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Fantasy Meri Manorma.......... A Vintage Tale.....1913-1938

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manorma ki adayen kisi naukhez ladki ke jaisi theeeee.. apni harkaton se wo aisi dikhti thi, jaise wo abhi abhi jawan hui ho, aur usme bachapana bhi koot koot kar bhara hua ho....... ek khunkhaar billii thi wo.. khun pi kar zinda rehti thi wo..

hum dono hi ek dusre se masti karte hue. jhut moot ka ek dusre se naraz hone ka natak kar rahe the..... aur manorma sadiyon purani hasti hokar ek lahad mutiyar ki tarha se reast kar rahi thi... kuch der aise hi chalta raha.. manorma roothti rahi aur main meetha bol kar use apni aur mudne par majbur kar deta tha.


fir dono milkar hassne lage.... manorma mere sarr se utar kar mere kandhe par aa gai. aur main use dekhne laga.. is baar wo meri ankhon ke saamne thi.. is baar ka view bohut kareeb se tha... manorma ki asli khubsurti mujhe dikhne lagi thi.... main bade ghaur se use dekhne laga.. manorma meri ankhon me dekhne lagi, uski ankhon ki chamak badh gai thi.. main use bade dhayan se jo dekh raha tha..

manorma achanak se sharmane lagi..... main use dekh hassne laga...

manorma:- aise na hassa karo arjun..

arjun:- manorma tum bhi sharmane wali cheez ho..

manorma:- kyun mai ladki nahi hon kya.? manorma mujhe ankhen dikhane lagi..

hahaha...zara apni umar to batana mujhe......... hasste hue maine manorma se poocha

manorma mere kandhe par thi, wahi khade khde hi usne mere kaan ko pakar kar marodna shuru kar dia...... main aur bhi hassne laga..... mera kaan chhod kar wo bhi hasste hue mere kandhe par paaon latka ke baith gai...

fir wo saamne dekhne lagi

manorma:- arjun tum race me hissa lene wale ho... bohur sahi kiya tumne race me entry karwa kar... rajkumari indra is pure raje me sabse hat ke hai, bohut khubsurat aur bohut masoom hai wo. dil ki bhi wo bohut achhi hai.. warna to pura mehal hi behiyaai ki lapet me hai.. ek wahi hai jo shareefon se badhkar shareef hai... mehak ke ayyash raja aur rajkumar bhi use izzat ki nazar se dekhte han... aise hi masoom se cute si wo ladki hai.......

main manorma ke mohn se kisi aur ki tareef sunkar hairat se use dekhne laga.. ek ladki ho kar wo kaise dusri ladki ki tareef kar rahi thi...

manorma:- aise mat dekho mujhe arjun...... main wo bhi jaanti hon jo tum nahi jaante.

arjun:- to fir mujhe mere baare me bataao, tumse milke mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai k jaise main pehle se hi tume janta hon, ghode ko dekhkar bhi mujhse aisa kyun laga jaise main us ghode par pehle bhi kai baar sawar ho chuka hon.. aise bohut se sawal han manorma mere mann me jo mujhe janne han...

meri baat sunkar manorma mujhse nazren churane lagi.......

arjun:- manorma bataao na mujhe mere baare me..... manorma ne mujhe dekha

manorma:- arjun bohut kuch aisa hai jo abhi tum nahi jaante.. tum bohut kuch bhule hue ho, agar tumhe sabb bata dia to tum ulajh jaaoge.. samay khud hi sab theek kardega...

manorma ki ankhon me kuch aisa tha, jo mujhe shak me daal raha tha.. par main usse sab zabardasti bhi to nahi pooch sakta tha.. aur fir manorma ne sach hi to kaha tha k main ulajh jaaonga.. khair dekhte han, kab meri yaaddasht lautti hai..

arjun:- manorma kuch to aisa hai jo tum mujhe banata nahi chah rahi..

manorna:- mujhse kuch aur matt poocho arjun, aur is topic ko chhod kar koi aur baat karo....... manorna jaane kyun mujhse ye sabb nahi bata rahi thi.. kya kuch ho chuka tha guzre waqt me......

arjun:- to fir mujhe ye batao k tum kyun chahti ho k main indra ki or dhayan don..

manorma:- kyun ki mujhe tumse mohabbat hai aur main tumpar ya tumhare dil par kabza nahi jamana chahti.. arjun ye dunya bohut khubsurat hai... hamara sath to abb hamesha rahega.. kuch aisi bhi tumhari zindagi me aane wali han, jo tumhari kismat me likh di gai han....... ye sabb niyati ka khel hai arjun.. warna main kyun chahungi k tum kisi aur ko dekh bhi sako.... basanti ko le lo. wo bhi tumhe dil se chah lagi thi.. main bhi tumhe dil se chahti hon... main to har samay hi tumhare sath rehne wali hon. aur basanti...... so shayad fir kabhi tumhari zindagi me na aaye.. agar use tumhare pyar ka kuch hissa mil gaya hai to tumhara to kuch nahi bigda, parr basanti ka dil khush ho gaya hai, uske dil ki chaah puri ho gai hai to abb se hamesha hi khush rahegi.. koi bhi ladki agar kisi ko apne dil me basa le to fir wo uske siva kisi aur ke bare me soch bhi nahi sakti .... basanti bhale bhi shadi karke apne pati ko apne dil me basa legi.. par tum uske dil se kabhi nahi jaa sakoge..


main bhi manorma ki baten samjh raha tha.. manorma ki baaten sahi bhi thee. par jane kyun manorma mujhe aisa banane par tuli hui thi... jo main nahi tha manorma chahti thi k main waisa ban jaaon..... aur mujhe bhi aisi life pasand bhi aane lagi thi.. warna to maine to basanti ko thappad bhi maar dia tha......

fir basanti ko chod kar jenny ko chodne ka mann bana liya tha.. abb rajkumariyon ki aur mera dhayan bantne laga tha.... aur manorma bhi chahti thi k mai bhi rajkumari indra ki or apna dhayan badhaaon....

abb dekhte han aage chal kar mere sath kya hone wala hai.... manorma mujhe sochon me gumm dekh kar mere gaal ko choomne lagi..... ye pehla chumban tha manorma ka mujhe..

kya bataaon kaisa mehsus hua tha mujhe..... khushbu si hi bikhar gai thi aas paas. bohut maza aaya mujhe, bohut sukun mila mujhe... nasha sa chhane laga tha mujhpar. usi nashe ke karan meri ankhen band hone lagi theeeeee..

manorma khilkhila kar hassne lagi.....

manorma mere kandhe par khadi ho gai aur mere gaal par dono hathon ko upar se lekar neeche ferne lagi..... saali ki adayen aur andaz bade hi ktilana tha.. uske badan ki khushbu mujhe apne andar utarti hui mehsus hone lagi.. mujhe kuch soojh hi nahi raha tha.. sandal ki khushbu to thi hi... uske badan ki narmahat ka ehsas paate hi mere andar current sa daudne laga.... manorma ko hi mera kuch kahyal aaya, warna to main to kho gaya tha.. wo khilkhila kar hassne lagi...


manorma:- tum bohut ache ho arjun.. bohut payare ho.. jab se mili hon. main tumse door rahi hon.. abb nahi rahungi.. to bataao kaisa laga mera chumban, kaisa laga mera hathon ka suprash...... wo firse khilkhila kar hasssne lagi...

main uski hassi me frise khone laga.. uske sufed chamakdaar daant bohut bhale lag rahe the.....

arjun:-manotma ye tumhar asli room hai naa.

manorma:- haan arjun ye mera asli roop hai. tumhare saamne main kisi banawati chehre ke sath kaise aa sakti hon arjun.. jisse prem ho uske chhal nahi karte. usse kuch nahi chhupate.. main bhi tumhare sath abb se imandari se rehna chahti hon, pehle agar kuch tha bhi to tum use dar guzar kar dena..(main usse poochne laga k imandari se uska kya matlab hai. parr usne mujhe tok dia) na na arjun ab aisa waisa kuch matt poochhnaa..


arjun:- theek hai nahi poochta.. abb aage kya karna hai wo bataao

manorma:- maine kya karna hai tum hi to sabb karoge.. main to bass tumhare sath reh kar sabb tamasha dekhongi........ haan ek baat keh deti hon k main pehle se hi jaanti thi k tum kuch arsa yahi rahoge.. yahan kya kuch karoge wo bhi jaanti thi. isi liye to sukun se so gai thi...


main jaanta tha k manorma bohut aage ki cheez hai.... main use dekh fir george ko dekhne laga...

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din ke 12 baje ka time tha aur hum sab race ke maidan me the....... mere liye aur george k liye manorma ne bohut aala kisam ke kapdon ka bandobast kiya tha.. aise kapde kisi ke bhi nahi the.... door se hi mere aur george ke kapdon ki chamak dekhi ja sakti thi......


2 race ho chuki thi.. abb se kuch der k baad shuru hone wali race me mere ghoda bhi daudne wala tha.... mere sath race me total 20 ghode daudne wale the... jinme mukhtlif riyaston ke 3 rajkumar bhi the.... unki nazron se main bhaanp gaya tha k sabb rajkumari indra ko impress karne k liye yahan aaye hue han.......

yahan jab rajkumari indra aayi to uska ahwaal to main aapko batana hi bhul gaya...

george aur manorma ne rajkumari indra ke hussan ki tareef sahi se ki hi nahi thi..

khubsurat rath par sawar jab wo maidan ke side me bane hue stage ke paas pohnchi thi. to sab use hi dekhne lage the.. meri hi tarha se wo bhi bouht chamak rahi thi.. uski khubsurti door se hi dekhi ja sakti thi.. uske sufed ujle kapde heeron ka haar aur gala me latak rahi motiyon ki maalaon ne use aur bhi haseen bana dia tha..


intehaai dilkash nasheb o faraz wale jism ki wo maalik thi.. use dekh ke mere mann me kuch bhi bura nahi aaya.. wo thi hi pariyon jaisi.. dil me sajaaye jaane k layak, uski to puja ki jaa sakti thi.. uske baare me kuch sochna to door ki baat thi..

parr kuch mujhe rajkumari ko hawasi nazron se dekhte hue bhi mile. main use dekhne me kho gaya tha.. manorma khilakhila kar hassne lagi thi..

manorma:- hai naa chand ka tukda arjun

arjun:- manorma tumne to sahi se uski taree bhi nahi ki thi.. rajkumari indra to tumse bhi badh kr haseen hai.. main manorma ko chhedte hue bola.. mujhe ghusse se dekhne lagi. fir meri ankhon me shararat dekh kr wo hasne lagi..

manorma:- mujhse badhkar to is dunya me koi sunder hai hi nahi... abhi maine apne jalve dikhaye hi kahan han mere arjun.. jis din apne jalve dikhaongi na to tum baaki sabb ko bhul jaaoge...

arjun:- chal jhuti.... maine bhi manorma k andaz me kaha to manorma hassti hui mujhe tirchi ankh se dekhne lagi......

manorma;- arjun ye rang tum par bohut jachta hai.. jahan dushman na hon, wahan tum aise hi roop me rehna..... tumse badhkar bhi koi is dunya ne khubroo nahi hai arjun.
rajukumari khud me bohut kuch hogi, prr tumhare saamne wo zero hai... manorma ne to meri hi tareef kardi thi..... sach me hi mai aisa hi tha .. parr mujhe khud ko show karwane ki adat nahi thi.

rajkumari indra ko ek baar pure mann se dekhkar maine apni nazren hata li thi.. wo aise dekhe jaane k kaabil bhi nahi thi.. bata na maine k wo to puja karne layak thi.
dil me basaaye jane layak thi. lafangon ki tarha se taadte hue use dekhna achhi baat nahi thi.........

aur fir main bhi uske saamne koi sasta insan ban kar nahi aana chahta tha.. ek baar ke baad maine use firse nahi dekha tha. haan stafe par sabb ko dekhte hue sarsari ki nazar uspar bhi pad gai thi....

wo bhi meri hi tarha thi usne bhi mujhe dekh liya tha, meri aur mere ghode ki personality ko bhi parkh lia tha... lekin ek baar mujhe aur mere ghode ko ghor se dekhne k baad wo bhi apne dhayan se ho gai thi.... mujhe uska ye andaz bohut bhaya tha..


jenny bhi usi stage par maujud thi...... maine use aur usne mujhe dekh liye tha.. wo mujhe dekh bohut khush ho gai... uska baap bhi uske sath hi maujud tha to usne khud par kaabu paa lia tha.. abhi uske attitude bhi tha, aur sabb ke samne wo kisi hindustani ke sath muskurate hue baat nahi kar sakti thi.. agar karti bhi to apne level ke logon ke sath...... matlab k raja maharajaon ke saath..


race shuru hone me kuch hi deri baaki thi...


