Fantasy My Vampire System

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Update 5….​

Simran de dimag ch hje v ahi chal reha c ke ih book ohde mata pita shd ke gye c. Pr simran kde v is tarah di book vare nhi suneya c jo gaeb ho ke insaan de vich sama jandi ae.

Te je shaktian walia books c v te oh inia mehngian san ke koi grreb bnda ohna nu khareed v nhi skda c. Gareeb lok te bss mamuli shakti walian hi kitaba khareed skde c.

Simran ne na hi eh suneya c ke book nal mili shkti insaan nu ik computer system dindi a te ohdian shaktian purian kholan lyi sanu khud mission par krke exp ekathi karke hi mil sakdian ne.

Simran nu is gal di bhut khushi c ke ohnu book mil gyi kyuke na hi us kolo paise c ke oh is tarah di book future ch khareed panda. Te na hi ohde kolo pehla koi power c oh bss ik aam insaan c pr hun oh level 1 di power wala insaan ban gya a. Hun oh is power di madad nal kuj v kar skda a bss ohnu practise krne pawe gi te kam. Ban jawe ga.

Pr simran nu pta nhi c chngi tarah kr us kolo power hai ki kyuke behos hun toh pehla jo sytem di awaz c oh ohnu suni nhi c puri te na hi ohnu hje tak pta lga c ke oh ik vampire ban gya a……

Simrna ne sahmne kitchen ch sink dekhya te jo tap lagi pani wali sink te ohde wal hath krke apne mn ch socheya ke pani nikle ga par kuj nhi pani tuti cho nhi nikliya. Fer ohne jis tarh di v loka nu power use krde dekhya c oh sab krn di try kiti par kun v nhi ho reha c.

Fer oh thak har ke apne bed te lame pe gya Sali kida di fudhu kitab a bss ihne meinu ik computer system. Hi dita ik bina power toh das mein ih system di bond marni a.

Simran nu bhut gussa aeya ke hje tak v bss oh ik normal insaan a. Ih sab kama vich raat v ho gyi c te simran ne socheya ohnu so jana chahida a pr jado da oh dupher da school toh aeya c oh do vari so chuka c. Ik school de aun toh vad te dusra behos hoon karn rat de 11 baj rhe c te simrna nu neend bilkul v nhi a rhi c. Te upro ohnu khiji a rhi c ke a ja ke ih v fudhu book nikli
Pr fer us ne muth marn vare socheya ohne apne phone te ik video la lyi. Simran apne phone ch chudayi walia video rkhda hi c jafo ohda dil kre oh dekh ke muth mar sake.

Fer simran pura nanga ho gya kyuke dar te kise de aun da c nhi oh rehnda te ikala hi c. Te oh video dekh ke muth mar ke apna pani kad ke so gya….


Dekhde agge simran nu kime pta lgda a oh ik vampire ban gya a te kime ohnu ohdian power milan gian.

Milde a next update ch​

 

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Update 5….​

Simran de dimag ch hje v ahi chal reha c ke ih book ohde mata pita shd ke gye c. Pr simran kde v is tarah di book vare nhi suneya c jo gaeb ho ke insaan de vich sama jandi ae.

Te je shaktian walia books c v te oh inia mehngian san ke koi grreb bnda ohna nu khareed v nhi skda c. Gareeb lok te bss mamuli shakti walian hi kitaba khareed skde c.

Simran ne na hi eh suneya c ke book nal mili shkti insaan nu ik computer system dindi a te ohdian shaktian purian kholan lyi sanu khud mission par krke exp ekathi karke hi mil sakdian ne.

Simran nu is gal di bhut khushi c ke ohnu book mil gyi kyuke na hi us kolo paise c ke oh is tarah di book future ch khareed panda. Te na hi ohde kolo pehla koi power c oh bss ik aam insaan c pr hun oh level 1 di power wala insaan ban gya a. Hun oh is power di madad nal kuj v kar skda a bss ohnu practise krne pawe gi te kam. Ban jawe ga.

