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[Rival]

Ye meri pahli story hai dosto sath bane rahe...

 

[Rival]

Update ~ 01




Hey surya sun'na yaar.



Surya : kya hai Aditya? maine kaha na nahi jaunga.


Aditya : lekin waha hame achhe paise milenge ek baar aur soch le yaar.

Surya : tu kabhi nahi sudhrega.

Aditya : sale yaha ghar ka rent bharne ke paise nahi hai aur tu kya bol raha hai.

Surya : tu apna muh band rakh jyada bakwas mat kar.

Aditya : haa main to apna muh band hi rakhu
Sale tu karna kya chahta hai.

Surya : chal tujhe office nahi jaana.

Aditya : haa jaa raha hu.


"Aditya ek chhote se ghar se nikalta hai jo bahar se to thik thak hi lag rahi hai"

"Ghar ke andar"


"Surya phone pe kisi se baat karke nahaane chala jaata hai"

"Chota sa intro"

Hero - surya, surya ek bahut hi handsome ladka hai six pack abs jo uski body ko aur bhi attractive banaata hai, simple kapde hi pahanta hai. Aur dikhawa to bilkul bhi nahi karta.
Age - 22 year

Aditya - ye bhi kafi handsome hai, aur slim bhi aditya paisa kamane pe jyada dhayan deta hai.
Abhi ek chhota sa job karta hai jisme 15 hajar per month kama leta hai.
Age - 23


"Baaki ke character time pe introduce honge"

"Kuch samay mein surya bathroom se nikalta hai, aur kapde pahan'ne lagta hai, kuch time mein surya ready ho jaata hai.
Aur ghar se nikal jaata hai.


: : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

"Yaha se thodi door"

2 ladki ek bade se mein baith ke baat kar rahi thi.

Ladki : priya ma'am ab hame chalna chahiye.

Priya : hema tujhe itni jaldi kyu hai.

Hema : par ma'am waha director presan ho rahe hai.

Priya : to mai kya karu uss director ko samaj nahi aata meri bhi personal life hai.

Hema : to mai director ko kya kahu.

Priya : keh do thodi derr mein aaungi.

Hema : okay ma'am.

"Aur kuch time tak dono wahi baithe rahti hai.

Priya (man me) : kya wo aaj nahi aayega.

" wahi road mein ek kafi mahangi car mein ek person baitha hua tha, jise priya dekh leti hai, abhi priya bahut khush thi.
Aur aise hi car priya ke ankho se ojhal ho jaati hai.

Hema : ma'am ab kafi time ho gayi hai, hame chalna chahiye.

Priya : ha chalo ab.


: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
Aditya ka office uske ghar se 5-km door tha aur aditya hamesha taxi
Se hi aata tha.

Admi : aditya maine jo tumhe kaam diya tha kya wo pura hua hai.

Aditya : yes boss ho gaya hai.

Admi : good mujhe tumse yahi ummid thi.

Aditya : thaks sir.

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

Surya : kya kaam ho gaya?

Admi : nahi sir.

Surya : kiran kaha hai.

Admi : ji wo to abhi bahar gayi hai.

"main aa gayi sir ' dusri taraf se awaj aati hai jo ki kiran ki thi.

Kiran : ji kya baat hai.

Surya : maine tumhe kuch kaha tha kya tumhe yaad hai.

Kiran : yes sir main taiyar hu.

Surya : ok


(kiran's intro)

Surya ki secretary hai.

Name-kiran
Age-20
Figure-34-26-34
Hight-5ft 6in.
Colour-fair bilkul heroine lagti hai"

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

"Ha ha ha bahut jald main tumhe khatam kar dunga"
Ek kamre mein 2 log baithe hue the jisme se ek ye keh raha tha.

2ra admi : yaar amit tum kyu uske piche pade ho,
Wo bahut khatarnak hai.

