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‘ dekhiye main yahan akeli nahi hun. Aur na hi aapko janti hun . Is liye aap chale jaiye. ‘ Rina ne apne samne aa kar zabardasti baithe us ladke ko dekh kar kaha ho honthon par kameeni muskan liye use gandi nazar se hi dekh raha tha .

‘ jan pehchan ki kaun si bat hai wo to ho hi jayegi . Aap jaisi hot and beautiful ladki k sath to pehchan ban hi jati hai. Aur rahi bat akele na hone ki to wo main dekh lunga. ‘ wo ladka pakka kameena tha jo dheethta se Rina ki bat ko ansuna kar k use hawas ki nazron se dekh raha tha . Rina ko apne jisam par uski gandi nazar chubh rahi thi .

Rina : kameenepan ki bhi koi had hoti hai. Jao yahan se . Mujhe tumhari gandi shakal nahi dekhni .

‘ shakal nahi to kuch aur dekh lo . Mere pas tumhare kam ki cheez hai jo tumhe bahut pasand aayegi . Chalo kisi hotel me chalte hain . ‘ us ladke ne kameene pan ko haden par karte hue itna kaha to Rina ko gussa aa gya aur usne us ladke ko thappad marne ki koshish ki magar us ladke ne Rina ka hath pakad liya .

Rina : how dare you , chhodo mera hath kameene kahin k.

‘ ye tumne bahut badi galati kar di . Main to pyar se mana raha tha par lagta hai tu aise nahi manegi . ‘ wo ladka kuch jyada hi gusse me aa gya aur Rina ka hath kas k pakad kar gusse me use dekhta hua bola. Baton se saf zahir tha k ye koi chhota mota Ashik patha nahi balki harami kisam ka insan hai. Rina bhi andar se dar gyi aur us ladke se hath chhudane ki koshish karne lagi .

Main jab counter se coffee lekar Rina ko taraf palta to ek ladke ko Rina k sath kisi ladke ko baithe dekha . Usne Rina ka hath pakda hua tha . Main tez kadmo se Rina ki taraf gya aur table par coffee rakhte hue bola .

Amit : rina any problem ?

‘ kaun hai be tu ? Chal coffee rakh aur nikal yahan se ‘ wo ladka gusse se mujhe bola . Maine Rina ki ankhon me dekha jahan dar aur dard tha .

Amit : hath chhod ladki ka .

‘ bola na nikal yahan se warna pairon par chal kar nahi jayega aaaaaahhhhhhh. ‘

‘ Chataakkkk ‘

Maine zor se ek thappad us ladke k gal par jama diya. Aur wo chair se sidha zameen par gir gya. Wahan aaspas baithe sab log ek dam se hairan ho gye us lakde ke muh se nikli karah se .

‘ tune mujh par hath uthaya, teri ma ki aaahhhhh aaaahhhhhh ‘ wo ladka apna gaal sehlata hua mujhe gaali dekar uthne laga to maine do ghunse uske muh par jad diye. Uska honth fat gye aur muh se khoon aane laga . Ladai jhagda dekh kar jaldi se restaurant staff wahan aa gya aur beech bachav karne laga .

Amit : ladkiyon ko izzat karna shayad tujhe kisi ne sikhaya nahi. Ya fir tere khandan me auraton ko izzat hai hi nahi . Agar dubara muh khola to muh me zuban nahi rahegi .

‘ teri to ... sale tu ruk , tujhe main chhodunga nahi . Ruk abhi idhar hi ruk , tera wo hal karunga k apne paon par khada nahi ho sakega ‘ staff wale log use pakad kar bahar nikalne lage . Idhar Rina bhi ghabra gyi thi aur wo meri baju pakad kar mujhe piche kar rahi thi . Wo ladka staff walon se bhi ulajhne laga aur bahar nikalte hi apni jeb se mobile nikal kar call karta hua ek side ko chala gya. Uski shakal se lag raha tha k ye abhi aur maar khana chahata hai aur apne sathiyon ko bhi shamil karna chahta hai . Main bhi gusse se bhar gya tha .

Rina : chinta me ) chalo Amit hum yahan se chalte hain .

Amit : are aap kyun dar rahi hain? Main dekh lunga ise . In jaise kutton ki sewa to honi chahiye .

Rina : please Amit chalo yahan se . Khamakhah baat barh jayegi .

