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Update 7


itna bol kar anita tai ne unke pair chuye aur waha se bahar nikal gayi....hamesha tarwade gaon ke bhale ke liye jeene wali anita tai ke man main is samay aise hi kisi ke bare main vichar chalu tha....andhere main jaldi jaldi pair dalte huye wo chal rahi thi....achanak unko laga ke koi unke piche hai....unhone do pal ruk kar dekhne ki koshish ki lekin koi nahi dikha

wo fir se aage badhne lagi lakin koi to tha jo unka picha kiye ja raha tha..........
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anita tai ka bura chahne wale kai log the....usna bura karne ke liye kai log tayar baithe the...aise kai logo ko unhone khud ne thik kiya tha..unhi main koi ekhada usne ghabrane ke liye ye sab kar raha hai aisa samajh kar anita tai aage badh rahi thi..aur sath hi sath unke jo banda tha wo bhi unhi ki speed se aage badh raha tha...anita tai ek jagah jakar ruki..lekin piche se kadmo ka awaz ab bhi aa raha tha....kareeb kareeb aur kareeb ..unke ekdum paas main aakar wo awaz ruki

anita tai ko apne ekdum paas main koi hai is baat ki bhanak lag gayi thi..unke gardan par ke baal tight ho gaye the..rongte khade ho gaye the...reed ki haddi mud gayi thi...dil ki dhadkane tezz ho gayi thi ..shabd gale main hi atak gaye the...jor se cheekhne ke liye unhone apna mu khola lekin unki cheekh unke gale main hi atak gayi..unki peeth se ek bada sa chura unke sharir ke aarpaar ho gaya tha..us chure ke thande dhaardar sparsh unke manko ko thodte huye nikal gaya...anitatai piche mudi...samne ke vyakti ne wo chuka bahar kheecha aur fir se ek baar jor dar jhatke ke sath wo unke pet main ghusa diya..ghusata hi raha aur anita tai apne pran tyag kar jameen par gir padi....
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shweta ki maut dekh kar abhi tarwade gaon ko ek hafta bhi nahi beeta tha ke unki pyari anitatai ki maut unhe dekhne pad gayi

shweta ki maut se shayad ki kisi ko dukh hua tha lekin anita tai ki maut se pure gaon main hahakar mach gaya tha..

'tarwade' gaon main ek prakar ka sannata chaya hua tha....gaon ke bahar jo bhi schools thi usne apne aap hi chuttiya mil gayi thi...gaon main ka vyahar..vyapar thanda ho gaya tha....har ek insan ek dusre ki or shak bhari nigaho se dekhta tha..gaon main ka koi bhi lodge...hotel... restaurent in jagaho par koi bhi naya insan dikhte hi uski infoemation police station ko di jaye iski vyasta unlogo ne ki thi....gaon main ke sunsan ilake, gaon ke bahar ke khet.... tuti imarate in jagaho par jane ke liye gaon walo ko rok diya gaya tha..... gaon mainj naya bina pehchan ka koi insan dekhne main nahi aaya tha...gaon ke bahar ki sabhi jagah chan mar li gayi thi lekin kisi ke rehne ka koi namo nishan nahi mil paya tha.....

"kon hoga ye khuni?? motive kya hoga uska??? huye huye khuno main dono ka bhi ek dusre se koi sambandh nahi tha?? khuni sach main koi sirfira hoga kya??polico ke dimag main aise kai sawal ghoom rahe the lekin unke jawab unhe nahi mil pa rahe the

jile ke wrather forcast ke andaj se aane wale agkle kuch din barish ki sambhavnaye thi aur uske hisab se vatavaran bhi nirman ho gaya tha....din bhar badal ghire rehne se hawa main ek prakar ki nami faili huyi thi... hawa na hoke bhi ek thandi lehar thi....sara kala aasman tarwade gaon par girne ke liye tayar tha..............
Omg aakhir khooni ne next target ko bhi maar dala...
Poor Anita tai:(

hmm sayad anita tai ko isliye maara kyunki woh shweta ke gharwalo ko madad kar rahin thi maybe..... hone ko toh kuch bhi ho sakta hain....
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill.. :applause:
 

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Update 9


"sorry mr.jhon par isse jada jaan kari hamare paas bhi nahi hai" ab pawar ka jhon main ka intrest chala gaya tha aur wo fir se apne kaam main lag gaye the

