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Update 4
omkar ne apne phone ki photo gallary open ki aur rima ka photo dekhne main gung ho gaya........
omkar ki tandri tab tooti ja taxi driver ne use hotel aane ka ishara kiya
taxi driver- sir..goan international, aapka hotel aa gaya hai. tab jakar omkar ne mobile main se apna sir bahar nikala aur taxi ki khidki se bahar dekhne laga to samne avadhavya goan international hotel khada tha. samne hotel ke parisar main alag alag rang ke zende hawa ke sath jhool rahe the. bade se faile huye landscape main tarah tarah ke phoolo ke jhad lage huye the aur samne hotel ke gate par traditional dress main pehredar apni badi badi mucho ke sath khade the.
omkar ne taxi ko meter ke hisab se pay kiya aur hotel ki lobby ki or gaya aur piche piche wo taxi driver uska saman lekar hotel main aaya
"good evening sir, hoe may I help you" mechenical awaz main ek receptionist ne omkar se pucha
omkar-mere naam se ek booking hai yaha, omkar the name
receptionist- one minute sir
aisa bol kar is receptionist ne apni ngliya us ke samne rakhe computer keyboard par chalayi aur kuch pal beetne ke baad usne om ki oir dekha aur "just a moment sir" bolke manager ke cabin ki or chali gayi. aur omkar wahi khada raha dhed ghante ki hi sahi par flight ke travel se use thakan lag rahi thi au ab badhiya hot-tub bath lene ke sapne dekhte huye wo waha khada tha.
kuch hi samay main wo receptionist aur uske piche piche us hotel ka manager bahar aayaaurusne ek najar computer screen par dali aur us receptionist se kaha
manager-check for the suits
receptionist-maine already check kiya hai sir kal subah ek vacant hoga lekin tab tak....
omkar-any problem???
omkar ne us receptionist se pucha
receptionist- sir...darasal jo room aapko allot hua tha usme kuch plumbing poblem hai .......bathroom kaam nahi kar raha hai aur pure room main pani bhara hai
omkar-oh...thats ok mujhe aap koi dusra room de dijiye main extra pay karne ko tayar hu
receptionist-no sir aapko extra pay karne ki jarurat nahi hai problem hamare side se hai. we will upgrade you to suits without any extra charge lekin.....
omkar-lekin....lekin kya
manager-sir..suits sabhi full hai infact all rooms are also accupied. suit ka bandobast sirf kal subah kiya ja sakta hai
omkar-to....matlab..mai ab kya karu ???sham ke 8:30 baj rahe hai
manager- we are sorry sir lekin problem hamare control se bahar hai
omkar-are par main tab takj kya karu mujhe kisi dusre hotel main booking dila do
manager- sorry sir but hamara kisi hotel ke sath tie-up nahi hai
omkar- this is rediculas and unprofessional mujhe meri booking abhi ke abhi cancle karni hai and please return the amount paid
ab omkar ko gussa aane laga tha
manager-hum aapki pareshani samajh sakte hai sir
omkar-nahi aap nahi samajh sakte meri bookings cancle kijiye
receptionist-ok sir please be sited
itna bol kar usne omkar ko lobby main rakhe sofe par baithne ka ishara kiya. omkar ka dimag kafi gusse main tha itna bada international hotel aur sadha plumbing ka problen solve nahi ho raha tha. omkar paas hi khade taxi driver ki or muda
omkar-luggage gadi main rakho hum dusre hotel chalenge
taxi driver-kyu sir kya hua
fir omkar ne us driver ko hua hua sara kissa bataya jisparusne bas itna hi kaha
taxi driver- sir booking cancle mat maro chahiye to aaj raat ke liye kahi rah lo abhi season hai to booking milna mushkil hai baki jagah
omkar-are kya ulta off season hai abhi to diwali ka season khatam hua hai kahi na kahi to booking mil hi jayegi
taxi driver-sir aajkal goa main saal bhar gardi rehti hai usme bhi christmas sar par hai
"sir your refund" wo dono baat hi kar rahe the ke us receptionist ne ek white envelop omkar ki or badhaya aur omkar ne wo packet liya aur waha se sidha bahar nikal gaya aur agla dedh ghanta wo us taxi driver ke sath hotel ki talash main ghoomta raha lekin use kahi bhi booking nahi mili om ne ghadi par najar dali to raat ke sadhe 10 baj rahe the
omkar-driver koi chata hotel hoga to dekh raat ke liye main thak gaya hu ab
driver-ji sir mera ek paichanwala hai usse bata karta hu
itna bolkar us driver ne apne dost ko phone lagaya aur do minute baat kar ke omkar se bola
driver- chaliye sir kal sham tak ke liye room ka bandobast ho gaya hai
aur itna bol kar gai aage badha di aur kuch adhe ghante baad taxi shahar ke bahar kisi sunsan ilake main ek puranibuilding ke samne khadi thi jiske niche ke medical shop tha us building ko dekhkar omkar ne sawaliya najrio se drier ki or dekha
driver-kal sham tak saab abhi koi dusra nahi milega kal subah dusri jagah dhoond lijiyega.
