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[Raja chouhan]

Update 229



Shera bhai k sath baten karte hue kafi waqt beet gya tha. Is dauran nidhi didi ki call aayi wo mujhse aane ka pooch rahi thi to maine unhe kuch der me aane ka kaha. Tabhi mujhe khyal aya k ab tak Ritu ki call nahi aayi thi to maine usse puchne k liye use call laga di. Bell bajte hi Ritu ne call uthayi magar jo maine suna use sunte hi mere hosh ud gye .

Ritu : hh helo ... eee sali fenk ee ka .

Ritu ki awaz k sath hi kisi aadmi ki ye awaz sunayi di aur call cut gyi. Ritu ghabrayi hui lag rahi thi aur piche se aayi wo awaz bata rahi think Ritu kisi musibat me fans gyi hai . Ye sunte hi main jhatke se khada ho gya . Shera bhai ne bhi meri pareshani bhamp li thi .

Shera : kya hua bhai kya bat hai ?

Amit : Shera bhai Ritu madam musibat me hai .

Shera : kyaaaa ??? Jaldi se phone laga fir se phone laga .

Maine dubara phone lagaya to note reachable aane laga .

Amit : Shera bhai ab phone nahi lag raha hai . Zarur wo kisi musibat me fans gyi hai. Mujhe abhi jana hoga . Aap jante hain wo jagah kahan hai ?

Shera : han janta hun chal main bhi sath chalta hun . Mujhe pehle hi shak tha k wo jagah sahi nahi zarur koi gadbad hogi . Ae Bheema jaldi se gadiyan nikalo sabko chalen ko bolo . Sab apni apni guns sath le lo .

Shera bhai k kehte hi wahan maujood sab log girti se apni apni guns lekar bahar ki taraf daude aur gadiyon me sawar ho gye . Shera bhai mujhe apne sath lekar gadi me baithe aur hamare sath 5 gadiyan aur taiyar ho gyi. Jitne bhi log the sab hathiyar band the . Gaadi ko full speed me chalane ko keh kar Shera bhai phone nikal kar apne aadamiyon se bat karne lage . Mera dil dimag Ritu ko lekar pareshan ho gya tha. Ritu ek bahut imandar officer thi aur Manju m ki sabse khas saheli . Main bhi dil se use pasand karta tha . Upar se hamare beech rishta bhi to kayam ho chuka tha . Main pareshani me driver ko gaadi Tez chalane ko keh raha tha .

Amit : gaadi aur tez chalao humen jaldi wahan pahunchna hai isse pehle k bahut der ho jaye .

Shera : tum fikar mat karo mere bhai , Shera k hote unke sath kuch galat nahi ho sakta . Wo ab meri zimmedari hai .

Shera bhai mujhe haunsala de rahe the . Magar fir bhi mera dil ghabra raha tha aur mujhe gussa bhi bahut aa raha tha . 20 minutes me hi hum is jagah aa pahunche jo Ritu ne batayi thi magar humen wahan koi dikhai nahi diya . Sirf 2 cars aur ek truck khada tha. Andhera ho raha tha aur door tak koi aadmi ki zaat tak dikhai nahi de rahi thi .

Gadi rukte hi hum jaldi se neeche utar aur bhag kar idhar yadgar dhoondhne lage . Magar kuch bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha .

Amit : Shera bhai wo log kahan chale gye ? Ye gadiyan yahan aise hi nahi khadi wo zarur yahin aayi hogi .

Shera : tum theek keh rahe ho , ae dhoondho kahin kuch nazar aaye to batao .

Sab log gadiyon se nikal kar idhar udhar dhoondhne me lag gye the . Sab ne hathon me guns pakdi hui thi . Main idhar udhar bhag kar dekh raha tha magar kuch dikhai nahi de raha tha . Main bhag kar mandir k piche ki taraf gya to ek kacha rasta piche ko jata dikhayi diya. Main us taraf aage barha to Shera bhai bhi mere sath ho liya . Kuch doori par hi mere paon k neeche ek mobile aa gya jo toota hua tha . Maine use utha kar dekha to mujhe samajhte der nahi lagi k ye Ritu ka ho sakta hai .

Amit : ye dekho Shera bhai , ye mobile is jagah par pada hai. Ho na ho zarur ye Ritu madam ka hi hai. Wo zarur isi taraf gye hain.

Shera bhai ne apne sathiyon ko piche aane ko kaha . Main daudta hua aage barh raha tha aur Shera bhai mere sath the. Baki sab bhi hamare piche aa rahe the . Is kacche raste par main tezi se aage barh raha tha . Kuch der bad hi mujhe ek deewar dikhai di . Jiske aaspas katar me ped lage hue the . Jisse andar kya hai ye pta nahi chal raha tha . Ye dekhte hi Shera bhai ne meri baju pakad kar mujhe rok liya .

Shera : thehro bhai , lagta hai yahi un logon ka thikana hai .

Amit : aap mujhe rok kyun rahe hain bhai. Hamare pas waqt nahi hai . Agar madam ko kuch ho gya to .

Shera : chhote bhai hamla karne se pehle dushman ko janch lena zaruri hai . Aur ye khel bandook aur goli ka hai. Ab tum piche rahoge . Yahan se aage main dekhunga .

Amit : nahi bhai main piche nahi hatunga .

Shera : piche hatne ko nahi keh raha bhai. Par jin logon ne ek police officer par hath dala hai wo log mamuli to nahi honge . Aur pata nahi wo kitne honge. Is liye pehle humen dekh lena chahiye . Waise bhi ye tumhara kam nahi hai. Ye hamara kam hai . Bheema zara dekh to andar kya hai aur kitne log hain.

Shera bhai ne apne aadmi ko kaha aur baki sab fail gye . Deewar ki aot me hun sab khade ho gye aur Bheema nam ka wo aadmi badi firti se ped k sath upar charh kar andar dekhne laga . Andar ka jayaza lene k bad wo neeche utar kar hamare pas aya .

Bheema : bhai andar to bahut bada adda hai , us taraf gate hai . Gate k pas 4 log hain hathiyar k sath . Us taraf Piche ek bada sa kamra hai jiske bahar kuch log baith kar daru pi rahe hain. Jis tarah wo wahan khade hain lag raha hai k andar kisi ko band kiya hua hai. Aur beech me jo building hai wahan par bhi kuch log neeche aur kuch upar charhe hue hain. Kam se kam 25 se 30 log honge .

Shera : iska matlab sidha hamla karna bewakufi hogi. Humen hoshiyari se kam lena hoga . Aisa karo ped k sath deewar par charh kar bina awaz kiye andar ghuso . Jab tak zaruri na ho koi goli nahi chalayega . Jinke pas khanjar hai wo log aage raho aur rasta clear karo .

Shera bhai k order milte hi jaldi se sab alag alag jagah ped se jaldi se deewar pe charhne lage . Andhere ka fayda uthate hue deewar faand kar hum sab andar ki taraf utar gye . Yahan roshni nahi ki gyi thi shayad is jagah ko gupt rakhne k liye . Magar fir bhi gate k pas bane cabin aur jo kamre bane the unke andar roshni thi. Jaldi se sab apni apni position sambhal kar un logon par toot pade . Main aur Shera bhai us kamre ki taraf barhe jisko band kar darwaze k pas kuch log pehra dete hue daru pi rahe the . Ye 6 log the .

‘ chalo apna peg uthao , andar boss to us chhamiya ka maza le raha hai aur hum yahan machar mar rahe hain ‘ ek aadmi peg banata hua baki sab ko peene ko bol raha tha

‘ kya maal hai saali upar se police wali , sala kitna khauf suna tha is ka aur aaj boss use apni randi banane wale hain ‘ dusra aadmi peg uthata hua bola .

‘ jo bhi kaho sali hai mast item , ek bar mujhe uski lene ka mauka mil jaye to uske badle me uski goli bhi kha lunga ‘ teesra gunda ye bat bol kar peg ko ek saans me halak se neeche utaarta hua bola .

‘ are hariya keh raha tha boss keh rahe the k uski lene k bad boss use hamare liye chhod dega . Fir sab mil kar maze karenge ‘ chauthe gunde ne bat kahi to baki sab bhi hasne lage

Unki baten sun kar mera khoon khaul gya aur main bina kisi bat ki parwah kiye un logon par toot pada . Sharab ki adhi bhari botal utha kar maine ek k sir par de Mari aur tooti hui bital ko dusre k pet me ghusa diya . Isse pehle k baki sab koi harkat kar pate maine ek aur gunde ki gardan pakad kar dusra hath uski tangon k beech daal kar use hawa me upar utha kar uska sir zameen ki taraf laate hue zor se zameen par patka aur wo itne me hi dher ho gya . Baki 3 log koi harkat karte usse pehle hi Shera aur uske 2 sathiyon ne un teeno ki aantadiyon me khanjar k kai war kar diye . Main jaldi se darwaza khola to andar kuch log the . Humen dekhte hi wo log humen dekhne lage . Main Ritu madam ko khoj raha tha magar wo yahan nahi thi

Amit : gusse se ) Ritu singh kahan hai? Jawab do warna ek ek ko jaan se mar dalunga .

Tabhi ek aadmi aage aya jise main pehchan gya. Ye police wala tha jise maine Ritu singh k sath dekha tha .

Pandey : Amit sir aap yahan ? Main inspector Pandey hun aapne pehchana ?

Amit : aap ? Aur ye log ?

Pandey : ye sab meri trah hi police wale hain. Hum Ritu madam k sath hi yahan aaye the .

Amit : Ritu madam kahan hai?

Pandey : wo Narayan das k pass hain. Us building me .

Mai tezi se bahar nikalne laga to goliyon ki awaz aane lagi . Shayad un logon ko pata chal gya tha hamare yahan aane ka . Mai jaise hi bahar nikalne laga Shera bhai ne mujhe rokne ki koshish ki aur khud gun hath me pakde aage ho kar goliyan chalane lage . Sab taraf se goliyan chalne lagi thi. Inspector Pandey aur unke sathi bhi jaldi se un mare hue gundon ki guns utha kar goliyan chalane lage . Un gundon ki baten sunne k bad mujhe aisa lag raha tha k kahin Ritu k sath Narayan das rape na kar raha ho is liye mujhse rukna mushkil ho raha tha . Main Shera bhai ko darkinar karta hua tezi se building ki taraf bhaga .

Shera : rukkkk ja bhaaaiiiii

Shera bhai ne zor se chilla kar mujhe rokne ki koshish ki magar main tezi se aage barh gya . Aur Shera bhai mere piche hi daud pade gaoliyan chalate hue . Goliyon ki bochhaark beech main tezi se building ki taraf barh gya aur darwaze tak pahunchte pahunchte jo log darwaze k pas khade the unhe piche se aa rahi goliyon ne bhoon diya aur wo dharashayi ho gye . Main jaldi se andar ghus gya . Tabhi samne ek gunda aa gya . Isse pehle k wo mujh par nishan lagata Maine darwaze k pas hi padi dhatu ki murti utha kar us par de Mari aur wo neeche gir gya . Use uthne ka mauka diye bagair Maine fir se wo murti uthayi aur uske muh par zor se war kiya jisse wo behosh ho gya . Maine charo taraf nazar daudayi to wahan 3 kamre the . Maine bhag kar unko check karna shuru kiya magar wahan koi nahi tha bas kuch hathiyar aur saman pada tha . Tab main sidiyon se upar ki taraf bhaga . Sidiyan charhte charhte ek aur gunda pistol taane samne aa gya aur usne muh par war kiya magar main ek taraf ko kudte hue khud ko bacha liya aur uske sath hi ‘ dhaayen dhaayen ‘ kar k do goliyan chali jo us gunde ko lagi aur wo niche gir gya . Maine piche dekha to Shera bhai meri taraf hi barh rahe the . Main fir se uth khada hua aur samne ka darwaza zor se kat mar kar kholte hue andar ghusa . Yahan bhi koi nahi tha . Fir main dusre kamre ki taraf barha . Ye darwaza kick tha . Mujhe laga k shayad Ritu madam yahin hogi . Maine apni sari takat ikatthi karte hue zor se dhakka mara jisse wo darwaza lock wale hisse se ukhad kar toot ta hua khul gya. Andar ka nazara dekh kar meri ankhon me lagi utar aya . Samne bed par Ritu madam bandhi hui thi jo neeche se poori tarah nirvastra thi aur Narayan daas poori tarah se nanga unki tangon k beech unke upar jhuk raha tha . Main goli ki raftar se us par toot pada aur ek zordar laat uski bagal me marte hue use bed se neeche gira diya . Maine jaldi se bedsheet Ritu madam k upar dali aur bina koi bat kahe sune palat kar Narayan das ki taraf barha jo zameen se uthane ki koshish kar raha tha .

