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[TheMysterious_Ng]

Mai compare nahi kar raha bas bol raha hau ki parwarish aur maa baap ko aapas ke relation ki life me bahut ahmiyat hoti hai agar thoda sa Inke baare me likhoge to usase story aur kirdar ko gahrai milti hai. Mai jaanta hun hum readers ke liye Kahna bahut aasan hota hai par wastav me likhana kitna kathin hota hai.
So best of luck for your story.
Jaisa bhi likho khud ko pasand aaye Asia likho.
Jab khud ko pasand aayega to sabko pasand aayega.

Absolutely right and firstly m a reader myself and being a critics for 3 years , now m on d field n batting..

Hope I'll get support from each n every one here and I'll give my best..

Thanks and stay along ...

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

So guys , are you ready ???


Ek aur update post karne Wale h bs koi 1 banda aake Present laga de to ABI post kardu..


Also , ye Wala update b ek base setup karne k liye h but m sure bht jaldi hum Sab hero ki new journey p honge...

 

[Vickey1211]

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[TheMysterious_Ng]

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Bs copy paste karna h ab..
Just 5 min bro...

 

[John Cena]

Waiting bhai

 

[TheMysterious_Ng]

Update 9:


Same day:

Is waqt prem apni nayi MAA Nandini k sath khel Raha tha aur Raj apne kaam k liye nikal Chuka tha, waise to wo b rukna chahta tha par ab Ghar m ek baby ho to jimmedaria b badh jati h . Kayi saalo s dono log Raj - Nandini apni tarah ki jindgi ji rahe the par ab ek nanhe mehmaan k aane k baad unki jimmedaria badh gai thi jaise ki Prem k khane pine s leke , uske liye chothe kapde b , ab jahir h in dono ki jarurat to padegi hi Jo dono k paas filahal ni thi .

Dono n ye b decide karlia tha ki Dono k Gharo m Prem k liye kamre banege taki prem jab chahe aur jinke sath chahe unke sath ruk sake waise iske liye Raj n objection jarur uthaya ki bhala iski Kya jarurat h aur Raj k Ghar m hi wo sare intjam Kar dega but Nandini to Nandini tehri . Agar Raj k according hota to iska mtlb tha ki Nandini ko Raj k Ghar m aana Jana hota rehta but Nandini n saaf lafzo m Mana krdia . Aisa ni tha ki Nandini n ye Raj s narazgi ya nafrat k chalte kia tha , iske piche ek chothi si wajah thi Nandini ki .


(( Is scene ko main conversation k through b Kar sakta tha but main mudda yahi tha Jo Maine ek baar m Bata dia h . I hope sab samajhenge.. back to story now ))



Sham ka waqt ho Chuka tha Ki tabhi Nandini ko kuch feel hua jaise kuch log is Ghar ki taraf aarahe h.

Nandini n apni aankhein band karke ek spell bola "" SEARCH "" aisa karte hi uske aaspaas pehle ek circle bana aur phir wo Charo taraf fail gaya. Kuch hi Der m Nandini ko pata chal gaya ki Kitne log aur Kon is taraf aaraha h.

Nandini n turant phir s apni aankhe band Kar Telepathy k through Raj ko msg bheja aur jaldi aane ka kah Kar wo Prem ko leke bahar aagai .

Ab prem to tehra Bacha aur Bache ka Mann ho to wo gaud m hi chade rehte h utarte ni aur agar utaar do galti s to unka Rona dhona shuru hojata h but kabi unka mood aisa hoTA h ki koi kitna b pyar karle par tab agar unka Mann khelne ka karta h to majal h ki koi unhe rok b pae aur agar kisi n koshish Kari to phir s apna sabse khatarnaak hathiyar bacho ka , wo use krte h Jo h RONA DHONA .

Subah s to Nandini prem ko pyar dulaar karti rahi , usko nehlana , khana khilana ( 1 saal ka h to bacho ka khana ) aur phir agar idhar udhar thoda bht ghumaya b to Nandini n usko tb b niche ni utara . Ab nandini k liye ye ehshash Naya tha to wo pura Anand le rahi thi par ab sham ho chuki thi upar s Ghar s bahar aane par Prem ka mood b change hua aur ab usko b khelna tha. To Bhai shahab ab gaud s utarne ki jidd pakad liye to Nandini ko b utarana pda.

