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Fantasy Meri Manorma.......... A Vintage Tale.....1913-1938

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Update....No:13

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manorma ke banaye hue ghar me hum maujud the....... kheme rehne ki ab zarurat nahi rahi thi......... wahan reh kar karte bhi kya

kuch der wahan bita kar hum nikal liye the

ye ghar jungle wali side me tha, is side me koi nahi aata tha. manorma ne bohut sahi jaga dekh kar ghar banaya tha.. uske liye to ye chutkiyon ka kaam tha.. chutki bajayi aur ho gaya

george to ankhen phade hue bohut der se ghar ko hi dekh raha tha, wo kuch bola

"ye kiska ghar hai"

main kaha k "hamara"

bass fir wo pagal sa hokar pure ghar ko dekhne lag gaya.. single story house tha, 6 kamre the, aur dunya bhar ka saman usme maujud tha.. manorma ne bataya tha k koi is taraf kabhi nahi aayega, agar aaya bhi to makan ko dekh nahi paayega, wo side se hi nikal jaayega


main bhi ghar dekh kar mohit ho gaya tha, manorma ne jaane kya kya laa kar ghar ko saja diya tha........ dekh kar tabeeat khush ho gai thi


shaam ke samay main george ko lekar main mehal ki or jaane laga...... ek ghoda aur bhi manorma ne arrange kar dia tha, george uspar tha, wo khud ko raja samjhta hua mere sath ghode ko dauda raha tha.. ghod sawar wo bhi achha tha... lekin alag type ka insan tha, use dekh kar hi hasni nikal jaya karti thi, uska andaz hi aisa tha

mehal me pohnche to darbaan jo pehle se hi sab jaante the k main aane wala hon, sab mere surat aashna ho chuke the, main famous jo ho gaya tha sureshgadh me




yahan main raja ke baare me bata dun abb uski zarurat padne wali hai.... vaise to mehal me itne characters han k list khatam hone me hi naa aaye.. fir bhi 2-4 bata deta hon, baaki sotory ke hisab se step by step aate rahenge.......


raja balbeer singh........ age 65
rani anaika singh.......... age 60


aur bhi kai raniyan aur rajkumar aur rajkumariyan han . daasiyon ki bhi line lagi hui han..........

agar baat ki jaaye to raja ki patniyon ki tadaad hi 22 thi, raniyon ki tadaad 9 thi.

pichhle saal raja ne ek aur shadi ki thi... us rani ka naam hai


anita singh: age 18



anita singh gareeb pariwar se hai, raja ne use dekha to saala mohit ho gaya, aur foran hi biyah kar le aaya.......... abhi raja iske sath zayada busy rehta hai, aur iski value bhi pehli rani ko chhod kar baaki sabse badh kar hai........

anita bhi husan me bemisal ladki hai, doodh sa gora rang, mast figure ki malik hai, iski bad kismati ye hui k anita kisi se sachha prem karti thi, par raja ki nazar padi to anita ko apni rani bana liya...... anita kuch nahi kar paayi, anita dukhi bhi hai aur adhuri bhi, is umar me raja ek jawan ladki ki aag kaise thandi kar sakta hai..


rajkumari indra: age 22

iski tareef to ki jaa chuki ha......... is mehal ka sabse badhiya nagina hai rajkumari indra......... rajkumari kanwal se kamm aur baaki sabse badhkar sundar aur shusheel

abhay singh:- age 35

ye raja ka pehla beta gai.......... chut ka shaukeen, shadi shuda hai, fir bhi khud se nagine talashta rehta hai.. apne baap par gaya hai, jo ladki pasand aaye uthwa li, ya shadi kar li........... isne bhi 4 shadiyan kar rakhi han... dasiyon ki bhi kami nahi hai................... ye apne baap ki patniyon ko bhi chod liya karta hai..... raja sabko to chod nahi sakta, to abhay singh behti ganga me hath dhota rehta hai............ abb ye anita ke peeche hai, parr anita ise koi bhav nahi deti.

mitali singh: age 33


abhay singh ki pehli patni, iski value sabse badhkar hai, door ke raaj ghirane se hai to value bhi bohut hai iski, ise abhay singh se koi pareshani nahi hai, 3 bachhe iske chhote chhote abhay singh se han.... abhay k baare me sab jaanti hai, vansh ko aage badhne k liye abhay ko mitali singh sahi lagi, to mitali ko abhay singh.. dono mehal me man pansad jindagi ji rahe han, abhay bhi samjhta hai k wo har time mitali ko nahi chod sakta to, mitali khud ki aag ko bujhane k liye mehal ke naukar ya guards se kaam chala leti hai.....


dilbar singh: age 33


ye bhi harami hai ek number ka....... abhi shadi nahi ki, chut jo aam han mehal me.. ye shadi k liye rajkumari kanwal ka dewana hai, par jaanta hai k uski wahan daal nahi galne wali to..... to kisi aur ki talash me hai shadi k liye


sanjay singh: age 27


ye kuch hat ke hai, dimag ka tez hai, ladaka hai, chut ka rasiya bhi hai, par maal dekh kar, har kisi par lattu nahi hota, apne baap ki 3 raniyon aur 2 dasiyon ka fan han, aksar unki hi chut me gum rehta hai...... apni sehat par bohut dhayan deta rehta hai....... aur aisa plan banane me laga hua hai k raja ke baad wo raja ban sake..

dimag ka tez ha to kuch kar bhi sakta hai........................ ye bhi rajkumari kanwal ki khawahish dil me rakhta hai..... par iski daal nahi gal rahi...


shakuntla singh: age 25


iska to special intro ho chuka hai.. arjun ne jaisa intro iska liya aur dia hai, wo bhi bohut special hai....... badi kameeni soch ki maalik hai..... mehal ki rajkumariyon aur raniyon me sabse badhkar sangdil shakuntla hi hai......


balbeer singh ke aur bhi kai bete han, dusri patniyon se, lekin pehli ki value badh kar hai, to usse se hone wale bachhe bhi sabse badh kar han..... balbeer singh ki pehli rani anaika singh raj ghirane se hai,uske baad ki koi bhi patni raj ghirane se nahi hai, sabki pehli shadi raj ghirane me hi hoti hai, bachhe bhi usi se jo janam lete han, asal value bhi unki hi count hoti thi.........



main mehal me pohncha to mere baare me gate par khade hue darban pehle se hi jaante the.. main george ke sath andar dakhil ho gaya..... mehal kya tha, andar se dekhne par pata chalta tha k andar bhi ek chhoti si riyasat bani hui thi......

kai acre par bana hua mehal andar se bohut hi khubsurat tha, deewar ke kuch faasla rakh kar bohut se chhote chhote ghar bane hue the, sabhi ghar door se dekhne par bhi sahi se dikh rahe the.. do kamron par mushtmil makan naukron aur pehredaron k liye the......... mere sath gate parse hi do darban andar chal pade the...

george:-maa kasam dil khush ho gaya arjun yaar, kabhi socha nahi tha apun ne k ek din mehal me bhi ghus paaonga

arjun:- saale abb khud ki aukat pehchan, youn saste logon ki tarha bartao mat karo. sab tujhe gareeb samjhne lagenge

gaeorge:- hehehehehe. wo to sab pehle se hi jaante han

manorma:- arjun iske dant nahi band honge aur na hi iski zuban, ye aise hi rahega.

arjun:- aur aise hi ye achha bhi lagta hai

kuch der me hum mehal ke asli hisse me ja pohnche.. wahan bhi ek gate tha... aur kai pehre dar khade hue the......

ek pehedar:- arjun ji, gustakhi maaf isse aage aapko akele hi jaana padega, aapke dost ki hum sabb achhe se seva karenge.... aap bhi to sab samjhte honge naa

manorma:- ye sahi keh raha hai arjun, george ko sath lejaane galat bhi nahi hai, abhi tum bhi pehli baar ja rahe ho to akele hi jaao, isse raja aur mehal walun ki shaan bhi badhegi, warna to tumhare sath koi bhi unhe koi aitraz nahi hoga, asuli taur par akele tumhe hi dawat di gai hai..

arjun;- theek keh rahi ho tum bhi manorma..........

george:- arjun apun bhi sab samjhta hai, tu akela hi andar jaa, main yahan is sabb ke sath maze karta hon........... george bhi samjhdar tha.. khud se hi bol pada

fir main george ko chhod kar manorma ko sath liye andar jaane laga...... andar jaane se pehle gate se kuch doori par ghodon ka ek astabal tha, dono ghode wahan baandh diye gaye....

ek bardan ke sath main andar jaane laga..

shaam hue 1 ghanta hone wala tha.. abhi khane ka time nahi tha..........



andar mehman khane me mujhe lejaaya gaya, main wahi baith gaya.. jiske sath main aaya tha wo andar itlaa dene chala gaya.. mehman khana bohut bada tha, bohut si nadir kisam ki cheezon se saja hua tha..

manorma:- dekha arjun is sajawat ko abhi to ye sirf mehman khana hai, abhi to andar ka dekhne wala hoga sab..... mujhe saaf suthra aur saja hua ghar ya mehal dekh kar bohut khushi milti hai arjun....

arjun;- tum khud bhi to khubsurat ho naa, to har khubsurat cheez tumhe attract karti hai.....

manorma;- haaye arjun main sach me hi sundar hon kya...?????

main jawab deta usse pehle hi pehredaar ke sath pehle din entry time me milne wala admi mila....... uski nature jaan mujhe us din bhi khushi hui thi, aaj bhi aate hi badi khush akhlaqi se mujhse baat karne laga


admi:- us din maine aapko apna naam nahi bataya tha arjun ji.... mujhe jeevan das kehte han

arjun;- badi hui khushi jeevan ji aapke se milke.. ........ main khada hokar usse mila

jeevan:- aaiye mere sath raja saab aap ne aapko bulaya hai

main uth khada hua aur jeevan ke sath chal pada

mehal andar se bhi bohut bada tha...... kai rahdariyan bani hui thi, kai kamre the, 3 rahdariyon se guzar kar jeecan mujhe leke ek bade kamre me ja ghusa

andar dekh kar to main heran hi reh gaya..... kamra nahi tha ek bohut bada haal numa karma tha........ usi haal numa kamre ki pichhli deewar se 8 feet aage raja ki kursi thi........ 4 feet chaudi to hogi hi uski kursi jispar wo baitha hua tha.. sath hi do chhti kuriyan aur bhi padi hui thee, right side me rani anaika singh baithi hui thi, to left side me anita singh raja ki akhri patni

bete side me bathe hue the.. usi kamre me rajkumaron aur rajkumariyon ka mela laga hua tha.. dasiyon ka bhi jhurmat tha, saala itna bada tharki tha........

najaane kitni patniyan aur dasiyan is samay haal numa kamre me maujud theeeeeee... ye sabb mujhe manorma sath sath bata rahi thi..

