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Nidhi : kya hai ? Thodi der bat bhi nahi karne degi?

Karuna : baten jitni marzi kar lena didi main to apko ye batane aayi hun k bade mama apko bula rahe hain.

Nidhi : mama ji , koi kam hai kya ?

Karuna : pata nahi , aapko bula rahe hain bas, waise aap ise saza dene layi thi ya maza dene ? Aaaaaahhhh maaaaa

Karuna didi ne meri taraf dekh kar kaha to ek nidhi didi ne karuna didi ko halke hath se thappad mara

Nidhi : bahut zuban chalne lagi hai teri , sharam nahi aati aise bat karte hue ? Chal neeche .

Nidhi didi ne banawati gussa dikhate hue kaha par unke chehre ki muskurahat kuch aur hi bata rahi thi . Nidhi didi apna chehra chhupati jaldi se palat kar sidiyan utarne lagi aur 4-5 sidiyan utar kar ek bar palati aur mujhe muskura kar dekhti tez kadmo se neeche chali gyi .

Karuna : to kya irada hai darling , bua k aane ki khushi me party to banti hai .

Amit : party kar to li

Karuna : main dusri party ki bat kar rahi hun. Mauka acha hai sab neeche apne me mast hain.

Karuna didi aage barh kar mujhe kiss karne lagi to maine unhe piche dhakel diya kyunki Deepika mami sidiyon k pas hi thi.

Amit : aapka dimag to kharab nahi ho gya ? Marwa dogi aap , jao neeche dekho mami upar hi aa rahi hai .

Karuna ( muh banate hue ) mami bhi na ,,, rat ko taiyar rehna . Party to main leke rahungi . Ummmaah

Karuna didi ne jaldi se mere honthon ko chooma aur neeche chali gyi. Main unhe jate hue dekhta raha . Deepika mami upar hi aa rahi thi to main darwaze se piche hat andar ki taraf aa gya . Deepika mami bhi mere piche kamre me aa gyi .

Deepika : abhi tak naraz ho mujhse ?

Deepika mami pere piche khadi thi jab unke muh se maine ye bat suni to mud kar unhe dekha . Deepika mami k chehre par udasi nazar aa rahi thi.

Deepika : itni si galati ki itni badi saza doge mujhe ? Kal se tum bat nahi kar rahe mujhse akhir maine aisi kya bhool kar di ? Mujhse aise muh na Modo warna main .... tum jante ho na tum mere liye kya ho . Tumhi mujhse aise muh fer loge to main kahan jaungi . Tum chaho to mujhe danto mujhe maro par aise chup reh kar saza mat do. Sab se has khel rahe ho aur meri taraf dekh bhi nahi rahe . Kya ab main itni buri ho gyi hun?

Amit : mamiiii ,,,,, mujhe maaf kar do main bas aise hi aap par gussa ho gya . Asal me gussa kisi aur bat ka tha par aap par nikal gya . Main aapse naraz nahi hun. Aur naraz ho bhi nahi sakta . Aap hi to meri sabse achi dost aur guru ho. Aap k bina main khud apne aap ko adhura pta hun. Fir kaise bhala aapse naraz reh sakta hun.

Deepika : tumhe pata bhi hai kal se mera kya hal hai. Dikhawe k liye sab k sath has khel rahi thi par andar se mera kya hal hai main hi janti hun. Mujhe tumhe aise rokna nahi chahiye tha akhir sab kuch tumhara hi to hai .

Amit : aapne kuch galat nahi kiya. Sab meri hi galati hai. Par ab aisa nahi hoga . Main apne kiye ki maafi mangta hun

Deepika ( mere muh par hath rakhte hue ) shhhh , tumhe maafi mangne ki zarurat nahi. Bas mujhe pyar se ek bar gale laga lo .

Deepika mami k itna kehte hi maine unhe apne seene se laga kar apni bahon ke bheench kiya aur wo bhi mere vajood me jaise sama jana chahti thi. Hum dono k beech se hawa nikalne ki bhi jagah nahi thi . Maami ki dhadkane mujhe mehsus ho rahi thi . Unki tadap main mehsus kar pa raha tha aur khud ko bhi kaus raha tha k Maine bevajah unhe pareshan kiya . Maine mami k chehre apne hathon me thaam kar upar uthaya to unki ankhen band thi . Mami bahut hi khubsurat lag rahi thi hamesha ki tarah .

Amit : ankhen kholo na mami

Deepika : ( na me sir hilate hue ) unhunnn

Amit : please kholiye na .

Deepika : unhunnn , sahi tarah se kaho

Main samajh gya mami kya chahti hain.

