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Update 55
mere saath jindagi ne ek ghinona majak kiya...par dukh hai ya khushi is baat ki main samajh nahi paati...
main jo huya use sahi manti hoon...wo majak hi aaj meri jindagi ka sabse bada sacch hai...
maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki meri jindagi mein kabhi aisa toofaan bhi aayega...
main 25 saal ki hoon...main abhi dopahar ka khana kitchen mein bana rahi thi...
garmi bahut thi isiliye main thodi thandi hawa lene ke liye khidki par aa gayi...
baahar se thandi hawa ka jhonka mujhe taro taaja kar gaya...
tabhi mujhe khayaal aaya ki pranav (mere pati 35 saal) aane waale hain aur main wapis stove ki taraf chali gayi...
pranav se meri shaadi do saal pehle huyi thi aur unhone mujhe duniya ka harr sukh diya bas ek ko chhod kar...
pranav ek doctor hai aur unka apna ek clinic hai...hamara abhi koyi baccha nahi hai...
khair main phir se thandi hawa lene ke liye khidki ki taraf gayi to baahar dekh kar hairaan reh gayi...
hamari khidki ke bilkul samne ek jawan ladka khada tha aur wo hamare ghar ki khidki ko hi dekh raha tha...
isse pahle ki main mud paati usne mujhe ghoor kar dekha aur main turant wahan se hat gayi...
mera dil dhak-dhak karne laga...main thoda darr gayi thi...par mujhe lunch taiyaar karna tha ye soch dimag mein aate hi...
main sab kuch bhool kar apne kaam mein lag gayi kyunki pranav kissi bhi waqt khana khane aa sakte the...
tabhi door bell baji aur maine darwaja khola to paya ki samne pranav khade hai...
unhone ander aa kar jhat se mujhe baahon mein bhar liya aur kaha ki aaj shaam hum shaadi mein jaa rahe hain...
phir humne khana khaya aur ab tak main us ladke waali baat bilkul bhool chuki thi...
pranav wapis clinic chale gaye aur main table saaf karke nahane chali gayi...
shaam ko hum shaadi mein gaye jahan unhone khoob enjoy kiya kyunki wahan main kissi ko nahi jaanti thi...aate huye pranav ne kaha...
pranav- ritu tum kal mere liye lunch mat banana kyunki meri kal ek bahut important meeting hai...
main- theek hai...
agle din main roj ki tarah lunch bana rahi thi aur garmi se mere bahut paseena nikal raha tha...
main thandi hawa lene ko khidki ke paas gayi aur apne paseene ko ponchne lagi...
tabhi wahan ek ladka aa gaya aur ghar ki taraf dekhne laga...
main wahan se turant hat gayi aur aisa darshaya jaise ki maine use dekha hi nahi...
tabhi mujhe khayaal aaya ki arre ye to wahi kal waala ladka hai...
ye yahan khada kya karta rehta hai isne kya hamare ghar ko time paas ki jagah samajh liya hai...
hamare ghar ke peeche sunsaan jungle tha aur wahan koyi ghar bhi nahi tha...
phir ye yahan kya karne aata hai kyunki maine ab tak kissi aur ko nahi dekha tha...
hamari kitchen ghar ke peechli taraf hone ki wajah se ye samasya aan khadi huyi thi...
maine socha ki aage se main dhyan rakhungi aur agar wo dobara dikha to kuch karungi...
saath hi kam se kam khidki ki taraf jaaungi...agle din aaj pranav ko bhi lunch par aana tha...
jiski wajah se main kuch jyada hi mehnat kar rahi thi...
garmi se pareshaan ho kar main jab khidki ki taraf gayi aur usse bahar dekha...
tab jaake mujhe chain mila ki baahar koyi nahi hai aur main thandi hawa ka anand lene lagi...
par achanak wahi ladka na jaane kahan se aa gaya aur mujhe ghoorne laga...
ye sab itni jaldi huwa ki na chahte huye bhi mujhe uski aankhon mein sab kuch dikh gaya...
main jhat se wahan se hat gayi aur bhaag kar apne bedroom mein aa gayi...
mere saath jindagi ne ek ghinona majak kiya...par dukh hai ya khushi is baat ki main samajh nahi paati...