Waise to Prem 1-1.5 saal ka hi tha par wo ache s chal fir leta tha . Ab jameen p Pao pade ni ki Prem to jaise bht jyada khush hogaya aur wo pehle to ghutno k Bal chalta Raha phir achanak s khada hoke garden m hi idhar udhar dodhne laga.

((( As I told earlier , Raj Nandini k Ghar jungle m h to wahan acha khasa khoobsurat mahol h , Hari bhari ghaas , paed paude , chothe chothe paltu janwaar type , ye sab dono hi Gharo k aaspaas available the aur Raj ka garden specially aur b jyada khoobsurat tha kyuki wo khud nature s juda hua tha apni speciality FOREST MAGIC ki wajah s..

Ab FOREST MAGIC ki baat aayi h to ek speciality b abi Bata dete h - is magic k user wahi hote h jinhe nature s bahut pyar hota h aur jinhe nature khud chunn leti h . is wajah s nature bi inhe respond karta h . Agar USer Acha ho to uske aaspaas ka nature APneaap acha bana rehta aur wahan positivity rehti h aur agar koi BURA ho to nature b uske according hojata h dark aur negativity b fail jati h jisse na sirf paed paude balki jungli janwar b affect hojate h .

Since Raj ek ache insan the isliye unke aaspaas ka mahol b acha rehta tha aur khoobsurat b isliye Prem jab Ghar s bahar aaya to usko b positivity feel Hui aur wo nature ko enjoy karne laga )))

Prem ko dekh Kar Nandini b khush thi kyuki prem k chehre ki khushi dekh Kar uske Dil ko sukoon mil Raha tha ..



Abhi kuch hi pal hue the ki jiska Nandini intzar kar rahi thi wo b aagae. Jungle ki taraf s ek tukdi aati Hui dikhai di. Sabse aage 2-2 घोड़े p bhaithe sainik the , beech m ek Horse Carriage ( घोड़ागाड़ी ) tha jisse dekh Kar lag Raha tha ki ye koi Royal carriage hi h aur uske piche koi 8-10 aur sainik the ghode p.





Wo sab Raj k Ghar k bahar aake ruk gae aur phir Horse carriage k piche khade do naukro n aake uska darwaza khola to usme s ek Robdaar dikhne Wala shaks nikla. Uski entry aur us aadmi k pehnave s hi lag Raha tha ki wo koi bahut bada aadmi h . Dekhne m acha khasa smart type tha , age b koi 35-40 k around . Ab ye ya to Capital s aaye koi officer ho sakte h ya Royal family k koi member ..

Kher , wo Bhai shahab bahar nikle to aaspaas ka nazare ko dekh Kar unhe b wahi positivity feel Hui , fiza m behti thandi Hawa aur itne sundar drishy dekh Kar to kisi ka Mann shant hojae..


Aadmi - ahhhhhhhh Kya nazara h yahan ka . Aise ghane jungle m itni khoobsurat jagah .. wah Kya sahi jagah . Mera bs chale to main yahi bass jau sara Rajashi ( Royal ) kaam chod kr .

Phir wo garden k through andar aane ko hua to usse Ghar k bahar Nanidni nazar aayi to wo thoda chauk Kar wahi khada hogaya . Abhi wo ek baar chaukne s ubhara hi tha ki Nandini k piche ek aur shaks ko dekh Kar to is baar fully shocked ..

Ye dusra shaks koi aur ni Raj hi tha . Raj ko waise b lag Raha tha ki aisa kuch jarur hoga but itna jaldi ye ni socha thaa isliye Nandini k msg milte hi sare kaam khathm karke wo GATE magic s direct Ghar k andar aaya aur phir wo bahar aake Nandini k piche khada hogaya.

Ab b wo aadmi chupchap khada hoke Raj Nandini ko ghur hi Raha tha ki achnak usse koi takraya . Ab ye janab to hamare nanhe shahzade the . Wo to bahar aake kabse hi idhar udhar bhaag bhag Kar khel rahe the aur jab Prem n ek shaks ko dekha to wo uske sath khelne k liye wo aake us aadmi ko pakad Lia . Ab Prem to bacha h to uski pahuch to us lambe chaude aadmi k paero tk hi thi to usne unhe hi pakad k upar ki taraf aadmi k chehre ko dekh Kar muskurane laga ..