Amit : usne aapke sath badtameezi ki to kya aise hi jane deta use? Maine kaha na main dekh lunga use. Kya aapko bharosa nahi mujh par ?

Rina : tum par to sabse jyada bharosa hai. Par main nahi chahti jane se pehle koi aisi waisi bat ho . Please chalo .

Maine bhi Rina ki bat man li aur uske sath wahan se bahar nikal gya . Restaurant staff ne Rina se sorry feel kiya . Hum bahar aaye aur Rina ki car me baith kar wahan se nikal liye . Rina khamosh thi par ab uske chehre par chinta nahi thi .

Amit : kya soch rahi hain aap ?

Rina : meri traf dekhte hue ) kuch nahi .

Amit : I am sorry meri vajah se coffee beech me hi reh gyi .

Rina : khabardar sorry kaha to. Main to khush hun k tumne us ladke ko ache se sabak sikhaya. Kaun ladki nahi chahegi k usko koi bachane wala ho. Main jab bhi kisi mushkil me hoti hun tab tum aakar mujhe bacha lete ho. Tum to mere bodyguard ho. Aur tumhe hamesha aise hi mujhe protect karna hoga sari zindagi .

Rina k chehre par ab smile thi aur hum aise hi baten karte hue unke ghar pahunch gye. Ghar kya tha poora mehal hi tha. Main to dekh kar hairan ho gya . Bahar security par hi uniform me 6 guards lage hue the aur 2 k hath me guns bhi thi . Badi badi deewaren aur shandar bade gate k andar gadi k ghuste hi bada sa lawn aur samne mehal jaisa ghar. Safed rang ka White House jaisa bada bangla. Gate se andar ghar k darwaaze tak kam se kam 400 gaj ka fasla tha. Gadi andar chalti hui porch me ja kar ruko to mera dhyan hata is bangale se.

Rina : kya dekh rahe ho ?

Amit : mujhe pata nahi tha k apka bangla itna bada hai .

Rina : ghar bada hone se kuch nahi hota . Dil bada hona chahiye chahe ghar kacha hi kyun na ho . Aur is bade ghar me chhote dil wale log rehte hain . Main to ise ek jail hi samajhti hun . Ye ghar hamare taya ji yani BALJEET Rai jinka ghar hai . Unhe apni Shani shaukat dikhane ka shonk hai. Par mere liye ye ek khubsurat jail se jyada kuch nahi .

Aisa kehne hue Rina k chehre par ek udasi si chha gyi thi . Fir hum gaadi se utare aur use bade se lakdi k darwaze se andar ghuse . Safed sangemarmar ka floor aur bada sa haal jiski chhat 3 manzil upar tak thi. Ek traf mehenga adhunik furniture aur neeche utna hi mehenga kaleen bicha hua tha. Do taraf se chaudi Sidiyan ghoom kar upar ek jagah milti hui . Deewaron par badi badi tasveeren aur hiran barah sungha k sir deewar par tange hue. Neeche kuch kamre bhi the aur kitchen magar jyadatar kamre upar hi the. Hamare andar jate hi ek naukrani tray me kuch le aayi . Main sofe ki taraf barha to Rina ne mera hath pakad liya .

Rina : tum yahan mehman nahi ho . Chalo mere sath upar mere kamre me .

Amit : kamre me kyun ?

Rina : to kya yahan baithoge? Ma upar mere kamre me hi hogi . Chalo

Rina mujhe khinchti hui apne sath kamre me le gyi . Jaise hi darwaza khula to samne bed par Rupali baithi hui bag pack kar rahi thi . Jaisi hi uski nazar mujh par padi to wo ek dam se khadi ho gyi . Uski chehre par khushi aa gyi .

Rina : dekhlo ma le aayi hun ise . Apne aap to Mahashaya aate nahi .

Amit : namaste aunty .

Maine Rupali ko namaste kiya to wo jaldi se hamare pass aayi aur mujhe gale se lga liya .

Rupali : kitne dino bad tumhe aaj dekh rahi hun. Kya ek bar bhi tumhe hamari yad nahi aayi ? Kya naraz ho humse ?

Amit : nahi nahi aap aise kyun keh rahi hain . Wo to main ......

Rina : busy rehta hun. Pata hai sab yahi kehne wale the na tum . Ma chhoti kahan hai? Sara saman rakh diya na aapne ?

