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Raja chouhan bhai Bohut hi shandaar kahani likh rahe ho.
Shuruat mai amit ko aisa ladka dikhaya jiski duniya bas gaon Aur apne ghar tak sumit hi rahi aur ghar mai bhi jaha kamini usse nafrat karti hai wahi gauri uspar apni pori mamta luta ti hai.
Deepika jo kabhi bhi amit ko lekar kuch galat nahi sonch thi hai Phir kuch aise situations aeye jisse wo amit ke karib agayi aur phir jis khushi ke liye itna intezar kiya wo bhi pori Hogayi maa bankar.
Kamini bhi der se hi sahi par amit ke prati apni nafrat khatam kar hi li aur usey bhi wo sukh milgaya jiske ummid bhi usne chod do thi aur sath hi pati bhi aisa mila jo usse bohut pyaar karta hai jisne sachi janne ke baad bhi uski khushi ki khatir sab kuch accept karliya.
Gauri ke sath rishta ek majboori ke sath shuru huwa aur gauri ka us prakar se react karna bhi jayaz tha kyunki usne amit ko apne sage bete ki tarah hi pyaar kiya aise mai uske sath ye sab hona koi choti baat nahi thi par der se hi sahi usey bhi samajh agaya ki jo bhi huwa wo sab shayad niyati hi thi ab wo bhi apni zindagi ki sabse badi khushi hasil karne wali hai MAA bankar.
Wahi manjari jisse amit ko pehli baar pyaar ka ehsas huwa jiska sath bas kuch pal bitaye they wo bhi usko chodkar chali gayi amit ke liye ye ek bada sadma jaise tha jo ladka bachpan mai hi apne Maa baap ko khodiya ho uske liye aise mai apne pehle pyaar ko bhi kho dena bohut badi baat hai.
Raju ek sache dost ka farz nibhate huwe usey us sadme se bahar aney madad karta hai.
Wahi apni agey ki padayi ke liye seher mai akar hi ek se badkar ek kand hote rahe hai jaha monty jaise dushman mila wahi kalpana jaisi dost bhi mili.
Sheena chahe shuruat mai galat nazar ayu par baad wo bhi ab amit ki ek achi dost bangayi.
Shivani ka case kuch sheena jaisa hi tha.
Wahi shalu jo apni zindagi mai najane kya kya sehgayi usko us daldal se nikal kar amit ne uski zindagi sawar di.
Naina aur karuna bhi apne hisse ka Pyaar leliya hai amit se.
Wahi rita mausi ko bhi santusht kardiya.
Rajni se bhi anjaane mai sambandh ban hi gaye dekhte hai ye khul kar samne kab ayega.
DIVYA jo apni behen damini ko apni Jaan se zyada pyaar karti thi uske hi beta se utni nafrat bhi par der se hi sahi uska wo pyaar uski nafrat se kahi zyada hi nikla ha nafrat ki asli wajah ab tak samne nahi ayi ki akhir kyu divya amit ke pita pawan ko dushi manti hai.
Nidhi jo sabse badi hai bhai behno mai wo bhi ab khud ko amit ki patni man ne lagi hai anjane mai hi sahi amit ke hatho uski maang bhar gayi ab dekhna hoga ki nidhi ke liye agey ka safar kaise rehta hai kyunki ye itna asan bhi nahi hoga.
RADHA jo apne dil mai bachpan se hi amit se pyaar kar baithi hai jiska dil sirf amit ke liye hi dhadak tha hai aise mai kab ye apne dil ki baat amit se keh pati hai dekhna hoga.
Mohit ke rup mai seher mai sabse pehle ek sacha dost amit ko mila phir baat mai to kismat ka aisa sath mila ki mohit ke pita raghav amit ke pita ke kash dost aur business partner nikle jisne apna adha business amit ke naam kardiya ye keh kar ki wo uske baap ka hai.
Wahi mohit ki Maa rama ko amit ke ruo mai ek aur beta bhi milgaya aur sath mai uski pyas bhujane ke liye ek sacha sathi bhi.
Karishma ke problem ko amit ab kis tarah se solve karta hai ye dekhna banta hai kyunki rama amit ko ye zimmedari de chuki hai.
KALPANA ek sachi dost ho bina kisi fayde ke amit ke liye kuch bhi kar guzar sakti hai.
Manju jo ki rishte mai amit ki bua hai jiska pata dono ko hi nahi hai uske sath ek alag hi dil ka rishta jod gaya.
RIMA MY ONE OF FAVORITE CHARACTER OF THIS STORY is ladki ke barey kya kehna dil se ek dum sachi jo amit se apni Jaan se bhi zyada pyaar karti hai Pyaar to amit bhi isse karta hai par in dono ki rah itni asaan bhi nahi hone wali hai jaha ek taraf rima ki Maa se anjane mai hi sahi amit ka ek alag rishta bangaya tha wahi rima ki behen Dr. Rina bhi dil hi dil amit ko pasand karti hai.
NEHA MY ANOTHER FAVOURITE CHARACTER jo zyada bolti nahi hai par apne bhai amit se shayad sabse zyada hi pyaar karti hai abhi tak to inka pyaar ek behen ka hi dikha hai par agey ka pata nahi.
Raja chouhan Bhai kahani shuruat se to bohut hi intresting bani huwi jhoot bhi nahi kahunga bich ke kuch updates padhne par aisa laga ki shayad zabardasti kahani ko kinchne ke liye likha gaya ho par jaise jaise kahani agey badhte gayi waise waise samajh agaya ki wo sab bhi Zaroori they.
Raja chouhan Apki writing ki sabse achi baat ye hai ki har update ke sath apki writing skills aur bhi improve hoti ja rahi hai.
Aur pata nahi kyu par mujhe aisa lagraha hai ki ek jagah monty ke baap ka zikar huwa tha shayad wo Germany mai tha apne kisi dost se baat karte hai aur mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki shayad wo shaks koi aur nahi divya ka hi pati hai kyunki wo bhi bahar rehta hai aur uska zyada zikr bhi nahi huwa nahi wo divya aur radha ke prati kuch serious nazar araha hai.
Mujhe lagta hai divya ka pati bhi monty ke baap ke sath mila huwa hai aur shayad usne hi kuch aisa jaal bhuna tha jisse divya amit ke pita pawan se kuch hadh tak naraz ya nafrat karti hai ab pata nahi mai kitna sahi ho par jo mujhe laga wo boldiya.
Ab tak to yaha aisi teen hai jo amit ko apna pati man chuki hai nidhi radha aur rima (jisse amit khud bhi pyaar karta hai aur Jiwan sathi banana chahta hai par nidhi aur radha ka to usey pata nahi). Ab dekhte hai ki is list mai aur kon kon shamil hoti hai
Ha agar neha is list mai shamil hogi to meri request hai ki uska scene sabse alag aur hatke hona chahiye ??.
Divya bechari ek alag hi jung lad rahi hai apne dil mai uske sapno ko lekar agar uska amit ke sath Milan hoga to Raja chouhan apko sabse zyada mehnat karni padegi us update par kyunki wo scene sabse alag aur sabse hatke hi hoga jisme dher sari feeling aur pyaar hoga.
Raja chouhan Bhai jaha tak likh sakta tha likh diya pata hai abhi bohut si batein reh gayi par yaha se har update ke sath hi review dete rahonga.
Update ka intezar rahega????.
 

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SP ritu singh : manjuuu !!!!

Manju m : rituuuuuu

Ritu singh aur manju dono ek dusre ko dekh kar zor chillayin aur fir ek dusre k gale lag gyi . Mere sath sheena Rima aur Rina bhi hairan thi magar Rupali shayad pehchan rahi thi. Dono ek dusre se aise gale mil rahi thi jaise barson bad bichde hue dost mil rahe hon . Ritu singh jaisi sakht officer ko is tarah dekh kar uske sath wale police wale bhi hairan the . Ritu singh ko to mano koi farak hi nahi pad raha tha kisi bat se . Wo uniform me hote hue bhi kitne pyar aur garam Joshi se manju m ko gale lag k mil rahi thi .

SP Ritu singh : mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha tum mere samne ho . Maine tumhe kitna dhoondha par tum mili hi nahi. Pata hai meri posting tere shehar me bhi hui thi . Main bahut pata kiya par tera kuch pata nahi chala. Tu kahan gayab ho gyi thi ? Kisi ko bhi pata nahi tha tere bare me . Tune kisi se bhi koi link nahi rakha college k bad .

