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Radha aur Amit apne samne Divya ko is a oop me dekh kar hairan the. Radha ka muh to khula ka khula hi reh gya aur aisa hi kuch haal Amit ka tha. Hote bhi kyun na , hamesha saadi me rehne wali Divya aaj suit pehne hue thi. Charahari kaya hone ki vajah se uska jism ladkiyon ki tarah hi to tha aur upar se uska janlewa husn . Umar to jaise abhi bhi jawani k padav se aage na gyi thi uski. Gora rang aur upar se teekhe nain naksh. Shadi k bad uska jism sirf gadraya tha mota nahi hua tha. Aur jahan par zarurat hoti hai bas wahi hisse bhari hui the. Kul milakar kaam ki devi thi Divya aur aaj in kapdon me jaise uska ang ang apni sahi banawat dikha raha tha . Bhale hi wo kapdon me thi par use aise lag raha tha jaise wo bina kapdon k khadi ho. Kyunki uska jism jo 7 gaj ki saari me hamesha chhipa rehta tha wo ab use is suit me nanga prateet ho raha tha. Suit silne wali ne bhi kya kas k silai ki thi k kahin se bhi zara sa bhi kapda dhalak nahi raha tha. Divya ne jab Amit ki abkhen apne jism par upar se niche jati hui dekhi to uska man mano andar se nachne hi lga tha. Ye nishchit taur par uske is janlewa husn ki tareef hi to thi jo ek naujwaan ladka uske is mayajal me taskar uske tarashe hue yakuti jism ko aise taad raha raha tha.

‘ ma aap in kapdon me ??? What a pleasant surprise!!! Aap bahut achi lag rahi ho ma ‘ radha itna keh kar Divya k gale lag gyi chehekti hui . Divya bhi muskura di par uska dhyan abhi bhi radh par na ho kar Amit par hi tha. Jaise wo apni tareef uske muh se sunna chahti ho.

‘ acha laga tumhe ? ‘ Divya ne ye sawal Amit ko dekhte hue pucha tha par radha ko laga k shayad usse picha gya hai.

‘ ma sach me aap na kamal ki lag rahi ho in kapdon me . Koi dekhega to yahi kahega k aap meri ma na badi behan ho.’ Radha ne fir se Divya ko gale lagte hue ye kaha.

‘ chal jhuthi , koi andha hi hoga jo aisa kahega . Chal ab andar aao main khana lagti hun tum dono k liye.’ Divya abhi bhi jaise intzar me thi k Amit kuch kahe is liye wo Amit ki taraf hi dekh rahi thi. Aur har pal uska dil Amit ki chupi se jaise vichalit sa hone laga tha .

‘ waise ma ye suit wahi hai na jo Amit ne lekar diya tha ? ‘ radha k is sawal par Amit ki nazar jaise pehchanne ki koshish karne lagi k kya ye wakai wahi suit hai.

‘ aur kahan se ayega suit? Tujhe pata hai na main suit nahi pehnti aur na hi mere pas koi hai. Magar lagta hai Amit ko pasand nahi aya . Main abhi badal leti hun ‘ Divya ki juban par akhir uske dil ki bebasi aa hi gyi. Aur wo aisi bat keh baithi k Amit ko ab bolna hi padega.

‘ nahi mausi aap bahut achi lag rahi hain is suit me. Bilkul waise hi jaise us din maine apko us photo me dekha tha ‘ Amit jaldi se bol pada . Divya Amit k muh se apni tareef sunte hi aise khush hui jaise wo isi k intzar me thi. Uske gaal sharam se lal ho gye .

‘ bas ek hi kami hai , us photo me aap ne bindi aur lipstic nahi lagai hui thi warna aaj bhi aap waisi hi hain .’ Ye bat radha ne kahi thi aur Amit ne bhi han me sir hilakar sehmati di. Divya ko jaise ye apne me kami si lagi . Par wo kuch na kehti hui bas kitchen me chali gyi .

