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Incest Meri mohabbat 2 (completed)

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Devilakky

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Imran khan said:
Thanks Devilakky bhai
Bhai pehle to mujhe jaan kar khushi huyee ke aapko kahani pasand aa rahi hai.
Aur bhai aapko kahani me kuch cheezey na pasand aayee to aapne apna feedback diya isliye mujhe khushi hai.me aagey is cheez ko dhyaan rakhunga.
Bhai abhi me aapke sawaalo ka jawaab deta hu.
1.............bhai aapne kaha hai ke 100 update ho gaye hai lekin abhi tak heroine ki entry nhi huyee hai.bhai aap ne mere starting ke 65 update padhey hongey us update ko aap ne sirf 1 minute me hi padh kar end kar diya honga q ke starting ke update mere 1 paragraph ke hotey they.bohot chotey update start me diya karta tha.isliye start me kahani ko poori tarah balance nhi ho paayee thi.aur na hi character.lekin ab kahani me update badey aa rahey hai.
2...............ha bhai ye keh saktey hai ke abhi tak kahani me koi heroine nhi aayee hai lekin aap ne kahani me jitni bhi girls hai uske liye akki ke liye kuch na kuch feelings hai.me aaney waaley kuch update me aapko heroine bhi pata chal jaayenga.
3.................aur bhai rahi sapna aur surbhi ki to me unki betiyo ka step dad nhi bananey waala hu akki ko.aap ne update padha honga to aapko pata honga ke sapna aur surbhi ki betiya mazaak kar rahi thi aur us wakt hero ne bhi clear kar diya tha ke hero step dad nhi balkey dost banenga.
4...................ha bhai aap ne sahi kaha hai ke hai ke hero ne abhi tak aged women ke saath hi sex kiys hai lekin isme hero ki galti nhi hai ye galti meri hai q ke mujhe bhi aged women hi zyaada pasand hai q ke unke boobs aur gaand bhi motey motey hotey hai isliye.aur yahi shayed meri pasand kahani me bhi jhalak rahi hai.lekin me jald hi kunwari ladkiyo se bhi sex karaunga akki ka.
Aap ne apna feedback rakha aur me ne uska answer diya hu bhai.shayed aap mere answer se santusht ho gaye hongey agar nhi huye to aap phir se apna sawaal rakh saktey hai me usko clear karnry ki koshish karunga.
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Thanks for rply sir!
Apka answer ka 4th point pdkr to hassi hi agyi, aur ha mera khne ka means srf itna ta k hero ki phli shadi h abi so spna surbhi jami ni muje qki jesa apne kaha k ab heroine ki entry b hone wali h aur heroine 100 episode k bad ari h to obviously romantic hi honi chaiye aur ese m agr hero ki agr phli shadi spna ya surbhi s hti h to y kuch at-pata s lgra h muje, bus aur kuch ni baki aap ko jesa psnd h ap wesa likho...readers to enjoy to krenge hi..
 
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Update.........102​
idhar Rana aa kar nikita ke liye dhamki de raha tha
Ab aage............
Idhar Rana aa kar dhamki de raha tha ke koi bhi nikita ko yaha se le kar nhi jaayenga to usko zinda jalaa doonga.itna kehtey hi sourav aur baaki ghar waaley darr gaye.tabhi sourav ne kaha.
sourav.............chalo sab ghar ke andar.nhi to ye yaha par tamasha bana denga hum sab ka
Komolika...............ha sourav.chalo andar.
Phir nikita,saaniya,sourav,sameera aur komolika andar jaa rahi thi lekin me udhar hi khada raha to itne me komolika ne kaha.
komolika.............akki chalo andar isko jo kehna hai kehney do.
akki...............aap sab jao andar me baat karta hu Is se.agar isko roka nhi gaya to iski himmat aur badhengi.