Amit : kutte teri himmat kaise hui Ritu ko hath lagane ki. Apne gande hathon se tune isko chhua kaise ? Main teri jaan le lunga .

Narayan daas jaldi se uthne laga to Maine us par hamla karte hue ek aur zordar laat use de Mari aur is bar mera nishana uska centre point tha . Apne land par zordar prahar se hi Narayan daas dharashayi ho gya . Maine use hawa me uthate hue zor se uski kamar apne ghutne par de Mari jisse uski reerh ki haddi me choti lagi aur ek zor dar cheekh uske muh se nikli ‘ aaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiii aaaaaaaaahhhhhhh ‘ main is waqt aape se bahar ho chuka tha mujhe kuch aur sunai nahi de raha tha . Maine use dono paon se pakad kar zor se hawa me ghuma kar zameen par dhobi patka diya to ‘ kataaak ‘ ki ek zordar awaz aayi jiske sath hi Narayan das ki zordar cheekh gunji aur wo khamosh ho gya. Magar main wahin nahi ruka aur fir se use dobara dhobi patka diya magar is bar uski koi awaz nahi aayi

Amit : cheekh haramzade aur cheekh aaj teri cheekhen in deewaro me goonjni chahiye .

Maine gusse me aapa khote hue fir se use dobara dhobi patka diya . Uska jism shithil ho chuka tha magar mujhe jaise khud apna hi hosh nahi tha k main kya kar raha hun aur kya ho raha hai. Main Narayan Dass ko utha utha kar aise patak raha tha Jaise dhobi kapde dhote hain. Tabhi Shera bhai kamre me aaye aur mujhe gusse me aise Narayan daas ko utha utha kar latakte dekh wo bhi sakte me aa gye. Unhone mujhe awaz dekar rokne ki koshish ki magar main kahan sun raha tha . Fir Shera bhai ne piche se meri gardan me apni bahen lapet kar mujhe kheencha

Shara : zor se ) maine kaha chhod ise chhod , pagal ho gye ho kya wo mar chuka hai

Amit : chhod do bhai , iski himmat kaise hui Ritu madam k sath aisa karne ki . Chhod do mujhe .

Shera : ruk ja mere bhai wo mar chuka hai chhod de use . Pagal ho gya hai Kya chhod use. Dekh madam bhi tujhe rukne ko keh rahi hain chhod ise .

Tabhi mere kano me Ritu madam ki awaz sunai di jo shayad kab se mujhe kuch keh rahi thi

Ritu : Amit ruk jao khud ko sambhalo please ruk jao .

Maine Ritu madam ki taraf dekha to wo bed se bandhi hui meri taraf hi dekh rahi thi aur mujhe rok rahi thi. Main Narayan daas ko chhod kar unki taraf lapka aur jaldi se unke hath khole . Hath khulte hi wo jaldi se uth baithi aur mere gale lag gyi . Wo roti hui mere gale lagi to mera gussa dheere dheere thanda hone laga .

Amit : aap , aap theek to hain na madam ? Aap ko kuch hua to nahi?

Ritu singh bas roye ja rahi thi. Unke muh se koi awaz nahi nikal rahi thi . Shera bhai fir se hamar kareeb aye aur mere kandhe par hath rakh kar bole .

Shera : tum yahin ruk kar madam ko sambhalo main bahar dekhta hun .

Shera bhai mustaidi k sath darwaze se bahar nikle to Maine Ritu madam ka sir sehlate hue unka chehra dono hathon me pakad kar unke aansoo saaf kiye

Amit : bas , bas ab chup ho jaiye . Main aa gya hun na . Sab theek hai .

Ritu : rote hue ) tum nahi aate to aaj wo mujhe ....

Itna keh ke Ritu madam fir se mere gale lag kar rone lagi . Bahar se goliyan chalne ki awaz abhi bhi aa rahi thi. Magar ab kam ho gyi thi. Awaz toote hue darwaze ki taraf se aa rahi thi. Shayad ye kamra sound proof tha agar darwaza band hota to ye bhi sunayi na deti. Isi vajah se Narayan daas ko shayad pata nahi chala k bahar kya ho raha hai warna wo yahan se bhagne ki koshish karta . Maine Ritu madam ko haunsala dete hue unhe bed se uthaya to bedsheet hat te hi unka nichala bhag fir se nirvastra ho gya . Maine ye dekhte hi nazren ghuma li. Aur zameen par padi Ritu madam ki jeans aur penty utha kar bina unki taraf dekhe unhe pakdati aur unki taraf pith kar k khada ho gya .

Amit : jaldi se ise pehen lijiye . Humen yahan se nikalna hai .

2 minutes me hi Ritu ne apne kapde theek kiye aur bahar chalne se pehle Narayan daas k pass ja kar zor zor se use karne lagi .

Ritu : uth kutte ab uth kyun nahi raha , mujhe randi banayega tu ? Uth saale dekh aa gya mujhe bachane wala . Uth saale dekh apni maut ko .

Ritu gusse se Narayan das ko thokaren maar rahi thi . Magar uski zara si bhi awaz nahi nikli . Maine Ritu madam ko apni agosh me le liya unka gussa kam karne k liye aur wo bhi fir se mere gale lag gyi .

Ritu : rote hue ) tumne mujhe bacha liya agar tum waqt par na aate to ye kameena meri ....

Amit : kuch nahi hua sab theek hai . Main aa gya na , sab theek hai. Aise kaise koi aapke sath galat kar leta. ab aap khud ko sambhaliye.

Ritu subak rahi thi par jald hi usne mahol ko samajhte hue khud ko sambhala. Itne me goliyan chalne ki aawaz band ho gyi . Abhi Ritu mere gale lagi hui thi k Shera bhai k sath unke kuch sathi aur inspector Pandey apne kuch sathiyon k sath aa pahunche .

Pandey: madam aap theek hain ?

Ritu Pandey ki aawaz sun kar mujhse alag hui .

Ritu : han main theek hun.

Pandey : Narayan das ko dekhte hue ) ye to mara gya madam , ab kya hoga ? Ye ek MLA kahin hum sab isme fass na jayen .

Pandey ki bat sahi thi. Uski hatya par kanooni karwaai to honi hi thi aur aise me un sab ki naukari khatre me pad sakti thi.

Ritu : tum log yahan se nikal jao . Ye sab meri vajah se hua hai . Main sab apne upar le lungi . Tum me se kisi ko kuch nahi hoga.

Pandey: par madam aap ko jail ho sakti hai.

Ritu : janti hun, is kaise rakshas ko saza dene k badle sab manzur hai mujhe .

Shera : nahi , aap jaisi imandar police officer ki vajah se hi logon ko insaf mil sakta hai agar aap hi na rahengi police me to aam logon ka kya hoga. Madam aap yahan se chale jaiye main sab dekh lunga . Waise bhi main to pehle se hi mujrim hun to ek aur jurm sahi .

Ritu : nahi , aisa karne se ise shaheed kaha jayega. Main iski zimmedari lekar logon ko iska sach to bata sakti hun

Shera : samajhne ki koshish kariye madam, zaruri hai to aapka police me rehna . Isi kya hoga kya nahi wo sab chhodiye. Ise to iski karni ki saza mil hi gyi . Aap jaiye yahan se , Amit tum unhe lekar chale jao yahan se .

Ritu : nahi

Shera : main aapke aage hath jodta hun madam aap jaiye yahan se .

Pandey: ye theek keh raha hai madam , aap jaisi officer ki zarurat hai department ko . Chaliye yahan se .

Amit : ye sab maine kiya hai aap dono kyun apne upar le rahe hain. Aap dono chale jaiye yahan se. Shera bhai aap yahan meri vajah se aaye the na , main nahi chahta aap par ek aur ilzam aaye .

Shera : kaisi baten kar rahe ho chhote bhai , tumhari vajah se aaj mujhe ek nek kam karne ka mauka mila hai. Main tumhara shukraguzaar hun iske liye. Tum meri chinta mat karo .

Ritu : koi kuch nahi karega samjhe tum log. Pandey hamare yahan aane k sab saboot khatam kar k sab kuch jala do. Aur iski lash k sath yahan ho hathiyar aur gair kanooni saman pada hai sab rakh do. Jo bhi yahan aayega sab samajh jayega . Kisi ko kuch karne ki zarurat nahi hai .

Pandey : ji madam , yahi sahi rahega . Par aap yahan se nikal jaiye isse pehle k koi yahan tak pahunche . Main Shera k sath mil kar sab saf karwa deta hun.

‘ mujhe maaf kar dijiye madam , maine sab majburi me kiya . In logon ne meri family ko ....’

ek ladki rote hue Ritu k kadmo me gir gyi.

Ritu : chhodo mujhe , tumne sirf apni family k bare me socha aur aaj yahan tumhari vajah se mere sath kya hone wala tha iska andaza bhi hai tumhe? Kam se kam ek ishara to kar diya hota , main samajh jati .

Ladki : main bahut dar gyi thi madam , in logon ne mujhe aur meri family ko kaid kar rakha tha . Aap hi bataiye main kya karti ?

Ritu : utho ab chali jao yahan se ab tum Azad ho. Yahan kya hua hai ye kisi ko pta nahi chalna chahiye .

Ladki : main kisi se kuch nahi kahungi madam .

Shera : ab aap nikliye yahan se madam . Isse pehle k koi yahan aa jaye .

Ritu : thanks Shera ji , main aapka ehsan .....

Shera : sharminda mat kijiye madam , ye sab Amit ki vajah se hua hai . Iska hakdar sirf ye hai. Main to khud ehsan mand hun iska . Aap jaiye fir kabhi aapse mulakat hogi .

Shera bhai ne mujhe gale se lagaya aur wahan se nikal jane ko kaha . Pandey ne apne kuch sathiyon ko apne sath wahin rok liya aur baki sab ko Ritu madam k sath chale jane ko kaha . Main Ritu singh aur unke kuch sathi wapis mandir ki taraf aaye aur wahan khadi unki gadiyon me sawar ho gye . Ritu ne baki sab ko jane ko kaha.

Ritu : aap sab log jaldi se wapis apne shehar pahunch jao main bhi aa rahi hun .

‘ madam aap bhi sath hi chaliye , hum aap ko akela chhod kar kaise ja sakte hain ‘ unme se ek police wala bola .

Ritu : Shrivastav meri chinta na karo. WIse bhi main akeli kahan hun . Amit hai na mere sath. Tum log jao main bhi aa rahi hun thodi der me .

Ritu ki bat mante hue wo police wale wahan se nikal liye . Unke jate hue Ritu meri taraf dekhne lagi aur dekhte dekhte achanak se mere paon me gir gyi.

Ritu : thank you thank you very much . Tum waqt par nahi aate to aaj meri izzat lut chuki hoti. Tum ne mujh par bahut bada ehsan kiya hai .

Maine Ritu ko turant uthaya aur unki nam ankhon ko saaf kiya .

Amit : ye aap kya keh rahi hain , maine koi ehsan nahi kiya aap par . Ye to mera farz tha . Agar main waqt par nahi pahunchta to khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar pata. Manju m ko kya jawab deta main .

Ritu : Manju !! Sach me kitni lucky hai Manju k tum use mile. Aur uski vajah se tum meri zindagi me aaye . Ab se meri zindagi tumare liye hai , Sirf tumhare liye .

Amit : ab jyada emotional hone ka waqt nahi hai . Pehle yahan se nikaliye . Aur ye aapko ankhen itni lal kyun hain ? Aapki tabiyat to theek hai ?

Ritu : main theek hun un logon ne mujhe injection diya tha uski vajah se .....

Amit : injection ? Kaisa injection ? Humen Dr k pass chalna chahiye pehle . Chaliye jaldi se .

Ritu : ruko to

Amit : nahi pehle hum hospital chalte hain.

Maine Ritu ka hath pakad kar unhe car me bithane ki koshish ki to wo khud driving seat par baith gyi aur mujhe dusri taraf baithne ko kaha . Ritu mujhe bar bar pyar bhari nazron se dekhti hui car chala rahi thi.

Ritu : waise tum yahan is shehar me kya karne aaye the ?

Amit : bataya to tha main yahan uncle k sath .... oh mar gye , maine to unhe bataya hi nahi main kahan hun. Wo sab pareshan honge .

Maine jaldi se apni jeb se mobile nikala jo maine silent kar rakha tha . Maine dekha to wahan dheron miss calls thi. Sab se jyada nidhi didi ki. Maine turant unhe phone laga diya

Nidhi : Amit !! Amit , tum kahan ho ? Tum theek to ho? Tum phone kyun nahi utha rahe the ? Main kitna dar gyi thi. Tum kuch bolte kyun nahi kahan ho ?