‘ kya zarurat thi bindia lipstic lagane ki , kiske liye lagai hai akhir ? Kaise sir hila rha tha is bat par . Khud nahi keh sakta tha? Main bhi kya sochne lagi , tareef hi to ki hai usne. Mujhe kya zarurat thi ise pehnne ki ? Waise bura bhi to nahi lg raha . Radha bhi keh rahi hai achi lg rahi hun aur Amit bhi kaise ...... hey bhagwan . Kaise ghoor kar dekh raha tha . Sharam nahi aati aise dekhte hue , main koi uski premi..... mausi hun , sirf mausi. Ye main kya sochne lag jati Hun. Pta nahi kya hota ja raha hai mujhe . Abhi pehle suit change karti hun . Khana banane k bad bhi to kar sakti hun . Chalo bad me kar leti hun. ‘ Divya apne man me yahi sab sochti khana banane lagi. Amit aur radha bhi fresh hue aur khana khane wapis aa gye. Amit to abhi bhi Divya ko lekar man hi man udhedbun me fasa tha. Jahan use pehle dar tha Divya ka ab uska wo dar to nikal gya tha par aaj Divya ka ye nya roop dekh kar wo soch me tha. Divya sachmuch aaj Radha ki tarah hi lag rahi thi. Farak tha to bas unke suhagan k wesh ka. Yani unka wo shingar jo waise to nam matra tha par use wo ek shadishuda aurat banata tha.

Khane k table par Amit apni hi soch me dooba tha k Divya khane ki thali le aayi. Amit ki nazar jaise hi Divya par padi to mano ek bar fir se use jhatka laga. Kitchen me kam karte hue Divya ne dupatta utar diya tha aur paseena aane se uska suit kuch geela ho gya tha aur uske badan se poori tarah chipak gya tha. Suit k andar pehni kali bra bhi apna rang dikha rahi thi. Amit ki nazar na chahte hue bhi wahan atak gyi. Divya thali rakh kar jab piche hatne lagi to usne Amit ki nazron ko pakad liya . Aur uski nazar ka kendar apne stano ko pakar uske andar sihran si daud gyi. Divya jaldi se wapis palat gyi aur tezi se kitchen me bhag gyi par tab tak ek aur dhamaka Amit k dil par sorry land par ho gya tha. Wo tha Divya k bheege suit me lipti patli kamar aur bahr ko nikli hui golakar gand .

Wahin Divya tez kadmo se lagbhag bhagti hui kitchen me to chali aayi par uski dhadkane jaise abhi bhi bhag rahi thi. Amit ki nazar jaise use abhi bhi apni chhati par lagi mehsus ho rahi thi aur fir se use Amit k hathon ka sparsh apni chhati par mehsus hone laga jo abhi kal rat hi use mila tha. Divya fir se apne dil k hathon majbur hone lagi. Uska dimag fir se kamzor padne laga. Agli bar roti dene jate samay usne dupatta lene ki zehmat na ki balki apni kameez ko aage se thoda neeche khinch kar roti rakhte samay aur jyada jhuk kar Amit ko apne sarani ka nazara dikhaane ki koshish ki. Amit ki nazar kameez me se jhankte kali bra me kaid safed kabutaron par padi to khan khate khate use thaska sa laga

Amit : akhun akhun akhun .... akhun akhun akhun

Divya : kya hua beta ? Khana atak gya kya ? Lo pani piyo.

Divya ne jaldi se Amit ko pani diya aur wo pine laga . Use kuch aram mila par uski is halat par Divya andar hi andar khush thi kyunki wo janti thi k Amit ko kya hua hai. Ek vijay muskan uske chehre par thi.

Divya : dhyan kahan tha tumara? Chalo aram se khana khao. Khana khate samay Idhar udhar mat dekha karo.

