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Fantasy PANDIT ..THE BLOOD HUNTER...(.ACTION THRILLER SUSPENSE)

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Gajab update bro

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Bhai log thanks for your support. ..meri is thread par aap log ka itna support mila....
I hope aage bhi aise hi milta rahega...
Index update kar diya hai...
Abhi tak ke mere sare updates around 1300 words ke rahe hai...
Par kal mai ispar ek mega update dunga....around 3000 words ...ka...kya likhna hai sab soch rakha hai. Bas ab unhe sabdo ka rup dena hai....
Aap log aise hi sath bne rahiye
Aap logo se ek niwedan hai ki kripya apne vichar vyakt krte rahiye taki mujhe aap logo ki rai bhi pta chlti rahe....mai ise waisa hi likhunga..jaisa maine socha hai ..par aagar aap log kuch guess kre usme mujhe kuch acha lga to mai use add bhi karunga...

Aur aap sabhi se ek ache gang ka nam suggest krne ki guzarish krta hu...
Jiska nam mujhe acha lga wo nam pandit ki gang ko dunga...aur nam suggest krne wale ko role bhi milega....to fatafat socho aur suggest kro....


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Mayaviguru

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Aj ka update rat ...1 bje tak...
Aj se action suru...avi tak...khani mai action duscuss hua tha...av action feel hoga..
Aj ke update...se asli khani suru hogi....
Av se mere virtual story world mai pandit ki action entry suru honi hai...

Baki ka maja update mai padhe...
 

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Update 10

Mini mega update


Amtul- to suruwat kha se krne ka socha hai


Arya- whi to samajh nhi aa rha...na paise ha na team hai aur basically mai bhi sirf fight kar sakta hu par mai bhi koi trained to hu nahi...par halat ne bhi kaphi kuvh train kar diya hai…


Amtul -hmm


Arya- maine soch rha hu koi gang join karu ...par kon si...ye bhi ek bda sawal hai…


Amtul - tu ek kam kar dwarka mor ja wha tujhe ek pathan milega...bhadur sha...use bolna ki “allah ne kha hai nek karam kar”


Arya- kya matlab hai iska kon hai wo...aur nek karam se….


Amtul- mera ek dost tha Javed...usi ka khas dost hai...bhadur ...filhal ye gold ki smuggling krta hai...aur ye wo code hai...jis se tu uake sath kam kar sakta hai...mujhe ye code mere dost ne btaya tha ki agar kabhi mujhe jarurat pade to mai istemal karu par meei gang hi nahi rahi ...par av waqt aa gya hai...ise istemal kiya jaye

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Arya- chinta mat kro aap av ye sahar kya purii duniya khun ki wo barish dekehgi ki yamraj bhi kaap uthega...ye duniya chahe us khuda mai biswas rakhti ho...par jald hi ye duniya sirf mujhe apna khuda manegi…


Amtul- josh mai hosh mat khowo...is raste pai koi apna saga nhi hota ...imandar se imandar log aise dga de jate hai ki pachtane ke siwa ...kuch nahi bachta...mera apna experience kehta hai…


Arya- thik hai….mai ja rha hu


Amtul - kha ja rhae ho


Arya- apne safar ki suruwat karne Dwarka


Amtul- thik hai mai bhi chlu…???


Arya- nahi mai akela jaunga ...ye jung meri hai...mai ise khud ladunga

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Amtul- thik hai jaisi tumhari iccha..mai bhi nikal rha hu...kal university bhi to jana hai...jaisa hoga call kar ke btate rehna…


Arya- thik hai sir…




Raw headquarters


Conference hall


Chief- Ye kya hai shadow


Shadow- kya hua sir


Chief- is list ke hisab se to koi aisa nahi hai...jispar sahk liya ja sake...sabke details hmare pass hai…


Shadow-ha sir av to mere bhi samajh na aa rha ki kya kare…


Gufran- sir mere pass ek idea hai


Chief- wah barkhurdar av aap bhi udea denge...ek lounde se pitkar aaye ho. Idea denge..