Call uthate hi nidhi didi ghabrayi hui ek hi saans me dheron sawal puchne lagi.

Amit : shaant didi please chup ho jaiye . Aap kuch bolne ka mauka dengi tabhi to kuch bolunga

Nidhi : kaise shant ho jaun? Yahan meri kya halat ho rahi hai tumhe pata bhi hai . Kahan ho tum jaldi se aa jao

Amit : sorry didi par maine uncle ko bataya to tha k main apne ek dost k sath hun. Sorry wo kuch jyada hi time lg gya.

Nidhi : sorry nahi , tum jaldi se aa jao sab tumhara wait kar rahe hain. Uncle alag se pareshan hain ab tak to wo police ko bhi phone kar chuke hain .

Amit : kya ?? Police ko ? Magar kyun ? Maine to unhe bataya tha

Nidhi : tumne to kaha tha k jaldi aa jaoge aur fir tum phone bhi nahi utha rahe the to hun sab ko tumhari chinta ho rahi thi.

Tabhi didi se uncle ne phone pakad liya .

Uncle : Amit beta kahan ho tum ? Tum theek to ho ? Mujhe tumhari fikar ho rahi hai . Tum phone kyun nahi utha rahe the .

Amit : main theek hun uncle , wo galati se phone silent ho gya tha is liye aisa hua . Aap meri chinta na karen . Main aa jaunga .

Uncle : aa jaunga ? Tum ho kahan ? Abhi k abhi wapis aao .

Amit : main aa jaunga uncle wo kya hai main jis dost se milne aya tha uski tabiyat zara theek nahi hai tonis liye use Dr k pass lekar ja raha hun.

Uncle : kaun se hospital me ho tum mujhe batao . Main khud wahan ata hun.

Amit : are uncle aap tension kyun le rahe hain . Main aa jaunga . Bas ek bar Dr ko dikha lun .

Uncle : par bete ...

Amit : please uncle , main promis karta hun jaldi aa jaunga .

Uncle : acha theek hai , hum tumhara intzar kar rahe hain. Agar kisi cheez ki zarurat ho to phone karna . Hum yahin hain apne purane ghar me . Tumhe yad hai na ?

Amit : han uncle yad hai . Main yahan se free hokar ghar pahunch jaunga .

Itna bol kar Maine phone kat diya . Acha hua jo mujhe yad aa gya warna sab chinta me dube rehte . Phone katne k bad main abhi jo kuch bhi hua tha uske bare me sochne laga. Meri aankhon k samne sari film chalne lagi. Aaj mere hathon se ek khoon hua tha jo bahut badi bat thi. Chahe gusse me main wo sab kar gya tha par ab wo sab yad aate hi mujhe andar se ghabrahat si mehsus hone lagi thi. Yun to pehle bhi main ladai jhagde me pad chuka tha par pehle kisi ki jaan nahi li thi magar aaj ek hatya karne ka jurm main kar chuka tha.

Ritu : kya soch rahe ho ?

Mujhe soch me dooba dekh Ritu madam khud hi boli

Amit : mujhse bahut bada apradh ho gya madam , mere hathon aaj ek insan ki jaan chali gyi. Kisi ki jaan lene ka hak kisi ko bhi nahi hai. Kanoon ki nazar me aaj main bhi ek apradhi ban gya na. Agar ye bat mere pariwar ko pata chal gyi to wo mujhe maaf nahi karenge. Kya bitegi un par jab unhe pata chalega unka beta ek katil hai.

Ritu : kaun kehta hai tum katil ho ? Aur kis kanoon ki bat kar rahe ho , wo jise Narayan das jaise bahubali apne paon ki juti samajhte hain. Kanoon sabhya samaj k liye hote hain . In jaise darindon k liye nahi. Aise bhediyon ka wadh karna chahe kanoon ki nazar me galat ho par insaniyat ki nazar me kabhi galat nahi. Agar tum use na marte to main hi mar deti chahe bad me jo marzi hota . Aur ab to aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Tumne dekha na mere sathi bhi kaise khud hi saboot mitane me lag gye . Matlab unki nazar me bhi ye sab galat nahi hai. Wardi k piche hum police wale bhi insan hi hain. Kanoon hamare hath bandh deta hai magar sahi galat to hum bhi jante hain. Wahan jo kuch bhi hua use bhool jao. Is bat ko bilkul bhi man me mat lana k tumne koi apradh kiya hai. Rahi bat tumhare gharwalon ki to unhe kaun batayega ? Waise bhi is kam par to har kisi ko garv ho hoga .

Amit : ye sab kehna asan hai madam par fir bhi mera dil khud ko kasoorwar man raha hai. Kisi ki jan lena ....

Ritu : bas isse aage aur kuch mat socho. Tumne us darinde ko mar kar jane kitni masoom zindagiyan bachai hain. Hazaron logon ki duayen mil rahi hongi tumhe jo us darinde k hathon barbad hue honge . Ab aur kuch mat socho tumhe meri kasam.

Iske bad fir se kuch der khamoshi rahi aur fir Ritu madam ne khud hi mahol badalte hue bat shuru ki .

Ritu : ek bat puchun ? Tum itna gusse me kyun aa gye the ? Jab tum use utha utha kar zor se zameen par patak rahe the to tumhara ye roop dekh ke main bhi ghabra gyi thi . Tumhe ho kya gya tha ?

Amit : mujhe khud nahi pata , magar jab maine use aap k sath zabardasti lete dekha to mujhe kuch hosh nahi rahi. Bas uske bad mujhe kuch yad nahi k Maine uske sath kya kiya .

Ritu : pyar bhari nazron se ektak mujhe dekhte hue ) itna pyar karte ho mujhse k apni jaan ki parwah kiye bina itna kuch kar guzare ? kash tum meri zindagi me pehle aaye hote to ...

Maine Ritu ki ankhon me dekha jahan mujhe beintaha pyar nazar aya .

Amit : to ?

Ritu : to Ritu sari duniya chhod deti tumhare liye .

Main khamoshi se bas Ritu ko dekh raha tha aur uske is prem samarpan ko mehsus kar raha tha.

Amit : main akela to nahi aya tha, ye sab Shera bhai ki vajah se hua warana main akela kya kar sakta tha.

Ritu : jo bhi hai par mere liye tumne jan ki bazi laga di . Ab meri zindagi tumhari amanat hai .

Ritu ki ankhen abhi bhi lal thi aur wo bar bar apni tangen sikod rahi thi sath hi uska chehra Lal surakh lag raha tha. Chalti car me khule sheeshon se aa rahi hawa k bad bhi wo paseene se bheeg rahi thi .

Amit : aap jaldi se pehle hospital chalo . Aapki tabiyat theek nahi hai .

Ritu : main theek hun tum meri chinta mat karo .

Amit : wo sab bad me pehle hospital chal k ek bar Dr ko dikha lo aap .

Kuch hi der me humen ek hospital nazar aya to mere kehne par Ritu ne car ko wahan rok diya .

Ritu : ek bat ka dhyan rakhna wahan kisi ko mera asli nam aur main kya hun ye kya na chale .

Car se utarte hue Ritu ne ye kaha to main bhi uski bat ka matlab samajh gya . Hum jaldi se hospital me gye aur maine dr ko unhe check karne ko kaha . Ritu ne Dr ko bataya k use drink me kisi ne drug mila kar di hai to Dr ne pehle unka blood sample liya. Report aane tak Ritu lagatar apna badan ainth rahi thi . Report aate hi Dr ne Ritu ko apne cabin me bulaya .

Dr : dekhiye aapko bahut hi strong viagra drug di gyi hai jo harmons ko aggressive kar deti hai aur body me sex karne ki bhookh si lag jati hai. Is drug ko nikalne k liye blood me medicine drip through daalni hogi aur iske liye aapko admit hona hoga .

Ritu : main admit nahi ho sakti Dr aap medicine de dijiye .

Dr : dekhiye sirf medicine se kam nahi chalega . Ye bahut hi strong drug hai . Isko nikalne ka yahi tareeka hai ya fir ....

Ritu : ya fir kya ?

Dr : dekhiye ye sex k liye harmons ko active karne ki drug hai . Aur dusra tareeka ye hai k aapko lagatar sex karna hoga taki iska asar khatam ho sake . Aap samajh rahi hain na main kya keh raha hun ?

Ritu : main samajh gyi Dr , aap dawa de dijiye bas .

Main bahar baitha Ritu ka wait kar raha tha . Ritu bahar aayi aur mujhe chalne ko kaha .

Amit : Dr ne kya kaha ?

Ritu : batati hun pehle yhan se chalo .

Hum dono car me baith gye aur wahan se nikal gye . Ritu ki halat lagatar kharab hoti ja rahi thi . Wo paseene se lagatar bheegi ja rahi thi .

Amit : aapki halat theek nahi hai , Dr ne kaha kya hai kuch to bataiye ?

Ritu : batati hun thoda sa wait karo .

Kuch hi palon me Ritu ne ek hotel k bahar car ko roka .

Amit : hum yahan kyun ruk gye ?

Ritu : mere ilaj k liye .

Amit : aapka ilaj wo bhi yahan ? Yahan kaun sa ilaj hoga aur kaun karega ?

Ritu : pehle andar chalo aur han reception par ja kar rat k liye apne nam se room lo .

Mujhe samaj nahi aa raha tha k Ritu karna kya chah rahi hai . Maine reception par ja kar apne nam se room book kiya aur waiter ne mujhe kamra dikha diya . Ritu bhi piche piche aa gyi . Waiter k jate hi Ritu room me aayi aur darwaza andar se lock kar diya .

Amit : ab to batiye k aap kis ilaj ki bat kar rahi hain aur kaun karega ilaj yahan ?

Ritu : nasheeli ankhon se mujhe dekhte hue ) tumhe pata hai mujhe kya hua hai ? Us kameene ne mujhe viagra drug di thi taki main uske sath sex karun . Usi ka asar hai mujh par aur Dr ne kaha hai k ise nikalne k liye mujhe sex karna hoga warna meri tabiyat aur jyada kharab ho jayegi . Ab samjhe k mera ilaj kya hai ? Aur mera ilaj ab sirf tum hi kar sakte ho . Ummmmmmm

Itna kehte hi Ritu mujh par jhapat padi aur mere honthon ko apne honthon me jakad kar kiss karne lagi . Ritu bahut jyada garam ho chuki thi aur ab main bhi uski is garmi ko mehsus kar pa raha tha . Waise to mera bilkul bhi man nahi tha par jaisa ki Ritu ne bataya uski is halat ka ilaj ab sirf yahi tha to maine bhi uska sath dene ka faisla kiya aur use kiss karne laga . Ritu bahut jyada wild hoti ja rahi thi aur mere honthon ko danton me ke dabakar kheench kheench kar kiss kar rahi thi . Wo mere kapde nochne lagi to maine bhi uska sath dete hue apni T-shirt utar di . Ritu ne apni T-shirt bhi khud hi utar di aur kaali bra me kaid uske thos waksh aur bhi jyada tan kar khade hue nazar aane lage . Agle hi pal uski bra bhi jism se juda ho chuki thi . Maine bina der kiye uske gore thos stano ko apne hathon me jakad liya aur zor se dabane laga . Ritu mere hathon par apne hath rakh kar khud hi zor se press karwane lagi . Ritu ne mere balon ko apne hathon me pakad kar khinchte hue fir se mere honth jakad liye aur kiss karne lagi . Ritu apni ek tang ko meri tang se ragad rahi thi to maine uske kulhon k neeche hath daal kar use hawa me utha liya aur Ritu ne meri kamar par apni tangen lapet li . Main Ritu ko goad me utha kar bed par le aya aur use wahan lita kar uske madmast stano ko chumne laga aur uske gulabi nipples apne danton me daba kar kheenchne laga .

Ritu : unmmm cccccc ummmmm mmmaaaaaa ccccc aur zor se karo unmmm kha jao common suck eat ummmm cccccccc

Ritu lagatar mere bal kheech rahi thi . Maine kuch der Ritu k stano ko chuma jisse wo aur bhi jyada wild hoti ja rahi thi. Ritu upar se nirvastra ho chuki thi aur neeche jeans me thi. Main abhi stano ko choom kar pet ki taraf barha hi tha k Ritu ne mujhe palat diya aur khud mere upar aa gyi . Agle hi pal wo meri jeans ko khol kar utarne lagi . Ritu is waqt utawle pan me thi jaise bahut jaldi ho . Ye halat shayad drugs ki vajah se hi thi is liye main bhi bas uska sath deta ja raha tha . Ritu ne jeans k sath hi mera underwear hi khinch kar utar diya . Kapdo se aazad hote hi mera land spring ki tarah uchal kar lehrane laga . Ritu ne jaldi se use hath me pakda aur bhukhe bhediye ki tarah land par toot padi . Magar usne jyada time waste nahi kiya aur apni jeans penty k sath hi utar kar ek dam nangi ho gyi . Maine abhi ache se dekha bhi nahi tha use k wo bed par ghutno k bal hoti mere upar aa gyi aur land ko hath se pakad kar apni choot par sey kiya aur bina der kiye neeche baith gyi. Ek hi jhatke me adha land choot me ghus gya jise Ritu k muh se karah nikal gyi .