Amit : ankhen kholo Deepika

Mere muh se apna nam sunte hi mami ne dheere se apni ankhen kholi aur mujhe dekhne lagi . Unke chehre par halke se muskan aa gyi thi mere muh se apna nam sun kar . Main unki ankhon me dekhta raha aur unke larazte honthon par apne honth rakh diye . Mami bhi jaise iske liye tadap rahi thi aur khud hi wo mere honth chumne lagi. Hum dono ek dusre ko kiss karne lage . Is kiss me zara bhi vasna ya uttejna nahi balki samarpan aur prem tha . Kuch der yunhi hum kiss karte rahe aur fir mami ne hi kiss todi aur mujhse alag ho kar darwaza band karne chali gyi. Mami ne darwaza band kiya par Lock nahi kiya . Aur fir chal kar mere kareeb aa gyi . Mujhe bed par bitha kar wo mere sath hi baith gyi .

Deepika : khush to hoge na tum ? Manju aaj sabke beech hai

Amit : khush ? Main to bahut khush hun . Isse jyada khushi ki aur kya bat hogi . Meri bua aaj mere sath hai hum sab k sath. Dekha nahi baba bhi kitne khush hain . Mausi , ma Ajay mama sab khush hain. Aur sab se jyada khush to bua hain . Wo kitni akeli , kitni dukhi thi. Aaj unhe unka pariwar wapis mil gya

Deepika : wo sab to theek hai par ...

Amit : par kya ??

Deepika : tum dono k beech jo rishta pehle ban chuka hai , uska kya ?

Amit : wo , wo sab anjane me hua tha . Tab main nahi janta tha k wo hi meri bua hain warna wo sab nahi hota .

Deepika : aur Manju ? Wo kya sochti hai is bare me ? Jahan tak main samajhti hun , wo tumhe dil se chahne lagi thi jaisa tumne bataya . Tumne uski suni zindagi me pyar k rang bhare . To ab wo kaise tumhe dusre rishte me swikar kar payegi?

Amit : wo sab anjane me hua tha aur isi bat par wo bahut jyada hurt bhi hui thi jab unhe pata chala k main unka hi saga bhatija hun . Wo to marne ki baten karne lagi thi. Ek bar to Main bhi dar gya tha . Unhone khud ko badi mushkil se sambhala hai. Hum dono wo sab bhool kar naye sire se shuruat kar rahe hain is rishte ki jo humen bhagwan ne diya hai .

Deepika : kya ye sab itna asan hai ? Tumhe lagta hai ye sab mumkin hoga ? Ek aurat jab dil me kisi ko basa le to use kabhi bhula nahi sakti aur Manju to tumhe apna sab kuch man chuki thi . Fir kaise wo ab tumhe kisi dusre rishte me dekh payegi ?

Amit : aap kehna kya chahti hain .?

Deepika : yahi k tumhe usko sahara dena hoga . Abhi wo sab k beech hai , arse bad mili hai to kuch din wo busy rahegi magar uske bad ? Jab wo akeli aur tanha hogi tab tumhare sath bitaye wo pyar bhare pal use jeene nahi denge . Tab wo toot jayegi aur fir tumse door jane k bare me sochegi .

Amit : nahi main unhe ab kahin nahi jane dunga . Main aisa nahi hone dunga .

Deepika : aisa nahi hoga par uske liye tumhe is bat ko gehrai se samajhna hoga . Ek sath do do rishte tum pehle se hi rakh rahe ho . Mere sath , kamini didi k sath , badi didi k sath , rita mausi k sath aur ye nautanki karuna , naina . Sab k sath tum dohra rishta nibha rahe ho na to fir Manju k sath kyu nahi ? Abhi wo shayad khud ko kasurwar samajh rahi hogi jo sab hua uske liye . Par bad me yahi bhawna use door jane k liye majbur na kar de . Tumhe use ehsas dilana hoga k wo tumhari bua hone k bad bhi tumhare usi pyar ko pa sakti hai .

Amit : par bua ....

Deepika : abhi wo kuch din busy hi rehne wali hai . Chinta mat karo aur main hun na . Zarurat padi to main khud bat karungi. Tumhari khushi par aanch nahi aane de sakti main .

Amit : par aap bat kaise karengi ? Agar aapne unse bat ki to wo bhi samajh jayengi k aapke aur mere beech.....

Deepika : to kya hua ? Tumhare liye mujhe sab manjoor hai . Fir chahe wo mujhe do char galiyan hi kyun na de de k uske bhateeje k sath Maine wo sab kiya . Main bhi keh dungi k uska bhatija mere bache ka baap bhi hai aur us Nate wo meri saas hui. Ab dekhti hun k use kaun sa rishta rakhna hai . Bhabi wala , saas wala ya sauten wala .

Amit : aap bhi na ..... ye sab asan nahi hai .

Deepika : asan kam hum karte bhi nahi . Chalo ab chalte hain .