marta kya na karta omkar ne us driver ko paise diye aur apna saman le kar us hotel main chala gaya aur recepionse apne kamre ki chavi lekar apne kamre main pata nahi ye goa ki trip use aur kya kya dikahne wali thi............
omkar ne apne phone ki photo gallary open ki aur rima ka photo dekhne main gung ho gaya........
omkar ki tandri tab tooti ja taxi driver ne use hotel aane ka ishara kiya
taxi driver- sir..goan international, aapka hotel aa gaya hai. tab jakar omkar ne mobile main se apna sir bahar nikala aur taxi ki khidki se bahar dekhne laga to samne avadhavya goan international hotel khada tha. samne hotel ke parisar main alag alag rang ke zende hawa ke sath jhool rahe the. bade se faile huye landscape main tarah tarah ke phoolo ke jhad lage huye the aur samne hotel ke gate par traditional dress main pehredar apni badi badi mucho ke sath khade the.
omkar ne taxi ko meter ke hisab se pay kiya aur hotel ki lobby ki or gaya aur piche piche wo taxi driver uska saman lekar hotel main aaya
"good evening sir, hoe may I help you" mechenical awaz main ek receptionist ne omkar se pucha
omkar-mere naam se ek booking hai yaha, omkar the name
receptionist- one minute sir
aisa bol kar is receptionist ne apni ngliya us ke samne rakhe computer keyboard par chalayi aur kuch pal beetne ke baad usne om ki oir dekha aur "just a moment sir" bolke manager ke cabin ki or chali gayi. aur omkar wahi khada raha dhed ghante ki hi sahi par flight ke travel se use thakan lag rahi thi au ab badhiya hot-tub bath lene ke sapne dekhte huye wo waha khada tha.
kuch hi samay main wo receptionist aur uske piche piche us hotel ka manager bahar aayaaurusne ek najar computer screen par dali aur us receptionist se kaha
manager-check for the suits
receptionist-maine already check kiya hai sir kal subah ek vacant hoga lekin tab tak....
omkar-any problem???
omkar ne us receptionist se pucha
receptionist- sir...darasal jo room aapko allot hua tha usme kuch plumbing poblem hai .......bathroom kaam nahi kar raha hai aur pure room main pani bhara hai
omkar-oh...thats ok mujhe aap koi dusra room de dijiye main extra pay karne ko tayar hu
receptionist-no sir aapko extra pay karne ki jarurat nahi hai problem hamare side se hai. we will upgrade you to suits without any extra charge lekin.....