Ritu : aaaaaahhhhh cccccccc uiiii maaaaaa bada zaleeem hai cccccc par aaaj main ise chhodungi nahi mmmm aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh

Ritu ne apni bat poori karte hue apna jism thoda sa upar kiya aur agle hi pal dhakk se neeche baith gyi aur ek bar fir se wo zor se chillayi. Aur isi k sath hi uske chutad meri janghon par tik gye . Ritu ka gora badan kamagni me jal kar lal gulabi ho chuka tha . Aur abhi land ko jhatke se jad tak lene se karah raha tha . Ritu ne apne honth danton me daba liye the aur ankhen band kar k is dard ko jajb kar rahi thi . Maine hath barha kar uske stano ko masalna shuru kiya to ke chehre par dard k bhaw kuch km hue aur usne ankhen khol kar meri aram dekha .

Amit : itni jaldi kya thi aapko ? Aram se bhi to kar sakti thi . Dekha kitni dard ho rahi hai ab aapko .

Ritu : ye dard hi to acha lagta hai tumhare sath , main chahti hun ye dard tum mujhe bar bar do . Aaj tumne mera dil meri aatma sab kuch jeet liya hai . Is jism ko jitna chahe dard mile par ye sirf tumse pyar hi chahega aur aaj main har dard sehna chahti hun . Ccccc ahhh aahhh ahhh aaahhh

Ritu meri ankhon me dekhte hue khud hi mere land par apni choot patakne lagi. Maine uske stano ko daba raha tha aur wo apne hathon se apne baal noch rahi thi. Ritu ka gora majbut badan mere land par uchal raha tha jisse uske stan hawa me uchal rahe the . Wo pahlon ki tarah apne baal noch rahi thi . Jaise jaise waqt beet raha tha Ritu aur bhi jyada wild hoti ja rahi thi.

Ritu : fuckkk fuckkk fuckkk ccc aur zor se karo aur tez fuckk me like slut fuckkk me ccccc ummmm

Ritu ka khud par kabu nahi tha . Ritu ko kabu karne k liye maine ab use palat kar neeche dal liya aur khud uske upar aa gya . Ritu ki lambi gori chikni tangon ko kandhe par rakh kar maine uski jangon ko pakda aur tez tez jhatke marne laga .

Ritu : aaahhh aaahhh ccc aur tez aur zor se karo aur zor se ,,, cccc wo haramzada meri izzat lutna chahta tha mujhe randi banana chahta tha ummmmccccc haramzada kutta use kya pta main uske baaap ki randi hun tumhari randi hun aur zor se karo aur zor seee eeeee aaahhhhh sun bhadwe dekh tera baap mujhe kaise chod raha hai . Maine kaha tha na mujhe hath lagaya to tu zinda nahi bachega , ab to mar kar Azad ho gya hai na , dekh tera bap kaise mujhe chod raha hai . Ise kehte hain asli mard , mere is jism par sirf isi mard ka hak hai . Tere jaise bhaawon ka nahi kutte aaaahhh aaaahhh aur zor se karo meri jaaan aaaj k baad is choot me kabhi garmi na paida ho aise thandi kar do ummmm ummmm

Amit : tum Rabdi nahi ho tum meri Ritu ho meri saali aadhi gharwali main tumhe kabhi kuch hone nahi dunga meri jaaan

Ritu : aadhi nahi poori gharwali hun mere malik jab chaho jahan chaho mujhe apne neeche liya lena , Ritu aapko kabhi mana nahi karegi bas aise hi mujhe pyar karna hamesha . Aaahhh aaahhh

Ritu lagatar kuch na kuch bole ja rahi thi aur mujhe uska rahi thi wastaw me uske jism ki aag usse ye sab bulaw rahi thi jise main thanda karne me laga hua tha . Ritu mere neeche leti khud hi apni kamar uchal kar land ko aur jyada andar lene ki koshish kar rahi thi . Chudai ka toofan lagbhag adha ghanta chala jab tak k meri bas nahi ho gyi . Aur akhir me main Ritu ko ghodi bana kar uski sawari karta hua uske upar hi dheh gya uski choot ko apne pani se bharta hua . Ritu ki choot pta nahi kitni bar o I chhod chuki thi magar wo abhi bhi thandi nahi hui thi. Mera pani nikalte hi main uski peeth par hi gir gya aur wo mere neeche sab gyi. Kuch der hum dono apni saanse durust karte rahe . Kab meri saanse kuch sambhalo to mujhe apne mobile ki ring tone sunai di . Maine zameen par giri apni jeans me se mobile nikala to dekha nidhi didi ki call thi .

Nidhi : akhir tum ho kahan ? Phone kyun nahi utha rahe kab se kar rahi hun . Time dekho kitna ho gya hai . Kab aa rahe ho ghar ?

Amit : ohhh ss sorry sorry didi mujhe pta hi nahi chala . Wo kya hai na apne dost ko lekar Dr k pas aya tha to bas isi me pata nahi chala.

Nidhi : ab kaisa hai tumhara dost ? Aur ab tum ghar kab aa rahe ho . Agar koi zaruri masla hai to mujhe batao main bhi wahan aa jati hun.

Amit : are didi aap yahan aa kar kya karengi . Main aaaaaaaaaaaa rahhhhhhaaaaaa hun na .

Mere shabd siski ban gye the kyunki Ritu fir se mujhe garam karne lagi thi aur mere land ko muh me bhar chusne lagi thi . Maine use rokne ki koshish ki par wo man nahi rahi thi .

Nidhi : ye kaise bat kar rahe ho ? Tum theek to ho na ? Kahin tumhe to kuch .....

Amit : nahi didi mm main bilkul theek hun . Aaap chinta mat karo . Main abhi rakhta hun Dr se bat karni hai . Aap meri chinta mat karo . Jaise hi yahan se free ho gaya to wapis aa jaunga . Aap mera wait mat kar mujhe der ho jayegi . Ok didi bye .

Didi ki bat sune bina hi Maine phone kat diya kyunki mujhse bardasht nahi ho raha tha jis trah se Ritu mera land muh me liye mujhe garam kar rahi thi . Phone ko side me fenk kar maine Ritu ki taraf dekha jo masti me khoyi mera land taiyar kar rahi thi. Shayad uske jism ki aag abhi thandi nahi hui thi. Maine Ritu ka sir sehlaya aur fir se shamil ho gya uske sath . Maine didi ko keh to diya tha k main wapis aaunga par Ritu ko dekh kar lag raha tha k ye rat lambi hone wali thi .

 

[Raja chouhan]

Super update bro

Small update but awesome update bhai

Superb update...

Raja chouhan भाई बहुत खतरनाक update है, पर पढ कर गुस्सा भी आ रहा है, eagerly waiting for next update in which Amit will save SP Ritu

Excellent update bhai

Superb update broo...
Awesome...
Jabardast

Mast Update

Ritu toh phas gayi ab kya uska rape bhi hogaa

BHai Story End Karwaoge kya aap Thoda aramse chalne dijiye story ko

Bhai ki entry baki h abi narayan ko tagda fodega uski so called sali ya gf pe hath jo dala h
Lagegi sabki lagegi...... Dar h uska loda he na kaat de jaise nidhi di wale time pichwade mai bottle fodh di thi......

Super update bro...
Waiting For Next

Bhai ab too amit ki entry karwa doo

Fabulous update...

Super update dear

Nice update

nice updates

Jiska dar tha wahee hua, sherni fas gayee bherio ke jhund mein, narayan das ne achha jaal banaya tha, ab ritu bebas hain, wo chach ke bhi kuchh na kar shakti hain, apne sathio ke jaan ke aage khud kee izzat daon pe laga diya, aur iske baad bhi wo kya unhe jinda chhorega iski koi guarantee nahin hain, lekin usne yeh risk le liya. ab yeh galti uski zindagi narak na bana de.

Bas aas hain toh wo phone call ka, ab phone karne wala kaun tha, aur tha bhi toh kya wo samjh bhi paya kee ritu mushibat mein hai, ab koi samajhdar admi hoga toh shayad samajh jaye.

Khair dekhte hain madad pahunchti hain ya nahin aur agar pahunchti bhi hain toh kya ritu tab tak salamt rahegi, ya phir apni izzat kho chuki hogi...

Iss update pe jyada kuchh tippani nahin kar shakte hain aapne bechain kar ke chhor diya hain, ab bina aage anjaam jaane aur kuchh nahiin bol shakte hain....

Nice update bro

good one

Nice update with awesome writing skills

Amazing update

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Waiting 4 next update...

Very much khatarnak update Raja chouhan bhai... Eagerly expecting next update...

Ek dum suspense thriller film wala rape scene bhai lekin maaza nahi aaya aapke bich mein hi chod diya........

ye tu aisa ho gaya jaise climax chal raha ho aur light Chali gayi.....

Bikul KLPD.....

Aaj to iss narayan das ki khair nahin hai,
Dekhte hain amit iska kya haal karta hai,
Waiting for next update

Lajavab update bhai majjedar ab intjaar he apne hero ki entry ki lagta he narayan dada ka kam lagne vala..... Plz save Ritu bcoz agr use kuch hua to iska gilt amit ko rhega

Nice update...

Bahad umda update mitr

Bhai ye galt hai kyu kiya ase update ka end. Pls yr next update do. Ritu. Ka kya hoga.???

Raja bhai ye suspense rakhane ka tareeka kuchh jancha nahin kyunki ek din baad dete par pura update dete to achha tha

Superb lajawab update di hai bhai. Par ap na yeh zulm kr diya hum reader's ka sath aise beech main update ko rok kr kher apki bhi majbori hai samjhte hai hum time nai hai next update ka wait rahe ga Raja sir

Kya bhai kam se kam yeh scene complete karne ke ka thana sala. Mast flow chal raha tha apane to KLPD kar diya




Waiting for new update bhai

Rangili update dost

Fantastic update Hy Raja bahi

Bhut achha update Bhai

where is Amit...........

Incomplete update..........
Waiting for next

Nice

Awesome update bhai waiting for next update eagerly...

Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai

Mind-blowing Fantastic update Raja Bro

Bhai story jitni lmbi chalti hai chalne do but end my karn plz

Mt karna bhai plz

nice .. thodi speed kam karo .. story ki .. aur kahani mein romance .. romanch .. thrill .. suspense har cheez ka balance bana kar rakho .. jaise ki pehle se karte aa rahe the .. na ki kucch readers ke kehne par kahani ki theme mein fer badal karte raho ...

jab kahani apne shauk pure karne ke liye likh rahe ho .. to apna shauk pura karo .. na ki auro ke hisaab se khud ko badal do .. naukri thode he kar rahe ho kisi ki .. jo unki itni farmaishe puri karni hai .. ye story aapki hai .. apne dum par aage le kar chalo .. do not let others intimidate you ...

aaj sab kucch bahut he jaldi ghatit ho gaya .. mere andaazan to ye 2-3 update tak thoda-thoda chalta rehna tha .. kyonki hamesha aap pehle bhi jab koi situation aisi banti thi to side by side aap kahani ke baaki paatro ki saath samanvay banaye rakhte the .. magar iss baar sara focus sirf Ritu par he kar diya ...

nice update ...

Nice update bro

Raja bhai ab to hero ki entry bhi krva do yaar

Nice update. Dekhte hai age kya hota.
Waiting for next update.

zabardast again

Bahut jabardast update raja bhai waiting for next

Ho sakta hai hero ki na ho or shera bhai ki ho ya hero or shera bhai dono ki ho

I totally agree with firefox bhai...dear Chouhan ji ...please write as per your own mind ....we want story as per your first 200 updates ....koi jaldibaji nahi hai..not as per readers comment....readers should appreciate only not to give suggestion for any changes...