Deepika mami uth kar jane lagi to maine unhe piche se awaz di .

Amit : waise ek nam aur bhi hai

Deepika : ???????

Amit : rajani mausi

Deepika : kyaaaaa?????

Deepika ka hairani se muh khula ka khula reh gya . Maine unhe han me sir hila kar unhe yakeen dilaya .

Deepika : tum kisi ko chhodoge bhi ya sab par apni mohar laga kar hi rukoge ? Kahin divya didi k sath bhi to.......

Amit : aapko pata bhi hai aap kya keh rahi hain ? Divya mausi ko aap janti hain na .

Deepika : janti hun , aur dekh bhi rahi hun k wo kaise tumhare aapas rehti hain. Manju ki bat par bade bhaiya ko kaise inkar ke diya tha aur tumhare sath khud lene chali gyi unhe. Mano ya na mano par ek nam aur judne wala hai pehle hi keh deti hun .

Itna keh kar Deepika mami neeche chali gyi aur main soch me pad gya . Deepika mami ne aise hi ye bat nahi ki hogi . Zarur wo nazar rakh rahi hongi mausi par . Aur fir maine bhi to kai bar mausi ko ajeeb tarah se react karte mehsus kiya tha. Ek ek kar k divya mausi k sath hui sari ghatnayen meri ankhon k samne aane lagi . Na chahte hue bhi mere dilo dimag me ye bat aane lagi k Deepika mami ne jo kaha wo sach hai . Ye sab sochte sochte mera land akadne lag gya to Maine sir jhatakte hue khud se hi kaha .

Amit : nahi aisa nahi ho sakta . Divya mausi aisi nahi hai . Wo mujhse apna beta manti hain. Wo meri ma ki judwa hain meri ma jaisi hain. Main kaise unke sath ? Nahi nahi ye nahi ho sakta .

‘ oye tu yahan baitha hai chal neeche aa dekh kaun aya hai ‘

Naina didi darwaze khol kar ek dam se andar ayi aur mujhe meri khayalon ki duniya se bahar nikala .

Amit : kaun aya hai didi ?

Naina : uncle aaye hain family k sath . Chal neeche .

Main turant neeche ki taraf bhaaga. Deepika mami k sath bat karte hue mujhe waqt ka pata hi nahi chala aur uncle gaon bhi aa pahunche . Jaise hi main neeche aya to ma k kamre me sab ek sath the jahan Raghav uncle Manju bua ko gale se lagaye bhawuk ho kar aansoo baha rahe the . Pas me hi khadi aunty aur karishma didi ki ankhen bhi bhari hui thi jabki Mohit thoda hairani se dekh raha tha .

Raghav : tu itne din kahan thi meri behan ? Tujhe apne is bhai ki zara bhi yad nahi aayi ? Tu to pawan k sath mujhe rakhi bandhti thi na ? fir kaise tu bhool gyi k tera ek bhai aur bhi hai . Aaj tak tere is bhai ki kalai suni hai jahan tu kabhi rakhi bandhti thi. Tune mujhe kis bat ki saza di mujhe aise khud se door kar k .

Manju ( rote hue ) bhaiyaaa ,, mujhe maaf kar do bhaiya mujhe maaf kar do. Main kya karti bhaiya , pawan bhaiya k jane k bad gumsum si ho gyi thi . Aur jab kuch sambhali to bade bhaiya ne Farman suna diya k main aapse nahi milun. Ek bar maine koshish bhi ki thi to badle me bhabhi aur bachon ko buri tarah se mara tha unhone . Unke liye maine dil par pathar rakh liya tha bhaiya . Warna main aisa kabhi nahi karti .

Raghav : aur tera ye bhai itne sal bas yahi sochta raha k akhir maine aisi kaun si khata kar di jo tune kabhi mujhse bat tak nahi ki. Ek bar to mere se bat ki hoti tumne . Un jalladon k pas main tumhe kabhi rehne nahi deta kabhi nahi .

‘ to isi liye tu madam k ghar jata tha . Sale itne dino tak tune sab se chhupa ke rakha ‘ Mohit ki nazar jab mujh par padi to wo mujhse ladne laga . Ye sab wo dheemi awaz me bol raha tha taki koi aur na sun le .

Amit : abe mujhe bhi nahi pata tha k yahi bua hain. Ye to us din hi pata chala jab main tumhare ghar se bua k ghar gya aur wo mujhe family album dikhane lagi .

Manju : main majbur thi bhaiya, nahi to kya main aapke pas nahi aati ?

Rama : tune bahut rulaya hai humen Manju , bahut rulaya hai. Ye tumhe yad kar k aksar rote rehte the , rakhi wale din to ye khud ko band hi kar lete the . Bas tumhari aur pawan bhaiya ki tasveeron k sath baten karte rehte the .