Gufran -sir,mujhe is bat ko kehne mai koi sharm nahi ki mai pitkar aaya…..but ha sir aharm is bat par jaroor aayi ki hmara kam koi aur kar rha hai.....aur rahi bat uske ladne ki to sir wo ek hindustani hai aur hindustani apne badle ke liye kis had se guzar sakta hai ..ye mujhe btane ki koi jarurat nahi hai…


Shadow- mind your language officer


Gufran- sir sach kadwa hota hai..sach ki language nahi hoti...agar chati par medal lgwana pasnad hai to apni galtiya mannana bhi sikj lijiye…


Shadow- i can suspend you…


Gufran- i am ready to resign ...jha sach bolne ki ijjajat na ho mujhe wha kam karne ka mera jamir ijjajat nahi deta


Poonam- gufi shant ho jao yar…


Harry- ha bhai


Gufran- nahi yaro bhut huwa...jha bolna mna ho wha mai kam nhi kar skata


Aayushi- gufran is right ...i too resign


Swami- mai bhi


Poonam- agar ye log gye to mai bhi…


Harry- sorry sir...i will too go with my team


Chief- tum log ka dimag kharab ho gya hai kya…



Gufran- nahi sir balki aj tej kam kar rha hai


Shadow- kya chahate ho


Gufran - respect jo hum desrve karte hai..


Shadow- meeting dismissed...i will talk you guys later…


Gufran- we all resign…


Defence secretary darwaze se andar aate hue -are bhai kon resign kar rha hai …


Chief- sir aap yha


DS- kyu bhai mai yha nhi aa sakta kya


Chief-no sir sorry sir mera mtlb wo nahi tha ...i am surprised ki aap yha aaye…


Ds- bhai surprised to hum bhi hai ki yha chal kya rha hai. ..crime rates badhte ja rahe hai...aur raw ki best batch apna resignation de rahi hai…


Chief- sir wo wo..


Ds- kya wo wo lga rakha haj...agents you tell me kya chal rha hai…


Shadow- sir wo bat ye hai ki


Ds- kya maine aapse pucha hai??


Shadow- no Sir sorry


Gufran- sir bat ye hai ki ...log apni seniority ke chakkar me log desh ko hi bhul jate hai..inhe lagta hai ye best hai…


Ds- ye mai kya sun rha hu…


Chief - wo bat dar asal ye hai ki…


Ds- i don't want to listen anything...agent tell me whats your plan…


Gufran- sir mere hisab se pandit ko us bamb dhamako ke mastermind ki talash..hai..agar hum use pakad le ya fir kisi duplicate ko chara bna kar use kre to


Ds- plan to badhiya hai. Get adetailed work on it ...aur ha ajse tum aur tumhari team sidha mujhe report kregi…

Now you can leav


Gufran- sure sir…



Idhar southex….


Rani- kya btaya uncle ne…


Avnatika- ha bta na uncle ne kya btaya


Sonali- wo unhe nahi mila...aur jo aadmi bheje the wo av jinda nahi hai…


Avantika- kya…


Rani- kya bak rahi hai


Sonali - ha ye sach hai


Rani- tu sure hai tune uncle ko arya ka hi detail diya tha


Sonali- nahi maine to sirf nam btaya tha.

.detail nhi di thi..


Avantika- fir to lagta hai unhone kisi aur ko samajh liya hai ...kyoki arya makkhi na mare gunde dur ki bat hai...aj tak tune use utna pareshan kiya usne kbhi tujhe muh utha kar ghoora tak nhi..


Sonali-hmm mujhe bhi yhi lagta hai…


Rani- wo chod pehle ye bta hmari banno hmare jiju ko mayegi kaise…


Sonali- yar sach bolu to mere kych samjh nhi aa rha…



Rani meri man to pehle tu use sorry bol fir dost bna fir pta lena dhire dhire…


Sonali- idea to tera thik hai par jya ye kam krega kya wo mera dost bnega


Avantika- guess krnr se kya hoga ..kal pehle tu bat to kar


Sonali..hmm thik hai



Dwarka arya metro se nikalta hai aur samne pan ke dukan ke pass ja kar ye pathan bhai kha milenge.


Pan wala- kon pathan yha to bhatere pathan rehte hai..mujhe kya google samajh rakha hai jo tere bhoukne se pehle guess kar ke bta du


Arya-bahadur shah


Panwala- tera kya kam hai us se


Arya- btana hai ya nahi…


Panwala..do signal bad right lena..whi whi tumhe shah traders dikhega whi milega..