50+ the sab mila kar is bade kamre me............

main raja ke saamne ja pohnchaa.. budha raja mujhe dekh khush ho gaya.. utha nahi bass baithe baithe hi hath aage kar dia........ warna to shayad koi raja aisa bhi na kare..... main bhi aage badha aur raja se hath mila liya


raja:- arjun beta tum aaye mujhe khushi hui.......... fir ek naukar ko ishara kiya, raja ke paas hi ek khali jaga thi, naukar ne ek saaf suthri kursi wahi la kar rakh di, raja ne mujhe baithne ka ishara bhi kar dia.....

ek sath mujhse baat bhi ki, naukar ko aur mujhe ishara bhi kar dia...... sab quick service thi

arjun:- mujhe bhi yahan aa ke aur aap se milke khushi hui raja saab

sab rajkumariyan mujhe dekh rahi thee.. mere kapde rajkumaron se kamm bhi nahi the, shakal se bhi mai bohuto se badhkar tha

raja:- kuch apne baare me bataao arjun, tumhe dekh k to lagta hai k tum kisi bade aur oonche ghirane se ho..... warna ye andaz kisi aam se insan me nahi ho sakta..

arjun:- raja saab jhut bolna achhi baat nahi hai, aur mera sach bhi bohut ajeeb hai.. ek hadse me khud ko bhul chukaa hon, nahi jaanta main kaun hon, kahan se aaya hon, aur kahan jaana hai mujhe.. kaun kaun hai meri family me.. ek nadi me se kisi ne mujhe zakhmo se choor nikala tha.. to usi ne mujhe arjun naam dia, maine bhi khud ko arjun samjh liya..

sab meri bat sunkar heran reh gaye

raja:- baat to badi ajeeb hai arjun beta, parr tumne sab sach bata kar hamara dil jeet liya...... warna to izzat milne par koi bhi khud ko bohut ooncha dikhane lagta hai.

arjun:- raja saab aapne apni jawani me bohut se maarke sar anjam diye honge, bohuto se lade bhi honge, kaiyon ka khun bhi bahaya hoga.. to mere hisab se oonchaa wahi hota hai, jisme mardangi zayada ho....

raja:- waah waah kya baat kahi hai tumne arjun beta. hum aur bhi bohut khush hue han tumhari baat sunke.. main bhi jawani me aisa hi tha.. tumne sahi kaha baat mardani ki bhi hoti hai..... aur mardangi bhi har kisi ko nahi milti.... milti hai to khun se milti hai

anaika singh:- raja saab ladka me baat to hai, warna race k maidan me ek se badhkar ek soorma tha, parr koi bhi ise chit nahi kar paaya..

abhay singh jo meri tareef sunkar andar hi andar garam ho raha tha, baakiyon ka bhi kuch aisa hi haal tha, shayad raja ya rani ne kabhi aisi tareef apne beton ki bhi nahi ki thi......... kaise koi sehn kar paata

abhay sing:- race ki baat se mardangi ka sahi se pata nahi chalta pita ji.. arjun ne jo challenge rajkumar surinder ko diya hai, to kal arjun khud ko mard bhi sabat karke dikha de...

raja:--- aise baten mehlon me aksar hoti raha karti thi, raja bhi ghussa nahi kar sakte the apne bete ki baaton parr........ warna uske bete use hi raaste se hata dete

raja:-haan kal hi sab sahi se dekhne ko milega

main raja ke badle andaz ko dekh kar dil hi dil me hassne laga tha.. shayad use bhi andaza ho gaya tha k wo kuch zayada hi meri tareef kar gaya tha.. dilbar aur sanjay singh ki or dekha to wo bhi mujhe khaa jaane wali nazron se dekh rahe the..

arjun:- raja saab kal to main aap sabb ko dikha dunga k mard ki asli pehchan kya hoti hai....

anaika ne bhi mahol ko badalne k liye

anaina singh:- (ek daasi se) dekho khaane me kitni der hai................

fir raja saab se ifhar udhar ki baaten hoti raheee.. rajkumari koi bhi nahi boli thi, dibar aur sanjay bhi abhay ki tarha se badh chad kar bolne lage, jitna time tha khane se pehle wo khud ko baaton se mujhse bartar sabat karne ki koshish karne lage



manorma baar baar hass rahi thi........... fir khane ke tayyar hone ka bataya gaya to main raja ke family dining table ki aur badhne laga....... raja ne mera ek hath pakad liya tha beech raaste me ..... fir foran hi yaad aa gaya k apne beton ke saamne mujhe limited value deni hai to mera hath chhod dia

manorma;- dekha arjun budhe raja ka yahi haal hota hai, chod bhi sahi se nahi sakta aur beton se darta bhi ha

arjun:- darega nahi to aur kya karega, kisi ko ghussa aa gaya to sote hue hi tapka dega...........................



kuch der me main sabke sath dining table par baitha hua tha, dunya bhar ke khane table par saje hue the..... jitne sab the table bhi usi hisab se thaaaaaaaaaaaa..

manorma:- sab ek nahi khate, aaj tumhari waja se sab sath han..... warna to sabne apne apne hisse ka table alag se banwaya hua hai.... koi bahar se aaye to fir sab is table par ek sath khate han....... dekho to sahi shakuntla kaise tumhe mohabbat bhari nazron se dekh rahi hai.

maine shakuntla ko dekha to wo mujhe ankh se ishara karne lagi.

arjun;- shakuntla ke ishare ka matlab kya hai

manorma:- uski aag firse bhadak uthi hai, use chain nahi mil raha

saali peeche hi pad gai thi.......... raja ne sabse pehle khana shuru kiya to uske baad rani fir sab shuru ho gaye khaane me........ main bhi apne hisse ka khane laga.

khane par bhi wahi baaten, bekar kisam ki...... mere baare se sab jaan nahi paaye the
warna mere past aur meri family baare zayada baaten hoti.. apne beton ke hote hue meri zayada tareef nahi kar sakta tha.


shuru ke kuch minton ke baad raja se baat karne me maza khatam ho gaya tha... khana khaa kar kuch der ki baaton ke baad main wahan se nikal liya

george ko sath lekar main apne ghar ja pohnchaaaaaaaaa.......


rajkumari indra se kai baar nazren mili theee, lekin sab normal hi raha tha.. shakuntla se maine nain matakka nahi kiya tha.. aur bhi kai ankhen mujhe taad rahi thi, bohut si jawaniyan andar se adhuri thi, bohut si piyasi thi, mujhe apne matlab k liye ghoor rahi theee..

manorma;- arjun aise mehal me entry nahi ho paayegi hamari

arjun;- entry karni koi zaruri bhi to nahi

manomra:- entry karni hai mehal me arjun, rajkumari indra ko tum bhul jaaoge kya

arjun;- nahi manorma main rajkumari indra ko mela karne ki soch bhi nahi sakta

main palang par peeth ke bal leta hua tha aur manorma mere seene par khadi hui meri ankhon me dekh kar baat kar rahi thi..

manorma:- maine kab kaha k tum shakuntla ke jaise rajkumari indra ko mela kardo.. are wo to ek phool hai, uske badan ki khushbu se man mehak uthta hai.. usse prem karo arjun........

arjun:- meir mano billi prem aise hi ho jaata hai kya.?

manorma:- to kaise hota hai arjun, zara mujhe bhi to bataao

arjun:- main kaise bataaon, maine kaunsa kabhi kisi se prem kiya hai...... manorma ki ankhon me dekhte hue main bola

manorma:- kya matlab tum mujhse prem nahi karte kyaa.?

arjun:- jo main tumse karta hon use prem bolte han

manorma:- aur nahi to kyaaa

arjun:- to kaunsi aisi premika hogi jo apne premi ko dusri ladkiyon ke sath aisa karne ko bolti hai, kabhi tum mujhe kisi ko chodne k liye bolti ho to kabhi prem karne k liye

manorma:- wo sab chhodo main aisa kyun karti hon, bas mera dil karta hai tabhi to tumse kehti hon, aur fir hum dono to hamesha sath rahenge, ye sab to hamara sath hamesha nahi de sakenge naa

arjun:- kya matlab hai tumhara hamesha sath rahne se.... aur fir kisi ke sath kuch pal k liye pyar karke main kisi ke dil ko nahi dukha sakta

manomra:- tum samjhe nahi arjun.... baat kuch hatt k hai, jaise mai amar hon, tum bhi ho jaaoge, aur rajukumari indra ho ya rajkumari kanwal, wo to apni zindagi ki saanse puri karke guzar jaayengi, parr hum to hamesha hi sath rahenge naa.. to isi liye main tumhe ye sabb karne ko keh rahi hon, aur jis se prem kiya jata hai, uski khushi ki liye to kuch bhi kiya ja sakta ha naa

manorma ki baaten badi herankun thee, par wo jo bol rahi the, wo galat bhi nahi tha.

arjun:- matlab agar main rajkumari indra se, ya rajkumari kanwal se jud jata hon to fir wo bhi hamare sath hamesha rahengi

manorma;- haan arjun, main unhe dhoka dene k liye ya chhod dene k liye to nahi bol rahi hon naa.. jab tab unki saanse han wo rahengi hamare sath.. agar to kismat me unka aur hamara sath likha hua hai to

arjun:- main nahi janta manorma tum ye sab mujhe karne ko kyu bol rahi hai, par ab mujhe bhi ye sab galat nahi lag raha, shakuntla jaisiyon ke kuch bhi kar lun, koi harj nahi, parr indra aur kanwal k jaisiyon ke sath main kuch bhi galat karne ki soch bhi nahi sakta.. dekhte han aage kya hota hai

manorma;- to main keh rahi thi arjun k mehal me rukne k liye humen bhi kuch jugad karna padega... aise to hum mehal me azadi se ghoom fir nahi sakte

arjun:- to uske liye humen kya karna hoga

manorma:- karna kya hai, kisi ek ko sath mila lete han. raja ki gaddi k liye mehalon me sazishen to aam baat hua karti hai...... aise hi kisi ek ko takpa kar unka aitmad hasil karenge fir hamari hogi balle balle mehal me. azadi se ghoom kar mehal me kuch samay bitayenge.... maze hi maze honge arjun mehal me.. pura mehal hi aag barsati hui jawaniyon se bhara pada hai......... waise to main sab ek hi chutki me kar sakti hon, aise na to tumhe maza aayega aur na mujhe...

manorma mere seene par let kar dono hath fold karke uspar chin rakhte hue mujhse baat kar rahi thi........... manorma ki ankhon me chamak thi, wo bohut khush thi, khush to wo har dumm hi rehti thi, khili khili bhi wo har dumm rehti thi.. uske jaisi koi kaise fresh reh sakti thi...... uske jaise haseen aur taro taza bhi to koi nahi tha, uske jaise mahekte badan ki malik bhi to koi nahi thi is bhari dunya me


arjun:- manorma mai tumhe chhuu sakta hon kyaaaaaaaa..

hahahahahaha.............. dil machal raha hai kyaa mujhe chhuuu k liyeeeeeee

manorma hassne lagi thi.. anachak se hi uske chola bhi badal gaya tha, mehal ki baton ko bhul kar wo bhi mujhpar dhayan dene lagi

arjun;- wo to kabse machal raha hai

manorma firse khadi ho gai, hawa me udti hui aayi aur mere honto ke paas aa kar mere honto par hath rakh dia...... uffffffffffffffffffffffff kitni garmi ki softness thi uske hath me........ surur ki tarangen si mere jism me daudne lagi thi.... meri ankhen si band hone lageeeeeee..

band ankhon se hi maine mehsus kiya k mere honto par kisi ne jalta hua koyla rakh dia tha.......... maine jhat se ankhen kholeen to normal kad kaath ke barabar ho kar mere honto par apne hont rakhe kiss kar rahi thi.......

jitni jalti usne kiss kiya tha, utni hi jaldi fir usne mere honto se apne hont bhi alag kar liye the....... firse mini size ki ho gai wo........ is baar mere seene par aalti paalti maar kar peeth karke sarr jhuka ke wo baith gayi........

manorma sharma rahi thi..... aur main hairat me gum manorma ki peeth ko takne laga thha, fir mera mere honto par pohnchaa aur manorma k honto ke ehsas ko mehsus karne laga........... itna nasha mujhe pehle kabhi nahi hua tha.. itna surur me main pehle kabhi nahi dooba tha... aisi madhoshi bhi mujhpar pehle kabhi taari nahi hui thi..
dil ki dhadkano me ajeeb sa shor hone laga tha.. lekin andar se sab bohut, behad achha bhi lagne laga tha.........

aisi hi feelings me main bohut der tak raha, meri ek ungli mere hi honto par chalne lagi thi.. meri ungli bhi manorma ke honto ke lams ko mere honto parse mehsus kar paa rahi thi..... kitna garam aur mann ko bhaaane wala ehsas tha..

manorma ne meri aur nahi dekha..... kabhi wo kisi ko leke chodne ki baat bhi kar jaati thi, aur kabhi beinteha sharma bhi jaati thi.. bohut se rang the manorma me

na wo kuch boli aur na hi main kuch....... jo ho chuka tha, use pure mannn se dono hi mehsus karne me lag gaye the..............

aise hi bohut der tak ye sab chalta raha, fir mujhe neend aa gayi


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main george ke sath ek baar firse mehal me tha...... din ke 3 baje ka time tha, aur suridner se shamsherzani ka mubalka 4 baje hona tay hua tha

aaj sab dekhne wale the k kisme kista hai dum........... mehal ki back side me hi talvar bazi ki practice ke liye ek jaga seleted thi.. jahan mehal ke raja aur rajkumar shamsherzani kiya karte the.................

mehal ki backside me hi ke 2nd floor par bohut se logon k baithne k liye jaga bhi bani thi........

