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Update 11
basss...isse jyada jhon ko kuch nahi mila.....usne kuch saboot dhundne ki koshish ki lekin jise clue kaha ja sake aisa use kuch nahi mila...
"chalo aaj ka din waste to nahi hua jaha se surwat ho sake aisa kuch mila to hai" aisa sochte huye jhon wpas aane ke liye ravana ho gaya........
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"shinde us hathiyar ke bare main aur kuch pata chala kya" pawar sahab doctor ke diye huye postmortem report ko padhne ke baad khoon ke liye use kiye huye chure ke sketch ko dekhte huye bole.... 9 inch lamba ek baju se nishani wale chure ke ek side nakshikaam to dusri or do shero ki drawing bani huyi thi aur apni nok par ekside muda hua aisa wo vichitra aakar ka chura tha...
"matlab shinde dekho aise vichitra aakar ka chira kiske paas ho sakta hai, chiken wala, bhangarwala ke hotelwala??? aisa chura sala kon vaparta hoga?? acha wo chodo us raat ke baad gaon main naya kon kon aaya hai dekha kya tumne?? pawar
"ha sir, gaon ki jamin ke bare main charcha karne ke liye nanasaheb ke yaha 4-5 log aaye the aur bhausaheb ke yaha bhi logo ka aana jana chalta hi hai baki naya aur koi nahi aaya ...ha wo ek detective jhon ayaa tha anitatai ke murder ke baad" shinde ne apni baat puri ki
"detective jhon, mujhe wo aadmi kuch sahi nahi laaga....achanak aaya khuno ke bare main puchne laga" pawar kuch sochte huye bole
"pan sir aapne uske sare paper check kiye na goverment ke hi hai na" shinde
"arre shinde aise chappan paper bahar banakar mil jate hai, kya proof hai ke wo sahi hai, ek kaam karo kal leke aao usko yaha" pawar ne apni jagah se uthte huye kaha
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jhon apne room ki balcony main baitha dhalte huye suraj ko dekh raha tha. usne jeb main se cigarete ka packet nikala aur usme ek najar dali... aander akhri 4 cigaretes bachi huyi thi...jhon ne packet band kar ke jeb main rakh kiya aur fir ander room main jakar apne liye coffee banayi aur wapis bahar balcony main aakar baitha.....coffee ke do kadak ghoot gale ke niche utarne ke baad bhi uski cgarete ki talab nahi ja rahi thi aur akhir kar usne ek cigarette nikal kar jalayi aur ek lamba kash khicha aur kurchi main aaram, se pasar kar baith gaya...
din ba din in khuno ke bare main baate charo taraf aag ki tarah fail rahi thi..aur fichle kuch dino main kuch interesting na hone ki wajah faltu hone ke baad bhi media is baad klo khub uchal rahi thi
'tarwade gaon main sannata'
'tarwade gaon main maut ka aatank'
'tarwade gaon main ghum raha hai ek khuni darinda'
'tarwade gaon hua pagal khuni ka shikar'
ye aur in jaisi aneko 'breaking news' dinbhar tv par chal rahi thi aur tarwade gaon ka naam har jagah pahucha rahi thi
"is case ko aisi hi publicity milni chahiye...iske liye ek do khun aur ho gaye to harkat nahi iski publicity ka fayda utha kar main fir se ek nayi surwat kar sakta hu"jhon khud se hi bate kar raha tha aur dhalte suraj ko dekhte huye cigarette ka dhua asman main chad raha tha.......inspector pawar se jab tak koi info nahi milti tab tak kaam aage badhana mushkil hai ye baat wi janta tha.....uske paas se info nikalne ke liye use gajar dikhana padega....aapki mdad jaruri hai ye baat use samjhani hogi tabhi wo kuch batayega aisa ek halka sa khayal jhon ke dimag main aaya.......aur sochte sochte jhon ka man atit ki gehraiyo main kho gaya..................
basss...isse jyada jhon ko kuch nahi mila.....usne kuch saboot dhundne ki koshish ki lekin jise clue kaha ja sake aisa use kuch nahi mila...
