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plz maam next update jldi dedo plz avneet ke nude pic bhe add karo
plz maam next update jldi dedo plz avneet ke nude pic bhe add karo
Tu Avneet ke piche kyu pada hai itna..waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
plz maam next update jldi dedo plz avneet ke nude pic bhe add karo
Bahut bahut sukriyaThis is the best story I have read till now.. Pls continue
Bahut bahut sukriyaNice update tania ji. Maja hi aa gaya
Me bhi ishi ke bare me soch rahi the...tania ji agar possible ho to aap yuvi ko bhi ek face de do.
Baat to apki theek hai ye story' ab TMKOC serial base nahi rahi but sabki story same hi hoti hai isliyee mene thodi different story likhi hai taki logo ko kuch different padhne ko mile or unko kuch intresting Mile padhne ke kiye or isme me kamyaab bhi hui hu logo ko mere story padhne me maja aarha hai....Nice story till 60th chapter. New character just makes me distant from the actual story that you started. I want to read the jetha story but then this new character comes in between the story and ruins the whole f*¢king mood.
It's your story and as you said and you will write what you want but after saying that you asked ppl for a character and even intro-ed it. You might not change anything in story based on this but you asked to comment in update so I did.
Don't get me wrong you have written the best TMKOC story and I am a huge fan but now it feels like it's not TMKOC story anymore.
Bhuat bdiya story likh rhe hai aap tmkoc ki story pd ke bore ho chuke hai isme baaki serial aur baaki ladies bhi hai jisme pdke mza aata hai har baar kuch alag hota hai to yeh story zyada der chlegiBaat to apki theek hai ye story' ab TMKOC serial base nahi rahi but sabki story same hi hoti hai isliyee mene thodi different story likhi hai taki logo ko kuch different padhne ko mile or unko kuch intresting Mile padhne ke kiye or isme me kamyaab bhi hui hu logo ko mere story padhne me maja aarha hai....
or sabse important baat Other TMKOC story me yehi hota hai ki society ki sari ladies Randi hoti hai or wo kabhi kisi na kisi se chudti rehti hai but mene apni story' me kuch different dekhaya hai....
ab apko meri story pasand na aaye usme meri koi galti nahi hai..