Thriller Murder......

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update ..roshni ki postmartam report aa gayi aur uske aadhar par lucky ko ye lag raha hai ki pravin ke saath nilesh bhi tha murder me shamil . par itne din baad dost mila wo bhi aisa ki murder me pravin ka saath de ,,aisa lagta hai nilesh ki koi majburi rahi hogi ya usne bhi koi kaand kiya hoga jisme pravin ne uska saath diya hoga ..

warna murder karne me koi bhi dost saath nahi dega ..

roshni aur pravin ki love story kaise aage badhi aur kaise roshni apna sabkuch de baithi pravin ko ye bata diya nita ne ..

nita ne samjhaya roshni ko par wo jhoothe pyar me andhi ho gayi thi warna ye jaankar ki pravin shadi shuda hai wo usse dur ho jaati .
pyar karna galat nahi par roshni ne ye kyu nahi socha ki wo apne pyar ke liye kisi dusri aurat ki jindagi barbad kar rahi hai ..
agar pravin married nahi hota to baat alag thi ..

roshni hi galat thi yaha pe ki usne pravin ke biwi ke baare me kuch socha hi nahi ,ek aurat hoke dusre aurat ka ghar tabaah karne chali thi ..

pyar karo par aisa nahi ki dusro ki life kharab ho jaaye ..

waise pravin apne biwi aur premika ko waqt de sakta tha kyunki usne roshni ko sab bata diya tha to aisi kya musibat aa gayi ki premika ka murder karna pada usko ...

 

[Lib am]

UPDATE - 01​

Rajasthan ki Khubhsurat Parvatmala par bacha ek nagar...matlab ke mount aabu ka pahaadi ilaaka..or uske uper lucky talaab ke baju me hi bani hue "Hotel Hillok" me morning ke 10 baj rahe the.


Hotel ka manager Rajkunvar Sinh.. hotel ke bahar ke vatavaran ka anand le rahe the..shardi ke mausam ki Subhah thi or Sun bhi badlo ke piche chup kar thoda sa prakas nikal raha tha.


is saal varsha ritu me bahot baarish hue thi..is liye pure parvat par Green chadar chada rakhi ho aisa lag raha tha..Rajkunvar Sinh to is kudarat ke rache hue Khubhsurat or adhbhut nazare ko dekh kar usme hi kho gaya tha..par tabhi vaha par achanak hotel ka waiter Raju aa gaya or usne rajkunvar sinh ka dhyan toda.


Raju :- saab! Room number 108 me se bahot hi gandh aa rahi hai, kuch ajib hi gandh hai.


Manager :- gandh! Kaisi gandh! ?


Raju :- pata nahi saab!.. kuch ajib hi gandh aa rahi hai.


Raju ki baat sun kar manager reception counter par jata hai..


Manager :- Kiske name par register hai room number 108?


( reception par khadi Kavita Sharma ko register me dekhne ko kaha. )


Kavita Sharma :- Sir koi new married couple hai.. Pravin sinh and uski wife. Abhi do din pehle hi unhone hamari hotel me room book kiya hai..
But ek baat bahot ajib hai ..jab se ye couple aaye hai tab se ek baar bhi room se bahar nahi aaye. Nahi yahaa ki kisi bhi ghumne ki jagah par gaye hai ..or nahi is couple ne hamari hotel maise kuch khana order kiya hai..bahar se bhi kuch khana us room maise order nahi hua hai.


Raju :- new married couple hai na maddem is liye ekdusre me aise kho gaye hoge ki ..khane-pine ka bhi bhul gaye hoge


( Raju haste hue bola )


kavita raju ko chup rehne ka bol kar use ankhe dikha kar aage boli


Kavita :- Sir mujhe to pehle se hi ye couple kuch ajib lag raha tha. Dono ki age me bhi bahot different lag raha tha. Ladki ladke se age me bahot chhoti ho aisa lag raha tha.. jab room book karne ke liye maine mr.pravin ke pas advance me hajar rs mange to usne uski wife ke pas se paise leke diye. Jab mene pucha ki aap logo ka kitne din ke liye room chahiye to dono hi ek side jake kuch dheere se kuch der bate karne lage or phir aake kaha ki 3 din ke liye room chahiye. Mene jab pucha ki yaha ke ghumne ki jagah par jane ne liye kisi guide ki ya car ki jaroorat ho to hum arrange kar denge...par unhone kaha ki unhe kahi ghumne nahi jana unhe sirf yaha aaram hi karna hai .


Manager rajkunvar sinh Kavita ki baat sun kar kuch der sochne lage fir raju no room number 108 ki extra key leke apne piche aane ko kaha. Manager jyare first floor ki lobhi me pahocha jaha room no 108 tha. Lobhi me pahochte hi vaha par bhayankar gandh aane lagi. Manager or Raju ne gandh se bachne ke liye apne muh par rumal bandh diya.