"chalo aaj ka din waste to nahi hua jaha se surwat ho sake aisa kuch mila to hai" aisa sochte huye jhon wpas aane ke liye ravana ho gaya........
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"shinde us hathiyar ke bare main aur kuch pata chala kya" pawar sahab doctor ke diye huye postmortem report ko padhne ke baad khoon ke liye use kiye huye chure ke sketch ko dekhte huye bole.... 9 inch lamba ek baju se nishani wale chure ke ek side nakshikaam to dusri or do shero ki drawing bani huyi thi aur apni nok par ekside muda hua aisa wo vichitra aakar ka chura tha...
"matlab shinde dekho aise vichitra aakar ka chira kiske paas ho sakta hai, chiken wala, bhangarwala ke hotelwala??? aisa chura sala kon vaparta hoga?? acha wo chodo us raat ke baad gaon main naya kon kon aaya hai dekha kya tumne?? pawar
"ha sir, gaon ki jamin ke bare main charcha karne ke liye nanasaheb ke yaha 4-5 log aaye the aur bhausaheb ke yaha bhi logo ka aana jana chalta hi hai baki naya aur koi nahi aaya ...ha wo ek detective jhon ayaa tha anitatai ke murder ke baad" shinde ne apni baat puri ki
"detective jhon, mujhe wo aadmi kuch sahi nahi laaga....achanak aaya khuno ke bare main puchne laga" pawar kuch sochte huye bole
"pan sir aapne uske sare paper check kiye na goverment ke hi hai na" shinde
"arre shinde aise chappan paper bahar banakar mil jate hai, kya proof hai ke wo sahi hai, ek kaam karo kal leke aao usko yaha" pawar ne apni jagah se uthte huye kaha
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jhon apne room ki balcony main baitha dhalte huye suraj ko dekh raha tha. usne jeb main se cigarete ka packet nikala aur usme ek najar dali... aander akhri 4 cigaretes bachi huyi thi...jhon ne packet band kar ke jeb main rakh kiya aur fir ander room main jakar apne liye coffee banayi aur wapis bahar balcony main aakar baitha.....coffee ke do kadak ghoot gale ke niche utarne ke baad bhi uski cgarete ki talab nahi ja rahi thi aur akhir kar usne ek cigarette nikal kar jalayi aur ek lamba kash khicha aur kurchi main aaram, se pasar kar baith gaya...
din ba din in khuno ke bare main baate charo taraf aag ki tarah fail rahi thi..aur fichle kuch dino main kuch interesting na hone ki wajah faltu hone ke baad bhi media is baad klo khub uchal rahi thi
'tarwade gaon main sannata'
'tarwade gaon main maut ka aatank'
'tarwade gaon main ghum raha hai ek khuni darinda'
'tarwade gaon hua pagal khuni ka shikar'
ye aur in jaisi aneko 'breaking news' dinbhar tv par chal rahi thi aur tarwade gaon ka naam har jagah pahucha rahi thi
"is case ko aisi hi publicity milni chahiye...iske liye ek do khun aur ho gaye to harkat nahi iski publicity ka fayda utha kar main fir se ek nayi surwat kar sakta hu"jhon khud se hi bate kar raha tha aur dhalte suraj ko dekhte huye cigarette ka dhua asman main chad raha tha.......inspector pawar se jab tak koi info nahi milti tab tak kaam aage badhana mushkil hai ye baat wi janta tha.....uske paas se info nikalne ke liye use gajar dikhana padega....aapki mdad jaruri hai ye baat use samjhani hogi tabhi wo kuch batayega aisa ek halka sa khayal jhon ke dimag main aaya.......aur sochte sochte jhon ka man atit ki gehraiyo main kho gaya..................
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Update 12
"is case ko aisi hi publicity milni chahiye...iske liye ek do khun aur ho gaye to harkat nahi iski publicity ka fayda utha kar main fir se ek nayi surwat kar sakta hu"jhon khud se hi bate kar raha tha aur dhalte suraj ko dekhte huye cigarette ka dhua asman main chad raha tha.......inspector pawar se jab tak koi info nahi milti tab tak kaam aage badhana mushkil hai ye baat wi janta tha.....uske paas se info nikalne ke liye use gajar dikhana padega....aapki mdad jaruri hai ye baat use samjhani hogi tabhi wo kuch batayega aisa ek halka sa khayal jhon ke dimag main aaya.......aur sochte sochte jhon ka man atit ki gehraiyo main kho gaya..................
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jhon dolly le alishan arieconditioned bedroom main chat ki or mu karke leta hua tha uske ek hath par sar rakh kar dolly soyi huyi thi uski gori khuli peeth par se uske lambe kale ghane baal bikhre huye the neend main hi jhon ne dolly ke sar ke niche se apna hath nikal liya .
jhon ke hath hilane se dolly ne halki si aankhen kholi...jhon ke sath bitaye huye pichle do ghante dolly ke liye param sukh tha....usne ek baar pyaar se jhon ki or dekha..jhon gehri neend main tha..jhon ko jaga kar fir ek baar usi sukh ki anubhuti lene ki tivra icha dolly ke man main aayi lekin fir usne wo baat dimag se nikal di aur bed par se uth ke wardrobe main lage bade se aaine main apne roop ko niharne lagi....uski har ada pe najuk sharir pe uski ek hasi ke uske lambe balo ke chehre ke bhole pan ke kai diwane the lekin dolly ko pasand aaya tha wo jhon ka roop uski halki dadhi, majboot hath aur confidence se bhara hua chehra...
dophar ki kadak dhoop main bahar jane se acha ghar par hi pizza mangwa ke jhon ke sath beer pite huye movie dekhne ka dolly ka plan tha...usne ek halke gulabi rang ke ribbon se apne baal bandhe aur kamre main charo or pade huye apne kapde uthaye aur garam pani se shower lene ke liye wo bathroom main gayi...karib 1 ghante se jab wo bahar aayi to jhon ko dekh kar uske dimag pe sal pad gayi
"kaha ja rahe jo jhon?"
"bas abhi ek do ghante main jake aata hu. mrs parkaar ka phone aaya tha unko unke kaam ke reports chahiye abhi"
"but jhon....!"
"dolly..tumko pata hai na ke wo buddhi kitni kitkit karti hai !! ek to pehle hi clints kam...jo hai unhe to sambhalna chahiye na!"
"par jhon tum ye sab chodke ke koi office kyu nahi jion kar lete? I really love you and I want to get marrid with you!"
"dolly please abhi nahi..."
"jhon I know tumhe detective jobs pasand hai fir tum thomson agency join karo na unka client base bhi kafi acha hai aur regular paise to bhi milenge"
"kon? wo harami thomson? dolly please.. apni ye faltu bate apne paas rakho aur meri professional life main please bich bich main mat karo"
"tumhari life?? tumhari life meri life nahi hai??"
"mere kehne ka wo matlab nahi tha"
"jhon harami is baat ko lekar pehle bhi kafi behas huyi hai aur aage bhi hoti rahengi ..jhon tumhe kisi ek ko chunna hoga "
"dolly please abhi nahi mujhe bohot kaam hai hum is bare main sham ko baat karenge"
"nahi sham ko nahi jo hoga abhi hoga"
"thik hai to fir dolly sunlo main apna profession kisi ke liye bhi nahi chod sakta.."
ek lambi saas lekar jhon waha se nikal aaya dolly ko chod kar......dolly wahi khadi thi uski aankhon main se pani pehne laga aur usne waha rakhe sofe ko apne aap ko saup diya..........
apne hath main ki khatam hoti cigarette se chatke se jhon hosh main aaya "dolly......yesss...!! dolly is kaam main meri madad kar sakti hai.." hath main ka cigarette fek kar jhon uth gaya............
"is case ko aisi hi publicity milni chahiye...iske liye ek do khun aur ho gaye to harkat nahi iski publicity ka fayda utha kar main fir se ek nayi surwat kar sakta hu"jhon khud se hi bate kar raha tha aur dhalte suraj ko dekhte huye cigarette ka dhua asman main chad raha tha.......inspector pawar se jab tak koi info nahi milti tab tak kaam aage badhana mushkil hai ye baat wi janta tha.....uske paas se info nikalne ke liye use gajar dikhana padega....aapki mdad jaruri hai ye baat use samjhani hogi tabhi wo kuch batayega aisa ek halka sa khayal jhon ke dimag main aaya.......aur sochte sochte jhon ka man atit ki gehraiyo main kho gaya..................
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jhon dolly le alishan arieconditioned bedroom main chat ki or mu karke leta hua tha uske ek hath par sar rakh kar dolly soyi huyi thi uski gori khuli peeth par se uske lambe kale ghane baal bikhre huye the neend main hi jhon ne dolly ke sar ke niche se apna hath nikal liya .
jhon ke hath hilane se dolly ne halki si aankhen kholi...jhon ke sath bitaye huye pichle do ghante dolly ke liye param sukh tha....usne ek baar pyaar se jhon ki or dekha..jhon gehri neend main tha..jhon ko jaga kar fir ek baar usi sukh ki anubhuti lene ki tivra icha dolly ke man main aayi lekin fir usne wo baat dimag se nikal di aur bed par se uth ke wardrobe main lage bade se aaine main apne roop ko niharne lagi....uski har ada pe najuk sharir pe uski ek hasi ke uske lambe balo ke chehre ke bhole pan ke kai diwane the lekin dolly ko pasand aaya tha wo jhon ka roop uski halki dadhi, majboot hath aur confidence se bhara hua chehra...
dophar ki kadak dhoop main bahar jane se acha ghar par hi pizza mangwa ke jhon ke sath beer pite huye movie dekhne ka dolly ka plan tha...usne ek halke gulabi rang ke ribbon se apne baal bandhe aur kamre main charo or pade huye apne kapde uthaye aur garam pani se shower lene ke liye wo bathroom main gayi...karib 1 ghante se jab wo bahar aayi to jhon ko dekh kar uske dimag pe sal pad gayi
"kaha ja rahe jo jhon?"
"bas abhi ek do ghante main jake aata hu. mrs parkaar ka phone aaya tha unko unke kaam ke reports chahiye abhi"
"but jhon....!"
"dolly..tumko pata hai na ke wo buddhi kitni kitkit karti hai !! ek to pehle hi clints kam...jo hai unhe to sambhalna chahiye na!"
"par jhon tum ye sab chodke ke koi office kyu nahi jion kar lete? I really love you and I want to get marrid with you!"
"dolly please abhi nahi..."
"jhon I know tumhe detective jobs pasand hai fir tum thomson agency join karo na unka client base bhi kafi acha hai aur regular paise to bhi milenge"
"kon? wo harami thomson? dolly please.. apni ye faltu bate apne paas rakho aur meri professional life main please bich bich main mat karo"
"tumhari life?? tumhari life meri life nahi hai??"
"mere kehne ka wo matlab nahi tha"
"jhon harami is baat ko lekar pehle bhi kafi behas huyi hai aur aage bhi hoti rahengi ..jhon tumhe kisi ek ko chunna hoga "
"dolly please abhi nahi mujhe bohot kaam hai hum is bare main sham ko baat karenge"
"nahi sham ko nahi jo hoga abhi hoga"
"thik hai to fir dolly sunlo main apna profession kisi ke liye bhi nahi chod sakta.."
ek lambi saas lekar jhon waha se nikal aaya dolly ko chod kar......dolly wahi khadi thi uski aankhon main se pani pehne laga aur usne waha rakhe sofe ko apne aap ko saup diya..........
apne hath main ki khatam hoti cigarette se chatke se jhon hosh main aaya "dolly......yesss...!! dolly is kaam main meri madad kar sakti hai.." hath main ka cigarette fek kar jhon uth gaya............
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