"alright mera kaam tha puchna baki jaankari kaha se aur kaisi nikalni hai mujhe ache se pata hai chalta hu main"

itna bol kar jhon waha se utha aure apne raste nikal gaya...........
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"arre arre bhausahebv ye kya sun rahe hai hum" nanasaheb tantanate huye bhausaheb ke drawing room main dakhil huye.
nanasaheb ye bhausaheb ke chate bhai lekin unke bilkul opposite....bhausaheb ka swabhav ekdum shant..mitbhashi...man milau....iske ulat nanasaheb garam dimag ke aage piche ka vichar na karte huye jo sahi laga wo karne wale

swabhav ke isi farak k,i wajah se bhausaheb maa-baap aur ab sare gaon ke chahite iske ulat nanasaheb na chahte huye bhi sabke tiraskar ke parta rahe.....nanasaheb bachpan se hi jua, daaru cigarate ke chakkar main sabse door hote rahe aur bhausaheb jimmedariya sambhalte huye aaj gaon main ke ek sammanit vyakti bane

unke pitaji ke maut ke baad in dono bhaiyo ke beech ka jhagda sare gaon ke samne aa gaya tha. pitaji ne apni sari jaydad ka batwara dono bhaiyo main eksa kiya tha lekin ek limited rakkam ke kharche ke baad nanasaheb ko bhausaheb ki permission ke liye bandhankarak kiya tha.... uske baad nanasaheb aur bhausaheb ke beech ka jhagda badhta hi gaya...un dono main kabhi nahi jami aur isi wajah se nanasaheb unse alag hokar dusri haweli main rehne chale gaye.....

"arre nanu.. shanti rakho...baitho" bhausaheb apne ghar ke drawing room main gaon ke dusre sammanit vyaktiyo ke sath charcha main magn the aur nanasaheb ko aise tantanate huye aane se unhe bhari embarassment jhelni padi...."kya hua hai wo jara shanti se bataoge..?"

"bhausaheb maine suna hai ke aap hamari gaon ke dakshin bhag ki 25 acre jamin bhumihino ko dene wale ho?" nanasaheb khade khade hi bol rahe the.

"ha..tumne jo suna wo sahi hai" bhausaheb

"are ye sab kya tumhare akele ka hai kya?? mujhe puchna jaruri samajhte ho ke nahi?? arre main us jamin par ek factory lagane wala hu ye bataya tha na maine tumhe.." nanasaheb

"arre bas 25 acre ka ek tukda hi to de raha hu na baju main itni sari jamin khali padi hai wo le lo na.." bhausaheb

"nahi...ye main nahi hone dunga...mera virodh hai is baat ho......mujhe wo puri jamin chahiye..company wo waisi jaban di hai maine!" nanaasaheb

"ha to maine bhi un bhumihino ko apni jaban di hai nanasaheb" bhausaheb

"arre puchta kon hai teri jaban ko us jamin ka har ek acre mere liye mahatvapurn hai.....aur agar jamin batne ki itni hi haus hai na to apna ye ghar dede par us jamin ki or dekhna bhi mat!" nanasaheb

"dekh nanu wo jamin nadi ke paas haigaareeb logo ko agar wo jamin mil gayi to unki pani ki samasya hal ho jayegi maine apni jaban di hai aur ab main piche nahi hat sakta" bhausaheb

"thik hai to fir...aajtak bada bhai ho isiliye tumhari har baat sun ke li lekin ab naahi maine bhi dekta hu ke us jamin par factory kaise nahi banti" nanasaheb

"agar meri jaan chali jaye to bhi chalega lekin apni jaban khali nahi jane dunga main" bhausaheb ko ab gussa aane laga tha

"thik hai...agar tumhari lash pe hi is factory ki neev likhi hai to mujhe bhi koi harkaat nahi hai" itna bol kar nanasaheb jaise aaye the waise hi tantanate huye nikal gaye....................
are kaisa aadmi hain yeh... bade bhai ko hi aise dhamkata hain kya..
itna lobh bhi kya karna.... kahin antim waqt pe do gaz jamin hi naa mile toh isko....
yeh joh khoon ho rahen hain.... kahin iske piche iska hath toh nahin... kya pata...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update sir great going
 

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Update 10


"agar meri jaan chali jaye to bhi chalega lekin apni jaban khali nahi jane dunga main" bhausaheb ko ab gussa aane laga tha

"thik hai...agar tumhari lash pe hi is factory ki neev likhi hai to mujhe bhi koi harkaat nahi hai" itna bol kar nanasaheb jaise aaye the waise hi tantanate huye nikal gaye....................
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'tarwade' gaon ke ek saste se saste hotel main jhon ne ek room leli thiaur jeb ki halat dekh kar to use lag raha tha ki wo hafte bhar se jyada waha reh nahi sakta...usko jaldi se jaldi kuch hulchal karna jaruri tha....

apne hath main ki cigarate ke kash khichte huye jhon sabhi ghatnao ka suru se vichar kar raha tha....

