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Kalpana k room se bahar jane k bad hum teeno k chehron par tension aa gyi thi magar maine mahol ko halka karne ki Kashish ki .

Amit : aap dono itna kyun ghabra rahi hain? Ab ladai jhagde me itna to hota hi hai. Aap tension mat lo . Waise bhi main abhi kahin jane ki halat me nahi hun to police kya kar legi ?

Aunty : ye chhoti bat nahi hai . Pata nahi kya shikayat di gyi ho police ko . Waise kal tum logon ne kisi ko itna to nahi mara na k wo jan se hi mar jaye ?

Amit : nahi Aunty aisa kuch nahi hua hai aap chinta mat karo .

Radha : akhir shikayat ki kisne hai ? Kidnap to mera hua tha fir kaun shikayat karwa raha hai aur kaisi shikayat .

Amit : ab ye kaise pata chalega ? Tum tension mat lo much nahi hoga. Humne kuch galat nahi kiya to hum kyun daren? Chalo pehle khana kha lo fir tum ghar chali jana mausi chinta kar rahi hongi.

Aunty : tum dono nashta karo main zara tumhaare uncle ko phone kar k bata deti hun . Wo sab dekh lenge. Agar wakai me koi bat hai to pehle se taiyari rakhni chahiye .

Amit : aap aise hi dar rahi hain.

Aunty : tum nashta karo bas , Radha lo tum bhi karo aur ise bhi karwao.

Aunty phone par uncle se bat karne lagi aur Radha mere sath nashta karne lagi . Thodi der bad Kalpana bhi wapis aa gyi ab wo normal lag rahi thi jaise usne sab kuch hal kar diya ho.

Amit : kahan chali gyi thi tum ?

Kalpana : kuch nahi bas ek phone karna tha.

Amit : kise ?

Kalpana : wo chhodo , Radha ye kya tum abhi tak aise hi kapdon me ho?

Amit : ab hospital me kapde kahan se layegi ye? Tum ek kam karo ise ghar le jao mausi bhi pareshan hongi . Aur han kal jo hua uske bare me bat mat karna warna wo tension me aa jayengi aur baat ghar walon tak pahunch jayegi.

Radha : magar main ma se kuch nahi chupati aur kal agar unhe kisi aur se pta chala to unko bura lagega.

Amit : magar ...

Radha : main samjha dungi ma ko tum chinta mat karo.

Kalpana : tum aram karo main Radha ko ghar chhod kar wapis ati hun . Fir dekhte hain aage kya karna hai.

Kalpana Radha ko lekar chali gyi aur main aram karne laga itne me Dr rina wapis aa gyi .

Dr rina : to ab batao kahan se chot lagi hai tumhe mazra kya hai sara?

Amit : aap jaan kar kya karengi ?

Dr rina : iska matlab mujhe jannne ka bhi hak. Nahi hai? Ache dost ho ?

Amit : to suniye , Radha ko kal rat kuch ladkon ne kidnap kar diya tha bas use bachate hue ye chot lagi hai.

Dr rina : gusse me ) kyaa???? Aise logon ko to jaan se mar dena chahiye . Mera bas chale to ek ek ko jaan se mar dun . Ladkiyon ko bas istemal ki cheez samajhte hain. Har taraf samaj me aise bhediye ghum rahe hain . Hamara kanoon hi kamzor hai isi liye unhe dar nahi. Agar 2-4 ko latkaya jaye to bakion ko bhi dar ho.

Amit : shant shant Dr sahiba , aapka kam jan bachana hai jan lena nahi. Rahi bat aise logon ki to is bat par main bhi yahi sochta hun.

Dr rina : jaan bachana mera farz hai janti hun magar science ne aur bhi raste ijaad kiye hain aise logon ko saza dene k liye

Amit : wo kaise ?

Dr rina : jis mardangi ki akad aise bhedion ko ukasati hai na bas ek injection me sab khatam kiya ja sakta hai. Isse to jan nahi jayegi na.

Amit : kya sach me aisa ho sakta hai ? Fir to yahi sahi saza hai aise logon k liye .