Manju : main bhi to Thai karti thi bhabhi , aap sab ko, bhaiya bhabhi ko yad karti thi aur roti thi.

Rama : tu thi kahan itne dino tak ? Tujhe ek bar bhi hum logon ki yad nahi ayi?

Manju : himmat nahi thi bhabhi , himmat nahi thi . Itne sal door reh kar kis muh se samne aati .

Raghav : maar khayegi mere hathon se ,, tujhe apne is bhai par itna hi bharosa tha ? Tune socha bhi kaise main aisa soch sakta hun tere bare me . Main hamesha se janta tha k un logon ne tujhe majbur kiya hoga.

Karishma : ma , papa , kya mujhe nahi milawaoge bua se ?

Manju : ye ,, ye karishma hai na bhaiya ??

Karishma didi ko dekh kar bua ne uncle se pucha to unhone sir hila kar hami bhari. Isi k sath bua ne karishma didi ko gale se laga liya .

Manju : kitni badi ho gyi hai kaashi , bilkul bhabhi par gyi hai .

Manju bua ne krishma didi ko gale se laga kar chuma aur unhe apna pyar diya . Karishma didi bhi khush thi bua se mil kar .

Karishma : papa aapko bahut yad karte the bua , ab aap humen chhod kar kahin mat jana .

Manju : kahin nahi jaungi meri bachi kahin nahi jaungi . Aur ye Mohit kahan hai ? Mohit ,,, tu wahan khada kya dekh raha hai ? Idhar aa .

Mohit : kuch nahi madam wo ....

Manju : madam nahi , bua hun samjhe ?? Idhar aa .

Mohit pas aya to bua ne use bhi gale se laga kar pyar diya .

Raghav : madam ?? Ye tum madam kyun keh rahe ho Manju ko ?

Mohit : papa aap nahi jante , bua hamare college me English ki lecturer hain.

Raaghav : kyaaa ??? Aur tum mujhe ab bata rahe ho . ( meri taraf dekhte hue ) Aur tumne bhi nahi bataya humen ??

Manju : isme in dono ki kya galati hai bhaiya , jab main hi nahi janti thi apne bhatijon ko .

Rama : par tum isi shehar me thi to ek bar humen bata to deti .

Raghav : sari galati meri hai , mujhe inme college jana chahiye tha . Khair chhodo ab se tum hamare sath rahogi .

Vijay : ruko bhai ,, abhi to wo aayi hai aur tum abhi se use humse door le jana chahte ho. Thoda hamara bhi to khayal kar lo .

Raghav : sorry bhaiya par Manju ko agar college jana hai to fir wo shehar me hi rahegi na . Is liye maine aisa kaha . Ab bhai k hote ye alag kisi ghar me rahe to acha thoda hi lagega .

Gauri : wo bad ki bat hai abhi to ye yahin rehne wali hai. Deepika jao zara inke liye kuch le kar aao .

Deepika mami k sath nidhi didi aur divya mausi bhi kitchen me chali gyi . Idhar main Mohit ko lekar ghar se bahar aa gya . Hum abhi ghar se nikale hi the k samne se Raju bhi ata hua nazar aya .

Amit : abe sale tu ,, kahan tha itne din se ? Ab main gaon me hun aur tu hai k nazar nahi aa raha .

Raju : tera to mast hai bhai par mujhe to sab kam khud hi karne hain na . 4 mahine reh gye hain shadi me aur abhi tak rehne ka intzam nahi hua. Usi chakkar me laga hua hun. Shehar me ek do makan dekhen hain kiraye par rehne k liye . Tujhe to pata hi hai shadi k bad Renu ko lekar yahan se jana padega .

Mohit : ye kya chakkar hai ? Jana kyun padega ?

Raju : malik wo ....

Mohit : malik nahi Mohit . Tu bata yar kya chakkar hai.

Fir maine rahi aur Renu ki prem kahani aur shadi ki shart k bare me Mohit ko bata diya .

Mohit : bas itni si bat , pehle bata dete to ab tak tumhari shadi bhi karwa dete hum . Tum chinta mat karo samjho tumhara kam ho gya . Tum bas shadi ki taiyari karo ghar ki chinta mujh par chhod do .

Raju : par Malik ....

Mohit : ek bar aur malik kaha na to daant tod dunga . Jaisa Amit hai tumhare liya waisa mujhe bhi samajh . Waise bhabhi hai kaisi ? Mujhe bhi to milawao .

Raju : kya bhai ,, aap bhi meri firki le rahe ho .

Amit : abe itna sharma kyun raha hai ? Ja ja kar Renu ko bulawa bhej de. Waise bhi ghar par shehar sab aaye hue hain . Sab didiyan hain ghar par to usko bhi koi problem nahi hogi . Aur tujhe kisi se milawana bhi hai

Raju : kisse ?