Rupali : Saman to sara rakh diya hai . Rima Sheena k sath kuch lene gyi hai . Tum khade kyun ho baitho beta .

Rina ka room bhi kafi bada tha . Ek taraf cupboard laga hua tha . Attach bathroom nada king size modern bed. LCD AC zameen par kaleen aur ek side me baithene k liye couch bhi . Main wahin par baith gya aur Rupali mere sath hi baith gyi. Tabhi darwaza khula aur sheena Rima dono ek sath andar aa gyi .

Sheena : chachi ise bhi sath me rakh ...... Amit !!!!

Sheena darwaze se andar aati hui bol rahi thi par jaisi hi uski nazar mujh par padi to wo khushi se chilla uthi. Uske piche hi Rima thi . Mujhe samne dekh kar uski ankhen bhi badi ho gyi aur chehre par khushi aa gyi. Sheena ne aage barh kar mujhse hath milaya .

Sheena : what a pleasant surprise. Tum yahan kaise ??

Rina : main lai hun . Apne aap kahan ana tha isne .

Sheena : ye to aapne bahut acha kiya didi . Tumne kuch liya ya nahi ? Main abhi lati hun .

Sheena khushi se fooli nahi sama rahi thi. Wo jaldi se kamre se bahar nikal gyi. Maine use rokne ki koshish ki par wo pehle hi nikal gyi. Fir Rima mere pas ayi. Rima k sath sath meri bhi dhadkane tez dhadkane lagi. Aaj main uske ghar aya tha pehli bar is liye hum dono hi excited the .

Rima : hi , kaise ho aap ?

Amit : main theek hun . Tum kaisi ho?

Mera dil kar raha tha k abhi Rima ko apne bahon me bhar lun. Aur Rima k chere par chhati lali bhi bata rahi thi k uska dil bhi aisa hi kuch kar raha hoga .

Rina : Rima , jao dekho zara sheena k sath help karo kuch khane ko le aao. Aur khud lana kisi naukar ko mat bolna .

Rima : main abhi layi didi .

Amit : rehne dijiye aap ye sab

Rupali : kaise rehne den ? Pehli bar hamare ghar aaye ho. Kuch to sewa ka mauka do .

Rina apna bag check karne lagi aur Rupali mere pas hi baith gyi . Sheena aur Rima dono ek ek tray apne hathon ne liye room me aa gyi . Wo dono khane ka saman le aayi thi. Maine thoda bahut khaya. Rina ki flight 8 baje ki thi. Pehle yahan se domestic se Delhi aur fir wahan se London. Sheena ne naukaron ko bulakar saman gadi me rakhwaya. Ye ek badi gaadi thi jisme sab Asani se baith sakte the .

Rina : sheena , taai ji kahan hain ? Jane se pehle unse mil leti ek bar .

Sheena : mom shayad kahin party par gyi hain. Maine unse kaha bhi tha k rehne do par wo ......

‘ meri beti mujhse mile bina bahar kaise ja sakti hai . Tumne yad kiya lo main aa gyi. ‘ maine piche mud kar awaz ki disha me dekha to she na ki ma yani ki Megha ek short dress pehne khadi thi. Apni adat k mutabik apne gadraye jisam ko dikhane wale kapde pehne wo khadi thi. Rina aage barh kar usse gale mili. Aur jaisi uski nazar mujhse mili to mujhe dekh kar wo ek dam hairan ho gyi.

Megha : ye ..... ye ....

Sheena : ma ye Amit hai . Hamare sath college me parhta hai. Bahut hi acha hai aur hamara best friend bhi . Main kab se aapko milawana chahti thi isse. Amit ye hai meri mom .

Amit : namaste aunty

Maine Megha ko waise hi bulaya jaise k bulana chahiye tha. Ye dekh kar Megha bhi smile karne lagi apni ghabrahat chhipate hue .

Megha : ye kya door namaste kar rahe ho . Ye sab to old fashion hai .

Itna keh kar Megha mere gale se lag gyi aur apne bade bade stan meri chhati me dhans diye aur mere kan me boli

Megha : to akhir aa hi gye tum. Maine bat unhe bahut miss kiya.