50x15x20 size me 2nd floor par stage jaisa bana hua tha....... neeche charon aur bhi mehal ke dusre aur bahar se riyasat ke bade bade logon k ke liye baithne k intezam tha.......

mehal se abhi koi nahi maujud tha 2nd floor par

main george ke sath wahan pohnchaa to surinder........ khud ko rajkumar surinder sabar karne me laga hua tha...... uska jism paseene me bahaya hua tha........... wo 4 pehlwano se zor azmaai me laga hua tha..... mujhe aate dekha to pehlwano ko side hone ka bol dia.................... chhota langot surinder ne bandha hua tha... jism ke maamle me surinder kamm bhi nahi tha...... mazbut aur khubsurat jism ka wo malik tha.


parr andar se badsurat bhi tha wo, manfi soch ka malik, ghamandi kisi ko khud se badhkar nahi jaanta tha...


mujhe aate dekha to ruk kar pelwano ko khud se door kar dia......... ek tauliye se khud ko saf kiya aur fir jahan talvaren padi hui thee, wahan jaa pohnchaa, aur talvaron ko utha utha kar check karne laga, fir ek talvar ko lekar akhaade wale hisse me ja pohnchaa..


akhaade wala hi hisaab tha.. jahan hamari fight honi thi, wo area 40 feet ke circle me tha........ mazbut raasson ki madad se wo circle banaya gaya tha...


surinder darmiyan me pohncha aur pehlwano se bhi talvar utha laane ko bolne laga, kuch der me surinder charon pehlwano se akela mashq krne laga, lekin mashq nahi rahi thi wo......... surinder mujhe dikhane k liye charon pehlwano par toot pada tha.. charon pehlwan pehle to normal andaz me surinder se talvar bazi ki mashq karte rahe. parr fir achanak se hi surinder ke hamlon me tezi aane lagi, aur pehlwan khud ko surinder ki talvar ki kaat se bacha na paaye. aur zakhmi hone lage


surinder bila shuba ek bhetreen shamsheerzan tha.... par ghamandi bhi bohut tha.. aur jo ghamandi ho, uska to fir main khana kharab karta hi tha

manorma:- hahahaha.. ullu ka pattha .. arjun tumhe apne tevar dikhane k liye apne hi sathiyo ko kaat raha ha...............

arjun:- bas kuch der ki baat hai, fir uska bhi aise hi ghaao se bhara hoga.....

main apni pakar par bandhi hui niyaam se talvar nikal kar uski dhaar par ungli chalate hue bola.......... mehal me aane se pehle mujhe manorma ne ye talvar di thi.
saali jaane mere baare me kya kuch jaanti thi.. talvar bhi manorma ne mujhe wo laa kar di thi.. jo mujhe jani pehchaani lagi thi....... bahadur ke baad talvar bhi jab mere hath me aayi thi, to mujhe aisa laga tha k main is talvar se kaiyon ka khun baha chuka tha. bahadur ki tarha se ye talvar bhi meri purani sathi hai..

manorma se poochhne par bhi usne mujhe kuch nahi bataya tha... baat ko wo taal jaati thi, bass samay aane par sab saamne aa jaayega... aisa bolti thi

jab talvar utha kar maine hawa me hi use chalaya tha to ek scene meri ankhon me lehra gaya tha......... jis andaz se maine talvar ghumaayi thi, usi andaz me hi wo scene tha, aur main kisi ki gardan ek hi jhatke me alag kar raha tha.....

bas 2 second hi wo scene meri ankhon ke saaamne lehraya tha.. talvar chhod kar main baith gaya tha.. mere sarr me dard hone laga tha, parr mujhe dard ki utni parwa nahi hui, jitni main ye sochne laga k main kaun hon

manorma bhi mujhe dekh kuch ghabra si gayi thi... jaise mujhe sab yaad aa gaya ho..

lekin aisa nahi tha.. manorma ne jaise hi mehsus kiya k main abhi bhi khud ko bhula hua hon to tab ja ke usne chain ki saans li thi..



mere hath me talvar dekh kar surinder ruk gaya... pehlwan khud se hi peeche ho gaye the, wo surinder ka mukabla nahi kar sakte the.......... surinder mere hathon me maujud talvar ko hairat se dekhne laga tha...... talvar thi to ek aam si, parr uski chamak aur dhaar door se hi dekhi jaa sakti thi.......

surinder meri talvar ko dekh kar kuch nervous sa hua tha, par fir wo khud par kabu paa kar apni practice me masruf ho gaya tha.......



manorma:- arjun tum bhi practice kar lo

arjun:- karke to aaya hon ghar se...... aur mujhe nahi lagta k mujhe practice ki zarurat nahi..........

manorma:- wo to main bhi janti hon...... tum jaisi chusti furti aur maharat to surinder kya kisi me bhi nahi ho sakti...


george se bhi baaten hoti rahi...... wahi khade khade hi main surinder ko aas paas maujud logon ko dekhne laga..... abb thoda sa hi time bacha tha mukable me

maine 2nd floor par dekha to wahan bhi mehal se sabb ka aana shuru ho chuka tha...
raja, raniyan, uske bete, betiyan aur angrej sarkar ke bade abhi nahi aaye the....

kuch naukar aur dasiyan side khade dikh rahe the.. hath bandhe hue wo hukam ke ghulam the......... sab neeche surinder ko mujhe aur hamare aas paas baithe hue logon ko dekh rahe the..........



zayada kisi ko nahi bulaya gaya tha... badi badi hastiyan hi maujud theeeeeeeeeee..
agar rajkumar surinder haarta hai to aam logon ke saamne ke saamne uski kamm beizzati ho, is liye mehal k aam log to maujud the, parr riyasat ke aam log nahi the.. sab mehal me ghus bhi to nahi sakte the..


surinder jo pehle langot me tha.. practice chhod kar khud ko saaf karta hua kapde pehn chuka tha...


george:- chal mere yaar aaj firse dikha de tujhse badh kar koi nahi is dunya me

arjun:- bas bas zayada baans par matt chadhaa mujhe saale ye talvar bazi ka mukabla hai, ghod sawari ka nahi.. tune mujhe kabhi dekha bhi nahi, aur aise udne laga hai, jaise mujhe saalon se jaanta ho.. dheeraj rakh aur zara surinder ke chachere bhai par dhayan laga, dekh kaise to wo tujhe aur mujhe ghoor raha hai..

kuch faasle par final race me 3rd aane wala surinder ka chachera bhai humen ghoor raha tha..... use aaye bhi thodi der ho gai thi........

fir wo apni jaga par jaa kar baith gaya........ uske sath ek ladki bhi baithi hui thi

arjun:- wo ladki kaun hai.. pehle nahi dikhi mujhe

manorma:- abhi tune dekha hi kya hai mere raja.. abhi to bohut kuch dekhne layak hai aas paas

arjun;- tu seedhe seedhe baat nahi kar sakti kyaaaaaa..

manorma:- seedhi baat hi to kar rahi hon, samjh lo ye dusri shakuntla hai, surinder ki behen hai...

arjun;- to pehle kahan thi ye.. dikhi nahi pehle mujhe

manorma;- pehle ye mehal me thi.. race me bhi thi, tune kaunsa sab par dhayan dia tha..... ye peeche baithi hui.... ye sanjay k liye yahan aayi hai.. lekin sanjay ise koi bhav nahi de raha......

sab aa chuke the stage par.... kuch hi der me mukabla shuru hone wala tha.. main bhi kurta utaar dia...neeche fitting wali buniyan thi........ mere muscles dikhaai dene lage..........

manorma:- chhupa lo arjun apne muscles ko chhupa lo..... kahi shakuntla bhaagi bhaagi aa kar tujhse lipat na jaaye......... hehehehe


manorma maskhari karte hue hasste lagi......... bina kurta utare bhi lada ja sakta tha, par surinder koi aam talvar baaz nahi tha, mujhe bhi apni puri efforts dikhani thee, tabhi to surinder se main jeet sakta tha.. mukabla bohut hi tough hone wala tha........


rajkumar kanwal aur raja fir aa chuke the, kal wo chale gaye the, mera aur surinder ka mukabla dekhne k liye dono firse mehal me maujud the... nelson aur jenny bhi maujud the.......

aaj ka rang kuch aur tha, aaj sab pehle se bhi zayada excited the.. pehle race ka maidan tha to aaj talvar se saja maidan.......... khun behne wala tha aaj.. jab tak koi haar naa maanta, mukabla khatam hone wala nahi tha,, chahe koi marr bhi jaaye.





 

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manorma ke banaye hue ghar me hum maujud the....... kheme rehne ki ab zarurat nahi rahi thi......... wahan reh kar karte bhi kya

kuch der wahan bita kar hum nikal liye the

ye ghar jungle wali side me tha, is side me koi nahi aata tha. manorma ne bohut sahi jaga dekh kar ghar banaya tha.. uske liye to ye chutkiyon ka kaam tha.. chutki bajayi aur ho gaya

george to ankhen phade hue bohut der se ghar ko hi dekh raha tha, wo kuch bola

"ye kiska ghar hai"

main kaha k "hamara"

bass fir wo pagal sa hokar pure ghar ko dekhne lag gaya.. single story house tha, 6 kamre the, aur dunya bhar ka saman usme maujud tha.. manorma ne bataya tha k koi is taraf kabhi nahi aayega, agar aaya bhi to makan ko dekh nahi paayega, wo side se hi nikal jaayega


main bhi ghar dekh kar mohit ho gaya tha, manorma ne jaane kya kya laa kar ghar ko saja diya tha........ dekh kar tabeeat khush ho gai thi


shaam ke samay main george ko lekar main mehal ki or jaane laga...... ek ghoda aur bhi manorma ne arrange kar dia tha, george uspar tha, wo khud ko raja samjhta hua mere sath ghode ko dauda raha tha.. ghod sawar wo bhi achha tha... lekin alag type ka insan tha, use dekh kar hi hasni nikal jaya karti thi, uska andaz hi aisa tha

mehal me pohnche to darbaan jo pehle se hi sab jaante the k main aane wala hon, sab mere surat aashna ho chuke the, main famous jo ho gaya tha sureshgadh me




yahan main raja ke baare me bata dun abb uski zarurat padne wali hai.... vaise to mehal me itne characters han k list khatam hone me hi naa aaye.. fir bhi 2-4 bata deta hon, baaki sotory ke hisab se step by step aate rahenge.......



raja balbeer singh........ age 65
rani anaika singh.......... age 60


aur bhi kai raniyan aur rajkumar aur rajkumariyan han . daasiyon ki bhi line lagi hui han..........

agar baat ki jaaye to raja ki patniyon ki tadaad hi 22 thi, raniyon ki tadaad 9 thi.

pichhle saal raja ne ek aur shadi ki thi... us rani ka naam hai



anita singh: age 18


anita singh gareeb pariwar se hai, raja ne use dekha to saala mohit ho gaya, aur foran hi biyah kar le aaya.......... abhi raja iske sath zayada busy rehta hai, aur iski value bhi pehli rani ko chhod kar baaki sabse badh kar hai........

anita bhi husan me bemisal ladki hai, doodh sa gora rang, mast figure ki malik hai, iski bad kismati ye hui k anita kisi se sachha prem karti thi, par raja ki nazar padi to anita ko apni rani bana liya...... anita kuch nahi kar paayi, anita dukhi bhi hai aur adhuri bhi, is umar me raja ek jawan ladki ki aag kaise thandi kar sakta hai..


rajkumari indra: age 22

iski tareef to ki jaa chuki ha......... is mehal ka sabse badhiya nagina hai rajkumari indra......... rajkumari kanwal se kamm aur baaki sabse badhkar sundar aur shusheel

abhay singh:- age 35

ye raja ka pehla beta gai.......... chut ka shaukeen, shadi shuda hai, fir bhi khud se nagine talashta rehta hai.. apne baap par gaya hai, jo ladki pasand aaye uthwa li, ya shadi kar li........... isne bhi 4 shadiyan kar rakhi han... dasiyon ki bhi kami nahi hai................... ye apne baap ki patniyon ko bhi chod liya karta hai..... raja sabko to chod nahi sakta, to abhay singh behti ganga me hath dhota rehta hai............ abb ye anita ke peeche hai, parr anita ise koi bhav nahi deti.