Divya ne itna kaha aur muskurate hue Amit ka sir sehlate hue wapis kitchen me chali gyi par is bar kamar kuch jyada hi lachak rahi thi. Divya ka man Amit ki halat par aise nach raha tha jaise usne koi maidan mar liya ho. Uska dimag to jaise kam karna hi band kar chuka tha. Khana khilane k bahane Divya ne aaj kuch jyada hi chakkar laga diye aur har bar Amit ko jaise clean bold karne wali ball hi fenk rahi thi matlab apni balls dikha rahi thi. Khana khatam hote hi Amit aise uth kar room ki taraf bhaga mano jaise kab se peshab lagi ho aur rok ke baitha ho . Khane k bad rest karna sabki routine thi to radha bhi apne kamre me thi magar Divya ka man to jaise aaj abhi abhi mili jeet se itna utsahit ho gya tha k aur aage badna chahta tha. Radha k kamre me jate hi Divya Amit k kamre me chali gyi jahan Amit bed par baitha kuch soch raha tha.

‘ kya soch rahe ho ? Sab theek to hai na ? ‘ Divya ne Amit ko soch me dooba dekh sawal kiya to Amit bhi jaise hadbada sa gya.

‘ hh han mausi main theek hun, aaiye baithiye ‘ Amit ne Divya ko baithne ko kaha to Divya bhi waqt zaya kiye bina chappal utar kar bed par hi charh kar Amit k sath waise hi baith gyi jise wo baitha tha. Bed se tek lagaye. Amit thoda asahaj hone laga tha jiski vajah Divya nahi balki uska badla hua roop tha jo Amit ko uttejit kar raha tha.

‘ to batao kya bat hai? Kya soch rahe the ? ‘ Divya ne bat sawal se hi shuru ki aur khud Amit k sath sat kar baith gyi. Kandhe se kandhe ko milakar.

‘ k kuch nahi mausi , koi bat nahi hai ‘

‘ aise kaise bat nahi hai? Koi to bat hai jo tum nahi bata rahe. Acha ye batao main kaisi lag rahi hun? Tumhe pata hai na ye maine sirf tumhare liye pehna hai taki tumhe acha lage. Tumhi ne to lakar diya tha na ‘ Divya ne apni chhati ko akad kar upar uthate hue jan bujh kar apna suit dikhate hue kaha. Amit ki nazar ek bar fir se un raseele aamo par chali gyi jahan wo nahi dekhna chahta tha .

‘ hh han mausi aap par ye suit bahut janch raha hai ‘

‘ bas ? Matlab sirf suit hi acha laga tumhe main nahi ? ‘ Divya ne thoda narazagi jatate hue ye kaha to Amit jaldi se bol pada

‘ mm mera matlab tha k aap isme bahut achi dikh rahi hain. Koi aapko dekh kar ye keh hi nahi sakta ki aap radha ki ma hain . Dekhne wala to yehi samjhega aap uski behan ho ‘ Amit ne jldi se ye sab ek saans me keh diya jisse Divya ko andar hi andar khushi hui par usne zahir nahi kiya .

‘ ye to radha ne bhi kha tha tum uski hi bat repeat kar rahe ho . Agar sach me main achi dikh rahi hun to kuch apni taraf se bhi kaho na ‘ Divya ne jan bujh kar Amit ko chhedte hue kah taki wo kuch aur khul kar kahe , kuch aisa jo wo uske muh se sunna chahti thi .

‘ aap sach me bahut khubsurat lag rahi hain. Koi bhi aapko dekh aapki Umar ka andaza nahi laga sakta. Aap sadi me to achi dikhti hi hain par suit me to aur bhi achi dikh rahi hain. Aaj se aap suit hi pehna karo ‘ Amit ne Divya ki tareef me ye sab bina kuch soche kaha tha par Divya par to kuch aur hi asar kar gyi ye baten. Use aise laga jaise Amit keh raha ho k tum aaj se sirf suit hi pehnna , main tumhe suit me dekhna chahta hun

‘ itni achi lag rahi hun kya main ? Waise aisa kya acha laga tumhe mere suit pehnne me ? ‘ Divya ne fir se apni chhati ko ubharte hue kaha aur apna dupatta bhi thoda neeche sarka diya. Amit ki nazar na chahte hue bhi wahan chali gyi. Jise dekh kar Divya k honthon par muskan aa gyi .