Megha sach me badi wali randi thi. Maine to socha tha k wo mujhse door hi rahegi jaisa maine use last time buri tarah se choda tha magar wo yahan sab k samne hi apna Randippan dikhane lagi. Main jaldi se usse door hat gya. Kisi ne ye shayad note nahi kiya tha. Par Rupali k chehre par gussa dekh kar main samajh gya k usne note kar liya hai. Wo Megha ko gusse se dekh rahi thi. Kyunki use to pata hi tha k Megha mere sath kaise chudai kar chuki hai.

Megha : ye kya tum sab ek hi gaadi me ja rahe ho ? Are hamari beti ja rahi hai. Kam se kam 3-4 gadiyan to jani chahiye. Aisa karte hain main bhi apni car le chalti hun. Tum mere sath meri car me chalo .

Megha ne mujhe apne sath car me chalne ko kaha .

Rina : are nahi taai ji . Amit mujhe see off karne aya hai. Is liye ye to mere sath hi jayega. Aisa karo aap ma ko apne sath le jao.

MEgha : to main bhi tum sab k sath hi chalti hun.

MEgha to jaise mujhe chhodna hi nahi chahti thi. Main pareshan hone laga k ab kya karun. Par uska hal bhi Rina ne hi kar diya.

Rina : tai ji aap aage baitho sheena k sath beech me ma aur Rima aur kar me main Amit k sath baith jati hun z

MEgha fir se apni chal chalne lagi par sheena ne bhi ise aage baithne ko keh diya . Fir wo bhi bura sa muh bana kar aage baith gyi. Aur main last me Rina k sath baith gya . Main andar se bhagwan ka shukriya ada kar raha tha k chalo filhal picha chuta . Hum airport k liye nikal gye. Shehar se bahar shehar k liye chhota airport tha jahan sirf domestic flight hi aati jati thi. Koi adhe ghante me hun sab airport pahunch gye . Airport k andar tak hum sab Rina ko chhodne gye. Bari bari se Rina sab se mili. Kitni der se Rupali ne khud ko rok rakha tha par akhir uski ankhen chhalak hi padi. Akhir ek ma jo thi. Beti itni door akeli ja rahi thi wo bhi itne mahino k liye. Is liye uski ankhon se aansoo behne lage. Yahi hal Rima aur sheena ka bhi tha. Rina bhi bechari ab rone lagi. Sab se milne k bad Rina mere pas aayi .

Rina : main sirf tumhari vajah se sabko chhod kar akeli itni door ja rahi hun. Ab ma aur Rima ka khyal tumhe rakhna hai. Rakhoge na ?

Amit : ye bhi koi kehne ki bat hai. Main hamesha inke touch me rahunga tum bilkul chinta mat karo. Aur tum bhi khushi khushi jao. Aise rote hue jaogi kya ? Roti hui tum bilkul bhi achi nahi lagti.

Maine itna hi kaha tha k Rina kas k mere gale lag gyi.

Rina : main tumhe bahut miss karungi . Pata nahi kaise rahungi tuMHare bagair .

Amit : are are chhodo , dekho sab dekh rahe hain . Kya sochenge wo .

Rina mujhe thoda piche hat gyi aur apni ankhen saaf karne lagi .

Rina : main phone karungi , utha lena . Agar nahi uthaya to wapis aa jaungi keh deti hun.

Bachon ki tarah zid karte hue Rina ne kaha to maine han me sir hila diya. Fir Rina apna saman trolly me rakh kar aage barh gyi. Uski flight ki announcement ho rahi thi. Jab tak Rina nazar aati rahi tab tak hum wahin khade rahe . Fir kuch der me uska jahaz ud gya aur hum wapis car ki taraf chal pade . Sab khamosh the Rupali ka ro ro kar bura hal tha wo khud ko rok nahi pa rahi thi. Rima ka hal bhi kuch aisa hi tha. Wapsi par is bar main rima aur Rupali k sath beech wali seat par baith gya aur dono ko chup karwane laga . Gadi chalte hi andhera ho gya tha car me . Ek taraf se Rima meri baju ko pakad kar apne seene se lagaye mere sath chipak gyi aur ek taraf se maine Rupali ko apne sath laga dou aur dono ko haunsala deta raha . Ghar pahunch kar maine sheena ko mujhe drop karne ko kaha to Megha mujhe force karne lagi khana kha kar jane k liye. Main mana kar raha tha par fir Rima aur sheena bhi kehne lagi is liye mujhse rukna pada. Rupali to apne kamre me chali gyi . Magar Megha wahin mere sath baith gyi . Sheena Rima ko sath le gyi khana lane k liye. Megha mere kareeb aa gyi .

