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ZeeHh

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sorry dosto abhi kuch time tak toh update nahi aayege lekin jab bhi aayege tab kam se kam 10 toh aayege jismai pura verma's past ko khatam krruga kyuki mai past ko thoda sa ache se plan krne mai laga hua hu aur issi liye mai abhi update nahi de raha hu kyu ki yeh update ek baar mai khatam hoga tabhi maja aayega
Bhai Phr bh koi date bta do k kb tak ay ga
 

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update 1

(Mumbai ke ek porsh itlaka jaha per aaj under ground ek bike race hone wali hai wese toh yeh bike race illigal hai lekin hai lekin jessa ki sab jante ho india mai paise aur pahuch se kuch bhi ho sakta hai toh dosto yah per bahut rush ikatha ho raka tha tabhi le banda hath mai mike le kr aata hai )

Commentator :- so ladies and gentlemen mai apka dost apka host ap sabhi ka swagat krta hu aaj ki yeh race iss liye khas hai kyuki yaah per duniya ke jane mane deadly racer mujud hai aaj tak yeh race shirf Mumbai mai local ke bich hui hai lekin aaj yeh race hogi international ke sath in sabhi racer ki ek khasiyat hai ki yeh aaj tak koi bhi race nahi hare apne phel participate ko introduce krane se phele mai winning price batadu jo ki hai 100 cr ji haan 100 cr toh issi ke sath mai apne phele participate ko introduce krra du

MR.LUCA jo ki london ke jane mane streat race hai inka record hai inhone aaj tak kabhi bhi 200 km per hour se kam speed mai bike nahi chalai toh aaj dekhna hai kya yeh apna record aur apni jeet kr silsila kayam rakh paate hai

Humare second participate hai MR.CHAIN jo ki china se yaha shirf yeh race ke liye he aaya hai mujhe yeh batate hue bahut khushi ho rahi hai ki chain duniya ke sabse fast bike ridder bhi hai inse jada teej bike aaj tak koi nahi chala paya hai aur sayad na he chala paye lekin yah aaj ki iss partiyogita mai sabse fast hona jaruri nahi hai kyuki yeh india hai mere dost let se what’s happen

Ab mai bulana chahuga humare tesare participate jo ki gremani se MR.LEE jinke liye kaha jata hai ki yeh bike ko apni isharo per nacha sakte hai aaj tak inse ache stant koi nahi kr sakta inke stant all over world mai famous hai yah uh bolo yeh stant ke janam data hai

Humare agle participate hai south afrika se MR. MIKAL inke liye kaha jata hai ki yeh koi bhi race race shuru hone se phele he jeet jate hai kyuki yeh har race ko apne dimag se jeete hai

And last but not least coria se MR. SHAN jaha har racer apne tacnik se yeh race jeeta hai wahi mr. shan logo ki tacnik ko read kr ke usko fail kr ke race jeetne mai mahir hai

so ledies and gental ab dekh na hai ki iss race ko kon jeeta hai yaha har racer apne aap mai kash hai lekin lekin lekin ap sab soch rahe hoge ki maine iss competition ko international bol tha lekin yah humare desh india se koi nahi hai toh mai ap ko batana chahuga ki yaha ek surprise hai ap se ke liye ki iss competition mai yaha koi bhi ek race participate kr sakta hai lekin ek condition hai agar iss race ke douran use kuch bhi ho jata hai toh uska jimmedar who kud hoga aur agar who chahe toh rule mai kuch bhi add kr sakta hai lekin kuch bhi gata nahi sakta hai

Mr. luca :-(yeh English mai bol raha hai lekin mai hindi mai transalate kr rha hu ) sorry lekin mujhe nahi lagta hai ki india mai essa koi hoga jo humse panga le sake (yah per who hindi mai bolta hai )kya bolta hai tum log haa ya agar kissi ne maa ka dudh piya hai toh hum se compet kr ke dikhao ha hah ha ha ha )

(thodi der itna jar krne ke baad jab koi nahi aata hai toh )