Pr simran nu pta nhi c chngi tarah kr us kolo power hai ki kyuke behos hun toh pehla jo sytem di awaz c oh ohnu suni nhi c puri te na hi ohnu hje tak pta lga c ke oh ik vampire ban gya a……

Simrna ne sahmne kitchen ch sink dekhya te jo tap lagi pani wali sink te ohde wal hath krke apne mn ch socheya ke pani nikle ga par kuj nhi pani tuti cho nhi nikliya. Fer ohne jis tarh di v loka nu power use krde dekhya c oh sab krn di try kiti par kun v nhi ho reha c.

Fer oh thak har ke apne bed te lame pe gya Sali kida di fudhu kitab a bss ihne meinu ik computer system. Hi dita ik bina power toh das mein ih system di bond marni a.

Simran nu bhut gussa aeya ke hje tak v bss oh ik normal insaan a. Ih sab kama vich raat v ho gyi c te simran ne socheya ohnu so jana chahida a pr jado da oh dupher da school toh aeya c oh do vari so chuka c. Ik school de aun toh vad te dusra behos hoon karn rat de 11 baj rhe c te simrna nu neend bilkul v nhi a rhi c. Te upro ohnu khiji a rhi c ke a ja ke ih v fudhu book nikli
Pr fer us ne muth marn vare socheya ohne apne phone te ik video la lyi. Simran apne phone ch chudayi walia video rkhda hi c jafo ohda dil kre oh dekh ke muth mar sake.

Fer simran pura nanga ho gya kyuke dar te kise de aun da c nhi oh rehnda te ikala hi c. Te oh video dekh ke muth mar ke apna pani kad ke so gya….


Dekhde agge simran nu kime pta lgda a oh ik vampire ban gya a te kime ohnu ohdian power milan gian.

Milde a next update ch​

Next update bro
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Te krva de chudai

 

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Next update bro
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Ya fr o general griff nu kudi bnna k lee aa
Te krva de chudai

Keep supporting bro
Thanks
Koi nhi karwone a chudai v bss apne bichar dinde reho

 

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Update 6:-​

Sawere jado simran di akh khuldi hai te oh apne bed toh uthda hai te fresh ho ke breakfast krke fer bed te beth ke soch lag jnda a book vare.

Ik power book vich sirf ik tarah di hi power hundi a. Te insaan hor book v same power di choose kr skda a for example je ik insaan ne water related power wali book select kita a te ohdian shktian sikhia ne. Te agge future oh sirf ohi books dian shaktian hi le skda a jide ch pani di hi shakti howe gi. Je ohne pehla level ih water power wali book select kitia fer oh agge level 2 te hor jine v level te warernal related power a ohi sikh skda a. Te lok power book nu bhut soch smj ke chunde a kyuke sari umer ohna nu fer ohi power nal rehna penda a oh change nhi ho skdi ae. Pr jo book simran nu mili c oh alag c na hi ohne suneya c ke ida di book v hundi a jo ohdian akhan fi nazr puri tarah theek kr skdi a ih ohde bhut ajjeb c.


Ihna sab khilan cho bhar aun te simran de dimag ch ih gal aundi a ke mission c roz da 2 litre pani pena a. Simran othda a te fridge ch do pania dian botla kad ke pee jnda a ina jyda pani pe ke ohda tid ime c jime fat jana howe.

Pura 2 litre pani peen toh vad ohde dimag ch computer di awaz sunayi dindi a daily mission pura ho gya a tuhanu 5 exp mildi a.

[5/100 exp]

Chalo kuj te smj aeya ke ih kida kam karda a hje oh ih sab smj ke hateya hi c ke ohde ghr di door bell baji.

Simran ne mn ch socheya kon a gya bhenchod ajj ghre. Kyuke ohda koi c ta nhi te na hi ohde ghr koi aunda c na hi simran nu ohde ghr koi awe psnd c.

Simran ne ja ke darwaja kholiya te ohde shmne ik 6 fut lamba takla bnda khrda c ohne army di uniform pyi c ohdi vrdi dekh ke lag reha c ke ih havildar a te ihde kolo miti wali power a.

Havildar ne simran nu keha bhr gadi khrdi a tko 5 mint a ih kmra khali karn lyi apni jarurat da saman pack krke 5 mint ch gadi ch aja. Te oh chla gya.

Simran nu te is gal da yad hi nhi c. Ke ohnu Military school jane pena a agge di training di study lyi.