mitali singh: age 33

abhay singh ki pehli patni, iski value sabse badhkar hai, door ke raaj ghirane se hai to value bhi bohut hai iski, ise abhay singh se koi pareshani nahi hai, 3 bachhe iske chhote chhote abhay singh se han.... abhay k baare me sab jaanti hai, vansh ko aage badhne k liye abhay ko mitali singh sahi lagi, to mitali ko abhay singh.. dono mehal me man pansad jindagi ji rahe han, abhay bhi samjhta hai k wo har time mitali ko nahi chod sakta to, mitali khud ki aag ko bujhane k liye mehal ke naukar ya guards se kaam chala leti hai.....


dilbar singh: age 33

ye bhi harami hai ek number ka....... abhi shadi nahi ki, chut jo aam han mehal me.. ye shadi k liye rajkumari kanwal ka dewana hai, par jaanta hai k uski wahan daal nahi galne wali to..... to kisi aur ki talash me hai shadi k liye


sanjay singh: age 27

ye kuch hat ke hai, dimag ka tez hai, ladaka hai, chut ka rasiya bhi hai, par maal dekh kar, har kisi par lattu nahi hota, apne baap ki 3 raniyon aur 2 dasiyon ka fan han, aksar unki hi chut me gum rehta hai...... apni sehat par bohut dhayan deta rehta hai....... aur aisa plan banane me laga hua hai k raja ke baad wo raja ban sake..

dimag ka tez ha to kuch kar bhi sakta hai........................ ye bhi rajkumari kanwal ki khawahish dil me rakhta hai..... par iski daal nahi gal rahi...


shakuntla singh: age 25

iska to special intro ho chuka hai.. arjun ne jaisa intro iska liya aur dia hai, wo bhi bohut special hai....... badi kameeni soch ki maalik hai..... mehal ki rajkumariyon aur raniyon me sabse badhkar sangdil shakuntla hi hai......


balbeer singh ke aur bhi kai bete han, dusri patniyon se, lekin pehli ki value badh kar hai, to usse se hone wale bachhe bhi sabse badh kar han..... balbeer singh ki pehli rani anaika singh raj ghirane se hai,uske baad ki koi bhi patni raj ghirane se nahi hai, sabki pehli shadi raj ghirane me hi hoti hai, bachhe bhi usi se jo janam lete han, asal value bhi unki hi count hoti thi.........



main mehal me pohncha to mere baare me gate par khade hue darban pehle se hi jaante the.. main george ke sath andar dakhil ho gaya..... mehal kya tha, andar se dekhne par pata chalta tha k andar bhi ek chhoti si riyasat bani hui thi......

kai acre par bana hua mehal andar se bohut hi khubsurat tha, deewar ke kuch faasla rakh kar bohut se chhote chhote ghar bane hue the, sabhi ghar door se dekhne par bhi sahi se dikh rahe the.. do kamron par mushtmil makan naukron aur pehredaron k liye the......... mere sath gate parse hi do darban andar chal pade the...

george:-maa kasam dil khush ho gaya arjun yaar, kabhi socha nahi tha apun ne k ek din mehal me bhi ghus paaonga

arjun:- saale abb khud ki aukat pehchan, youn saste logon ki tarha bartao mat karo. sab tujhe gareeb samjhne lagenge

gaeorge:- hehehehehe. wo to sab pehle se hi jaante han

manorma:- arjun iske dant nahi band honge aur na hi iski zuban, ye aise hi rahega.

arjun:- aur aise hi ye achha bhi lagta hai

kuch der me hum mehal ke asli hisse me ja pohnche.. wahan bhi ek gate tha... aur kai pehre dar khade hue the......

ek pehedar:- arjun ji, gustakhi maaf isse aage aapko akele hi jaana padega, aapke dost ki hum sabb achhe se seva karenge.... aap bhi to sab samjhte honge naa

manorma:- ye sahi keh raha hai arjun, george ko sath lejaane galat bhi nahi hai, abhi tum bhi pehli baar ja rahe ho to akele hi jaao, isse raja aur mehal walun ki shaan bhi badhegi, warna to tumhare sath koi bhi unhe koi aitraz nahi hoga, asuli taur par akele tumhe hi dawat di gai hai..

arjun;- theek keh rahi ho tum bhi manorma..........

george:- arjun apun bhi sab samjhta hai, tu akela hi andar jaa, main yahan is sabb ke sath maze karta hon........... george bhi samjhdar tha.. khud se hi bol pada

fir main george ko chhod kar manorma ko sath liye andar jaane laga...... andar jaane se pehle gate se kuch doori par ghodon ka ek astabal tha, dono ghode wahan baandh diye gaye....

ek bardan ke sath main andar jaane laga..

shaam hue 1 ghanta hone wala tha.. abhi khane ka time nahi tha..........



andar mehman khane me mujhe lejaaya gaya, main wahi baith gaya.. jiske sath main aaya tha wo andar itlaa dene chala gaya.. mehman khana bohut bada tha, bohut si nadir kisam ki cheezon se saja hua tha..

manorma:- dekha arjun is sajawat ko abhi to ye sirf mehman khana hai, abhi to andar ka dekhne wala hoga sab..... mujhe saaf suthra aur saja hua ghar ya mehal dekh kar bohut khushi milti hai arjun....

arjun;- tum khud bhi to khubsurat ho naa, to har khubsurat cheez tumhe attract karti hai.....

manorma;- haaye arjun main sach me hi sundar hon kya...?????

main jawab deta usse pehle hi pehredaar ke sath pehle din entry time me milne wala admi mila....... uski nature jaan mujhe us din bhi khushi hui thi, aaj bhi aate hi badi khush akhlaqi se mujhse baat karne laga


admi:- us din maine aapko apna naam nahi bataya tha arjun ji.... mujhe jeevan das kehte han

arjun;- badi hui khushi jeevan ji aapke se milke.. ........ main khada hokar usse mila

jeevan:- aaiye mere sath raja saab aap ne aapko bulaya hai

main uth khada hua aur jeevan ke sath chal pada

mehal andar se bhi bohut bada tha...... kai rahdariyan bani hui thi, kai kamre the, 3 rahdariyon se guzar kar jeecan mujhe leke ek bade kamre me ja ghusa

andar dekh kar to main heran hi reh gaya..... kamra nahi tha ek bohut bada haal numa karma tha........ usi haal numa kamre ki pichhli deewar se 8 feet aage raja ki kursi thi........ 4 feet chaudi to hogi hi uski kursi jispar wo baitha hua tha.. sath hi do chhti kuriyan aur bhi padi hui thee, right side me rani anaika singh baithi hui thi, to left side me anita singh raja ki akhri patni

bete side me bathe hue the.. usi kamre me rajkumaron aur rajkumariyon ka mela laga hua tha.. dasiyon ka bhi jhurmat tha, saala itna bada tharki tha........

najaane kitni patniyan aur dasiyan is samay haal numa kamre me maujud theeeeeee... ye sabb mujhe manorma sath sath bata rahi thi..

50+ the sab mila kar is bade kamre me............

main raja ke saamne ja pohnchaa.. budha raja mujhe dekh khush ho gaya.. utha nahi bass baithe baithe hi hath aage kar dia........ warna to shayad koi raja aisa bhi na kare..... main bhi aage badha aur raja se hath mila liya


raja:- arjun beta tum aaye mujhe khushi hui.......... fir ek naukar ko ishara kiya, raja ke paas hi ek khali jaga thi, naukar ne ek saaf suthri kursi wahi la kar rakh di, raja ne mujhe baithne ka ishara bhi kar dia.....

ek sath mujhse baat bhi ki, naukar ko aur mujhe ishara bhi kar dia...... sab quick service thi

arjun:- mujhe bhi yahan aa ke aur aap se milke khushi hui raja saab

sab rajkumariyan mujhe dekh rahi thee.. mere kapde rajkumaron se kamm bhi nahi the, shakal se bhi mai bohuto se badhkar tha

raja:- kuch apne baare me bataao arjun, tumhe dekh k to lagta hai k tum kisi bade aur oonche ghirane se ho..... warna ye andaz kisi aam se insan me nahi ho sakta..

arjun:- raja saab jhut bolna achhi baat nahi hai, aur mera sach bhi bohut ajeeb hai.. ek hadse me khud ko bhul chukaa hon, nahi jaanta main kaun hon, kahan se aaya hon, aur kahan jaana hai mujhe.. kaun kaun hai meri family me.. ek nadi me se kisi ne mujhe zakhmo se choor nikala tha.. to usi ne mujhe arjun naam dia, maine bhi khud ko arjun samjh liya..

sab meri bat sunkar heran reh gaye

raja:- baat to badi ajeeb hai arjun beta, parr tumne sab sach bata kar hamara dil jeet liya...... warna to izzat milne par koi bhi khud ko bohut ooncha dikhane lagta hai.

arjun:- raja saab aapne apni jawani me bohut se maarke sar anjam diye honge, bohuto se lade bhi honge, kaiyon ka khun bhi bahaya hoga.. to mere hisab se oonchaa wahi hota hai, jisme mardangi zayada ho....

raja:- waah waah kya baat kahi hai tumne arjun beta. hum aur bhi bohut khush hue han tumhari baat sunke.. main bhi jawani me aisa hi tha.. tumne sahi kaha baat mardani ki bhi hoti hai..... aur mardangi bhi har kisi ko nahi milti.... milti hai to khun se milti hai

anaika singh:- raja saab ladka me baat to hai, warna race k maidan me ek se badhkar ek soorma tha, parr koi bhi ise chit nahi kar paaya..

abhay singh jo meri tareef sunkar andar hi andar garam ho raha tha, baakiyon ka bhi kuch aisa hi haal tha, shayad raja ya rani ne kabhi aisi tareef apne beton ki bhi nahi ki thi......... kaise koi sehn kar paata

abhay sing:- race ki baat se mardangi ka sahi se pata nahi chalta pita ji.. arjun ne jo challenge rajkumar surinder ko diya hai, to kal arjun khud ko mard bhi sabat karke dikha de...

raja:--- aise baten mehlon me aksar hoti raha karti thi, raja bhi ghussa nahi kar sakte the apne bete ki baaton parr........ warna uske bete use hi raaste se hata dete

raja:-haan kal hi sab sahi se dekhne ko milega

main raja ke badle andaz ko dekh kar dil hi dil me hassne laga tha.. shayad use bhi andaza ho gaya tha k wo kuch zayada hi meri tareef kar gaya tha.. dilbar aur sanjay singh ki or dekha to wo bhi mujhe khaa jaane wali nazron se dekh rahe the..

arjun:- raja saab kal to main aap sabb ko dikha dunga k mard ki asli pehchan kya hoti hai....

anaika ne bhi mahol ko badalne k liye

anaina singh:- (ek daasi se) dekho khaane me kitni der hai................

fir raja saab se ifhar udhar ki baaten hoti raheee.. rajkumari koi bhi nahi boli thi, dibar aur sanjay bhi abhay ki tarha se badh chad kar bolne lage, jitna time tha khane se pehle wo khud ko baaton se mujhse bartar sabat karne ki koshish karne lage



manorma baar baar hass rahi thi........... fir khane ke tayyar hone ka bataya gaya to main raja ke family dining table ki aur badhne laga....... raja ne mera ek hath pakad liya tha beech raaste me ..... fir foran hi yaad aa gaya k apne beton ke saamne mujhe limited value deni hai to mera hath chhod dia

manorma;- dekha arjun budhe raja ka yahi haal hota hai, chod bhi sahi se nahi sakta aur beton se darta bhi ha

arjun:- darega nahi to aur kya karega, kisi ko ghussa aa gaya to sote hue hi tapka dega...........................



kuch der me main sabke sath dining table par baitha hua tha, dunya bhar ke khane table par saje hue the..... jitne sab the table bhi usi hisab se thaaaaaaaaaaaa..

manorma:- sab ek nahi khate, aaj tumhari waja se sab sath han..... warna to sabne apne apne hisse ka table alag se banwaya hua hai.... koi bahar se aaye to fir sab is table par ek sath khate han....... dekho to sahi shakuntla kaise tumhe mohabbat bhari nazron se dekh rahi hai.

maine shakuntla ko dekha to wo mujhe ankh se ishara karne lagi.

arjun;- shakuntla ke ishare ka matlab kya hai

manorma:- uski aag firse bhadak uthi hai, use chain nahi mil raha

saali peeche hi pad gai thi.......... raja ne sabse pehle khana shuru kiya to uske baad rani fir sab shuru ho gaye khaane me........ main bhi apne hisse ka khane laga.