Mr. luca :- kya hua tum indian mai dum nahi hai ha ha ha ha ha ha ha kya hua khoon ki garmi khatam ho gayi yah phir maa dudh kam pad kya ha ha ha

(tabhi bhid mai se ek shaks ki aawaj aati hai )

Admi :- na khoon ki garmi khatam hui na hi maa ka dudh kam pada hai bus chup toh hum apni Sanskrit ke liya the lekin ab swal hummari khudari ka hai toh ab tum hari lege bhi aur dard bhi nahi hone dege (iss admi ne apna chehra dhaka hua tha aur uske sath ek khubsurat ladki bhi thi jo sayad uski girlfriend hogi )

Commentator :-wait wait agar aap iss race mai participate krna chahate hai toh fromalities puri kr de kya mai apka naam jaan sakta hu

Admi:- ronit naam hai mera

Commentator:- sorry to say but kya aap wahi ronit hai jo piche 2 mahine se all over india ki sari race jeet te aaye hai

Admi:- ji haan

Commentator :-toh dost ab dil tham kr bethye aaj iss race mai naya aayam aaya hai aaj iss race mai ek esse race aaye hai jo na toh koi rule follow krte hai nahi koi tecniq na he koi pattern hai koi system bus unhe ek he baat pata hai who hai jeetna bus jeetna sir ek personal sawal kya mai apka chehera dekh sakta hu

Ronit :- nahi yeh mai kissi ko nahi dikha sakta hu sorry

Commentator:- so dosto ab iss race mai aur bhi jada maja aane wala hai kyu ab yeh race mai ek indian bhi hai jessa ki aap jante hai ki rule apko

(abhi Commentator itna he bola tha ki kissi ne uske hath mai ek paper de diya )

Commentator:- wow it’s amazing aaj tak esse rule essi race na kissi ne dekhe hogi na suni hogi so rules are

  • Yeh race public mai hogi who bhi opposite direction mai
  • Agar koi bhi racer kissi bhi car bike se touch bhi hota hai toh uski race wahi kahtam ho jayega yani wph haar jayega
  • Iss race ke duran kissi bhi insaan ko koi bhi chot lagti hai toh bhi racer he hare ga
  • Kissi bhi resion se bike nahi rukni chahiye
  • Aur last yeh race iss xxxx rote per hogi
(iske baad sab taiyari ho jati hai sab apni apni position le ne jate hai )

Luka :- hey mr. you will die before complete this race

Ronit :- chal thik hai agar mai bach gata toh aa raat mai tere wife ke sath souga yeh done

Luka :- if you lost

Ronit :- jo tu bole

Luka :- l also want your gf

Ronit :- but if I win I want to fuck your wife in fornt of you

(luca kuch soch kr )

Luka :- done (aur apna mobile nikalta hai aur kuch krne lagta hai )

(wahi bhed mai kuch log apas mai baat kr rahe hote hai mai public ko p1 p2 naam se boluga )

P1 :- yaar yeh ronit kon

P2:- wese toh indian racer hai lekin last to month se kafi famous hai

P1 :- essa kyu

P2 :- kyuki yeh apne rival ko physically aur mentally harata hai

P1 :- mtlab

P2 :- maine toh bus itna he souna hai ki yeh yeh jisse bhi hararta hai us raat uski wife yaa gf ke sath sex krta hai aur who bhi uske samne

P1 :- yeh kessa tarika hai

P2 :- dekh mujhe jinta pata tha bata diya ab tu race dekha

(abhi sare racer apni apni position le chuke the tabhi ek ladki centre mai ek red kapda le kr khadi ho jati hai aur “ready stady go” aur issi ke sath race shuru ho jati hai )