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rudra ko jungleee kabile wale apne nezon ki chhaon me jungle me maujud kisi jaga basi ek basti me le gaye..... rudra se kisi ne koi bhi baat nahi ki thi... bass use lejaa kar lakdee ke bane hue ek mazbut jhonpde me kaid kar dia tha......

rudra ko kaid hue 4 ghante beet gaye.. parr kisi ne bhi uski khair khabar nahi li thi....


jis jhonpde me rudra ko kaid kia gaya tha... wahan 4 kaidi aur bhi the.. un kaidiyon me 1 ladki thi, ek boodha aur do jawan mard the....


sab ko kaid kiye hue 5 din ho gaye the.. aur din me ek time hi sab ko khana dia jaata tha.. wo bhi khane layak nahi tha..

rudra ko andar aate dekh kar sab rudra ko dekhne lage.. rudra bhi sabko dekh ek side me baith gaya.. rudra sabb ko baari baari ghaur se dekhne laga...

sabke sab angrej the.. rudra english bhi jaanta tha.. budha angrez bola

budha:- hello young man do you know english

rudra:-Yes i can speak english.

budha:- thank GOD jo humen koi indian mile jo hamari samjh sake. BTW mera naam smith hai, ye meri beti helen hai.. wo nioclas aur wo jack...

budha smith rudra ko apna aur sabka intro dene laga..

rudra:- mera naam rudra hai aur mujhe aap sab se milkar bohut khushi hui.. aap sabb kab se yahan par kaid han.. aur kyun kaid han, aap sabb yahan kiss liye ayen.. itni door aise ilake me khud ko maut ke hawale karne...

smith hassne laga

smith:- young man tumne to sawalat ki bauchhad hi kardi.. sab sawalon ka jawab ek hi hai...... jab tak insan ke jism me saanse han, wo use kabhi chain nahi mil sakta.. uske pas daualt bhi ho to mazeed daualt ki hawas ho ya na ho.. lekin use agar kahi se pata chal jaaye k falaan jaga heeron ka ek zakheera maujud hai to wo khud ko rok nahi paata.. aisi hi kashish hoti hai khazane me ...... agar kahzane me geere hon to koi bhi fir khud ko rok nahi paata..

rudra smith ki baat par hassne laga......

rudra:- to fir aap ko wo heere nahi mile...

smith:- kaise milte, jab hum in junglon me dakhil hue the, to hum 50 the.. abb sirf 4 bache han...... mere behtreen dost maare gaye.. kuch k to bachhe bhi saath the wo bhi maare gaye..... kismat se hum hi bach sake the.. parr dekh manzil ke kareeb pohnch kar bhi hum safe nahi reh sake.....

rudra:- jin heeron ke dher k liye aap sabb khuwar ho rahe han.. guzri raat main unhi heeron ka bistar bana kar soya hon..... smith ki ankhon me dekhte hue rudra bola to sab ke sab uchhal pade... sab ke sab rudra ke paas ja pohche...

helen bhi naqahat zada chehra liye rudra ke saamne aa baithi.... 50 me se 4 bache the, fir bhi heeron ki kashish unke andar se khatam nahi hui thi..



smith:- tum sach keh rahe ho.. kahi tum us choti par se to nahi aaye.. jahan gidh numa parinde bhi rehte han.. wahan pohch kar to kisi ka zinda bach paana mumkin nahi hai.....

rudra:- agar aisi baat thi to fir aap sabb kyun whan jaana chahte the..

smith;- bataya to tha k sab kuch hote hue bhi khazane ka nasha dunya ke har nashe se badhkar hota hai. abhi ka dekh lo. marne wale han, firbhi heeron ka sunkar pichhla sabb bhul gaye... yahi to hai wo nasha, jiske peeche hum sabb pagal han.. tum nahi ho kya pagal.?

rudra firse hassne laga

rudra:- heere mere kiss kaam ke mr smith...... heere mujhe de hi kya sakte the.. mera pet to wo bhar nahi sakte.. mujhe chand saanse bhi to de nahi sakte.. un heeron ko bech kar agar mujhe paise milte han, dheron paise milte han to sochne ki baat hai k main un paison ka karunga kya..... mard ka bachha hon, kabhi bhuka nahi marunga, pet bharne ke liye kabhi kisi ka mohtaj nahi ho sakta main.. jisme himmat ho lalach na ho, jitna mil jaaye utne me hi khush rahe to bhagwan bhi uska kabhi sath nahi chhodta...... main bhi aisa hi hon.......

sabb rudra ko dekhne lage... rudra ki baten sahi thee. parr har kisi k liye nahi.. har koi rudra nahi ho sakta tha.. har kisi ki parwan chadhane k liye radhika nahi mili thi....

sab rudra ki baat par muttafiq hoke bhi muttafiq nahi the..

helen:- rudra ek heera to tum laaye hi hoge naa, bohut se heere maine dekh rakhe han, parr yahan maujud khazane me jo heere han, us jaise heere dunya me kisi ke paas nahi han, mujhe bhi lalach nahi ha heron ka bass dekhne ki chah ha

rudra helen ko afsos se dekhne laga.. 24 hours me ek time ka khana sabb ko mil raha tha fir bhi wo heeron ka lalach apne andar se khatam nahi kar paaye the.... akhri saanse chal rahi thee lekin fir bhi unhe matt nahi aayi thi.



rudra:- bataya to tha helen k mujhe heeron ki koi chah nahi thi, isi liye sabb wahi chhod aaya, agar kisi ki kismat me hue to wo unhe paa lega.. mujhe koi chah nahi thi main wahi chhod aaya...

sab fir kuch na kuch bolte rahe.. rudra bhi sab ko jawab deta raha...... kisi ko bhi rudra ka jawab achha nahi laga tha.. rudra ka bartaao sabko achha laga tha.. par rudra heero ko chhod kar aa gaya tha.. ye soch kar sabb ko rudra par afsos ho raha tha aru rudra ko sab par..

yahan sabki jaan k laale pade hue the .. khud ki jaan ki parwa na karte hue sab heeron k liye machal rahe the..



4 ghante beet gaye parr rudra ko kuch khaane ko nahi dia gaya tha.. rudra ne do din se kuch nahi khaaaya piya tha... rudra ko bhuk utni nahi lagi thi, jitni use piyas lagi thi...... lekin usme sehn shakti bhi to bohut badh kar thi......

raat k andhere hone ke 2 ghante baad sabko mitti ke bane hue payalon me junglee khuarak di gai.. sath me paani bhi tha...

rudra ne payala me khana dekha to uska dil kharab hone laga.. payale me chawal the, lekin aise pakaye gaye the k usme se baas aa rahi thi.. rudra ne chawal nahi khaaye, bass paani pi kar side me ho gaya.. sab chawalon par toot pade the..

rudra ke payale me maujud chawal sabne mil baant kar khaa liye .. rudra sab ko paglon ki tarha se khata hua dekh kar hairat me tha..

khane k baad

smith:- pehle din humne bhi ye chawal wapis kar diye the.. ye insano ke khane layak nahi han. lekin pet ki aag ko kamm karne k liye inhe pet me utarna pada

rudra bhi ye sabb samjhta tha.. parr abhi rudra majbur nahi hua tha..


agle din 10 baje k kareeb sabko bahar lejaaya jaane laga... 100 se zayada log rudra samet sabko apne ghere me liye ek jaga le jaane lage...


rudra sab ko hairat se dekhne laga... kal jab rudra ne sab ko dekha tha to sab normal huliye me the...... matlab

maltab mardon aur aurton ne apne chhupane wale hisson ko chhupa hua tha.. aur jism ke jo hisse dikh rahe the, wo noraml colour me the.. matlab original colour me the


parr aaj puri basti ne hi apne pure jism ko rangon se ranga hua tha.. sab ke sab aaj rangeen nazar aa rahe the.. koi khaas tyohaar tha shayad


rudra ko chhod baaki ke charon ye sabb dekh kar dehshat ki lapet me aa gaye the.. shayad wo sabb is sabb ka matlab samjhte the..


rudra un charon ko na dekh kar baaki sabko dekhne laga.. agar dekh leta to sabke chehron par dehshat dekh kar wo unse poochhta zarur..



kuch der me sab ek jaga pohnch gaye. rudra wahan ka manzar dekh kar heran reh gaya. ek bohut badi moorti bani hui thi...ajeeb si shakal me thi wo moorti

rudra apne dharam baare bhi sab gyaan rakhta tha, jaisi moorti usne dekhi thi, rudra jaan gaya k in logon ka apna hi koi dharam hai..

whan zameen me 5 lakdee ke mote tane gadhe hue the..... rudra samet sabko un tanon se bandh dia gaya..



rudra chahta to khud ko azaad karwa sakta tha, aur kaiyon ko maar kar yahan se khisak sakta tha.. lekin wo dekhna chahta tha wo sab unke sath karne kya wale han..

rudra ne abb apne kaidi sathiyon ko dekhna shuru kar dia... sabko dekh kar rudra jaan gaya k sab dehshat me han...

rudra:- mr smith tum dare hue kyun ho

smith rudra ko hairat se nahi dekh paaya.. wo to bass iltijaai nazron se rudra ko dekhne laga.. wo fir rudra se bola to uski awaz bohut hi dheemi thi, dehshat ke bayas uski awaz hi nahi nikal paa rahi thi..

smith:- rudra humen bacha lo, ye sabb hamari bali dene wale han..

smith ki baat sunkar rudra ke kaan khade ho gaye..

rudra ne baari baari sabko dekha aur fir

rudra:- mr smith mujhse wada karo k agar main tum sabb ko yahan se zinda nikal kar le jaao to tum sabb khazane ko bhul kar wapis apni dunya me laut jaaoge..

smith:- rudra wo to humne kabse decide kar lia hai,....pls mujhe aur mere sathiyon ko bacha lo... mujhe tum dare hue nahi lag rahe.. tum zarur kuch kar sakte ho.


smith ki baat sunkar k sabki bali di jaane wali hai to rudra insano ko bali chadte hue kaise dekh sakta tha..

wo moka talash karne laga.. fir rudra ne kisi se koi baat nahi ki..kuch der me ek aurat aur ek sarkar saamne bane hye lakdee ke hi ek bade takht par aa khade hue..

mard ghaliban sardar tha is kabile ka aur aurat uski patni thi.... saari basti wale dono ko dekh kar shor machane lage.....



sardar ne hath utha kar sabko khamosh rehne ka ishara kiya to sab ekdumm se khamosh ho gaye....... badi respect thi sardar ki....... sab aise shaant hue jaise yahan par koi maujud hi na ho......

sardar sab ko dekhne laga..... fir wo hume dekh bolne laa

sardar:- tum sabb ne yahan aa kar hamare niyomo ko toda hai.... yahan bahar se aane wala aaj tak koi bhi zinda laut kar nahi gaya....... aur khaas kar hamari devi ke khazane ko mele nazron se dekhne wale ko to tum kabhi bhi nahi chhodte, aaj tum sabb ki bali di jaayegi.. jisse hamari devi khush ho jaaye aur hamare kabile par uski rehmaton ki barsat hone lagegi....

basti ke logon ko dekhte hue

sardar:- bali dene ka intezam kiya jaaaaaaaye

smith and party hindi nahi jaanti thi, lekin sardar ke andaz se sabb samjh gaye.. wo charo chillane lage....... mujhe kuch karne k liye bolne lage



basti ke log hamare paas pohnche aur ek ek karke sab ko kholne lage..... ek ek ke seene parr kai kai mazbut lakdee ke bane hue teze tike the.. smith aur dusre hilne lage to teze unke seeeno me gadne lage...


charon bhayankar chillane lage..... helen ki halat sabse zayada kharab thi... wo dehshat me mubtala ho kar sab ko dekhte hue chillane lagi.. use apni maut jo dikh gai thi......