main jo huya use sahi manti hoon...wo majak hi aaj meri jindagi ka sabse bada sacch hai...
maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki meri jindagi mein kabhi aisa toofaan bhi aayega...
main 25 saal ki hoon...main abhi dopahar ka khana kitchen mein bana rahi thi...
garmi bahut thi isiliye main thodi thandi hawa lene ke liye khidki par aa gayi...
baahar se thandi hawa ka jhonka mujhe taro taaja kar gaya...
tabhi mujhe khayaal aaya ki pranav (mere pati 35 saal) aane waale hain aur main wapis stove ki taraf chali gayi...
pranav se meri shaadi do saal pehle huyi thi aur unhone mujhe duniya ka harr sukh diya bas ek ko chhod kar...
pranav ek doctor hai aur unka apna ek clinic hai...hamara abhi koyi baccha nahi hai...
khair main phir se thandi hawa lene ke liye khidki ki taraf gayi to baahar dekh kar hairaan reh gayi...
hamari khidki ke bilkul samne ek jawan ladka khada tha aur wo hamare ghar ki khidki ko hi dekh raha tha...
isse pahle ki main mud paati usne mujhe ghoor kar dekha aur main turant wahan se hat gayi...
mera dil dhak-dhak karne laga...main thoda darr gayi thi...par mujhe lunch taiyaar karna tha ye soch dimag mein aate hi...
main sab kuch bhool kar apne kaam mein lag gayi kyunki pranav kissi bhi waqt khana khane aa sakte the...
tabhi door bell baji aur maine darwaja khola to paya ki samne pranav khade hai...
unhone ander aa kar jhat se mujhe baahon mein bhar liya aur kaha ki aaj shaam hum shaadi mein jaa rahe hain...
phir humne khana khaya aur ab tak main us ladke waali baat bilkul bhool chuki thi...
pranav wapis clinic chale gaye aur main table saaf karke nahane chali gayi...
shaam ko hum shaadi mein gaye jahan unhone khoob enjoy kiya kyunki wahan main kissi ko nahi jaanti thi...aate huye pranav ne kaha...
pranav- ritu tum kal mere liye lunch mat banana kyunki meri kal ek bahut important meeting hai...
main- theek hai...
agle din main roj ki tarah lunch bana rahi thi aur garmi se mere bahut paseena nikal raha tha...
main thandi hawa lene ko khidki ke paas gayi aur apne paseene ko ponchne lagi...
tabhi wahan ek ladka aa gaya aur ghar ki taraf dekhne laga...
main wahan se turant hat gayi aur aisa darshaya jaise ki maine use dekha hi nahi...
tabhi mujhe khayaal aaya ki arre ye to wahi kal waala ladka hai...
ye yahan khada kya karta rehta hai isne kya hamare ghar ko time paas ki jagah samajh liya hai...
hamare ghar ke peeche sunsaan jungle tha aur wahan koyi ghar bhi nahi tha...
phir ye yahan kya karne aata hai kyunki maine ab tak kissi aur ko nahi dekha tha...
hamari kitchen ghar ke peechli taraf hone ki wajah se ye samasya aan khadi huyi thi...
maine socha ki aage se main dhyan rakhungi aur agar wo dobara dikha to kuch karungi...
saath hi kam se kam khidki ki taraf jaaungi...agle din aaj pranav ko bhi lunch par aana tha...
jiski wajah se main kuch jyada hi mehnat kar rahi thi...
garmi se pareshaan ho kar main jab khidki ki taraf gayi aur usse bahar dekha...
tab jaake mujhe chain mila ki baahar koyi nahi hai aur main thandi hawa ka anand lene lagi...
par achanak wahi ladka na jaane kahan se aa gaya aur mujhe ghoorne laga...
ye sab itni jaldi huwa ki na chahte huye bhi mujhe uski aankhon mein sab kuch dikh gaya...
main jhat se wahan se hat gayi aur bhaag kar apne bedroom mein aa gayi...
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dear...update posted...
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Naina
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Brilliant update sir........ Bahot achhe likh rahe hai aap ne..... great going.... 
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Bhai ye story maine dusre forum pr bhi padhi h pr is update se aage kich samaj hi nhi aaya yha se puri story hi change ho gyi
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Yha se koi dusri story h ya ise me koi twist h jo aage jake ptaa chlega??
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