(LUCA CHAIN LEE MIKAL SHAN and last mai RONIT apni apni bike se race shuru kr dete hai lekin jesse he yeh public ke bich mai aate hai yaah per sab apne apne tarike se race ko jeetne ki koshis krte hai ronit sabse phele lee ko pass kr ne ki koshish krte hai lekin lee baar baar ronit ko aage jane ka rasta block krta hai jisse ronit aage nahi ja pa raha tha tabhi ronit bich road per stant krna shuru kr deta hai jasse public mai ronit ronit ka shor hone lagta hai yeh dekh kr lee ko gussa aata hai aur who bhi ronit ki tarah apne stant dikhane lagta hai lekin jessa ki aap sab jante hai ki india mai kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hai ussi wajeh se lee ki bike ek hole mai chali jati hai jisse uska balance bigad jata hai aur woh race se bahar nikal jata hai ab ronit ka dusra padav tha chain

Phir ronit apni bike ki speed bada kr chain kr pass le jata hai chain bhi full speed mai apni bike ko kuch iss tarah chala raha tha ki kissi bhi halaat mai ronit aage nahi nikal paye ronit bahut koshis kr raha tha usse aage nikalne ke liye lekin baar baar chain usse kesse na kesse krke piche kr deta isse pare shan hokr ronit ne chain ko ek gail mai gussa diya jo koi Mumbai ki rush area mai se ek tha chaine jesse he waha pahucha toh chaine ko aage nikalne ka koi rasta najar nahi aaya aur uski speed he itni thi ki who kuch samjh nahi paya aur majburi mai usse break lagana pad lekin tab tak uski bike ek aunty ko ja kr lag chuki thi issi ke sath chain bhi race se bahar ho chukka tha lekin jesse he chaine aunty se takraya wesse he aunty ne “kute kamine sura” najane kya kya sounana suru kr diya aur public ne apne hath saaf krne shuru kr diya aur thodi der mai who ad mara ho gaya tha

Ab ronit ko apne next participate mikal ko harana tha jo ki thoda muskil tha kyuki mikal har tarah ke root ko bahut jaldi study kr leta tha jesse he mikal ke pass ronit aaya toh mikal ne usse aage jane ka rasta de diya yeh baat ronit ko thodi aajeb lagi lekin usne bina kissi soch ke waha se nikal gaya

Ab ronit ko luca ko harana tha luca kabhi bhi apni speed 200 se kam nahi krta tha issi liye ronit ko luca tak pahucne mai eedi choti ka jor lagana pada lekin thodi mushkil ke baad ronit luca ke pass pahuch gaya lekin ab ronit ko kissi bhi tarah luca ko harana tha jo ki sab se mushkil kam tha kyuki luca ke pass jitna attitude tha usse kahi jada experience lekin who kehete hai na kabhi kabhi insaan over confedent hokr sab kuch haar jata hai waha luca ke sath hua agle turn per jab ronit aur luca ne bike turn kit oh ronit ne apni speed thodi kam ki lekin luka ne ess kuch nahi kiya lekin you know india ki sadke waha per road thoda kharab tha jaha per chote chote pather pade hue the jiski wajeh se luca ki bike slip ho gayi aur luca jeeti hui race har gaya

Ab race ka sabse maine character tha shan jo ki kissi ka bhi style ko read kr ke us per war krta hai yahi waje thi ki usne baki sab ko phele he hara diya tha lekin who kehete hai ki baap toh baap hota hai issi wajeh se jesse he ronit age badene laga toh shan ne usse baar pass lene se rokne ki koshis krne laga ke do baar toh shan ne usse samne se aane wali car se takkar krne ki koshis ki shan ki iss harkat se ronit samjh gaya ki shan kiya chahta hai toh ronit ne abki baar samne se aane wali car ki taraf chala gaya lekin jesse he shan usse us taraf lene aaya tabhi ronit uder se hat kr dusri side aakr shank o car se takkar krra de aur ronit age nikal gaya aur winning line tak pahuch gaya aur race jeet gaya uske baad ronit ne apne trofi le aur winning price le kr bahar aa gaya jaha per mikal khada tha