Dr rina : waise the kaun wo log ?

Amit : kidnap karne wale ladke to aur the magar jisne unhe bheja tha wo hath nahi aya. Bade baap ki aulad hai to kanoon ka bhi dar nahi use.

Dr rina : fir to uski yahi saza hai k use uski mardangi se hi farig kar diya jaye .

Amit : hmmm

Dr rina : kya hmm , itne dino bad mile ho wo bhi is halat me . Har bar aise hi miloge kya ?

Amit : waise Dr aur patient wala rishta hai hamara to aapse milne aise hi ana padega na?

Dr rina : koi zarurat nahi aise aane ki, Dr patient k ilawa hum dost bhi to hain afsos k tum apni is dost ko milne bhi nahi aate.

Amit : aapke samne hi to hun. Pehle test chal rahe the aur fir mami k beta hua aur ab ye . Aapko to maine bataya hi tha.

Dr rina : isi liye maine pareshan nahi kiya par khud hi to socho kitne din ho gye coffee liye sath me? By the way badhai ho tumhe tumhare chhote cousin bhai ki.

Amit : thank you , waise coffee to hum yahan bhi pi sakte hain ab to aapke pas hi hun.

Dr rina : jyada hoshiar mat bano , main date par jane ki bat kar rahin hun

Amit : date par ?

Dr rina : sharmate hue ) mera matlab hai bahar caffe me jaise us din tum lekar gye the.

Amit : acha wo , han wahan bhi chalenge par uske liye apko pehle mujhe theek krna hoga.

Dr rina : don’t worry , serious injuries nahi hai koi . 2-3 din me chhutti le sakte ho bas kuch din zakham theek hone me lagenge abhi.

Amit : 2-3 din ?? Ye to jyada hai main itne din kya karunga yahan.

Dr rina : ab aa hi gye ho to khatiradari ka mauka dijiye huzoor .

Amit : kahin khatiradari bhari na pad jaye aapko

Dr rina : tumhare liye sab manzoor hai.

Itne me bahar se nurse aa gyi Dr rina ko bulane

Nurse : Dr rina operation theater ready hai dr sahab ne kaha hai aap aa jayen.

Dr rina : tum chalo main abhi aayi. Ek operation k liye abhi ja rahi hun 3-4 ghante me wapis aati hun tab tak tum aram karo.

Itna keh kar Dr rina smile karti hui chali gyi . Aur Aunty room me aa gyi .

Udhar Manju m bhi aaj college nahi gyi thi , unhe to bas Amit ki hi tension thi aur abhi tak kuch bhi pata nahi chala tha use kahin se . Upar se college me police Amit ko dhoondhte hue aayi hai ye bat pata chalte hi uski dhadkane aur bad gyi. Wo bar bar amit ka phone try kar rahi thi magar jawab ek hi tha. Tab usne faisla kiya k wo monty aur Sheena se is bare me bat karegi . Manju ko yad aya k uske pas Sheena ka phone no. Tha usne use call lagai . 2-3 bar call pick nahi hui magar fir bhi wo try karti rahi . Akhir kar Sheena ne phone utha hi liya.

Sheena : hello , aaj apne mujhe call kaise ki?

Manju m : Amit kahan hai ?

Sheena : kya matlab ? Wo mere pas thoda hi hai ?

Manju m : aur kahan hai ? Wo kal Radha ko bachane gya tha aur abhi tak na Radha ka pata chala hai na amit ka upar se police use dhoond rahi hai. Kya kiya hai tum dono ne uske sath ?

Sheena : kya abhi tak dono ghar nahi pahunche ? Par wo to rat ko hi aa gye the wapis .

Manju m : kya ??? Matlab tum unke sath thi ? Kya ho Kya raha hai mujhe sab sach batao ?

Sheena : main abhi aapko wapis call karti hun

Itna keh kar Sheena ne phone kat diya . Manju ne kai bar phone try kiya magar Sheena ka phone busy aata rha. Sheena k muh se Amit aur Radha k rat ko wapis aane ki bat sun kar Manju ko jahan ek taraf tasalli mili wahin tension bhi hone lagi ki wo ja kahan sakte hain dono.