Aawwwwwwwwwww …… is tarah ki Expression mostly girls k hote h jab wo kisi cute cheez ko dekhti but yahan to in Bhai shahab k expression aise ho rakhe the aur reason hamare param priye Prem..
Ek to Prem masoom bacha upar s uska muskurata chehra .. hayee kisi patthar Dil ko b pighla de par ye janab to patthar Dil k to bilkul ni the Jo ki unke expression s hi pata chal Raha tha ..


Us aadmi n jab Prem ko dekha to pehle hang hogaya ( above mentioned thoughts ) aagae phir wo wahi ghutno k Bal bhaith gaya aur bade pyar s Prem k hatho ko pakad usse dekhne laga aur bola

Aadmi - wah , itne khoobsurat jagah p itna pyara bacha . Beta aap to bade pyare Bache ho Kya naam h apka ?

Prem us aadmi k paas hone s Dara ni balki khush hi lag Raha tha . Usne b apne tuti futi bhasa m jawab dia

Prem - mela naaam Plemmm h . Aap Kon h aul aap mele sath kheloge

Aadmi - ( pyar s ) acha to apka naam plem h ( bacho ki hi awaaz m , waise to wo b samajh gae the ki naam Prem h na ki Plem par bacho k samne to bcha banana padta h )
Ha beta hum jarur khelenge apke sath par pehle aap apne Mata Aur pita s ni milwaenge ?

Prem - ha ha jalul . Meli MAA aul mele baba andar h , Chalo aap mele sath Chalo aao aao


Phir Prem us aadmi ka hath pakad andar Lane lagta h. Wahi Ghar k bahar darwaze p khade Raj Nandini prem aur us aadmi ki baato ko sun Kar muskura rahe the . Ab Prem tha hi aisa ki jitna wo masoom , utni uski harqate b.


Prem dheere dheere us aadmi ka hath pakad Kar Ghar ki taraf aane laga. Ab chuki Prem chotha tha aur usne aadmi ki ungliya pakad rakhi thi to wo aadmi b ab jhuk kar sath m chal Raha tha . Najane kyu par uska Mann hi ni hua ki wo apna hath chuda sake .
Aise hi dono Raj Nandini k pass aagae Jo ab ek sath khade the

Raj Nandini ko dekh Kar Prem n us aadmi ka hath choda aur bhaag Kar dono k Pao k paas aake unhe pakad Lia . Prem k aate hi dono b ghutno k bal bhaith gse the aur Ek sath Prem ko gale laga Lia. Uske baad dono alag hue to

Raj - aree beta Prem ,ye aap kisko leke aaye ho

Prem- baba ye.. ye . Ye mele ...
Ab Prem ko ye pata ni tha ki wo shaks Kon h isliye wo confused tha ki Kya bole..

 

[Crocodile]

Meri jaan present sab rehte hai bs kujh mere jaise chup rehte hai , Baki pehle story karma ki story jaise. He thi same concept se iss liye coment nhi kia . Ab track change his toh hum bhi aa gye comment krne , so hope aap isi track or chaloge na ki fr se vapis karma bhai ke track Pe , best of luck

 

[John Cena]

Boht hi acha update ha dost maza a gya parh ka

 

[Avir]

Update 9:


Same day:

Is waqt prem apni nayi MAA Nandini k sath khel Raha tha aur Raj apne kaam k liye nikal Chuka tha, waise to wo b rukna chahta tha par ab Ghar m ek baby ho to jimmedaria b badh jati h . Kayi saalo s dono log Raj - Nandini apni tarah ki jindgi ji rahe the par ab ek nanhe mehmaan k aane k baad unki jimmedaria badh gai thi jaise ki Prem k khane pine s leke , uske liye chothe kapde b , ab jahir h in dono ki jarurat to padegi hi Jo dono k paas filahal ni thi .

Dono n ye b decide karlia tha ki Dono k Gharo m Prem k liye kamre banege taki prem jab chahe aur jinke sath chahe unke sath ruk sake waise iske liye Raj n objection jarur uthaya ki bhala iski Kya jarurat h aur Raj k Ghar m hi wo sare intjam Kar dega but Nandini to Nandini tehri . Agar Raj k according hota to iska mtlb tha ki Nandini ko Raj k Ghar m aana Jana hota rehta but Nandini n saaf lafzo m Mana krdia . Aisa ni tha ki Nandini n ye Raj s narazgi ya nafrat k chalte kia tha , iske piche ek chothi si wajah thi Nandini ki .