khane par bhi wahi baaten, bekar kisam ki...... mere baare se sab jaan nahi paaye the
warna mere past aur meri family baare zayada baaten hoti.. apne beton ke hote hue meri zayada tareef nahi kar sakta tha.


shuru ke kuch minton ke baad raja se baat karne me maza khatam ho gaya tha... khana khaa kar kuch der ki baaton ke baad main wahan se nikal liya

george ko sath lekar main apne ghar ja pohnchaaaaaaaaa.......


rajkumari indra se kai baar nazren mili theee, lekin sab normal hi raha tha.. shakuntla se maine nain matakka nahi kiya tha.. aur bhi kai ankhen mujhe taad rahi thi, bohut si jawaniyan andar se adhuri thi, bohut si piyasi thi, mujhe apne matlab k liye ghoor rahi theee..

manorma;- arjun aise mehal me entry nahi ho paayegi hamari

arjun;- entry karni koi zaruri bhi to nahi

manomra:- entry karni hai mehal me arjun, rajkumari indra ko tum bhul jaaoge kya

arjun;- nahi manorma main rajkumari indra ko mela karne ki soch bhi nahi sakta

main palang par peeth ke bal leta hua tha aur manorma mere seene par khadi hui meri ankhon me dekh kar baat kar rahi thi..

manorma:- maine kab kaha k tum shakuntla ke jaise rajkumari indra ko mela kardo.. are wo to ek phool hai, uske badan ki khushbu se man mehak uthta hai.. usse prem karo arjun........

arjun:- meir mano billi prem aise hi ho jaata hai kya.?

manorma:- to kaise hota hai arjun, zara mujhe bhi to bataao

arjun:- main kaise bataaon, maine kaunsa kabhi kisi se prem kiya hai...... manorma ki ankhon me dekhte hue main bola

manorma:- kya matlab tum mujhse prem nahi karte kyaa.?

arjun:- jo main tumse karta hon use prem bolte han

manorma:- aur nahi to kyaaa

arjun:- to kaunsi aisi premika hogi jo apne premi ko dusri ladkiyon ke sath aisa karne ko bolti hai, kabhi tum mujhe kisi ko chodne k liye bolti ho to kabhi prem karne k liye

manorma:- wo sab chhodo main aisa kyun karti hon, bas mera dil karta hai tabhi to tumse kehti hon, aur fir hum dono to hamesha sath rahenge, ye sab to hamara sath hamesha nahi de sakenge naa

arjun:- kya matlab hai tumhara hamesha sath rahne se.... aur fir kisi ke sath kuch pal k liye pyar karke main kisi ke dil ko nahi dukha sakta

manomra:- tum samjhe nahi arjun.... baat kuch hatt k hai, jaise mai amar hon, tum bhi ho jaaoge, aur rajukumari indra ho ya rajkumari kanwal, wo to apni zindagi ki saanse puri karke guzar jaayengi, parr hum to hamesha hi sath rahenge naa.. to isi liye main tumhe ye sabb karne ko keh rahi hon, aur jis se prem kiya jata hai, uski khushi ki liye to kuch bhi kiya ja sakta ha naa

manorma ki baaten badi herankun thee, par wo jo bol rahi the, wo galat bhi nahi tha.

arjun:- matlab agar main rajkumari indra se, ya rajkumari kanwal se jud jata hon to fir wo bhi hamare sath hamesha rahengi

manorma;- haan arjun, main unhe dhoka dene k liye ya chhod dene k liye to nahi bol rahi hon naa.. jab tab unki saanse han wo rahengi hamare sath.. agar to kismat me unka aur hamara sath likha hua hai to

arjun:- main nahi janta manorma tum ye sab mujhe karne ko kyu bol rahi hai, par ab mujhe bhi ye sab galat nahi lag raha, shakuntla jaisiyon ke kuch bhi kar lun, koi harj nahi, parr indra aur kanwal k jaisiyon ke sath main kuch bhi galat karne ki soch bhi nahi sakta.. dekhte han aage kya hota hai

manorma;- to main keh rahi thi arjun k mehal me rukne k liye humen bhi kuch jugad karna padega... aise to hum mehal me azadi se ghoom fir nahi sakte

arjun:- to uske liye humen kya karna hoga

manorma:- karna kya hai, kisi ek ko sath mila lete han. raja ki gaddi k liye mehalon me sazishen to aam baat hua karti hai...... aise hi kisi ek ko takpa kar unka aitmad hasil karenge fir hamari hogi balle balle mehal me. azadi se ghoom kar mehal me kuch samay bitayenge.... maze hi maze honge arjun mehal me.. pura mehal hi aag barsati hui jawaniyon se bhara pada hai......... waise to main sab ek hi chutki me kar sakti hon, aise na to tumhe maza aayega aur na mujhe...

manorma mere seene par let kar dono hath fold karke uspar chin rakhte hue mujhse baat kar rahi thi........... manorma ki ankhon me chamak thi, wo bohut khush thi, khush to wo har dumm hi rehti thi, khili khili bhi wo har dumm rehti thi.. uske jaisi koi kaise fresh reh sakti thi...... uske jaise haseen aur taro taza bhi to koi nahi tha, uske jaise mahekte badan ki malik bhi to koi nahi thi is bhari dunya me


arjun:- manorma mai tumhe chhuu sakta hon kyaaaaaaaa..

hahahahahaha.............. dil machal raha hai kyaa mujhe chhuuu k liyeeeeeee

manorma hassne lagi thi.. anachak se hi uske chola bhi badal gaya tha, mehal ki baton ko bhul kar wo bhi mujhpar dhayan dene lagi

arjun;- wo to kabse machal raha hai

manorma firse khadi ho gai, hawa me udti hui aayi aur mere honto ke paas aa kar mere honto par hath rakh dia...... uffffffffffffffffffffffff kitni garmi ki softness thi uske hath me........ surur ki tarangen si mere jism me daudne lagi thi.... meri ankhen si band hone lageeeeeee..

band ankhon se hi maine mehsus kiya k mere honto par kisi ne jalta hua koyla rakh dia tha.......... maine jhat se ankhen kholeen to normal kad kaath ke barabar ho kar mere honto par apne hont rakhe kiss kar rahi thi.......

jitni jalti usne kiss kiya tha, utni hi jaldi fir usne mere honto se apne hont bhi alag kar liye the....... firse mini size ki ho gai wo........ is baar mere seene par aalti paalti maar kar peeth karke sarr jhuka ke wo baith gayi........

manorma sharma rahi thi..... aur main hairat me gum manorma ki peeth ko takne laga thha, fir mera mere honto par pohnchaa aur manorma k honto ke ehsas ko mehsus karne laga........... itna nasha mujhe pehle kabhi nahi hua tha.. itna surur me main pehle kabhi nahi dooba tha... aisi madhoshi bhi mujhpar pehle kabhi taari nahi hui thi..
dil ki dhadkano me ajeeb sa shor hone laga tha.. lekin andar se sab bohut, behad achha bhi lagne laga tha.........

aisi hi feelings me main bohut der tak raha, meri ek ungli mere hi honto par chalne lagi thi.. meri ungli bhi manorma ke honto ke lams ko mere honto parse mehsus kar paa rahi thi..... kitna garam aur mann ko bhaaane wala ehsas tha..

manorma ne meri aur nahi dekha..... kabhi wo kisi ko leke chodne ki baat bhi kar jaati thi, aur kabhi beinteha sharma bhi jaati thi.. bohut se rang the manorma me

na wo kuch boli aur na hi main kuch....... jo ho chuka tha, use pure mannn se dono hi mehsus karne me lag gaye the..............

aise hi bohut der tak ye sab chalta raha, fir mujhe neend aa gayi



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main george ke sath ek baar firse mehal me tha...... din ke 3 baje ka time tha, aur suridner se shamsherzani ka mubalka 4 baje hona tay hua tha

aaj sab dekhne wale the k kisme kista hai dum........... mehal ki back side me hi talvar bazi ki practice ke liye ek jaga seleted thi.. jahan mehal ke raja aur rajkumar shamsherzani kiya karte the.................

mehal ki backside me hi ke 2nd floor par bohut se logon k baithne k liye jaga bhi bani thi........

50x15x20 size me 2nd floor par stage jaisa bana hua tha....... neeche charon aur bhi mehal ke dusre aur bahar se riyasat ke bade bade logon k ke liye baithne k intezam tha.......

mehal se abhi koi nahi maujud tha 2nd floor par

main george ke sath wahan pohnchaa to surinder........ khud ko rajkumar surinder sabar karne me laga hua tha...... uska jism paseene me bahaya hua tha........... wo 4 pehlwano se zor azmaai me laga hua tha..... mujhe aate dekha to pehlwano ko side hone ka bol dia.................... chhota langot surinder ne bandha hua tha... jism ke maamle me surinder kamm bhi nahi tha...... mazbut aur khubsurat jism ka wo malik tha.


parr andar se badsurat bhi tha wo, manfi soch ka malik, ghamandi kisi ko khud se badhkar nahi jaanta tha...


mujhe aate dekha to ruk kar pelwano ko khud se door kar dia......... ek tauliye se khud ko saf kiya aur fir jahan talvaren padi hui thee, wahan jaa pohnchaa, aur talvaron ko utha utha kar check karne laga, fir ek talvar ko lekar akhaade wale hisse me ja pohnchaa..


akhaade wala hi hisaab tha.. jahan hamari fight honi thi, wo area 40 feet ke circle me tha........ mazbut raasson ki madad se wo circle banaya gaya tha...


surinder darmiyan me pohncha aur pehlwano se bhi talvar utha laane ko bolne laga, kuch der me surinder charon pehlwano se akela mashq krne laga, lekin mashq nahi rahi thi wo......... surinder mujhe dikhane k liye charon pehlwano par toot pada tha.. charon pehlwan pehle to normal andaz me surinder se talvar bazi ki mashq karte rahe. parr fir achanak se hi surinder ke hamlon me tezi aane lagi, aur pehlwan khud ko surinder ki talvar ki kaat se bacha na paaye. aur zakhmi hone lage


surinder bila shuba ek bhetreen shamsheerzan tha.... par ghamandi bhi bohut tha.. aur jo ghamandi ho, uska to fir main khana kharab karta hi tha

manorma:- hahahaha.. ullu ka pattha .. arjun tumhe apne tevar dikhane k liye apne hi sathiyo ko kaat raha ha...............

arjun:- bas kuch der ki baat hai, fir uska bhi aise hi ghaao se bhara hoga.....

main apni pakar par bandhi hui niyaam se talvar nikal kar uski dhaar par ungli chalate hue bola.......... mehal me aane se pehle mujhe manorma ne ye talvar di thi.
saali jaane mere baare me kya kuch jaanti thi.. talvar bhi manorma ne mujhe wo laa kar di thi.. jo mujhe jani pehchaani lagi thi....... bahadur ke baad talvar bhi jab mere hath me aayi thi, to mujhe aisa laga tha k main is talvar se kaiyon ka khun baha chuka tha. bahadur ki tarha se ye talvar bhi meri purani sathi hai..

manorma se poochhne par bhi usne mujhe kuch nahi bataya tha... baat ko wo taal jaati thi, bass samay aane par sab saamne aa jaayega... aisa bolti thi

jab talvar utha kar maine hawa me hi use chalaya tha to ek scene meri ankhon me lehra gaya tha......... jis andaz se maine talvar ghumaayi thi, usi andaz me hi wo scene tha, aur main kisi ki gardan ek hi jhatke me alag kar raha tha.....

bas 2 second hi wo scene meri ankhon ke saaamne lehraya tha.. talvar chhod kar main baith gaya tha.. mere sarr me dard hone laga tha, parr mujhe dard ki utni parwa nahi hui, jitni main ye sochne laga k main kaun hon

manorma bhi mujhe dekh kuch ghabra si gayi thi... jaise mujhe sab yaad aa gaya ho..

lekin aisa nahi tha.. manorma ne jaise hi mehsus kiya k main abhi bhi khud ko bhula hua hon to tab ja ke usne chain ki saans li thi..



mere hath me talvar dekh kar surinder ruk gaya... pehlwan khud se hi peeche ho gaye the, wo surinder ka mukabla nahi kar sakte the.......... surinder mere hathon me maujud talvar ko hairat se dekhne laga tha...... talvar thi to ek aam si, parr uski chamak aur dhaar door se hi dekhi jaa sakti thi.......