Manager rajkunvar a raju ke paas se extra key li or darvaja khola. Darvaja khulte hi under ka nazara dekh kar manager or raju dono ke dil ki dhadkane badh gay..


room ke farsh par ek ardhnang halat me ek ladki ki laas padi thi. Uske sar par se bahot sara khun nikal kar farsh gira hua tha.. room ki halat bhi kharab thi sab chize idhar udhar padi hue thi..ye sab nazara dekh kar raju to ghabra ke behosh hone laga tha..manager bhi laas ko dekh kar ghabra gaya tha ..uske hath per bhi thande pad gaye the.. thodi der baad normal hoke manager rajkunvar a mount aabu ki police station thi uske under duty kar rahe inspector or uske khas friend Lucky Rajput ko call lagaya..


Lucky :- ( call utha ke) hello!..haa bol kunvar aaj subhah-subhah mujhe kyu yaad kiya? Or tu itna ghabraya hua kyu lag raha hai?


Manager :- lucky tu jaldi hi hotel aaja ..yaha hotel ke room no 108 me ek ladki ki lash mili hai.


Lucky :- kyaa...lash? ( ekdum sock ho ke).


Lucky :- sun kunvar me jab tak na aau tab tak kisi ko bhi us dead body ko ya room ki kisi bhi chiz ko hath mat lagane dena..me apni team leke yaha se nikalta hu okk..


call rakhte hi manager ne side me pade raju jo lash ko dekh kar behosh ho gaya tha uske chehre par pani dal kar uthaya... or use room ke bahar le jake kaha ..


Manager :- dekh raju mene abhi hi mere khas dost hai jo yaha ki police station me job karta hai..use call karke is lash ke bare me bata diya hai..vo thodi der me hi apni team leke yaha aa jayega..usne is room ki kisi bhi chiz ya lash ko touch karne se mana kiya hai..and is lash vali baat kahi se bhi hotel ke bahar nahi jani chahiye..or yaha dusre room me jo geust reh rahe hai unhe bhi khabar nahi padne deni hai.


( manager bahot hi tension me ye sab raju ko keh raha tha).


thodi der me police ki jeep ka siren ka avaj aane laga.. Lucky apne sath duty kar rahe police constable Suresh Chouhan or ledy police constable Sandhya Maheshvari ke sath puri team ko leke aa gaya .


receptionist Kavita to abhi bhi is baat anjan thi..or vo police ko puri team ke sath dekh kar ek dum soch ho gay thi..


Kavita :- good morning sir..


Lucky :- good morning medam..kaha hai apke manager saheb?


Kavita :- sir manager saheb to first floor par ke room no108 me gaye hue hai.. but aap yaha! Yu achanak..kuch kam tha kya sir ??..


lucky kavita ki baat is javab diye bina hi first floor ki taraf room no 108 ki taraf apni team ko order dete hue aage chal diye..kavita to ye dekh kar or jyada sock ho gay..kavita ko dout hone laga ki room no 108 me kuch ajib ghatna ghati hai.


kavita bhi police ki team ke piche jane ke liye nikalti hai ki tabhi lucky ko pata nahi kuch yaad aata hai or vo piche mud ke reception par aake kavita ko kehta hai ki tum abhi yahi par raho or kisi ko bhi hotel ke under enter na hone de..


or ek constable ko bhi hotel ke main dor par khada rehne ko kehta hai or order deta hai ki.. " koi bhi anjan vyakti hotel ke under aani nahi chahiye or hotel ke under se koi bahar bhi nahi jana chahiye. "


Itna keh kar lucky room no 108 ki taraf nikal jata hai..

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To Be Continued

Nice start and twist in story. But laash to abhi ek hi mili hai, kya dono logo ki laashe milengi yaa wo aadmi murder kar ke bhaag gaya.

 

[Lib am]

UPDATE - 02​

Inspector lucky apni team ke sath room number 108 me samne ki lodhi me pahoch gaya..jaha par manager or raju dono bahar hi khade the.


Lucky ne manager ko pucha ki lash kidhar hai to manager ne room ka darvaja khol diya.
Lucky or uski team under room me aa gay...


lash bahot hi bhayankar halat me padi hue thi..lash par ek chadar dali hue thi..jo manager ne hi dali thi lash ardhnangi thi is liye..lash ke sar ki taraf se bahot sara khun nikal kar farsh par pada hua tha..


Lash maise bahot hi durgadh aa rahi thi.. Lash ko dekh kar inspector Lucky a ledy constable Sandhya ko ichara kar ke lash ko check karne ko kaha..or uske sath dusre constable suresh ko room ko check karne ko or room ke har hise ka photo lene ko kaha..


or lucky manager or raju ke pas jake us ladki ke bare me puchtach karta hai..


