Fantasy My Vampire System

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Update 7:-​

Dalki (aliens) te insana vich hoi war karn sab nu do sal. Lyi military school jana te training lena jarurri c. Pame aliens te human vich peacefully treaty(samjota) hoeya c par aliens da koi barosa nhi c oh kdi v attack kr skde c. Kyuke dalkik(aliens) takat de bulhe c te insaan nu control krna cahunde c.

Simran havildar de jan toh vad tezi nal bathroom ch gya te pani nal jo ohdi tanki par gyi c ohnu khali kita. Apna ik bag liya jide vich ohne jine v thorde bhute ohde kolo kprde c te kun saman jo ke na matr hi c bag ch thoos dita te bag chuk ke bhr a gya.

Jida hi simran dhup ch kmre cho bhar aeya ohdi dimag vich fer computer wali bhenji di awaz ayi

[tuci sidah suraj di roshni de thale khrde ho]

[tez dhup karn tugade sharer te asr pe reha a]

[tuhade sare stats dhup pen karn adhe ho gye ne]

Ih sab sunan de nal hi simran ne mehsus kita jime oh bhut thak gya a……. Jo ohne hath ch bag chukeya c oh ohnu bhut heavy lgn lag piya. Ohde kolo tur v nhi ho reha c.

Havildar ohnu dekh ke boliya jldi kar
Pr simran da sara tiyan apni stats wali screen te c. Jis te likhiya c.

[HP:5/10]
[Strength : 5/10]
[Speed:5/10]
[Stamina:5/10]

Te nal hi ik hor message aeya system balo. New mission dhup toh 8 ghante dur rhawo te pao 5exp.

Ih te sokha mission a simran ne socheya ih te oh aram nal so ke pura kr skda a.

Havildar boleya oye mundeya ini holi kyu tur reha jldi kar. Pr ohnu ki pta c sade hero de te stats hi adhe hoye pye a. Chlo simran puj hi gya bus kol te chard gya bus te ohne dekhya ohde vich jine v student bethe c sab nu ohne kadi nhi dekhya c oh je bus ch pehlu seat te beth gya kyuke ohi kahli c.

Bus ch bethde hi ohnu fer computer wali bhneji di awaz ayi tuhade sare stats fir toh normal ho gye ne

[sare stats nrml ho gye ne kyuke hun tuci sidah suraj di roshni de thale nhi ho]

Ih jan ke simran nu khushi hoi ke chalo kuj ye sahi hoeya. Jo ohdi body pehli thaki thaki lag rhi c oh nrml ho gyi. Te ohne dekhya sare bache aps ch galan kr rhe a pr jida hi havildar bus ch chrdeya sare chup ho gye te ohde vl dekhn lag pye.

Bus tur pyi….. Jado v koi bacha aps ch gal krn lgda havildar ohna wal akhan kad ke dekhda te sare chup ho jnde. Fer 20 mint vad simran nu fer ik message sunayi dita.

[hawa vich kuj ajeb detect hoeya]

[tuhanu neend a skdi a]

[pr system krke oh tuhade te asr nhi kr skdi a]

Simran nu ih ajeeb lga te ohne ase apse bus ch dekhya ke kine bache so gye a te kine hje v jag rhe a ih dekh ke havildar ne saun bali hor power full gas shd diti jis nu simran di power v rok nhi payi te baki bache v so gye.

Baki next update ch pta lage ga ke ki hunda a simran nal te baki students nal ki howe ga…….

 

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Update 8​

Simran dian akhan ode upr dige pani de drops nal khulian. Akhan khulan sar ohne dekhya ke ohde charo side sirf hare rang da duan (smoke) hi c.
Simran te baki student jado khrde hoye sab ne dekhya ke othe 500 students khrde ne ik ground ch. Jo jagah sab di pehchan toh bahr c. Baki students v simran wang heran hi c.
Ik awaz puri ground gunji……
Ih ohi havildar c jo simran di bus ch betha c ohne stage te khrde ne bolia mera nam havildar jagdesh singh hai te tuci sare hun apni zindagi 2 sal ithe hi guzaro ge.
Jado simran da tiyan apne ale duale gya te ohne dekhya ohde shmne tin bhut hi advanced buildings ne.
Acha te ahi a military da dunia dian nazra toh lukiya hoeya school. Ithe di technology school de bharli dunia toh bhut advanced c. Gadian (ਗੱਡੀਆਂ) hawa vich udh rehian san, trians vs hawa vich bani patri te chal rehia san. Ithe di technology baki public nalo kyi sal agge c.
Simran jado school di khubsurti cho bhr aeya ohnu feel hoeya ke ohde hath vich kuj hai jado ohne dekhya ode hath vuch ik digital watch c.
Havildar Jagdish singh di awaz fer simran de kana ch pyi oh bol reha c. Ih watch hi tuhadi identity a ke tuci military school de student ho. Ise watch de nal hi tuci kuj khass area vich ja skde ho, ise watch di madad nal tuci apne khane lyi te baki cheezan lyi payment kr skde ho te isdi display te tuhada power level show howe ga.
Hun kuj der vich tuhda test howe ga jide vich tuhadi power level kini a test kiti jawe gi. Odo tak koi v itho na hile jado tak ohda nam nhi bolia janda “Good Luck”.

Baki next update ch...


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Agla update v jld awe ga....
Cmmt krke jarur daso ke tuci story read kar rhe oooo
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Update 9….