surinder meri talvar ko dekh kar kuch nervous sa hua tha, par fir wo khud par kabu paa kar apni practice me masruf ho gaya tha.......



manorma:- arjun tum bhi practice kar lo

arjun:- karke to aaya hon ghar se...... aur mujhe nahi lagta k mujhe practice ki zarurat nahi..........

manorma:- wo to main bhi janti hon...... tum jaisi chusti furti aur maharat to surinder kya kisi me bhi nahi ho sakti...


george se bhi baaten hoti rahi...... wahi khade khade hi main surinder ko aas paas maujud logon ko dekhne laga..... abb thoda sa hi time bacha tha mukable me

maine 2nd floor par dekha to wahan bhi mehal se sabb ka aana shuru ho chuka tha...
raja, raniyan, uske bete, betiyan aur angrej sarkar ke bade abhi nahi aaye the....

kuch naukar aur dasiyan side khade dikh rahe the.. hath bandhe hue wo hukam ke ghulam the......... sab neeche surinder ko mujhe aur hamare aas paas baithe hue logon ko dekh rahe the..........



zayada kisi ko nahi bulaya gaya tha... badi badi hastiyan hi maujud theeeeeeeeeee..
agar rajkumar surinder haarta hai to aam logon ke saamne ke saamne uski kamm beizzati ho, is liye mehal k aam log to maujud the, parr riyasat ke aam log nahi the.. sab mehal me ghus bhi to nahi sakte the..


surinder jo pehle langot me tha.. practice chhod kar khud ko saaf karta hua kapde pehn chuka tha...


george:- chal mere yaar aaj firse dikha de tujhse badh kar koi nahi is dunya me

arjun:- bas bas zayada baans par matt chadhaa mujhe saale ye talvar bazi ka mukabla hai, ghod sawari ka nahi.. tune mujhe kabhi dekha bhi nahi, aur aise udne laga hai, jaise mujhe saalon se jaanta ho.. dheeraj rakh aur zara surinder ke chachere bhai par dhayan laga, dekh kaise to wo tujhe aur mujhe ghoor raha hai..

kuch faasle par final race me 3rd aane wala surinder ka chachera bhai humen ghoor raha tha..... use aaye bhi thodi der ho gai thi........

fir wo apni jaga par jaa kar baith gaya........ uske sath ek ladki bhi baithi hui thi

arjun:- wo ladki kaun hai.. pehle nahi dikhi mujhe

manorma:- abhi tune dekha hi kya hai mere raja.. abhi to bohut kuch dekhne layak hai aas paas

arjun;- tu seedhe seedhe baat nahi kar sakti kyaaaaaa..

manorma:- seedhi baat hi to kar rahi hon, samjh lo ye dusri shakuntla hai, surinder ki behen hai...

arjun;- to pehle kahan thi ye.. dikhi nahi pehle mujhe

manorma;- pehle ye mehal me thi.. race me bhi thi, tune kaunsa sab par dhayan dia tha..... ye peeche baithi hui.... ye sanjay k liye yahan aayi hai.. lekin sanjay ise koi bhav nahi de raha......

sab aa chuke the stage par.... kuch hi der me mukabla shuru hone wala tha.. main bhi kurta utaar dia...neeche fitting wali buniyan thi........ mere muscles dikhaai dene lage..........

manorma:- chhupa lo arjun apne muscles ko chhupa lo..... kahi shakuntla bhaagi bhaagi aa kar tujhse lipat na jaaye......... hehehehe


manorma maskhari karte hue hasste lagi......... bina kurta utare bhi lada ja sakta tha, par surinder koi aam talvar baaz nahi tha, mujhe bhi apni puri efforts dikhani thee, tabhi to surinder se main jeet sakta tha.. mukabla bohut hi tough hone wala tha........


rajkumar kanwal aur raja fir aa chuke the, kal wo chale gaye the, mera aur surinder ka mukabla dekhne k liye dono firse mehal me maujud the... nelson aur jenny bhi maujud the.......

aaj ka rang kuch aur tha, aaj sab pehle se bhi zayada excited the.. pehle race ka maidan tha to aaj talvar se saja maidan.......... khun behne wala tha aaj.. jab tak koi haar naa maanta, mukabla khatam hone wala nahi tha,, chahe koi marr bhi jaaye.
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manorma ke banaye hue ghar me hum maujud the....... kheme rehne ki ab zarurat nahi rahi thi......... wahan reh kar karte bhi kya

kuch der wahan bita kar hum nikal liye the

ye ghar jungle wali side me tha, is side me koi nahi aata tha. manorma ne bohut sahi jaga dekh kar ghar banaya tha.. uske liye to ye chutkiyon ka kaam tha.. chutki bajayi aur ho gaya

george to ankhen phade hue bohut der se ghar ko hi dekh raha tha, wo kuch bola

"ye kiska ghar hai"

main kaha k "hamara"

bass fir wo pagal sa hokar pure ghar ko dekhne lag gaya.. single story house tha, 6 kamre the, aur dunya bhar ka saman usme maujud tha.. manorma ne bataya tha k koi is taraf kabhi nahi aayega, agar aaya bhi to makan ko dekh nahi paayega, wo side se hi nikal jaayega


main bhi ghar dekh kar mohit ho gaya tha, manorma ne jaane kya kya laa kar ghar ko saja diya tha........ dekh kar tabeeat khush ho gai thi


shaam ke samay main george ko lekar main mehal ki or jaane laga...... ek ghoda aur bhi manorma ne arrange kar dia tha, george uspar tha, wo khud ko raja samjhta hua mere sath ghode ko dauda raha tha.. ghod sawar wo bhi achha tha... lekin alag type ka insan tha, use dekh kar hi hasni nikal jaya karti thi, uska andaz hi aisa tha

mehal me pohnche to darbaan jo pehle se hi sab jaante the k main aane wala hon, sab mere surat aashna ho chuke the, main famous jo ho gaya tha sureshgadh me




yahan main raja ke baare me bata dun abb uski zarurat padne wali hai.... vaise to mehal me itne characters han k list khatam hone me hi naa aaye.. fir bhi 2-4 bata deta hon, baaki sotory ke hisab se step by step aate rahenge.......



raja balbeer singh........ age 65
rani anaika singh.......... age 60


aur bhi kai raniyan aur rajkumar aur rajkumariyan han . daasiyon ki bhi line lagi hui han..........

agar baat ki jaaye to raja ki patniyon ki tadaad hi 22 thi, raniyon ki tadaad 9 thi.

pichhle saal raja ne ek aur shadi ki thi... us rani ka naam hai



anita singh: age 18


anita singh gareeb pariwar se hai, raja ne use dekha to saala mohit ho gaya, aur foran hi biyah kar le aaya.......... abhi raja iske sath zayada busy rehta hai, aur iski value bhi pehli rani ko chhod kar baaki sabse badh kar hai........

anita bhi husan me bemisal ladki hai, doodh sa gora rang, mast figure ki malik hai, iski bad kismati ye hui k anita kisi se sachha prem karti thi, par raja ki nazar padi to anita ko apni rani bana liya...... anita kuch nahi kar paayi, anita dukhi bhi hai aur adhuri bhi, is umar me raja ek jawan ladki ki aag kaise thandi kar sakta hai..


rajkumari indra: age 22

iski tareef to ki jaa chuki ha......... is mehal ka sabse badhiya nagina hai rajkumari indra......... rajkumari kanwal se kamm aur baaki sabse badhkar sundar aur shusheel

abhay singh:- age 35

ye raja ka pehla beta gai.......... chut ka shaukeen, shadi shuda hai, fir bhi khud se nagine talashta rehta hai.. apne baap par gaya hai, jo ladki pasand aaye uthwa li, ya shadi kar li........... isne bhi 4 shadiyan kar rakhi han... dasiyon ki bhi kami nahi hai................... ye apne baap ki patniyon ko bhi chod liya karta hai..... raja sabko to chod nahi sakta, to abhay singh behti ganga me hath dhota rehta hai............ abb ye anita ke peeche hai, parr anita ise koi bhav nahi deti.

mitali singh: age 33

abhay singh ki pehli patni, iski value sabse badhkar hai, door ke raaj ghirane se hai to value bhi bohut hai iski, ise abhay singh se koi pareshani nahi hai, 3 bachhe iske chhote chhote abhay singh se han.... abhay k baare me sab jaanti hai, vansh ko aage badhne k liye abhay ko mitali singh sahi lagi, to mitali ko abhay singh.. dono mehal me man pansad jindagi ji rahe han, abhay bhi samjhta hai k wo har time mitali ko nahi chod sakta to, mitali khud ki aag ko bujhane k liye mehal ke naukar ya guards se kaam chala leti hai.....


dilbar singh: age 33

ye bhi harami hai ek number ka....... abhi shadi nahi ki, chut jo aam han mehal me.. ye shadi k liye rajkumari kanwal ka dewana hai, par jaanta hai k uski wahan daal nahi galne wali to..... to kisi aur ki talash me hai shadi k liye


sanjay singh: age 27

ye kuch hat ke hai, dimag ka tez hai, ladaka hai, chut ka rasiya bhi hai, par maal dekh kar, har kisi par lattu nahi hota, apne baap ki 3 raniyon aur 2 dasiyon ka fan han, aksar unki hi chut me gum rehta hai...... apni sehat par bohut dhayan deta rehta hai....... aur aisa plan banane me laga hua hai k raja ke baad wo raja ban sake..

dimag ka tez ha to kuch kar bhi sakta hai........................ ye bhi rajkumari kanwal ki khawahish dil me rakhta hai..... par iski daal nahi gal rahi...


shakuntla singh: age 25

iska to special intro ho chuka hai.. arjun ne jaisa intro iska liya aur dia hai, wo bhi bohut special hai....... badi kameeni soch ki maalik hai..... mehal ki rajkumariyon aur raniyon me sabse badhkar sangdil shakuntla hi hai......


balbeer singh ke aur bhi kai bete han, dusri patniyon se, lekin pehli ki value badh kar hai, to usse se hone wale bachhe bhi sabse badh kar han..... balbeer singh ki pehli rani anaika singh raj ghirane se hai,uske baad ki koi bhi patni raj ghirane se nahi hai, sabki pehli shadi raj ghirane me hi hoti hai, bachhe bhi usi se jo janam lete han, asal value bhi unki hi count hoti thi.........



main mehal me pohncha to mere baare me gate par khade hue darban pehle se hi jaante the.. main george ke sath andar dakhil ho gaya..... mehal kya tha, andar se dekhne par pata chalta tha k andar bhi ek chhoti si riyasat bani hui thi......

kai acre par bana hua mehal andar se bohut hi khubsurat tha, deewar ke kuch faasla rakh kar bohut se chhote chhote ghar bane hue the, sabhi ghar door se dekhne par bhi sahi se dikh rahe the.. do kamron par mushtmil makan naukron aur pehredaron k liye the......... mere sath gate parse hi do darban andar chal pade the...

george:-maa kasam dil khush ho gaya arjun yaar, kabhi socha nahi tha apun ne k ek din mehal me bhi ghus paaonga

arjun:- saale abb khud ki aukat pehchan, youn saste logon ki tarha bartao mat karo. sab tujhe gareeb samjhne lagenge

gaeorge:- hehehehehe. wo to sab pehle se hi jaante han

manorma:- arjun iske dant nahi band honge aur na hi iski zuban, ye aise hi rahega.

arjun:- aur aise hi ye achha bhi lagta hai

kuch der me hum mehal ke asli hisse me ja pohnche.. wahan bhi ek gate tha... aur kai pehre dar khade hue the......

ek pehedar:- arjun ji, gustakhi maaf isse aage aapko akele hi jaana padega, aapke dost ki hum sabb achhe se seva karenge.... aap bhi to sab samjhte honge naa

manorma:- ye sahi keh raha hai arjun, george ko sath lejaane galat bhi nahi hai, abhi tum bhi pehli baar ja rahe ho to akele hi jaao, isse raja aur mehal walun ki shaan bhi badhegi, warna to tumhare sath koi bhi unhe koi aitraz nahi hoga, asuli taur par akele tumhe hi dawat di gai hai..

arjun;- theek keh rahi ho tum bhi manorma..........

george:- arjun apun bhi sab samjhta hai, tu akela hi andar jaa, main yahan is sabb ke sath maze karta hon........... george bhi samjhdar tha.. khud se hi bol pada

fir main george ko chhod kar manorma ko sath liye andar jaane laga...... andar jaane se pehle gate se kuch doori par ghodon ka ek astabal tha, dono ghode wahan baandh diye gaye....