Manju m : main wo .. meri chhod tu kahan thi? Tera bhi to kisi ko ata pata nahi tha aur ye police uniform ???

SP Ritu singh : news paper nahi dekhti kya ? Main SP hun yahan . Abhi pichle mahine hi yahan transfer hui hai. Tu kahan rehti hai ?

Manju m : sorry yar news paper to wakai nahi dekh pati bas kitabon me time nikal jata hai. Main bhi yahin rehti hun . Ye to acha ho gya ab tu bhi yahin aa gyi . Tumhe itne salon bad apne samne dekh kar main kitni khush hun main bata nahi sakti . Chal mere sath tujhe ghar le kar chalti hun .

SP Ritu singh: nahi yar abhi to nahi aa sakti . Abhi zara kam hai kuch . Tu mujhe apna no. Aur address de main jaldi hi tere ghar aaungi.

Rupali : mujhse nahi milogi kya Ritu ?

SP Ritu singh : are bhabhi aap ? Aap bhi yahin hain ?

Rupali ne pas akar Ritu k kandhe par hath rakha to Ritu ne unhe pehchanate hue unko bhi gale laga liya .

SP Ritu singh : kaisi hain aap bhabhi aur wo dono angels kahan hain ?

Rupali : main theek hun aur ye rahin tumhari angels aur 2 nahin 3 Sheena bhi yahin hai.

Rupali ne Sheena Rima aur rina ko Ritu singh se milawaya. Ritu singh ne unko bhi gale se lagaya .

SP Ritu singh : wah ye to badi ho gyi . Aur Sheena tumne bataya nahi tum manju ki bhateeji Sheena ho ? Kya tumne mujhe pehchana nahi tha ?

Sheena : aap ??

Manju m : ye bhi tumhari bua hi hain . Jab tum chhoti thi tab ye aksar mere sath ghar aya karti thi aur tum teeno iske sath khelti thi. Hum dono school se college tak ek sath rahe hain.

Ritu singh : tum teeno to kitni badi ho gyi ho ab. Rina tumhari parhai to khatam ho gyi hogi na ?

Rina : ji bua main ab dr hun .

Ritu singh : are wah ye to bahut achi bat hai . Mujhe pata tha tum zarur kuch banogi. Aur ye rima bhi tumhare jaisi hi thi ye bhi zarur kuch banegi . Kamal aap sab log is shehar se me the aur itne dino tak kisi se milna nahi hua. Waise tum karti kya ho ? Aur tumhare pati ?

Manju m : main inke college me hi lecturer hun aur mere husband ab us duniya me nahi hain .

Ritu singh : I am sorry manju mujhe pata nahi tha par ye sab kaise hua ?

Manju m : jab ghar aaogi tab baith kar aram se baten karenge . Tum apni sunao .

Ritu singh : main to tere samne hi hun . College k bad tune to shadi karli aur maine IPS clear karli. Bas tab se yahi zindagi hai .

Manju m : jatin kya karta hai ?

Ritu singh : hum bad me bat karenge manju . Waise amit se tumhara kya relation hai ?

Meri taraf dekhte hue Ritu singh ne manju m se pucha . Ab tak to main piche akela hi khada tha . Magar ab Ritu singh ne meri taraf dhyan karwaya manju m ka.

Manju m : kehne ko to mera student hai par aaj meri zindagi me jitni bhi khushiyan hain sab isi ki vajah se hain. Aur dekho isi ki vajah se aaj mujhe meri dost wapis mil gyi. Iske bare me batane lagungi to yahin subah ho jayegi. Tum ghar ana fursat me bat karenge.

Ritu singh : waise tum bhi mere ghar aa sakti ho magar pehle phone kar lena . Meri duty ka kuch pata nahi hota kab kahan hungi . Main jald hi tumhare pas aaungi. Acha fir milenge .

Ritu singh ne bari bari se sabko gale lagaya aur last me mujhse milne meri taraf barhi to maine door se hi hath jod diye. Bina koi shabd kahe. Ritu singh bhi samajh gyi k main usse bat nahi karna chahta . Wo kuch kehna to chahti thi par kehte kehte ruk gyi aur ek bar mujhe dekhne k bad chali gyi.

Manju m : sheena tum kahan mili thi Ritu se ?

Sheena : are bua wo college aayi thi ek din tab mulakat hui thi .

Manju m : kab ? Maine to dekha nahi .

Sheena : aap tab ghar par thi na bua . Jab aapke chot lagi thi tab ki bat hai . Ab ghar chalen bua ?

Manju m : Han chalo , par ye jo bhi kuch hua aaj ye sahi nahi hai. Tumhe unse ulajhna nahi chahiye tha . Wo itne log the hum unka kaise mukabla karte ?

Sheena : bua wo log kitni gandi bakwas kar rahe the , mujhse bardasht nahi hua aur fir Amit tha na hamare sath . Iske hote mujhe kisi se dar nahi lagta .

Manju m : par wo akela tha agar use kuch ho jata to ?

Sheena : aapne dekha nahi ye akela hi kafi hai un jaison k liye . Aur fir Ritu bua bhi to keh rahi thi .

Rupali : fir bhi sheena aise ulajhna nahi chahiye , aise logon ka kya bharosa kuch kar den to .

Rina : mere khyal se ab humen chalna chahiye . 10 baj chuke hain .

Uske bad hum sab cars me baithe is bar dono cars manju m k ghar ki taraf hi aa gyi. Maine bahar se bike uthayi aur sabse vida li. Shopping bag jyada the to Maine wahin rehne diye. Jise ghar pahunchane ki zimmedari sheena ne le li. Kyunki use pata tha Rita mausi k ghar ka . Main Mam k ghar se sidha mausi k ghar pahunch gya . Rita mausi mera hi intzar kar rahi thi . Jab main ghar aya to wo akeli hi jag rahi thi . Neha did aur Kalpana didi nazar nahi aa rahi thi .

Rita Mausi : itni der kaise ho gyi tumhe ?

Amit : wo sheena aur Mam k sath shopping k liye jana pada fir uske bad wo log dinner ki zid karne lage .

Rita mausi : waise ye sheena ka kya chakkar hai tere sath ?

Amit : aisa kuch nahi hai mausi . Neha didi ko bhi pata hai hum bas ache dost hain . Aur maine uski madad ki thi to usne kaha tha k wo mujhe shopping karwana chahti hai . Itne dino se time nahi mil raha tha to aaj wo zabardasti le gyi mujhe. Madam bhi sath hi thi . Waise Neha didi karuna didi nazar nahi aa rahi kahin

Rita mausi : wo dono so rahi hain . Tum bhi kapde badal kar aa jao mere kamre me . Main tab tak doodh garam karti hun .

Amit : wo dono itni jaldi so gyi ?

Rita mausi : haste hue ) soyi nahi sulaya hai kal ki tarah . Aaj tumhe tumhara gift jo dena tha.

Amit : sach !! To chaliye sidha aapke kamre me hi chalte hain .

Maine mausi ko bahon me bharte hue unki gaand ko masalna shuru kar diya .

Rita mausi : are ruko , sari rat apne pas hi hai besabre mat bano. Jao kapde badal lo aur muh hath dho lo tab tak main doodh garam karti hun .

Amit : theek hai main abhi aya. Ummmaaa

Maine Rita mausi k honthon par ek kiss ki aur upar bhag gya apne kapde badalne . Jaise hi main kapde badal kar fresh ho kar neeche aya to sabi lights band thi sivaye mausi k room k. Rita mausi k kamre ka darwaza khula tha . Main andar gya to bed ki side par doodh ka gilas Dhaka hua pada tha . Mausi kamre me nahi thi . Maine doodh ka gilas utha kar pi liya aur bed par baith kar mausi ki wait karne laga . Bathroom se aati awaz bata rahi thi k mausi bathroom me hain . Main darwaza band kar k waise hi bed par baith gya . Kuch hi der me bathroom ka darwaaza khula aur andar se rita mausi bahar nikli . Main to mausi ko dekhta hi reh gya. Mausi naha kar aayi thi aur unke balon k sath sath unki body par bhi pani ki boonde saf nazar aa rahi thi . Boobs se lekar jaanghon tak bas ek safed towel me lipti wo is waqt bijaliyan gira rahi thi .

