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Jaguaar

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पर मेरी असुविधा यह है कि करोना काल के वज़ह से हमारा इंटर डिपार्टमेंट ड्रामा कॉम्पिटिशन के अब शुरु हुआ है इसलिए कहानी लिखने से लेकर नाटक मंचन तक मेरे जिम्मे है यही व्यस्तता मुझे फोरम पर आने को फ़िलहाल रोक रहा है l

फिर भी जब आया तो पाया कहानी एक हद तक आगे पहुँच चुकी है माहिरा राकेश एंड कम्पनी के द्वारा किडनैप हो गई है l अपनी इस कांड को बड़ी शातिराना तरीके से छुपा भी गए हैं l
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Jaguaar

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Meri guessing sahi nikal gayi kya? :what1:

Mene kaha tha ki agar Ghar wala Aryan ladka asli Aryan na nikle. Koi aur hi nikle. Lagta hai wahi hua hai. Shalini ke accident ke baad Jo ladka aaya hai. Yahi asli Aryan lag raha hai. Aur yahi woh ladka hai jo sabke karobaar thapp karne me laga hua hai. Hmm! Interesting.

Ye Raju itna chutiya kyu tha? :laugh: Matlab gun haath me mil rahi hai aur fir bhi khud ko udaane ki soch raha. Gun thamaane ke baad ladke ne kaise trigger dabaaya? Gun toh Raju pakda tha. :?: Usi ke haath me gun liye liye hi ladke ne apna haath ghused ke trigger dabaya kya? Kuch bhi ho! Meri nazro me Raju chutiya tha. :laughing: Kam se Kam prayaas toh karta apni jaan bachaane ka. Anyways! Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
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Uss ladke ne Raju ko itna jyaada dara diya tha ke uski himmat hi nhi hui gun ko uss ladke ki taraf point out kareee
 

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Update 27
Idher kuch der baad Veer hospital mein Aryan ke saamne khada thaaa.

Aryan – Mujhe sab kuch jaana hai.

Veer – Jaisa ki maine phone pe kaha thaa Mahira apne dosto ke saath garden mein gayi thi aur wahi se usse kisi ne kidnap karliya. Jis gaadi se usse le jaaya gaya tha woh gaadi bhi chori ki thi.

Aryan – Aur innsab ke beech aapki security kyaa kar rahi thi.

Veer Aryan ke iss sawaal pe ekdum chup hojaata hai.

Aryan – Maine Mummy ke accident ke baad hi aapse kaha tha mujhe meri puri family ki security double chahiye. Toh kaha thi aapki security.

Aryan – Mujhe 10 mins ke andar Mahira ki Security ka har ek banda mere saamne chahiye.

Aryan ka order milte hi Veer turant Mahira ki security mein lagaye gaye logo ko call karta hai aur turant hospital aane ke liye bolta hai.

Thodi der mein Mahira ki puri security Aryan ke saamne khadi thi. Security ke logo ka saamna kabhi bhi Aryan se hua nhi tha. Yeh pehla mauka tha jab unka saamna unka real boss se horaha thaa.

Aryan – Toh tumlog ho jinko meri behen ki security ke liye tainaat kiya gaya tha.

Sab – Yes sir.

Aryan – Toh kaha hai meri behen iss waqt.

Sab ke sir neeche jhukk jaate hai.

Aryan – Tumlog uss waqt kaha the jab meri behen ka kidnap horaha thaa.

Sab – Sir hum wahi the. Jaisa ki humhe instruct kiya gaya tha kisi bhi family member ko yeh aihsaas naa ho hum unke peeche hai jisse unki privacy kayam rahe. Hum Mahira mam ke saath bhi waise hi the.

Aryan – Gusse se chillate hue. Toh tumsab ke hote hue koi meri behen ko kaise le gaya. Uss waqt kaha the tumsab. Tumsab ki aankhon ke saamne se koi meri behen ko lejaata hai aur tumlog kuch nhi kar paate.

Sab – We are sorry sir.

Aryan – You all are terminated. Get losttt.

Aryan ki yeh command sunn waha khade sabhi logo ke pairon ke neeche se zameen khisak jaati hai. Unhe yakeen nhi horaha tha ke Aryan ne abbi kyaa kaha.

Veer – Yeh kyaa keh rahe ho Aryan. Termination woh bhi eksath sab kaa.

Aryan – Inka kaam tha meri behen ki raksha karna aur inke hote hue meri behen ka kidnap hogya aur yeh log kuch nhi kar paaye. Mujhe aise logo ki jarurat nhi hai. Inka jitna bhi payment baaki hai woh complete karke inko jaane dijiye.

Woh saare guards Aryan se maafi maangne lagte hai par Aryan ka decision ekdum final thaa.