Dekhda a military school ch simran nal ki hunda wait for next update…..​

 

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Yrr plzz daso te sahi tuhanu story kime lag rhi a read kr v rhe hoo...... Te je chngi lag rhi a te comment krke jjarur daso yaar

 

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Update 1:-

Oye bhenchoda dig ke mar na jami. Ik munde ne school de corridor ch tur rhe munde{kahani da hero simran} nu dekh ke boleya. Bhame ih sab ohde nal har roz hunda c te nit nme din koi na koi ohda mazak udonda hi rehnda c.

Pr fer v simran lyi ohdi bejti chup chap sehn krna mushkil c. Is lyi ohne ghum ke gusee nl us munde nu dekhya te apni anek nu ungel nl theek kita jo ohde nak toh kisak ke thordi thale a gyi c. Te apne saze hath di bichkarli ungelus nu dikha diti te boliya fuck you motherfucker.

Simran di khi gyi ih gal us munde kolo sehn nhi hoi te oh gusse ch simran bl dord da boleya tere vrga level 1 da fuddu bnda mere shmne kuj v nhi a te apne dome hath jord ke ik hare rang da gola bneya. Te jado simran te ohde vich fasla thorda reh gya te usne oh hara gola teji nal simran wal shad dita. Energy wala gola ini tezi nal simran wal a reha c ke simran nu kuj samaj nahi a reha c oh us gole toh kime bache.

Fer simran ne apna mn tagrda krke us gole di power nu sehn krn da mn bna liya te gola a ke sida a ke simran de sharer te laga te simran udta apne pische wali kand nu tord da bahr ground ch ja digia

Ih ki ho reha a? Bhut sare student cho kise ik student ne bolia. Ih school de akhri din te v lardh rhe a

Ih sab dekh ground ch bhut sare student ikatha ho gye. Te ik kurdi jldi nal ih dekhn dordi ke oh munda theek te hai pr jado ground cho udh di miti thordi fade hoi te ohnu jado simran da chehra dikhia te oh aram nal vapis murd gyi jime kuj hoeya hi nhi.

Te jado oh kurdi murd ke dowara apni sahelian kolo gyi sab ohde val dekh ke hasan lag pye.

Ki tu us munde di help krn gyi c?

Te kurdi ne khijdi ne keha meinu nhi pata c oh simran a

Simran vrdi mushkil nal utheya te ohne dekha ohdi anek tut gyi a te ohdi anek di lat dur pyi a ohne apni anek chaki te ik vari sab val nazar ghuma ke dekhya ke kina kina ne ohdi hundi bejti hundi dekhi te koi v ohdi help krn nhi aeya.

Simran dard sehnda tur piya apne ghr val nu te raste us nu bhut sare student ik duje nal gallan krde dise te koi ik duje de gal lag ro reha c ke ajj ohna da akhri din a sachool pr sade hero da te koi dost c nhi te na hi koi us nu pasnd krda c is lyi oh ih sab ignore krda turda reha apne ghr lyi……….

Agli kahani next update ch…….​

Good start ....Simran ik anaath a..te level one Diya powers ne us kol...ik kamzor jeha bechara jeha simran kiwe hero bnu te ehoji kehdi ghatna usnu build kru ...dekhde an....vese iss genre ch hindi english bohot stories likhyia gaiyan ne pr Punjabi ch eh pehli a.... Bro tusi likhde jayo....kyuki tusi first punjabi fantasy writer ho aun Wale time ch tuhanu hi punjabi ch follow kitta jaega....yaad rakheo...hun ju toh inspire hoke hor v likhange....

 

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Update 2:-

Simran da ghar, shota jeha ghr jide cg ch bss kitchen batroom te ik bedroom a. Jo ke ohnu government ne rehn nu dita a

Simran ne ghr da drwaja kholeya te andr ja ke bed te dig gya te digde hi thakan karn us nu neend a gyi. Te jado oh kuj ghnteya vad utheya te usdi nigah sahmne pye table te pyi te oh ja ke kursi te beth gya te table de drawer nu kholeya te ik book ohde shmne ayi

Book jo ke moti te kafi vadi c te jisde cover da colour khoon de vrga c. Te bilkul vich ik daravna skull bneya c. Simran ne oh book drawer cho kadi te sahmne table de oper rkh lyi.