ek bardan ke sath main andar jaane laga..

shaam hue 1 ghanta hone wala tha.. abhi khane ka time nahi tha..........



andar mehman khane me mujhe lejaaya gaya, main wahi baith gaya.. jiske sath main aaya tha wo andar itlaa dene chala gaya.. mehman khana bohut bada tha, bohut si nadir kisam ki cheezon se saja hua tha..

manorma:- dekha arjun is sajawat ko abhi to ye sirf mehman khana hai, abhi to andar ka dekhne wala hoga sab..... mujhe saaf suthra aur saja hua ghar ya mehal dekh kar bohut khushi milti hai arjun....

arjun;- tum khud bhi to khubsurat ho naa, to har khubsurat cheez tumhe attract karti hai.....

manorma;- haaye arjun main sach me hi sundar hon kya...?????

main jawab deta usse pehle hi pehredaar ke sath pehle din entry time me milne wala admi mila....... uski nature jaan mujhe us din bhi khushi hui thi, aaj bhi aate hi badi khush akhlaqi se mujhse baat karne laga


admi:- us din maine aapko apna naam nahi bataya tha arjun ji.... mujhe jeevan das kehte han

arjun;- badi hui khushi jeevan ji aapke se milke.. ........ main khada hokar usse mila

jeevan:- aaiye mere sath raja saab aap ne aapko bulaya hai

main uth khada hua aur jeevan ke sath chal pada

mehal andar se bhi bohut bada tha...... kai rahdariyan bani hui thi, kai kamre the, 3 rahdariyon se guzar kar jeecan mujhe leke ek bade kamre me ja ghusa

andar dekh kar to main heran hi reh gaya..... kamra nahi tha ek bohut bada haal numa karma tha........ usi haal numa kamre ki pichhli deewar se 8 feet aage raja ki kursi thi........ 4 feet chaudi to hogi hi uski kursi jispar wo baitha hua tha.. sath hi do chhti kuriyan aur bhi padi hui thee, right side me rani anaika singh baithi hui thi, to left side me anita singh raja ki akhri patni

bete side me bathe hue the.. usi kamre me rajkumaron aur rajkumariyon ka mela laga hua tha.. dasiyon ka bhi jhurmat tha, saala itna bada tharki tha........

najaane kitni patniyan aur dasiyan is samay haal numa kamre me maujud theeeeeee... ye sabb mujhe manorma sath sath bata rahi thi..

50+ the sab mila kar is bade kamre me............

main raja ke saamne ja pohnchaa.. budha raja mujhe dekh khush ho gaya.. utha nahi bass baithe baithe hi hath aage kar dia........ warna to shayad koi raja aisa bhi na kare..... main bhi aage badha aur raja se hath mila liya


raja:- arjun beta tum aaye mujhe khushi hui.......... fir ek naukar ko ishara kiya, raja ke paas hi ek khali jaga thi, naukar ne ek saaf suthri kursi wahi la kar rakh di, raja ne mujhe baithne ka ishara bhi kar dia.....

ek sath mujhse baat bhi ki, naukar ko aur mujhe ishara bhi kar dia...... sab quick service thi

arjun:- mujhe bhi yahan aa ke aur aap se milke khushi hui raja saab

sab rajkumariyan mujhe dekh rahi thee.. mere kapde rajkumaron se kamm bhi nahi the, shakal se bhi mai bohuto se badhkar tha

raja:- kuch apne baare me bataao arjun, tumhe dekh k to lagta hai k tum kisi bade aur oonche ghirane se ho..... warna ye andaz kisi aam se insan me nahi ho sakta..

arjun:- raja saab jhut bolna achhi baat nahi hai, aur mera sach bhi bohut ajeeb hai.. ek hadse me khud ko bhul chukaa hon, nahi jaanta main kaun hon, kahan se aaya hon, aur kahan jaana hai mujhe.. kaun kaun hai meri family me.. ek nadi me se kisi ne mujhe zakhmo se choor nikala tha.. to usi ne mujhe arjun naam dia, maine bhi khud ko arjun samjh liya..

sab meri bat sunkar heran reh gaye

raja:- baat to badi ajeeb hai arjun beta, parr tumne sab sach bata kar hamara dil jeet liya...... warna to izzat milne par koi bhi khud ko bohut ooncha dikhane lagta hai.

arjun:- raja saab aapne apni jawani me bohut se maarke sar anjam diye honge, bohuto se lade bhi honge, kaiyon ka khun bhi bahaya hoga.. to mere hisab se oonchaa wahi hota hai, jisme mardangi zayada ho....

raja:- waah waah kya baat kahi hai tumne arjun beta. hum aur bhi bohut khush hue han tumhari baat sunke.. main bhi jawani me aisa hi tha.. tumne sahi kaha baat mardani ki bhi hoti hai..... aur mardangi bhi har kisi ko nahi milti.... milti hai to khun se milti hai

anaika singh:- raja saab ladka me baat to hai, warna race k maidan me ek se badhkar ek soorma tha, parr koi bhi ise chit nahi kar paaya..

abhay singh jo meri tareef sunkar andar hi andar garam ho raha tha, baakiyon ka bhi kuch aisa hi haal tha, shayad raja ya rani ne kabhi aisi tareef apne beton ki bhi nahi ki thi......... kaise koi sehn kar paata

abhay sing:- race ki baat se mardangi ka sahi se pata nahi chalta pita ji.. arjun ne jo challenge rajkumar surinder ko diya hai, to kal arjun khud ko mard bhi sabat karke dikha de...

raja:--- aise baten mehlon me aksar hoti raha karti thi, raja bhi ghussa nahi kar sakte the apne bete ki baaton parr........ warna uske bete use hi raaste se hata dete

raja:-haan kal hi sab sahi se dekhne ko milega

main raja ke badle andaz ko dekh kar dil hi dil me hassne laga tha.. shayad use bhi andaza ho gaya tha k wo kuch zayada hi meri tareef kar gaya tha.. dilbar aur sanjay singh ki or dekha to wo bhi mujhe khaa jaane wali nazron se dekh rahe the..

arjun:- raja saab kal to main aap sabb ko dikha dunga k mard ki asli pehchan kya hoti hai....

anaika ne bhi mahol ko badalne k liye

anaina singh:- (ek daasi se) dekho khaane me kitni der hai................

fir raja saab se ifhar udhar ki baaten hoti raheee.. rajkumari koi bhi nahi boli thi, dibar aur sanjay bhi abhay ki tarha se badh chad kar bolne lage, jitna time tha khane se pehle wo khud ko baaton se mujhse bartar sabat karne ki koshish karne lage



manorma baar baar hass rahi thi........... fir khane ke tayyar hone ka bataya gaya to main raja ke family dining table ki aur badhne laga....... raja ne mera ek hath pakad liya tha beech raaste me ..... fir foran hi yaad aa gaya k apne beton ke saamne mujhe limited value deni hai to mera hath chhod dia

manorma;- dekha arjun budhe raja ka yahi haal hota hai, chod bhi sahi se nahi sakta aur beton se darta bhi ha

arjun:- darega nahi to aur kya karega, kisi ko ghussa aa gaya to sote hue hi tapka dega...........................



kuch der me main sabke sath dining table par baitha hua tha, dunya bhar ke khane table par saje hue the..... jitne sab the table bhi usi hisab se thaaaaaaaaaaaa..

manorma:- sab ek nahi khate, aaj tumhari waja se sab sath han..... warna to sabne apne apne hisse ka table alag se banwaya hua hai.... koi bahar se aaye to fir sab is table par ek sath khate han....... dekho to sahi shakuntla kaise tumhe mohabbat bhari nazron se dekh rahi hai.

maine shakuntla ko dekha to wo mujhe ankh se ishara karne lagi.

arjun;- shakuntla ke ishare ka matlab kya hai

manorma:- uski aag firse bhadak uthi hai, use chain nahi mil raha

saali peeche hi pad gai thi.......... raja ne sabse pehle khana shuru kiya to uske baad rani fir sab shuru ho gaye khaane me........ main bhi apne hisse ka khane laga.

khane par bhi wahi baaten, bekar kisam ki...... mere baare se sab jaan nahi paaye the
warna mere past aur meri family baare zayada baaten hoti.. apne beton ke hote hue meri zayada tareef nahi kar sakta tha.


shuru ke kuch minton ke baad raja se baat karne me maza khatam ho gaya tha... khana khaa kar kuch der ki baaton ke baad main wahan se nikal liya

george ko sath lekar main apne ghar ja pohnchaaaaaaaaa.......


rajkumari indra se kai baar nazren mili theee, lekin sab normal hi raha tha.. shakuntla se maine nain matakka nahi kiya tha.. aur bhi kai ankhen mujhe taad rahi thi, bohut si jawaniyan andar se adhuri thi, bohut si piyasi thi, mujhe apne matlab k liye ghoor rahi theee..

manorma;- arjun aise mehal me entry nahi ho paayegi hamari

arjun;- entry karni koi zaruri bhi to nahi

manomra:- entry karni hai mehal me arjun, rajkumari indra ko tum bhul jaaoge kya

arjun;- nahi manorma main rajkumari indra ko mela karne ki soch bhi nahi sakta

main palang par peeth ke bal leta hua tha aur manorma mere seene par khadi hui meri ankhon me dekh kar baat kar rahi thi..

manorma:- maine kab kaha k tum shakuntla ke jaise rajkumari indra ko mela kardo.. are wo to ek phool hai, uske badan ki khushbu se man mehak uthta hai.. usse prem karo arjun........

arjun:- meir mano billi prem aise hi ho jaata hai kya.?

manorma:- to kaise hota hai arjun, zara mujhe bhi to bataao

arjun:- main kaise bataaon, maine kaunsa kabhi kisi se prem kiya hai...... manorma ki ankhon me dekhte hue main bola

manorma:- kya matlab tum mujhse prem nahi karte kyaa.?

arjun:- jo main tumse karta hon use prem bolte han

manorma:- aur nahi to kyaaa

arjun:- to kaunsi aisi premika hogi jo apne premi ko dusri ladkiyon ke sath aisa karne ko bolti hai, kabhi tum mujhe kisi ko chodne k liye bolti ho to kabhi prem karne k liye

manorma:- wo sab chhodo main aisa kyun karti hon, bas mera dil karta hai tabhi to tumse kehti hon, aur fir hum dono to hamesha sath rahenge, ye sab to hamara sath hamesha nahi de sakenge naa

arjun:- kya matlab hai tumhara hamesha sath rahne se.... aur fir kisi ke sath kuch pal k liye pyar karke main kisi ke dil ko nahi dukha sakta

manomra:- tum samjhe nahi arjun.... baat kuch hatt k hai, jaise mai amar hon, tum bhi ho jaaoge, aur rajukumari indra ho ya rajkumari kanwal, wo to apni zindagi ki saanse puri karke guzar jaayengi, parr hum to hamesha hi sath rahenge naa.. to isi liye main tumhe ye sabb karne ko keh rahi hon, aur jis se prem kiya jata hai, uski khushi ki liye to kuch bhi kiya ja sakta ha naa

manorma ki baaten badi herankun thee, par wo jo bol rahi the, wo galat bhi nahi tha.

arjun:- matlab agar main rajkumari indra se, ya rajkumari kanwal se jud jata hon to fir wo bhi hamare sath hamesha rahengi

manorma;- haan arjun, main unhe dhoka dene k liye ya chhod dene k liye to nahi bol rahi hon naa.. jab tab unki saanse han wo rahengi hamare sath.. agar to kismat me unka aur hamara sath likha hua hai to

arjun:- main nahi janta manorma tum ye sab mujhe karne ko kyu bol rahi hai, par ab mujhe bhi ye sab galat nahi lag raha, shakuntla jaisiyon ke kuch bhi kar lun, koi harj nahi, parr indra aur kanwal k jaisiyon ke sath main kuch bhi galat karne ki soch bhi nahi sakta.. dekhte han aage kya hota hai

manorma;- to main keh rahi thi arjun k mehal me rukne k liye humen bhi kuch jugad karna padega... aise to hum mehal me azadi se ghoom fir nahi sakte

arjun:- to uske liye humen kya karna hoga

manorma:- karna kya hai, kisi ek ko sath mila lete han. raja ki gaddi k liye mehalon me sazishen to aam baat hua karti hai...... aise hi kisi ek ko takpa kar unka aitmad hasil karenge fir hamari hogi balle balle mehal me. azadi se ghoom kar mehal me kuch samay bitayenge.... maze hi maze honge arjun mehal me.. pura mehal hi aag barsati hui jawaniyon se bhara pada hai......... waise to main sab ek hi chutki me kar sakti hon, aise na to tumhe maza aayega aur na mujhe...