Amit : tu nahi samjhega sumit usne mere bete ko mara hai, jo dard mujhe hai wo tu nahi samjhega.

Sumit : wo bhi mere bete jaisa hi tha, mai samajh sakta hu.

Amit : bahut jald mai uss kutte ko khatam kar dunga dekhna tum.


" sumit aur amit bachpan ke dost hai inke bade mein aage pata chalega

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

(Film shooting area)

Hema : ready ho ma'am.

Priya : yes

Hema : ok to chaliye fir.

"priya aur hema dono shooting wali jagah par aa jaate hai"

"waha se thode doori par.

Director : sorry sir mai aisa nahi kar sakta hu.

Hemant : yaar tumse ek scene nahi badle jaate tu director kaise ban gaya.

Director : wo baat nahi hai sir priya ne film contract sign karne se pahle hi keh di thi ye sab scene nahi karegi.

Hemant : mai aapko double payment dilwaunga soch lijiye.

Director : thik hai mai koshish karta hu usse baat karne ki.


"Director priya ki or chala jaata hai, aur idhar hemant bahut khush ho raha tha, hemant ko pata tha director kafi lalchi admi hai.


: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

Surya aur kiran ek band pade factory ke paas khade the dono ke paas letest gun thi.

Surya : ready ho kiran

Kiran : yes sir i'm ready.

Surya : good to chale fir.

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

Aditya : yaar ye boss kuch jyada hi kaam dene lag gaye hai matha paka ke rakh deta hai.
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AAJ KE LIYE INTA HI DOSTO

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DHANYAWAD​

 

[parkas]

For starting new story thread....

 

[Monurchs]

good

 

[parkas]

Update ~ 01




Hey surya sun'na yaar.



Surya : kya hai Aditya? maine kaha na nahi jaunga.


Aditya : lekin waha hame achhe paise milenge ek baar aur soch le yaar.

Surya : tu kabhi nahi sudhrega.

Aditya : sale yaha ghar ka rent bharne ke paise nahi hai aur tu kya bol raha hai.

Surya : tu apna muh band rakh jyada bakwas mat kar.

Aditya : haa main to apna muh band hi rakhu
Sale tu karna kya chahta hai.

Surya : chal tujhe office nahi jaana.

Aditya : haa jaa raha hu.


"Aditya ek chhote se ghar se nikalta hai jo bahar se to thik thak hi lag rahi hai"

"Ghar ke andar"


"Surya phone pe kisi se baat karke nahaane chala jaata hai"

"Chota sa intro"

Hero - surya, surya ek bahut hi handsome ladka hai six pack abs jo uski body ko aur bhi attractive banaata hai, simple kapde hi pahanta hai. Aur dikhawa to bilkul bhi nahi karta.
Age - 22 year

Aditya - ye bhi kafi handsome hai, aur slim bhi aditya paisa kamane pe jyada dhayan deta hai.
Abhi ek chhota sa job karta hai jisme 15 hajar per month kama leta hai.
Age - 23


"Baaki ke character time pe introduce honge"

"Kuch samay mein surya bathroom se nikalta hai, aur kapde pahan'ne lagta hai, kuch time mein surya ready ho jaata hai.
Aur ghar se nikal jaata hai.


: : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

"Yaha se thodi door"

2 ladki ek bade se mein baith ke baat kar rahi thi.

Ladki : priya ma'am ab hame chalna chahiye.

Priya : hema tujhe itni jaldi kyu hai.

Hema : par ma'am waha director presan ho rahe hai.

Priya : to mai kya karu uss director ko samaj nahi aata meri bhi personal life hai.

Hema : to mai director ko kya kahu.

Priya : keh do thodi derr mein aaungi.

Hema : okay ma'am.

"Aur kuch time tak dono wahi baithe rahti hai.

Priya (man me) : kya wo aaj nahi aayega.