Mikal :- (hindi mai ) mann gaye guru tum indian bhi kam nahi ho

Ronit :- thanks lekin mujhe yeh janna hai ki tumne mujhe roka kyu nahi

Mikal :- kyu ki mai race apne talent se jeeta hu na ki grouping krke

Ronit :- mtlb (phir mikal ne luca ka ek msg dikhya jismai likha tha ki yeh race chahe koi bhi jeeto lekin ronit nahi jeetna chahiye ) ohh toh yeh baat thi

Mikal :- yes agar bhagwaan ne chaha toh kabhi tum se phir race lagayege bye friend nice to meet you

Ronit :- same here (uske baad ronit luca ke pass chala jata hai ) hi luca

Luca :- hey you (hindi mai ) tum tumne janbuj kr yeh root liye tha taki hum sab haar jaye

Ronit :- arre yaar ek international bike ridder ko yeh sab shobha nahi deta ki who yeh kahe ki who yeh kahe ki road kharab tha wese bhi tum har gaye ho aur ab tumhe apni shart puri krni padegi

Luca :- ha ha ha ha you indian are such a fool kon janta hai ki hummare bich mai yeh shart lagi hai

Ronit:- (ek choti se smile ke sath ) kasam se tum yeh soch rahe ho lekin afsos tumhe bike racing agreement sign dekh kr krna chahiye tha usmai saaf saaf likh tha agar koi bhi ridder aapas mai koi shart rakhta hai aur uska koi bhi digital prove hota hai toh racing foundation use puri krregi aur agar ridder usse manne se mana krta hai toh uski sari property foundation ki hogi

Luca :- essa koi clause nahi tha tum jhoot bol rahe ho

Ronit :- essa tha ( aur ronit foundation ke member ko bula ta hai aur usse confirm krra deta hai )

Luca :- where is digital prove

(tabhi uske pass ek voice mail aata hai )

Luca :- you planned it you trapped me

Ronit :- ha ha ha ha ha tujhe pata hai luca hummare india mai ek kahawat hai ki “phele tolo, phir molo, phir bolo” but afsos tu indian nahi hai

Luca :- you

Ronit :- chilane se koi fayeda nahi yaha per teri soune wala koi nahi hai aur ha mujhe rape krna pasand nahi hai toh please apni wife ko mere liye tu khud manayega ha ha ha ha ha ha aur haan tumhare pass shir 1 hour hai

(uske baad ronit waha se nikal kr hotel mai chala jata hai aur hotel mai chala jata hai aur fresh hokr wait kr ne lagta hai thik 1 : 30 hour baad gate per knok hota hai ronit ja kr gate kholta hai samne luka aur uski wife marry hoti hai )
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Update 3

mera ek bada bhai aur ek badi behen hai aur ek choti behen bhi hai mai aksar unki photo ****** book per dekh leta hu aur chacha chichi ki bhi ek mujhe se chote judwa ba he hai ek behen ek bhai jitna mai unse milne ke liye excited hu utna he who log bhi hoge ab jada apko pareshan na krte hue bus yahi per khatam krta hu

Apka beta

Ronit (phir kuch soch kr delete kr deta hai) rohan



NOTE:- dosto next update mai verma family ka intro aur rohan ki entry hogi

Ab aage

(iske baad ronit ek aur msg send krta hai jis mai likhta hai “I am coming” aur send kr deta hai aur uske baad woh sone chala jata hai wahi dusri aur jaha yeh do msg pahuche the ek chehere per iss msg ki khushi thi aur wahi dusri aur ek ke chehere per iss msg ke milne se gussa tha jesse kissi ne uske kale pani ki saja de di ho chalo ab story ke kuch naye character ke bare mai jaan le )

