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Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread

Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
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Bahot khub writer sahab
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:
Update jaldi diya kijiye :smile:
thank you thank you thank you

agla update thodi der main
 

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Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread

Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..
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Update 21

"chavhan us shashank ka background nikalo kaha rehta hai ky karta hai sari information nikalo gaon main aane wala har insan mere shak ke ghere main hai".....................
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"dolly!! tumko ab bhi mujh par shaq hai??" jhon

dolly khidki se bahar dekh rahi thi

"arre main kyun khoon karunga bhaiyasahab ka ? mera kya fayda hai usme? "

jhon dolly se sawal kiye ja raha tha

"to fir us din bhaiyasahab ne tumhari or ungli kyun dikhayi?" dolly bagair jhon se aankhen milaye baat kar rahi thi

"ab wo main kaise bata sakta hu bhaiyasahab jinda hote to wo hi bata sakte the..." jhon

"aur us din......??"

"us din kya dolly?? us din kya?? tumko main aur kitni baar samjhakar batau?? us din ghat main main nahi tha!! aur wo gobar ka kya lekar baithi ho!! raat ke waqt agar tum is gaon main ghum kar aaogi na to kabhi na kabhi kahi na kahi tumhare pair mainj bhi lagega hi iskla matlab kya tum khuni ho gayi??"

"I don't know jhon!! mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai" dolly

"dar?? kisse?? mujhse?? Oh come on dolly don't act stupid "

itna bol kar jhon waha se chala gaya
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"tumhe pata hai shashank ,nanasahab se jyada bhaiyasahab mujhse jyada kareeb the bachpan se main unke paas hi jyada rahi hu...'doll' thi main unki wo hamesha mujhe doll kehkar hi bulate the ...par ab to sab khatam ho gaya hai unke aise jane se mujhe sach main bahut takleef huyi hai" suman ki aankhon main pani tha

"main bhi tumhara dukh samajhta hu sumi lekin ham kabtak yaha rahenge ?? aur kitne din?? hame wapas to jana hi padega na??" shashank suman ko samjhane ki koshish kar raha tha

"tumhari baat sahi hai shashank lekin mujhe aisa lagta hai ke bhaiyasahab ka khuni pakde jane tak hame yahi rukna chahiye!! mujhe us naradham ka chehra dekhna hai usse puchna hai ke bhaiyasahab ne uska aisa kya bigada tha ke usne unka khoon kar diya??"

"dekho sumi wo kaam polico ka hai unko unka kaam karne dena chahiye aur waise bhi yaha jyada din rehna theek nahi hai wo khuni agar koi sirfira nikla to...." shashank

"suman tai suman tai...aap dono ko nanasahab new bulaya hai...." ek naukar aakar bata gaya

suman ne apne aansu poche aur shashank ke sath nanasahab the waha chali gayi. Nanasahab hamesha ki tarah supari phodte huye baithe the mano unko pata chal gaya ho ki wo aa gaye hai yo unhone unki or dekhe bagair hi apne baju main rakhi khurci par baithne ka ishara kiya

do pal shanti main beetne ke baad nanasahab bole" shashankrao,sume, jo hua acha nahi huma bhaiyasahab ka aise jana bohot dukh ki baat hai lekin ye dukh aur kitne dine sahenge?? subah pantid aaya tha wo keh raha tha bhaiyasahab ke jane se apne khandan par kali chaya giri hai. agle ek saal tak is ghar main koi bhi shubh kaam nahi ho sakta..nahi to wo kaam bhi bigad jayega..kuch karna to to in 15 din main karlo aisa bol raha tha wo..waise bhi tum dono yaha ho....mujhe lagta hai tum dono ki abhi shadi kar deni chahiye..."

"par baba, bhaiyasahab ke maut ke baad aise shadi yane...." suman boli

"ha nanasahab suman ka bolna sahi hai mujhe bhi ye theek nahi lag raha" shashank ne suman ki baat ka samarthan kiya

"ye dekho dukh humko bhi hai ab hum gaon ke log bolo ya kuch or lekin hum pandit ko bahut mante hai uska shabd ye last shabd hai...ab nahi to agle ek saal tak is shadi ko mera virodh rahega.....dekho..soch lo aur kya karna hai mujhe jaldi se batao" itna bol kar nanasahab waha se chale gaye

shashank ne suman ki aankhon main dekha to uski aankhon main ab abhi dukh ka pahad tha............
 

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update posted ab agle update main kafi turns hai dosto
 

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ye nana toh apni hi chaal chal rahan hai :sigh:
Jhon pe doubt toh hai..... par kya woh khooni ho sakta hai..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:
shukriya shukriya agla update kuch hi der main
 

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Update 22

"ye dekho dukh humko bhi hai ab hum gaon ke log bolo ya kuch or lekin hum pandit ko bahut mante hai uska shabd ye last shabd hai...ab nahi to agle ek saal tak is shadi ko mera virodh rahega.....dekho..soch lo aur kya karna hai mujhe jaldi se batao" itna bol kar nanasahab waha se chale gaye

shashank ne suman ki aankhon main dekha to uski aankhon main ab abhi dukh ka pahad tha............
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"Mr.jhon aapke kiye ek phone hai." lodge ke cleark ne jhon ke paas ek phone transfer kiya

jhon ke kuch samay phone par baat ki aur fi dolly se bola

"dolly...chalo jaldi chalo hame abhi nanasahab ke bangle par jana hai..."