‘ wo aap na isme bahut achi lagti ho. Saadi me to aap thoda bhari dikhti hain mature dikhti hain par isme bilkul jaise college student jaisi. ‘

Divya ka man mayur nach utha is bat ko sunte hi .

‘ tujhe sach me aisi lagi main? Ab se main aise hi suit pehna karungi. Tujhe jaise acha lage mujhe bata diya kar. Aur aise na chup na raha kar mujhse bat kiya kar . Tu chup rehta hai to mujhe acha nahi lagta . ‘ ye kehte kehte Divya ne Amit ko apni bahon me bhar liya aur Amit ka sir apni chhati se laga liya. Amit ka sir stano par lagte hi use aise laga jaise kapdon k bina hi Amit uske komal stano se ja laga ho aur ek siski uske muh se rukte rukte nikal gyi .

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‘ kya hua mausi ? ‘ Amit ne divya ki chhati se sir hatane ki koshish ki ye puchte hue par Divya ne use sir hatane na diya .

‘ kuch nahi tu bas aise hi mere gale laga reh . Mujhe kitna acha lag raha hai tumhe nahi pata . Kyun mujhse door door rehta hai tu? Apni is mausi ki parwah nahi hai na tujhe ? ‘

‘ aisa kyun keh rahi ho mausi ? Aap to meri ma ho . Aap me hi to main ma ko dekhta hun. Aapse door main bhala kaise reh sakta hun. ‘ Amit k dil ki bat zuban se nikli thi jisne Divya k soye hue dimag ko jaga diya aur uska dil jo ufan par tha ek dam se baith gya aur uski pakad kamzor pad gyi .

‘ han main tumhari ma hun , ma hun tumhari aur tu mera beta hai . ‘ aisa kehte hue Divya ka man bhar aya aur ankhen bhi. Wo sab baten ek bar me hi hawa ho gyi jo use amit ki taraf khinch rahi thi . Kam k jwar k upar mamta bhari pad gyi aur Divya ek ma ki tarah Amit ko gale lagaye kuch der apna man halka karti rahi aur fir uth kar wapis apn kamre me chali gyi .

Stadium me aaj neeraj bhaiya k sath kuch jyada hi der exercise kar li thi maine . Aur fir wahan se manju m k ghar chala gya. Kapdon se paseene ki smell aane lagi thi is liye aate hi Mam ne mujhe nahane ko keh diya . Main naha k bathroom se towel lapet kar bahar nikla to manju m mujhe dekh kar sharmane lagi. Manju m is waqt bahut hi pyari lag rahi thi , mujhe un par bada pyar aya aur Maine aage barh kar unka hath pakad kar jhatka dete hue apni bahon me kheench liya

Manju :machalte hue) kya kar rahe ho , chhodo koi aa jayega.

Amit : unhunn , aaj main bahut thak gya hun. Soch raha hun thodi si thakawat utar hi lun

Maine Mam ko bahon me kaste hue apne hath unki kamar aur chutadon par ragadne Shuru kar diye .

Manju : sharmate hue ) chhodo na , dekho sheena aati hogi aur Ritu bhi aa sakti hai.

Amit : sheena to aaj nahi aane wali rahi bat Ritu ki to usse kaisa parda . Waise bhi wo meri ek lauti saali jo hai. Ummmmmaaaahhh

Maine manju m k surkh labon ko apne honthon me jakad liya aur unka ras churane laga.

Manju : ummmmmmaaaahhh , gande ,, sharam nahi aati ? Bade aaye saali wale . Wo to pehle hi tumhe kha jane wali nazron se dekhti hai. Kisi din kha hi jayegi. Aur tumhe kaise pata sheena aaj nahi aayegi?