Lucky :- kunvar kon hai ye ladki.tum log iske bare me kuch janate ho..ye kaha se aay hai or uska name kya hai ? Vo yaha par aay tab usne kuch apna I'd proof diya tha ya nahi ?.


Manager :- ye couple hamari hotel me aaye tab me yaha hajir nahi tha par yaha ki receptionist kavita sharma us vakt yaha hajir thi. Vo is couple ke bare me sab bata sakti hai apko.


Lucky :- ohhh! To yaha par koi couple rehne ko aaya tha.
To kidhar hai is ladki ka pati?
Or kavita sharma ko jara yaha bulao mujhe uske sath baat karni hai.


Manager :- Uske pati ke bare me to pata nahi ki vo kaha hai..mujhe aaj mere waiter raju ne aake kaha ki room nombre 108 main se kuch gandh aa rahi hai.. tab mene or raju ne mil ke extra key se room khola..under dekha to is ladki ki lash padi hue thi.


itna keh kar manager ne raju ko ichare se kavita ko bulane ko kaha or raju ji saab! Keh kar kavita ko bulane ke liye niche chala jata hai..


Manager subhah ko jo bhi us couple ke bare me kavita ne kaha tha vo sab lucky ko bata deta hai..


Thodi der me kavita bhi vaha aa jati hai.. lucky use puchtach karte hue puchta hai..


Lucky :- Ye couple kab or kitne baje aaya tha or ye couple kaha se aaya hai..? Sab kuch detail me batao mujhe..


Kavita :- Ji sir!.. Ye couple do din pehle sanjh ke time par aaya tha..ladki ke hath me ek chhoti si bag thi or dono hi simple kapdo me the..aisa lag hi nahi raha tha ki dono new married couple ho. Dono ki age me bhi bahot different lag raha tha . Ladki ladke se bahot chhoti lag rahi thi . Dono ke bich kuch 8-9 saal ka different ho aisa lag raha tha.


Lucky :- un logo ka name to register me likha hoga na ?


Kavita :- haan sir!.. ladke ne apna name Pravin sinh kaha tha or uski patni ka Roshni sinh bataya tha. Vo udaipur se yaha aaye the. Sir dono ke bich ki chemistry kuch jam nahi rahi thi.. Ladki ke hath na to Mahdi thi or nahi mang me sindur or nahi gale me mangalsutra . Or Sir ladki thodi darri darri si lag rahi thi .
shayad dono bhag kar aaye hue ho aisa lag raha tha.


Lucky :- To tumhe kaise pata chala ki vo new married couple hai?


Kavita :- Sir mene Pravin sinh ke paas uski wife ki id mangi tab usne hi kaha ki uski abhi hi shadi hue hai to uski wife ke pas id nahi hai.


Lucky :- to ladki ki bina id ke room kyu diya?


Kavita :- Sir meri duty subhah ke 8 baje se raat ke 8 baje tak
Hoti hai uske baad Raat ki duty par Nilesh choudhri hota hai. Jab ye couple yaha aaya tha tab Nilesh yaha par hajar tha or usne hi mujhe ladki ke bina id ko room dene ko kaha is liye mene room diya..


Lucky :- achha...to Nilesh choudhri ko yaha bulao or pravinsinh ki id proof ki copy to tumhare pas hogi hi na.. vo mere pas jama karva do or register me address likha hai vo,mobile number sab kuch mere police constable ko de do.. or ladki ke pati ko bahar jate hue deta hai?


Kavita :- no sir !..


Lucky nilesh choudhri ko yaha bulane ko kehta hai or phir ek constable ko hotel ke CCTV camera check karne ko kaha..


Sandhya or Suresh bhi room or lash ko check kar ke lucky ko report dete hai ..


Sandhya :- Sir..lash ko check karne se aisa lag raha ki ladki ki age 20 saal ke aaspas hogi. Ladki ke sath pehle sharirik sambandh banaya or phir takiye se uska muh daba kar uski sans rok kar khun kiya gaya hai. Or sir ladke sath marpit bhi ki gay hai ..shayad dhaka diya hoga jise uska sar dhar dar chiz se laga hai or uska bahot sara khun bhi nikala hai..ladki ki body par cigrate se jalane ke nishan bhi mile hai or shayad use kisi rasi se bandh bhi rakha hue tha..rasi ke nishan bhi hai uske hath or per par .


Suresh :- haan sir..ladki ke pati ko cigrate ka bahot shokh tha aisa lag raha hai..room ke dustbin me do cigrate ke khaki package mila hai or aadha package table par pada hua mila hai. Or ye rasi bhi mili hai jisase ladki ko bandha hoga. Or a loko thoda bahot sukha nasta or theple beg me leke aaye hue the jisase bahar se khana order na karna pade. Or ladke ka saman room mese gayab hai or ladki ke bag maise 3 jodi kapde or ye parch mila hai jisme ladki ke makeup ka saman or uska aadhar card mila hai jisme address Gujarat Ahmedabad ka likha hua hai. Or name Roshni Patel hai.. iska matlab ki ladki Gujarat ki thi.