(( Is scene ko main conversation k through b Kar sakta tha but main mudda yahi tha Jo Maine ek baar m Bata dia h . I hope sab samajhenge.. back to story now ))



Sham ka waqt ho Chuka tha lagbhag 5 bajne wale the. Ki tabhi Nandini ko kuch feel hua jaise kuch log is Ghar ki taraf aarahe h.

Nandini n apni aankhein band karke ek spell bola "" SEARCH "" aisa karte hi uske aaspaas pehle ek circle bana aur phir wo Charo taraf fail gaya. Kuch hi Der m Nandini ko pata chal gaya ki Kitne log aur Kon is taraf aaraha h.

Nandini n turant phir s apni aankhe band Kar Telepathy k through Raj ko msg bheja aur jaldi aane ka kah Kar wo Prem ko leke bahar aagai .

Ab prem to tehra Bacha aur Bache ka Mann ho to wo gaud m hi chade rehte h utarte ni aur agar utaar do galti s to unka Rona dhona shuru hojata h but kabi unka mood aisa hoTA h ki koi kitna b pyar karle par tab agar unka Mann kehlne ka karta h to majal h ki koi unhe rok b pae aur agar kisi n koshish Kari to phir s apna sabse khatarnaak hathiyar bacho ka , wo use krte h Jo h RONA DHONA .

Subah s to Nandini prem ko pyar dulaar karti rahi , usko nehlana , khana khilana ( 1 saal ka h to bacho ka khana ) aur phir agar idhar udhar thoda bht ghumaya b to Nandini n usko tb b niche ni utara . Ab nandini k liye ye ehshash Naya tha to wo pura Anand le rahi thi par ab sham ho chuki thi upar s Ghar s bahar aane par Prem ka mood b change hua aur ab usko b khelna tha. To Bhai shahab ab gaud s utarne ki jidd pakad liye to Nandini ko b utarana pda.

Waise to Prem 1-1.5 saal ka hi tha par wo ache s chal fir leta tha . Ab jameen p Pao pade ni ki Prem to jaise bht jyada khush hogaya aur wo pehle to ghutno k Bal chalta Raha phir achanak s khada hoke garden m hi idhar udhar dodhne laga.

( As I told earlier , Raj Nandini k Ghar jungle m h to wahan acha khasa khoobsurat mahol h , Hari bhari ghaas , paed paude , chothe mote janwaar paltu type , ye sab dono hi Gharo k aaspaas available the aur Raj ka garden specially aur b jyada khoobsurat tha kyuki wo khud nature s juda hua tha apni speciality FOREST MAGIC ki wajah s

Ab FOREST MAGIC ki baat aayi h to ek speciality b abi Bata dete h - is magic k user wahi hote h jinhe nature s bahut pyar hota h aur jinhe nature khud chunn leti h . is wajah s nature bi inhe respond karta h . Agar user Acha ho to uske aaspaas ka nature APneaap acha bana rehta aur wahan positivity rehti h aur agar koi BURA ho to nature b uske according hojata h dark aur negativity b fail jati h jisse na sirf paed paude balki jungli janwar b affect hojate h .

Since Raj ek ache insan the isliye unke aaspaas ka mahol b acha rehta tha aur khoobsurat b isliye Prem jab Ghar s bahar aaya to usko b positivity feel Hui aur wo nature ko enjoy karne laga ))

Prem ko dekh Kar Nandini b khush thi kyuki prem k chehre ki khushi dekh Kar uske Dil ko sukoon mil Raha tha ..



Abhi kuch hi pal hue the ki jiska Nandini intzar kar rahi thi wo b aagae. Jungle ki taraf s ek tukdi aati Hui dikhai di. Sabse aage 2-2 घोड़े p bhaithe sainik the , beech m ek Horse Carriage ( घोड़ागाड़ी ) tha jisse dekh Kar lag Raha tha ki ye koi Royal carriage hi h aur uske piche koi 8-10 aur sainik the ghode p.


Wo sab Raj k Ghar k bahar aake ruk gae aur phir Horse carriage k piche khade do naukro n aake uska darwaza khola to usme s ek Robdaar dikhne Wala shaks nikla. Uski entry aur us aadmi k pehnave s hi lag Raha tha ki wo koi bahut bada aadmi h . Dekhne m acha khsa smart type tha , age b koi 35-40 k around . Ab ye ya to Capital s aaye koi officer ho sakte h ya Royal family k koi member ..