Amit : wo aaj college nahi aayi thi na to Rima ne bataya k wo aaj rest kar rahi hai.

Manju : ghabrate hue ) kya hua sheena ko ? Wo theek to hai na?

Amit : kuch nahi hua use , bas thoda sa bukhar tha to is liye rest kar rahi hai.

Manju : ruko mujhe usse bat karni hai .

Itna keh kar manju m meri bahon se nikli aur Sheena ko phone lagane lagi.

‘ ache bhale mood ka kabada kar diya . Kya zarurat thi Sheena k bare me bolne ki ?’ Main man me khud ko hi kosne laga kyunki Manju m dheere dheere mood me aane lage the. Manju m Sheena ko phone laga kar bat kar rahi thi. Unki peeth meri taraf thi. Unki jan lewa gand dekh kar mera man fir se control se bahar hone laga. Maine aage barh kar mam ki gand se apna land lagaya aur dono hath aage le ja kar unke boobs pakad liye.

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Sheeena : .......

Manju : kuch nahi wo machar ne kat liya tha .

Sheena ko jawab dete hue manju m ne muh ghuma kar mujhe dekha aur nakhra dikhati hui mere hath par chapat mari jo unke boobs par tha. Maine bhi unhe aur tang karte hue ek hath neeche le jakar unki choot par rakh diya. Kapdon k upar se hi mera hath wahan lagte hi manju m dohri hoti hui aage ko jhuk gyi aur fir se siska padi par is bar mere land par unki gand zor se dab gyi.

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Sheena : .........

Manju : kuch nahi main aaahhhh theek hun wo paon ko thokar lag gyi.

Manju m aage ko jhuki hui thi aur ek hath se pas pade table ka sahar liya hua tha jabki main unke piche gand me land ragadta ek hath se choot aur ek hath se gaand daba raha tha . Manju m se apni siskiyan control nahi ho rahi thi.

Sheena : ...........

Manju : han mmm main theek hun tum apna khyal rakhna main bad me bat karti hun.

Itna keh kar jaldi jaldi manju m ne phone band kar diya aur utha kar sidhi hote hue palat gyi aur mujhe thoda gusse se dekhne lagi. Unka chehra lal ho raha tha

Manju : kuch jyada hi garmi charhi hai na tumhe , abhi batati hun.

Itna keh kar Manju m mere upar jhapat padi aur mujhe kiss karti hui mujhe piche ko dhakelne lagi. Mere paon bed se takraye aur main bed par girta chala gya. Manju m bhi mere upar hi gir padi aur fir unhone ek jhatke se uthte hue mera towel bhi khol diya. Mera land spring ki tarah uchhalta hua bahar aa gya.

Manju : land ko dekhte hue ) ye hamesha aise hi rehta hai kya ? Abhi ise theek karti hun.

Itna keh kar Mam ne apni sadi petticoat kamar tak uthaya aur Penty utar kar bed par ghutno k bal meri kamar k upar aate hue mera land hath se pakad kar apni choot par set kiya . Tabhi bahar se bell bajne lagi .

Manju : frustrate) is samay ab kaun aa gya ? Bola tha na mat karo . Ab jldi kapde pehno.

Manju m ab mood me aayi thi aur ek dam se. Ne aakar sare mood ka satyanash kar diya. Mujhe bhi bahut gussa aa raha tha. Maine jaldi se apne kapde pehne aur hall me aa gya. Samne manju k sath Rina baithi hui baten kar rahi thi mujhe dekhte hi wo khush ho gyi aur uth kar mujh se hath milaya.

Rina : kaise ho ? Tum to apne aap na milte ho na phone karte ho. Maine socha khud hi tumse mil leti hun warna pata nahi tum mila ya na milo.

Amit : are aisa kyun keh rahi hain aap ? Aap ek phone kar deti to main aa jata.