Lucky :- achha to ladki Gujarat se Ahmedabad ki hai.or ladka udaipur ka tab to ye love marriage ka matter lagta hai!.. but agar ladki ki I'd uske pas thi to unhone reception par mana Kyu kiya?.
Suresh abhi ke abhi Ahmedabad me Gujarat police ko is bare me bata ke address do or ladki ki family ke bare me jankari lene ko kaho..or ladki ki lash or room sab chiz ko forensic leb me check karne ke liye bheja do. Room maise mile hue finger print ko bhi check karne ke liye bhej do. Or is room ko seal kar do jise koi room ke under na aa paye..or sandhya tu ek constable ko leke pravinsinh ne jo address register me likhaya hai udaipur ka vaha jake pravinsinh ke bare me pure puri jankari nikalo.


Itne me ek police constable vaha aa jata hai..jo CCTV camera check karne Gaya tha..


Constable :- Sir do din pehle ek couple hotel me enter hue tha par un dono maise koi bhi bahar nahi gaya hai.


Lucky :- to to Suresh pakka ye yahi kahi hotel me chupa hua hoga.. puri hotel ko check karo ek bhi jagah baki nahi rehni chahiye..

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To Be Continued.............

Ye Nilesh to kahin mila hua nahi hai isme. Ladkiyon ki taskari ka mamla bhi ho sakta hai yahan. Daya i mean Lucky kuch to gadbad hai.

 

[Lucky..]

Nice start and twist in story. But laash to abhi ek hi mili hai, kya dono logo ki laashe milengi yaa wo aadmi murder kar ke bhaag gaya.

Thank you bhai...

and vo aadmi kaha gaya ye janane ke liye aage padhte rahiye update..

 

[Lucky..]

Nice and beautiful update....

Thank you bhai

 

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Next update

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Awesome Updateee

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[Lucky..]

nice update ..roshni ki postmartam report aa gayi aur uske aadhar par lucky ko ye lag raha hai ki pravin ke saath nilesh bhi tha murder me shamil . par itne din baad dost mila wo bhi aisa ki murder me pravin ka saath de ,,aisa lagta hai nilesh ki koi majburi rahi hogi ya usne bhi koi kaand kiya hoga jisme pravin ne uska saath diya hoga ..

warna murder karne me koi bhi dost saath nahi dega ..

roshni aur pravin ki love story kaise aage badhi aur kaise roshni apna sabkuch de baithi pravin ko ye bata diya nita ne ..

nita ne samjhaya roshni ko par wo jhoothe pyar me andhi ho gayi thi warna ye jaankar ki pravin shadi shuda hai wo usse dur ho jaati .
pyar karna galat nahi par roshni ne ye kyu nahi socha ki wo apne pyar ke liye kisi dusri aurat ki jindagi barbad kar rahi hai ..
agar pravin married nahi hota to baat alag thi ..

roshni hi galat thi yaha pe ki usne pravin ke biwi ke baare me kuch socha hi nahi ,ek aurat hoke dusre aurat ka ghar tabaah karne chali thi ..

pyar karo par aisa nahi ki dusro ki life kharab ho jaaye ..

waise pravin apne biwi aur premika ko waqt de sakta tha kyunki usne roshni ko sab bata diya tha to aisi kya musibat aa gayi ki premika ka murder karna pada usko ...

nilesh ne Pravin ka sath kyu diya ? Kya sach me Nilesh or Pravin ne hi murder kiya Roshni ka ? Agar murder kiya bhi to Nilesh ne kyu madad ki ? Bahot ulja hua case hai Abhi to dekhte hai aage lucky kaise solve karta hai..

aaj kal ke log itne swarthi hote hai ki dusre ke bare me kuch nahi sochte sirf apne bare me hi sochte hai.. or Roshni ne jab apne maa baap ki fikar nahi ki unka kya haal hoga.. samaj ke log unki kitne ijjat uchalenge...in sab ki parvah kiye bina hi pyaar me pad ke sari hade par kar di pravin ke sath to vo Pravin ki wife ke bare me kya hi sochti...

Thank you bhai

 

[Lucky..]

Ye Nilesh to kahin mila hua nahi hai isme. Ladkiyon ki taskari ka mamla bhi ho sakta hai yahan. Daya i mean Lucky kuch to gadbad hai.

Bilkul bhai bahot hi gadbad hai yaha to..

Thank you bhai

 

[Lucky..]

Aaj Update Aayega..​