'jaha wo aadmi bus main ghusa tha wo jagah bastoi se waise to door hi hai..matlab wo aadmi waha kisi gadi se aaya tha ya fir usne waha apni hi gadi layi ho...

agar wo banda guneh gar hua aur khoon karne ke hetu se hi aaya hoga to waha tak pahuchne ke liye wo kisi pe dependent nahi raha hoga ya kisi se lift nahi mangi hogi matlab wo khud ki hi gadi se waha aaya hoga aur agar aisa hai to usne ho na ho apni gadi wahi kahi chupayi hogi'

jhon jaldi hi apni jagah se utha..tarapur exit par jab jhon pahucha tab bara baj chuke the..jhaon ne aajubaju main ek najar daudayi lekin aaspaas basti kahi nahi thi bas lambi lambi ghas hi badhi huyi thi...jhon ne andaje se aaspaas maon dhundne ki surwat ki....lekin ek dedh ghante baad bhi kahi kuch nahi mila..kareeb 1 kilometer ander jane ke baad jhon ko raste ke sside se car ke tyres ke nishan dikhe...jhon un nishano ka picha karte huye ghas main ghusa to ek jagah par ghas dabi huyi lag rahi thi aur ho na ho waha ekhadi car aakar gayi thi waha ki ghas puri tarah dab gayi thi jaise koi bhari gadi kafi samay tak waha khadi ho....

"shayad yahi wo jagah hai jaha us aadmi ne apni car chipayi thi" wild guess lekin baat sochne layak thi aur jhon ko apne intincts par pura bharosa tha...

"matlab hua aisa hoga ki us gunehgar ne raste ke side main band padi huyi gadi dekhi hogi aur apni car yaha is ghas main lakar chipa di aur us baand car ke paas khada ho gaya...bus driver ko aisa laga ki usi ki gadi hai aur isi baat ka fayda lekar wo bus main chadha....jaha bus band huyi waha kisi karan se us ladki ko lekar gaya aur uska khoon kiya...fir wapas yaha aaya aur apni gadi lekar chala gaya.....lekin kaha??jaha se aaya tha waha?? ya jaha ja raha tha waha???" jhon apne aap se hi baat kiiye ja raha tha..

jhon ne fir se ek baar dabe huye ghas ka nirakshan chalu kiya tyre marks jis disha se ander aaye the usi disha se bahar gaye the.."matlab aisa ki gunehgar taraapur se tarwade ya aage kahi ja raha tha aur use band gadi dikhi to usne apni gadi reverse lekar yaha ghar main chupayi isiliye tyre markas baye or se ander gaye hai.

gadi ki direction thi tarapur ki or....aur usi disha main gadi reverse main bahar nikli hai...matlab gadi ki disha ab bhi tarapur ki or haiiska matlab aisa ho sakta hai ke wo jidhar se aaya thausi or gaya tha.."

basss...isse jyada jhon ko kuch nahi mila.....usne kuch saboot dhundne ki koshish ki lekin jise clue kaha ja sake aisa use kuch nahi mila...

"chalo aaj ka din waste to nahi hua jaha se surwat ho sake aisa kuch mila to hai" aisa sochte huye jhon wpas aane ke liye ravana ho gaya........
I knew...... yeh John hi is case ko solve karega......
Brilliant update sir ji great going.....
 

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Update 13

apne hath main ki khatam hoti cigarette se chatke se jhon hosh main aaya "dolly......yesss...!! dolly is kaam main meri madad kar sakti hai.." hath main ka cigarette fek kar jhon uth gaya............
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"pawar sir kya main aapka fax machine use kar sakta hu?? matlab is chaku e bbare main aur jyada janne ke liye hi use karinga" aur pawar ke jawab ki rah dekhe bina jhon ne apne hath main ka chaku ka sketch fax machine main sarkaya ait usne side main tuti huyi pencil se aur info chahiye aisa likh kar dolly ko fax kar diya.....

gaon ki panchayat.. thode patrakar...kuch nayi news na milne ki wajah se juni bate khod kar breaking news banane wale channel ke kuch log inke sawal se inspector pawar pareshan ho gaye the koi naya surag hath nahi lag raha tha aur isi samay jhon ne unko mil kar use mile huye suragoo ke bare main bataya usne us jagah leke gaya aur tyre ke nishan wagaire dikhaye aur uske piche ka tark bhi samjhaya...

information jyada kaam ki to nahi thi aur uspar se koi surag bhi hath main nahi lag raha thalekin in patrakar logo ko thoda hi sahi lekin masala pawar ko mil gaya tha aur kuch waqt ke liye hi sahi media ka mu band ho gaya tha isiliye inspector pawar ne bhi apni paas ki kuch info jhon ko di thi..