 

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manorma ki adayen kisi naukhez ladki ke jaisi theeeee.. apni harkaton se wo aisi dikhti thi, jaise wo abhi abhi jawan hui ho, aur usme bachapana bhi koot koot kar bhara hua ho....... ek khunkhaar billii thi wo.. khun pi kar zinda rehti thi wo..

hum dono hi ek dusre se masti karte hue. jhut moot ka ek dusre se naraz hone ka natak kar rahe the..... aur manorma sadiyon purani hasti hokar ek lahad mutiyar ki tarha se reast kar rahi thi... kuch der aise hi chalta raha.. manorma roothti rahi aur main meetha bol kar use apni aur mudne par majbur kar deta tha.


fir dono milkar hassne lage.... manorma mere sarr se utar kar mere kandhe par aa gai. aur main use dekhne laga.. is baar wo meri ankhon ke saamne thi.. is baar ka view bohut kareeb se tha... manorma ki asli khubsurti mujhe dikhne lagi thi.... main bade ghaur se use dekhne laga.. manorma meri ankhon me dekhne lagi, uski ankhon ki chamak badh gai thi.. main use bade dhayan se jo dekh raha tha..

manorma achanak se sharmane lagi..... main use dekh hassne laga...

manorma:- aise na hassa karo arjun..

arjun:- manorma tum bhi sharmane wali cheez ho..

manorma:- kyun mai ladki nahi hon kya.? manorma mujhe ankhen dikhane lagi..

hahaha...zara apni umar to batana mujhe......... hasste hue maine manorma se poocha

manorma mere kandhe par thi, wahi khade khde hi usne mere kaan ko pakar kar marodna shuru kar dia...... main aur bhi hassne laga..... mera kaan chhod kar wo bhi hasste hue mere kandhe par paaon latka ke baith gai...

fir wo saamne dekhne lagi

manorma:- arjun tum race me hissa lene wale ho... bohur sahi kiya tumne race me entry karwa kar... rajkumari indra is pure raje me sabse hat ke hai, bohut khubsurat aur bohut masoom hai wo. dil ki bhi wo bohut achhi hai.. warna to pura mehal hi behiyaai ki lapet me hai.. ek wahi hai jo shareefon se badhkar shareef hai... mehak ke ayyash raja aur rajkumar bhi use izzat ki nazar se dekhte han... aise hi masoom se cute si wo ladki hai.......

main manorma ke mohn se kisi aur ki tareef sunkar hairat se use dekhne laga.. ek ladki ho kar wo kaise dusri ladki ki tareef kar rahi thi...

manorma:- aise mat dekho mujhe arjun...... main wo bhi jaanti hon jo tum nahi jaante.

arjun:- to fir mujhe mere baare me bataao, tumse milke mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai k jaise main pehle se hi tume janta hon, ghode ko dekhkar bhi mujhse aisa kyun laga jaise main us ghode par pehle bhi kai baar sawar ho chuka hon.. aise bohut se sawal han manorma mere mann me jo mujhe janne han...

meri baat sunkar manorma mujhse nazren churane lagi.......

arjun:- manorma bataao na mujhe mere baare me..... manorma ne mujhe dekha

manorma:- arjun bohut kuch aisa hai jo abhi tum nahi jaante.. tum bohut kuch bhule hue ho, agar tumhe sabb bata dia to tum ulajh jaaoge.. samay khud hi sab theek kardega...

manorma ki ankhon me kuch aisa tha, jo mujhe shak me daal raha tha.. par main usse sab zabardasti bhi to nahi pooch sakta tha.. aur fir manorma ne sach hi to kaha tha k main ulajh jaaonga.. khair dekhte han, kab meri yaaddasht lautti hai..

arjun:- manorma kuch to aisa hai jo tum mujhe banata nahi chah rahi..

manorna:- mujhse kuch aur matt poocho arjun, aur is topic ko chhod kar koi aur baat karo....... manorna jaane kyun mujhse ye sabb nahi bata rahi thi.. kya kuch ho chuka tha guzre waqt me......

arjun:- to fir mujhe ye batao k tum kyun chahti ho k main indra ki or dhayan don..

manorma:- kyun ki mujhe tumse mohabbat hai aur main tumpar ya tumhare dil par kabza nahi jamana chahti.. arjun ye dunya bohut khubsurat hai... hamara sath to abb hamesha rahega.. kuch aisi bhi tumhari zindagi me aane wali han, jo tumhari kismat me likh di gai han....... ye sabb niyati ka khel hai arjun.. warna main kyun chahungi k tum kisi aur ko dekh bhi sako.... basanti ko le lo. wo bhi tumhe dil se chah lagi thi.. main bhi tumhe dil se chahti hon... main to har samay hi tumhare sath rehne wali hon. aur basanti...... so shayad fir kabhi tumhari zindagi me na aaye.. agar use tumhare pyar ka kuch hissa mil gaya hai to tumhara to kuch nahi bigda, parr basanti ka dil khush ho gaya hai, uske dil ki chaah puri ho gai hai to abb se hamesha hi khush rahegi.. koi bhi ladki agar kisi ko apne dil me basa le to fir wo uske siva kisi aur ke bare me soch bhi nahi sakti .... basanti bhale bhi shadi karke apne pati ko apne dil me basa legi.. par tum uske dil se kabhi nahi jaa sakoge..


main bhi manorma ki baten samjh raha tha.. manorma ki baaten sahi bhi thee. par jane kyun manorma mujhe aisa banane par tuli hui thi... jo main nahi tha manorma chahti thi k main waisa ban jaaon..... aur mujhe bhi aisi life pasand bhi aane lagi thi.. warna to maine to basanti ko thappad bhi maar dia tha......

fir basanti ko chod kar jenny ko chodne ka mann bana liya tha.. abb rajkumariyon ki aur mera dhayan bantne laga tha.... aur manorma bhi chahti thi k mai bhi rajkumari indra ki or apna dhayan badhaaon....

abb dekhte han aage chal kar mere sath kya hone wala hai.... manorma mujhe sochon me gumm dekh kar mere gaal ko choomne lagi..... ye pehla chumban tha manorma ka mujhe..

kya bataaon kaisa mehsus hua tha mujhe..... khushbu si hi bikhar gai thi aas paas. bohut maza aaya mujhe, bohut sukun mila mujhe... nasha sa chhane laga tha mujhpar. usi nashe ke karan meri ankhen band hone lagi theeeeee..

manorma khilkhila kar hassne lagi.....

manorma mere kandhe par khadi ho gai aur mere gaal par dono hathon ko upar se lekar neeche ferne lagi..... saali ki adayen aur andaz bade hi ktilana tha.. uske badan ki khushbu mujhe apne andar utarti hui mehsus hone lagi.. mujhe kuch soojh hi nahi raha tha.. sandal ki khushbu to thi hi... uske badan ki narmahat ka ehsas paate hi mere andar current sa daudne laga.... manorma ko hi mera kuch kahyal aaya, warna to main to kho gaya tha.. wo khilkhila kar hassne lagi...


manorma:- tum bohut ache ho arjun.. bohut payare ho.. jab se mili hon. main tumse door rahi hon.. abb nahi rahungi.. to bataao kaisa laga mera chumban, kaisa laga mera hathon ka suprash...... wo firse khilkhila kar hasssne lagi...

main uski hassi me frise khone laga.. uske sufed chamakdaar daant bohut bhale lag rahe the.....

arjun:-manotma ye tumhar asli room hai naa.

manorma:- haan arjun ye mera asli roop hai. tumhare saamne main kisi banawati chehre ke sath kaise aa sakti hon arjun.. jisse prem ho uske chhal nahi karte. usse kuch nahi chhupate.. main bhi tumhare sath abb se imandari se rehna chahti hon, pehle agar kuch tha bhi to tum use dar guzar kar dena..(main usse poochne laga k imandari se uska kya matlab hai. parr usne mujhe tok dia) na na arjun ab aisa waisa kuch matt poochhnaa..


arjun:- theek hai nahi poochta.. abb aage kya karna hai wo bataao

manorma:- maine kya karna hai tum hi to sabb karoge.. main to bass tumhare sath reh kar sabb tamasha dekhongi........ haan ek baat keh deti hon k main pehle se hi jaanti thi k tum kuch arsa yahi rahoge.. yahan kya kuch karoge wo bhi jaanti thi. isi liye to sukun se so gai thi...


main jaanta tha k manorma bohut aage ki cheez hai.... main use dekh fir george ko dekhne laga...

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din ke 12 baje ka time tha aur hum sab race ke maidan me the....... mere liye aur george k liye manorma ne bohut aala kisam ke kapdon ka bandobast kiya tha.. aise kapde kisi ke bhi nahi the.... door se hi mere aur george ke kapdon ki chamak dekhi ja sakti thi......


2 race ho chuki thi.. abb se kuch der k baad shuru hone wali race me mere ghoda bhi daudne wala tha.... mere sath race me total 20 ghode daudne wale the... jinme mukhtlif riyaston ke 3 rajkumar bhi the.... unki nazron se main bhaanp gaya tha k sabb rajkumari indra ko impress karne k liye yahan aaye hue han.......

yahan jab rajkumari indra aayi to uska ahwaal to main aapko batana hi bhul gaya...

george aur manorma ne rajkumari indra ke hussan ki tareef sahi se ki hi nahi thi..

khubsurat rath par sawar jab wo maidan ke side me bane hue stage ke paas pohnchi thi. to sab use hi dekhne lage the.. meri hi tarha se wo bhi bouht chamak rahi thi.. uski khubsurti door se hi dekhi ja sakti thi.. uske sufed ujle kapde heeron ka haar aur gala me latak rahi motiyon ki maalaon ne use aur bhi haseen bana dia tha..


intehaai dilkash nasheb o faraz wale jism ki wo maalik thi.. use dekh ke mere mann me kuch bhi bura nahi aaya.. wo thi hi pariyon jaisi.. dil me sajaaye jaane k layak, uski to puja ki jaa sakti thi.. uske baare me kuch sochna to door ki baat thi..

parr kuch mujhe rajkumari ko hawasi nazron se dekhte hue bhi mile. main use dekhne me kho gaya tha.. manorma khilakhila kar hassne lagi thi..

manorma:- hai naa chand ka tukda arjun

arjun:- manorma tumne to sahi se uski taree bhi nahi ki thi.. rajkumari indra to tumse bhi badh kr haseen hai.. main manorma ko chhedte hue bola.. mujhe ghusse se dekhne lagi. fir meri ankhon me shararat dekh kr wo hasne lagi..

manorma:- mujhse badhkar to is dunya me koi sunder hai hi nahi... abhi maine apne jalve dikhaye hi kahan han mere arjun.. jis din apne jalve dikhaongi na to tum baaki sabb ko bhul jaaoge...

arjun:- chal jhuti.... maine bhi manorma k andaz me kaha to manorma hassti hui mujhe tirchi ankh se dekhne lagi......

manorma;- arjun ye rang tum par bohut jachta hai.. jahan dushman na hon, wahan tum aise hi roop me rehna..... tumse badhkar bhi koi is dunya ne khubroo nahi hai arjun.
rajukumari khud me bohut kuch hogi, prr tumhare saamne wo zero hai... manorma ne to meri hi tareef kardi thi..... sach me hi mai aisa hi tha .. parr mujhe khud ko show karwane ki adat nahi thi.

rajkumari indra ko ek baar pure mann se dekhkar maine apni nazren hata li thi.. wo aise dekhe jaane k kaabil bhi nahi thi.. bata na maine k wo to puja karne layak thi.
dil me basaaye jane layak thi. lafangon ki tarha se taadte hue use dekhna achhi baat nahi thi.........

aur fir main bhi uske saamne koi sasta insan ban kar nahi aana chahta tha.. ek baar ke baad maine use firse nahi dekha tha. haan stafe par sabb ko dekhte hue sarsari ki nazar uspar bhi pad gai thi....

wo bhi meri hi tarha thi usne bhi mujhe dekh liya tha, meri aur mere ghode ki personality ko bhi parkh lia tha... lekin ek baar mujhe aur mere ghode ko ghor se dekhne k baad wo bhi apne dhayan se ho gai thi.... mujhe uska ye andaz bohut bhaya tha..


jenny bhi usi stage par maujud thi...... maine use aur usne mujhe dekh liye tha.. wo mujhe dekh bohut khush ho gai... uska baap bhi uske sath hi maujud tha to usne khud par kaabu paa lia tha.. abhi uske attitude bhi tha, aur sabb ke samne wo kisi hindustani ke sath muskurate hue baat nahi kar sakti thi.. agar karti bhi to apne level ke logon ke sath...... matlab k raja maharajaon ke saath..


race shuru hone me kuch hi deri baaki thi...