omkar-lekin....lekin kya
manager-sir..suits sabhi full hai infact all rooms are also accupied. suit ka bandobast sirf kal subah kiya ja sakta hai
omkar-to....matlab..mai ab kya karu ???sham ke 8:30 baj rahe hai
manager- we are sorry sir lekin problem hamare control se bahar hai
omkar-are par main tab takj kya karu mujhe kisi dusre hotel main booking dila do
manager- sorry sir but hamara kisi hotel ke sath tie-up nahi hai
omkar- this is rediculas and unprofessional mujhe meri booking abhi ke abhi cancle karni hai and please return the amount paid
ab omkar ko gussa aane laga tha
manager-hum aapki pareshani samajh sakte hai sir
omkar-nahi aap nahi samajh sakte meri bookings cancle kijiye
receptionist-ok sir please be sited
itna bol kar usne omkar ko lobby main rakhe sofe par baithne ka ishara kiya. omkar ka dimag kafi gusse main tha itna bada international hotel aur sadha plumbing ka problen solve nahi ho raha tha. omkar paas hi khade taxi driver ki or muda
omkar-luggage gadi main rakho hum dusre hotel chalenge
taxi driver-kyu sir kya hua
fir omkar ne us driver ko hua hua sara kissa bataya jisparusne bas itna hi kaha
taxi driver- sir booking cancle mat maro chahiye to aaj raat ke liye kahi rah lo abhi season hai to booking milna mushkil hai baki jagah
omkar-are kya ulta off season hai abhi to diwali ka season khatam hua hai kahi na kahi to booking mil hi jayegi
taxi driver-sir aajkal goa main saal bhar gardi rehti hai usme bhi christmas sar par hai
"sir your refund" wo dono baat hi kar rahe the ke us receptionist ne ek white envelop omkar ki or badhaya aur omkar ne wo packet liya aur waha se sidha bahar nikal gaya aur agla dedh ghanta wo us taxi driver ke sath hotel ki talash main ghoomta raha lekin use kahi bhi booking nahi mili om ne ghadi par najar dali to raat ke sadhe 10 baj rahe the
omkar-driver koi chata hotel hoga to dekh raat ke liye main thak gaya hu ab
driver-ji sir mera ek paichanwala hai usse bata karta hu
itna bolkar us driver ne apne dost ko phone lagaya aur do minute baat kar ke omkar se bola
driver- chaliye sir kal sham tak ke liye room ka bandobast ho gaya hai
aur itna bol kar gai aage badha di aur kuch adhe ghante baad taxi shahar ke bahar kisi sunsan ilake main ek puranibuilding ke samne khadi thi jiske niche ke medical shop tha us building ko dekhkar omkar ne sawaliya najrio se drier ki or dekha
driver-kal sham tak saab abhi koi dusra nahi milega kal subah dusri jagah dhoond lijiyega.
marta kya na karta omkar ne us driver ko paise diye aur apna saman le kar us hotel main chala gaya aur recepionse apne kamre ki chavi lekar apne kamre main pata nahi ye goa ki trip use aur kya kya dikahne wali thi............
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Dinbhar ki is puri bhagdaud ke bad omkar ka sar buri tarah dukh raha tha usne apne kamre ka darwaja lock kiya aur niche medical shop pe aaya jaha se usne ek pani ki bottle aur dawai kharidi aur wahi samne rakhi ek bench par baith gaya dawai lene itne main hi ek ladki us dukan main aayi neele rang main range huye baal safed t-shirt maili jeans hatho main alag alag rang ki designer chudiya ,pith par ek choti bag hotho par ekdum dark lal rang ki ipstisk aisa uska vichitra avtar tha wo dukan main apne mu par hath rakh ke hi enter huyi thi
dukandar-kya chahiye
ladki-kuch ajeeb sa ulti jaisa lag raha hai koi dawai dijiye
chemist ne use ek dawai nikal kar di lekin us ladki ne ye keh kar wo wapas kar di ke wo dawai wo le chuki hai aur aisa hi aur dodawaiyo ke sath bhi hua aur akhir main us chemish ne us ladki se pucha ke tumko actually kya ho raha hai tab usne jawab diya
ladki-pata nahi sarbhari main pet main jalan ho rahi hai aur ulti jaisa lag raha hai
ladki ki baat sun kar us dukan wale ke ek baar omkar ki or dekha aur fir dheere se us ladki ko pucha
chemist-periods miss ho gaye hai kya??