Sheena ne manju ki call katne k bad monty ko call ki aur usse police wala matter pucha to monty ne sari bat batayi . Sheena ne monty ko MLA ko wapis phone kar k police ko rokne ko kaha aur monty ne aisa hi kiya. Ab Sheena ko chinta is bat ki thi k Amit aur Radha hain kahan . Use yad aya k Amit ko kafi chot lagi thi . Ye bat dimag me aate hi use bhi chinta hone lagi. Sheena jo nafrat karti thi amit se achanak ek hadse ne uska nazariya badal diya tha. Ab amit ka us par ehsan tha chahe amit khud us se nafrat hi kare par Sheena ab uski karzdar thi . Monty aur Sheena me shayad yahi farak tha. Jahan monty ise apni ek shikast samajh kar aage ki soch raha tha wahin ab Sheena is dushmani ko hi khatam karne ki taraf soch rahi thi.

Sheena ne apni classmates ko phone lagta aur Neeraj ka no. Liya . Neeraj bhi ghar par aram kar raha tha . Usne unknown no. Samajh kar pehle to uthaya nahi par jab bar bar phone aane laga to usne call pick kar hi li

Neeraj : hello who is this?

Sheena : hi Neeraj this is sheena

Neeeaj : Sheena ! Tumne mujhe kyun phone kiya ? Fir se kuch karna hai kya ? Dekho Amit se door raho warna acha nahi hoga.

Sheena : I am sorry Neeraj mujhse anjane galati ho gyi . Kal mujhe ehsas hua k Main kitni galat thi . Mujhe amit ki chinta ho rahi hai . Kal use bahut chot lag gyi thi aur abhi pata chala hai k wo ghar bhi nahi gya aur Radha bhi . Please itna bara do k wo theek to hai na?

Neeraj : theek nahi hai wo . Bahut jyada khoon nikal jane se wo behosh ho gya tha aur rat se hospital me hi admit hai.

Sheena : ghabrate hue ) what ??? Kaun se hospital me hai wo ? Mujhe abhi batao , please bhagwan k liye mujhe batao main use dekhna chahti hun. Meri jan bacha kar usne mujh par ehsan kiya hai main to uska shukriya tak na kar payi.

Neeraj : dekho Sheena abhi usse milna theek nahi hoga . Sab gusse me honge to tum wahan mat jana. Mujhe lag raha hai k tum me changes aa gye hain shayad par fir bhi abhi Amit k pas jana theek nahi rahega . Wo jaise hi theek ho kar college aayega tab us se mil lena.

Sheena : please itna to bata do k wo kaun se hospital me hai?

Neeraj : wo xxxx hospital me hai magar main fir kehta hun tum wahan mat jana . Jo bhi hai uski is halat k zimmedar tum aur monty hi ho.

Sheena : I will take care of this . And thanks to you . Tumne kal bhi meri madad ki thi aur aaj bhi .

Itna keh kar Sheena ne phone kat diya . Magar use ab amit ko lekar man me alag alag vichar aa rahe the. Kahan kal tak wo amit ko apna dushman manti thi aur aaj wo uski fikar kar rahi thi. Sheena ka fir se phone bajne laga usne dekha k Manju ka hi phone hai to usne jaldi se phone uthaya .

Manju : kuch pata chala? Kahan hai dono?

Sheena : bua kal amit ko kuch choten lag gyi thi . Is liye wo hospital me admit hai.

Manju : kya ????? Hospital me hai ? Hey bhagwan kya kiya tum dono ne uske sath ? Kaun se hospital me hai wo jaldi batao.

Sheena : xxxx hospital me . Bua please mujhe maf kar dena agar kal wo na hota to pata nahi mera kya hota . Main usse nafrat karti thi aur kal usi ne meri jan meri ijjat bachai. Main bahut buri hun bua. Main aap jaisi nahi ban payi . Main bahut buri hun . Please mujhe maf kar dijiye .