Phele hum baat krte hai iss kahani ke hero yani “rohan ya ronit” ap jo bhi samjho lekin mai toh bus yahi kahuga ki ap wahi samjhna jo mai apko dikha raha hu kyu dikha raha hu yeh apko aage story mai pata chalega abhi ke liye bus itna he hai ki jaha rohan apni family se bharpur pyar krta hai chahe koi bhi usse kitni bhi nafrat kr le lekin who bus unhe pyar he dega rohan ke andar duniya ki haar achi aadat hai ke tarah se yeh samjh lo ki who mahatma hai lekin wahi dusri aur ronit ke andar duniya ki har burai hai duniya ka essa koi nasha na hohi nahi sakta jo ronit ne nahi kiya ho , ronit ko ladki se nahi ladkiyo ke jism se pyar hai jaha rohan family ke liye kuch bhi kr sakta hai wahi ronit ko family sabd se nafrat hai in short insaan ke roop mai DEVIL agar education ki baat krre toh bus itna he ki rohan ne last year he BBA complete kiya hai aab MBA delhi se krne ja raha hai

NOTE:- yaha agar koi samjh raha ho ki ronit ya rohan mai koi super netural power hai toh essa kuch nahi hai aur na he yaha koi “multiple personallty disorder” wali koi perblem hai iss character ko main bahut soch samjh kr banaya hai read with focus.



Rohan uff ronit Family introduction

Father :- surender verma jo ki 54 year ke hai lekin body ek dum fit hai inko har choti choti baat per gussa aa jata hai iss wajeh se pure ghar mai koi bhi inki kahi baat ko nahi taalta inhone ek baar jo bol diya who pathar ki lakir hai inka khud kr ek family business hai khud ka business hone ke sath inke bahut se dusman hai lekin inka sabse bada dusman koi aur nahi inka khud ka beta rohan hai jiski yeh sakal tak dekhna pasand nahi krte kya reason hai woh story mai apko pata chalega ek yahi karan tha jis wajeh se rohan ko 21 saal tak inhone apne pariwar se dur rakhaaek baat aur inka business india mai top 10 mai aata hai

Mother :- pooja verma jessa naam wesi he inki serat haihala ki ghar mai sab se badi hone ki wajeh se inka he raaj chalta hai lekin yeh humesha apne se jaada dusro ki khushi ke baare mai sochti hai ek yeh he hai jo surender yani apne pati ka gussa control kr sakti hai baki koi nahi lekin jab baat rohan ki ho toh yeh bhi kuch nahi kr sakti yeh pooja path krne wali gharelu aurat hai inki age 50 hai aur body bhi fit hai

Elder son(surender ) :- vishal verma wese toh vishal ka nature kafi acha hai lekin ladkiyo ke mamle mai thoda lose hai jaha ladki dekhi usse set krne ki sochta hai but har baar muh ki he khata hai hala ki iss ek bahut sundar girl friend hai jisse isski engagement ho rakhi hai lekin ladke toh ladke hote hai wese bhaishad ne personallty per kafi kam kiya hai shakal bhi achi hai lekin phir bhi wese yeh drink shirf week end per krte hai aur inka favorite kam Xfroum per story padna lekin inki agar kissi se sabse jada fati hai toh woh inke wese inki age 26 hai aur inhone MBA complete kr ke apna family business samhal rakha hai

Elder daughter (surender ):- neha verma wese toh aksar kaha jata hai ki betiya maa ki parchayi hoti hai lekin inke case mai essa kuch bhi nahi hai yeh inhe ghar ke kaamo se bahar ke kaamo mai interest hai inhe dekh kr toh koi bhi yeh bol sakta hai ki yeh chalti firti attitude ki dukan hai wese toh yeh kissi se jaldi baat nahi krti lekin jab bhi koi inse baat krta hai toh bahut soch samjh kr krta hai kyo ki inhe koi baat kabhi bhi galt lag sakti hai aur ussper inhe kabhi bhi gussa aa sakta hai aur uske baad yeh kya krre gi yeh toh bagwaan bhi nahi janta lekin inki jaan shirf do logo mai busti hai ek megha jo iski sagi behen hai aur dusri sakshijo ki inki chacha ki ladki hai chahe yeh kitne bhi gusse mai ho lekin in dono ke samne aate he inka gussa ek dum khatam ho jata hai inki age hai 23 abhi haal he mai MBA complete kiya hai aur apna he family business join kr liya hai