Bathroom k darwaze par hi wo khadi ho kar meri halat par muskura rahi thi. Maine to ankhen faade bas unhe sar se paon tak nihar raha tha . Unke bal geele the aur bikhre hue the jinme se pani ki kuch boonde neeche gir rAhi thi . Gora chikna badan nange kandhe . Aadhe chuche toliye se bahar hi the aur unke beech ki ghati nazar aa rahi thi . Taliye k andar kasa hua gadraya badan . Tauliye k neeche gori mansal jaanghen jo aadhi se jyada bahar hi thi . Gori chikni tangen aur takhno k par payal . Main to bas is kaam sundari k yovan ko dekhta garam ho raha tha. Jab kuch der tak mausi apni jagah se nahi hili to meri nazar unke chehre par gyi jahan ek kamuk muskan thi .

Rita mausi : aise kya dekh rahe ho ?

Amit : aap bahut hot lag rahi hain .

Rita mausi : bas , abhi to tumhe bahut kuch dikhana hai .

Itna keh kar mausi dheere dheere cat walk karti hui mere pas ayi aur apna daayan paon utha kar sidha mere aadhe khade land par rakh diya. Lower me bhi mere land ko mausi k nange paon ka ehsas ho gya aur wo jagne laga. Mausi kamuk ada se meri ankhon me dekhti hui apne paon se mera land apne paon se dabane lagi . Mausi ek pain mere land par rakhe khadi thi aur is pose me towel k neeche se meri nazar unki choot tak ja rahi thi. Mausi ka sara badan abhi bhi geela geela lag raha tha. Mere land par mausi k paon ka dabav aur unki sexi ada mujhe pagal kar rahi thi maine jhat se unki pindali ko pakad liya aur jhuk kar unke ghutne aur jhaang par kiss karne laga

Rita mausi : aahhhh cccccc ummmmmm

Mausi k muh se siski nikal gyi. Mausi ka jism abhi bhi geele pan aur thandak ka ehsas karwa raha tha . Maine jaangh par kiss karte hue daant bhui garha diye aur ek hath unki choot tak le gya jise mausi ne rok diya . Na me ishara karte hue unhone mujhe mana kiya aur mera dusra hath bhi apni tang se hata diya. Agle hi pal mausi mere dono taraf ghutne bed par rakhte hue meri goad me baith gyi . Mera land jo khada ho chuka tha jaise hi mausi mere land par baithi unhe ehsas ho gya uski sakhti ka . Mausi ne mera chehre dono hathon me dekha aur bade hi kamuk andaz me meri ankhon me dekhne k bad apne honth mere honth par rakh diye . Maine bhi mausi k sir k peeche hath rakhte hue unke honth chusne shuru kar diye . Mausi kabhi mera neeche wala honth chusti kabhi upar wala . Fir unhone apni jeebh mere muh me daal di aur main unki jeebh chusne laga. Kuch der apni jeebh chusane k bad wo meri jeebh chusne lagi. Mere hath ab mausi k kandhon se hote hue neeche aane lage. Mausi ka towel kab khul gya humen pata hi na chala. Mausi ki nangi peeth ko sehlata hua main unke nange kulhon par pahunch gya . Kulhon ko masalte hue maine apni ungali unki choot me ghusa di jo pehle se hi pani chhod rahi thi .

Rita mausi : ummmaaaaa cccccccc aaahhhhh ummmmmm

Mera ek hath ab mausi ki nangi janghon ko sehla raha tha . Mausi ka poora badan makhan ki tarah mulayam tha aur doodh ki tarah safed . Mausi bhi poori garam thi aur meri goad me baithi apni kamar hila kar mere land par apni choot ragad rahi thi . Maine mausi k paon isi pose me unki gand se laga kar unhe apni goad me hi liye uth gya . Mausi mere gale me bahen dal kar mere sath chipak gyi. Maine palat kar mausi ko bister par lita diya aur towel ko ek side fenk diya . Ab mausi ka gadraya hua dudhiya gora badan mere samne tha . Mausi ki choot k upar ek bhi baal nahi tha jise dekh kar mujhe acha laga aur maine mausi ki tange failate hue unki choot par jhuk kar unki chinkni choot ko ek bar dekha aur fir sidha apna muh unki choot se laga diya. Mere aise karte hi mausi k badan me current sa laga aur ek tez siski unki muh se nikal gyi.

Rota mausi : aaaahhhhh ccccccccc uffffffff kha jao bahut aag lagi hui hai itne dino se . Aaahhhhh unmmmm aaj sari aag bujha do iski. Kha jao ummmmm aise hi chuso aaahhh aaaahh aahhhhh

Main mausi ki choot chuste hue unke daane par apni jeebh fira raha tha aur sath hi ek ungali andar bahar kar raha tha. Mausi apni jaanghen mere sir par kas rahi thi aur mera sir apne hathon se choot par daba rahi thi . Mausi kuch jyada hi utawali ho rahi thi aur apni kamar utha utha kar mere muh par apni choot ragadne lagi .

Rita mausi : aaaahhh aahhh aaahhh aahhh cccc aur zor se karo aaahhh han aahhhh aise hi main gyi aaahhhh cccc zor se karo aaahh aahh aahhh. MaaaaaaaaaaAhhhhhh

Mausi apni kamar bar bar uthati hui ek dam se chillai aur unka badan ek pal k liye akad gya . Unki choot se pani ka tez parwah behne laga jo mere muh par lag raha tha . Pani nikalte hi mausi ka badan aise dheela ho kar bed par gira jaise jan hi nikal gyi ho. Mausi bejan se bistar par tange failaye padi thi . Maine uth kar apne kapde utare aur mausi k sath let kar unke bade bade chuche tham liye. Ek nipple ko honthon me lene k bad Maine dusre ko ungaliyon se pakad kar masalna shuru kar diya . Bari bari se maine mausi k dono chuchon ko chusa aur masla jisse wo lala ho gye. Mausi k badan me fir se uttejna aane lagi thi aur wo mere sir ko apni chhati par dabane lagi .

Amit : mausi aap keh rahi thi k kitni dino se aap pyasi hain abhi kal rat hi to maine humne kiya tha na ? Fir bhi aap itni pyasi hain

Rita mausi : wo wo han wo ek bar me kahan pyas bujhti hai itne dino ki .

Amit : waise ye aapne acha kiya k wahan se sare bal saaf kar liye . Kal to poora jangal hi bana hua tha neeche.

Rita mausi : tu aise hi apna hal chalata reh ab tujhe kabhi wahan baal nahi milenge

Rita ( man me ) didi ko keh dungi k agar Amit k neeche letna hai to apni choot saaf rakha kare.

Rita : chal ab mere upar se mujhe bhi kuch karne de.

Amit : aao kya karogi ?

Rita : hat to fir batati hun.

Maine jaise hi mausi k upar se hata mausi uth kar baith gyi aur meri kamar ki taraf jhukte hue mere land ko ek hath se pakad kar apne muh me lene lagi . Mujhe mausi ka aisa karna itna acha laga k maze k maare mere muh se siski nikal gyi .

Amit : aaahh mausi ye kya kar rahi ho aap cccc

Mausi k muh ka geela pan land ko aur garam kar raha tha. Mausi ne abhi supade se thoda aage tak land ko muh me liya tha k maine maze me kamar uthate hue unka muh land par daba diya . Jisse land aadhe se jyada unke muh me chala gya . Land sidh unke gale me ja k laga aur ek dam se wo khansne lagi aur land muh se nikal diya .

Rita Mausi : akhun akhun akhun hhhhhhh akhun akhun akhun huhhhh gal faadoge kya? Akhun akhun

Amit : sorry mausi mujh se control nahi hua. Par aap ne ye sab kahan se sikha ?

Rita mausi : jab dil se kuch karna chaho to kisi k sikhane ki zarurat nahi padti . Tum mujhe chus kar itna maza dete ho to main nahi de sakti kya ?

Itna keh mausi di se land chusne lagi. Kuch der aur mausi ne land ko chusa aur fir mere upar aa kar kamar k dono taraf ghutne bed par rakhte hue ek hath se land pakad k choot par set kiya aur dheere dheere neeche baithne lagi. Mausi ki choot land pas kasi hui neeche ho rahi thi aur mujhe aisa lag raha tha k jaise land kisi garam gufa me ja raha ho. Mausi apne honth danton me dabaye neeche hoti rahi aur 7 inch tak land choot me lene k bar wo ruk gyi. Fir wo aage ko jhuki aur mere pet par hath rakh kar wo dheere dheere upar neeche hone lagi. Maine hath barha kar mausi k dono latakte aam pakar liye aur unhe kas kar dabate hue apni taraf jhuka liya .