Mere aate hi manju m kitchen me chali gyi thi. Ab hum dono sofe par baith kar baten kar rahe the.

Rina : maine socha tumhe disturb kyun karna is liye yahin aa gyi . Is waqt tum yahin miloge pata tha mujhe. Waise main is liye bhi aayi hun k mera jane ka intzam ho gya hai. Next week me shayad meri flight ho jaye. To jane se pehle socha kuch waqt agar tum mere sath reh sako to ???

Amit : main ?? Matlab main kya karunga ?

Rina : mera sar ,, tumhe pata hai na tum akele hi mere dost ho aur tumhare kehne se hi main bahar ja rahi hun. Ab kya jane ki taiyari nahi karwaoge mere sath?

Amit : to aap shopping k liye keh rahi hain. Par uske liye to Rima aur sheena hain na

Rina : muh banate hue ) unke sath main alag se kar lungi par main tumhare sath bhi karna chahti hun. Agar tumhe nahi aana to theek hai .

Rina ne udas chehra bana liya to maine socha mere kehne se wo jaane k liye man gyi hai to mujhe bhi uski bat manni chahiye .

Amit : acha theek hai , kab chalna hai ?

Rina : khush hote hue) abhi , chalo chalen.

Manju : kahan jane ki taiyari ho rahi hai ?

Manju m andar se coffe k cups tray me lekar aati hui sawal karne lagi .

Rina : bua main Amit ko apne sath lekar ja rahi hun . Mujhe kuch kam hai aur shopping bhi karni hai iske sath. Fir to main england chali jaungi .

Manju m k chehre par Rina ki bat sun kar thodi udasi aayi par unhone chhupa ki aur meri taraf dekha. Main samajh gya k wo kya kehna chahti hain

Manju : par ise to abhi padna hai kuch dino me iske exam hain

Rina : bua bas aaj ki hi to bat hai . Please

Manju : acha theek hai le jana par abhi coffee to pi lo.

Manju m ka bhi mere jaisa hal tha. Dono garam to ho gye the par ab kuch kiya nahi ja sakta tha. Baten karte hue jaise hi hamari coffee khatam hui to Rina mujhe apne sath le gyi shopping k liye.

Udhar karishma apne room me laptop le kar baithi thi videos ko edit karne k liye par un sab videos me jo dhamakedar chudai thi use dekh kar wo khud garam hone lagi thi. Sab se khas tha Amit ka wo musal jo usne kabhi real me aisa aaj tak nahi dekha tha. Waise to usne apni saas aur nanad k sath Amit ki Rasleela live bhi dekhi thi par door se land k itne ache se darshan nahi hue the jitne ab ho rahe the. Kab uski apni choot garam ho kar pani bahane lagi use khud bhi na pata chala. Jaise taise kar k usne video edit ki aur fir apni ma ko wo card wapis dene se pehle wo sari videos apne pas copy kar k rakh li. Use khud nahi pata tha k wo ye sab kyun kar rahi hai. Par usne wo sab one pas rakh liya shayad is liye k abhi din ka samay tha aur wo ye sab ache se nahi dekh sakti thi.

‘ iski to ma ki ,,,,,,, sali hath dho kar piche hi pad gyi hai. Iska kuch karna padega . Agar wo manager uske pas pahunch gya to main to gya . Kuch bhi karo wo sala zinda nahi pahunchna chahiye uske pas warna hum sab gye samjho aur tum bhi bhool jana fir mantri banne ka Sapna. ‘ BALJEET Rai gusse se aag babula ho raha tha jab use pata chala k police k log uske admiyon ko mar kar us manager ko utha kar le gye hain. Uske sath is waqt MLA N.D. Bhi tha.

N.D. : maine pehle hi kaha tha sali ko khatam karwa dete hain par tu hi nahi man raha tha. Ab dekh main kya karta hun. Wo wahan zinda nahi pahunchega.