Younger daughter (surender ):- megha verma iss ghar mai aagar koi sabse jadda khurafati hai toh woh hai megha iske dimag mai hummesha koi na koi khurafat reheti he hai isse agar kissi se nafrat hai toh yeh uska jeena haram kr degi lekin agar kissi ko apna maan liya toh uske liye yeh kissi se bhi lad sakti hai siwaye apne papa ke baki dilki saaf hai lekin dost iski hummesha aawar logo ke sath hai hala ki isse padai mai koi interest nahi hai lekin ek family business aur dusra collage life enjoy krne ke chakkr mai inhone BBA mai admission krra liya hai pichle 2 saal se yeh bhagwaan ki kripase passing mark se pass hoti aa rahi hai dikhne mai sundar face ek dum masoom wala hai lekin woh kehete hai na ki har chamakne wali cheg sona nahi hoti wqhiinka bhi haal hai aur inki har shararat mai inka sath deta hai ansh wese inki aage 20 hai

Surender younger brother family

(surender’s brother ) :-Ravinder verma wese toh inke baar mai yeh kehena galt nahi hoga ki yeh kalyug ke laxman hai kyuki inke liye bade bhai ki muh se nikla ek ek sabd pathar ki lakir hai body se bhi normal hai aur age hai inki 45 ki hai

ravinder wife :- Bharti verma inka nature bhi kafi sweet hai yeh bhi apne pati ki tarah hai yeh bhi apna har kam pooja yani apni jeethani se puch kr krti hai dono mai behno jitna pyar hai yeh bhi gajab ki sundar hai lekin yeh sab se jada apne jeeth se darti hai unke samne inki juban bhi nahi khulti hai inki aage hai 42 hai

Ravinder’s son :- ansh wese toh ansh aur sakshi dono judwa he hai lekin dono mai jamin asman ka antar hai wese inki age 17 ki hai lekin inke shok 21 saal ki hai aaj tak na jane kitni gril friend banai yeh toh isse bhi nahi pata aur dusra isse har b’day per sabse expensive cheeg he chahiye phir kuch bhi kyuna ho wese ghar mai kissi ko nahi pata ki yeh nashe ka aadi bhi hai yeh sab se chup kr drug bhi leta hai jisse abhi shirf 2 mahene he hue hai

ravinder daughter :- Sakshi yeh iss ghar ki sabse khas character hai yeh sabse choti hai kyuki ansh aur sakshi mai 2 min ka antra hai yeh itni komal hai ki koi isske samne agar thoda jor se bhi baat krde toh isski aakho se aashu nikal aate hai isse logo se milna aur dosti krna bahut pasnad hai lekin isse heart problem hai jiske ilaaj ke liye yeh puri duniya mai kissi ke pass nahi hai isska case bahut critical hai isska ilaaj kissi bhi doctor ke pass nahi hai issi liye isse bahut samhal kr rakhna padta hai issi wajeh se sakshi ki kissi ke milne ki permission nahi hai na he kahi bahar jane ki docter ke according sakshi ke pass shirf 8 mahine hai

(abhi jo maine character hai who yeh he hai lekin dhere dhere mai baki ke characher ko bhi introduce kruga now back to story jab ronit so kr utha toh uss samye dopahar ke 2 baj rahe the usne uth kr fresh ho kr apne liye ek cup coffer aur apne liye khana odder kr diya aur bahar se news paper lene chala gaya lekin waha per usse ek new sim card bhi milla jo usse pata tha kyu diya gaya hai ronit ne who sim card liya aur apne phone mai dal liya aur purana sim card thod diya phir woh apna saman pack krne chala gaya thodi der baad waha apna lunch kiya aur apna saman lekr bahar aaya aur ek call ki thodi der mai usse ek admi mila aur usne usse ek chabi di aur waha se apni bike le kr nikal pada )

4 din baad

(ab in 4 din ko yaad rakhna kyuki Mumbai to delhi tak bike se 25 se 30 hour he lagte hai toh issne yeh chaar din kaha bitaye kesse bitaye isse yaad rakhna kahani ke duran isska raaz bhi khalna hai )