Chlo ajj fer is nu kholn di try kareye. Simran uth ke apne school bag kol gya te us vicho colourless liquid nal adhi bhari test tube kadi jis vich hydrochloric acid c.

Simran ne oh tube da liquid book upr dol dita te oh ih dekh ke heran reh gya ke book nu kuj b nhi hoeya book jime pehla c ume hi hai.

Simran da book nu kholan da ik hor test fail ho gya. Simran ne is book nu kholn lyi ine test kite c pr oh book nu hje tk v khol nhi paeya c. Ohne ohnu aag nal jalan di, katan di te piglan di te pata nhi jor v kine hathkande apnye c pr kitab nu kuj v nhi c hunda…. Us te ik kharoch tak v nhi c aundi. Apna ik hor test fail hoon de karn simran udas mn nal fer ja bed te lme pe jnda a te remote toh tv on kr lenda a jis te news chl rhi c.

Tv te news chal rhi c ke dalki race {jo ke ik alien race a} nal earth de samjote nu 5 sal ho gye a. Pr officials (adhikari) da kehna a ke tanav fer toh vad reha a……war fer toh ho skdj a. Te simarn past ch chala gya te pehla hoi war vare sochan lag piya.

Han dalki race janike aleins jina ne 30 sal pehla dharti te hamla kita c jo ke lagpag insana warge hi c par ohna kol poosh( tail) c.

Aleins ne pata nhi kyu dharti te hmla krta c te chahunde c asi sare ohna age surrender kr deye. Pr lokan ne surrender nhi kita te ohna nal lardhn da faisla liya pr thorde time ch hi insana nu pta lg gya ke sadi technology ohna sahmne kuj b nhi a itho tak ke sadian gollian v ohna di chamrdi nu cher pa rehian c te sade tank ohna di spaceships agee tik v nhi pa rhe c.

Is lyi aam jnta nu v ohna nal lardh lyi agge aune piya ki mard te ki aurat sab aleins nal lardhn lyi agge aye. Te ihna vich hi sadi kahani de hero simran de mom dad v c odo simran shota c te 4 sal chali lardayi karn us nr apne mata pita nu dekhya v nhi c.

Pr jado insaan aleins toh har de kareeb c. Kuj khas lok sahmne aye jina kol shaktian c. Te ohna ne agee ake apnia skhitan aam lokan nu b use karna sikhaeya( learn) jis nal insan fer toh aleins nal lardhn lyi tiyar c par fer v oh aleins jine takatvar nhi c pyi lardayi muk nhi rhi c is lyi hun de time toh 5 sal pehla aliens te insana ch ik samjota hoeya te war khtm hoi.
Is wat vich insana da bhut nuksan hoeya. Sade hero de mata pita v is war vich mare gye.

Par government de kuj vade adhikarian ne ih decide kita ke jo shaktian ne oh sab nu nhi miln gian paise wale ja amir ja jo powerfull lok ne ohna nu hi milan gian te baki gareeb janta nu mile gi bekar powers jo ke mili na mili ik barabr ae.

Te war de vad bookmari te gareebi hor v jyda vad gyi. Simarn nu v sarlar ne kuj nhi dita sivaye ik shote jihe ghar de te sarkari school ch pardyi de.
Te ik din ik sarkari afsr ohde ghr aeya te ohnu ih book diti ke sirf ahi jo tere mata pita tere lyi shd ke gye a.

Te jado simran past di yadan cho bhar aeya usne fer apne table te dekhya jis te book pyi te nal hi rakhi us di anken te pyi jo tuti c. Te usne jugard la ke us di lat nu kise tarh jordeya pr usda ik seesha usde anek de frame cho bhr c us ne ik vari try kita nhi gya andr ik vari hor…. Kita fer nhi gya fer usne jor leya par jor laun nal kach tut gya te usde anguthe te kach lag gya te khoon a gya simran ne gusse ch boleya bhenchod mere nal kuj chnga v ho skda a te oh kach nu saf krn lg piya par jado oh book toh kach saf krn lga te usda khoon book nu lag gya……..


Baki di kahani agle update ch….. ​

Khair eh update v vdia c...iss ch Earth de halat dase hann...but ju ne year mention nhi kitta maybe future hi a...pr year jaroor likhna c....baki ESS update toh meinu Hindi kahani yaad aayi a ik.. ..hope agge tusi kujh changes jaroor karoge ta jo kuj nwa lagge....