manorma mere seene par let kar dono hath fold karke uspar chin rakhte hue mujhse baat kar rahi thi........... manorma ki ankhon me chamak thi, wo bohut khush thi, khush to wo har dumm hi rehti thi, khili khili bhi wo har dumm rehti thi.. uske jaisi koi kaise fresh reh sakti thi...... uske jaise haseen aur taro taza bhi to koi nahi tha, uske jaise mahekte badan ki malik bhi to koi nahi thi is bhari dunya me


arjun:- manorma mai tumhe chhuu sakta hon kyaaaaaaaa..

hahahahahaha.............. dil machal raha hai kyaa mujhe chhuuu k liyeeeeeee

manorma hassne lagi thi.. anachak se hi uske chola bhi badal gaya tha, mehal ki baton ko bhul kar wo bhi mujhpar dhayan dene lagi

arjun;- wo to kabse machal raha hai

manorma firse khadi ho gai, hawa me udti hui aayi aur mere honto ke paas aa kar mere honto par hath rakh dia...... uffffffffffffffffffffffff kitni garmi ki softness thi uske hath me........ surur ki tarangen si mere jism me daudne lagi thi.... meri ankhen si band hone lageeeeeee..

band ankhon se hi maine mehsus kiya k mere honto par kisi ne jalta hua koyla rakh dia tha.......... maine jhat se ankhen kholeen to normal kad kaath ke barabar ho kar mere honto par apne hont rakhe kiss kar rahi thi.......

jitni jalti usne kiss kiya tha, utni hi jaldi fir usne mere honto se apne hont bhi alag kar liye the....... firse mini size ki ho gai wo........ is baar mere seene par aalti paalti maar kar peeth karke sarr jhuka ke wo baith gayi........

manorma sharma rahi thi..... aur main hairat me gum manorma ki peeth ko takne laga thha, fir mera mere honto par pohnchaa aur manorma k honto ke ehsas ko mehsus karne laga........... itna nasha mujhe pehle kabhi nahi hua tha.. itna surur me main pehle kabhi nahi dooba tha... aisi madhoshi bhi mujhpar pehle kabhi taari nahi hui thi..
dil ki dhadkano me ajeeb sa shor hone laga tha.. lekin andar se sab bohut, behad achha bhi lagne laga tha.........

aisi hi feelings me main bohut der tak raha, meri ek ungli mere hi honto par chalne lagi thi.. meri ungli bhi manorma ke honto ke lams ko mere honto parse mehsus kar paa rahi thi..... kitna garam aur mann ko bhaaane wala ehsas tha..

manorma ne meri aur nahi dekha..... kabhi wo kisi ko leke chodne ki baat bhi kar jaati thi, aur kabhi beinteha sharma bhi jaati thi.. bohut se rang the manorma me

na wo kuch boli aur na hi main kuch....... jo ho chuka tha, use pure mannn se dono hi mehsus karne me lag gaye the..............

aise hi bohut der tak ye sab chalta raha, fir mujhe neend aa gayi



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main george ke sath ek baar firse mehal me tha...... din ke 3 baje ka time tha, aur suridner se shamsherzani ka mubalka 4 baje hona tay hua tha

aaj sab dekhne wale the k kisme kista hai dum........... mehal ki back side me hi talvar bazi ki practice ke liye ek jaga seleted thi.. jahan mehal ke raja aur rajkumar shamsherzani kiya karte the.................

mehal ki backside me hi ke 2nd floor par bohut se logon k baithne k liye jaga bhi bani thi........

50x15x20 size me 2nd floor par stage jaisa bana hua tha....... neeche charon aur bhi mehal ke dusre aur bahar se riyasat ke bade bade logon k ke liye baithne k intezam tha.......

mehal se abhi koi nahi maujud tha 2nd floor par

main george ke sath wahan pohnchaa to surinder........ khud ko rajkumar surinder sabar karne me laga hua tha...... uska jism paseene me bahaya hua tha........... wo 4 pehlwano se zor azmaai me laga hua tha..... mujhe aate dekha to pehlwano ko side hone ka bol dia.................... chhota langot surinder ne bandha hua tha... jism ke maamle me surinder kamm bhi nahi tha...... mazbut aur khubsurat jism ka wo malik tha.


parr andar se badsurat bhi tha wo, manfi soch ka malik, ghamandi kisi ko khud se badhkar nahi jaanta tha...


mujhe aate dekha to ruk kar pelwano ko khud se door kar dia......... ek tauliye se khud ko saf kiya aur fir jahan talvaren padi hui thee, wahan jaa pohnchaa, aur talvaron ko utha utha kar check karne laga, fir ek talvar ko lekar akhaade wale hisse me ja pohnchaa..


akhaade wala hi hisaab tha.. jahan hamari fight honi thi, wo area 40 feet ke circle me tha........ mazbut raasson ki madad se wo circle banaya gaya tha...


surinder darmiyan me pohncha aur pehlwano se bhi talvar utha laane ko bolne laga, kuch der me surinder charon pehlwano se akela mashq krne laga, lekin mashq nahi rahi thi wo......... surinder mujhe dikhane k liye charon pehlwano par toot pada tha.. charon pehlwan pehle to normal andaz me surinder se talvar bazi ki mashq karte rahe. parr fir achanak se hi surinder ke hamlon me tezi aane lagi, aur pehlwan khud ko surinder ki talvar ki kaat se bacha na paaye. aur zakhmi hone lage


surinder bila shuba ek bhetreen shamsheerzan tha.... par ghamandi bhi bohut tha.. aur jo ghamandi ho, uska to fir main khana kharab karta hi tha

manorma:- hahahaha.. ullu ka pattha .. arjun tumhe apne tevar dikhane k liye apne hi sathiyo ko kaat raha ha...............

arjun:- bas kuch der ki baat hai, fir uska bhi aise hi ghaao se bhara hoga.....

main apni pakar par bandhi hui niyaam se talvar nikal kar uski dhaar par ungli chalate hue bola.......... mehal me aane se pehle mujhe manorma ne ye talvar di thi.
saali jaane mere baare me kya kuch jaanti thi.. talvar bhi manorma ne mujhe wo laa kar di thi.. jo mujhe jani pehchaani lagi thi....... bahadur ke baad talvar bhi jab mere hath me aayi thi, to mujhe aisa laga tha k main is talvar se kaiyon ka khun baha chuka tha. bahadur ki tarha se ye talvar bhi meri purani sathi hai..

manorma se poochhne par bhi usne mujhe kuch nahi bataya tha... baat ko wo taal jaati thi, bass samay aane par sab saamne aa jaayega... aisa bolti thi

jab talvar utha kar maine hawa me hi use chalaya tha to ek scene meri ankhon me lehra gaya tha......... jis andaz se maine talvar ghumaayi thi, usi andaz me hi wo scene tha, aur main kisi ki gardan ek hi jhatke me alag kar raha tha.....

bas 2 second hi wo scene meri ankhon ke saaamne lehraya tha.. talvar chhod kar main baith gaya tha.. mere sarr me dard hone laga tha, parr mujhe dard ki utni parwa nahi hui, jitni main ye sochne laga k main kaun hon

manorma bhi mujhe dekh kuch ghabra si gayi thi... jaise mujhe sab yaad aa gaya ho..

lekin aisa nahi tha.. manorma ne jaise hi mehsus kiya k main abhi bhi khud ko bhula hua hon to tab ja ke usne chain ki saans li thi..



mere hath me talvar dekh kar surinder ruk gaya... pehlwan khud se hi peeche ho gaye the, wo surinder ka mukabla nahi kar sakte the.......... surinder mere hathon me maujud talvar ko hairat se dekhne laga tha...... talvar thi to ek aam si, parr uski chamak aur dhaar door se hi dekhi jaa sakti thi.......

surinder meri talvar ko dekh kar kuch nervous sa hua tha, par fir wo khud par kabu paa kar apni practice me masruf ho gaya tha.......



manorma:- arjun tum bhi practice kar lo

arjun:- karke to aaya hon ghar se...... aur mujhe nahi lagta k mujhe practice ki zarurat nahi..........

manorma:- wo to main bhi janti hon...... tum jaisi chusti furti aur maharat to surinder kya kisi me bhi nahi ho sakti...


george se bhi baaten hoti rahi...... wahi khade khade hi main surinder ko aas paas maujud logon ko dekhne laga..... abb thoda sa hi time bacha tha mukable me

maine 2nd floor par dekha to wahan bhi mehal se sabb ka aana shuru ho chuka tha...
raja, raniyan, uske bete, betiyan aur angrej sarkar ke bade abhi nahi aaye the....

kuch naukar aur dasiyan side khade dikh rahe the.. hath bandhe hue wo hukam ke ghulam the......... sab neeche surinder ko mujhe aur hamare aas paas baithe hue logon ko dekh rahe the..........



zayada kisi ko nahi bulaya gaya tha... badi badi hastiyan hi maujud theeeeeeeeeee..
agar rajkumar surinder haarta hai to aam logon ke saamne ke saamne uski kamm beizzati ho, is liye mehal k aam log to maujud the, parr riyasat ke aam log nahi the.. sab mehal me ghus bhi to nahi sakte the..


surinder jo pehle langot me tha.. practice chhod kar khud ko saaf karta hua kapde pehn chuka tha...


george:- chal mere yaar aaj firse dikha de tujhse badh kar koi nahi is dunya me

arjun:- bas bas zayada baans par matt chadhaa mujhe saale ye talvar bazi ka mukabla hai, ghod sawari ka nahi.. tune mujhe kabhi dekha bhi nahi, aur aise udne laga hai, jaise mujhe saalon se jaanta ho.. dheeraj rakh aur zara surinder ke chachere bhai par dhayan laga, dekh kaise to wo tujhe aur mujhe ghoor raha hai..

kuch faasle par final race me 3rd aane wala surinder ka chachera bhai humen ghoor raha tha..... use aaye bhi thodi der ho gai thi........

fir wo apni jaga par jaa kar baith gaya........ uske sath ek ladki bhi baithi hui thi

arjun:- wo ladki kaun hai.. pehle nahi dikhi mujhe

manorma:- abhi tune dekha hi kya hai mere raja.. abhi to bohut kuch dekhne layak hai aas paas

arjun;- tu seedhe seedhe baat nahi kar sakti kyaaaaaa..

manorma:- seedhi baat hi to kar rahi hon, samjh lo ye dusri shakuntla hai, surinder ki behen hai...

arjun;- to pehle kahan thi ye.. dikhi nahi pehle mujhe

manorma;- pehle ye mehal me thi.. race me bhi thi, tune kaunsa sab par dhayan dia tha..... ye peeche baithi hui.... ye sanjay k liye yahan aayi hai.. lekin sanjay ise koi bhav nahi de raha......

sab aa chuke the stage par.... kuch hi der me mukabla shuru hone wala tha.. main bhi kurta utaar dia...neeche fitting wali buniyan thi........ mere muscles dikhaai dene lage..........

manorma:- chhupa lo arjun apne muscles ko chhupa lo..... kahi shakuntla bhaagi bhaagi aa kar tujhse lipat na jaaye......... hehehehe


manorma maskhari karte hue hasste lagi......... bina kurta utare bhi lada ja sakta tha, par surinder koi aam talvar baaz nahi tha, mujhe bhi apni puri efforts dikhani thee, tabhi to surinder se main jeet sakta tha.. mukabla bohut hi tough hone wala tha........


rajkumar kanwal aur raja fir aa chuke the, kal wo chale gaye the, mera aur surinder ka mukabla dekhne k liye dono firse mehal me maujud the... nelson aur jenny bhi maujud the.......

aaj ka rang kuch aur tha, aaj sab pehle se bhi zayada excited the.. pehle race ka maidan tha to aaj talvar se saja maidan.......... khun behne wala tha aaj.. jab tak koi haar naa maanta, mukabla khatam hone wala nahi tha,, chahe koi marr bhi jaaye.
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