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rudra ko jungleee kabile wale apne nezon ki chhaon me jungle me maujud kisi jaga basi ek basti me le gaye..... rudra se kisi ne koi bhi baat nahi ki thi... bass use lejaa kar lakdee ke bane hue ek mazbut jhonpde me kaid kar dia tha......

rudra ko kaid hue 4 ghante beet gaye.. parr kisi ne bhi uski khair khabar nahi li thi....


jis jhonpde me rudra ko kaid kia gaya tha... wahan 4 kaidi aur bhi the.. un kaidiyon me 1 ladki thi, ek boodha aur do jawan mard the....


sab ko kaid kiye hue 5 din ho gaye the.. aur din me ek time hi sab ko khana dia jaata tha.. wo bhi khane layak nahi tha..

rudra ko andar aate dekh kar sab rudra ko dekhne lage.. rudra bhi sabko dekh ek side me baith gaya.. rudra sabb ko baari baari ghaur se dekhne laga...

sabke sab angrej the.. rudra english bhi jaanta tha.. budha angrez bola

budha:- hello young man do you know english

rudra:-Yes i can speak english.

budha:- thank GOD jo humen koi indian mile jo hamari samjh sake. BTW mera naam smith hai, ye meri beti helen hai.. wo nioclas aur wo jack...

budha smith rudra ko apna aur sabka intro dene laga..

rudra:- mera naam rudra hai aur mujhe aap sab se milkar bohut khushi hui.. aap sabb kab se yahan par kaid han.. aur kyun kaid han, aap sabb yahan kiss liye ayen.. itni door aise ilake me khud ko maut ke hawale karne...

smith hassne laga

smith:- young man tumne to sawalat ki bauchhad hi kardi.. sab sawalon ka jawab ek hi hai...... jab tak insan ke jism me saanse han, wo use kabhi chain nahi mil sakta.. uske pas daualt bhi ho to mazeed daualt ki hawas ho ya na ho.. lekin use agar kahi se pata chal jaaye k falaan jaga heeron ka ek zakheera maujud hai to wo khud ko rok nahi paata.. aisi hi kashish hoti hai khazane me ...... agar kahzane me geere hon to koi bhi fir khud ko rok nahi paata..

rudra smith ki baat par hassne laga......

rudra:- to fir aap ko wo heere nahi mile...

smith:- kaise milte, jab hum in junglon me dakhil hue the, to hum 50 the.. abb sirf 4 bache han...... mere behtreen dost maare gaye.. kuch k to bachhe bhi saath the wo bhi maare gaye..... kismat se hum hi bach sake the.. parr dekh manzil ke kareeb pohnch kar bhi hum safe nahi reh sake.....

rudra:- jin heeron ke dher k liye aap sabb khuwar ho rahe han.. guzri raat main unhi heeron ka bistar bana kar soya hon..... smith ki ankhon me dekhte hue rudra bola to sab ke sab uchhal pade... sab ke sab rudra ke paas ja pohche...

helen bhi naqahat zada chehra liye rudra ke saamne aa baithi.... 50 me se 4 bache the, fir bhi heeron ki kashish unke andar se khatam nahi hui thi..



smith:- tum sach keh rahe ho.. kahi tum us choti par se to nahi aaye.. jahan gidh numa parinde bhi rehte han.. wahan pohch kar to kisi ka zinda bach paana mumkin nahi hai.....

rudra:- agar aisi baat thi to fir aap sabb kyun whan jaana chahte the..

smith;- bataya to tha k sab kuch hote hue bhi khazane ka nasha dunya ke har nashe se badhkar hota hai. abhi ka dekh lo. marne wale han, firbhi heeron ka sunkar pichhla sabb bhul gaye... yahi to hai wo nasha, jiske peeche hum sabb pagal han.. tum nahi ho kya pagal.?

rudra firse hassne laga

rudra:- heere mere kiss kaam ke mr smith...... heere mujhe de hi kya sakte the.. mera pet to wo bhar nahi sakte.. mujhe chand saanse bhi to de nahi sakte.. un heeron ko bech kar agar mujhe paise milte han, dheron paise milte han to sochne ki baat hai k main un paison ka karunga kya..... mard ka bachha hon, kabhi bhuka nahi marunga, pet bharne ke liye kabhi kisi ka mohtaj nahi ho sakta main.. jisme himmat ho lalach na ho, jitna mil jaaye utne me hi khush rahe to bhagwan bhi uska kabhi sath nahi chhodta...... main bhi aisa hi hon.......

sabb rudra ko dekhne lage... rudra ki baten sahi thee. parr har kisi k liye nahi.. har koi rudra nahi ho sakta tha.. har kisi ki parwan chadhane k liye radhika nahi mili thi....

sab rudra ki baat par muttafiq hoke bhi muttafiq nahi the..

helen:- rudra ek heera to tum laaye hi hoge naa, bohut se heere maine dekh rakhe han, parr yahan maujud khazane me jo heere han, us jaise heere dunya me kisi ke paas nahi han, mujhe bhi lalach nahi ha heron ka bass dekhne ki chah ha

rudra helen ko afsos se dekhne laga.. 24 hours me ek time ka khana sabb ko mil raha tha fir bhi wo heeron ka lalach apne andar se khatam nahi kar paaye the.... akhri saanse chal rahi thee lekin fir bhi unhe matt nahi aayi thi.



rudra:- bataya to tha helen k mujhe heeron ki koi chah nahi thi, isi liye sabb wahi chhod aaya, agar kisi ki kismat me hue to wo unhe paa lega.. mujhe koi chah nahi thi main wahi chhod aaya...

sab fir kuch na kuch bolte rahe.. rudra bhi sab ko jawab deta raha...... kisi ko bhi rudra ka jawab achha nahi laga tha.. rudra ka bartaao sabko achha laga tha.. par rudra heero ko chhod kar aa gaya tha.. ye soch kar sabb ko rudra par afsos ho raha tha aru rudra ko sab par..

yahan sabki jaan k laale pade hue the .. khud ki jaan ki parwa na karte hue sab heeron k liye machal rahe the..



4 ghante beet gaye parr rudra ko kuch khaane ko nahi dia gaya tha.. rudra ne do din se kuch nahi khaaaya piya tha... rudra ko bhuk utni nahi lagi thi, jitni use piyas lagi thi...... lekin usme sehn shakti bhi to bohut badh kar thi......

raat k andhere hone ke 2 ghante baad sabko mitti ke bane hue payalon me junglee khuarak di gai.. sath me paani bhi tha...

rudra ne payala me khana dekha to uska dil kharab hone laga.. payale me chawal the, lekin aise pakaye gaye the k usme se baas aa rahi thi.. rudra ne chawal nahi khaaye, bass paani pi kar side me ho gaya.. sab chawalon par toot pade the..

rudra ke payale me maujud chawal sabne mil baant kar khaa liye .. rudra sab ko paglon ki tarha se khata hua dekh kar hairat me tha..

khane k baad

smith:- pehle din humne bhi ye chawal wapis kar diye the.. ye insano ke khane layak nahi han. lekin pet ki aag ko kamm karne k liye inhe pet me utarna pada

rudra bhi ye sabb samjhta tha.. parr abhi rudra majbur nahi hua tha..


agle din 10 baje k kareeb sabko bahar lejaaya jaane laga... 100 se zayada log rudra samet sabko apne ghere me liye ek jaga le jaane lage...


rudra sab ko hairat se dekhne laga... kal jab rudra ne sab ko dekha tha to sab normal huliye me the...... matlab

maltab mardon aur aurton ne apne chhupane wale hisson ko chhupa hua tha.. aur jism ke jo hisse dikh rahe the, wo noraml colour me the.. matlab original colour me the


parr aaj puri basti ne hi apne pure jism ko rangon se ranga hua tha.. sab ke sab aaj rangeen nazar aa rahe the.. koi khaas tyohaar tha shayad


rudra ko chhod baaki ke charon ye sabb dekh kar dehshat ki lapet me aa gaye the.. shayad wo sabb is sabb ka matlab samjhte the..


rudra un charon ko na dekh kar baaki sabko dekhne laga.. agar dekh leta to sabke chehron par dehshat dekh kar wo unse poochhta zarur..



kuch der me sab ek jaga pohnch gaye. rudra wahan ka manzar dekh kar heran reh gaya. ek bohut badi moorti bani hui thi...ajeeb si shakal me thi wo moorti

rudra apne dharam baare bhi sab gyaan rakhta tha, jaisi moorti usne dekhi thi, rudra jaan gaya k in logon ka apna hi koi dharam hai..

whan zameen me 5 lakdee ke mote tane gadhe hue the..... rudra samet sabko un tanon se bandh dia gaya..



rudra chahta to khud ko azaad karwa sakta tha, aur kaiyon ko maar kar yahan se khisak sakta tha.. lekin wo dekhna chahta tha wo sab unke sath karne kya wale han..

rudra ne abb apne kaidi sathiyon ko dekhna shuru kar dia... sabko dekh kar rudra jaan gaya k sab dehshat me han...

rudra:- mr smith tum dare hue kyun ho

smith rudra ko hairat se nahi dekh paaya.. wo to bass iltijaai nazron se rudra ko dekhne laga.. wo fir rudra se bola to uski awaz bohut hi dheemi thi, dehshat ke bayas uski awaz hi nahi nikal paa rahi thi..

smith:- rudra humen bacha lo, ye sabb hamari bali dene wale han..

smith ki baat sunkar rudra ke kaan khade ho gaye..

rudra ne baari baari sabko dekha aur fir

rudra:- mr smith mujhse wada karo k agar main tum sabb ko yahan se zinda nikal kar le jaao to tum sabb khazane ko bhul kar wapis apni dunya me laut jaaoge..

smith:- rudra wo to humne kabse decide kar lia hai,....pls mujhe aur mere sathiyon ko bacha lo... mujhe tum dare hue nahi lag rahe.. tum zarur kuch kar sakte ho.


smith ki baat sunkar k sabki bali di jaane wali hai to rudra insano ko bali chadte hue kaise dekh sakta tha..

wo moka talash karne laga.. fir rudra ne kisi se koi baat nahi ki..kuch der me ek aurat aur ek sarkar saamne bane hye lakdee ke hi ek bade takht par aa khade hue..

mard ghaliban sardar tha is kabile ka aur aurat uski patni thi.... saari basti wale dono ko dekh kar shor machane lage.....



sardar ne hath utha kar sabko khamosh rehne ka ishara kiya to sab ekdumm se khamosh ho gaye....... badi respect thi sardar ki....... sab aise shaant hue jaise yahan par koi maujud hi na ho......

sardar sab ko dekhne laga..... fir wo hume dekh bolne laa

sardar:- tum sabb ne yahan aa kar hamare niyomo ko toda hai.... yahan bahar se aane wala aaj tak koi bhi zinda laut kar nahi gaya....... aur khaas kar hamari devi ke khazane ko mele nazron se dekhne wale ko to tum kabhi bhi nahi chhodte, aaj tum sabb ki bali di jaayegi.. jisse hamari devi khush ho jaaye aur hamare kabile par uski rehmaton ki barsat hone lagegi....

basti ke logon ko dekhte hue

sardar:- bali dene ka intezam kiya jaaaaaaaye

smith and party hindi nahi jaanti thi, lekin sardar ke andaz se sabb samjh gaye.. wo charo chillane lage....... mujhe kuch karne k liye bolne lage



basti ke log hamare paas pohnche aur ek ek karke sab ko kholne lage..... ek ek ke seene parr kai kai mazbut lakdee ke bane hue teze tike the.. smith aur dusre hilne lage to teze unke seeeno me gadne lage...


charon bhayankar chillane lage..... helen ki halat sabse zayada kharab thi... wo dehshat me mubtala ho kar sab ko dekhte hue chillane lagi.. use apni maut jo dikh gai thi......
very nice update
 

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manorma ki adayen kisi naukhez ladki ke jaisi theeeee.. apni harkaton se wo aisi dikhti thi, jaise wo abhi abhi jawan hui ho, aur usme bachapana bhi koot koot kar bhara hua ho....... ek khunkhaar billii thi wo.. khun pi kar zinda rehti thi wo..

hum dono hi ek dusre se masti karte hue. jhut moot ka ek dusre se naraz hone ka natak kar rahe the..... aur manorma sadiyon purani hasti hokar ek lahad mutiyar ki tarha se reast kar rahi thi... kuch der aise hi chalta raha.. manorma roothti rahi aur main meetha bol kar use apni aur mudne par majbur kar deta tha.