Fantastic update

Excellent update superb no doubt about that

Aksar logo ki yahan par is update par yehe shikayat h k yeh beech mai chor diya but mera view h yehe jaga best thi chorne k liye baki jo b ho ga next update full mai ho ga aur wo lengthy b ho ga jaisa writer ne bola

Ap ki story read kar k itna to samjh geya hu mai k jo update ap next do gay wo kaisa ho ga
My view
Pehle ap apne aur shera k beech jo baatein ho rahi ho ge wo likho fay 1 paragraph mai phr ritu ko call karo gay kui k us ne bola tha wo ap ko matlb amit ko call kare ge but time ziyada ho geya to amit call kare ga bell b jaye ge ritu k mobile par call pick b ho ge aur beech mai jo ritu ka mobile N.D k admi ne tora aur bola wo sab amit sun ly ga ritu ko bachane aye ga yeh kaise hota h wo ap karo gay
I dont know k ap N.D aur amit ka fight dikhaty ho ya ni but lagta h ap dikhao ga but jo b ho fight gazab ki ho amit ki fight aise ho k shera ko b lagay k amit kisi sheer se kam ni h haan ek baat yeh b lagti h amit 3 se 4 N.D k admiyo ko mare ga phr ritu ka poochy ga gussay se N.D k admi amit ka gussa dekh kar room ka bataye gay amit shera ko kahe ga k shera N.D k admi ko dekhy wo khud ritu ko bachaye ga kui k andr ritu full nude ho ge na to koi aur jaye ga ritu ko b sharmindagi ho ge except amit

Raja bhai apki storie bohat hi badiya hai. Aaj hi id bhai hai maine.

Update acha tha chota tha,but acha tha..
Aur sath hi suspense chor gya ki..kya hero ritu ko bachane ayega..ya ritu ki izzat tar tar ho jayegi..jldise update dijiye jisase hame pata chale ki age kya,hoga.

Ab Shera aur Amit ki entry hogi aur ND ko uski saza milegi. Pratiksha agle update ki

Bohot hi badiya update.

Fantastic update

Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Y kya ritu to bot buri fasi sale puri planning kr rakhi thi



Waiting

Agar mene is story ko sahi se padha he to ritu ko jo fon aya tha wo acp sahab ya fir manju ka hoga jisane us gunde ki awaj bhi suni hogi aur turant amit ko hi fon milaya hoga help ke liye. Jisaki entry sayad hi ho jis tarah se lekhak ne sabko negetive hi response diya tha.

Bhai aaj update jrur dena

Ary guru dev ap kidher ho

N

Nice updates

Ajab rang mein likhi ho per ja ke Raja Bhaiya kahan phasa dia hai bechari ritu ko aur bechari ke pass koi chara nai hai vah to gai aisa lag raha hai joki bilkul bhi Sahi nahin lag raha hai aisa nahin hona chahie aur kahani ke aisi ghatnayen hi kahani mein Kai bar bahut dukh dete Hain baki aap jaane ki bechari Ritu ka aap kya karne Wale Hain
Aage ki update ka intezaar haiAage ki update ka intezar hai

Mast update
Waiting 4 next

Thk ja rhy ho bhai
Waiting for hero entry

Ha lakin ritu ka esse aage kuch nai hona chahiye nai to es story ka naam manhoos se mahan tak ka jo name hai wo hat ke manhoos se manhoos tak he reh jayega

Zaberdast update bhai shaandaar
Bahot khoob mazedaar lajawab

Lajabab Update...

Nice post...

Raja bhaiya update kab tak ayega

Superb raja bhai.....
Ummid se zayada Narayan das aage barh chuka hai. Ab is se aage nhi badha chahiye. Kuch kijye ritu k lye.....
Waiting for your next update....

Agar amit ajaye or ND ko kursi se band diya jaye or uske samne Ritu use dhika kar amit se chude to maja ajaye,bechara ND ki jhate sulag ke rakh ho jayengi, phir baad main ND ko jindagi se mukt kar de kyunki jail se toh woh nikal he ayega.

Waah bhai super
Awesome kya dimag paya he.

sir waiting for next update

Behad shandar soooper lajawab dhmakedar update

Very interesting

Bhai aaj update aayega kya

Update posted

 

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Update 229



Shera bhai k sath baten karte hue kafi waqt beet gya tha. Is dauran nidhi didi ki call aayi wo mujhse aane ka pooch rahi thi to maine unhe kuch der me aane ka kaha. Tabhi mujhe khyal aya k ab tak Ritu ki call nahi aayi thi to maine usse puchne k liye use call laga di. Bell bajte hi Ritu ne call uthayi magar jo maine suna use sunte hi mere hosh ud gye .

Ritu : hh helo ... eee sali fenk ee ka .

Ritu ki awaz k sath hi kisi aadmi ki ye awaz sunayi di aur call cut gyi. Ritu ghabrayi hui lag rahi thi aur piche se aayi wo awaz bata rahi think Ritu kisi musibat me fans gyi hai . Ye sunte hi main jhatke se khada ho gya . Shera bhai ne bhi meri pareshani bhamp li thi .

Shera : kya hua bhai kya bat hai ?

Amit : Shera bhai Ritu madam musibat me hai .

Shera : kyaaaa ??? Jaldi se phone laga fir se phone laga .

Maine dubara phone lagaya to note reachable aane laga .

Amit : Shera bhai ab phone nahi lag raha hai . Zarur wo kisi musibat me fans gyi hai. Mujhe abhi jana hoga . Aap jante hain wo jagah kahan hai ?

Shera : han janta hun chal main bhi sath chalta hun . Mujhe pehle hi shak tha k wo jagah sahi nahi zarur koi gadbad hogi . Ae Bheema jaldi se gadiyan nikalo sabko chalen ko bolo . Sab apni apni guns sath le lo .

Shera bhai k kehte hi wahan maujood sab log girti se apni apni guns lekar bahar ki taraf daude aur gadiyon me sawar ho gye . Shera bhai mujhe apne sath lekar gadi me baithe aur hamare sath 5 gadiyan aur taiyar ho gyi. Jitne bhi log the sab hathiyar band the . Gaadi ko full speed me chalane ko keh kar Shera bhai phone nikal kar apne aadamiyon se bat karne lage . Mera dil dimag Ritu ko lekar pareshan ho gya tha. Ritu ek bahut imandar officer thi aur Manju m ki sabse khas saheli . Main bhi dil se use pasand karta tha . Upar se hamare beech rishta bhi to kayam ho chuka tha . Main pareshani me driver ko gaadi Tez chalane ko keh raha tha .

Amit : gaadi aur tez chalao humen jaldi wahan pahunchna hai isse pehle k bahut der ho jaye .

Shera : tum fikar mat karo mere bhai , Shera k hote unke sath kuch galat nahi ho sakta . Wo ab meri zimmedari hai .

Shera bhai mujhe haunsala de rahe the . Magar fir bhi mera dil ghabra raha tha aur mujhe gussa bhi bahut aa raha tha . 20 minutes me hi hum is jagah aa pahunche jo Ritu ne batayi thi magar humen wahan koi dikhai nahi diya . Sirf 2 cars aur ek truck khada tha. Andhera ho raha tha aur door tak koi aadmi ki zaat tak dikhai nahi de rahi thi .

Gadi rukte hi hum jaldi se neeche utar aur bhag kar idhar yadgar dhoondhne lage . Magar kuch bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha .

Amit : Shera bhai wo log kahan chale gye ? Ye gadiyan yahan aise hi nahi khadi wo zarur yahin aayi hogi .

Shera : tum theek keh rahe ho , ae dhoondho kahin kuch nazar aaye to batao .

Sab log gadiyon se nikal kar idhar udhar dhoondhne me lag gye the . Sab ne hathon me guns pakdi hui thi . Main idhar udhar bhag kar dekh raha tha magar kuch dikhai nahi de raha tha . Main bhag kar mandir k piche ki taraf gya to ek kacha rasta piche ko jata dikhayi diya. Main us taraf aage barha to Shera bhai bhi mere sath ho liya . Kuch doori par hi mere paon k neeche ek mobile aa gya jo toota hua tha . Maine use utha kar dekha to mujhe samajhte der nahi lagi k ye Ritu ka ho sakta hai .

Amit : ye dekho Shera bhai , ye mobile is jagah par pada hai. Ho na ho zarur ye Ritu madam ka hi hai. Wo zarur isi taraf gye hain.

Shera bhai ne apne sathiyon ko piche aane ko kaha . Main daudta hua aage barh raha tha aur Shera bhai mere sath the. Baki sab bhi hamare piche aa rahe the . Is kacche raste par main tezi se aage barh raha tha . Kuch der bad hi mujhe ek deewar dikhai di . Jiske aaspas katar me ped lage hue the . Jisse andar kya hai ye pta nahi chal raha tha . Ye dekhte hi Shera bhai ne meri baju pakad kar mujhe rok liya .

Shera : thehro bhai , lagta hai yahi un logon ka thikana hai .

Amit : aap mujhe rok kyun rahe hain bhai. Hamare pas waqt nahi hai . Agar madam ko kuch ho gya to .

Shera : chhote bhai hamla karne se pehle dushman ko janch lena zaruri hai . Aur ye khel bandook aur goli ka hai. Ab tum piche rahoge . Yahan se aage main dekhunga .

Amit : nahi bhai main piche nahi hatunga .

Shera : piche hatne ko nahi keh raha bhai. Par jin logon ne ek police officer par hath dala hai wo log mamuli to nahi honge . Aur pata nahi wo kitne honge. Is liye pehle humen dekh lena chahiye . Waise bhi ye tumhara kam nahi hai. Ye hamara kam hai . Bheema zara dekh to andar kya hai aur kitne log hain.

Shera bhai ne apne aadmi ko kaha aur baki sab fail gye . Deewar ki aot me hun sab khade ho gye aur Bheema nam ka wo aadmi badi firti se ped k sath upar charh kar andar dekhne laga . Andar ka jayaza lene k bad wo neeche utar kar hamare pas aya .

Bheema : bhai andar to bahut bada adda hai , us taraf gate hai . Gate k pas 4 log hain hathiyar k sath . Us taraf Piche ek bada sa kamra hai jiske bahar kuch log baith kar daru pi rahe hain. Jis tarah wo wahan khade hain lag raha hai k andar kisi ko band kiya hua hai. Aur beech me jo building hai wahan par bhi kuch log neeche aur kuch upar charhe hue hain. Kam se kam 25 se 30 log honge .

Shera : iska matlab sidha hamla karna bewakufi hogi. Humen hoshiyari se kam lena hoga . Aisa karo ped k sath deewar par charh kar bina awaz kiye andar ghuso . Jab tak zaruri na ho koi goli nahi chalayega . Jinke pas khanjar hai wo log aage raho aur rasta clear karo .

Shera bhai k order milte hi jaldi se sab alag alag jagah ped se jaldi se deewar pe charhne lage . Andhere ka fayda uthate hue deewar faand kar hum sab andar ki taraf utar gye . Yahan roshni nahi ki gyi thi shayad is jagah ko gupt rakhne k liye . Magar fir bhi gate k pas bane cabin aur jo kamre bane the unke andar roshni thi. Jaldi se sab apni apni position sambhal kar un logon par toot pade . Main aur Shera bhai us kamre ki taraf barhe jisko band kar darwaze k pas kuch log pehra dete hue daru pi rahe the . Ye 6 log the .

‘ chalo apna peg uthao , andar boss to us chhamiya ka maza le raha hai aur hum yahan machar mar rahe hain ‘ ek aadmi peg banata hua baki sab ko peene ko bol raha tha

‘ kya maal hai saali upar se police wali , sala kitna khauf suna tha is ka aur aaj boss use apni randi banane wale hain ‘ dusra aadmi peg uthata hua bola .

‘ jo bhi kaho sali hai mast item , ek bar mujhe uski lene ka mauka mil jaye to uske badle me uski goli bhi kha lunga ‘ teesra gunda ye bat bol kar peg ko ek saans me halak se neeche utaarta hua bola .

‘ are hariya keh raha tha boss keh rahe the k uski lene k bad boss use hamare liye chhod dega . Fir sab mil kar maze karenge ‘ chauthe gunde ne bat kahi to baki sab bhi hasne lage

Unki baten sun kar mera khoon khaul gya aur main bina kisi bat ki parwah kiye un logon par toot pada . Sharab ki adhi bhari botal utha kar maine ek k sir par de Mari aur tooti hui bital ko dusre k pet me ghusa diya . Isse pehle k baki sab koi harkat kar pate maine ek aur gunde ki gardan pakad kar dusra hath uski tangon k beech daal kar use hawa me upar utha kar uska sir zameen ki taraf laate hue zor se zameen par patka aur wo itne me hi dher ho gya . Baki 3 log koi harkat karte usse pehle hi Shera aur uske 2 sathiyon ne un teeno ki aantadiyon me khanjar k kai war kar diye . Main jaldi se darwaza khola to andar kuch log the . Humen dekhte hi wo log humen dekhne lage . Main Ritu madam ko khoj raha tha magar wo yahan nahi thi

Amit : gusse se ) Ritu singh kahan hai? Jawab do warna ek ek ko jaan se mar dalunga .