Veer bhi Aryan ke decision ke upar kuch nhi bol sakta tha isiliye usne bhi waise hi kiyaa.

Veer – Ab aage kyaa karna hai Aryan. Mahira ka pata kaise lagayengee. Kahi unnlogo ne hi toh nhi kiya yeh sab.

Aryan - Mujhe uss gaadi ki full location chahiyee. Garden se woh gaadi kaha se kaha tak gayi hai mujhe sab kuch jaanna hai.

Aryan ke bolne ke mutabik Veer sang sang uss gaadi ki puri location uske saamne rakh deta hai.

Aryan – Kyaa aap inn locations pe gaye thee.

Veer – Haaa. Aur inhi locations pe uss ladke Rakesh ka bhi ghar hai.

Aryan – Yeh Rakesh jail se bahar aagaya hai kyaaa.

Veer – Haaa. Kuch din pehle hi aaya hai. Kahi unnlogo ne toh nhi kiya jinhone bachpan mein tumhare saath....

Aryan – Kuch keh nhi saktee.

Veer – Toh humhe abhi chalna chahiyee.

Aryan – Nhiiii. Humhe jo bhi karna hoga sambhal ke karna hoga. Humari ek galti meri behen ke liye musibat khadi kar sakti hai.

Veer – Toh hum kyaa karee. Haath mein haath dhare baithe rahe. Humhe toh thik se yeh bhi nhi pata ke aakhir yeh kaam kisne kiya hai.

Aryan – Mujhe ghar ke bahar ki CCTV footage dikhana jara. Jabse Mahira ghar ke bahar nikli hai tabse.

Veer apne paas rakhe tab mein CCTV footage Rakesh ko dikhane lagta hai. Aryan CCTV mein achhe se dekhne lagta hai jabse Mahira ghar ke bahar nikli thi.

Woh baar baar footage ko dekhta hai par usse kuch khaash nhi mil raha thaa jisse uski tension badhte jaarahi thi. Woh aur ekbaar ekdum slow motion mein footage dekhne lagta hai iss aas mein ke usse kuch khaash dikh jaaye. Par uske haath kuch nhi lagta.

Aryan – Aisa kaise hosakta hai. Kisine toh khabar di hogi Mahira ke akele hone ki. Nhi toh unhe pata kaise chala ke Mahira ghar se akele nikli hai.

Veer – Aryan mera shakk baar baar wahi jaa raha hai. Humhe aur deri nhi karni chahiye. Pata nhi Mahira kis haal mein hogi.

Aryan – Main samaj raha hu. Par main iss mamle mein koi risk nhi le saktaa. Meri ek galti meri behen ke liye khatra bann sakta hai.
 

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Veer apne paas rakhe tab mein CCTV footage Rakesh ko dikhane lagta hai. Aryan CCTV mein achhe se dekhne lagta hai jabse Mahira ghar ke bahar nikli thi.
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Update 27
Idher kuch der baad Veer hospital mein Aryan ke saamne khada thaaa.

Aryan – Mujhe sab kuch jaana hai.

Veer – Jaisa ki maine phone pe kaha thaa Mahira apne dosto ke saath garden mein gayi thi aur wahi se usse kisi ne kidnap karliya. Jis gaadi se usse le jaaya gaya tha woh gaadi bhi chori ki thi.

Aryan – Aur innsab ke beech aapki security kyaa kar rahi thi.

Veer Aryan ke iss sawaal pe ekdum chup hojaata hai.

Aryan – Maine Mummy ke accident ke baad hi aapse kaha tha mujhe meri puri family ki security double chahiye. Toh kaha thi aapki security.

Aryan – Mujhe 10 mins ke andar Mahira ki Security ka har ek banda mere saamne chahiye.

Aryan ka order milte hi Veer turant Mahira ki security mein lagaye gaye logo ko call karta hai aur turant hospital aane ke liye bolta hai.

Thodi der mein Mahira ki puri security Aryan ke saamne khadi thi. Security ke logo ka saamna kabhi bhi Aryan se hua nhi tha. Yeh pehla mauka tha jab unka saamna unka real boss se horaha thaa.

Aryan – Toh tumlog ho jinko meri behen ki security ke liye tainaat kiya gaya tha.

Sab – Yes sir.

Aryan – Toh kaha hai meri behen iss waqt.

Sab ke sir neeche jhukk jaate hai.

Aryan – Tumlog uss waqt kaha the jab meri behen ka kidnap horaha thaa.

Sab – Sir hum wahi the. Jaisa ki humhe instruct kiya gaya tha kisi bhi family member ko yeh aihsaas naa ho hum unke peeche hai jisse unki privacy kayam rahe. Hum Mahira mam ke saath bhi waise hi the.