fir dono milkar hassne lage.... manorma mere sarr se utar kar mere kandhe par aa gai. aur main use dekhne laga.. is baar wo meri ankhon ke saamne thi.. is baar ka view bohut kareeb se tha... manorma ki asli khubsurti mujhe dikhne lagi thi.... main bade ghaur se use dekhne laga.. manorma meri ankhon me dekhne lagi, uski ankhon ki chamak badh gai thi.. main use bade dhayan se jo dekh raha tha..

manorma achanak se sharmane lagi..... main use dekh hassne laga...

manorma:- aise na hassa karo arjun..

arjun:- manorma tum bhi sharmane wali cheez ho..

manorma:- kyun mai ladki nahi hon kya.? manorma mujhe ankhen dikhane lagi..

hahaha...zara apni umar to batana mujhe......... hasste hue maine manorma se poocha

manorma mere kandhe par thi, wahi khade khde hi usne mere kaan ko pakar kar marodna shuru kar dia...... main aur bhi hassne laga..... mera kaan chhod kar wo bhi hasste hue mere kandhe par paaon latka ke baith gai...

fir wo saamne dekhne lagi

manorma:- arjun tum race me hissa lene wale ho... bohur sahi kiya tumne race me entry karwa kar... rajkumari indra is pure raje me sabse hat ke hai, bohut khubsurat aur bohut masoom hai wo. dil ki bhi wo bohut achhi hai.. warna to pura mehal hi behiyaai ki lapet me hai.. ek wahi hai jo shareefon se badhkar shareef hai... mehak ke ayyash raja aur rajkumar bhi use izzat ki nazar se dekhte han... aise hi masoom se cute si wo ladki hai.......

main manorma ke mohn se kisi aur ki tareef sunkar hairat se use dekhne laga.. ek ladki ho kar wo kaise dusri ladki ki tareef kar rahi thi...

manorma:- aise mat dekho mujhe arjun...... main wo bhi jaanti hon jo tum nahi jaante.

arjun:- to fir mujhe mere baare me bataao, tumse milke mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai k jaise main pehle se hi tume janta hon, ghode ko dekhkar bhi mujhse aisa kyun laga jaise main us ghode par pehle bhi kai baar sawar ho chuka hon.. aise bohut se sawal han manorma mere mann me jo mujhe janne han...

meri baat sunkar manorma mujhse nazren churane lagi.......

arjun:- manorma bataao na mujhe mere baare me..... manorma ne mujhe dekha

manorma:- arjun bohut kuch aisa hai jo abhi tum nahi jaante.. tum bohut kuch bhule hue ho, agar tumhe sabb bata dia to tum ulajh jaaoge.. samay khud hi sab theek kardega...

manorma ki ankhon me kuch aisa tha, jo mujhe shak me daal raha tha.. par main usse sab zabardasti bhi to nahi pooch sakta tha.. aur fir manorma ne sach hi to kaha tha k main ulajh jaaonga.. khair dekhte han, kab meri yaaddasht lautti hai..

arjun:- manorma kuch to aisa hai jo tum mujhe banata nahi chah rahi..

manorna:- mujhse kuch aur matt poocho arjun, aur is topic ko chhod kar koi aur baat karo....... manorna jaane kyun mujhse ye sabb nahi bata rahi thi.. kya kuch ho chuka tha guzre waqt me......

arjun:- to fir mujhe ye batao k tum kyun chahti ho k main indra ki or dhayan don..

manorma:- kyun ki mujhe tumse mohabbat hai aur main tumpar ya tumhare dil par kabza nahi jamana chahti.. arjun ye dunya bohut khubsurat hai... hamara sath to abb hamesha rahega.. kuch aisi bhi tumhari zindagi me aane wali han, jo tumhari kismat me likh di gai han....... ye sabb niyati ka khel hai arjun.. warna main kyun chahungi k tum kisi aur ko dekh bhi sako.... basanti ko le lo. wo bhi tumhe dil se chah lagi thi.. main bhi tumhe dil se chahti hon... main to har samay hi tumhare sath rehne wali hon. aur basanti...... so shayad fir kabhi tumhari zindagi me na aaye.. agar use tumhare pyar ka kuch hissa mil gaya hai to tumhara to kuch nahi bigda, parr basanti ka dil khush ho gaya hai, uske dil ki chaah puri ho gai hai to abb se hamesha hi khush rahegi.. koi bhi ladki agar kisi ko apne dil me basa le to fir wo uske siva kisi aur ke bare me soch bhi nahi sakti .... basanti bhale bhi shadi karke apne pati ko apne dil me basa legi.. par tum uske dil se kabhi nahi jaa sakoge..


main bhi manorma ki baten samjh raha tha.. manorma ki baaten sahi bhi thee. par jane kyun manorma mujhe aisa banane par tuli hui thi... jo main nahi tha manorma chahti thi k main waisa ban jaaon..... aur mujhe bhi aisi life pasand bhi aane lagi thi.. warna to maine to basanti ko thappad bhi maar dia tha......

fir basanti ko chod kar jenny ko chodne ka mann bana liya tha.. abb rajkumariyon ki aur mera dhayan bantne laga tha.... aur manorma bhi chahti thi k mai bhi rajkumari indra ki or apna dhayan badhaaon....

abb dekhte han aage chal kar mere sath kya hone wala hai.... manorma mujhe sochon me gumm dekh kar mere gaal ko choomne lagi..... ye pehla chumban tha manorma ka mujhe..

kya bataaon kaisa mehsus hua tha mujhe..... khushbu si hi bikhar gai thi aas paas. bohut maza aaya mujhe, bohut sukun mila mujhe... nasha sa chhane laga tha mujhpar. usi nashe ke karan meri ankhen band hone lagi theeeeee..

manorma khilkhila kar hassne lagi.....

manorma mere kandhe par khadi ho gai aur mere gaal par dono hathon ko upar se lekar neeche ferne lagi..... saali ki adayen aur andaz bade hi ktilana tha.. uske badan ki khushbu mujhe apne andar utarti hui mehsus hone lagi.. mujhe kuch soojh hi nahi raha tha.. sandal ki khushbu to thi hi... uske badan ki narmahat ka ehsas paate hi mere andar current sa daudne laga.... manorma ko hi mera kuch kahyal aaya, warna to main to kho gaya tha.. wo khilkhila kar hassne lagi...


manorma:- tum bohut ache ho arjun.. bohut payare ho.. jab se mili hon. main tumse door rahi hon.. abb nahi rahungi.. to bataao kaisa laga mera chumban, kaisa laga mera hathon ka suprash...... wo firse khilkhila kar hasssne lagi...

main uski hassi me frise khone laga.. uske sufed chamakdaar daant bohut bhale lag rahe the.....

arjun:-manotma ye tumhar asli room hai naa.

manorma:- haan arjun ye mera asli roop hai. tumhare saamne main kisi banawati chehre ke sath kaise aa sakti hon arjun.. jisse prem ho uske chhal nahi karte. usse kuch nahi chhupate.. main bhi tumhare sath abb se imandari se rehna chahti hon, pehle agar kuch tha bhi to tum use dar guzar kar dena..(main usse poochne laga k imandari se uska kya matlab hai. parr usne mujhe tok dia) na na arjun ab aisa waisa kuch matt poochhnaa..


arjun:- theek hai nahi poochta.. abb aage kya karna hai wo bataao

manorma:- maine kya karna hai tum hi to sabb karoge.. main to bass tumhare sath reh kar sabb tamasha dekhongi........ haan ek baat keh deti hon k main pehle se hi jaanti thi k tum kuch arsa yahi rahoge.. yahan kya kuch karoge wo bhi jaanti thi. isi liye to sukun se so gai thi...


main jaanta tha k manorma bohut aage ki cheez hai.... main use dekh fir george ko dekhne laga...

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din ke 12 baje ka time tha aur hum sab race ke maidan me the....... mere liye aur george k liye manorma ne bohut aala kisam ke kapdon ka bandobast kiya tha.. aise kapde kisi ke bhi nahi the.... door se hi mere aur george ke kapdon ki chamak dekhi ja sakti thi......


2 race ho chuki thi.. abb se kuch der k baad shuru hone wali race me mere ghoda bhi daudne wala tha.... mere sath race me total 20 ghode daudne wale the... jinme mukhtlif riyaston ke 3 rajkumar bhi the.... unki nazron se main bhaanp gaya tha k sabb rajkumari indra ko impress karne k liye yahan aaye hue han.......

yahan jab rajkumari indra aayi to uska ahwaal to main aapko batana hi bhul gaya...

george aur manorma ne rajkumari indra ke hussan ki tareef sahi se ki hi nahi thi..

khubsurat rath par sawar jab wo maidan ke side me bane hue stage ke paas pohnchi thi. to sab use hi dekhne lage the.. meri hi tarha se wo bhi bouht chamak rahi thi.. uski khubsurti door se hi dekhi ja sakti thi.. uske sufed ujle kapde heeron ka haar aur gala me latak rahi motiyon ki maalaon ne use aur bhi haseen bana dia tha..


intehaai dilkash nasheb o faraz wale jism ki wo maalik thi.. use dekh ke mere mann me kuch bhi bura nahi aaya.. wo thi hi pariyon jaisi.. dil me sajaaye jaane k layak, uski to puja ki jaa sakti thi.. uske baare me kuch sochna to door ki baat thi..

parr kuch mujhe rajkumari ko hawasi nazron se dekhte hue bhi mile. main use dekhne me kho gaya tha.. manorma khilakhila kar hassne lagi thi..

manorma:- hai naa chand ka tukda arjun

arjun:- manorma tumne to sahi se uski taree bhi nahi ki thi.. rajkumari indra to tumse bhi badh kr haseen hai.. main manorma ko chhedte hue bola.. mujhe ghusse se dekhne lagi. fir meri ankhon me shararat dekh kr wo hasne lagi..

manorma:- mujhse badhkar to is dunya me koi sunder hai hi nahi... abhi maine apne jalve dikhaye hi kahan han mere arjun.. jis din apne jalve dikhaongi na to tum baaki sabb ko bhul jaaoge...

arjun:- chal jhuti.... maine bhi manorma k andaz me kaha to manorma hassti hui mujhe tirchi ankh se dekhne lagi......

manorma;- arjun ye rang tum par bohut jachta hai.. jahan dushman na hon, wahan tum aise hi roop me rehna..... tumse badhkar bhi koi is dunya ne khubroo nahi hai arjun.
rajukumari khud me bohut kuch hogi, prr tumhare saamne wo zero hai... manorma ne to meri hi tareef kardi thi..... sach me hi mai aisa hi tha .. parr mujhe khud ko show karwane ki adat nahi thi.

rajkumari indra ko ek baar pure mann se dekhkar maine apni nazren hata li thi.. wo aise dekhe jaane k kaabil bhi nahi thi.. bata na maine k wo to puja karne layak thi.
dil me basaaye jane layak thi. lafangon ki tarha se taadte hue use dekhna achhi baat nahi thi.........

aur fir main bhi uske saamne koi sasta insan ban kar nahi aana chahta tha.. ek baar ke baad maine use firse nahi dekha tha. haan stafe par sabb ko dekhte hue sarsari ki nazar uspar bhi pad gai thi....

wo bhi meri hi tarha thi usne bhi mujhe dekh liya tha, meri aur mere ghode ki personality ko bhi parkh lia tha... lekin ek baar mujhe aur mere ghode ko ghor se dekhne k baad wo bhi apne dhayan se ho gai thi.... mujhe uska ye andaz bohut bhaya tha..


jenny bhi usi stage par maujud thi...... maine use aur usne mujhe dekh liye tha.. wo mujhe dekh bohut khush ho gai... uska baap bhi uske sath hi maujud tha to usne khud par kaabu paa lia tha.. abhi uske attitude bhi tha, aur sabb ke samne wo kisi hindustani ke sath muskurate hue baat nahi kar sakti thi.. agar karti bhi to apne level ke logon ke sath...... matlab k raja maharajaon ke saath..


race shuru hone me kuch hi deri baaki thi...



