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Romance Mohabbatein... (Completed)

Adirshi

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Awesome story hai bhai
Aapne story ke har pahlu ko darshaya hai jo ki acchi baat hai
Jesa ki human nature hota hai opposite nature se attract hona vo aapne isse bakhubi dikhaya hai jese hai har love triangle me hota hai nahi yaha par bhi ho raha hai ab aange dekhte hai ki kya hota hai
Waiting for your next update bhai
IS behatarin review ke liye bahut bahut shukriya dev bhai :thank_you:
 

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Update 41

ragini- ok to fir milte hai....

itna bol kar ragini ne phone band kar diya...jindagi main jaise pehli baar kisi ladki se bat hop aur date fix ho jaye aisa hi is waqt omkar ko lag raha trha auir ab to wo bas parso ki rah dekh raha tha...........
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friday ko kareeb 7 baje ke aas paas omkar marriott main pahuch gaya....

porch main khadi mehngi mehngi gadiya....lobby suits pehne corporators....business meetings ke liye aaye huye foreigners...treandy kapdo main ghoomte party freaks se bhari padi thi....

omkar ne ek najar apni ghadi par dali....ragini ke aane main abhi kareeb adha ghanta baki tha....itni jaldi waha pahuchne ke liye omkar apne aap par hi chillane laga...usne wahi sofe par apne aap ko asanast kiya aur waha rakhi ek magzine ko utha kar padhne laga....kuch 5-7 minutes hi bite honge ke uska phone bajne laga...

"hello....omkar.." dusri or se ek ladki ka awaz tha..

omkar-yes...bol raha hu...

ladki-sir main blue diamond se baat kar rahi hu..aapka..7:30 ka booking hai wo comfirm karne ke liye call kiya tha...aur sath main red wine aur chocolets ki bhi vyasta ki hai...

us ladki ki baat sunkar omkar ne apni ki jeebh chaba ki....blue diamond ka booking cancle karna to wo bhul hi gaya tha..aur sabse badi baat usne marriott main bhi booking nahi ki thi....agar wo chandwani ko uski waqt ye baat bata deta to booking change ho jati lekin ye janab to ragini ke khayalo main khoye the inhe to kisi baat ka hosh nahi tha

omkar- a....I m sorry madem...lekin..kya aaj ka booking cancle ho sakta hai??

ladki-any problem sir??

omkar-a..yes..mujhe business meeting ke liye out of station aana pada hai so ho sake to please....honest request....

ladki-no problem sir..but booking ke paise refund nahi honge...

omkar- oh not a problem...thank you so much.....

chalo ek kaam to ho gaya tha ab marriott main booking karna jaruri tha...omkar ne charo taraf najar ghumayi...to samne hi reception ka bada sa desk tha....kaan main head phone mic lagayi huyi maroon color ki sadi pehne ek ladki kisi se phone par baat kar rahi thi aur beech beech main ishara karke apne sath kaam karne walo ko instructions de rahi thi..

omkar waha pahucha..us ladki ki phone par baat hone tak wo ruka aur fir bola..

omkar- a..madem..pasha ka booking karna hai...a table for two..

ladki-sure sir...your good name???

omkar-omkar..

us ladki ne ek baar omkar ki or dekha aur fir computer par kuch type karne lagi aur fir achanak ruk kar omkar se boli..

ladki-sir there is a booking on your name..

omkar-ye kaise possible hai main to is bare main bhul hi gaya tha..kisne kiya hai booking..

ladki-sir ragini ke naam se booking dikh rahi hai..

omkar-ohh..thats great...thank god..

ladki-sir aap uper ja sakte hai..top floor...

omkar-thanks..

itna bol kar omkar lift ki or jane ke liye muda...aur waha jate huye uske man main bas ek hi khayal aaraha tha ke 'yaar ye hotels wale itni khoobsurat ladkiya laye kaha se hai'...

'PASHA' omkar ki kalpanayo se bhi jada sunder tha...16th floor se terrace par pasha sajaya hua tha....sab taraf safed sofe aur kurchiya bichi huyi thi terrace ke kono main badi badi dauldaar daliyo wale ped lagaye huye the aur un daliyo par colourful kaanch ki bottles latak rahi thi jinme L.E.D bulbs lagaye huye the jinse sab taraf halki roshni ho rahi thi...un bottles ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha mano kai sare jugnu eksath aa gaye ho..asman main neela rang faila hua tha aur sath hi bajne wala mand instrumental music mahol ki rangat aur bhi jada badha raha tha...

omkar ne ghadi main dekha to 7:25 ho rahe the..usne waha counter par inquiry ki aur book kiye huye table par ja baitha aur ragini ki rah dekhne laga...

dheere dheere ghadi ki sui aage sarakne lagi..omkar jaha baitha tha waha se entrance saaf najar aa raha tha..

jaise hi ghadi main 7:30 baje omkar sahi se baitha usne apne balo main hath fira kar apni hairstyle thik ki aur fir se ragini ka intajar karne laga..