Aryan – Gusse se chillate hue. Toh tumsab ke hote hue koi meri behen ko kaise le gaya. Uss waqt kaha the tumsab. Tumsab ki aankhon ke saamne se koi meri behen ko lejaata hai aur tumlog kuch nhi kar paate.

Sab – We are sorry sir.

Aryan – You all are terminated. Get losttt.

Aryan ki yeh command sunn waha khade sabhi logo ke pairon ke neeche se zameen khisak jaati hai. Unhe yakeen nhi horaha tha ke Aryan ne abbi kyaa kaha.

Veer – Yeh kyaa keh rahe ho Aryan. Termination woh bhi eksath sab kaa.

Aryan – Inka kaam tha meri behen ki raksha karna aur inke hote hue meri behen ka kidnap hogya aur yeh log kuch nhi kar paaye. Mujhe aise logo ki jarurat nhi hai. Inka jitna bhi payment baaki hai woh complete karke inko jaane dijiye.

Woh saare guards Aryan se maafi maangne lagte hai par Aryan ka decision ekdum final thaa.

Veer bhi Aryan ke decision ke upar kuch nhi bol sakta tha isiliye usne bhi waise hi kiyaa.

Veer – Ab aage kyaa karna hai Aryan. Mahira ka pata kaise lagayengee. Kahi unnlogo ne hi toh nhi kiya yeh sab.

Aryan - Mujhe uss gaadi ki full location chahiyee. Garden se woh gaadi kaha se kaha tak gayi hai mujhe sab kuch jaanna hai.

Aryan ke bolne ke mutabik Veer sang sang uss gaadi ki puri location uske saamne rakh deta hai.

Aryan – Kyaa aap inn locations pe gaye thee.

Veer – Haaa. Aur inhi locations pe uss ladke Rakesh ka bhi ghar hai.

Aryan – Yeh Rakesh jail se bahar aagaya hai kyaaa.

Veer – Haaa. Kuch din pehle hi aaya hai. Kahi unnlogo ne toh nhi kiya jinhone bachpan mein tumhare saath....

Aryan – Kuch keh nhi saktee.

Veer – Toh humhe abhi chalna chahiyee.

Aryan – Nhiiii. Humhe jo bhi karna hoga sambhal ke karna hoga. Humari ek galti meri behen ke liye musibat khadi kar sakti hai.

Veer – Toh hum kyaa karee. Haath mein haath dhare baithe rahe. Humhe toh thik se yeh bhi nhi pata ke aakhir yeh kaam kisne kiya hai.

Aryan – Mujhe ghar ke bahar ki CCTV footage dikhana jara. Jabse Mahira ghar ke bahar nikli hai tabse.

Veer apne paas rakhe tab mein CCTV footage Rakesh ko dikhane lagta hai. Aryan CCTV mein achhe se dekhne lagta hai jabse Mahira ghar ke bahar nikli thi.

Woh baar baar footage ko dekhta hai par usse kuch khaash nhi mil raha thaa jisse uski tension badhte jaarahi thi. Woh aur ekbaar ekdum slow motion mein footage dekhne lagta hai iss aas mein ke usse kuch khaash dikh jaaye. Par uske haath kuch nhi lagta.

Aryan – Aisa kaise hosakta hai. Kisine toh khabar di hogi Mahira ke akele hone ki. Nhi toh unhe pata kaise chala ke Mahira ghar se akele nikli hai.

Veer – Aryan mera shakk baar baar wahi jaa raha hai. Humhe aur deri nhi karni chahiye. Pata nhi Mahira kis haal mein hogi.


Aryan – Main samaj raha hu. Par main iss mamle mein koi risk nhi le saktaa. Meri ek galti meri behen ke liye khatra bann sakta hai.
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Update 27
Idher kuch der baad Veer hospital mein Aryan ke saamne khada thaaa.

Aryan – Mujhe sab kuch jaana hai.

Veer – Jaisa ki maine phone pe kaha thaa Mahira apne dosto ke saath garden mein gayi thi aur wahi se usse kisi ne kidnap karliya. Jis gaadi se usse le jaaya gaya tha woh gaadi bhi chori ki thi.

Aryan – Aur innsab ke beech aapki security kyaa kar rahi thi.

Veer Aryan ke iss sawaal pe ekdum chup hojaata hai.

Aryan – Maine Mummy ke accident ke baad hi aapse kaha tha mujhe meri puri family ki security double chahiye. Toh kaha thi aapki security.

Aryan – Mujhe 10 mins ke andar Mahira ki Security ka har ek banda mere saamne chahiye.

