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Update 17

"jhon?? waha jhon tha?? nahi ho hi nahi sakt....agar wo waha tha to mujhe dekh ke chupta kyu?? aur usko to pata bhi nahi tha ke main aa rahi hu?? ya fir ye shayad ek yogayog tha...!!!!
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Dusra din pura jhon aur dolly ne eksath bitaya. teen mahino ki kasar dono ne ek hi din main bhar nikali. jhon dolly ko gaon ke bahar nisargmay vatavaran main ghumane le gaya.. hare raang ka pullover aur kale rang ki slack pehne huye dolly ko dekhke gaon walo ki aankhen khuli ki khuli reh gayi thi...matlab dolly ko aise second look ki adat thi..shahar main bhi ladke dolly ki or mud mud ke dekhte the to ye to fir bhi bichare gaon wale the dolly muskura di aur jhon ko pakad ke chalne lagi

sham ko jhon aur dolly dono hi police station gaye...jhon ne dolly ne chure ke bare main nikali huyi info ka kagaz inspector pawar ko dikhaya

"ye kon??"hath mian ke paper ki or dekhte huye pawar ne pucha

"ye dolly! meri assistant..isi ne hi is chure ke bare main ye info nikali hai" jhon ne kaha

"1836??is samay ka ye chura hai aisa bolna hai kya aapka??" pawar ab bhi info padhte huye bole

"ha pawar sir..us chure par ki chitrakala, uske muthi ki bnawat uski lambai chaudai sab ekdum perfect matching hai. 1836 main jaipur ke maharaj jaswantsingh inhone aise hi chure ka ek set apne karibi naukar naik inko gift kiya tha lekin uske baad wo kaha se kaise is gaon main pahucha iski info nikalna thoda mushkil hai " jhon

"hmm....lekin jaisa aap bata rahe ho us hisab se ye chura khandani logo ke paas rehne ke chances jada hai aur isko aitihasik mahatva hone ki wajah se sade logo ke paas iska milna namumkin lagta hai aur agar ye baat sahi hai to tarwade gaon ka ekmatra khandani parivaa yani..."

"BHAIYAASAHAB!!??" pawar aur jhon ek sath bole...............

"to kya aaplog ye kehna chahte ho ke ye khum ye jo koi bhaiyashab hai inhone kiye hai??" dolly ne pucha

"nahi abhi to bhi ye kehna mushkil hoga kyuki bhaiyasahab is gaon ke ek jane mane pratishthit vyakti hai shayad aisa bhi ho sakta hai ke unke naukaro main se kisi ne ye kaam kiya ho!!...shayad unko is chure ke bare main aur malumat ho kuch ko kadiya hame mil sake waha: inspector pawar khurchi par se uthte huye bole......"sawant gadi nikalo humko abhi bhaiyasahab ke paas jana hai "

"par sir abhi???matlab andhera ho raha hai ek baar unse puch lete to....."sawant

"sawant kaam jada important hai chalo tum" itna bol ke pawar bahar chale bhi gaye aur unke piche piche jhon aur dolly bhi gadi main ja baithe....................
 

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Update 17

"jhon?? waha jhon tha?? nahi ho hi nahi sakt....agar wo waha tha to mujhe dekh ke chupta kyu?? aur usko to pata bhi nahi tha ke main aa rahi hu?? ya fir ye shayad ek yogayog tha...!!!!
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Dusra din pura jhon aur dolly ne eksath bitaya. teen mahino ki kasar dono ne ek hi din main bhar nikali. jhon dolly ko gaon ke bahar nisargmay vatavaran main ghumane le gaya.. hare raang ka pullover aur kale rang ki slack pehne huye dolly ko dekhke gaon walo ki aankhen khuli ki khuli reh gayi thi...matlab dolly ko aise second look ki adat thi..shahar main bhi ladke dolly ki or mud mud ke dekhte the to ye to fir bhi bichare gaon wale the dolly muskura di aur jhon ko pakad ke chalne lagi

sham ko jhon aur dolly dono hi police station gaye...jhon ne dolly ne chure ke bare main nikali huyi info ka kagaz inspector pawar ko dikhaya

"ye kon??"hath mian ke paper ki or dekhte huye pawar ne pucha

"ye dolly! meri assistant..isi ne hi is chure ke bare main ye info nikali hai" jhon ne kaha

"1836??is samay ka ye chura hai aisa bolna hai kya aapka??" pawar ab bhi info padhte huye bole

"ha pawar sir..us chure par ki chitrakala, uske muthi ki bnawat uski lambai chaudai sab ekdum perfect matching hai. 1836 main jaipur ke maharaj jaswantsingh inhone aise hi chure ka ek set apne karibi naukar naik inko gift kiya tha lekin uske baad wo kaha se kaise is gaon main pahucha iski info nikalna thoda mushkil hai " jhon

"hmm....lekin jaisa aap bata rahe ho us hisab se ye chura khandani logo ke paas rehne ke chances jada hai aur isko aitihasik mahatva hone ki wajah se sade logo ke paas iska milna namumkin lagta hai aur agar ye baat sahi hai to tarwade gaon ka ekmatra khandani parivaa yani..."

"BHAIYAASAHAB!!??" pawar aur jhon ek sath bole...............

"to kya aaplog ye kehna chahte ho ke ye khum ye jo koi bhaiyashab hai inhone kiye hai??" dolly ne pucha

"nahi abhi to bhi ye kehna mushkil hoga kyuki bhaiyasahab is gaon ke ek jane mane pratishthit vyakti hai shayad aisa bhi ho sakta hai ke unke naukaro main se kisi ne ye kaam kiya ho!!...shayad unko is chure ke bare main aur malumat ho kuch ko kadiya hame mil sake waha: inspector pawar khurchi par se uthte huye bole......"sawant gadi nikalo humko abhi bhaiyasahab ke paas jana hai "

"par sir abhi???matlab andhera ho raha hai ek baar unse puch lete to....."sawant

"sawant kaam jada important hai chalo tum" itna bol ke pawar bahar chale bhi gaye aur unke piche piche jhon aur dolly bhi gadi main ja baithe....................
Nice update sir
 

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wonderfull update bhaiya ji
 

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I think, nanasaheb ho sakta hain boh kaatil ....... .. ya phir sayad aisa koi banda joh cold minded..... kisi baat par khunnas khake ye khoon kar raha ho...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update writer sahab.... Great going..... :applause::applause:
 

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I think, nanasaheb ho sakta hain boh kaatil ....... .. ya phir sayad aisa koi banda joh cold minded..... kisi baat par khunnas khake ye khoon kar raha ho...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update writer sahab.... Great going..... :applause::applause:

thank you for the review naina ji :dost:
 

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thank you for your support guys :thanks:
 

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agla update kuch hi der main
 
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