Sameera................nhi akki plz andar chalo.rana Thora pshycho type ladka hai.iska kuch bharosa nhi hai ye kuch bhi kar sakta hai.
akki................me hu na ye kuch bhi nhi karenga.
nikita..............tum jaantey nhi ho ye bohot danger hai.
rana................kon hai be tu.aur is ghar me kya kar raha hai.
akki................me hi hu wo jo kal nikita ko mumbai le kar jaunga.kal 4 bajey niklunga.agar tere me himmat hongi na to mujhe rok ke dikhana.
Rana..............accha to tu hi hai wo jo meri nikita ko mumbai le kar jaa raha hai.tu nhi bachenga.abhi bhi tere pass time hai nikal ja nhi to kal tu zinda nhi bachenga.
akki................me to Nikita ko mumbai saath le kar jaunga.tujhe jo ksrna hai kar lena.
rana .................thik hai tujhe agar marna hi hai to me kya kar sakta hu.kal tera aakhri din honga.
akki................ha thik hai kal dekh lengey abhi yaha se nikal
Mere kehtey hi rana waha se chaley gaya aur phir me bhi sab ke saath ghar ke andar aa gaya.
nikita..............tum ne ye kya kiya wo koi chota mota chor nhi hai jis ko tum daraa saktey hai.wo rana hai hamarey college ka most wanted ladka aur pshycho bhi hai wo.
komolika..............ha akki ye tum ne kya kar diya hai.ab wo nikita ko mumbai jaaney nhi denga.
akki.................aap sab daro mat.me hu na.agar us rana ko kuch nhi kiya to uski himmat badhengi.agar ab usko roka nhi to aagey chal kar wo nikita ke saath kuch bhi kar sakta hai.
sourav...............lekin akki
akki.............aap sab tension mat lo me hu na.abhi khana khatey hai bhook bohot lagi hai.
Sameera..............thik hai aap sab betho me khana lagati hu.
Phir hum sab khana khaney ke liye Beth gaye aur phir sab ne khana khaye.khana khaney ke baad phir me apney room me aaya aur phir so gaya.
Subah meri neend 7 bajey khuli.me fresh ho kar hall me aa gaya jaha par sab they lekin tension me they.q ke unko aaj Rana ka tension tha.unko darr lag raha tha ke Rana kuch kar na dey.
akki.................hum log dopahar ka khana kha kar nikal jaayengey.ghar pohachney me 5 ghantey lagengey isliye.
sourav................akki me kehta hu aaj mat jao.rana ka kuch bharosa nhi hai wo kuch bhi kar sakta hai.aur oopar se tum ne usko challenge bhi diya hai.
akki.................uncle me kisi se nhi darta hu.aur oopar se wo nikita ko pareshan kar Raha hai.aur mere parivaar ko koi pareshan karey me ye bardasht nhi kar sakta hu.
Mere aisa kehney se sab khush ho gaye they.unko khushi ho rahi thi ke me unko apney parivaar ka hissa banaya hu.
Sameera.............chalo abhi sab nashta kar letey hai time ho gaya hai.
sourav.............ha akki Beth jao nashta ke liye
akki.............ha uncle
Hum ne phir sab mil kar nashta karney lagey phir nashta ho jaaney ke baad me ne kaha.
akki.............aap sab apni packing kar ke rakh do hum dopahar me niklengey.
Komolika.............k akki
Phir hum sab apney room me aa gaye idhar me ne chacha ko phone laga kar keh diya ke hum raat tak aa jayengey.idhar komolika aur sameera baat kartey hai.
komolika...............sameera tu bhi hamarey saath chalna mumbai.tu rahengi to mujhe bhi accha lagenga.
sameera...............di me udhar aa kar kya karungi aur agar me udhar aayee to sourav ka dhyaan kon rakhenga.
komolika..............wo abhi baccha nhi hai wo apna dhyaan rakh sakta hai.aur tu mumbai saath chalengi to tu doctor ko bhi dikha dena.
sameera...........Doctor ko q dikhana hai di.