Arya - ji shukriya


Panwala- shukriya bad mai bacche salamati chahta hai to mat ja wha..


Arya- rai ke liye shukriya fir se..mai chlta hu…


Arya apni manjil ki traf badh jata hai

..20 min chalne ke bad manjil uske aankho ke samne thi…



Samne bda sa bord lag tha jispar likha tha shah traders


Arya andar chla jata hai..


Ek ladka - khiye kya chahiye


Arya - bhahdur bhai se milna hai


Ladka ek bar puri teji se arya ko paini najar se tadta hai fir bolta hai kya kam hai bhai se


Arya- mai bhai se hi bat karunga


Ladka- mujhe talashi leni hai tumhari


Arya- shouk se lo


Ladka pure ache se talashi letahai..fur kehta hai ruko mai abhi aata hu

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10 min bad wo ladka aata hai


Ladka- oye suno


Arya - ha bolo


Ladka - tumhe bhai bula rhe hai chlo


Arya ys ladke ke sath andar chla jata hai..dukan ke andar sidhiya thi jo basement mai ja rhi thi.


Wo ladka air arya sidhiya utarte hue nuvhe basement mai pahuch jate hai..


Basement mai side mai kuch drums pade the bich mai sofa tha jha bicho bich ek lamba chouda insan baitha tha…


Ladka - bhai yhi hai wo chokra


Bhadur- kon hai be lounde tu


Arya- bhai .. Pandit nam hai mera purani delhi mai rehta hu


Bhadur- aadhar card nahi manga kam bta


Arya- allah ne kha hai nek karam kar


Bhadur- aao idhar baitho


Arya ji bhai


Bhadur - kisne btaya tumhe ye code


Arya- javed bhai ne


Bhadur- kya kam hai


Arya- bhai kam nhi hai kam chahiye...aap apne sath rakh lo


Bhadur- bacche ho kyu is daladal mai pair fsa rahe ho...ghar walo ka to socho apne


Arya- bhai hum wo anath hai jo paida hote hi kafan ke sath hai...aur ye daladal nahi wo dariya hai jiska pani mujhe jinda rakhega is bhid mai


Bhadur- josh to bhut acha hai tum me..rahim idhar aao aur ladke ko kam smjha do…

Rahim- ji bhai

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Tabhi bhadur ka phone bajta hai...bat karte karte uske chehre par tension ki lakire aa jati hai..


Bhadur - gusse mai ..ye sala ..vidhayk ko nark ke darsan karwana hi padega..


Rahim - ha bhai..bhut din se tang kar rha hai..iska av kam tamam karna hi padega…


Bhadur - par sala ye kam karega kon...itni suraksha mai chlta hai ki samajh nahi aa rha kya kru


Rahim- bhai hum log hai na


Bhadur - ha av yhi bacha hai na tum maroge ya chutiye


Arya- mai marunga bhai


Bhadur- ye nikla mard ki awaz..


Arya- ha bhai mouka do..


Bhadur- diya par karega kaise aj tak kabhi kiya hai


Arya - bhai kabhi to suruwat karni hi hai...to yhi se sahi…


Bhadur - ja mere sher fateh hasil lar


Arya - ji bhai


Rahim- chal bacche tujhe khillone dila du


Arya- mtlb


Rahim- hath se pelega kya vidhyak ko


Arya- nahi


Rahim- to chal pehle kuch hathiyar lete hai


Arya- chliye


Rahim - ye rha war room

Jo chahiye le le

Pura kamra alag alag guns se bhara pada tha



Arya 6 handguns aur do chaku leta hai..


Rahim- ye kya baccho wale hathiyar le rha hai


Arya- rahim miya...mere ko yhi chahiye .


Rahim- bacche pehle hi marega


Arya wo mai dekh lunga chacha


Arya do guns apne dono shoes mai fit karta hai…


Do kamar mai do hatho mai leta hai..

Ek chaku elbow par fasta hai ek pair pe…


Aur apne pehle mission ke liye nikal jata hai…




Aaj ke liye itna hi


Dosto socha tha aj mega update du par time issyes pade aur aap ki bhabhi ne dimag kharab kiya hai so itna hi likh paya hu...baki ka kal deta hu.


Sorry par aj ka update bhi 1800 words ka hai..


Aapka apna



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