 

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Update 3:-

Simran da khoon book te lagan nal book chamkan lag pyi te bilkul simran dian akhan sahmne a ke hawa ch gol gol ghuman lag py.

Book vicho ini tez roshni nikal rhi c ke ohne pure kmre nu apni chapet ch le liya. Simran dian akhan v puri tarh nhi khul rehian book di chamak agee pr fer v oh puri kohsis kr reha khulian rkhn di. Pr jukdum book tez awaz nal khul gyi jide krke simran thorda pische nu hat gya te book te warke tez tez apne aap khulan lage. Warkian te liki basha punjabi nhi c. Ih ik ajjeeb jhi basha c jo simran de smj nhi a rhi c. Book te warke paltde ja rhe c te last warka khulan te book lal te kali tez roshni ch badal gyi. Oh tez roshni sidah ja ke simran de shaher ch sma gyi.

Roshni de simran de sharer ch jnde hi simran dian akhan kamzori karn bnd hon lag piya te oh zameen te dig gya.

Te ik awaz ayi congratulation tuci ik vam……..

Ih gal puri hoon toh pehla hi simran behos ho gya……

Baki next update ch…… ​

So hun simran update hogya te i think vampire system activate ho gya....

 

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Update 6:-​

Sawere jado simran di akh khuldi hai te oh apne bed toh uthda hai te fresh ho ke breakfast krke fer bed te beth ke soch lag jnda a book vare.

Ik power book vich sirf ik tarah di hi power hundi a. Te insaan hor book v same power di choose kr skda a for example je ik insaan ne water related power wali book select kita a te ohdian shktian sikhia ne. Te agge future oh sirf ohi books dian shaktian hi le skda a jide ch pani di hi shakti howe gi. Je ohne pehla level ih water power wali book select kitia fer oh agge level 2 te hor jine v level te warernal related power a ohi sikh skda a. Te lok power book nu bhut soch smj ke chunde a kyuke sari umer ohna nu fer ohi power nal rehna penda a oh change nhi ho skdi ae. Pr jo book simran nu mili c oh alag c na hi ohne suneya c ke ida di book v hundi a jo ohdian akhan fi nazr puri tarah theek kr skdi a ih ohde bhut ajjeb c.


Ihna sab khilan cho bhar aun te simran de dimag ch ih gal aundi a ke mission c roz da 2 litre pani pena a. Simran othda a te fridge ch do pania dian botla kad ke pee jnda a ina jyda pani pe ke ohda tid ime c jime fat jana howe.

Pura 2 litre pani peen toh vad ohde dimag ch computer di awaz sunayi dindi a daily mission pura ho gya a tuhanu 5 exp mildi a.

[5/100 exp]

Chalo kuj te smj aeya ke ih kida kam karda a hje oh ih sab smj ke hateya hi c ke ohde ghr di door bell baji.

Simran ne mn ch socheya kon a gya bhenchod ajj ghre. Kyuke ohda koi c ta nhi te na hi ohde ghr koi aunda c na hi simran nu ohde ghr koi awe psnd c.

Simran ne ja ke darwaja kholiya te ohde shmne ik 6 fut lamba takla bnda khrda c ohne army di uniform pyi c ohdi vrdi dekh ke lag reha c ke ih havildar a te ihde kolo miti wali power a.

Havildar ne simran nu keha bhr gadi khrdi a tko 5 mint a ih kmra khali karn lyi apni jarurat da saman pack krke 5 mint ch gadi ch aja. Te oh chla gya.

Simran nu te is gal da yad hi nhi c. Ke ohnu Military school jane pena a agge di training di study lyi.

Dekhda a military school ch simran nal ki hunda wait for next update…..​

Story vidia chal rahi a or kuj nwa jeha add v kro...kyuki eh Hindi story nal match ho rahi a..hope tusi samjoge

 

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Story vidia chal rahi a or kuj nwa jeha add v kro...kyuki eh Hindi story nal match ho rahi a..hope tusi samjoge

Pehla simran da build up hoje chngi tarah bss fer thorda change liyama ge baki mein ih jo nobel a ustto pardh ke. Te jini. Meri English di smj a us hisab nal punjabi ch likh reha a