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rudra ko jungleee kabile wale apne nezon ki chhaon me jungle me maujud kisi jaga basi ek basti me le gaye..... rudra se kisi ne koi bhi baat nahi ki thi... bass use lejaa kar lakdee ke bane hue ek mazbut jhonpde me kaid kar dia tha......

rudra ko kaid hue 4 ghante beet gaye.. parr kisi ne bhi uski khair khabar nahi li thi....


jis jhonpde me rudra ko kaid kia gaya tha... wahan 4 kaidi aur bhi the.. un kaidiyon me 1 ladki thi, ek boodha aur do jawan mard the....


sab ko kaid kiye hue 5 din ho gaye the.. aur din me ek time hi sab ko khana dia jaata tha.. wo bhi khane layak nahi tha..

rudra ko andar aate dekh kar sab rudra ko dekhne lage.. rudra bhi sabko dekh ek side me baith gaya.. rudra sabb ko baari baari ghaur se dekhne laga...

sabke sab angrej the.. rudra english bhi jaanta tha.. budha angrez bola

budha:- hello young man do you know english

rudra:-Yes i can speak english.

budha:- thank GOD jo humen koi indian mile jo hamari samjh sake. BTW mera naam smith hai, ye meri beti helen hai.. wo nioclas aur wo jack...

budha smith rudra ko apna aur sabka intro dene laga..

rudra:- mera naam rudra hai aur mujhe aap sab se milkar bohut khushi hui.. aap sabb kab se yahan par kaid han.. aur kyun kaid han, aap sabb yahan kiss liye ayen.. itni door aise ilake me khud ko maut ke hawale karne...

smith hassne laga

smith:- young man tumne to sawalat ki bauchhad hi kardi.. sab sawalon ka jawab ek hi hai...... jab tak insan ke jism me saanse han, wo use kabhi chain nahi mil sakta.. uske pas daualt bhi ho to mazeed daualt ki hawas ho ya na ho.. lekin use agar kahi se pata chal jaaye k falaan jaga heeron ka ek zakheera maujud hai to wo khud ko rok nahi paata.. aisi hi kashish hoti hai khazane me ...... agar kahzane me geere hon to koi bhi fir khud ko rok nahi paata..

rudra smith ki baat par hassne laga......

rudra:- to fir aap ko wo heere nahi mile...

smith:- kaise milte, jab hum in junglon me dakhil hue the, to hum 50 the.. abb sirf 4 bache han...... mere behtreen dost maare gaye.. kuch k to bachhe bhi saath the wo bhi maare gaye..... kismat se hum hi bach sake the.. parr dekh manzil ke kareeb pohnch kar bhi hum safe nahi reh sake.....

rudra:- jin heeron ke dher k liye aap sabb khuwar ho rahe han.. guzri raat main unhi heeron ka bistar bana kar soya hon..... smith ki ankhon me dekhte hue rudra bola to sab ke sab uchhal pade... sab ke sab rudra ke paas ja pohche...

helen bhi naqahat zada chehra liye rudra ke saamne aa baithi.... 50 me se 4 bache the, fir bhi heeron ki kashish unke andar se khatam nahi hui thi..



smith:- tum sach keh rahe ho.. kahi tum us choti par se to nahi aaye.. jahan gidh numa parinde bhi rehte han.. wahan pohch kar to kisi ka zinda bach paana mumkin nahi hai.....

rudra:- agar aisi baat thi to fir aap sabb kyun whan jaana chahte the..

smith;- bataya to tha k sab kuch hote hue bhi khazane ka nasha dunya ke har nashe se badhkar hota hai. abhi ka dekh lo. marne wale han, firbhi heeron ka sunkar pichhla sabb bhul gaye... yahi to hai wo nasha, jiske peeche hum sabb pagal han.. tum nahi ho kya pagal.?

rudra firse hassne laga

rudra:- heere mere kiss kaam ke mr smith...... heere mujhe de hi kya sakte the.. mera pet to wo bhar nahi sakte.. mujhe chand saanse bhi to de nahi sakte.. un heeron ko bech kar agar mujhe paise milte han, dheron paise milte han to sochne ki baat hai k main un paison ka karunga kya..... mard ka bachha hon, kabhi bhuka nahi marunga, pet bharne ke liye kabhi kisi ka mohtaj nahi ho sakta main.. jisme himmat ho lalach na ho, jitna mil jaaye utne me hi khush rahe to bhagwan bhi uska kabhi sath nahi chhodta...... main bhi aisa hi hon.......

sabb rudra ko dekhne lage... rudra ki baten sahi thee. parr har kisi k liye nahi.. har koi rudra nahi ho sakta tha.. har kisi ki parwan chadhane k liye radhika nahi mili thi....

sab rudra ki baat par muttafiq hoke bhi muttafiq nahi the..

helen:- rudra ek heera to tum laaye hi hoge naa, bohut se heere maine dekh rakhe han, parr yahan maujud khazane me jo heere han, us jaise heere dunya me kisi ke paas nahi han, mujhe bhi lalach nahi ha heron ka bass dekhne ki chah ha

rudra helen ko afsos se dekhne laga.. 24 hours me ek time ka khana sabb ko mil raha tha fir bhi wo heeron ka lalach apne andar se khatam nahi kar paaye the.... akhri saanse chal rahi thee lekin fir bhi unhe matt nahi aayi thi.



rudra:- bataya to tha helen k mujhe heeron ki koi chah nahi thi, isi liye sabb wahi chhod aaya, agar kisi ki kismat me hue to wo unhe paa lega.. mujhe koi chah nahi thi main wahi chhod aaya...

sab fir kuch na kuch bolte rahe.. rudra bhi sab ko jawab deta raha...... kisi ko bhi rudra ka jawab achha nahi laga tha.. rudra ka bartaao sabko achha laga tha.. par rudra heero ko chhod kar aa gaya tha.. ye soch kar sabb ko rudra par afsos ho raha tha aru rudra ko sab par..

yahan sabki jaan k laale pade hue the .. khud ki jaan ki parwa na karte hue sab heeron k liye machal rahe the..



4 ghante beet gaye parr rudra ko kuch khaane ko nahi dia gaya tha.. rudra ne do din se kuch nahi khaaaya piya tha... rudra ko bhuk utni nahi lagi thi, jitni use piyas lagi thi...... lekin usme sehn shakti bhi to bohut badh kar thi......

raat k andhere hone ke 2 ghante baad sabko mitti ke bane hue payalon me junglee khuarak di gai.. sath me paani bhi tha...

rudra ne payala me khana dekha to uska dil kharab hone laga.. payale me chawal the, lekin aise pakaye gaye the k usme se baas aa rahi thi.. rudra ne chawal nahi khaaye, bass paani pi kar side me ho gaya.. sab chawalon par toot pade the..

rudra ke payale me maujud chawal sabne mil baant kar khaa liye .. rudra sab ko paglon ki tarha se khata hua dekh kar hairat me tha..

khane k baad

smith:- pehle din humne bhi ye chawal wapis kar diye the.. ye insano ke khane layak nahi han. lekin pet ki aag ko kamm karne k liye inhe pet me utarna pada

rudra bhi ye sabb samjhta tha.. parr abhi rudra majbur nahi hua tha..


agle din 10 baje k kareeb sabko bahar lejaaya jaane laga... 100 se zayada log rudra samet sabko apne ghere me liye ek jaga le jaane lage...


rudra sab ko hairat se dekhne laga... kal jab rudra ne sab ko dekha tha to sab normal huliye me the...... matlab

maltab mardon aur aurton ne apne chhupane wale hisson ko chhupa hua tha.. aur jism ke jo hisse dikh rahe the, wo noraml colour me the.. matlab original colour me the


parr aaj puri basti ne hi apne pure jism ko rangon se ranga hua tha.. sab ke sab aaj rangeen nazar aa rahe the.. koi khaas tyohaar tha shayad


rudra ko chhod baaki ke charon ye sabb dekh kar dehshat ki lapet me aa gaye the.. shayad wo sabb is sabb ka matlab samjhte the..


rudra un charon ko na dekh kar baaki sabko dekhne laga.. agar dekh leta to sabke chehron par dehshat dekh kar wo unse poochhta zarur..



kuch der me sab ek jaga pohnch gaye. rudra wahan ka manzar dekh kar heran reh gaya. ek bohut badi moorti bani hui thi...ajeeb si shakal me thi wo moorti

rudra apne dharam baare bhi sab gyaan rakhta tha, jaisi moorti usne dekhi thi, rudra jaan gaya k in logon ka apna hi koi dharam hai..

whan zameen me 5 lakdee ke mote tane gadhe hue the..... rudra samet sabko un tanon se bandh dia gaya..



rudra chahta to khud ko azaad karwa sakta tha, aur kaiyon ko maar kar yahan se khisak sakta tha.. lekin wo dekhna chahta tha wo sab unke sath karne kya wale han..

rudra ne abb apne kaidi sathiyon ko dekhna shuru kar dia... sabko dekh kar rudra jaan gaya k sab dehshat me han...

rudra:- mr smith tum dare hue kyun ho

smith rudra ko hairat se nahi dekh paaya.. wo to bass iltijaai nazron se rudra ko dekhne laga.. wo fir rudra se bola to uski awaz bohut hi dheemi thi, dehshat ke bayas uski awaz hi nahi nikal paa rahi thi..

smith:- rudra humen bacha lo, ye sabb hamari bali dene wale han..

smith ki baat sunkar rudra ke kaan khade ho gaye..

rudra ne baari baari sabko dekha aur fir

rudra:- mr smith mujhse wada karo k agar main tum sabb ko yahan se zinda nikal kar le jaao to tum sabb khazane ko bhul kar wapis apni dunya me laut jaaoge..

smith:- rudra wo to humne kabse decide kar lia hai,....pls mujhe aur mere sathiyon ko bacha lo... mujhe tum dare hue nahi lag rahe.. tum zarur kuch kar sakte ho.


smith ki baat sunkar k sabki bali di jaane wali hai to rudra insano ko bali chadte hue kaise dekh sakta tha..

wo moka talash karne laga.. fir rudra ne kisi se koi baat nahi ki..kuch der me ek aurat aur ek sarkar saamne bane hye lakdee ke hi ek bade takht par aa khade hue..

mard ghaliban sardar tha is kabile ka aur aurat uski patni thi.... saari basti wale dono ko dekh kar shor machane lage.....



sardar ne hath utha kar sabko khamosh rehne ka ishara kiya to sab ekdumm se khamosh ho gaye....... badi respect thi sardar ki....... sab aise shaant hue jaise yahan par koi maujud hi na ho......

sardar sab ko dekhne laga..... fir wo hume dekh bolne laa

sardar:- tum sabb ne yahan aa kar hamare niyomo ko toda hai.... yahan bahar se aane wala aaj tak koi bhi zinda laut kar nahi gaya....... aur khaas kar hamari devi ke khazane ko mele nazron se dekhne wale ko to tum kabhi bhi nahi chhodte, aaj tum sabb ki bali di jaayegi.. jisse hamari devi khush ho jaaye aur hamare kabile par uski rehmaton ki barsat hone lagegi....

basti ke logon ko dekhte hue

sardar:- bali dene ka intezam kiya jaaaaaaaye

smith and party hindi nahi jaanti thi, lekin sardar ke andaz se sabb samjh gaye.. wo charo chillane lage....... mujhe kuch karne k liye bolne lage



basti ke log hamare paas pohnche aur ek ek karke sab ko kholne lage..... ek ek ke seene parr kai kai mazbut lakdee ke bane hue teze tike the.. smith aur dusre hilne lage to teze unke seeeno me gadne lage...


charon bhayankar chillane lage..... helen ki halat sabse zayada kharab thi... wo dehshat me mubtala ho kar sab ko dekhte hue chillane lagi.. use apni maut jo dikh gai thi......
Wahhh ab dekhte hai arjun race ko kaise jitata hai. Aur indra see baat kaise suru hoti hai.
Aur idhar apna rudhra in sb ko kaise bachata hai sath me ye bhi dekhna hai bachne ke baad wo sb wapas jate hai ya fir se jeeto kee liye nikal padte hai.
Mast asadjee ek no. Bhai.
 