Rita mausi : aaahhhh cccc aram se dabao na ukhad doge kya ? Ccccc aaahhhhh aaaahhh aahhh ye musal har bar andar lene me paseene chhut jate hain aaahhh cccc aaaiii aram se karo na ufffff aaahhhh

Amit : ab to aapko dard nahi hona chahiye mausi kal hi to poora liya tha apne ummmm

Maine mausi ka ek nipple muh me bharte hue chuana shuru kar diya.

Rita mausi : ek bar bata aaahh aahh ummm tujhe didi kaisi lagti hai ? Unki lena chahta hai kya ?

Main Rita mausi ki bat sun kar ek dam se ruk gya aur unke nipple ko muh se nikal diya .

Amit : ye aap kya keh rahi hain ? Main aisa soch bhi nahi sakta .

Rita mausi : ruk kyun gya ? Karte raho na . Mere sath kar sakte ho fir didi k sath kyun nahi ? Hum dono k sath tumhara rishta to ek jaisa hi hai na? Aaahhhh ccccc aur fir wo bhi meri tarah kai salon se pyasi hain . Kya tum unki pyas nahi bujha sakte ccccc ummmm unki choot bhi kab se pyasi hai . Jija ne unhe hath bhi nahi lagate uffff aahhhh aaahhh aaahhh unke doodh mujhse bade hi hain km nahi aaahh aaahhh aaahhhh cccc aahahhh unki gaaand bhi cccc aaaahhhh aahhh aahhh aise hi tez aur tez karo aahh aahhh aaaahh maaaaa

Rita mausi ne jab rajani mausi ki choot ka nam liya to pata nahi kyun mujhe ek jhatka da laga aur maine apni kamar uchalte hue dhakke marne shuru kar diye .

Amit : ye aap kaisi baten kar rahi hain wo sab se badi hain aur main unki bahut izzat leta hun . Main unke bare me aisa soch bhi nahi sakta

Rita mausi : aaahh aahhh tu mat soch ye tera musal to didi ka nam sunte hi khush ho gya hai ccc aahhhh wo sab se badi hain unki gaand bhi sabse badi hai tujhe bahut mazaaaa aaahh aram se

Mausi ki baton se meri garmi badti ja rahi thi aur jab unhone rajani mausi ki badi gaand ka zikar kiya to na chahte hue bhi mere zehan me mausi ki wo badi gaand aa gyi ho hamesha saari me dhaki rehti thi . Maine Rita mausi ko apne upar se bed par patakte hue unki taange utha di aur tez tez dhakke marne laga .

Rita mausi : aaahhh aaahhh aaahhh tujhe pasand hai na didi ki badi gaand aaaahh aaahh aahh aur tez karo aaahhhhhh aaahhh aise hi aaahh aahhh dekh tera musal kitna josh me aa gya hai ye bhi aaahhh aahhh didi ki choot me jana chahta hai. Aaahhh aahhh

Rita mausi ki baton se mera josh badta ja raha tha aur maine tabadtod dhakke pelne shuru kar diye . mausi lagatar tez tez siskiyan leti mujhe aur uksa rahi thi .

Rita mausi : didi ki choot bhi pyasi hai aaahhaahh tu kahe to main didi ko tere neeche la sakti hun aaaaa aaaaahh aaahhhh wo bhi tera musal le kar meri tarah tript ho jayengi aaahhh aahhh unki bhi cccc aahhh unki bhi pyas bujha de aaahhh aahhhh maaaaaaaa

Maine josh me Rita mausi k paon unke ASR ki taraf dabate hue bed se laga diye jisse unke shareer poori taraf fold ho gya aur khud k paon unki gaand k pad karte hue paon par apna vajan daal kar unki choot par uchal uchal kar gehre aur zordar dhakke choot me marne laga . Mausi ko dard ho raha tha par unhe maza bhi aa raha tha. Mausi jyada der bardasht nahi kar payi aur unka shareer akad gya . Mujhe apne land par garam pani ka shower chalta mehsus hua par maine nahi ruka . Pata nahi mausi ki baton se kya asar ho gya tha k main apna sara josh Rita mausi ki choot par nikalne lga .

Rita mausi : aahhh aaaaiii chhod de beta dard ho rahi hai aaaaahhh aaahhh maaaaaa chhod de meri taangen dukh rahi hain chhod deeeeeee

Mausi pata nahi kya kya keh rahi thi magar mujhe to kuch sunai hi nahi de raha tha . Fir mausi ne mere muh par ek thappad mar diya . Mausi ka ro ro kar bura hal ho raha tha. Mausi ki ankhon me aansoo dekh kar maine khud ko roka aur mausi ki tangon ko chhod kar alag hua. Choot se land bahar nikla to poora bheega hua tha. Mausi lambi lambi saans le kar apni halat theek kar rahi thi . Mausi apna pet pakad kar ulti ho gyi . Mera josh kuch thanda hua to maine mausi ki peeth par kis karte hue pucha

Amit : aap theek to ho mausi ?

Rita mausi : cccc kya ho gya tha tumhe ?? Meri koi bat hi nahi dun rhe the tum . Kitna kaha tumhe k ruk jao . Choot k sath tangen aur pet bhi dukhne laga hai. Mausi hun tumhari koi bazaru randi nahi

Amit : sorry mausi pata nahi mujhe kya ho gya tha . Please mujhe maaf kar dijiye .

Mausi ki halat dekh kar aur unki baten sun kar mera sara josh thanda ho gya aur land sone laga. Mujhe laga ab mausi mujhe hath bhi nahi lagane degi jaisi maine unki halat kar di thi . Main mausi se alag hua aur bed se neeche utar gya. Apne kapde uthane laga to mausi ki nazar mujh par padi . To unhone jaldi se uth kar mera hath pakad liya .

Rita mausi : kahan ja rahe ho ?

Amit : sorry mausi maine aapke sath theek nahi kiya. Aap aram kijiye main apne kamre me ja raha hun .

Rita mausi : kya theek nahi kiya tumne ? Tumne to meri sari pyas bujha di . Han aaj kuch jyada hi josh dikha diya is liye meri choot ki halat patali ho gyi hai . Waise ek bat to bata tu to keh raha tha k tu didi k sath aisa kuch nahi kar sakta fir didi k nam par itna josh kaise aa gya tere andar ? Mujhe to laga tu mujhe hi didi samajh kar thok raha hai . Didi ki gaand bahut pasand hai na tujhe , chinta mat kar jaldi hi tera ye land didi ki gand me hoga . Dekh kaise fir se khada ho gya hai didi ka nam lete hi .

Maine apne land ki taraf dekha to sach me land fir se khada ho gya tha . Mausi ne jhuk kar mere land ko ek bar muh me le k choosa aur mere samne khadi ho gyi .

Rita mausi : chal ab apni manpasand jagah par apna nam likh le

Mausi ne mera hath pakad kar apni gaand par rakha aur mere hontho par kiss kar di . Uske bad wo bed par charh kar ghodi ban gyi aur apni gand bahar ko ubharte hue piche mud kar kamuk ada se meri taraf dekh kar boli .

Rita mausi : ab soch kya raha hai. Aaj apni marji kar le . Maine tere liye taiyar kiya hai ise. Ye le cream ache se laga Lena taki dikkat na ho .

Mausi ne bed k side me padi cream mujhe dete hua kaha . Main to mausi ki bat sun kar hi khush ho gya tha k wo mujhe aaj apni gaand dene wali hain. Maine mausi k hath se cream li aur unki gand par lagaane laga. Maine jab gaand me apni ungali ghusai to mujhe kuch naram lagi .

Amit : mausi ye pehle se kuch naram lag rahi hai . Kya apne mausa ji k sath yahan ......

Rita mausi : nahi yahan par to sirf tera hi jayega tere mausa se to aage kuch nahi hota piche kya khaak karenge . Tere ye musal asani se to jane wala nahi bas isi liye kitne dino se ise khula karne k liye kuch na kuch try kar rahi thi k jyada dard na ho jab ye khoonta mere andar jaye . Cccccccc dhyan se karna beta teri mausi hun faad mat dena .

Amit : chinta mata karo mausi main dhyan se hi karung . Aap bas haunsala rakhna .