Amit : tu pehle Renu ko bulawa bhej k aa ,, chal hum sath hi chalte hain tere

Main aur Mohit Raju k sath chal diye . Raju ne apne pados me rehti ek ladki k hath Sandesha Renu tak bhijwa diya . Mohit ko ghar le ja kar Raju aur uski amma ne Mohit ki bahut aaobhagat ki aur mujhe bhi pyar diya . Mohit ne bhi koi aupacharikta na dikhate hue apne pan se Raju k ghar chai pani piya . Fir hum Raju ko sath lekar ghar ki taraf chal diye . Maine aunty ko bhi ghar aane ko kaha to wo kuch der me aane ka kehne lagi . Jab hum ghar pahunche to Raju bari bari sab se mila . Uncle aunty aur karishma didi se milne k bad Raju ne Manju bua ko dekha to unke bare me puchne laga .

Raju : ye kaun hain ? maine pehle inhe nahi dekha

Gauri : ye Amit ki bua hai , sagi bua . Aur Manju ye hai Raju . Amit k bachapan ka ek lauta dost . Bahut hi pyara hai .

Manju : idhar aa raju, tu bhi mere Amit jaisa hi hai .

Manju bua ne Raju ka matha chuma Raju ne bhi bua k paon chhue . Raju to hairan ho raha tha kyunki usne to kabhi suna hi nahi tha k meri koi bua bhi hai .



‘ sir humne Ritu singh k bare me pata kiya hai. Kuch jyada to pata nahi laga paye kyunki wo kisi se milti nahi hai. Bas do logon ko chhod kar ‘

BALJEET rai apne office me baitha tha aur uska aadmi samne khada use Ritu singh k bare me khabar de raha tha. BALJEET rai ne Ritu singh se sidha takrane ka khayal dimag se nikal kar use dusre tareekon se handle karne k bare me vichar bana liya tha . Apne dost ND k khaufnak hashar k bad to BALJEET rai ki himmat jawab hi de gyi thi is liye ab wo Sam dam bhed ki neeti par chalne ki koshish kar raha tha . Ritu k bare me itna to use pta hi tha k na use paise se khareeda ja sakta hai aur na use daraya ja sakta hai . Sidha takrav kar k ND jaisa powerful neta aur gunda itni buri maut mara gya to BALJEET rai fir ek safedaposh chehra tha .

BALJEET rai : jaldi bata kaun hain wo do log?

Aadmi : sir ek to wo aapko sauteli behan hai Manju . Dono ki bahut achi dosti hai , pichle do teen din se wo usi k ghar reh rahi hai. Itna hi nahi wo beech beech me bhi uske pas aati jati rehti hai.

BALJEET rai : manjuu ,,, lagta hai uske pas jana hi padega . Dusri kaun hai ?

Aadmi : dusri nahi dusra , wo ek ladka hai . College me padta hai . Aur Manju k ghar bhi wo aksar ata jata hai .

BALJEET rai : ladka ???? Aur Manju k ghar bhi wo ata jata hai ? Kaun hai wo ladka ?

Aadmi : Amit nam hai sir aur college me sheena Rima baby k sath hi padta hai . Shayad wo dost bhi hai unka . Baby ki Birthday party me bhi aya tha wo . Aur Raghav k ghar bhi uska kafi ana jana hai .

BALJEET rai : kyaaa ? Raghav k ghar ana jana ?? Us ladke ki poori kundali nikal kar mujhe do . Ab jao yahan se .

BALJEET rai ka Hukum sun kar wo aadmi nikal gya aur BALJEET rai apna scotch se adha bhara gilas utha kar fir se muh ko lagate hue sochne laga . Kahan wo thodi der pehle sirf Ritu k bare me hi soch raha tha aur yahan ek aur nam nikal kar samne aa gya tha jisne use soch me daal diya tha .

BALJEET ( man me ) akhri ye ladka hai kaun ? Ritu aur Manju dono se hi milta hai aur Raghav k sath bhi . Raghav k sath hai to iska matlab Manju se Raghav mil chuka hoga . Nahi , aisa hota to Manju ab tak akeli nahi hoti. Khair pehle is ladke ki kundali pata lag jaye fir dekhta hun. Tab tak Manju se hi kam chalana padega . Par mujhse to bat bhi nahi karegi wo. Megha ??? Nahi . Sheena se thoda bahut pyar hai usko. Rupali ????? Han han , ye kam Rupali hi kar sakti hai. Waise bhi bade din ho gye uske sath kuch kiya nahi . Aaj usi k sath rat rangeen karta hun. Kambakht itne salon k bad bhi abhi tak uska badan waise hi kasa hua hai .