Is dharti te v skhtian ne. Jadi ih gal sab shmne ayi te ih v shmne aeya ke kyi lok bhut powerfull ne te kyi bhut ghat. Te shaktian v bhut alag alag types dia c te sab lokan kolo v alag alag shakti c.
Aliens nal war vele jo pehle shaktian wale persons agge aye c ohna nu originals da nam dita gya c. Jina nal insana di bhut madad hoi aleins nl lrdyi ch. Pr aleins jyda c te powerfull v is lyi originals ne apnia shktian baki loka nu den da faisla liya. Ohnna ne shktian nu kitaba vich likh dita. Pr jado war muk gyi ih books fer free milnia band ho gya.

Originals ne socheya kyu na asi ihna kitaba nu bechna shuru kr deye ta ke hna kolo paisa v a jawe te oh hor powerfull ho jaan. Te military ne v kuj bhut powerfull kitaba apne lyi hi rakh lyian.

Te ida hi 1 toh le ke 5 level tak di power walian kitaban hi aam jnta nu milidan c. Te usto upr de level dian kitaban military ne khud lyi te originals lyi rakh liya. Koi v government da bnda ja ohda agge bacha sirf ohna nu hi tgrde power walia kitaba da use krn dita jaan laga.

Te kyi originals ne apnia shktian agge lokan nu ditia hi nhi oh apne te agge aun wali peeredi nu hi apnia shktian dena chahunde c.

Jado simran de mata pita lardyi vichare gye te oh ikala reh gya ohde kolo ina paisa c hi nhi ke oh sab toh low power wali kitab v khareed sake.

Pr ine sala de vad hi hun ohnu ik power te mili hi gyi a. Pr simran nu hje pta nhi a oh power hai ki a te kini powerfull a. Simran ne apni watch nu dekhya ohde te ohda power level 1 likhia a. Fer ohne apne ale dowale dekhya almost sab da power level ik hi c.

Havildar jagdish singh fer uchi awz vich boleya. Tuhanu sab nu 5 5 de group vich bandeya jawe ga te tuhanu teleport kr dita jawe ge te fer tuhada othe test howe ga.

[tuhadi shakti adhi ho gyi kyuke tuci fer sidah suraj di roshni vich ho]

Simran nu system walo fer ik notification mili jo ke ohde lyi buri khabar de wang hi c. Ohde stats fer adhe ho gye c suraj di roshni karn. Simran da sharer fer tila pe gya. Ime. Lag reha c jime simran ne bhut bhar chukeya howe.

Simran nu dekh ke ik munde ne ohnu pucheya bro tu theek te hai a na. Je tenu madad di lord a mein kise nu bula lena.

Simran da tiyan jado oh munde te gya ohne dekhya munda chnga tagrda a. Jime simran chahunda c oh aap howe. Simran ne munde nu manah krta nhi mein theek a bss test krke thorda dar reha a.

Munde ne dekhya ke simran te brda dubla Patla a ihnu dekh ke lgda a ih bhut kamzor te jarur ihnu school vich sare tang v bhut krde hune a.

Te duji side simran soch reha c. Ke je test toh vad v ohda power level 1 hi reha te ohde nal fer ithe v oda hi howe ga jime school ch hunda c.

Munde apna hath simran bal vada ke boleya hello mera nam suraj a. Simran nal. Ih pehli vari ho reha c ke koi munda ohde bal friendship da hath vda reha howe. Nhi te hun tak oda koi v dost nhi bneya c. Sare ohde age de munde ohnu bhut bully krde c. Simran ne ohda ina milansar vartab dekh ke suraj nal hath mila liya a

[tuhade te shakti da istemal ho reha]
[istemal hoon wali shakti nu rad kar dita gya hai]

Jado simran de system te ih message aeya simran vrde ajeeb trike nal suraj wal dekhya. Pr fer v surja ne simran da hath nhi shdeya. Computer wali kurdi fer boli.

[tuhade te shakti da istemal ho reha a]
[istemal hoon wali shakti nu rad kr dita gya hai]

Simran ne fer jor nal apna hath suraj kolo shuda hi liya.

Suraj:- teko kehrdi shakti a.

Simran:- mere kol koi v shakti nhi a.

Suraj simranda jabab sun ke khush nhi c kyuke ohnu pta c ke ihde kol koi te shakti hai a jo meri power ide te kam nhi kiti.

Surja te simran ch hor galan hundian. Ine ch hi havildar di awaz a gyi.

Agla group :- Simran Singh, Suraj Partap Singh, Kiranpreet Kaur, Rubi Kaur, Parminder Singh.

Baki agle update ch…..

 

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Update no. 9 v a gya a
Cmnt krde daso story kime lag rhi a sab nu

 

[Surya1]

To be honest story interesting hai but language ki wajah se padhne ka Mann nahi i hope we'll get it in Hindi language

 

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To be honest story interesting hai but language ki wajah se padhne ka Mann nahi i hope we'll get it in Hindi language

Matlb apko punjabi nhi ati hai..?

 

[Surya1]

Matlb apko punjabi nhi ati hai..?

Aati hai but puri tarike se nahi tabhi to bola story interesting toh hai but language ki wajah se padhne ka Mann nahi ho rha hai

 

[Surya1]

Matlb apko punjabi nhi ati hai..?

Feeling toh language ki wajah se aati hai so i hope aap hindi me bhi try kre