Maine thodi si cream apne land par bhi lagai. Mausi bed par ghutno k bal kutiya bani hui thi par mujhe laga aise mausi ki gaand me ache se land jayega nahi to maine unko bed k kinare tak khinch liya aur unko apne paon chutad k sath laga kar ghutne pet se lagaye poora bend hone ko kaha . Isse unki gaand poori bahar ko ubhar aayi . Maine zameen par khade ho kar ghutne bend kiye aur land ko gaand k par sey kar k mausi ki peeth ko dabate hue apna land gaand me ghusana shuru kar diya . Cream lagi hone se land bina rukawat gaand me ghusne laga. Mausi ne apni gaand par kafi mehnat ki thi fir bhi mere land k aage unki gaand ka surakh kam hi tha. Is liye unke muh se dard bhari siski nikal hi gyi

Rita Mausi : aaahhhhhhh dheere aram se aaaahh cccc dard ho raha hai ruk ja ccccc aaahhhh

Abhi supade se 1 inch aur aage tak hi land gaand me ghusa tha k Rita mausi karahne lagi aur mujhe rukne ko kehne lagi . Magar main rukne k mood me nahi tha is liye mausi ko poori tarah dabaye hue lagatar gaand me land ghuste ja raha tha . Mausi meri pakad se chhutna chahti thi magar maine majbuti se unhe dabaya hua tha .

Ritu mausi : aaaaaaahhhh ruk ja aaaaaahhh maaaa dard ho raha hai ruk ja meri fattt jayegi ruka jaaaaaaaahhhhh

Amit : bas ho gya mausi ab dard mahi hoga ab to poora chala bhi gya bas ho gya shant ho jao .

Rita mausi : bahut dard ho rahi hai aaahhhhh maaaa ruk ja na thodi der aaaahhhh

Maine mausi ko keh to diya tha k Sara andar chala gya par abhi bhi do dhai inch bahar hi tha. Mausi k kehne par main kuch der ruk gya aur unki peeth chumne laga. Kuch der bad mausi ne apni gaand ko thoda dheela chhoda to maine land ko thoda sa bahar khinch kar fir se andar liya. Land gaand me aise fasa hua tha jaise shikanje me fasa diya ho. Andar bahar karne me bhi mushakkay karni pad rahi thi . Thodi der main aise hi thoda thoda kar k land andar bahar karta raha jisse land ne choot ko kuch had tak dheela kar diya tha . Jab land aram se andar bahar hone laga to maine supade tak land bahar khinch kar andar karna shuru kar diya . Mausi bhi ab normal ho rahi thi .

Rita mausi : aaahhh aaahhhh ccccc ummm aahhh aise hi aram se kar ab kuch theek lag raha hai .

Amit : mausi ab bas maza lo aur dard nahi hoga ab . Huhhhhh

Maine apni speed barhani shuru kar di. Mausi ki gand aur paon bed se thode bahar hi the aur unki latakti hui payalen mere thakkon k sath awaz kar rahi thi . Mujhe mausi k bade bade gore chutad dekh kar dhakke marte hue bada maza aa raha tha . Maine mausi k chutadon par zor se thappad mara to unke chutad par mere hath ki ungaliyan chhap gyi . Chataaak

Rita mausi : aaaahhhh maar kyun rah hai ? Ek to pehle hi jaan nikal rahi hai upar se aise kar raha hai

Amit : kya karun mausi aapke ye bade bade chutad dekh kar control nahi ho raha . Apke ye chutad kitne bade aur gore gore hain .

Rita ‘mausi : kaise nam le raha hai cccccc agar mere tujhe ye itne pasand aa rahe hai to jab didi k upar charhega to tujhe kitna maza aayega aaahahhhh maaaaaa mein gyiiiiiiiiii

Rita mausi ne jab rajani didi k bade chutad fir se mujhe yaad karwaye to maine zordar dhakka marte hue poora land jad tak gaand me ghusa diya . Mausi zor se karah uthi aur meri pakad se nikalne ki koshish ki par wo nikal nahi payi. Main bhi ruka nahi aur lagatar dhakke marne shuru kar diye. Pata nahi kyun rajani mausi ka nam sunte hi mere andar current sa lag jata tha. Mujhe khud samajh nahi aa raha tha k ye kya ho raha hai . Maine Rita mausi k kandhon par dono hath rakhte hue tabadtod dhakke marne shuru kar diye .

Rita mausi : aaahhhh aaaahahhh ruk ja aaaahh aahhh ruk jaaaaaa aaaahhh meri fatt jayegi ruk jaaaaaa

Mausi mujhe rukne ko keh rahi thi par ek to main pehle hi unki gaand marne se mast hua pada tha dusra unhone rajani mausi ka zikar kar k jaise jalti me tel daal diya tha . Main mausi k kandhe pakde bullet train ki raftar se dhakke pelne laga mausi ne bed par hath rakhe khud ko upar uthane ki koshis ki par main unke kandhe thame apna kam karta gya . Mausi karhti rahi par mujhe koi parwah Nahi thi . Mausi kya keh rahi thi main kuch nahi sun raha tha . Main tab tak dhakke pelta raha jab tak k mera kam nahi ho gya . J.B mera pani nikalne ko hua to maine mausi k kandhe zor se pakad kar unhe apni taraf khinchte hue poora land mausi ki gand me ghusa kar apna pani nikalna shuru kar diya . Jab tak mera pani nikalta raha maine mausi k kandhe pakde unhe aise hi upar uthaye rakha aur fir ek dam se dheela hi kar unke hor bed par aage ko gir gya. Mausi bed par ulti padi thi aur main u ke upar . Mausi karah rahi thi par main to behosh sa unke upar pada tha. Itna maza to kabhi nahi mila tha mausi k sath jitna aaj aaya tha . Pata nahi kitni der main mausi k upar aise hi pada raha. Fir jab thoda hosh aya to mujhe mausi ka khayal aya . Mera land abhi bhi mausi ki gaand me hi tha jo dheela ho raha tha. Main mausi k upar se utha aur jaise hi mausi ki gaand ko dekha to uska mud khul chuka tha. Pehle jahan band surakh tha ab wahan 2 rupay k sikke k jitna bada surakh ho chuka tha . Jahan par mere safed veerya ki kuch boonde lagi hui thi. Mausi k chutad mere thappadon se lal ho chuke the aur gand k surakh ka aaspas bhi laalgi bata rahi thi k yahan ab sujan aane wali hai . Mausi ankh band kiye padi hui thi . Maine mausi ko Hilaya

Amit : mausi aap theek to hain ?

Rita mausi ne meri bat sun kar meri taraf muh kiya aur muh banate hue boli

Rita mausi : aisa karta hai bhala koi? Maine kaha bhi ta aram se karna. Dekho kya halat kardi hai meri .

Amit : sorry mausi pata nahi mujhe kya ho raha tha .

Rita mausi : mujhe pata hai tujhe kya ho raha tha. Didi ka nam sun kar tera ye ghoda belagam ho rha tha. Ye ab didi k upar bhi charhna chahta hai. Chinta mat kar jald hi iski ye icha poori ho jayegi . Didi ka bhi khyal to tujhe hi rakhna padega na. Jab tu Deepika kamini aur mujhe pyar kar sakta hai to didi ko bhi to kar sakta hai na. Bechari badi tarsi hui hain wo bhi meri tarah . Unka bhi kalyan tujhe hi krna hai.

Amit : ye aap kya keh rahi hain mausi?

Rita mausi : wo hi keh rahi hun jo sach hai . Didi k nam sunte hi kaise ye ghoda belagam ho gya tha. Didi k nam par sara zor mere upar dikha diya. Waise sach kahun to didi ko tumhari zarurat hai. Jija ji se kuch hota nahi aur wo kisi se keh nahi sakti. Mujhse wo apni bat karti rehti hai is liye maine tumse kaha. Baki jaisi tumhari marzi . Agar tum apni badi mausi ko khushi nahi dena chahte to main kya kar sakti hun .

Maine Rita mausi ki is bat ka koi jawab nahi diya. Jawab deta bhi to kya ? Agar kuch puchta to wo yahi sochti k main rajani mausi k sath wo sab karna chahta hun. Is liye maine is bat par kuch nahi kaha.

Rita mausi : acha wo sab chhod mujhse zara drawer me se pain killer nikal kar de de. Pata nahi subah utha bhi jayega ya nahi . Didi ka nam lekar to galati kar di maine .

Maine mausi ko pani k sath pain killer di aur unko nighty pehna kar khud apne kapde pehan kar mausi ko kiss karne k bad apne kamre me aa gya . Dedh baj chuka tha aur main bister par let te hi so gya .

Udhar rima sheena aur Rina ek sath ek hi kamre me leti hui thi apni bua k ghar. Jabki Rupali apni nanad k sath uske kamre me thi .

Rina : sheena tu Ritu bua se kahan mili thi ?