7:35

7:40

7:45 ho gaye lekin ragini ka ab bhi koi aata pata nahi tha..usko phone karne ki dridh icha omkar hi huyi lekin aur 5 minute rah dekh li jaye is vichar se usne hath main liya hua phone niche rakh diya...

omkar badi shiddat ke sath 5 minute khatam hone ki rah dekh raha tha ki uska dhayan kheecha us lobby main mili huyi receptionist ne ..niche uske jo baal bandhe huye the wo ab usne khule chod diye the maroon color ki sadi uski kamniya kamar ko kas ke pakde huye thi aur waha ke waiters ko kuch kaam batane main wo vyast thi..omkar uski or dekhne main magn tha..

achanak usne palat kar omkar ki or dekha shayad wo use dekh raha hai ye use pata chal gaya hoga..omkar ekdum satark ho gaya..kuch 1 minute baad wo waiter se baat karke wo omkar ki or palti aur uski or aane lagi..

use apni or aata dekh omkar ne apna phone uthaya aur ragini na number dhundne laga itne main hi wo omkar ke samne aakar khadi ho gayi.................
 

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Update 42

achanak usne palat kar omkar ki or dekha shayad wo use dekh raha hai ye use pata chal gaya hoga..omkar ekdum satark ho gaya..kuch 1 minute baad wo waiter se baat karke wo omkar ki or palti aur uski or aane lagi..

use apni or aata dekh omkar ne apna phone uthaya aur ragini na number dhundne laga itne main hi wo omkar ke samne aakar khadi ho gayi.................
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apan uski or dekh rahe the ye baat shayad uske dhayan main aa gayi hai ab ab apne ko updesh ke dose milne wale hai ye baat dhayan main aate hi omkar ka gala sukha pad gaya...lekin aisa kuch nahi hua wo muskurate huye boli....

ladki-sorry...mujhe thoda late ho gaya...

omkar-excuse me??

omkar puri tarah hila hua tha..

ladki-oh sorry...main ragini....

itna bol kar usne apna hath omkar ki or badhaya lekin ye bhaisaab to abhi bhi chakraye huye hi the..

omkar-tum ragini???

ragini-ha...kyu?? koi aur aane wali thi kya??

omkar-nahi wo tum waha niche..

ragini-are kaam karti hu main yaha..ya nahi karna chahiye tha...

omkar-nahi mera bolne ka matlab wo nahi tha....

ragini-om shake hand ke liye 2 minute se hath aage kiya hua hai maine...

is baar omkar ko apne pagalpan ka gussa aaya

omkar-oh yes...main omkar.

usse hath milate huye omkar bola..

omkar-please have a seat...

fir samne ki kurchi apne hato se kheech kar waha use baithne ka ishara kiya tabhi ragini ka phone bajne raha...

ragini-excuse me..mujhe ye phone recieve karna padega...just a minute..

itna bol kar ragini ne phone liya aur jab tak wo phone par baat kar rahi thi utna samay omkar ko use dekhne ka chance mil gaya.....uska phone khatam hone ke baad omkar bola

omkar-congrats...lucky draw ke liye

ragini-thanks..

omkar-and thanks to chandwani unki wajah se hum pehli baar mil rahe hai...

ragini-pehli baar?? so mean om...hum mil chuke hai pehle..

omkar-kya..?? kaha..?? kab..?? kuch bhi..??

ragini-ha sach main..tumhara book launch tha..main aur meri friend aaye the waha tuymhara sign kiya hua book hai mere paas..

omkar-really!! par tub hamare beech koi baat chit huyi thi aisa to dhayan nahi hai mujhe..

ragini-hmm..waise sach to ye hai ke meri friend bohot bol rahi thi bolne ko lekin tab na main thodi shy-type hu..matlab tab thodi jyada hi thi lekin ab yaha receptionist ke job ke baad thodi jyada badbadi ho gayi hu...

omkar-are fir to bohot hi badhiya mujhe bhi badbade log kafi pasand hai aur aaj hamare paas kafi time bhi hai..so..

ragini-dekho ha baad main bore to nahi ho jaoge...kahoge ki ye kitna bolti hai..

omkar-dekhte hai kon pehle bore ho kar haar manta hai..

omkar- ne haste haste kaha..

ragini-koi baat nahi so pehle appetizer order kar le...

itna bol kar ragini ne waiter ko ishara kiya..

omkar aur ragini romantic vatavaran main ek dusre ke sath bate karne main magn the wahe radha international airport par tour oprator bol kar apne pehle assignment ke liye air-italy ki rah dekhti khadi thi..aur ashish...

ashish ke bare main fir kabhi filhal to sirf ragini aur omkar........
 
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