Tabhi N.D. Ne phone utha kar apne kisi Aadmi ko phone kiya aur use kuch nirdesh diye .

N.D. : iska to ho jayega par ab uska kya karna hai ? Main to kehta hun uski bhi game baja dete hain . Warna fir sali taang adayegi.

BALJEET Rai : iska bhi ab kuch karna hi padega . Maine sidhe tareeke se koshish ki thi par sali ne apna intzam kar rakha hai . Ab tere tareeke se hi kam karna padega.

N.D. : kameeni hansi haste hue ) jo bhi hai saali maal ek no. Hai . Sali ko police ki wardi me hi ragadne ka apna hi maza aayega. Aaj tak maine koi police wali nahi ragadi aur fir ye to item hi zabardast hai.

BALJEET Rai : abe lodi har jagah land se mat socha kar . Wo kitni badi officer hai pata hai na. Maze lene ki mat soch bas uska kam tamam kar.

N.D. : kam to uska hua hi samajh. Par main ek bar uske maze zarur lunga aur sali ko apne sab admiyon se randi ki tarah chudwaunga fir mujhe Shanti aayegi.

Dono tension me bhi ab aise hasne lage the jaise jo wo soch rahe the wo ho hi gya ho .
 

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Nice Update Raja Bhai
Super update bro
Excellent
nice update bro...........
Mind blowing dhansu update. Waiting for next update
Splendid mindboggling update Raja chouhan bhai
Awesome update.. bhai
Ek no update diya hai bhai maza aagya.
Waiting for more.
Aisa kya dekh liye update mst beautiful tha..aage suspance not good bhai...
lajawaab.. magar padhne ke baad aisa feel hua ki.. jaise kahani ki pace badha di hai.. ekdum se kaise karishma rama le saamne aa gayi.. aur divya bhi kucch jyada he utsuk nazar aa rahi hai.. aur minal bhi kucch jyada he ungli kar rahi hai.. kahi ye ungli baazi uspar he bhaari na padd jaye.. par kamaal ki baat ye hai ki rima badi cool nikli sheena ke baare mein jaan kar aut kitna aaram se sab kucch jaan kar bhi adjust kar liya aur khush bhi hai...
Lajabab Update bhai...
Superb raja bhai.....
Ab shayed amit ka aujar dhekhne k baad karishma v shayed attract ho jayegi.....
Mere khayal se karishma ki maa hi amit or karishma ko milwaye to shayed zayada majedar hoga.....
Waiting for next update.....
Jabardast update Raja chouhan bhai💕💕💕
Very Nice update Raja chouhan bhai........ :applause: :applause: :applause:

Aaj kal bahut busy hai kya, iss baar update dene mein tin din laga diye????????
Update to har baar ki tarha mast tha,

Lekin writing style pehle wali hi behtar thi
Pehle amit ke point of view se hi behtar tha 3rd person se thoda alag lag raha hai
awesome update bro
Fantastic update bro...
:superb: :good: :perfect: awesome update hai raja bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
aaj to amit radha ki diary padhte padhte rah gaya hai,
Aur divya to ab poori tarah se amit ki premika banati ja rahi hai,
vahin reema ko sheena ne khud hi Amit ke baare mein bata diya tha,
idhar aakhir kar manager ka koi suraag to mila,
ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
Nice n fantastic update
Awesome update bhai waiting for next....
Nice update..
Awesome updates
Nice update bhai
Bahut badhiya update bhai ji😊
Super update...,😘😍
Owesome update
Super update 😉
Eagerly waiting for close relationship between Amit and divya
Superb update
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai 😊
Maja aa gaya. Ek taraf divya Amit ko rijhana chahati hai to dusari or ye use galat bhi lagata hai. Ab to rima bhi taiyar hai pharwane ke liye. Ek request hai ki usaki chudai thori yadgar bana dena.
Awsome update.. Maha maja aa gaya..
Super update sir
bahad khubsurat update mitr
Nice update..
Super update dear
Yeh har baar divya skhalit hone ke baad sahi-galat ke jaal mein fas jaati hain, amit ne toh neend mein hi kand kar diya, bechara sheena ke sapne dekhte-dekhte divya ka hi kand karne jaa raha tha. Divya mausi bhi ab khud par se niyantran khoti jaa rahi hain, ab der nahin jab wo saari seemaye langh jayegi.