Aryan ka order milte hi Veer turant Mahira ki security mein lagaye gaye logo ko call karta hai aur turant hospital aane ke liye bolta hai.

Thodi der mein Mahira ki puri security Aryan ke saamne khadi thi. Security ke logo ka saamna kabhi bhi Aryan se hua nhi tha. Yeh pehla mauka tha jab unka saamna unka real boss se horaha thaa.

Aryan – Toh tumlog ho jinko meri behen ki security ke liye tainaat kiya gaya tha.

Sab – Yes sir.

Aryan – Toh kaha hai meri behen iss waqt.

Sab ke sir neeche jhukk jaate hai.

Aryan – Tumlog uss waqt kaha the jab meri behen ka kidnap horaha thaa.

Sab – Sir hum wahi the. Jaisa ki humhe instruct kiya gaya tha kisi bhi family member ko yeh aihsaas naa ho hum unke peeche hai jisse unki privacy kayam rahe. Hum Mahira mam ke saath bhi waise hi the.

Aryan – Gusse se chillate hue. Toh tumsab ke hote hue koi meri behen ko kaise le gaya. Uss waqt kaha the tumsab. Tumsab ki aankhon ke saamne se koi meri behen ko lejaata hai aur tumlog kuch nhi kar paate.

Sab – We are sorry sir.

Aryan – You all are terminated. Get losttt.

Aryan ki yeh command sunn waha khade sabhi logo ke pairon ke neeche se zameen khisak jaati hai. Unhe yakeen nhi horaha tha ke Aryan ne abbi kyaa kaha.

Veer – Yeh kyaa keh rahe ho Aryan. Termination woh bhi eksath sab kaa.

Aryan – Inka kaam tha meri behen ki raksha karna aur inke hote hue meri behen ka kidnap hogya aur yeh log kuch nhi kar paaye. Mujhe aise logo ki jarurat nhi hai. Inka jitna bhi payment baaki hai woh complete karke inko jaane dijiye.

Woh saare guards Aryan se maafi maangne lagte hai par Aryan ka decision ekdum final thaa.

Veer bhi Aryan ke decision ke upar kuch nhi bol sakta tha isiliye usne bhi waise hi kiyaa.

Veer – Ab aage kyaa karna hai Aryan. Mahira ka pata kaise lagayengee. Kahi unnlogo ne hi toh nhi kiya yeh sab.

Aryan - Mujhe uss gaadi ki full location chahiyee. Garden se woh gaadi kaha se kaha tak gayi hai mujhe sab kuch jaanna hai.

Aryan ke bolne ke mutabik Veer sang sang uss gaadi ki puri location uske saamne rakh deta hai.

Aryan – Kyaa aap inn locations pe gaye thee.

Veer – Haaa. Aur inhi locations pe uss ladke Rakesh ka bhi ghar hai.

Aryan – Yeh Rakesh jail se bahar aagaya hai kyaaa.

Veer – Haaa. Kuch din pehle hi aaya hai. Kahi unnlogo ne toh nhi kiya jinhone bachpan mein tumhare saath....

Aryan – Kuch keh nhi saktee.

Veer – Toh humhe abhi chalna chahiyee.

Aryan – Nhiiii. Humhe jo bhi karna hoga sambhal ke karna hoga. Humari ek galti meri behen ke liye musibat khadi kar sakti hai.

Veer – Toh hum kyaa karee. Haath mein haath dhare baithe rahe. Humhe toh thik se yeh bhi nhi pata ke aakhir yeh kaam kisne kiya hai.

Aryan – Mujhe ghar ke bahar ki CCTV footage dikhana jara. Jabse Mahira ghar ke bahar nikli hai tabse.

Veer apne paas rakhe tab mein CCTV footage Rakesh ko dikhane lagta hai. Aryan CCTV mein achhe se dekhne lagta hai jabse Mahira ghar ke bahar nikli thi.

Woh baar baar footage ko dekhta hai par usse kuch khaash nhi mil raha thaa jisse uski tension badhte jaarahi thi. Woh aur ekbaar ekdum slow motion mein footage dekhne lagta hai iss aas mein ke usse kuch khaash dikh jaaye. Par uske haath kuch nhi lagta.

Aryan – Aisa kaise hosakta hai. Kisine toh khabar di hogi Mahira ke akele hone ki. Nhi toh unhe pata kaise chala ke Mahira ghar se akele nikli hai.

Veer – Aryan mera shakk baar baar wahi jaa raha hai. Humhe aur deri nhi karni chahiye. Pata nhi Mahira kis haal mein hogi.


Aryan – Main samaj raha hu. Par main iss mamle mein koi risk nhi le saktaa. Meri ek galti meri behen ke liye khatra bann sakta hai.
Nice and superb update....
 
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