khoon ke waqt ki jakhmo ko dekhte huye intellegence ne ek chaku ka sketch banaya tha aur kuch info main se ek pawar ne wo chaku ka sketch jhon ko dikhaya tha ...

pichle 3 mahino se dolly jhon se baat nahi kar rahi thi ya uske sath nahi thi lekin is chaku ke sketch ko dekhte hi dolly uski madad kari aisa pura vishas jho ko tha

is sketch ki madad se dolly internet se us chaku ki aur jyada info nikal sakegi aisa use lag raha tha aur isi wajah se jyada kuch soche bagaitr jhon ne wo sketch dolly ko bhej diya tha.............dolly is waqt apne office main apne kaam main vyast thi tabhi bagal main rakhe fac machine main incoming fax ke akshar dikhai diye.

dolly ne accept ka button dabayaaur fax ka paper roll ghumne laga aur us fax paper par dikhne wale ajeeb se chure ko dekh kar dolly ke mathe par shikan aa gayi usme wo paper ache se dekha aur fir uski najar ek side likhe huye jhon ke aksharo par gayi...

dolly ne wo paper table ki side rakh diya aur wo apne kaam main fir magna ho gayi....sham ko ghar ke liye nikalte waqt dolly ni najar fir se us fax par padi usme ek baar fir se us paper ko ache se dekha...

"kyu chahiye usko info? itne dino baad kahi jhon ko firse koi case to nahi mil gaya?"

dolly ke man main kaisare sawal chal rahe the usne fax kaha se aaya hai janne ke liye fax number dekha aur fir telephone directory main khojne lagi

"tarwade.." dhundte dhundte use us gaon ka code pata chal gaya aur kuch hi palo main paper main aayi huyi aur news channel par dikhayi huyi 2 khoono ki nwes use yaad aa gayi

usne ek lambi saas chodi aur chaku churo ke bare main batane wali websites dhoondne lagi...kafi samay dhondne ke baad use ek website par us chure ke bare main pata chala...bilkul wahi nakshi wahi aakar....

dolly ne ek kora paper uthaya aur pencil se us paper par website par ka info likhne lagi........
Hmm dolly ne pata toh kar liya.... kya woh iski jaankari degi Jhon ko....
Aakhir raaz kya hain ush chure ka aur kaatil ko kaise mili....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update sir ji.... Great going :applause::applause::applause:
 

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Wow too good yal
kahani starting hi thrill se...
Brilliant update sir.... Great going..

Ha ha ha ha ha dono ki aisi ki taisi ho gayi.... :lotpot:

to woh ajnabee ne ush ladki ko maar ke gayab ho gaya wahan se.... par maara kyun..... yeh bhi ek paheli hi hain....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update sir ji... Great going :applause:

I think..... katil psycho hain...
Let's see.. pawar ish case mein kuch clue dhund paate hain ki nahin......
Brilliant update sir.......

poor John :(
hmm..... sayad yeh kuch madad kar de ish case ki silsile mein pawar ko....
Brilliant update sir ji great going

toh marne wali ka naam shweta thi........ Oh toh ush psycho killer ko bas maarne se matlab tha naa ki shweta ki paise ya gahne se..... kahin shweta joh karti thi ush wajah se toh nahin maari gayi... ya mamla kuch aur hai...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update sir great going

Oh toh pre planning karke katal kiya gaya tha .
Yeh kya..... Kahin Anita ke piche woh khooni to nahin......
Brilliant update sir great going

Omg aakhir khooni ne next target ko bhi maar dala...
Poor Anita tai:(

hmm sayad anita tai ko isliye maara kyunki woh shweta ke gharwalo ko madad kar rahin thi maybe..... hone ko toh kuch bhi ho sakta hain....
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill.. :applause:

are kaisa aadmi hain yeh... bade bhai ko hi aise dhamkata hain kya..
itna lobh bhi kya karna.... kahin antim waqt pe do gaz jamin hi naa mile toh isko....
yeh joh khoon ho rahen hain.... kahin iske piche iska hath toh nahin... kya pata...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update sir great going

I knew...... yeh John hi is case ko solve karega......
Brilliant update sir ji great going.....

Hmm dolly ne pata toh kar liya.... kya woh iski jaankari degi Jhon ko....
Aakhir raaz kya hain ush chure ka aur kaatil ko kaise mili....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update sir ji.... Great going :applause::applause::applause:

in behtarin reviews ke liye aap ka bohot shukriya :thanks:
 

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