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manorma ki adayen kisi naukhez ladki ke jaisi theeeee.. apni harkaton se wo aisi dikhti thi, jaise wo abhi abhi jawan hui ho, aur usme bachapana bhi koot koot kar bhara hua ho....... ek khunkhaar billii thi wo.. khun pi kar zinda rehti thi wo..

hum dono hi ek dusre se masti karte hue. jhut moot ka ek dusre se naraz hone ka natak kar rahe the..... aur manorma sadiyon purani hasti hokar ek lahad mutiyar ki tarha se reast kar rahi thi... kuch der aise hi chalta raha.. manorma roothti rahi aur main meetha bol kar use apni aur mudne par majbur kar deta tha.


fir dono milkar hassne lage.... manorma mere sarr se utar kar mere kandhe par aa gai. aur main use dekhne laga.. is baar wo meri ankhon ke saamne thi.. is baar ka view bohut kareeb se tha... manorma ki asli khubsurti mujhe dikhne lagi thi.... main bade ghaur se use dekhne laga.. manorma meri ankhon me dekhne lagi, uski ankhon ki chamak badh gai thi.. main use bade dhayan se jo dekh raha tha..

manorma achanak se sharmane lagi..... main use dekh hassne laga...

manorma:- aise na hassa karo arjun..

arjun:- manorma tum bhi sharmane wali cheez ho..

manorma:- kyun mai ladki nahi hon kya.? manorma mujhe ankhen dikhane lagi..

hahaha...zara apni umar to batana mujhe......... hasste hue maine manorma se poocha

manorma mere kandhe par thi, wahi khade khde hi usne mere kaan ko pakar kar marodna shuru kar dia...... main aur bhi hassne laga..... mera kaan chhod kar wo bhi hasste hue mere kandhe par paaon latka ke baith gai...

fir wo saamne dekhne lagi

manorma:- arjun tum race me hissa lene wale ho... bohur sahi kiya tumne race me entry karwa kar... rajkumari indra is pure raje me sabse hat ke hai, bohut khubsurat aur bohut masoom hai wo. dil ki bhi wo bohut achhi hai.. warna to pura mehal hi behiyaai ki lapet me hai.. ek wahi hai jo shareefon se badhkar shareef hai... mehak ke ayyash raja aur rajkumar bhi use izzat ki nazar se dekhte han... aise hi masoom se cute si wo ladki hai.......

main manorma ke mohn se kisi aur ki tareef sunkar hairat se use dekhne laga.. ek ladki ho kar wo kaise dusri ladki ki tareef kar rahi thi...

manorma:- aise mat dekho mujhe arjun...... main wo bhi jaanti hon jo tum nahi jaante.

arjun:- to fir mujhe mere baare me bataao, tumse milke mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai k jaise main pehle se hi tume janta hon, ghode ko dekhkar bhi mujhse aisa kyun laga jaise main us ghode par pehle bhi kai baar sawar ho chuka hon.. aise bohut se sawal han manorma mere mann me jo mujhe janne han...

meri baat sunkar manorma mujhse nazren churane lagi.......

arjun:- manorma bataao na mujhe mere baare me..... manorma ne mujhe dekha

manorma:- arjun bohut kuch aisa hai jo abhi tum nahi jaante.. tum bohut kuch bhule hue ho, agar tumhe sabb bata dia to tum ulajh jaaoge.. samay khud hi sab theek kardega...

manorma ki ankhon me kuch aisa tha, jo mujhe shak me daal raha tha.. par main usse sab zabardasti bhi to nahi pooch sakta tha.. aur fir manorma ne sach hi to kaha tha k main ulajh jaaonga.. khair dekhte han, kab meri yaaddasht lautti hai..

arjun:- manorma kuch to aisa hai jo tum mujhe banata nahi chah rahi..

manorna:- mujhse kuch aur matt poocho arjun, aur is topic ko chhod kar koi aur baat karo....... manorna jaane kyun mujhse ye sabb nahi bata rahi thi.. kya kuch ho chuka tha guzre waqt me......

arjun:- to fir mujhe ye batao k tum kyun chahti ho k main indra ki or dhayan don..

manorma:- kyun ki mujhe tumse mohabbat hai aur main tumpar ya tumhare dil par kabza nahi jamana chahti.. arjun ye dunya bohut khubsurat hai... hamara sath to abb hamesha rahega.. kuch aisi bhi tumhari zindagi me aane wali han, jo tumhari kismat me likh di gai han....... ye sabb niyati ka khel hai arjun.. warna main kyun chahungi k tum kisi aur ko dekh bhi sako.... basanti ko le lo. wo bhi tumhe dil se chah lagi thi.. main bhi tumhe dil se chahti hon... main to har samay hi tumhare sath rehne wali hon. aur basanti...... so shayad fir kabhi tumhari zindagi me na aaye.. agar use tumhare pyar ka kuch hissa mil gaya hai to tumhara to kuch nahi bigda, parr basanti ka dil khush ho gaya hai, uske dil ki chaah puri ho gai hai to abb se hamesha hi khush rahegi.. koi bhi ladki agar kisi ko apne dil me basa le to fir wo uske siva kisi aur ke bare me soch bhi nahi sakti .... basanti bhale bhi shadi karke apne pati ko apne dil me basa legi.. par tum uske dil se kabhi nahi jaa sakoge..


main bhi manorma ki baten samjh raha tha.. manorma ki baaten sahi bhi thee. par jane kyun manorma mujhe aisa banane par tuli hui thi... jo main nahi tha manorma chahti thi k main waisa ban jaaon..... aur mujhe bhi aisi life pasand bhi aane lagi thi.. warna to maine to basanti ko thappad bhi maar dia tha......

fir basanti ko chod kar jenny ko chodne ka mann bana liya tha.. abb rajkumariyon ki aur mera dhayan bantne laga tha.... aur manorma bhi chahti thi k mai bhi rajkumari indra ki or apna dhayan badhaaon....

abb dekhte han aage chal kar mere sath kya hone wala hai.... manorma mujhe sochon me gumm dekh kar mere gaal ko choomne lagi..... ye pehla chumban tha manorma ka mujhe..

kya bataaon kaisa mehsus hua tha mujhe..... khushbu si hi bikhar gai thi aas paas. bohut maza aaya mujhe, bohut sukun mila mujhe... nasha sa chhane laga tha mujhpar. usi nashe ke karan meri ankhen band hone lagi theeeeee..

manorma khilkhila kar hassne lagi.....

manorma mere kandhe par khadi ho gai aur mere gaal par dono hathon ko upar se lekar neeche ferne lagi..... saali ki adayen aur andaz bade hi ktilana tha.. uske badan ki khushbu mujhe apne andar utarti hui mehsus hone lagi.. mujhe kuch soojh hi nahi raha tha.. sandal ki khushbu to thi hi... uske badan ki narmahat ka ehsas paate hi mere andar current sa daudne laga.... manorma ko hi mera kuch kahyal aaya, warna to main to kho gaya tha.. wo khilkhila kar hassne lagi...


manorma:- tum bohut ache ho arjun.. bohut payare ho.. jab se mili hon. main tumse door rahi hon.. abb nahi rahungi.. to bataao kaisa laga mera chumban, kaisa laga mera hathon ka suprash...... wo firse khilkhila kar hasssne lagi...

main uski hassi me frise khone laga.. uske sufed chamakdaar daant bohut bhale lag rahe the.....

arjun:-manotma ye tumhar asli room hai naa.

manorma:- haan arjun ye mera asli roop hai. tumhare saamne main kisi banawati chehre ke sath kaise aa sakti hon arjun.. jisse prem ho uske chhal nahi karte. usse kuch nahi chhupate.. main bhi tumhare sath abb se imandari se rehna chahti hon, pehle agar kuch tha bhi to tum use dar guzar kar dena..(main usse poochne laga k imandari se uska kya matlab hai. parr usne mujhe tok dia) na na arjun ab aisa waisa kuch matt poochhnaa..


arjun:- theek hai nahi poochta.. abb aage kya karna hai wo bataao

manorma:- maine kya karna hai tum hi to sabb karoge.. main to bass tumhare sath reh kar sabb tamasha dekhongi........ haan ek baat keh deti hon k main pehle se hi jaanti thi k tum kuch arsa yahi rahoge.. yahan kya kuch karoge wo bhi jaanti thi. isi liye to sukun se so gai thi...


main jaanta tha k manorma bohut aage ki cheez hai.... main use dekh fir george ko dekhne laga...

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din ke 12 baje ka time tha aur hum sab race ke maidan me the....... mere liye aur george k liye manorma ne bohut aala kisam ke kapdon ka bandobast kiya tha.. aise kapde kisi ke bhi nahi the.... door se hi mere aur george ke kapdon ki chamak dekhi ja sakti thi......


2 race ho chuki thi.. abb se kuch der k baad shuru hone wali race me mere ghoda bhi daudne wala tha.... mere sath race me total 20 ghode daudne wale the... jinme mukhtlif riyaston ke 3 rajkumar bhi the.... unki nazron se main bhaanp gaya tha k sabb rajkumari indra ko impress karne k liye yahan aaye hue han.......

yahan jab rajkumari indra aayi to uska ahwaal to main aapko batana hi bhul gaya...

george aur manorma ne rajkumari indra ke hussan ki tareef sahi se ki hi nahi thi..

khubsurat rath par sawar jab wo maidan ke side me bane hue stage ke paas pohnchi thi. to sab use hi dekhne lage the.. meri hi tarha se wo bhi bouht chamak rahi thi.. uski khubsurti door se hi dekhi ja sakti thi.. uske sufed ujle kapde heeron ka haar aur gala me latak rahi motiyon ki maalaon ne use aur bhi haseen bana dia tha..


intehaai dilkash nasheb o faraz wale jism ki wo maalik thi.. use dekh ke mere mann me kuch bhi bura nahi aaya.. wo thi hi pariyon jaisi.. dil me sajaaye jaane k layak, uski to puja ki jaa sakti thi.. uske baare me kuch sochna to door ki baat thi..

parr kuch mujhe rajkumari ko hawasi nazron se dekhte hue bhi mile. main use dekhne me kho gaya tha.. manorma khilakhila kar hassne lagi thi..

manorma:- hai naa chand ka tukda arjun

arjun:- manorma tumne to sahi se uski taree bhi nahi ki thi.. rajkumari indra to tumse bhi badh kr haseen hai.. main manorma ko chhedte hue bola.. mujhe ghusse se dekhne lagi. fir meri ankhon me shararat dekh kr wo hasne lagi..

manorma:- mujhse badhkar to is dunya me koi sunder hai hi nahi... abhi maine apne jalve dikhaye hi kahan han mere arjun.. jis din apne jalve dikhaongi na to tum baaki sabb ko bhul jaaoge...

arjun:- chal jhuti.... maine bhi manorma k andaz me kaha to manorma hassti hui mujhe tirchi ankh se dekhne lagi......

manorma;- arjun ye rang tum par bohut jachta hai.. jahan dushman na hon, wahan tum aise hi roop me rehna..... tumse badhkar bhi koi is dunya ne khubroo nahi hai arjun.
rajukumari khud me bohut kuch hogi, prr tumhare saamne wo zero hai... manorma ne to meri hi tareef kardi thi..... sach me hi mai aisa hi tha .. parr mujhe khud ko show karwane ki adat nahi thi.

rajkumari indra ko ek baar pure mann se dekhkar maine apni nazren hata li thi.. wo aise dekhe jaane k kaabil bhi nahi thi.. bata na maine k wo to puja karne layak thi.
dil me basaaye jane layak thi. lafangon ki tarha se taadte hue use dekhna achhi baat nahi thi.........

aur fir main bhi uske saamne koi sasta insan ban kar nahi aana chahta tha.. ek baar ke baad maine use firse nahi dekha tha. haan stafe par sabb ko dekhte hue sarsari ki nazar uspar bhi pad gai thi....

wo bhi meri hi tarha thi usne bhi mujhe dekh liya tha, meri aur mere ghode ki personality ko bhi parkh lia tha... lekin ek baar mujhe aur mere ghode ko ghor se dekhne k baad wo bhi apne dhayan se ho gai thi.... mujhe uska ye andaz bohut bhaya tha..


jenny bhi usi stage par maujud thi...... maine use aur usne mujhe dekh liye tha.. wo mujhe dekh bohut khush ho gai... uska baap bhi uske sath hi maujud tha to usne khud par kaabu paa lia tha.. abhi uske attitude bhi tha, aur sabb ke samne wo kisi hindustani ke sath muskurate hue baat nahi kar sakti thi.. agar karti bhi to apne level ke logon ke sath...... matlab k raja maharajaon ke saath..


race shuru hone me kuch hi deri baaki thi...