chemist ki baat sun kar us ladki ko thoda gussa to aaya lekin sath hi dar ki ek lakeer bhi uske chehre par saaf dekhi ja sakti thi chemist ne almari main se ek box nikal kar use diya aur bola
chemist-piche ke side main ek bathroom hai jaiye pregnency check kijiye
us ladki ne bhi omkar ko dikhe na aise tarike se us chemist se liya aur uske bataye direction main chali gayi aur uske jane ke baad wo chemist omkar se bola
chemist-tumko aur chahiye kya kuch
omkar-nahi..aur kuch nahi chahiye
chemist-to chalo jao fir
omkar-nahi wo aage kya hota hai wo dekh liya hota to
chemist-tumko kya karna hai jaan kar sarko jaha se
omkar-ha bas ja hi raha hu
itna bol kar omkar jane ke liye utha hi tha ke wo ladki fir se bhagte huye dukan main aayi aur table par wo box rakh ke fir se bahar bhag gayi aur uske piche piche wo dukandar bhi bhaga.wo ladki bahar ja kar road ke saide khadi ho kar ultiya kar rahi thi. omkar ne jaldi se table par rahi pregnency kit khol kar dekhi to result negetive tha usne fir se wo kit table par rakhi ek nigah us ladki par dali aur wo apne room ki or jane laga lekin wo 1-2 seedhiya chadha honga ke us dukandar ka use awaz aaya wo ladki jo ultiya kar rahi thi wo ab behosh ho chuki thi omkar bhagte huye uske paas gaya
omkar-k..kya hua
dukandar-inko chakker aa gaye aur ye gir gayi
omkar-are baapre kisi hospital main phone kariye jaldi
dukandar-yaha koi dawakhana nahi hai koi 20-25 km ki range main kahi nahi
omkar-fir..ab kya karna hai
dukandar-aap yahi hotel main ruke hai na
omkar-ha
dukandar-to ek kaam kijiye ise apne room main lejaiye mujhe lagfta hai kamjori se chakker aa gaye honge 10-15 min main hosh aa jayega fir chali jayegi
omkar-are aise kaise main nahi janta isko aur uska huliya to dekho call- girl huyi to
dukandar-thik hai fir rehan do yahi mujhe bhi der ho rahi hai dukan band karke ghar jana hai
omkar-lekin ise yaha aise chodna
dukandar-main bhi to wahi keh rha hu sir samajhiye
jaise taise fir omkar mana aur us ladki ko apne hotel ke kamre main le aaya aurt us ladki ko sofe pe dhakal diya. omkar ka sar solid dukh raha tha usme bhi us ladki ko seedhiya chada kar uper lane main uski halat kharab ho gayi thi apna sar pakad kar wo kurchi par baith gaya tabhi uska phone bajne laga
char galiye bakte huye usne phone uthaya
"omkar sir ..ashish bol raha hu..kais hai goa"
omkar-thi..thik hai
ashish-are kya hua tu itna haaf kyu raha hai sb thik hai na
omkar-ek min mujhe thoda pani pine de fir baat karta hu
fir om ne pani piya jiske baad ashish ne bolna chalu kiya
ashish-sab theek hai na bhai hotel acha hai na
omkar-mera mu mat khulwa us hotel ka naam lekar
aur fir om ne ashish ko puri baat batayi
ashish-iski maa ka!! matlab wo ladki is waqt tere room main hai
om-hao na bate abkya karte majburi hai be usko akele raste par nahi chod sakte
ashish-abe wo chod aur bata wo dikhne main kaisi hai
omkar-abe chod na meko to call girl lag rahi hai hosh main aate hi bhaga dunga
ashish-main kya bolta hu thoda time de.......
