liay too chalta pr rekha ji q khyr
Kyhty hyn tali dono hatho sy bajti hy abhi b mn wo wjh Jan a chata ho jis k chalty lata oor bindu shankar ji oor indar ji itni nafrat krti hyn k itni door ryh k 1 maqsad ly k chal rhi hyn guys aany waly kl ko soch k aaj ko khraab nhi krty abhi shadi ka mahool hy oor tb tk mujhy lgta hy sakoon ryhny wala hy ab shadi mn shayd kuch kaand ho tb tk shadi ki tayari enjoy krty hyn ???