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rudra ko jungleee kabile wale apne nezon ki chhaon me jungle me maujud kisi jaga basi ek basti me le gaye..... rudra se kisi ne koi bhi baat nahi ki thi... bass use lejaa kar lakdee ke bane hue ek mazbut jhonpde me kaid kar dia tha......

rudra ko kaid hue 4 ghante beet gaye.. parr kisi ne bhi uski khair khabar nahi li thi....


jis jhonpde me rudra ko kaid kia gaya tha... wahan 4 kaidi aur bhi the.. un kaidiyon me 1 ladki thi, ek boodha aur do jawan mard the....


sab ko kaid kiye hue 5 din ho gaye the.. aur din me ek time hi sab ko khana dia jaata tha.. wo bhi khane layak nahi tha..

rudra ko andar aate dekh kar sab rudra ko dekhne lage.. rudra bhi sabko dekh ek side me baith gaya.. rudra sabb ko baari baari ghaur se dekhne laga...

sabke sab angrej the.. rudra english bhi jaanta tha.. budha angrez bola

budha:- hello young man do you know english

rudra:-Yes i can speak english.

budha:- thank GOD jo humen koi indian mile jo hamari samjh sake. BTW mera naam smith hai, ye meri beti helen hai.. wo nioclas aur wo jack...

budha smith rudra ko apna aur sabka intro dene laga..

rudra:- mera naam rudra hai aur mujhe aap sab se milkar bohut khushi hui.. aap sabb kab se yahan par kaid han.. aur kyun kaid han, aap sabb yahan kiss liye ayen.. itni door aise ilake me khud ko maut ke hawale karne...

smith hassne laga

smith:- young man tumne to sawalat ki bauchhad hi kardi.. sab sawalon ka jawab ek hi hai...... jab tak insan ke jism me saanse han, wo use kabhi chain nahi mil sakta.. uske pas daualt bhi ho to mazeed daualt ki hawas ho ya na ho.. lekin use agar kahi se pata chal jaaye k falaan jaga heeron ka ek zakheera maujud hai to wo khud ko rok nahi paata.. aisi hi kashish hoti hai khazane me ...... agar kahzane me geere hon to koi bhi fir khud ko rok nahi paata..

rudra smith ki baat par hassne laga......

rudra:- to fir aap ko wo heere nahi mile...

smith:- kaise milte, jab hum in junglon me dakhil hue the, to hum 50 the.. abb sirf 4 bache han...... mere behtreen dost maare gaye.. kuch k to bachhe bhi saath the wo bhi maare gaye..... kismat se hum hi bach sake the.. parr dekh manzil ke kareeb pohnch kar bhi hum safe nahi reh sake.....

rudra:- jin heeron ke dher k liye aap sabb khuwar ho rahe han.. guzri raat main unhi heeron ka bistar bana kar soya hon..... smith ki ankhon me dekhte hue rudra bola to sab ke sab uchhal pade... sab ke sab rudra ke paas ja pohche...

helen bhi naqahat zada chehra liye rudra ke saamne aa baithi.... 50 me se 4 bache the, fir bhi heeron ki kashish unke andar se khatam nahi hui thi..



smith:- tum sach keh rahe ho.. kahi tum us choti par se to nahi aaye.. jahan gidh numa parinde bhi rehte han.. wahan pohch kar to kisi ka zinda bach paana mumkin nahi hai.....

rudra:- agar aisi baat thi to fir aap sabb kyun whan jaana chahte the..

smith;- bataya to tha k sab kuch hote hue bhi khazane ka nasha dunya ke har nashe se badhkar hota hai. abhi ka dekh lo. marne wale han, firbhi heeron ka sunkar pichhla sabb bhul gaye... yahi to hai wo nasha, jiske peeche hum sabb pagal han.. tum nahi ho kya pagal.?

rudra firse hassne laga

rudra:- heere mere kiss kaam ke mr smith...... heere mujhe de hi kya sakte the.. mera pet to wo bhar nahi sakte.. mujhe chand saanse bhi to de nahi sakte.. un heeron ko bech kar agar mujhe paise milte han, dheron paise milte han to sochne ki baat hai k main un paison ka karunga kya..... mard ka bachha hon, kabhi bhuka nahi marunga, pet bharne ke liye kabhi kisi ka mohtaj nahi ho sakta main.. jisme himmat ho lalach na ho, jitna mil jaaye utne me hi khush rahe to bhagwan bhi uska kabhi sath nahi chhodta...... main bhi aisa hi hon.......

sabb rudra ko dekhne lage... rudra ki baten sahi thee. parr har kisi k liye nahi.. har koi rudra nahi ho sakta tha.. har kisi ki parwan chadhane k liye radhika nahi mili thi....

sab rudra ki baat par muttafiq hoke bhi muttafiq nahi the..

helen:- rudra ek heera to tum laaye hi hoge naa, bohut se heere maine dekh rakhe han, parr yahan maujud khazane me jo heere han, us jaise heere dunya me kisi ke paas nahi han, mujhe bhi lalach nahi ha heron ka bass dekhne ki chah ha

rudra helen ko afsos se dekhne laga.. 24 hours me ek time ka khana sabb ko mil raha tha fir bhi wo heeron ka lalach apne andar se khatam nahi kar paaye the.... akhri saanse chal rahi thee lekin fir bhi unhe matt nahi aayi thi.



rudra:- bataya to tha helen k mujhe heeron ki koi chah nahi thi, isi liye sabb wahi chhod aaya, agar kisi ki kismat me hue to wo unhe paa lega.. mujhe koi chah nahi thi main wahi chhod aaya...

sab fir kuch na kuch bolte rahe.. rudra bhi sab ko jawab deta raha...... kisi ko bhi rudra ka jawab achha nahi laga tha.. rudra ka bartaao sabko achha laga tha.. par rudra heero ko chhod kar aa gaya tha.. ye soch kar sabb ko rudra par afsos ho raha tha aru rudra ko sab par..

yahan sabki jaan k laale pade hue the .. khud ki jaan ki parwa na karte hue sab heeron k liye machal rahe the..



4 ghante beet gaye parr rudra ko kuch khaane ko nahi dia gaya tha.. rudra ne do din se kuch nahi khaaaya piya tha... rudra ko bhuk utni nahi lagi thi, jitni use piyas lagi thi...... lekin usme sehn shakti bhi to bohut badh kar thi......

raat k andhere hone ke 2 ghante baad sabko mitti ke bane hue payalon me junglee khuarak di gai.. sath me paani bhi tha...

rudra ne payala me khana dekha to uska dil kharab hone laga.. payale me chawal the, lekin aise pakaye gaye the k usme se baas aa rahi thi.. rudra ne chawal nahi khaaye, bass paani pi kar side me ho gaya.. sab chawalon par toot pade the..

rudra ke payale me maujud chawal sabne mil baant kar khaa liye .. rudra sab ko paglon ki tarha se khata hua dekh kar hairat me tha..

khane k baad

smith:- pehle din humne bhi ye chawal wapis kar diye the.. ye insano ke khane layak nahi han. lekin pet ki aag ko kamm karne k liye inhe pet me utarna pada

rudra bhi ye sabb samjhta tha.. parr abhi rudra majbur nahi hua tha..


agle din 10 baje k kareeb sabko bahar lejaaya jaane laga... 100 se zayada log rudra samet sabko apne ghere me liye ek jaga le jaane lage...


rudra sab ko hairat se dekhne laga... kal jab rudra ne sab ko dekha tha to sab normal huliye me the...... matlab

maltab mardon aur aurton ne apne chhupane wale hisson ko chhupa hua tha.. aur jism ke jo hisse dikh rahe the, wo noraml colour me the.. matlab original colour me the


parr aaj puri basti ne hi apne pure jism ko rangon se ranga hua tha.. sab ke sab aaj rangeen nazar aa rahe the.. koi khaas tyohaar tha shayad


rudra ko chhod baaki ke charon ye sabb dekh kar dehshat ki lapet me aa gaye the.. shayad wo sabb is sabb ka matlab samjhte the..


rudra un charon ko na dekh kar baaki sabko dekhne laga.. agar dekh leta to sabke chehron par dehshat dekh kar wo unse poochhta zarur..



kuch der me sab ek jaga pohnch gaye. rudra wahan ka manzar dekh kar heran reh gaya. ek bohut badi moorti bani hui thi...ajeeb si shakal me thi wo moorti

rudra apne dharam baare bhi sab gyaan rakhta tha, jaisi moorti usne dekhi thi, rudra jaan gaya k in logon ka apna hi koi dharam hai..

whan zameen me 5 lakdee ke mote tane gadhe hue the..... rudra samet sabko un tanon se bandh dia gaya..



rudra chahta to khud ko azaad karwa sakta tha, aur kaiyon ko maar kar yahan se khisak sakta tha.. lekin wo dekhna chahta tha wo sab unke sath karne kya wale han..

rudra ne abb apne kaidi sathiyon ko dekhna shuru kar dia... sabko dekh kar rudra jaan gaya k sab dehshat me han...

rudra:- mr smith tum dare hue kyun ho

smith rudra ko hairat se nahi dekh paaya.. wo to bass iltijaai nazron se rudra ko dekhne laga.. wo fir rudra se bola to uski awaz bohut hi dheemi thi, dehshat ke bayas uski awaz hi nahi nikal paa rahi thi..

smith:- rudra humen bacha lo, ye sabb hamari bali dene wale han..

smith ki baat sunkar rudra ke kaan khade ho gaye..

rudra ne baari baari sabko dekha aur fir

rudra:- mr smith mujhse wada karo k agar main tum sabb ko yahan se zinda nikal kar le jaao to tum sabb khazane ko bhul kar wapis apni dunya me laut jaaoge..

smith:- rudra wo to humne kabse decide kar lia hai,....pls mujhe aur mere sathiyon ko bacha lo... mujhe tum dare hue nahi lag rahe.. tum zarur kuch kar sakte ho.


smith ki baat sunkar k sabki bali di jaane wali hai to rudra insano ko bali chadte hue kaise dekh sakta tha..

wo moka talash karne laga.. fir rudra ne kisi se koi baat nahi ki..kuch der me ek aurat aur ek sarkar saamne bane hye lakdee ke hi ek bade takht par aa khade hue..

mard ghaliban sardar tha is kabile ka aur aurat uski patni thi.... saari basti wale dono ko dekh kar shor machane lage.....



sardar ne hath utha kar sabko khamosh rehne ka ishara kiya to sab ekdumm se khamosh ho gaye....... badi respect thi sardar ki....... sab aise shaant hue jaise yahan par koi maujud hi na ho......

sardar sab ko dekhne laga..... fir wo hume dekh bolne laa

sardar:- tum sabb ne yahan aa kar hamare niyomo ko toda hai.... yahan bahar se aane wala aaj tak koi bhi zinda laut kar nahi gaya....... aur khaas kar hamari devi ke khazane ko mele nazron se dekhne wale ko to tum kabhi bhi nahi chhodte, aaj tum sabb ki bali di jaayegi.. jisse hamari devi khush ho jaaye aur hamare kabile par uski rehmaton ki barsat hone lagegi....

basti ke logon ko dekhte hue

sardar:- bali dene ka intezam kiya jaaaaaaaye

smith and party hindi nahi jaanti thi, lekin sardar ke andaz se sabb samjh gaye.. wo charo chillane lage....... mujhe kuch karne k liye bolne lage



basti ke log hamare paas pohnche aur ek ek karke sab ko kholne lage..... ek ek ke seene parr kai kai mazbut lakdee ke bane hue teze tike the.. smith aur dusre hilne lage to teze unke seeeno me gadne lage...


charon bhayankar chillane lage..... helen ki halat sabse zayada kharab thi... wo dehshat me mubtala ho kar sab ko dekhte hue chillane lagi.. use apni maut jo dikh gai thi......
Both updates are too good. Keep posting brother.
 
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asadjee

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Abhi zindigi ke kuch rang padhna shuru kiya h dekhte h usme kya h
thanks bhai....... kuch rang zindagi ke aise bhi meri pehli sory thi.. jisme aapko kuch khamiyan bhi nazar aayengi shru me.. baaki sab aapko yes milega
 
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asadjee

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Wahhh ab dekhte hai arjun race ko kaise jitata hai. Aur indra see baat kaise suru hoti hai.
Aur idhar apna rudhra in sb ko kaise bachata hai sath me ye bhi dekhna hai bachne ke baad wo sb wapas jate hai ya fir se jeeto kee liye nikal padte hai.
Mast asadjee ek no. Bhai.
thanks bhai..!!
haan ye to next update me hi pata chalega k arjun race me kaisa rehta hai.. aur indra se relation kaise aage badhta hai...
rudra bhi critical situarion me phansa hua hai.. dekhte han heeron ke lalchi insan zinda bach paate han ya nahi
 
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