RAJIV SHAW
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Ohh bro dhyan se yr aaj kal vese dawa daru na mil rhi dhyan se Bhai ,, agar if u feel good then dena vrna koi nhi kl intejaar krlengeSorry dosto aaj thoda chot lag gyi thi to gadbad ho gyi. Aadha likha hai abhi aage shuru kar raha hun jaise hi poora hoga update kar dunga. Late night hi sahi par update de dunga
Sorry dosto aaj thoda chot lag gyi thi to gadbad ho gyi. Aadha likha hai abhi aage shuru kar raha hun jaise hi poora hoga update kar dunga. Late night hi sahi par update de dunga
Marvelous update..bhai
Jabardastt update bhai
BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR FANTASTIC EMOTIONAL AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
amazing jbardust brilliant update Sahi sabak Mila Ritu Singh ko
Lovely update..full of drama with tragic end of update....
Excellent update bhai.
To ritu singh ki nafrat kam ho hi gyi ab ek new problem khadi ho gyi mohit ke papa ki dekhte h kya hoga aage
Awesome update bro
Mind-blowing update.
Little Emotional update
Ritu ki ab dono anken puri tarah khul gayi hai jo aage Amit k kam aayegi
Raghav ko kya hua
achanak kahi beti ki wajah se kuch tho nhi hua ?
Awesome updates
Interesting update.
SP Sahiba ko apni galati ka ehsaas ho gaya aur ab Amit ki Kaamdev wali bullet train mei ek aur Dabba jurne ki tayyari lagti hai. Ha ha ha
Karan bhai kuch jaada hi jal kookre hain air lagta hai koi nayee khurafaat jaroor Karenge.
Mohit ke papa ko heart attack ?!! Kya karan ho sakta hai ? Mohit ki bahen ka dukh ya Factory ke kaam ka stress ya phir dushman ki sajish ? Suspense barkaraar hai.
Gaon mein bhi sabke aane se naye khulase hone ki ummeed ki jaa sakti hai.
Bahut barhiya update likha. Dhanyawad Raja chouhan bhai jee.
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Supa bhai
Raja Bhai
This update has been totally mind-blowing Fantastic Superb
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Mast dhansu update
nice update
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Both hi ????☺???????☺☺?☺? vadiya update Hy Raja bahi
Nice story Bhai..
Aap ki story lazawab h Sab character ko aapas m lekar chal rahe ho...
Nahi to kai writer to pata Nahi story ko Kaha se Kaha le jate h...
Raja chouhan भाई साहब शब्द नहीं है मेरे पास की update के बारे में कुच्छ कहूँ, आप जो लिखते हो वो अविस्मरणीय है । updated अनुपमा व बेजोड़ है। Raja chouhan भाई ऐसे ही लिखते रहिये और हमें विस्मित करते रहो।
Congo for 900 pages??
Kahani achi hai apki bhai
Bhai last mein ye suspance bahot bada waise beautiful update
Nice update
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai ?
Ni
Nice update bhai waiting for new upate
Super yaar.
Ek aur Jabardast update bhai. Jyada kuch bolnd ka nahi hai but kafi pareshani bhara samay aane wala hai lag rha.
Sahi mauke pe uncle ka heart attack iske piche bhi kuch jhhol hai aisa lag rha.
Dekhte nai kya hota hai
Super update hai bhai
Superb lajawab Mind blowing Raja sir.
Super update kal intezar rahega
Jabardasttt updates bhai
Awesome Super Fantastic Mind Blowing Dhanshu Update
Ritu ke sare Doubt Amit ko lekar khel gaye ab dekhte hai jab uski mulakat Amit se hoti hai to eah kis trah apni galti ka paschatap karti hai .
Karan ko police aane ki khabar milte hi laga ki Amit phashne wala hai par sachhai aur Dc se pahchan hone ki baat sunkar to hosh ud gaye . Kalpna ke pita ke bare jankar to uske hoah ud gaye . Naina didi ne bhi use samjha diya bike se ched chad karne ke liye ab na kare . Ab dekhte hai gaw me kya drama karta hai .
Aachank kyon Amit ke papa ko heart Attack aa gaya kya koi sajish hai ya phir unhe apni beti ki halat ki sachhai pata chal gayi jisse heart Attack aa gaya.
Yaaar ye kya ho geya.
awesome excellent update
awesome update hai raja bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
dr rina to bechari amit ka patti karte karte hi thak jaayegi, amit har roj ek naya jakhm lekar pahunch jata hai ,
nidhi didi ne to amit ke haav bhaav se hi pakad liya hai ki vo aaj phir kahin se chot khakar aaya hai,
vahin sp ritu amit se maafi mangne ke liye bechain hui padi hai,
aur Amit nidhi didi ke saath gaon nikal gaya hai,
Ab ye uncle ko heart attack kaise aa gaya ,
ab tak to achchhe bhale the....,
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
Wow lagta hai ab Amit ke diwani Me ek naam aur add ho jayega Ritu ka aur uska Kala sach bhi samne aayega shayad woh bhi Amit ke father se related ho. Aur is baar amit ki acchai Ritu ke samne aa ho gayi uski saari dosto ke sath kia hua acchai ki wajah se. Lekin karan ka Sahi chutiya kata aur yah achanak uncle ko heart attack kahi unka role khatam to nahi ho raha hai story se. Ki unke MARNEY ke baad unki will se Amit ko 50 percent share mill jayege. Wagera wagera
Nice n fantastic update
The story is at its very best now and you have written each plot and scene of the story in such a way which shows the grip of yours on each character and greatness of the HERO. Fantastic. Mind blowing.