komolika..............doctor ke pass se tera ilaaj karayengey na.shaadi ko itna saal ho gaye hai phir bhi tujhe baccha nhi ho raha hai.ek baar doctor ko dikha kar pata to kar lengey na problem kya hai.
sameera................lekin di sourav nhi manengey doctor ko dikhaney ke liye.
komolika..............usko nhi batayengey.lekin tu bhi saath chal hamarey saath.ek baar doctor ko to dikha hi dengey.
sameera.............thik hai di lekin aap ko sourav ko manana honga.
komolika..............ha me sourav ko mana loongi ke tu hamarey saath aa rahi hai.
sameera...............k thik hai di
Idhar komolika ne sourav se baat kar li aur sourav bhi ready ho gaya tha sameera ko mumbai bhejney ke liye.phir komolika mere pass aayee aur kehney lagi.
komolika...............akki me chahti hu ke sameera bhi hamarey saath mumbai chaley.agar tum ko kuch problem na ho to.
Akki..............mujhe q bura lagenga agar wo aaye to accha hi honga.
Komolika. .................ha akki aur mujhe sameera ko kisi doctor ko bhi dikhana hai.shaadi ko 10 saal ho gaye hai lekin abhi tak koi baccha nhi hua hai.to tumhara koi pehchan waala doctor hai kya jis ko hum sameera ko dikha sakey.
akki...............ha hai aunty me mumbai me dikha doonga doctor.
komolika................thanks akki.chalo ab khana bhi ban gaya hai aa kar kha lo.phir nikalna bhi hai na.
akki................ha aunty chalo
Phir me aur komolika dopahar ka khana khaney nichey aa gaye aur phir hum ne lunch kiya.lunch honey ke baad me ne komolika,sameera,nikita aur saaniya ka samaan apni gaadi me rakh diya.idhar sab log apney apney room me tayyar ho gaye they.phir sab ready ho kar nichey aa gaye.phir hum sab sourav se miley aur usko bye bol kar gaadi me Beth gaya.me gaadi chala raha tha.aagey mere saath komolika aur pichey nikita,saniya aur sameera bethi huyee thi.
Abhi gaadi chalaye huye mujhe 10 minute hi huye they ke mujhe achanak se gaadi me break lagana padha q ke iski wajah ek gaadi thi jo mere raastey me aa kar khadi thi.aur us gaadi se Rana bahar nikla aur uske 2 saathi bhi nikley.aur teeno ke paas hockey stick thi.aur teeno bhi raastey ke bich me khadey huye they.idhar in teeno ko dekh kar sab darr gaye they.tabhi nikita ne ksha.
nikita...............me ne kaha tha rana bohot danger hai ab ye hum ko jaaney nhi denga.lekin idhar kisi ko hero banney ka tha na.ab dekhna ye kya karta hai.maa jaldi se gaadi ko ghar ki taraf ghuma leney bolo nhi to ye raaste ke bich me hi aap sab ko haani pohchayenga.
komolika..............akki ha pichey le lo.iske pass to hockey stick bhi hai kahi ye hum ko maarey na.aur iska darr itna hai ke hum ko koi bachaney waala bhi nhi aayenga.
Tabhi waha se Rana ne kaha.
Rana...............me ne kaha tha na nikita ko mumbai nhi le kar jaana phir bhi tum sab ne meri baato ko suna nhi.ab tumhari laash jalengi aur waha meri aur nikita ki shaadi ke shehnayee bajengi.
Rana ke kehney se idhar sab darr gaye they.
komolika................ab kya karengey.ye to hum ko maar denga.nikita ab tum ko hi rana se baat karni hongi.q ke wo hi tumhari baat ko abhi sunenga.
nikita..............ha ma me Rana se sorry kehti hu.
Akki................koi kuch nhi kahenga aur na koi sorry kahenga.aap bas gaadi ke Andar hi bethna.