Sheena : didi bataya to tha k college me mili thi .

Rina : tu kuch chhupa rahi hai. Sach sach bata kahin ye wo hi to nahi jisne Amit ko torture kiya tha. Amit ne jis tarah se react kiya tha usse mujhe poora yakeen hai k ye wo hi hogi. Aur manju bua ki vajah se usne kuch nahi kaha.

Sheena ne Rina ki bat ka koi jawab nahi diya. To rima bhi uth kar baith gyi .

Rima : didi aap bata kyun nahi rahi? Waise mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai. Warna wo kisi se aise behave nahi karta. Agar ye bat manju bua ko pata lagi to wo kaise react karengi ?

Sheena : bua bhi Amit ko bahut manti hai . Aur Ritu bua to unki purani best friend hai. Aise me main unke samne ye bat karti to unko dukh hota. Bua ko ye bat pata nahi chalni chahiye. Amit to khud batayega nahi. Par agar manju bua ko pata chala to wo zarur naraz hongi Ritu bua se. Sach kahun to mujhe lagta hai Ritu bua bhi sharminda hain apni us harkat k liye. Aur wo Amit se maafi bhi mangna chahti hain par Amit shayad abhi maaf nahi karega.

Rina : karna bhi nahi chahiye , ye kya bat hui bina sach jane kisi ko bhi aise buri tarah mara jana chahiye kya? Dekha nahi tha kya halat ho gyi thi Amit ki. Ye to Amit tha jo jhel gya uski jagah koi aur hota to hospital me dakhil karna padta . Mujhe to gussa aa raha hai Ritu bua par unhe kuch keh bhi nahi sakti. Abhi tak Amit ki peeth se wo nishan gye nahi. Sab k sath wo acha hi karta hai fir bhi pata nahi kyun uske sath bura ho jata hai .

Sheena : shayad bhagwan ne use dusron k dukh dard apne sir lene k liye hi banaya hai . Main to bhagwan k aage hath jodti hun k kabhi main uske kisi kam aa sakun ya uske liye kuch kar sakun .

Rina : sach keh rahi ho sheena . Wo sab se alag hai .

Sheena aur Rina dono hi apne apne man me Amit ko lekar apni yaden taza kar rahi thi aur dil me sapne saza rahi thi jabki rima to Amit k sath bitaye pyar bhare palon ko yad kar rahi thi.

Subah meri ankh apne honthon par geele ehsas k sath khuli . Band Ankhon se bhi main apni chhati par naram maas k golon k ehsas se samajh gya k ye karuna didi hi hongi. Aur neend me hi unke honth chumte hue maine unki gand par hath rakh kar unke chutad masalne shuru kar diye . Kuch der kiss karne k bad karuna didi ne kiss toda to maine ankhen kholi .

Karuna didi : guss dikhate hue ) bahut kharab ho tum. Kal kahan reh gye the ? Kya kya nahi socha tha maine aur tumne kal ki rat bhi kharab kar di.

Amit : ab isme mera kya kasoor hai . Main jab aaya aap hi soyi padi thi .

Karuna didi : pta nahi ye ajkal neend kaise aa jati hai apne aap . Agar main so gyi thi to tum nahi jaga sakte the ? Mera kitna man tha.

Amit : to abhi kar lete hain. Abhi to college jane me time hai na .

Karuna didi : utho jaldi se , bade aaye abhi kar lete hain. Ma ne kaha hai k rajkumar jinko utha kar lao college bhi jana hai . Waise Sach kahun to mera dil to yahi kar raha hai k aaj college jane ki bajaye hum dono kahin bahar chalen aur wahan don din ka hisab barabar kar len.

Maine Karuna didi ko bahin me bhar liya aur unke honth apne hontho me jakad liye . Ek zordar kiss Karne k bad maine didi ko chhoda .

Amit : aaj rat pakka , chahe kuch bhi ho jaye. Aaj aap rat ko taiyar rehna. Aaj aapki sari garmi nikal dunga. Bas aap jyada chillana mat .

Itna keh kar maine didi k chuche pakad kar masal diye .

Karuna didi : nahi chillati , par aaj mujhe poora lena hai pehle hi keh deti hun .

Itna keh kar didi ne bhi mujhe kiss liya aur jaldi se kamre se bahar bhag gyi. Main bhi utha aur bathroom me ja kar naha kar taiyar ho gya. Jab neeche aya to neha didi kitchen me nashta bana raha thi .

Amit : good morning didi , aap kitchen me ? Mausi kahan hain ?

Neha didi : good morning, ma ki tabiyat thodi theek nahi thi to maine hi unhe rest karne ko kaha hai . Tu baith main abhi nashta deti hun tujhe

Amit : main pehle mausi se mil kar ata hun .

Mujhe mausi ki chinta ho rahi thi kahin rat ki thukai se jyada hi to takleef nahi ho gyi unhe. Main yani sochta hua unke kamre me aya to wo abhi bhi nighty me bed par karwat k bal leti hui thi. Main darwaza band kar k unke pass aa kar baith gya .

Amit : mausi ??

Rita mausi : hmmm uth gya tu ? Neha nashta bana rahi hai ja nashta kar le.

Amit : mausi aap ki ye halat meri vajah se hui hai na . Mujhe maaf kar dijiye .

Rita mausi : haste hue ) tu bhi poora budhu ram hai . Kuch nahi hua hai mujhe . Pehli bar me to aage lene par bhi bukhar aa jata hai aur maine to piche liya hai wo bhi itna bada musal. Asar to hona hi tha. Rest karungi to sab theek ho jayega. Han aaj rat main kuch nahi karne dungi han .

Rita mausi ne khud hi mujhe apne upar jhukate hue mere honthon par apne honth rakh diye . Maine bhi unke chuche tham liye aur unhe masalte hue kiss karne laga .

Rita mausi : ummmmaaah chal ab nashta Karle ja ke fir tujhe college bhi jana hai .

Amit : pehle mujhe dekhna hai k apki halat kaisi hai .

Itna keh kar maine mausi ko bed par pet k bal

Kar diya aur unki nighty unki kamar tak upar utha di. Mausi ne neeche Penty nahi pehni thi jisse unke gore chutad nange mere samne aa gye . Maine dono chutadon ko faila kar dekha to gaand k surakh k aaspas sujan aa chuki thi. Mere is tarah se chutad failane se mausi ko dard hone laga .

Rita mausi : ccccc. Kya karta hai koi aa jayega kamre me .

Amit : darwaza band hai aap chinta mat karo. Aap k pas koi cream hai yahan lagane k liye ?

Maine mausi se puch kar cream unki gaand me laga di aur unke gore chutadon ko ek bar kiss karne k bar unki nighty neeche kar di . Fir main unhe kiss karne k bad bahar aa gya aur neha didi k hathon k paronthe khaye. Karuna didi bhi aa gyi thi aur mere sath hi nashta karne lagi. Udhar se Kalpana bhi didi ko lene aa gyi .

Kalpana : are wah didi aaj aap nashta bana rahi hain . Fir to ek aur bana hi lijiye main Amit to Amit k hissa k le rahi hun .

Itna keh kar Kalpana ne mere sath baithte hi meri plate se paronthe utha kar khana shuru kar diya.

Kalpana : aur kaisi ho didi aap ? Samjhao apne is bhai ko roz gayab rehta hai college se. Kisi din iski gumashudagi k poster lag jayenge bata deti hun.

Karuna didi kyun kya hua ?

Kalpana : kya hua ? Ye class me ata hi kahan hai . Upar se hamara bhi dil nahi lagta . Ye nahi hota to canteen me bhi boring hi lagta hua sab. Aaj to aa rahe ho na college

‘ mujhe to lagta hai tera hi dil nahi lagta iske bagair. Warna hum sab bhi to hote hi hain ‘ neha didi ne meri plate me ek aur parontha rakHte hue kaha

Karuna didi : mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai didi. Isi liye har waqt ye Amit ko lekar hi koi na koi bat karti rehti hai.

Kalpana : kya didi aap bhi maze lene lagi .

Karuna didi : meri jan tum kya akele hi maze lena chahti ho iske han?

Kalpana to karuna didi ki bat me hi fas gyi thi . Wo kuch aur kehti usse pehle hi bahar se rima aur sheena hath me shoppers pakde hue andar aa gyi.

Sheena : good morning everyone , to nashta ho raha hai. Are didi aap nashta bana rahi hain ? Aunty kahan hain ?

Neha didi : ma ki tabiyat aaj theek nahi thi to nashta main bana rahi hun.