Bhai divya ke saath thora special banana, kyunki unka character thora special hain, aur aapne pehle se hi bahut bara build up kiya hain, thora jaane-anjane jo yeh aage badh rahe the bina koi alfaj bole wo jo sharm kee deewar hain na wo na toote toh alag hi maza hain, bas raat ke andhere mein jab thora insan kamjor par jata hain tab yeh dono galti kare, tab hi maza hain, bas yeh ek suggestion hain baaki aap toh kamal hi likhte ho.

WAISE YEH NEW STYLE BAHUT BADHIYA LAGI PEHLE WAALI BHI ACHHI THEE LEKIN YEH USSE BEHTAR HAIN.
Aaj toh laga kee radha ka sach amit ke samne aa hi jayega, ain mauka pe kahan se billi kee tarah jhapat pari.

Mujhe na laga kee itni jaldi amit apne gunah kubool karne chala jayega reema ke samne, lekin rema toh yeh sara mahabharat pehle se hi janti hai, aur usne itna casually liya iss baat ko, kaafi mature way mein isse handle kiya tha usne, akhir pyar hai hee ajeeb koi issee kaise mehsoos karega yeh na keh shakte hain, koi toh ispe bahut hi violently reaact karta, lekin koi iske immandari pe hi mar mitta hain.

Minal madam shabkee lene mein lagi rahti hain, bechari radha gusse ke mare uffanti rahti hain, yeh amit sach mein budhhu hain kabhi uske pyar ko mehsoos hi nahin karta hain.
SP sahiba ne toh lagta hain nishana laga liya hain, dekhte hain ab iskya prabhaw kya hota hain, kyunki tagri chot hogi, yeh baljeet rai ko, agar manager kee family pakar mein aati hain toh, aur jo sach kuchh toh aisa hain jisme baljeet rai directly involved hain, kameene ne jaane kya kiya hoga manjri ke saath.

Ab yeh nayee Divya bharti kya naya gul khilati hain wo toh ghar jaane pe hi maloom chalega. chalo chalte hain.....
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Bahut badhiya update raja bhai.
Divya to lagta ne next update me Amit se pyaar lene vali he. Rima ka bhi ab aayega time pyaar karne ka. Rama aur karishma ke pass bhi jana padega Amit ko ab. Bas Nidhi rah gayi he ab vo bhi ho hi jayega jaldi ho to achha he. Aur ye diary to sirf radha ke siwa rima ne dekhi he ab dekhte he Amit ko kab pata chale ki Radha to use hi sabkuch manti he.
Superb update
Bemisal. Kahin Amit Lafde me na fanse. Waiting for next update
Nice one bro
Fantastic Update 👍
Gajab bhai
AMAZING update
nice update
Zabardast update
Both hi 💗💗😊💞💓💕💟💕💟💞💖💞💖💞 vadiya update Hy Raja bahi
Mast update raja bhai...👌
Awesome update bhai ji akhir ek aur chut ka udgatan ho gya aur divya wala scene to mind blowing bhai Ji
Waiting for next update bhai ji
Waah bhai aapne you dhamaal macha rakhi hai.waha Sheena birthday party kah kar suhagrat mana liya .
Yaha ghar pe divya ne ek metha aur pyara pyar ka ehsaas liya.ah uska dil pura pyar chahta hai par woh samajh nahi pa rahi hai.
Aur an lagta hai ek aur chut kulbulane wali hai Amit ke Lund ke liye.
Khair dekhate hain aage kya hota hai
nice update
Mindblowing update.........
keep posting bhai............
waiting for next update...........
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