MEgha : tumne mere sath acha nahi kiya. Mujhe chhod kar ab us Rupali k sath maze kar rahe ho na ? Kya mujhse jyada maza deti hai wo .

Main sabko udas dekh kar udas tha aur aise me Megha ki aisi bat sun kar mujhe ek dam se gussa aa gya .

Amit : maine kaha tha na mujhe ye sab nahi pasand. Aur tum soch bhi kaise sakti ho k main Rupali k sath aisa waisa kuch kar sakta hun. Rima aur Rina meri dost hain. Pehle jo kuch hua wo anjane me hua tab main nahi janta tha wo kaun hai. Par ab aisa kuch nahi hai .

MEgha : ohhhh , to jawan maal k sath maze kar rahe ho. Isi liye mujhe chhod diya. Mujhse jyada maza deti hain kya dono ?

Amit : gusse me ) zuban sambhal kar bat karo warna main bhool jaunga k tum sheena ki ma ho. Agar ek lafz bhi aur bola to sheena ko main sab bata dunga .

MEgha : acha , kya kya bataoge use? Aur sheena ko hi kyun ? Rima aur Rina ko bhi to batao k tum unki ma k sath bhi maze kar chuke ho. Agar tumne meri pol kholi to main bhi tumhari pol khol dungi. Fir dete rehna jawab . Bhalai isi me hai k chupchap meri bat man lo.

Itna keh kar Megha ne mere land par hath rakh kar masal diya . Mujhe gussa to bahut aa raha tha magar Megha ki is dhamki se main bhi sakte me aa gya . Mujhe samjh nahi aa raha tha k kya jawab dun. Tabhi sheena aur Rima khana ke aayi. Unke sath naukaraniyan bhi thi . Mere samne bahut sari dishes rakh di thi unhone . Megha table k neeche se mere land par hath rakh kar masal rahi thi . Main kuch nahi kar pa raha tha.

Amit : Rima aunty ko bhi to bula lete

MEgha : uska abhi man nahi hai . Wo bad me kha legi

Amit : aise kaise , ruko me khud unhe le kar ata hun.

Main bahana bana kar Megha k pas se uth gya aur Rupali ko lane upar chala gya . Rupali bed par padi aansoo baha rahi thi.

Amit : ye kya ? Aap yahan baith kar ro rahi hain. Agar aap aisa karengi to Rima ko kaun sambhalega ? Chaliye uthiye aur neeche chal kar khana khaiye sab k sath .

Rupali : tum jao mera dil nahi kar raha hai .

Amit : main puchne nahi aya hun . Chaliye mere sath neeche chal kar khana khaiye. Warna main aapse bat nahi karunga . Kya aap chahti hain k main bina khaye yahan se chala jaun ?

Rupali : main nahi ......

Amit : kya meri thodi si bhi izzat nahi aapke dil me ?

Maine itna kaha to Rupali uth kar mere gale se lag gyi . Maine bhi use bahon me bhar liya aur use haunsala dene laga . Fir Rupali mujhse alag hui aur aansoo ponchti hui mere sath neeche chal padi. Rupali neeche aakar dining table par sabke sath baith gyi. Main uske sath hi baitha tha. Maine khud uski plate me khana lagaya aur use khane ko kaha. Rupali khana khane lagi . Ye dekh kar Rima pyar bhari nazron se mujhe dekhne lagi . Jaise use mujhe par proud feel ho raha ho. Megha ki nazren mujh par hi thi . Fir humne sath me khana khaya aur khane k bad maine sheena ko mujhe drop karne ko kaha.

MEgha : main drop kar dungi tumhe . Waise bhi mujhe us taraf hi jana hai .

Sheena : it’s ok mom , main drop kar dungi. Aur Rima bhi hamare sath chalegi. Isi bahane thoda man behal jayega .

MEgha fir se jal bhun gyi. Magar ab apni beti ko kya kehti. Main Rupali se fir se ek bar mila aur sheena Rima k sath bahar aa gya . Sheena drive kar rahi thi aur main piche Rima k sath baitha tha .

Rima : thank you very much . Tumne ma ko sambhal liya. Warna wo khana nahi khati aur roti rehti.