"arre lekin kyu??" dolly ghadi ki or dekh kar bol rahi thi jisme abhi raat ke 1 baj rahe the

"sawal mat karo bas jaldi chalo" jhon bhagte huye bola

nanasahab ka bangla hamesha ki tarah rahasya se bhara hua tha waha hamesha wali manhoosiyat chayi huyi thi aur raat ke samay to wo aur bhi bhanayak dikh raha tha....jhon ne gadi sidhe bangle par na lete huye waha paas hi bane farmhouse ki or mod di.....

dolly ke chehre par sawal ab bhi kayam the....

jhon gadi main se utra aur dolly ki rah dekhe bagair hi bhagte huye ander ghusa. Dolly ko pata nahi kyu lekin jhon par bharosa nahi ho raha tha usne purse main se apna mobile nikala aur inspector pawar ko phone lagaya...

farmhouse main andhere ka samrajya tha

"nanasahab..??" jhon ne awaj lagayi lekin koi jawab nahi aaya niche ki manjin talashne ke baad ab jhon uper ki manjil ki or badha

"nanasahab....?" jhon ne fir awaj lagayi lekin uske awaj ke bagair waha dusra koi awaj nahi tha

jhon andhere main light ka switch khojte huye aage badh raha tha aur achanak!! ko kisi cheej se takrakar niche gir gaya...uske hath ko kisi komat chikat dravya ka sparsh ho raha tha...wo kya hao ye samajhne main jhon ko jara bhi der nahi lagi usne jhat se apne hath kapde se poche aur wo khada ho gaya utne main hi koi darwaje se ander aata hua mehsoos hua aur 2 pal main room main ujala ho gaya..

darwaje main inspector pawar apni bandook taan kar khade the ..piche piche dolly ander aayi aur jhon ko dekh kar uski cheekh nikal gayi...jhon ne ek baar inspector pawar ki or dekha fir dolly ki or aur fir uski najar niche jamin ki or gayi to waha nanasahab ki lash padi thi aur jhon ke hath aur kapde nahasahab ke khoon ne sane pade the.......

"jhon tum?? tumne kiya khoon??? mujhe laga tha ke tum hi khooni ho...usdin ghat main bhi tum hi the....tumhi ko popularity chahiye thi jhon aur isiliye tumne ye khoono ka silsila chalaya hai...."dolly chillaye ja rahi thi

"dolly pagalpan ki bate mat karo...maine ekbhi khoon nahi kiya hai main to tumhare hi sath yaha aaya hu tumhare hi to samne mujhe phone aaya tha ke nanasahab ki jaan ko khatra hai..." jhon

"mujhe nahi pata jhon ki tumhe kaisa phone aaya tha..lekin mujhe yakin hai ki khoon tumne hi kiya hai..usdin maine tumhe majak main kya bol diya tumne to serious samajh liya..pawar sir please arrest him.." dolly boli

"pawar sir kuch gadbad hai muhe is sab main fasaya ja raha hai ..main manta hu ki abhi main jis halat main hu uspar se aapka ye samajhna lazmi hai lekin ache se investigate kiya jaye to sab samajh aa jayega....khoon ke liye ue hone waha hathiyar mere paasnahi hai..nanasahab ka khoon main kyon karunga?? mujhe yaha aaye huye sirf 10 minute huye hai...postmortan main ye sabit ho jayega ki unka khoon pehle hi ho chuka tha..."jhon apni safayi main bole ja raha tha

"dekho mr.jhon tum jo bol rahe ho wo shayad sach bhi ho lekin aakhon dekha hone ki wajah se mujhe tumko inquiry ke liye hirasat mai lena hi hoga aur main kuch nahi kar sakta" pawar

"miss dolly main hamko phone karke batayaaur tumhare bare main apne shaq ko bhi bataya isiliye hum itni jaldi yaha aaye...cahlo baki bate inquiry main ho jayengi...." pawar ne aage kaha

jhon ke paas ab koi chara nahi tha" dolly aisakyu kiya tumne??kya tumhe mujhpar itna bhi bharosa nahi hai??" lekin dolly ne apna mu disri or fer liya....................
 

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another ypdate posted
 

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yaar is dolly ki aisi ki taisi :bat:
Bechare ko phansha diya..... ankhon dekha hi dekha hi sach nahi hota hain us pawar ko malum hona chahiye tha...
Kahi ye dolly hi toh khooni nahi ya us khoon se mili bhagat ho... iski ravaiya se toh shaq ki sui iski taraf hi jaa rahi hai...
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:
 
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