Phir me apni gaadi se utra aur gaadi ki dikki ke pass gaya aur waha se wahi koyta nikala jo kal subah bakhtawar ke gundo ko maarney ke liye use kiya tha.koytey par abhi bhi khoon laga hua tha jo koytey par lag kar sookh gaya tha.koyta poora laal laal ho chuka tha.me ne vahi koyta nikala aur phir Rana ki taraf badha.
Idhar Rana ne bhi dekh Liya tha ke mere haath me koyta hai aur wo bhi poora laal laal hai.
akki...............me ne kaha tha tujhe ke me nikita ko yaha se mumbai le kar jaunga.aur agar tu ab beach me aaya to teri laash par se hi jaunga me.
Mere kehney se rana ko bhi darr lag raha tha tabhi usne apney ek saathi ko mujhe maarney ke liye bheja tabhi komolika ne kaha.
komolika..............akki gaadi ke andar aa jao nhi to ye tum ko maarengey.
Me ne komolika ki baato ko ansuna kiya itne me Rana ka ek saath mere paas hockey stick liye huye aaya aur jaisey hi usne mujhe hockey stick se mere sir par maarney laga to me ne apna koyta hockey stick beech me le kar aa gaya aur us gunday ki hocky stick mere koytey se takra gayee aur takratey huye mere koytey ki dhaar se uski hocky stick toot gayee.jaisey hi uski hocky stick tooti me ne apna koyta us gunday ke ghutno ki haddi par maara aur jaisey hi maara wo tadapney laga tha q ke haddi par maar bohot tez lagta hai.wo tadaptey tadaptey zameen par gir gaya tha.
Apney saathi ko aisa tadapta dekh Rana ka doosra saathi darr gaya tha.aur khud rana bhi dar gaya tha.idhar apney saathi ko tadapta dekh rana ke saath jo doosra ladka tha wo hocky stick ko le kar bhaagney laga tha.rana ne usko awaaz dekh kar rokney ki koshish karney laga lekin wo nhi ruka.
Ab me koyta le kar rana ke paas jaaney laga.jab rana ne dekha ke me uske paas koyta le kar aa raha hu to wo darney laga tha.uska chehra poora pasiney se bheeg chuka tha.mere nazdeek aaney se wo kaanpney laga tha.idhar jab nikita ne bhi rana ko kaanptey dekha to wo bhi shocked ho gayee thi q ke usko to ab tak lag raha tha ke Rana kisi se nhi darta hai.jaisey jaisey me Rana ke karib jaaney laga wo pichey Hatney laga.aur phir wo apni gaadi ke pass aa gaya aur jaisey hi gaadi ke paas aaya wo gaadi me betha aur waha se rafoo chakkar ho gaya.
Uske rafoo chakkar hota dekh sab ne rahat ki saans li.phir me bhi gaadi ke pass gaya aur koytey ko phir se gaadi ki dikki me rakha aur phir gaadi me aa kar Beth gaya.
Sameera...............akki hum ko to vishwas hi nhi hota hai ke Rana dar ke maarey bhaag sakta hai.
Nikita...............mujhe to laga tha wo kisi se nhi darta hai.
akki................jo ladki par apni mardaangi dikhata ho wo andar se darpok hi hota hai.me to kal uske bol bacchan sun kar hi andaaza laga diya tha ke wo darpok hai.agar kal aap sab ne mujhe roka nhi hota to me kal hi usko thikaney laga diya hota.
komolika..............thanks akki Nikita ko rana se bachaney ke liye.
akki...............aap thanks mat boliye ye to mera farz tha.
Phir me ne apni gaadi start kiya aur phir ghar ki taraf jaaney laga aur dekhtey dekhtey 5 ghantey guzar gaye aur me ghar ke gate par pohoch gaya.phir sab gaadi se utar gaye aur me ne gaadi ko park kiya aur ghar ki door bell bajayee.
Freinds aapko update kaisa laga comment section me zarur batana.
 
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