Nice update bhai. Bahut sahi ja rahe ho . Bas aise hi likhte raho . Good job.
Superb Raja bhai.....
Waiting for next update......
As alweys superb update bhai, kuch to hua hey Mohit ke papa ke saath jise unka heart attack aaya hey, story aab aise position main aa gaya hey ke dil karta hey padte hi rahu update khayam hi na ho, ek din agar update nahi aate toh kuch bhi achha nahi lagta, Ezima bhai ka story toh abhi tak nahi pad paya hu, baki jitne bhi story yaha pe hey, yeh story sabse achha hey, last main aap se request hey bhai bohot urgent na ho toh chutti mat legieaga please bhai, daily update dete rahiyega aur aasa karta hu story 300 updates tak jarur pouchega, aap ko thanks bhai itna achha story hum sab ko present karne ke liye, hats off bhai.
Awesome fabulous update
Ek problem katam hua tha ye second aa gaya laga tha aache see function ho jayega
Keep posting
Awesome update raja bhai ????
wah.kya update tha.Ankhon me aansu la diya aapane.
Bhai ji apne gazab likha ye update and kuchh to shoking hua hai ji raghav ji ko Heart attack aay hai kahi unhe amit ke maa baap ka katal karane wale ke bare me to nhi pata chal gya ya fir kal amit ke sath jo incident hua hai uska kyoki ye bhi amit ko apni aulad hi smajhate hai.
dekhate hai kya hota hai.
love you bhaiya ji
waiting for the next update bro.
Nice update dear ?
Congratulations for 900+ page
Nice update bro waiting for next update
Bahot hi shandar update..
Achha hua ritu ki galat fehmi dur ho gayi..
Amit ko chahne walo me ek naam or badh gaya..
Mohit ke papa ko heart attack aya hai ya..fir ye us natak ka hissa hai jiska jikra hua tha bahot pehle.. Mohit ki sis ko ghar lane ke liye.. Kuch na hi ho to achha hai Mohit ke Dad ko..
Nice update. Ritu ka v background dikhao bhai
Fantastic Update
mast
Boht zabardast update
Awsum Update bro maza aa gya pdne me
Awesome update bro
superb update bhai.... keep it up
Amit wapas aayega shahr uncle se milne aur uncle use kahenge company sambhaalne padhaayi ke sath sath.....
Aane wale update mein shayad kuch dhamaka ho ....
waiting
जरूरी नहीं जो ख़ुशी दे उसी से मोहब्बत हो प्यार तो अक्सर दिल तोड़ने वाले से भी हो जाता है............
Masterpiece.... Update Sir...
Romanchak update hai dost.
Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro
Y kya gaav wala program ho ki nhi kahi postpone na ho jaye situation hi kuch esi h
Is ritu ka kahi shera se to koyi rista nhi h na sala policewali ka dil pigalne or kisi ka hone m time lgega
Bache ka naam amit hi rakhe to acha hoga
Waiting
Kis mod par kahani ko lakar khada kiya Bhai?. Kya Amit ko bhagna padega Mohit ke Father ke liye? Kitne sawal jeha me utha diya? Waiting for next
Bhai aj update aayega
Kya lagta hai dosto uncle nipat jayenge kya ??
Superb update
Waiting for today update Raja chouhan bhai
Awesome update janab.
Iss update k liye taliya bajti rahegi.
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Kya update tha mja aagya pad kr.
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Karan ki sukh gye par harkate nahi bhula bina amit ki dose k kaise sudhrega.
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SP ritu ka sacchai se samna ho hi gya.
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Last mai sad news mili par dekhte hai aage kya hota h.
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Keep writing.
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Keep posting.
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Awesome update raja bhai ab gaon ke scene ke baad ab vo mohit ki bahen ka kya scene he bhai jiski vajah se rama aunty bahut pareshan bhi thi uska bhi karna kuch.
Waiting for next update ???
Hamesha ki tarah lajawab update bhai.
Awesome updates bro
Super Duper Hit bro........
Can't wait for next update... Apki story padke aisa lagta hai ki aap likhte jaye aur hum padte jaye... intezar hi nahi hota.....
Raja bhai kahi ye heart attack natak to nhi mohit ki behan ko sasural se bulane ke liye?????
Ek dam romanchak mod par aakar aapne kahani ko roka hai bhai..Mohit k dad ko kuch na ho aisa aasha karta hu warna abhi se sari company ka bhoj humare hero k khando pe aa jayega..agle update ka intezar rahega..
Saandaar
Nice Update Bhai I Think Mohit ke Dad ko Heart Attack Aaya hai Matlab ab Karishma ki Entry Hogi aur Amit ki List me Ek Naam aur add hoga jo Shaayad Rama karwayegi apni Beti ki Khushi ke liye Dekhte hai aage kya kya hota hai.
Bahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab update dost excellent
congrats Raja chouhan bro aapko kahani ke liye or member of month ke liye bhai haan janta hun thoda late hai ...per aaj jab thoda free hua or yahan aaya toh dekha ...bhai such me dil se khushi hui ...ur story also rocks ...
or apna bhai jab acha likhe toh khushi hona bhi lazmi hai ....best of luck dear bro and also once more congrats dear bro ...
Update postedBahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab update dost
Thanks brother . Hope you will enjoy itcongrats Raja chouhan bro aapko kahani ke liye or member of month ke liye bhai haan janta hun thoda late hai ...per aaj jab thoda free hua or yahan aaya toh dekha ...bhai such me dil se khushi hui ...ur story also rocks ...
or apna bhai jab acha likhe toh khushi hona bhi lazmi hai ....best of luck dear bro and also once more congrats dear bro ...