omkar-oh shit!!!! abe ashish abe kuch to jhol hai
ashish-kyu kya hua
omkar-abe us ladki ke baal nakli hai be uske neele baal ek side nikal rahe hai be aur...
ashish-abe aisa ruk mat bhai bol
omkar-maa ki aankh ashish iske gale main to mangalsutra hai benchod ye married hai bhai
ashish-bhai meko lagta ye ghar se bhagi huyi case hai hai isiliye aisa gateup hoga
omkar-sahi bol ra bhai tu
ashish-bhai meko lagta teko teri story mil gayi stay with her aur pata laga kya jhol hai
omkar-oye please meko ye 'dil hai ke manta nahi' ' jab we met' jaisi kahani to bilkul nahi likhni hai
ashsih- bhi uski purse check kare dekh kuch licence waigera milta kya
omkar-good idea hold kar
aur fir om dheere us ladki ke paas pahucha aur uski purse khol kar dekhne laga aur thik usi waqt us ladki ko bhi hosh aa gaya ye baat om ke dhayan main nahi aayi us ladki ne om ke hath se apna purse cheena aur usme se koi spray nikal kar om ki aankhon main mar diya isse om ki aankho main bohot jalan hone lagi. us ladki ne om ko jor se diwal par dhakela aur apna purse utha kar waha se bhag gayi diwal par sar lagne se om bhi behosh ho gaya aur ashish jisko is bare main kuch pata nahi tha wo bas phone par hello hello karta raha..........
Dinbhar ki is puri bhagdaud ke bad omkar ka sar buri tarah dukh raha tha usne apne kamre ka darwaja lock kiya aur niche medical shop pe aaya jaha se usne ek pani ki bottle aur dawai kharidi aur wahi samne rakhi ek bench par baith gaya dawai lene itne main hi ek ladki us dukan main aayi neele rang main range huye baal safed t-shirt maili jeans hatho main alag alag rang ki designer chudiya ,pith par ek choti bag hotho par ekdum dark lal rang ki ipstisk aisa uska vichitra avtar tha wo dukan main apne mu par hath rakh ke hi enter huyi thi
dukandar-kya chahiye
ladki-kuch ajeeb sa ulti jaisa lag raha hai koi dawai dijiye
chemist ne use ek dawai nikal kar di lekin us ladki ne ye keh kar wo wapas kar di ke wo dawai wo le chuki hai aur aisa hi aur dodawaiyo ke sath bhi hua aur akhir main us chemish ne us ladki se pucha ke tumko actually kya ho raha hai tab usne jawab diya
ladki-pata nahi sarbhari main pet main jalan ho rahi hai aur ulti jaisa lag raha hai
ladki ki baat sun kar us dukan wale ke ek baar omkar ki or dekha aur fir dheere se us ladki ko pucha
chemist-periods miss ho gaye hai kya??
chemist ki baat sun kar us ladki ko thoda gussa to aaya lekin sath hi dar ki ek lakeer bhi uske chehre par saaf dekhi ja sakti thi chemist ne almari main se ek box nikal kar use diya aur bola
chemist-piche ke side main ek bathroom hai jaiye pregnency check kijiye
us ladki ne bhi omkar ko dikhe na aise tarike se us chemist se liya aur uske bataye direction main chali gayi aur uske jane ke baad wo chemist omkar se bola
chemist-tumko aur chahiye kya kuch
omkar-nahi..aur kuch nahi chahiye
chemist-to chalo jao fir
omkar-nahi wo aage kya hota hai wo dekh liya hota to
chemist-tumko kya karna hai jaan kar sarko jaha se
omkar-ha bas ja hi raha hu
itna bol kar omkar jane ke liye utha hi tha ke wo ladki fir se bhagte huye dukan main aayi aur table par wo box rakh ke fir se bahar bhag gayi aur uske piche piche wo dukandar bhi bhaga.wo ladki bahar ja kar road ke saide khadi ho kar ultiya kar rahi thi. omkar ne jaldi se table par rahi pregnency kit khol kar dekhi to result negetive tha usne fir se wo kit table par rakhi ek nigah us ladki par dali aur wo apne room ki or jane laga lekin wo 1-2 seedhiya chadha honga ke us dukandar ka use awaz aaya wo ladki jo ultiya kar rahi thi wo ab behosh ho chuki thi omkar bhagte huye uske paas gaya