Rima : chinta se ) kya hua mausi ko?

Neha didi : kuch nahi bas kamar me thoda dard hai to aram kar rahi hain.

Kalpana: waise koi ye batayega k ye itni shopping kis khushi me ki gyi hai?

Sheena : ye sab Amit ka hai .

Kalpana : Amit ka ? Matlab ?

Sheena : wo kal sham bua aur chachi k sath main rima aur Rina didi gyi thi ise sath lekar . Sab ne apni apni pasand k kapde le kar diye ise . Kitne dino se keh rahi thi par ye to banane par bahane bana raha tha kal aagya kabu aur ho gyi shopping.

Kalpana : mujhe bata deti to main bhi aa jati. Meri to aaj tak isne koi bat nahi mani.

Karuna didi : are yar tum naraz kyun hoti ho. Mujh le chalo shopping par main free hun.

Kalpana : aap to jab kahogi le jaungi main to iski bat kar rahi hun mr. VIP . Har bar bahana taiyar hota hai iska.

Amit : acha is hafte me pakka chalenge promise. Ab to khush ?

Kalpana: dekhlo didi sabke samne isne promise kiya hai . Ab agar isne promise toda to

Karuna didi : to milkar iski pitai karenge.

Neha didi : khabardar kisi ne mere bhai ko hath bhi lagaya to.

Kalapana : to keh dijiye apne bhai se k promise nahi tutna chahiye warna iski tangen tootengi .

Neha didi : tum sab baton me lagi ho time dekho hum log late ho rahe hain chalo jaldi se.

Karuna didi : didi pehle dekh to le kya kya shopping ki hai kal isne.

Neha didi : Ye sab kahin bhaga nahi ja raha hai . Aa kar dekh lena.

Neha didi ne sare shoppers utha kar apne kamre me rakh diye . Karuna didi scooti par naina didi ki taraf chali gyi. Neha didi ko kalpana apne sath le gyi . Mujhe bhi wo keh rahi thi sath chalne ko par maine keh diya k mujhe jana hai kahin. Khair sheena aur rima ek car me Kalpana aur neha didi ek car me chali gyi. Maine charon ko college jane ko keh diya aur khud radha ko lene uske ghar ki taraf chal diya .
 

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Suspense last me dal hi dete ho achaa hai
Zaberdast
Maza aa gya
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Very nice update
Har update ke end mei ek naya suspense !!!! Raja chouhan bhaijee humaaree jaan hi lekar rahenge. Accha style hai suspense ka.

Nidhi didi ki interview ke baad Amit ko director ke roop me dekh kar khushi ki seema hi nahi rahi. Bahut khoob ?

Shopping bhi kee aur Amit dwara payal dil wane se unke dil me pyar nei ek aur angrayee lee. Accha hai aage dekhenge ye premprasang kaise develop hota hai.

Manju and company ko bhi Amit ke sath shopping par jaate dekha gaya aur ek naya Bakhera bhi dikha kuch manchalo ke sath. Khair Amit sath tha to unki dhunaayee bhi hui aur phir police baki ka dinner hawalat mei karwayegi gundo ko.

SP Ritu aur Manju ko ek doosre ko dekh kar achambhit hona ab kya naya khulaasa karega ? Intezaar agle adhyay ka.....


Kul mila kar ek aur shandar update. Raja chouhan bhai apni mehnat se wakai hum sab readers ke dilo ke Raja ban gaye hai. Bahut khoob aur dhanyawad ??
Toh Manju or Ritu Sahaliyan Hain
Mind-blowing Fantastic Superb Update ????
Shandar update...bhai
awesome, jabardast, speechless, mindblowing update.........
keep posting bhai............
waiting for next update............
Thanks bhai very nice update
Lovely update..
Wow beautiful update bhai ? but yaar suspance again not good
ye sp ritu kya manju mam ki dost hain......................

dekhte hain............
Superb Raja bhai.....
Shayed sp Ritu or manju mam ka v koi khas rishta hai or ab sp Ritu Amit ke or kareeb aa jayegi is trah.....
Waiting for next update....
Jbardust update Bhai
Super mind-blowing update
Faadu update Raja bhaiya.....

Par ye galat baat hai har baar ek naya suspense dal dete ho end main aur hamari raat ki neend aur din ka chain sab kho jata hai.......:hukka::hukka::hukka::hukka::hukka::hukka:
Awesome updates
Marvelous fantastic Update...

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I open this site in night after 9 o'clock only for this story and I am happy to read a favoulasias update in every night. all the best
Boht zabardast update
Superb kamal update.
Raja chouhan भाई दोबारा बधाई इस सुन्दर व दिलचस्प कहानी के 1000 पेज पूरे करने के लिए । भाई जिस प्रकार आपने कथा व किरदार वर्णित किये है और जो आपस मैं जुडकर कहानी को और रोमांचक बनाते जा रहे हैं । अब देखो SP ऋतु की अपनी क्या कहानी है ।
Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya
oye teri ki.. lagta hai ye dono to aapas meim dost hai.. purani...

waise amit agar chhahe to khud ki kapdo ki shop bhi khol sakta hai.. aaye din koi na koi isko apne saath shopping karwa he deta hai...
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update
Manju aur Ritu ek dushre ko pahle se janti hai shayad wo saheli ho . Karan se Amit ka aamña samna na hua warna phir wo koi ulti harkat karta .
Superb lajawab Mind blowing update Raja sir.
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai ?
Behad khubsurat aur dhamakedaar update bhai
Nice update bro
Both hi

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Both hi ??❤?☺???☺???? vadiya update Hy Raja bahi
great story

emotions bahut acche hai


sex bhi jordar tarike se dala hua hai




kahani thoda slow chal rehe hai


day to day narrations are too good


aisa lagta hai sab kuch samne hi ho reha hai


lage reho

mast reho


rajpoot
Nice update bro. Lekin ye Nidhi ka aap bolna Amit ke sath sath mere ko bhi accha nai lag rha tha.
Sp Ritu Amit ko kaise janti hai. ?? Ye ab naya twist aaya hai
Dekhte hai next update me
waah kya lajabab update hey bhai, Rajani maasi ka behavhior thek ke lagta hey Amit se sex karne ke liye ready hey, aur SP Ritu singh ke saath Manju ka sasural wala koi rista lagta hey, sayad Manju ke husband ka sister ho Ritu ji ya best friend, lets see.
अब खुलेगी ऋतु सिंह से रिश्तेदारी, मंजू के ससुराल से होगी
Awesome update
New taluq
Wo sab thik hai bhai but i personally don't think wife should(or Have to) call his husband and vice versa "Aap". Pati ka naam nai lete this mentality kinda bugs me Haha. Its not the fault of the story i was expessing my own discomfort.

story baki mast chal rahi hai.
Fantastic update bhai
Awesome update bro
Nice n fantastic update
nice update
:superb: :good: :perfect: awesome update hai raja bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
nidhi didi ne to kamaal ka rasta nikal liya hai amit ko akele me pati ke roop mein ijjat dene ka,
Wow sp sahiba to manju mam ki saheli nikli,
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
Fantastic update waiting for next
Lajawaab bhai, wo laofer ye bol rahe the ke har variety hain jaise milf, model, young aur sab, magar unhe ye nahi pata ke in sab me 3 to amit ke ho gaye aur baki line me lage hain.
Ye twist to kisine soncha nahi hoga ke ritu singh bhi amit ya manju mam ke pehchanat me niklegi, agar wo manju mam ko janti hain to pakka amit ke mata pita se bhi mili hogi.
Awesome fabulous update
Keep posting
mast update.bhai ek sath itane maal dekhkar laar to tapake gi hi. phir wo nashe me bhi the. Dekhate hain manju se kaisi jaan pahchan hai.
Lagta hai ritu singh and manju dono college vaigarah me padhai sath ki hogi ya fir ye uske pati ki side se koi relation me hogi.
Waiting for the next update bro.
Supper fantastic update janab.
Umda Rasprad aur Romanchak kahani ka umda update. Waiting for next
Ek aur twist
Nice update. One more character add in his family
Super update dear
Yeh bhi ho sakta hey ke Amit ke maa Damini ka friend ho.
ab ye kya tha???
manju..... kahi ye dono ka rishta amit ko koi nuksan na pahuchaye . ..
btw nice update bhai
Shandar update bhai, aik aik lafz entertainment or mazay say bhara hay is story ka. Mujhay lagta hay Ritu sigh amit ki koe ristaydar niklay gi amit k father ki family say, 2sra kamleesh mama ka kch karo bhai bht hawa main ur raha hay kch aqal thikanay lagao uski
Fantastic Update ?
Jabardast update raja bhai ?? waiting for next
Ek aur twist
Dhamkedar update

Badhut hi acha fighting scene creat kiya hai .......