‘ bhabhi hai to mast yar , gaon me bhi itni sundar ladkiyan hoti hain mujhe pata hi nahi tha’

Mohit Renu ko dekh kar ye bat keh raha tha jise sun kar Raju baglen jhankne laga . Renu is waqt ladkiyon ki toli me ghiri hui thi apni humumar saheli k sath. Uske chehre par chhayi sharam ki laali dekh main andaza laga raha tha k karuna aur naina didi uske maze le rahi hain. Bade sab ek kamre me the . Deepika mami divya mausi aur nidhi didi kitchen sambhal rahi thi aur yahan ye sab ladkiyaan alag mehfil lagaye hue thi . Hum bas door se dekh hi sakte the kamre me aane ki ijazat jo nahi thi .

Amit : tune kya samjha tha k sirf shehar me hi achi ladkiyan hoti hain? Bataun minal ko phone kar k tum yahan line mar rahe ho gaon me ladkiyon par ?

Mohit : abe marwayega kya ? Main to bas aise hi keh raha tha .

Mohit minal ka nam sunte hi fattu ban gya . Main ache se janta tha minal use kaise daba k rakhti hai . Minal ka nam sun kar Raju k kan bhi khade ho gye . Janta to wo bhi tha is bare me .

Raju : waise minal memsaab bhi bahut achi hain. Dono ki jodi bahut achi hai .

Amit : mem saab nahi bhabhi bol samjha . Abhi tujhe kyaa samjhaya tha

Mohit : yar tum log yahan ruk kar dekhte raho main zara minal se bat kar k ata hun. Usko phone bhi nahi kiya tha aane se pehle , ab gussa karegi .

Amit : ja sale tu bhi poora fattu hai . Abhi se ye hal hai Pata nahi shadi k bad kya karega . Mujhe to lagta hai ladki tu hai aur wo ladka.

Mohit khisiya kar hasta hua upar chala gya aur main Raju k sath wahin khada reh gya. Dekhte dekhte andhera hone laga to Renu apni saheli k sath ghar jane k liye nikal padi . Raju bhi uske piche piche ho liya. Aur main andar sabke pas chala gya . Aaj itni der tak uncle aunty aur yahin the aur unhe dekh kar lag raha tha k wo aaj rat yahin rukne wale hain.

Kuch der me rat ka khana ban gya aur sab sath me baith gye khane k liye . Aaj ghar par itni raunak lagi hui thi jaise k koi function rakha hua ho . Manju bua k aane ki vajah se ghar ka mahol hi badal gya tha aaj to .
 

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Congratulations Raja chouhan Bhai for 10 million views aur ye aapke mehant ko darshata hai ki aap viwers ko kitne acche tarah se bandh ke rakha hai and i hope this will go for a long run...cheers❤👍
Excellent update bhai
Superb update
awesome updates
Jabardast update
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Nice and emotional update raja bhai maza aa gaya
1 CRORE VIEWS
CONGRATULATIONS ENIGMA BHAI IS NAYE MILE STONE KE LIYE.
Aree Badhai ho Enigma bhai phirse aapko 1 crore views k liye...
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Awesome update
Outstanding update raja bhai.kya writing h yar apki.
Bohat hi pyaara update.
Superb Fantastic update :rock1: :applause:
Mast shaandar behtreen update
Awesome Updateee
Just Awesome Raja chouhan bhai.......

It looked like watching a '
Rajshri Production' Family film......
Congratulations Raja chouhan bhaiya for completing 10 Million views on MSMT and becoming number 3rd most viewed story on xf.

Just a number hope other milestone also break
Congratulation bhai for 10m views...nice update...ab kahani dusra mod legi aisa lag raha hai...waiting for some thrill suspense
Super duper fantastic update, full of love & imotion
Awesome update brother
Super bro
Nice update 👍
Kamal ki update
Very nice update
Ati ati sundar raja bhai
awesome lajawab speechless superbbbb bs bhai ab aap nidhi ka pyar ka ahsas krwao Amit ko thoda enke bich bhi to roamantic moment hone chahhiye ab biwi hai uski but uske husband ko hi nhi pta vo to usko behen ke hisab se hi pyar krta hai...or ek apne twist de diya ki amit ka baba kuch chupa rhe hai ab kya chupa rhe hai to aap hi jante or aane wale update me hame pta chalega bahut hi behtrin update hai hamesha ke tarah bs ese hi likhte rhiye..............
keep posting bhai..............
waiting for next update.............

