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Hi sabhi ko zeba ka estikbal, ummid karti hu aap sabne meri pehli kahani
" https://xforum.live/threads/mujhe-randipan-karna-hai.19579/ "
Padi hogi, aur pasand bhi aayi hogi, waise main koi achi writer nahi hu, bus pehle 'mastram ki kitabein' padi hai, aur kuch kahaniyon main dusron ki thodi bahut madad bhi ki hai, par "
https://xforum.live/threads/mujhe-randipan-karna-hai.19579/ " hai, puri tarah meri khud ki likhi hu kahani hai,
Mera pura dhiyan usi kahani pe hai, aur usi pe rahega, aur uski sabse eham wajah ye hai ki, us kahani main likha gaya har kirdaar, meri asal Zindagi se liya gaya hai, aur us kahani k kafi saare kisse bhi kahi na kahi asal Zindagi se jude hue hai
Berhaal yaha main jis kahani ki suruwat karne ja rahi hu, asal main ye meri likhi hui nahi hai, es kahani ka idea, aur kahani k kirdaar maine diye thay par ese likha Aarya ji ne thay, wo bhi ek alag platform pe, aur ab unhone kuch personal wajhon se likhna band kar diya hai, toh ab main ek tarah se apni es pehli kahani ko yaha pe post kar rahi hu, aur agar aap sabko ye pasand aayi toh main, aage bhi likhti rahungi,
Par ha mera pura dhiyan sabse pehle hamesha meri pehli kahani
https://xforum.live/threads/mujhe-randipan-karna-hai.19579/
Pe hi rahega,
Sath hi main es kahani ko chapter k hisab se likhungi, yani har ek kissa khud main pura bhi hoga aur dusre se connected bhi hoga, sath hi esse ye bhi fayda hoga ki agar kisi wajah se maine ye kahani band bhi kar di toh kahi se bhi adhurapan nahi lagega, jo ki Akshar yaha ki kahaniyon k sath hota hai
Toh chaliye suru karte hai, meri hi zindagi se judi ek asal insan pe banaya gaya mera pehla kirdaar " Nandani" ki zindagi ko kahani main padna, waise bata du ye kirdaar bus asal Zindagi se hai , kahani main aane waale kisse nahi
Aur ha ek bar phir se Aarya ji ka shukriya, jinhone meri pehli kahani ko likha tha, aur us kahani k kai kisse (adventure) bhi likhe
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Ye kahani, sidhi sadi par kamal ki khubsurat aur hasin aurat 'Nandini' ki hai, hamari Nandini ek sadi suda patni, babu, bhabhi, devrani, beti, behan hai,
Kiya ye Nandini sareef hai, ya ek Chinar ???
Ya phir Nandini ek aisi aurat hai, jo duniya k liye toh sareef par uski asal Zindagi kuch aur hi hai ?
Kon hai Nandini ?, kiya hai Nandini ?, Uska pariwar, uska aaj aur beeta hua kal, kaisa tha ?, Kaisa hai ?
Yahi sab hai es kahani ya chote chote in adventure main, jo chapter ki tarah aayenge, aur aapke lund ko pareshan aur chut ko aag ki tarah garam kar denge
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Aur ha jinhone meri main kahani " mujhe randipan karna hai" nahi padi hai, plz wo use bhi pade aur uspe apne behad khas comments bhi kare