Realistic feeling which is a very difficult subject - whether in writing or acting in film - but you are the master at it.. taking every aspect into consideration, you were taking the story forward.
The story has a unique combination of suspense and erotica as well as adventure.
Many new characters are also being seen. He is playing his role well in every aspect of the story. And the real form of some characters are also coming to the fore.
Keep writing like this and keep entertaining us....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills