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yaar is dolly ki aisi ki taisi :bat:
Bechare ko phansha diya..... ankhon dekha hi dekha hi sach nahi hota hain us pawar ko malum hona chahiye tha...
Kahi ye dolly hi toh khooni nahi ya us khoon se mili bhagat ho... iski ravaiya se toh shaq ki sui iski taraf hi jaa rahi hai...
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:
thank you for your review ab bas 2-3 updates hi bache hai sara khel samajh main aa jayega
 
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agla update kuch hi samay main
 

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Update 23

jhon ke paas ab koi chara nahi tha" dolly aisakyu kiya tumne??kya tumhe mujhpar itna bhi bharosa nahi hai??" lekin dolly ne apna mu disri or fer liya....................
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inspector pawar ko is baat main jara bhi doubt nahi tha ke ye khoon jhon main nahi kiye hai lekin gaon main chautha murda gir gaya tha aur ab bhi tapteesh adhuri thi ye kehte to gaonwale police ka jeena mushkil kar dete....jhon to apne aap hi police ke hatthe chadh gaya tha aur temporary hi kyun na lekin is case par parda gir gaya tha tab tak jab tak gaon main agl;a khoon nahi hota......

postmortam ki report aur baki ki chanbeen puri hone tak jhon ki kismat main jail ki hawa khana likha tha " agar kismat achi rahi to isme se bhi sahi salamat bach niklenge" aisa jhon soch raha tha.....

"lekin nanasahab ka khoon theek usi samay hua hoga to mamla mushkil hai.....nanasahab ki body thodi garam thi iska matlab khun jyada samay pehle hua hai aisa nah lag raha tha"

"magar dolly?? usne aisa kyun kiya hoga?? usko sach main mujh pe shaq tha..bhavnao main beh kar usne aisa kiya ya...??" jhon ab bhi dolly ke bare kisi mudde pe nahi pahuch pa raha tha "kyun kiya hoga dolly ne aisa??"

jhon apni soch main hi dooba hua tha ke inspector pawar uske cell ke paas aaye..."kya jhon sir kis soch main dube ho??"

jhon ne ek baar pawar ki or dekha..." pawar sahab, aapko to pata hai na ki maine khoon nahi kiya hai...fir kyun pakda hai mujhe?"

"arre..detective ho natum fir socho...tumne khoon nahi kiya to fir kisne kiya? arre agar agar dimah thag gaya ho to thodi der chote dimag ko kaam dedo..." pawar

"bada kya chota kya yaha to sare dimag hi badhir ho gaye hai...." jhon

do papl shanti main beete aur fir jhon ekdum utsah se chillaya

"yess...yess pawar sabah yesss.......main ye sabit sar sakta hu ki maine khoon nahi kiye"

"sawant bahar nikalo isko" itna bolte huye pawar apni khurci pe jake baithe " bolo jhon sir, kya sabit karne wale ho tum"

"sir mujhe sirf us chure ka ek photo aur mare huye logo ki dead body ke photos chahite" pawar ki samne ki khurci pe baithte huye jhon bola

pawar ne table ki file main se kuch papers nikale aur jhon ko diye

jhon ne wo sare photo sketch ek baar ache se dekhe aur fir uske chehre par samadhan ke bhav umad pade usne ek ambi saas li aur fir pawar se bola

"pawar sir main nirdosh hu iska saboot inki photos main hai..dekhiye...jara ache se dekhiye"

inspector paar ne wo sare sketch aur photos ache se dekhe lekin unke kuch samajh main nahi aaya..jhon ne apna pura samay kiya aur jab use laga k pawar ko kuch bhi samajh main nahi aa raha hai tab wo bola...

"dekho pawar sir is chure ko ache se dekho uske ek side surya bana hua hai aur dusri side sher.......jyada saaf bole to left side main suraj hai aur right side main sher bana hua hai..theek?"

"hmm" pawar

jhon ne samne rakhe ek kore kagaz ko round kiya aur uske left side suraj aur right side sher banaya

" ab ye dekho pawar sir agar main khuni hua to mai ye chura pakdunda to aise pakdunga" usne apne hath main ka kagaz chaku jaisa pakad kar dikhaya.. " dhayan se dekhna is condition main jab main ye chura samne wale ko marunga to ye tilt position main uske sharir main ghusega is position main chure ki left side uper yani right side niche rahegi yani mare huye vyakti ki jhakham agar dekhe to jakham ke uper ki baju surya aur niche ke side sher rena chahiye....barobar??"

"hmm" pawar

"ab aap mare huye logo ke sketches dekho...usme ye ekdum ulta hai ye dekho" itna bol ke jhon ne ek baar fir sare sketches pawar ko dikhaye

"ha wo theek hai lekin isse sabit kya hoga??" pawar ab bhi confusion main the

"batata hu" ab jhon ne wo roll kiya hua kagaz apne baye hath main pakda "dekhiye pawar sahab..ab agar is position main khoon hua to to chaku ki right side yani sher wali side upar rahegi aur left yani surya wali side niche...jisne khoon kiya hai wo insaan left hander hona chahiye...ye khoon baye hath se kiye huye hai pawar sahab aur main lefty nahi hu" apna paksh majboot karte huye jhon ne kaha

pawar ne ek baar fir wo sare sketches ache se dekhe

"intesesting....tum bol rahe to usme logic hai lekin thos saboot bol kar in bato ko nahi dekha ja sakta aur fir man sawaal to ab bhi baki hai ki khuni kon hai??"

"arre sawant jara dekhna to chavhan aa gaye kya mumbai se?" pawar ne pucha

"ha sir wo dophar main hi aa gaye the soye honge ghar par ab kal hi aayenge" sawant

"arre abhi jao aur unko bulao. mumbai main shashank ke bare main kya kya information nikli hai wo mujhko abhi chahiye" pawar ne kaha

aur ek ghante main chavhan police station main hajir the...............
 

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Update 24

"arre abhi jao aur unko bulao. mumbai main shashank ke bare main kya kya information nikli hai wo mujhko abhi chahiye" pawar ne kaha

aur ek ghante main chavhan police station main hajir the...............
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"baitho chavhan...aaram ho gaya ho to kaam ki baat kar le" pawar ne thoda chidte huye chavhan se kaha..

"ha sir....shashank ke bare main bohot infi mili hai sir...'Kumar' sahab ka eklauta ladka hai wo.....kumar sahab ki ek chemical factory hai...apne bete ne us factory ki kaman apne hath main leni chahiye ye kumar sahab ki icha hai k=lekin shashank ko ye pasand nahi tha isiliye dono main baar baar ivad chid jata tha......shashank ki galat sangat kumar sahab ko pasand nahi thi aur isiliye unhone ek din apne eklaute bate ko ghar se hahar nikal diya..........

suman aur shashank ki pehchan ek dedh saal purani hi hai....shashank ki usse pehle ek girlfriend thi sir....'maal' thi ekdum aisa bolte the lekin dono main kya hua kuch khabhar nahi lekin usko chod kar shashank ne suman se pehchan ki" chavhan ka batana jari tha

"chavhan us disri ladki ke bare main koi aur info mili kya??" pawar

"nahi sir us ladki ke bare main to jyada kych jaankari nai mili lekin ek important chiz mili hai" itna bol kar chavhan ne apne jeb main se ek kagaz nikala aur pawar ki or badhaya

"ye kya hai??" aisa bolyehuye pawar ne wo kagaz khol kar dekha to unke chehre par ke haav bhav ekdum badalne lage....

"marriage certificate......shashank aur suman ke ragistar shadi ka....ek mahina pehle dono ne court marriage kar li thi..aur yaha kisi ko kanokaan khabhar nahi....." chavhan

"oh my god...ab meri samajh main sab kuch aa gaya ....sawant jhon ko chod do...wo bechara sach main nirdosh hai aur chavhan gadi nikalo jaldi.." pawar tadfatadfi main bole
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"maaf karna suman..par ab tuymhara jane ka samay aa gaya hai nanasahab aur bhaiyasahab tumhari rah dekh rahe hai.." ek alishan aur aaram khurci par baith kar dolly bol rahi thi

suman puri tarah dar kar ek kone main ghabrakar baithi thi

"bechari suman pehle bhaiyasahab ab nanasahab ki maut ka dukh pacha nahi saki to usne fasi laga kar atmyahatya kar li" samne se ek aadmi hath main rassi lekar suman ki or aate huye keh raha tha..wo koi or nahi shashank tha

"bye bye suman....good bye my dear wife " chehre par bhaddi muskan ke sath shashank bola

"ruko shashank......YOU ARE UNDER ARREST" pawar sahab ka dheer gambhir awaj shashank aur dolly ke kano pe samundar ki jordar lehar ke jaisa pada...dono ne ekdum darwaje par dekha...

Darwaje main apni service revolver liye pawar aur jhon khade the.....ek pal ke liye dolly aur jhon ki najre mili par is waqt jhon ki aankhon main sune pan ke alawa aur kuch bhi nahi tha..........

pawar aur shashank ne aage badhkar shashank aur dolly ko arrest kiya band ghar main unke bhagne ka koi chance nahi tha..................
 

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2nd last update posted agle aakhri update main sara khulasa ho jayega
 

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dedh saal baad aakhri update aj sham ko
 

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