:writing::writing::writing::writing::writing::writing::writing:
fantastic update
Congratulation for 1000 pages
Nice update
Ritu Singh or Manju ka shayad koi purana or khas Rishta Hai shayad Manju ki sausral se ya college ki koi friend dekhte hai Kya nikal k ata hai

Waiting for next
Supper update bro
gazab bhai ...ritu ki karibi bad rahi hai amit se ...nice ..very nice bhai
Matlab manju aur ritu ek doosre ko jaanti h lekin kaise yeh tow raja bhai hi bata sakte h
Dekhte h agle update m kia pata chalta h
Bahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab update dost
Bhai aj update aayega
Wow beautiful update bhai ? but yaar suspance again no
Bhai bola tha pakka connection niklega bas ye dekhana hai ki ye bhi amit ki rishtedar to nahi.
Nice update bro waiting for next
manmohak update mitr.
Raja chouhan bhai Bohut hi shandaar kahani likh rahe ho.
Shuruat mai amit ko aisa ladka dikhaya jiski duniya bas gaon Aur apne ghar tak sumit hi rahi aur ghar mai bhi jaha kamini usse nafrat karti hai wahi gauri uspar apni pori mamta luta ti hai.
Deepika jo kabhi bhi amit ko lekar kuch galat nahi sonch thi hai Phir kuch aise situations aeye jisse wo amit ke karib agayi aur phir jis khushi ke liye itna intezar kiya wo bhi pori Hogayi maa bankar.
Kamini bhi der se hi sahi par amit ke prati apni nafrat khatam kar hi li aur usey bhi wo sukh milgaya jiske ummid bhi usne chod do thi aur sath hi pati bhi aisa mila jo usse bohut pyaar karta hai jisne sachi janne ke baad bhi uski khushi ki khatir sab kuch accept karliya.
Gauri ke sath rishta ek majboori ke sath shuru huwa aur gauri ka us prakar se react karna bhi jayaz tha kyunki usne amit ko apne sage bete ki tarah hi pyaar kiya aise mai uske sath ye sab hona koi choti baat nahi thi par der se hi sahi usey bhi samajh agaya ki jo bhi huwa wo sab shayad niyati hi thi ab wo bhi apni zindagi ki sabse badi khushi hasil karne wali hai MAA bankar.
Wahi manjari jisse amit ko pehli baar pyaar ka ehsas huwa jiska sath bas kuch pal bitaye they wo bhi usko chodkar chali gayi amit ke liye ye ek bada sadma jaise tha jo ladka bachpan mai hi apne Maa baap ko khodiya ho uske liye aise mai apne pehle pyaar ko bhi kho dena bohut badi baat hai.
Raju ek sache dost ka farz nibhate huwe usey us sadme se bahar aney madad karta hai.
Wahi apni agey ki padayi ke liye seher mai akar hi ek se badkar ek kand hote rahe hai jaha monty jaise dushman mila wahi kalpana jaisi dost bhi mili.
Sheena chahe shuruat mai galat nazar ayu par baad wo bhi ab amit ki ek achi dost bangayi.
Shivani ka case kuch sheena jaisa hi tha.
Wahi shalu jo apni zindagi mai najane kya kya sehgayi usko us daldal se nikal kar amit ne uski zindagi sawar di.
Naina aur karuna bhi apne hisse ka Pyaar leliya hai amit se.
Wahi rita mausi ko bhi santusht kardiya.
Rajni se bhi anjaane mai sambandh ban hi gaye dekhte hai ye khul kar samne kab ayega.
DIVYA jo apni behen damini ko apni Jaan se zyada pyaar karti thi uske hi beta se utni nafrat bhi par der se hi sahi uska wo pyaar uski nafrat se kahi zyada hi nikla ha nafrat ki asli wajah ab tak samne nahi ayi ki akhir kyu divya amit ke pita pawan ko dushi manti hai.
Nidhi jo sabse badi hai bhai behno mai wo bhi ab khud ko amit ki patni man ne lagi hai anjane mai hi sahi amit ke hatho uski maang bhar gayi ab dekhna hoga ki nidhi ke liye agey ka safar kaise rehta hai kyunki ye itna asan bhi nahi hoga.
RADHA jo apne dil mai bachpan se hi amit se pyaar kar baithi hai jiska dil sirf amit ke liye hi dhadak tha hai aise mai kab ye apne dil ki baat amit se keh pati hai dekhna hoga.
Mohit ke rup mai seher mai sabse pehle ek sacha dost amit ko mila phir baat mai to kismat ka aisa sath mila ki mohit ke pita raghav amit ke pita ke kash dost aur business partner nikle jisne apna adha business amit ke naam kardiya ye keh kar ki wo uske baap ka hai.
Wahi mohit ki Maa rama ko amit ke ruo mai ek aur beta bhi milgaya aur sath mai uski pyas bhujane ke liye ek sacha sathi bhi.
Karishma ke problem ko amit ab kis tarah se solve karta hai ye dekhna banta hai kyunki rama amit ko ye zimmedari de chuki hai.
KALPANA ek sachi dost ho bina kisi fayde ke amit ke liye kuch bhi kar guzar sakti hai.
Manju jo ki rishte mai amit ki bua hai jiska pata dono ko hi nahi hai uske sath ek alag hi dil ka rishta jod gaya.
RIMA MY ONE OF FAVORITE CHARACTER OF THIS STORY is ladki ke barey kya kehna dil se ek dum sachi jo amit se apni Jaan se bhi zyada pyaar karti hai Pyaar to amit bhi isse karta hai par in dono ki rah itni asaan bhi nahi hone wali hai jaha ek taraf rima ki Maa se anjane mai hi sahi amit ka ek alag rishta bangaya tha wahi rima ki behen Dr. Rina bhi dil hi dil amit ko pasand karti hai.
NEHA MY ANOTHER FAVOURITE CHARACTER jo zyada bolti nahi hai par apne bhai amit se shayad sabse zyada hi pyaar karti hai abhi tak to inka pyaar ek behen ka hi dikha hai par agey ka pata nahi.
Raja chouhan Bhai kahani shuruat se to bohut hi intresting bani huwi jhoot bhi nahi kahunga bich ke kuch updates padhne par aisa laga ki shayad zabardasti kahani ko kinchne ke liye likha gaya ho par jaise jaise kahani agey badhte gayi waise waise samajh agaya ki wo sab bhi Zaroori they.
Raja chouhan Apki writing ki sabse achi baat ye hai ki har update ke sath apki writing skills aur bhi improve hoti ja rahi hai.
Aur pata nahi kyu par mujhe aisa lagraha hai ki ek jagah monty ke baap ka zikar huwa tha shayad wo Germany mai tha apne kisi dost se baat karte hai aur mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki shayad wo shaks koi aur nahi divya ka hi pati hai kyunki wo bhi bahar rehta hai aur uska zyada zikr bhi nahi huwa nahi wo divya aur radha ke prati kuch serious nazar araha hai.
Mujhe lagta hai divya ka pati bhi monty ke baap ke sath mila huwa hai aur shayad usne hi kuch aisa jaal bhuna tha jisse divya amit ke pita pawan se kuch hadh tak naraz ya nafrat karti hai ab pata nahi mai kitna sahi ho par jo mujhe laga wo boldiya.
Ab tak to yaha aisi teen hai jo amit ko apna pati man chuki hai nidhi radha aur rima (jisse amit khud bhi pyaar karta hai aur Jiwan sathi banana chahta hai par nidhi aur radha ka to usey pata nahi). Ab dekhte hai ki is list mai aur kon kon shamil hoti hai
Ha agar neha is list mai shamil hogi to meri request hai ki uska scene sabse alag aur hatke hona chahiye ??.
Divya bechari ek alag hi jung lad rahi hai apne dil mai uske sapno ko lekar agar uska amit ke sath Milan hoga to Raja chouhan apko sabse zyada mehnat karni padegi us update par kyunki wo scene sabse alag aur sabse hatke hi hoga jisme dher sari feeling aur pyaar hoga.
Raja chouhan Bhai jaha tak likh sakta tha likh diya pata hai abhi bohut si batein reh gayi par yaha se har update ke sath hi review dete rahonga.
Update ka intezar rahega????.
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