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"surprise" karib karib chillate huye wo boli lekin uski yekhushi jyada samay nahi tiki.....
"chiii!!..kitni gandi smell a rahi hai tumhari body se..nahate nahi ho kya..chalo pehle room main naha lo fir baad man baat karte hai" itna bol kar usne apna saman uthaya aur jhon ke piche piche jane lagi.....
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Jhon naha kar aaya tab tak dolly silky nighty pehan kar bed par leti huyi thi jhon ko dekhte hi wo uth kar uske paas gayi aur uske gale ke ird gird apne komal hath lapet kar use ek jordaar kiss kiya

"missed you dear....and I am so sorry" bade hi pyaar se dolly ne kaha

"no...I am sorry dolly.. and let me also confess it" jhon ne use apni or khichte huye kaha aur fir use ek kiss kiya

"...but tum yaha kaise??aur tumhe kaise pata chala main yaha hu??" jhon ne pucha

"haa to...detective ki girlfriend hu thode to gun mere ander bhi aayenge na...lekin ye kya ha ye kya ghatiya hotel dhuna hai...koi achi hotels nahi hai kya yaha??" dolly ne pucha

"janedo..chodo" aisa bol ke jhon ne apna sara investigation dolly ko bataya

"to aisa hai sab kuch.....is case ko kitni popularity mil rahi hai ye tum janti hi ho.....kal ko agar main investigation ke mamle main polico se jyada aage nikal saka to is case ke sath sath mujhe bhi utni hi popularity milegi..fir bhalehi case solve ho ya na ho khuni pakda jao ya na jao..ek baar mera naam ho gaya to shahar main jake fir se ek nayi surwat kar sakte hai"

"wo sab to thik hai lekin police bhi soyi nahi hai na tumko kafi mehnat karni padegi unko piche chodne main.." dolly apne baal thik karte hiye boli "ya fir tum aisa kyo nahi karte tum hi ek do khun aur kar do aur fir usse milte julte saboot jama karke police ko de do...us spiderman jaise.."

"spiderman..????" jhon

"ha...matlab dekho na wo hi 'peter parker' the photographer aur wo hi 'spidy' khud hi khud ke photos kheech ke paise kama raha hai...aise hi.." itna bolkar dolly jor se hasne lagi lekin jhon kuch na bolte huye khamosh khidki ke bahar dekh raha tha

"jhon mian majak kar rahi thi tum kahi sach main khun karne mat chale jana aur chalo sone mujhe to bade joro ki neend aa rahi hai..." itna bol kar dolly ne lights band kar diye

lekin raat ko dolly ko neend hi nahi aa rahi thi wo bas karwate badle ja rahi thi aur jab kuch na hua to wo uth ke baith gayi bagal main hi jhon gehri neend main soya hua tha

"kya wajh ho sakti hai neend na aane ki" dolly khud se hi sochne lagi " badli huyi jagah, ya aaramdayak bed ki jagah ye kadak gaddi...nahi karan kuch or tha.. kuch ajeeb pure room main kisi chiz ki baas faili huyi thi....lekin kisi?? shayad gobar ki..????"

dolly ekdum se uthi "gobar ki baas!! us ghat main waha koi to jarur tha jiske pairo ke nishan gobar mian the..."

dolly dheere se palang ke niche utri aur ekdum satarkta se arwaje ki or badhi...wo baas ab badhne lagi thi usne halke se jhon ke jute uthaye. uska shak sahi nikla, jhon ke ek jute ke niche gobar laga hua tha

"jhon?? waha jhon tha?? nahi ho hi nahi sakt....agar wo waha tha to mujhe dekh ke chupta kyu?? aur usko to pata bhi nahi tha ke main aa rahi hu?? ya fir ye shayad ek yogayog tha...!!!!
 

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update has been posted
 

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Fantastic story sir
Waiting for next update
 

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What??? :eek: kahin jhon hi kaatil toh.. are nahin nahin woh kaise ho sakta hain.... uske bade toh story mein details mein hain ki koun hain aur kya karta hain.....
Maybe woh wahan koi clue dhundhne gaya ho...
ajib twist hain writer sahab....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update sir.. Great going :applause::applause:
 

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Inshallah Kal Se Padhunga Bhai Story Aur Jald Hi Regular Update Tak Pahunchne Ki Koshish Karunga

shukriya bhai intajar rahega aapke reviews ka
 

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What??? :eek: kahin jhon hi kaatil toh.. are nahin nahin woh kaise ho sakta hain.... uske bade toh story mein details mein hain ki koun hain aur kya karta hain.....
Maybe woh wahan koi clue dhundhne gaya ho...
ajib twist hain writer sahab....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update sir.. Great going :applause::applause:

kaatil ka pata bhi jald hi chal jayega

shukriya for the review
 

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next update coming in very short time
 

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