Tabhi ek aadmi aage aya jise main pehchan gya. Ye police wala tha jise maine Ritu singh k sath dekha tha .

Pandey : Amit sir aap yahan ? Main inspector Pandey hun aapne pehchana ?

Amit : aap ? Aur ye log ?

Pandey : ye sab meri trah hi police wale hain. Hum Ritu madam k sath hi yahan aaye the .

Amit : Ritu madam kahan hai?

Pandey : wo Narayan das k pass hain. Us building me .

Mai tezi se bahar nikalne laga to goliyon ki awaz aane lagi . Shayad un logon ko pata chal gya tha hamare yahan aane ka . Mai jaise hi bahar nikalne laga Shera bhai ne mujhe rokne ki koshish ki aur khud gun hath me pakde aage ho kar goliyan chalane lage . Sab taraf se goliyan chalne lagi thi. Inspector Pandey aur unke sathi bhi jaldi se un mare hue gundon ki guns utha kar goliyan chalane lage . Un gundon ki baten sunne k bad mujhe aisa lag raha tha k kahin Ritu k sath Narayan das rape na kar raha ho is liye mujhse rukna mushkil ho raha tha . Main Shera bhai ko darkinar karta hua tezi se building ki taraf bhaga .

Shera : rukkkk ja bhaaaiiiii

Shera bhai ne zor se chilla kar mujhe rokne ki koshish ki magar main tezi se aage barh gya . Aur Shera bhai mere piche hi daud pade gaoliyan chalate hue . Goliyon ki bochhaark beech main tezi se building ki taraf barh gya aur darwaze tak pahunchte pahunchte jo log darwaze k pas khade the unhe piche se aa rahi goliyon ne bhoon diya aur wo dharashayi ho gye . Main jaldi se andar ghus gya . Tabhi samne ek gunda aa gya . Isse pehle k wo mujh par nishan lagata Maine darwaze k pas hi padi dhatu ki murti utha kar us par de Mari aur wo neeche gir gya . Use uthne ka mauka diye bagair Maine fir se wo murti uthayi aur uske muh par zor se war kiya jisse wo behosh ho gya . Maine charo taraf nazar daudayi to wahan 3 kamre the . Maine bhag kar unko check karna shuru kiya magar wahan koi nahi tha bas kuch hathiyar aur saman pada tha . Tab main sidiyon se upar ki taraf bhaga . Sidiyan charhte charhte ek aur gunda pistol taane samne aa gya aur usne muh par war kiya magar main ek taraf ko kudte hue khud ko bacha liya aur uske sath hi ‘ dhaayen dhaayen ‘ kar k do goliyan chali jo us gunde ko lagi aur wo niche gir gya . Maine piche dekha to Shera bhai meri taraf hi barh rahe the . Main fir se uth khada hua aur samne ka darwaza zor se kat mar kar kholte hue andar ghusa . Yahan bhi koi nahi tha . Fir main dusre kamre ki taraf barha . Ye darwaza kick tha . Mujhe laga k shayad Ritu madam yahin hogi . Maine apni sari takat ikatthi karte hue zor se dhakka mara jisse wo darwaza lock wale hisse se ukhad kar toot ta hua khul gya. Andar ka nazara dekh kar meri ankhon me lagi utar aya . Samne bed par Ritu madam bandhi hui thi jo neeche se poori tarah nirvastra thi aur Narayan daas poori tarah se nanga unki tangon k beech unke upar jhuk raha tha . Main goli ki raftar se us par toot pada aur ek zordar laat uski bagal me marte hue use bed se neeche gira diya . Maine jaldi se bedsheet Ritu madam k upar dali aur bina koi bat kahe sune palat kar Narayan das ki taraf barha jo zameen se uthane ki koshish kar raha tha .

Amit : kutte teri himmat kaise hui Ritu ko hath lagane ki. Apne gande hathon se tune isko chhua kaise ? Main teri jaan le lunga .

Narayan daas jaldi se uthne laga to Maine us par hamla karte hue ek aur zordar laat use de Mari aur is bar mera nishana uska centre point tha . Apne land par zordar prahar se hi Narayan daas dharashayi ho gya . Maine use hawa me uthate hue zor se uski kamar apne ghutne par de Mari jisse uski reerh ki haddi me choti lagi aur ek zor dar cheekh uske muh se nikli ‘ aaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiii aaaaaaaaahhhhhhh ‘ main is waqt aape se bahar ho chuka tha mujhe kuch aur sunai nahi de raha tha . Maine use dono paon se pakad kar zor se hawa me ghuma kar zameen par dhobi patka diya to ‘ kataaak ‘ ki ek zordar awaz aayi jiske sath hi Narayan das ki zordar cheekh gunji aur wo khamosh ho gya. Magar main wahin nahi ruka aur fir se use dobara dhobi patka diya magar is bar uski koi awaz nahi aayi

Amit : cheekh haramzade aur cheekh aaj teri cheekhen in deewaro me goonjni chahiye .

Maine gusse me aapa khote hue fir se use dobara dhobi patka diya . Uska jism shithil ho chuka tha magar mujhe jaise khud apna hi hosh nahi tha k main kya kar raha hun aur kya ho raha hai. Main Narayan Dass ko utha utha kar aise patak raha tha Jaise dhobi kapde dhote hain. Tabhi Shera bhai kamre me aaye aur mujhe gusse me aise Narayan daas ko utha utha kar latakte dekh wo bhi sakte me aa gye. Unhone mujhe awaz dekar rokne ki koshish ki magar main kahan sun raha tha . Fir Shera bhai ne piche se meri gardan me apni bahen lapet kar mujhe kheencha

Shara : zor se ) maine kaha chhod ise chhod , pagal ho gye ho kya wo mar chuka hai

Amit : chhod do bhai , iski himmat kaise hui Ritu madam k sath aisa karne ki . Chhod do mujhe .

Shera : ruk ja mere bhai wo mar chuka hai chhod de use . Pagal ho gya hai Kya chhod use. Dekh madam bhi tujhe rukne ko keh rahi hain chhod ise .

Tabhi mere kano me Ritu madam ki awaz sunai di jo shayad kab se mujhe kuch keh rahi thi

Ritu : Amit ruk jao khud ko sambhalo please ruk jao .

Maine Ritu madam ki taraf dekha to wo bed se bandhi hui meri taraf hi dekh rahi thi aur mujhe rok rahi thi. Main Narayan daas ko chhod kar unki taraf lapka aur jaldi se unke hath khole . Hath khulte hi wo jaldi se uth baithi aur mere gale lag gyi . Wo roti hui mere gale lagi to mera gussa dheere dheere thanda hone laga .

Amit : aap , aap theek to hain na madam ? Aap ko kuch hua to nahi?

Ritu singh bas roye ja rahi thi. Unke muh se koi awaz nahi nikal rahi thi . Shera bhai fir se hamar kareeb aye aur mere kandhe par hath rakh kar bole .

Shera : tum yahin ruk kar madam ko sambhalo main bahar dekhta hun .

Shera bhai mustaidi k sath darwaze se bahar nikle to Maine Ritu madam ka sir sehlate hue unka chehra dono hathon me pakad kar unke aansoo saaf kiye

Amit : bas , bas ab chup ho jaiye . Main aa gya hun na . Sab theek hai .

Ritu : rote hue ) tum nahi aate to aaj wo mujhe ....

Itna keh ke Ritu madam fir se mere gale lag kar rone lagi . Bahar se goliyan chalne ki awaz abhi bhi aa rahi thi. Magar ab kam ho gyi thi. Awaz toote hue darwaze ki taraf se aa rahi thi. Shayad ye kamra sound proof tha agar darwaza band hota to ye bhi sunayi na deti. Isi vajah se Narayan daas ko shayad pata nahi chala k bahar kya ho raha hai warna wo yahan se bhagne ki koshish karta . Maine Ritu madam ko haunsala dete hue unhe bed se uthaya to bedsheet hat te hi unka nichala bhag fir se nirvastra ho gya . Maine ye dekhte hi nazren ghuma li. Aur zameen par padi Ritu madam ki jeans aur penty utha kar bina unki taraf dekhe unhe pakdati aur unki taraf pith kar k khada ho gya .

Amit : jaldi se ise pehen lijiye . Humen yahan se nikalna hai .

2 minutes me hi Ritu ne apne kapde theek kiye aur bahar chalne se pehle Narayan daas k pass ja kar zor zor se use karne lagi .

Ritu : uth kutte ab uth kyun nahi raha , mujhe randi banayega tu ? Uth saale dekh aa gya mujhe bachane wala . Uth saale dekh apni maut ko .

Ritu gusse se Narayan das ko thokaren maar rahi thi . Magar uski zara si bhi awaz nahi nikli . Maine Ritu madam ko apni agosh me le liya unka gussa kam karne k liye aur wo bhi fir se mere gale lag gyi .

Ritu : rote hue ) tumne mujhe bacha liya agar tum waqt par na aate to ye kameena meri ....

Amit : kuch nahi hua sab theek hai . Main aa gya na , sab theek hai. Aise kaise koi aapke sath galat kar leta. ab aap khud ko sambhaliye.

Ritu subak rahi thi par jald hi usne mahol ko samajhte hue khud ko sambhala. Itne me goliyan chalne ki aawaz band ho gyi . Abhi Ritu mere gale lagi hui thi k Shera bhai k sath unke kuch sathi aur inspector Pandey apne kuch sathiyon k sath aa pahunche .

Pandey: madam aap theek hain ?

Ritu Pandey ki aawaz sun kar mujhse alag hui .

Ritu : han main theek hun.

Pandey : Narayan das ko dekhte hue ) ye to mara gya madam , ab kya hoga ? Ye ek MLA kahin hum sab isme fass na jayen .

Pandey ki bat sahi thi. Uski hatya par kanooni karwaai to honi hi thi aur aise me un sab ki naukari khatre me pad sakti thi.

Ritu : tum log yahan se nikal jao . Ye sab meri vajah se hua hai . Main sab apne upar le lungi . Tum me se kisi ko kuch nahi hoga.

Pandey: par madam aap ko jail ho sakti hai.

Ritu : janti hun, is kaise rakshas ko saza dene k badle sab manzur hai mujhe .

Shera : nahi , aap jaisi imandar police officer ki vajah se hi logon ko insaf mil sakta hai agar aap hi na rahengi police me to aam logon ka kya hoga. Madam aap yahan se chale jaiye main sab dekh lunga . Waise bhi main to pehle se hi mujrim hun to ek aur jurm sahi .

Ritu : nahi , aisa karne se ise shaheed kaha jayega. Main iski zimmedari lekar logon ko iska sach to bata sakti hun

Shera : samajhne ki koshish kariye madam, zaruri hai to aapka police me rehna . Isi kya hoga kya nahi wo sab chhodiye. Ise to iski karni ki saza mil hi gyi . Aap jaiye yahan se , Amit tum unhe lekar chale jao yahan se .

Ritu : nahi

Shera : main aapke aage hath jodta hun madam aap jaiye yahan se .

Pandey: ye theek keh raha hai madam , aap jaisi officer ki zarurat hai department ko . Chaliye yahan se .

Amit : ye sab maine kiya hai aap dono kyun apne upar le rahe hain. Aap dono chale jaiye yahan se. Shera bhai aap yahan meri vajah se aaye the na , main nahi chahta aap par ek aur ilzam aaye .

Shera : kaisi baten kar rahe ho chhote bhai , tumhari vajah se aaj mujhe ek nek kam karne ka mauka mila hai. Main tumhara shukraguzaar hun iske liye. Tum meri chinta mat karo .

Ritu : koi kuch nahi karega samjhe tum log. Pandey hamare yahan aane k sab saboot khatam kar k sab kuch jala do. Aur iski lash k sath yahan ho hathiyar aur gair kanooni saman pada hai sab rakh do. Jo bhi yahan aayega sab samajh jayega . Kisi ko kuch karne ki zarurat nahi hai .

Pandey : ji madam , yahi sahi rahega . Par aap yahan se nikal jaiye isse pehle k koi yahan tak pahunche . Main Shera k sath mil kar sab saf karwa deta hun.

‘ mujhe maaf kar dijiye madam , maine sab majburi me kiya . In logon ne meri family ko ....’

ek ladki rote hue Ritu k kadmo me gir gyi.

Ritu : chhodo mujhe , tumne sirf apni family k bare me socha aur aaj yahan tumhari vajah se mere sath kya hone wala tha iska andaza bhi hai tumhe? Kam se kam ek ishara to kar diya hota , main samajh jati .

Ladki : main bahut dar gyi thi madam , in logon ne mujhe aur meri family ko kaid kar rakha tha . Aap hi bataiye main kya karti ?

