At first thought it was just a horror story.
Actually there was another story inside the story.The story had several amazing dramatic horror twists that were absolutely shocking.
The author's thinking and fantasies have to be accepted that the way in which he has tried to show in the story by giving the form of such words through his imagination.. which is really praiseworthy...
You are adept at creating a thrilling suspense-filled and creepy atmosphere in the story along with a highly intimidating situation..
And the scenes that have been created at every point of the update are really amazing and appreciable.....
really kahani aur bhi dilchasp aur scary hoti jaa rahi thi har ek mod ke sath....
Btw ek ladke ki apbiti ke upor adharit hai kahani...
wo sapna aur sapne ke andar jo wo khaufnaak sapna jo us ladke ne dekha, uske baad jab wo subhah nind se jaga aur jab ushe pata chala ki sach mein uske dost ne khudkhushi kar li hai..... ye saari ghatana sach mein kisi ke sath ghate to uska haal behal ho jaye....
Sabse darawana mahol tab bana jab wo ladka apne sapne mein hil tak nahi pa raha tha.... aur uska wo dost atindra khane ke daano ko jameen se bataur kar uske paas aa gaya tha..aur usko wo daane offer kar raha tha khane ke liye .. aur uske dwara kahi gayi wo baat ki wo to mar hi gaya hai, kya usne dekha nahi kaise atindra latka hua tha....
isse bhi darawana mahol tab bana jab hakikat mein mess ka khana matlab chawal aur daal ke daane pani par tair tha..... aur wo lambe baalon wala bikhari... jo chawal aur daal ke daano ko bataur raha tha jameen se..
kya wo ladka jis tarah se soch soch ke raha tha ki kahi wo atindra to nahi... kya sachme hi atindra to nahi tha...
Khair.... kabhi kabhi insaan ke jivan mein aisi ghatanaye ya anhoni ghat jaati hai jise jindagi bhar ek buri khwab ki tarah yaadon mein bas jata hai jishe koi bhi jindagi bhar bhool nahi sakta..
Kahani kaafi dilchasp, thrill suspense se bharpur aur khaufnaak ghatanao se paripurn hai... Aur sath hi kuch ansuljhe sawal jaise kya sachme wo bikhari hi atindra tha.... kahani ke Nayak ko kyun wo sapna aaya jo future mein ghatane wali ghatana se related thi.... kya mystery hai iske piche...
Well.. Kuch sawal, kuch baatein shayad adhuri hi reh jati hai
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills
Yug Purush