Kher , wo Bhai shahab bahar nikle to aaspaas ka nazare ko dekh Kar unhe b wahi positivity feel Hui , fiza m behti thandi Hawa aur itne sundar drishy dekh Kar to kisi ka Mann shant hojae..


Aadmi - ahhhhhhhh Kya nazara h yahan ka . Aise ghane jungle m itni khoobsurat jagah .. wah Kya sahi jagah . Mera bs chale to main yahi bass jau sara Rajashi ( Royal ) kaam chod kr .

Phir wo garden k through andar aane ko hua to usse Ghar k bahar Nanidni nazar aayi to wo thoda chauk Kar wahi khada hogaya . Abhi wo ek baar chaukne s ubhara hi tha ki Nandini k piche ek aur shaks ko dekh Kar to is baar fully shocked ..

Ye dusra shaks koi aur ni Raj hi tha . Raj ko waise b lag Raha tha ki aisa kuch jarur hoga but itna jaldi ye ni socha thaa isliye Nandini k msg milte hi sare kaam khathm karke wo GATE magic s direct Ghar k andar aaya aur phir wo bahar aake Nandini k piche khada hogaya.

Ab b wo aadmi chupchap khada hoke Raj Nandini ko ghur hi Raha tha ki achnak usse koi takraya . Ab ye janab to hamare nanhe shahzade the . Wo to bahar aake kabse hi idhar udhar bhaag bhag Kar khel rahe the aur jab Prem n ek shaks ko dekha to wo uske sath khelne k liye wo aake us aadmi ko pakad Lia . Ab Prem to bacha h to uski pahuch to us lambe chaude aadmi k paero tk hi to usne unhe hi pakad k aadmi k chehre ko dekh Kar hasne laga ..

Aawwwwwwwwwww …… is tarah ki Expression mostly girls k hote h jab wo kisi cute cheez ko dekhti but yahan to in Bhai shahab k expression aise ho rakhe the aur reason hamare param priye Prem..
Ek to Prem masoom bacha upar s uska muskurata chehra .. hayee kisi patthar Dil ko b pighla de par ye janab to patthar Dil k to bilkul ni the Jo ki unke expression s hi pata chal Raha tha ..


Us aadmi n jab Prem ko dekha to pehle hang hogaya ( above mentioned thoughts ) aagae phir wo wahi ghutno k Bal bhaith gaya aur bade pyar s Prem k hatho ko pakad usse dekhne laga aur bola

Aadmi - wah , itne khoobsurat jagah p itna pyara bacha . Beta aap to bade pyare Bache ho Kya naam h apka ?

Prem us aadmi k paas hone s Dara ni balki khush hi lag Raha tha . Usne b apne tuti futi bhasa m jawab dia

Prem - mela naaam Plemmm h . Aap Kon h aul aap mele sath kheloge

Aadmi - ( pyar s ) acha to apka naam plem h ( bacho ki hi awaaz m , waise to wo b samajh gae the ki naam Prem h na ki Plem par bacho k samne to bcha banana padta h )
Ha beta hum jarur khelenge apke sath par pehle aap apne Mata Aur pita s ni milwaenge ?

Prem - ha ha jalul . Meli MAA aul mele baba andar h , Chalo aap mele sath Chalo aao aao


Phir Prem us aadmi ka hath pakad andar Lane lagta h. Wahi Ghar k bahar darwaze p khade Raj Nandini prem aur us aadmi ki baato Kon sun Kar muskura rahe the . Ab Prem tha hi aisa ki jitna wo masoom , utni uski harqate b.


Prem dheere dheere us aadmi ka hath pakad Kar Ghar ki taraf aane laga. Ab chuki Prem chotha tha aur usne aadmi ki ungliya pakad rakhi thi to wo aadmi b ab jhuk kar sath m chal Raha tha . Najane kyu par uska Mann hi ni hua ki wo apna hath chuda sake .
Aise hi dono Raj Nandini k pass aagae Jo ab ek sath khade the

Raj Nandini ko dekh Kar Prem n us aadmi ka hath choda aur bhaag Kar dono k Pao k paas aake unhe pakad Lia . Prem k aate hi dono b ghutno k bal bhaith gse the aur Ek sath Prem ko gale laga Lia. Uske baad dono alag hue to

Raj - aree beta Prem ,ye aap kisko leke aaye ho

Prem- baba ye.. ye . Ye mele ...
Ab Prem ko ye pata ni tha ki wo shaks Kon h isliye wo confused tha ki Kya bole..

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[LoveStar]

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