Ritu : utho ab chali jao yahan se ab tum Azad ho. Yahan kya hua hai ye kisi ko pta nahi chalna chahiye .

Ladki : main kisi se kuch nahi kahungi madam .

Shera : ab aap nikliye yahan se madam . Isse pehle k koi yahan aa jaye .

Ritu : thanks Shera ji , main aapka ehsan .....

Shera : sharminda mat kijiye madam , ye sab Amit ki vajah se hua hai . Iska hakdar sirf ye hai. Main to khud ehsan mand hun iska . Aap jaiye fir kabhi aapse mulakat hogi .

Shera bhai ne mujhe gale se lagaya aur wahan se nikal jane ko kaha . Pandey ne apne kuch sathiyon ko apne sath wahin rok liya aur baki sab ko Ritu madam k sath chale jane ko kaha . Main Ritu singh aur unke kuch sathi wapis mandir ki taraf aaye aur wahan khadi unki gadiyon me sawar ho gye . Ritu ne baki sab ko jane ko kaha.

Ritu : aap sab log jaldi se wapis apne shehar pahunch jao main bhi aa rahi hun .

‘ madam aap bhi sath hi chaliye , hum aap ko akela chhod kar kaise ja sakte hain ‘ unme se ek police wala bola .

Ritu : Shrivastav meri chinta na karo. WIse bhi main akeli kahan hun . Amit hai na mere sath. Tum log jao main bhi aa rahi hun thodi der me .

Ritu ki bat mante hue wo police wale wahan se nikal liye . Unke jate hue Ritu meri taraf dekhne lagi aur dekhte dekhte achanak se mere paon me gir gyi.

Ritu : thank you thank you very much . Tum waqt par nahi aate to aaj meri izzat lut chuki hoti. Tum ne mujh par bahut bada ehsan kiya hai .

Maine Ritu ko turant uthaya aur unki nam ankhon ko saaf kiya .

Amit : ye aap kya keh rahi hain , maine koi ehsan nahi kiya aap par . Ye to mera farz tha . Agar main waqt par nahi pahunchta to khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar pata. Manju m ko kya jawab deta main .

Ritu : Manju !! Sach me kitni lucky hai Manju k tum use mile. Aur uski vajah se tum meri zindagi me aaye . Ab se meri zindagi tumare liye hai , Sirf tumhare liye .

Amit : ab jyada emotional hone ka waqt nahi hai . Pehle yahan se nikaliye . Aur ye aapko ankhen itni lal kyun hain ? Aapki tabiyat to theek hai ?

Ritu : main theek hun un logon ne mujhe injection diya tha uski vajah se .....

Amit : injection ? Kaisa injection ? Humen Dr k pass chalna chahiye pehle . Chaliye jaldi se .

Ritu : ruko to

Amit : nahi pehle hum hospital chalte hain.

Maine Ritu ka hath pakad kar unhe car me bithane ki koshish ki to wo khud driving seat par baith gyi aur mujhe dusri taraf baithne ko kaha . Ritu mujhe bar bar pyar bhari nazron se dekhti hui car chala rahi thi.

Ritu : waise tum yahan is shehar me kya karne aaye the ?

Amit : bataya to tha main yahan uncle k sath .... oh mar gye , maine to unhe bataya hi nahi main kahan hun. Wo sab pareshan honge .

Maine jaldi se apni jeb se mobile nikala jo maine silent kar rakha tha . Maine dekha to wahan dheron miss calls thi. Sab se jyada nidhi didi ki. Maine turant unhe phone laga diya

Nidhi : Amit !! Amit , tum kahan ho ? Tum theek to ho? Tum phone kyun nahi utha rahe the ? Main kitna dar gyi thi. Tum kuch bolte kyun nahi kahan ho ?

Call uthate hi nidhi didi ghabrayi hui ek hi saans me dheron sawal puchne lagi.

Amit : shaant didi please chup ho jaiye . Aap kuch bolne ka mauka dengi tabhi to kuch bolunga

Nidhi : kaise shant ho jaun? Yahan meri kya halat ho rahi hai tumhe pata bhi hai . Kahan ho tum jaldi se aa jao

Amit : sorry didi par maine uncle ko bataya to tha k main apne ek dost k sath hun. Sorry wo kuch jyada hi time lg gya.

Nidhi : sorry nahi , tum jaldi se aa jao sab tumhara wait kar rahe hain. Uncle alag se pareshan hain ab tak to wo police ko bhi phone kar chuke hain .

Amit : kya ?? Police ko ? Magar kyun ? Maine to unhe bataya tha

Nidhi : tumne to kaha tha k jaldi aa jaoge aur fir tum phone bhi nahi utha rahe the to hun sab ko tumhari chinta ho rahi thi.

Tabhi didi se uncle ne phone pakad liya .

Uncle : Amit beta kahan ho tum ? Tum theek to ho ? Mujhe tumhari fikar ho rahi hai . Tum phone kyun nahi utha rahe the .

Amit : main theek hun uncle , wo galati se phone silent ho gya tha is liye aisa hua . Aap meri chinta na karen . Main aa jaunga .

Uncle : aa jaunga ? Tum ho kahan ? Abhi k abhi wapis aao .

Amit : main aa jaunga uncle wo kya hai main jis dost se milne aya tha uski tabiyat zara theek nahi hai tonis liye use Dr k pass lekar ja raha hun.

Uncle : kaun se hospital me ho tum mujhe batao . Main khud wahan ata hun.

Amit : are uncle aap tension kyun le rahe hain . Main aa jaunga . Bas ek bar Dr ko dikha lun .

Uncle : par bete ...

Amit : please uncle , main promis karta hun jaldi aa jaunga .

Uncle : acha theek hai , hum tumhara intzar kar rahe hain. Agar kisi cheez ki zarurat ho to phone karna . Hum yahin hain apne purane ghar me . Tumhe yad hai na ?

Amit : han uncle yad hai . Main yahan se free hokar ghar pahunch jaunga .

Itna bol kar Maine phone kat diya . Acha hua jo mujhe yad aa gya warna sab chinta me dube rehte . Phone katne k bad main abhi jo kuch bhi hua tha uske bare me sochne laga. Meri aankhon k samne sari film chalne lagi. Aaj mere hathon se ek khoon hua tha jo bahut badi bat thi. Chahe gusse me main wo sab kar gya tha par ab wo sab yad aate hi mujhe andar se ghabrahat si mehsus hone lagi thi. Yun to pehle bhi main ladai jhagde me pad chuka tha par pehle kisi ki jaan nahi li thi magar aaj ek hatya karne ka jurm main kar chuka tha.

Ritu : kya soch rahe ho ?

Mujhe soch me dooba dekh Ritu madam khud hi boli

Amit : mujhse bahut bada apradh ho gya madam , mere hathon aaj ek insan ki jaan chali gyi. Kisi ki jaan lene ka hak kisi ko bhi nahi hai. Kanoon ki nazar me aaj main bhi ek apradhi ban gya na. Agar ye bat mere pariwar ko pata chal gyi to wo mujhe maaf nahi karenge. Kya bitegi un par jab unhe pata chalega unka beta ek katil hai.

Ritu : kaun kehta hai tum katil ho ? Aur kis kanoon ki bat kar rahe ho , wo jise Narayan das jaise bahubali apne paon ki juti samajhte hain. Kanoon sabhya samaj k liye hote hain . In jaise darindon k liye nahi. Aise bhediyon ka wadh karna chahe kanoon ki nazar me galat ho par insaniyat ki nazar me kabhi galat nahi. Agar tum use na marte to main hi mar deti chahe bad me jo marzi hota . Aur ab to aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Tumne dekha na mere sathi bhi kaise khud hi saboot mitane me lag gye . Matlab unki nazar me bhi ye sab galat nahi hai. Wardi k piche hum police wale bhi insan hi hain. Kanoon hamare hath bandh deta hai magar sahi galat to hum bhi jante hain. Wahan jo kuch bhi hua use bhool jao. Is bat ko bilkul bhi man me mat lana k tumne koi apradh kiya hai. Rahi bat tumhare gharwalon ki to unhe kaun batayega ? Waise bhi is kam par to har kisi ko garv ho hoga .

Amit : ye sab kehna asan hai madam par fir bhi mera dil khud ko kasoorwar man raha hai. Kisi ki jan lena ....

Ritu : bas isse aage aur kuch mat socho. Tumne us darinde ko mar kar jane kitni masoom zindagiyan bachai hain. Hazaron logon ki duayen mil rahi hongi tumhe jo us darinde k hathon barbad hue honge . Ab aur kuch mat socho tumhe meri kasam.

Iske bad fir se kuch der khamoshi rahi aur fir Ritu madam ne khud hi mahol badalte hue bat shuru ki .

Ritu : ek bat puchun ? Tum itna gusse me kyun aa gye the ? Jab tum use utha utha kar zor se zameen par patak rahe the to tumhara ye roop dekh ke main bhi ghabra gyi thi . Tumhe ho kya gya tha ?

Amit : mujhe khud nahi pata , magar jab maine use aap k sath zabardasti lete dekha to mujhe kuch hosh nahi rahi. Bas uske bad mujhe kuch yad nahi k Maine uske sath kya kiya .

Ritu : pyar bhari nazron se ektak mujhe dekhte hue ) itna pyar karte ho mujhse k apni jaan ki parwah kiye bina itna kuch kar guzare ? kash tum meri zindagi me pehle aaye hote to ...

Maine Ritu ki ankhon me dekha jahan mujhe beintaha pyar nazar aya .

Amit : to ?

Ritu : to Ritu sari duniya chhod deti tumhare liye .

Main khamoshi se bas Ritu ko dekh raha tha aur uske is prem samarpan ko mehsus kar raha tha.

Amit : main akela to nahi aya tha, ye sab Shera bhai ki vajah se hua warana main akela kya kar sakta tha.

Ritu : jo bhi hai par mere liye tumne jan ki bazi laga di . Ab meri zindagi tumhari amanat hai .

Ritu ki ankhen abhi bhi lal thi aur wo bar bar apni tangen sikod rahi thi sath hi uska chehra Lal surakh lag raha tha. Chalti car me khule sheeshon se aa rahi hawa k bad bhi wo paseene se bheeg rahi thi .

Amit : aap jaldi se pehle hospital chalo . Aapki tabiyat theek nahi hai .

Ritu : main theek hun tum meri chinta mat karo .

Amit : wo sab bad me pehle hospital chal k ek bar Dr ko dikha lo aap .

Kuch hi der me humen ek hospital nazar aya to mere kehne par Ritu ne car ko wahan rok diya .

Ritu : ek bat ka dhyan rakhna wahan kisi ko mera asli nam aur main kya hun ye kya na chale .

Car se utarte hue Ritu ne ye kaha to main bhi uski bat ka matlab samajh gya . Hum jaldi se hospital me gye aur maine dr ko unhe check karne ko kaha . Ritu ne Dr ko bataya k use drink me kisi ne drug mila kar di hai to Dr ne pehle unka blood sample liya. Report aane tak Ritu lagatar apna badan ainth rahi thi . Report aate hi Dr ne Ritu ko apne cabin me bulaya .

Dr : dekhiye aapko bahut hi strong viagra drug di gyi hai jo harmons ko aggressive kar deti hai aur body me sex karne ki bhookh si lag jati hai. Is drug ko nikalne k liye blood me medicine drip through daalni hogi aur iske liye aapko admit hona hoga .

Ritu : main admit nahi ho sakti Dr aap medicine de dijiye .

Dr : dekhiye sirf medicine se kam nahi chalega . Ye bahut hi strong drug hai . Isko nikalne ka yahi tareeka hai ya fir ....

Ritu : ya fir kya ?

Dr : dekhiye ye sex k liye harmons ko active karne ki drug hai . Aur dusra tareeka ye hai k aapko lagatar sex karna hoga taki iska asar khatam ho sake . Aap samajh rahi hain na main kya keh raha hun ?

Ritu : main samajh gyi Dr , aap dawa de dijiye bas .

Main bahar baitha Ritu ka wait kar raha tha . Ritu bahar aayi aur mujhe chalne ko kaha .

Amit : Dr ne kya kaha ?

Ritu : batati hun pehle yhan se chalo .

Hum dono car me baith gye aur wahan se nikal gye . Ritu ki halat lagatar kharab hoti ja rahi thi . Wo paseene se lagatar bheegi ja rahi thi .

Amit : aapki halat theek nahi hai , Dr ne kaha kya hai kuch to bataiye ?

Ritu : batati hun thoda sa wait karo .

Kuch hi palon me Ritu ne ek hotel k bahar car ko roka .