Amit : wo tumhari ma hai to meri kuch nahi? Aur ab tum bhi apna mood theek rakhna . Exams chal rahe hain is liye padai par dhyan dena. Ye na ho k marks kam aayen . Main nahi chahta k meri gf piche reh jaye.

Rima k chehre par smile aa gyi aur usne chehra upar utha kar mere honthon par apne honth rakh diye. Main bhi Rima ko kiss karne laga. Rima ne mere gale me bahen dal li aur mere sir ko kas k pakad kar kiss karti hui meri goad me aa gyi. Hum dono apni dhun me lage the jabki sheena drive karti hui mirror se humen dekh rahi thi.

Sheena : ahhhn ahhhnn , bhai main bhi yahin hun. Aur tum dono Laila majnu yahin shuru ho gye . Kuch to sharam karo

Sheena ki bat sun kar Rima mujhse alag hui aur meri gaod se neeche utar kar side me baith kar sharmane lagi .

Sheena : dekh Rima mere samne ye sab mat kiya kar . Warna ...

Rima : janti hun aap kya keh rahi hain. Meri taraf se permission hai .

Amit : kis bat ki permission?

Rima : sharmate hue ) kuch nahi .

Mujhe samajh nahi aayi k dono kya bat kar rahi hain. Thodi der me hi hum mausi k ghar k kareeb pahunch gye. Sheena ne gadi roki to main neeche utra. Rima bhi sath hi bahar aa gyi. Utarte hi Rima fir se mere gale lag gyi aur fir se ek kiss mere honthon par kar di. Hum khuli sadak par the aur yahan koi bhi humen dekh sakta tha. Par shukar tha k rat ho chuki thi aur aaspaas koi nahi tha.

Sheena : tum fir se shuru ho gyi ?

Rima : aap bhi mil lijiye main gadi me baithti hun. I love you very much my love

Rima mujhe fir se choom kar gaadi me baith gyi. Tab sheena mere kareeb aayi aur mere kuch bolne se pehle usne bhi mujhe kiss kar di mere gale me bahen daal kar . Main to hairan ho raha tha k sheena Rima k hote hue mujhe aise kiss kar rahi hai

Sheena : itna to hak banta hai na badi saali ka ? Ab samajh aaya kis bat ki permission?

Amit : to iska matlab tum dono ?

Sheena : smile karti hui ) hmmm

Amit : tauba , kaisi gf mili hai.

Sheena : ek k sath ek free. Acha ab hum chalte hain . Take care .

Sheena fir se apni seat par baith gyi. Rima mujhe dekh kar smile kar rahi thi. Mere chehre par bhi smile aa gyi. Dono hath hilati hui wapis chali gyi aur main ghar aa gya .
 

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Jabardast update..bhai
Superb update
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Fabulous update 👍👍
Nice update...
ye kya tha .. itna sab kucch ek saath .. itna pressure ek saath Amit ke upar daaloge to bechaara exam mein accha kaise kar paayega .. pehle se he wo khadoos chandarkanta uske peeche haath dho kar padi hai .. upar se Rima bhi amit se door jaa rahi hai .. Sheena ne bhi amit ko sochne par majboor kar diya hai .. Neha bolti nahi magar amit ke liye sabse jyaada chintit rehti hai .. Divya khud ke vichaaro mein uljhi rehti hai .. Radha aur Nidhi dono he apne amit ke liye pyaar aur Rishte ko lekar kamobesh mein hai .. kaise aage badhe .. kaise usko jaahir kare .. magar Amit hai ki samajhta he nahi .. Naina ki jo hasrat hai wo poori nahi ho paa rahi .. so he haal uski maa ka hai .. keh nahi sakti .. magar chaahti wo bhi bahut kucch hai .. aur idhar Ritu ke sar par ND naam ki nangi talwaar latki hui hai .. pata hote hue bhi kucch nahi kar paa rahi ...

ab ye jo bhi lafandar Rima ke saamne aa dhamka hai .. ye jaroor kahi na kahi Karan se juda hua hai .. shayad se .. ab dekho Rima ka departure kaise hone wala hai ...

nice update ...
Fantastic Update 👍👍
Wonderful update
Nice update 👍 dear
Mind Blowing Update 👏👏
Beautiful update bhai
very nice update
Gajab bhai thankyou
Awesome update bhai waiting for next update eagerly....
Superb update bhai........