" wahi road mein ek kafi mahangi car mein ek person baitha hua tha, jise priya dekh leti hai, abhi priya bahut khush thi.
Aur aise hi car priya ke ankho se ojhal ho jaati hai.

Hema : ma'am ab kafi time ho gayi hai, hame chalna chahiye.

Priya : ha chalo ab.


: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
Aditya ka office uske ghar se 5-km door tha aur aditya hamesha taxi
Se hi aata tha.

Admi : aditya maine jo tumhe kaam diya tha kya wo pura hua hai.

Aditya : yes boss ho gaya hai.

Admi : good mujhe tumse yahi ummid thi.

Aditya : thaks sir.

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

Surya : kya kaam ho gaya?

Admi : nahi sir.

Surya : kiran kaha hai.

Admi : ji wo to abhi bahar gayi hai.

"main aa gayi sir ' dusri taraf se awaj aati hai jo ki kiran ki thi.

Kiran : ji kya baat hai.

Surya : maine tumhe kuch kaha tha kya tumhe yaad hai.

Kiran : yes sir main taiyar hu.

Surya : ok


(kiran's intro)

Surya ki secretary hai.

Name-kiran
Age-20
Figure-34-26-34
Hight-5ft 6in.
Colour-fair bilkul heroine lagti hai"

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

"Ha ha ha bahut jald main tumhe khatam kar dunga"
Ek kamre mein 2 log baithe hue the jisme se ek ye keh raha tha.

2ra admi : yaar amit tum kyu uske piche pade ho,
Wo bahut khatarnak hai.

Amit : tu nahi samjhega sumit usne mere bete ko mara hai, jo dard mujhe hai wo tu nahi samjhega.

Sumit : wo bhi mere bete jaisa hi tha, mai samajh sakta hu.

Amit : bahut jald mai uss kutte ko khatam kar dunga dekhna tum.


" sumit aur amit bachpan ke dost hai inke bade mein aage pata chalega

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

(Film shooting area)

Hema : ready ho ma'am.

Priya : yes

Hema : ok to chaliye fir.

"priya aur hema dono shooting wali jagah par aa jaate hai"

"waha se thode doori par.

Director : sorry sir mai aisa nahi kar sakta hu.

Hemant : yaar tumse ek scene nahi badle jaate tu director kaise ban gaya.

Director : wo baat nahi hai sir priya ne film contract sign karne se pahle hi keh di thi ye sab scene nahi karegi.

Hemant : mai aapko double payment dilwaunga soch lijiye.

Director : thik hai mai koshish karta hu usse baat karne ki.


"Director priya ki or chala jaata hai, aur idhar hemant bahut khush ho raha tha, hemant ko pata tha director kafi lalchi admi hai.


: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

Surya aur kiran ek band pade factory ke paas khade the dono ke paas letest gun thi.

Surya : ready ho kiran

Kiran : yes sir i'm ready.

Surya : good to chale fir.

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

Aditya : yaar ye boss kuch jyada hi kaam dene lag gaye hai matha paka ke rakh deta hai.
.
.
.
.
.
.
AAJ KE LIYE INTA HI DOSTO

Like & comments karna na bhule
Jo bi suggestion ho kripya comment karke jarur bataye.


DHANYAWAD​

Nice and excellent start of the story....

 

[Adirshi]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words tak ho sakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. . Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writers ko Awards k alawa Cash prizes bhi milenge jinki jaankaari rules thread mein dedi gayi hai, Total 7000 Rupees k prizes iss baar USC k liye diye jaa rahe hain, sahi Suna aapne total 7000 Rupees k cash prizes aap jeet shaktey hain issliye derr matt kijiye or apni kahani likhna suru kijiye.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 28th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar shakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Rules Check karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Rules & Queries Thread


Contest ke regarding Chit Chat karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Chit Chat Thread

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Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	3000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3000 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP	750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader	750 Rupees Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :-XForum Staff

 

[Aakash.]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP	750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader	750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

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