Congratulations bhai for 10 million + views...............
Bohut hee khubsurat aur emotional update Raja chouhan bhai...💕💕
Ek crore views ke liye bahut bahut badhayi Raja chouhan bhai...💕💕
Awesome update bro q
Nice update bhai
Awesome update
Awesome update with little suspense..... Nd congratulations for 10M....
Mast update raja bhai
:party:
Nice update...
marvellous update raja....akhirkar bua mil hi gayi launde ko...par ab ye dekhna hai ki pahle wala rishta kaayam rahta hai ya nahi..kyonki sach jaanne ke baad manju bhale hi dil se yahi soche ki amit uska sirf bhateeja hai. aur wo pahle jo anjane me kar baithi hai..wo ab nahi karegi..par akhir kab tak kyonki choti manju is manju ko kab yaad dila de chote amit ki...fir uske baad putariya ki controlling dekhni hai..aur pawan aur damini ke murder jo accident dikhaya jaa raha hai..uske bare me mamu jaanta hai..aur ye baat may be pata ho ya na ho..ye dekhna hai. aur ho na ho pawan air damini ka murder with nanu and nani us bhosdi wale balwant rai ne hi kiya hoga. ab amit kahi shena ko ye na bata de ki wo cousin hai..jab ye launde ki laundiya ko pata chalega tab reaction dekhna hai...waise gori chamdi(sheena) sudhar to gayi hai..ye bhi dekha hai pichle kai updates me.. aur NIDHI aur AMIT ka system kab set karoge..ek to jane anjane shadi karwa di aur nuptial night ka pata nahi..aur kuch jabardast scene RITU ke sath bhi dikhao.
very nice update .. full emotional atyachaar .. he he .. Manju ka to grand welcome hua hai .. magar ye amit ka baccha kitna chaalu nikla .. lage haathe ek hafte ki monthly basis par manju mam ke yaha booking fix bhi karwa li .. khud he .. iske lakshan theek na lag rahe muzhe lekhak ji .. yo chhora haath se nikalta jaa raha hai ...

rahi sahi kasar ritu puri kar degi .. wo bhi adhed tharki police wali hai .. ye dono mil kar bechari Manju ki haalat kharab kar denge .. manju to sudharna chahti hai .. magar Amit ke irade nek nahi hai .. apni pyaari bechari bua ke liye .. :hehe:

chalo ab dekhte hai Raghav ji ke aane ke baad Manju mam ka kaisa reaction hota hai .. aur saath mein Mohit ka bhi ...
behatrin update bro
Fantastic update 👍👍
Khoobsurat update bhai, congrats for the milestone
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Nice updates
Badhiya ho Raja bhai 10million views ke liye 🎉🎉🎇🎇🎆🎆
Nice n fantastic updated
Great Raja bhai.....
Bahut hi sundar update diya hai. Is story ka ek bahut hi mahtpurn aadhyay khatam hua. Dhekthe hai ab kon sa story ka kon sa important part shuru hoga. Mere khyal se to ab story aapne asli or sabse important part pe hi chalegi jiski jhalak is episode mai hi mil gaya hai.....
Waiting for your next update......
Bahut hi shandar or bhawnaon se otprot update
Lajabab Update...
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai
Awesome update bhai waiting for next update eagerly...
Rasprad aur Romanchak. Pratiksha agle update ki
Is amazing story, why not you make web series of this story. It would be tremendous hit... And congratulations 💐
nice update keep it
Awesome update
Nice update bhai super mind blowing update bhai for next update
Bahot bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Bahot khoob superb fantastic
Bahot hi badhiya update Raja Bhaiya. aapne bahot hi pyar se aur santulit sabdo me acche se chitrit kia is awser ko. bada accha laga padhkar.
Ab jopata hai uska intejar hai jaise rahhav ka reaction aur baki sabhi ka bhi.
Waiting for next update bhaiya
Superb update
Nice update bhai
VERY VERY VERY EMOTIONAL AUR BAHUT HI PYAAR BHARA UPDATE BHAI
Zabardast awesome interesting update
Aab update bahot delay hoo jaata hai
Bahdiya update khushi hui akhirkar manju ko uska parivar mil gaya, jo itne salon se bichra hua tha, ab dhekna hay ki ab manju or amit ka relation kaise age badta hay, bhale ab woh uski bua hay, par bua hone se pahle jab yeh sab pata nahi tha tab dono ko tab manju apne aapko amit ko dil or atma se uski patni samajti the jo ki sabhi jante hay readers.....yaha tak ke usne toh amit se maa bane tak ki soch liya tha jo ki amit or Ritu dono jante hay, par tab he jab amit apni study poori kar ke job karne lage taki jab woh amit ke bache ki maa bane toh amit ek pati or baap ki tarha dono ka baar sabhal sake,ab dekhna hay ki writer ji kaise manju ki woh dili khuaish kaise poori karte hay or deepika or Ritu toh dono ke relationship ke bare main jante ha, ab age kaise kya hota hay ye dhekhna hay...manju ki yeh icha kaise poori hoti hay kyounki Koi bhe aurat ho duniya main uski agar sabse badi khushi or khuaish hay woh apne hanthon main khud se paida kiya hua bacha dekhna hay, yeh jo khushi hay woh ek aurat ke liyea duniya ki sab cheejon se oopar hay, jo 9 mahine woh har pal us ahsas ko mehsoos karti hay woh aloukik hota hay iska koi bhe comparison nahi....maa bana ek aurat ki dil he nahi atma se bhe juda hota hay
Jabardast update
Jabardast behtareen superb update Raja bhai :good:
Nice update bhai
Raja bhai abhi tak ki story padh kar kuch observer kiya hai jiske baare me kuch suggestion dena chahoonga.
1.) Dr.Reena ka character me kaafi achcha development ho skta hai. Abhi tak ki story padh ke aisa lagta hai ki usse aage dukh milega.
-Dr.Reena hi aisi character hai jisne apne hero ko pehli mulakat se pyaar kiya (Baakiyon ke alag-2 reason the).
-Dr.Reena ko Shayad baap ka jyada pyaar nhi mila, apni maa ke saath bhi usne vo galat kaam hote hue dekha aur humesha apni maa aur bahan ko sambhala.
-Amit ke kehne par usse dur kuch mahino ke liye London bhi ek umeed leke chali gai.
Baaki beheno ki tarah vo bhi jeevan bhar Amit ka saath (shaadi) deserve karti hai. Vaise bhi agar last me Radha-Reema hi bachti hain to kaafi expected sa lagega. Jabki Reena aur nidhi ko bhi barabar ka mauka milna chahiye. Story me kuch khaas alag nazar aayega aur sirf bhai behen hi nahi ye umar me gap ki deewaron ko bhi todega.