(aaj 5 wa din hai ronit ki journey ka aaj rohan apni manji apne pariwar ke pass pahuchne wala hai chalo thoda uske pariwar se mile ek bade se ghar mai ek bade se dinning table per jaha ek time mai aaram se 25 kog khana kha sakte hai us per shubha ka nasta laga hua tha sab log waha per aa kr apna pana nasta kr choke the sabhi uthne he wale the )

Admi:- bharti sakshi ko room mai chhod kr jaldi wapas aao aur abhi koi kahi nahi jayega mujhe aaj sab se kuch important baat krni hai

(ji haan yeh aur koi nahi surender he hai ab se mai surender ko papa pooja ko mummy aur bharti ko chachi aur ravinder ko chacha ke naam se bhulaga or rohan ko mai mai kahuga thodi der mai bharti bhi aa jati hai )

Papa:- aaj tum sabko mujhe ek baat batani hai jo maine aaj tak tum logo ko nahi batayi yeh baat aaj tak shirf mujhe tumhari mummy yani pooja tumhare chacha yani ravinder aur tumhari chachi yani bharti ko he pata thi lekin aaj mujhe yeh bhi batana hai

Vishal :- kya baat hai papa ap bahut tension mai ho essi kya baat hai

Neha :- ji papa bataiye

Papa :- ab koi beech mai nahi bolega toh souno tum tin bhai behen ke ilawa mera ek aur beta hai mera NAJAYAJ beta rohan jo aaj wapas aa raha hai jo tum hara sotela bhai bhi hai

Sabhi bache :- kya ………………..

Papa :- haan yeh baat sach hai meri najayaj aulad hai lekin kabhi mene usse pani aulad nahi mana kyuki (iske aage ek story hai jo ki mai abhi nahi batane wala ) ek yeh wajeh hai jis ki wajeh se mujhe usse nafrat thi issi liye maine usse apne pass se dur kr diya lekin court ki uss fesale ke anusar mai usse tab taka apne se alag nahi kr sakta jab tak who 21 saal complete kr ke mere aur meri family ke sath pura ek saal na bita le toh court ke fesale ke anusar aaj se 2 din baad who 21 saal ka hone wala hai aur who aaj yaha aane wala hai

Neha :- papa (chilate hue ) agar aap ko yeh lag raha hia ki hum usse apna lege toh ya usse normal beheve krrege toh mai essa nahi kr sakti mujhe aap kissi gali ke awar kutte ke sath rehene ke liye kesse bol sakte ho pata nahi kis gandgi mai pala hoga woh

(abhi vishal , megha aur ansh kuch bolne wale hote hai tabhi surender sabko hath dikha deta hai )

Papa:- mujhe pata hai ki tum sab kya bolna chahate ho lekin shayad tum sabne meri baat sahi se souni nahi jitni nafrat mai usse krta hu shayad he koi usse krta ho lekin mai bhi majbur hu na chahte hue bhi humme usse apne ghar mai rakhna he hoga and that’s final woh yaha ek kirayedarki tarah he rahega humme koi bhi bound nahi kr sakta usse mil ya milane ke liye

(itna bolkr surender waha se nikal jata hai wahi sab nikal jate ravinder surender ke sath office , vishal and neha ek sath office and megha and ansh ek sath school and collage and mummy and chachi ghar ke kam mai buzy ho jati hai phir market ki tarf chali jati hai )

(idhar mai delhi gumta hua ek sumsan raste se aa raha tha ki mujhe ek raste mai ek gadi ke ander ek ladki kuch ladko se ghri hui milli dekhte ke sath he pata lag raha tha ki jarur who ladke usse pareshan kr rahe the maine jaldi se apni bike us ladki ke pass le ja kr khadi kr di aur apna phone nikal kr )

Mai :- hello maa haa mai pahuch gaya didi ke pass haa abhi baat krrata hu ek minute

(isshre se sisha kholne ko bolta hu )