Ab ek action packed update ke intezar mein.........
Waiting for new update bhai
Nice update
Super updates
Mindblowing wonderful superb..........
keep posting next bhai............
Waiting for next update......
Nice update
Zabardast update
:superb: :good: :10: awesome update hai raja bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai
Bhai ap jab bhi lihkty ho kammal likhty ho
Wese ek bat kahna chahunga writer ji pichhle kuch updates padhne par yesa laga to kah raha hun
Jab ek character ke sath amit ko dikha rahe to to thoda time do use
Ya phir amit ki kahani ek time pe ek disha main dikhaye i think meri bat aap samajh rahe hoge

Is tarah se ek hi update main Sare ya phir kai character ko chalana story puri khichdi ho jati h jis wajah se aapke itna itna likhne ke bad bhi kuch kami si lagti h

Agar nidhi , naina, rima, radha, rina, etc kisiki chemistry chal rahi h to 1 se 2 updates unki story chalne dijiye ab ek hi update pe Sare character ko dikhana unka alag alag vyavhaar likhna bhi mushkil h aapke liye aur phir har character ke insaaf nahin ho pata h

Itna bada update likhne ke bawjood yesa lagta h ki update sirf hai hello main katam ho gaya

Ek baar sochna raja bhai
story aapki h mehnat bhi aapki hi to reader hoker jitna uchit tha utna kaha
Nice Update bro...
Zaberdast shaandaar mazedaar lajawab bahot khoobsurat update bhai
Superb fantastic
Excellent update bhai

Beutifullll
Zabardast update Bro maza aa gaya Rina ka chapter kuch din ke liye band aur Naina ke sath jald hi dhamakedar chudai ka plan ban raha hai aur yah chandarkanta ab koi aur harami panti na karey shayad woh professor bhi uske sath hai lagta hai kalpana ka kahna sahi hain ki woh principal se baat karey lekin dekhtay hai kia hota hain aage.
Nice n fantastic update
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai
Mast update
Nice update
Nice update
behatrin updte bro............ye chandrakanta to apni hi dhun m h........isko bhi kuch to sabak milna chahiye ki kisi student se kse pesh aate h............udhar rena ki wjh se lgta h pir amit ke sath koi kand hone wala h.........idhar ritu singh bhi asli mujrim mla k piche lg gyi uski lanka ko aag lagane............or divya mausi ....ye to 2 feelings m fas kr hi rah gyi.....................
Nice update
Fir Ek bar Amit panga lega Dr. Rina ko chhedne wale se. Rasprad aur Romanchak. Intejar hai agle update ka
Bahut achha update Bhai
Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Excellent & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Y madam galat kr rhi h sali ko sabak sikana chahiye

Y kya lovers ki sakya badne ko h y amit h ki ek pe hi ruka h sb kitni marti h ispe

Ritu ka sak sahi h narayan das ki lgne wali h



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shaandaar update bhai
Waiting for new
me pakistan se hon apki kahani bhoot pasand ha mujhe is trha likhna nhi aata urdo lekh skta hon wo shayad apko samajh na aaye .is leye coment nhi krta ye bhi apne bhateje se likhwa rha hon ..koi ameerzadiyan shamil kro plz auntiyan
Awsum fantastic superb Mindblowing update.........
keep posting bhai............
waiting for next update...........
Awesome update bro
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Superb, mind-blowing raja bhai.....
Waiting for your next update.....
BEHAD SHAANDAAR EXCELLENT MARVELLOUS AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
Bhai ji gazab likhate ho lekin kai muddo par narajagi hai meri aapse.
Jabse aapne amit ko yaha shahar me bhejha hai tabse kai pahlu adhure rah gye hai chalo kamini ka to yu manlo ki pregnancy ka last time hai lekin chhoti mami jo eski pratham guru/preyasi/Patni etc. Sabhi kirdaro me aval hai aapne unke sath bitaye palo ko to jaise dhumil hi kar diya.
Aur sabse jyada gussa mujhe es karan ke character se aata hai aapne amit ko eske aage bilkul bona sabit kar diya hai,ye jaise khud ko kya smajhata hai bhai amit ke character ko es tarah mat dabao ye kahani ka center of attraction hai.
Kalpana neha Ke liye chinta hai .
Jo mujhe points lage vo maine kahe baki ye koi burai nahi hai.
Waiting for the next update brother.
Behad shandar lajawab dhmakedar update
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