Amit : hum yahan kyun ruk gye ?

Ritu : mere ilaj k liye .

Amit : aapka ilaj wo bhi yahan ? Yahan kaun sa ilaj hoga aur kaun karega ?

Ritu : pehle andar chalo aur han reception par ja kar rat k liye apne nam se room lo .

Mujhe samaj nahi aa raha tha k Ritu karna kya chah rahi hai . Maine reception par ja kar apne nam se room book kiya aur waiter ne mujhe kamra dikha diya . Ritu bhi piche piche aa gyi . Waiter k jate hi Ritu room me aayi aur darwaza andar se lock kar diya .

Amit : ab to batiye k aap kis ilaj ki bat kar rahi hain aur kaun karega ilaj yahan ?

Ritu : nasheeli ankhon se mujhe dekhte hue ) tumhe pata hai mujhe kya hua hai ? Us kameene ne mujhe viagra drug di thi taki main uske sath sex karun . Usi ka asar hai mujh par aur Dr ne kaha hai k ise nikalne k liye mujhe sex karna hoga warna meri tabiyat aur jyada kharab ho jayegi . Ab samjhe k mera ilaj kya hai ? Aur mera ilaj ab sirf tum hi kar sakte ho . Ummmmmmm

Itna kehte hi Ritu mujh par jhapat padi aur mere honthon ko apne honthon me jakad kar kiss karne lagi . Ritu bahut jyada garam ho chuki thi aur ab main bhi uski is garmi ko mehsus kar pa raha tha . Waise to mera bilkul bhi man nahi tha par jaisa ki Ritu ne bataya uski is halat ka ilaj ab sirf yahi tha to maine bhi uska sath dene ka faisla kiya aur use kiss karne laga . Ritu bahut jyada wild hoti ja rahi thi aur mere honthon ko danton me ke dabakar kheench kheench kar kiss kar rahi thi . Wo mere kapde nochne lagi to maine bhi uska sath dete hue apni T-shirt utar di . Ritu ne apni T-shirt bhi khud hi utar di aur kaali bra me kaid uske thos waksh aur bhi jyada tan kar khade hue nazar aane lage . Agle hi pal uski bra bhi jism se juda ho chuki thi . Maine bina der kiye uske gore thos stano ko apne hathon me jakad liya aur zor se dabane laga . Ritu mere hathon par apne hath rakh kar khud hi zor se press karwane lagi . Ritu ne mere balon ko apne hathon me pakad kar khinchte hue fir se mere honth jakad liye aur kiss karne lagi . Ritu apni ek tang ko meri tang se ragad rahi thi to maine uske kulhon k neeche hath daal kar use hawa me utha liya aur Ritu ne meri kamar par apni tangen lapet li . Main Ritu ko goad me utha kar bed par le aya aur use wahan lita kar uske madmast stano ko chumne laga aur uske gulabi nipples apne danton me daba kar kheenchne laga .

Ritu : unmmm cccccc ummmmm mmmaaaaaa ccccc aur zor se karo unmmm kha jao common suck eat ummmm cccccccc

Ritu lagatar mere bal kheech rahi thi . Maine kuch der Ritu k stano ko chuma jisse wo aur bhi jyada wild hoti ja rahi thi. Ritu upar se nirvastra ho chuki thi aur neeche jeans me thi. Main abhi stano ko choom kar pet ki taraf barha hi tha k Ritu ne mujhe palat diya aur khud mere upar aa gyi . Agle hi pal wo meri jeans ko khol kar utarne lagi . Ritu is waqt utawle pan me thi jaise bahut jaldi ho . Ye halat shayad drugs ki vajah se hi thi is liye main bhi bas uska sath deta ja raha tha . Ritu ne jeans k sath hi mera underwear hi khinch kar utar diya . Kapdo se aazad hote hi mera land spring ki tarah uchal kar lehrane laga . Ritu ne jaldi se use hath me pakda aur bhukhe bhediye ki tarah land par toot padi . Magar usne jyada time waste nahi kiya aur apni jeans penty k sath hi utar kar ek dam nangi ho gyi . Maine abhi ache se dekha bhi nahi tha use k wo bed par ghutno k bal hoti mere upar aa gyi aur land ko hath se pakad kar apni choot par sey kiya aur bina der kiye neeche baith gyi. Ek hi jhatke me adha land choot me ghus gya jise Ritu k muh se karah nikal gyi .

Ritu : aaaaaahhhhh cccccccc uiiii maaaaaa bada zaleeem hai cccccc par aaaj main ise chhodungi nahi mmmm aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh

Ritu ne apni bat poori karte hue apna jism thoda sa upar kiya aur agle hi pal dhakk se neeche baith gyi aur ek bar fir se wo zor se chillayi. Aur isi k sath hi uske chutad meri janghon par tik gye . Ritu ka gora badan kamagni me jal kar lal gulabi ho chuka tha . Aur abhi land ko jhatke se jad tak lene se karah raha tha . Ritu ne apne honth danton me daba liye the aur ankhen band kar k is dard ko jajb kar rahi thi . Maine hath barha kar uske stano ko masalna shuru kiya to ke chehre par dard k bhaw kuch km hue aur usne ankhen khol kar meri aram dekha .

Amit : itni jaldi kya thi aapko ? Aram se bhi to kar sakti thi . Dekha kitni dard ho rahi hai ab aapko .

Ritu : ye dard hi to acha lagta hai tumhare sath , main chahti hun ye dard tum mujhe bar bar do . Aaj tumne mera dil meri aatma sab kuch jeet liya hai . Is jism ko jitna chahe dard mile par ye sirf tumse pyar hi chahega aur aaj main har dard sehna chahti hun . Ccccc ahhh aahhh ahhh aaahhh

Ritu meri ankhon me dekhte hue khud hi mere land par apni choot patakne lagi. Maine uske stano ko daba raha tha aur wo apne hathon se apne baal noch rahi thi. Ritu ka gora majbut badan mere land par uchal raha tha jisse uske stan hawa me uchal rahe the . Wo pahlon ki tarah apne baal noch rahi thi . Jaise jaise waqt beet raha tha Ritu aur bhi jyada wild hoti ja rahi thi.

Ritu : fuckkk fuckkk fuckkk ccc aur zor se karo aur tez fuckk me like slut fuckkk me ccccc ummmm

Ritu ka khud par kabu nahi tha . Ritu ko kabu karne k liye maine ab use palat kar neeche dal liya aur khud uske upar aa gya . Ritu ki lambi gori chikni tangon ko kandhe par rakh kar maine uski jangon ko pakda aur tez tez jhatke marne laga .

Ritu : aaahhh aaahhh ccc aur tez aur zor se karo aur zor se ,,, cccc wo haramzada meri izzat lutna chahta tha mujhe randi banana chahta tha ummmmccccc haramzada kutta use kya pta main uske baaap ki randi hun tumhari randi hun aur zor se karo aur zor seee eeeee aaahhhhh sun bhadwe dekh tera baap mujhe kaise chod raha hai . Maine kaha tha na mujhe hath lagaya to tu zinda nahi bachega , ab to mar kar Azad ho gya hai na , dekh tera bap kaise mujhe chod raha hai . Ise kehte hain asli mard , mere is jism par sirf isi mard ka hak hai . Tere jaise bhaawon ka nahi kutte aaaahhh aaaahhh aur zor se karo meri jaaan aaaj k baad is choot me kabhi garmi na paida ho aise thandi kar do ummmm ummmm

Amit : tum Rabdi nahi ho tum meri Ritu ho meri saali aadhi gharwali main tumhe kabhi kuch hone nahi dunga meri jaaan

Ritu : aadhi nahi poori gharwali hun mere malik jab chaho jahan chaho mujhe apne neeche liya lena , Ritu aapko kabhi mana nahi karegi bas aise hi mujhe pyar karna hamesha . Aaahhh aaahhh

Ritu lagatar kuch na kuch bole ja rahi thi aur mujhe uska rahi thi wastaw me uske jism ki aag usse ye sab bulaw rahi thi jise main thanda karne me laga hua tha . Ritu mere neeche leti khud hi apni kamar uchal kar land ko aur jyada andar lene ki koshish kar rahi thi . Chudai ka toofan lagbhag adha ghanta chala jab tak k meri bas nahi ho gyi . Aur akhir me main Ritu ko ghodi bana kar uski sawari karta hua uske upar hi dheh gya uski choot ko apne pani se bharta hua . Ritu ki choot pta nahi kitni bar o I chhod chuki thi magar wo abhi bhi thandi nahi hui thi. Mera pani nikalte hi main uski peeth par hi gir gya aur wo mere neeche sab gyi. Kuch der hum dono apni saanse durust karte rahe . Kab meri saanse kuch sambhalo to mujhe apne mobile ki ring tone sunai di . Maine zameen par giri apni jeans me se mobile nikala to dekha nidhi didi ki call thi .

Nidhi : akhir tum ho kahan ? Phone kyun nahi utha rahe kab se kar rahi hun . Time dekho kitna ho gya hai . Kab aa rahe ho ghar ?

Amit : ohhh ss sorry sorry didi mujhe pta hi nahi chala . Wo kya hai na apne dost ko lekar Dr k pas aya tha to bas isi me pata nahi chala.

Nidhi : ab kaisa hai tumhara dost ? Aur ab tum ghar kab aa rahe ho . Agar koi zaruri masla hai to mujhe batao main bhi wahan aa jati hun.

Amit : are didi aap yahan aa kar kya karengi . Main aaaaaaaaaaaa rahhhhhhaaaaaa hun na .

Mere shabd siski ban gye the kyunki Ritu fir se mujhe garam karne lagi thi aur mere land ko muh me bhar chusne lagi thi . Maine use rokne ki koshish ki par wo man nahi rahi thi .

Nidhi : ye kaise bat kar rahe ho ? Tum theek to ho na ? Kahin tumhe to kuch .....

Amit : nahi didi mm main bilkul theek hun . Aaap chinta mat karo . Main abhi rakhta hun Dr se bat karni hai . Aap meri chinta mat karo . Jaise hi yahan se free ho gaya to wapis aa jaunga . Aap mera wait mat kar mujhe der ho jayegi . Ok didi bye .

Didi ki bat sune bina hi Maine phone kat diya kyunki mujhse bardasht nahi ho raha tha jis trah se Ritu mera land muh me liye mujhe garam kar rahi thi . Phone ko side me fenk kar maine Ritu ki taraf dekha jo masti me khoyi mera land taiyar kar rahi thi. Shayad uske jism ki aag abhi thandi nahi hui thi. Maine Ritu ka sir sehlaya aur fir se shamil ho gya uske sath . Maine didi ko keh to diya tha k main wapis aaunga par Ritu ko dekh kar lag raha tha k ye rat lambi hone wali thi .

Shandar update bro

 

[Raja chouhan]

Raja bhai ye suspense rakhane ka tareeka kuchh jancha nahin kyunki ek din baad dete par pura update dete to achha tha

Are bhai itna bada update post karne me dikkat hoti is liye 2 bhag kiye . Socha thoda maza liya jaye suspense daal k . Waise sab jante hi the aur expect bhi kar rahe the

 

[Raja chouhan]

Bhai story jitni lmbi chalti hai chalne do but end my karn plz

Are bhai ek na ek din end to hoga hi. Jeewan ka yahi satya hai.

 

[Raja chouhan]

nice .. thodi speed kam karo .. story ki .. aur kahani mein romance .. romanch .. thrill .. suspense har cheez ka balance bana kar rakho .. jaise ki pehle se karte aa rahe the .. na ki kucch readers ke kehne par kahani ki theme mein fer badal karte raho ...

jab kahani apne shauk pure karne ke liye likh rahe ho .. to apna shauk pura karo .. na ki auro ke hisaab se khud ko badal do .. naukri thode he kar rahe ho kisi ki .. jo unki itni farmaishe puri karni hai .. ye story aapki hai .. apne dum par aage le kar chalo .. do not let others intimidate you ...

aaj sab kucch bahut he jaldi ghatit ho gaya .. mere andaazan to ye 2-3 update tak thoda-thoda chalta rehna tha .. kyonki hamesha aap pehle bhi jab koi situation aisi banti thi to side by side aap kahani ke baaki paatro ki saath samanvay banaye rakhte the .. magar iss baar sara focus sirf Ritu par he kar diya ...

nice update ...

Shukriya bhai , main koshish hi kar raha hun sab balance karne ki .

 

[Raja chouhan]

I totally agree with firefox bhai...dear Chouhan ji ...please write as per your own mind ....we want story as per your first 200 updates ....koi jaldibaji nahi hai..not as per readers comment....readers should appreciate only not to give suggestion for any changes...

Shukriya dost , meri poori koshish rahegi sahi se likh sakun