Mai :- yeh lo didi mummy faltu mai pareshan kr rahi hai kab ka collage khatam ho gaya lekin abhi tak ghar nhi pahuch jaldi baat kr aur yaha koi aane wala hai kya phele baat krro

Ladki :- hello (thodi der chup rehe kr meri taraf dekhti hai mai usse palke juka kr baat krne ko bolta hu ) haan mummy bhai pahuch gaya hai mai who ghar he aa rahi thi lekin achanak meri car ******** jagaha kharab ho gayi thi toh mai yah per hu

Mai:- didi ap bhi na agar gadi kharab ho gayi thi toh mujhe call kr deti (phone chente hue ) haa maa mai abhi thodi der mai didi ke sath pahuchta hu ok bye chalo apna bage le kr gadi ko lock kr do aur chalo mere sath

(ladki thoda sochti hai phir mere sath bike per beth jati hai )

Mai :- didi ap beth gaye

Ladki :- hmm

(phir mai bike waha se nikal lete hu )

Ladki :- tumne waha jhoot kyu bola ki mai tumhari behen hu

Mai :- meri na sahi kissi kit oh hogi he na aur mujhe laga tum problem mai ho iss liye help ki

Ladki:- thanks please mujhe ******** tak chhod doge

Mai:- dekho bura mat manna mujhe delhi ke bare mai kuch nahi malum hai kyuki mujhe delhi mai aaye hue abhi 2 gante he hue hai

Ladki:- haste hue tum itne innocent ho ya banne ki koshis kr rahe ho

Mai :- nahi mai essa he hu kyu tumhe essa kyu laga

Ladki :- bus esse he bye the way mera naam hai rashmi parjapati

Mai :- iss nacheej ko rohan kehete hai

Rashmi:- nice name

(phir rashmi rohan ko rasta batati jati hai aur rohan ussi raste per chalta jata hai phir rohan usse uski manjil chhod kr waha se sidhe verma house ki taraf chala jata hai gate per gard usse rokte hai lekin jab who apna naam batata hai toh usse andar jane ki permission de dete hai jab rohan ghar ke ander pahuchta hai toh usse ghar mai koi nahi milta hai who nokaro se ghar walo ke bare mai puchta hai toh who batadete hai ki woh sab bahar gaye hue hai phir ek nokar usse uske room mai chhod aata hai room mai aakr woh nokar ko naste ke liye bol deta hai keheta hai ki nasta room mai he le aaye tab tak nahane chala jata hai phir aa kr nasta krta hai jab woh nasta kr leta hai tab phir nokar se puchta hai ki koi aaya hai ya nahi toh nokar usse mana kr dete hai phir rohan sone chala jata hai kyu ki safar ki wajeh se who kafi thaka hua tha karib 3-4 gante son eke baad jab uski aakh khulti hai tab najar apne room ke gate per jati hai jaha per koi chup chup kr rohan ko dekh raha tha )

NOTE :-next update mai rohan ka pheli baar amana samna hoga apne family member se
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Thakur008

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sorry dosto abhi kuch time tak toh update nahi aayege lekin jab bhi aayege tab kam se kam 10 toh aayege jismai pura verma's past ko khatam krruga kyuki mai past ko thoda sa ache se plan krne mai laga hua hu aur issi liye mai abhi update nahi de raha hu kyu ki yeh update ek baar mai khatam hoga tabhi maja aayega
Ohk bhai aap lage rho story ko aacha banane me hum intezaar krege
Orr story phadne me maja bhi jab he aata h jaab ekk baar me phade
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sorry dosto abhi kuch time tak toh update nahi aayege lekin jab bhi aayege tab kam se kam 10 toh aayege jismai pura verma's past ko khatam krruga kyuki mai past ko thoda sa ache se plan krne mai laga hua hu aur issi liye mai abhi update nahi de raha hu kyu ki yeh update ek baar mai khatam hoga tabhi maja aayega
Bhai ap jitna kaho gy hum wait ker lyn gy bs humy dhokha dy k bhag nh jana.
 
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