omkar-k..kya hua
dukandar-inko chakker aa gaye aur ye gir gayi
omkar-are baapre kisi hospital main phone kariye jaldi
dukandar-yaha koi dawakhana nahi hai koi 20-25 km ki range main kahi nahi
omkar-fir..ab kya karna hai
dukandar-aap yahi hotel main ruke hai na
omkar-ha
dukandar-to ek kaam kijiye ise apne room main lejaiye mujhe lagfta hai kamjori se chakker aa gaye honge 10-15 min main hosh aa jayega fir chali jayegi
omkar-are aise kaise main nahi janta isko aur uska huliya to dekho call- girl huyi to
dukandar-thik hai fir rehan do yahi mujhe bhi der ho rahi hai dukan band karke ghar jana hai
omkar-lekin ise yaha aise chodna
dukandar-main bhi to wahi keh rha hu sir samajhiye
jaise taise fir omkar mana aur us ladki ko apne hotel ke kamre main le aaya aurt us ladki ko sofe pe dhakal diya. omkar ka sar solid dukh raha tha usme bhi us ladki ko seedhiya chada kar uper lane main uski halat kharab ho gayi thi apna sar pakad kar wo kurchi par baith gaya tabhi uska phone bajne laga
char galiye bakte huye usne phone uthaya
"omkar sir ..ashish bol raha hu..kais hai goa"
omkar-thi..thik hai
ashish-are kya hua tu itna haaf kyu raha hai sb thik hai na
omkar-ek min mujhe thoda pani pine de fir baat karta hu
fir om ne pani piya jiske baad ashish ne bolna chalu kiya
ashish-sab theek hai na bhai hotel acha hai na
omkar-mera mu mat khulwa us hotel ka naam lekar
aur fir om ne ashish ko puri baat batayi
ashish-iski maa ka!! matlab wo ladki is waqt tere room main hai
om-hao na bate abkya karte majburi hai be usko akele raste par nahi chod sakte
ashish-abe wo chod aur bata wo dikhne main kaisi hai
omkar-abe chod na meko to call girl lag rahi hai hosh main aate hi bhaga dunga
ashish-main kya bolta hu thoda time de.......
omkar-oh shit!!!! abe ashish abe kuch to jhol hai
ashish-kyu kya hua
omkar-abe us ladki ke baal nakli hai be uske neele baal ek side nikal rahe hai be aur...
ashish-abe aisa ruk mat bhai bol
omkar-maa ki aankh ashish iske gale main to mangalsutra hai benchod ye married hai bhai
ashish-bhai meko lagta ye ghar se bhagi huyi case hai hai isiliye aisa gateup hoga
omkar-sahi bol ra bhai tu
ashish-bhai meko lagta teko teri story mil gayi stay with her aur pata laga kya jhol hai
omkar-oye please meko ye 'dil hai ke manta nahi' ' jab we met' jaisi kahani to bilkul nahi likhni hai
ashsih- bhi uski purse check kare dekh kuch licence waigera milta kya
omkar-good idea hold kar
aur fir om dheere us ladki ke paas pahucha aur uski purse khol kar dekhne laga aur thik usi waqt us ladki ko bhi hosh aa gaya ye baat om ke dhayan main nahi aayi us ladki ne om ke hath se apna purse cheena aur usme se koi spray nikal kar om ki aankhon main mar diya isse om ki aankho main bohot jalan hone lagi. us ladki ne om ko jor se diwal par dhakela aur apna purse utha kar waha se bhag gayi diwal par sar lagne se om bhi behosh ho gaya aur ashish jisko is bare main kuch pata nahi tha wo bas phone par hello hello karta raha..........
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