2.) Neha didi aur Advocate Suman ka bhi story me use dhang se use nahi hua hai. Vaise mujhe umeed hai ki kahani me aage inka achcha role aaega.

Agar aap mera comment padhe aur suggestion par sochen to achcha lagega aur shayad main story jo aapke dimaag me hai uspe bhi jyada farak nhi padega. Vaise aap apne hisaab se likhiye. Jahan tak kahini ki baat karoon to iss kahani ne dil chu liya hai. Bahut hi shaandar kahani hai aur last update bhi kamal ka tha. Asha karta hoon mera comment pe jaroor dhyan denge.
Kahani ke liye dhanyawad raja bhai.
Baaki readers bhi apni raaye aur salah de to achcha lagega.
Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Fabulous & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Wah aakhir sb khus happy family kitna pyar h yha manju b sb se jud k rhegi

Ohh nidhi ko pyaar to itna gehra ho gya ab vo amit ka sath nhi chhodne wali super



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:superb: :good: :perfect: awesome update hai raja bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
Nice update bhai 👍👌😀😊👏🙂
Bhai jabardast update
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Raja bhai abhi tak ki story padh kar kuch observer kiya hai jiske baare me kuch suggestion dena chahoonga.
1.) Dr.Reena ka character me kaafi achcha development ho skta hai. Abhi tak ki story padh ke aisa lagta hai ki usse aage dukh milega.
-Dr.Reena hi aisi character hai jisne apne hero ko pehli mulakat se pyaar kiya (Baakiyon ke alag-2 reason the).
-Dr.Reena ko Shayad baap ka jyada pyaar nhi mila, apni maa ke saath bhi usne vo galat kaam hote hue dekha aur humesha apni maa aur bahan ko sambhala.
-Amit ke kehne par usse dur kuch mahino ke liye London bhi ek umeed leke chali gai.
Baaki beheno ki tarah vo bhi jeevan bhar Amit ka saath (shaadi) deserve karti hai. Vaise bhi agar last me Radha-Reema hi bachti hain to kaafi expected sa lagega. Jabki Reena aur nidhi ko bhi barabar ka mauka milna chahiye. Story me kuch khaas alag nazar aayega aur sirf bhai behen hi nahi ye umar me gap ki deewaron ko bhi todega.

2.) Neha didi aur Advocate Suman ka bhi story me use dhang se use nahi hua hai. Vaise mujhe umeed hai ki kahani me aage inka achcha role aaega.

Agar aap mera comment padhe aur suggestion par sochen to achcha lagega aur shayad main story jo aapke dimaag me hai uspe bhi jyada farak nhi padega. Vaise aap apne hisaab se likhiye. Jahan tak kahini ki baat karoon to iss kahani ne dil chu liya hai. Bahut hi shaandar kahani hai aur last update bhi kamal ka tha. Asha karta hoon mera comment pe jaroor dhyan denge.
Kahani ke liye dhanyawad raja bhai.
Baaki readers bhi apni raaye aur salah de to achcha lagega.
Rina aur nidhi ka role thoda pechida hai bhai par insaf zarur hoga unke sath
 
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