Sheena lagbhag rone hi lagi thi Manju se bat karte karte magar Manju ne to hospital k nam k aage kuch suna hi nahi aur phone kat diya. Sheena ko pata nahi chala k phone kat gya hai aur wo rote rote apne jazbat zahir karne lagi. Manju Sheena aur baki bacchon se bahut pyar karti thi shadi se pehle tak wo Sab bachin k sath laad ladati thi khud ko normal rakhne k liye apne dusre bhai Bhabi aur bhatije ki maut k bad. Manju Sheena ko apne jaisa banana chahti thi magar samay ka chakkar aisa chala k Manju shadi kar k ghar se kya gyi kabhi wapis hi na lauti . Ab wo na sasuraal me rehti thi na mayke me. Sheena par bhi dheere dheere mahol ka asar ho gya aur wo paise ki jhoothi shan me ghamandi ban gyi. Magar kahin na kahin achai aaj bhi uske andar zinda thi . Isi liye to usne plan me khud involve hona swikar kiya tha taki Radha ki izzat par dag na lage .

Udhar police ki team amit k gaon k address par chhapemari k liye nikal chuki thi k raste me hi unhe wapis lautna pada upar se phone aane ki vajah se . SP Ritu Singh jo khu ek sakh aur imandar officer thi wo aise apradhiyon se sakht nafrat karti thi jo aurton k sath darindagi karte hain. Unki imaandari ki vajah se jile ke imandar IAS commissioner ne use khas recommendation par yahan transfer karwaya tha. Jaise hi SP Ritu Singh ko pata chala k MLA ne phone kar k ye mission rukwa diya hai aur file band karne ko kaha hai to wo andar hi andar gusse se ubal rahi thi. Uski nazar me Amit nam ka ye ladka apradhi tha aur personally bhi use aisa hi lag raha tha k ye ladka hawasi aur ghatiya hai. Filhal kanoon me bandhi hone ki vajah se usne khud ko rok liya magar amit ko lekar uske dil me nafrat bhar gyi thi.

Kalpana jab Radha ko lekar ghar pahunchi to divya jo Radha ka phone na lagne k karan pareshan thi wo Radha ki halat aur uske kapde dekh kar shocked ho gyi . Use kisi anhoni ka dar lagne laga aur usne bhag kar Radha ko gale laga liya dono ma beti ki ankhon se aansoo behne lage

Divya : rote hue ) ye kya halat bana rakhi hai tune meri bachi ? Tum kahan thi ? Kya hua hai tumhare sath ? Bol meri bachi ye sab kya hai?

Radha : rote hue ) main theek hun ma agar Amit na hota to main aaj aapke samne nahi hoti .

Divya : Amit !! Kya hua hai ? Mujhse sab sach sach bata ? Kisne kiya ye ? Tum to tour par gyi thi na ? To ye sab kaise hua?

Radha : rote hue ) kal rat udhar kamp me se kuch gundon ne mera kidnap kar liya tha ma. Wo sab mere sath ....( Radha cries )

Divya : mat ro meri bachi mat ro

Radha : wo mere sath darindagi karne wale the. Amit pata nahi kaise par wahan aa gya aur apni jan par khel kar mujhe bachaya.

Divya : lakh lakh shukar hai bhagwan ka , par Amit kahan hai ? Use kuch hua to nahi ?

Radha : wo hospital me hai ma, use bahut chot lagi hai. Main rat bhar hospital me usi k pas thi abhi Kalpana mujhe yahan lekar aayi hai.

Divya : rote hue ) kyaa ??? Wo hospital me hai ?? Wo theek to hai na ? Hey bhagwan mera bacha theek to hai na? Use kuch nahi hona chahiye main kya jawab dungi damini ko ? Mujhe uske pas le chalo main use dekhna chahti hun . Kahan hai mera beta ?

Divya jazbat me beh kar ab Amit ko ek ma ki tarah beta keh kar bula rahi thi jise sun kar Radha ko bahut acha lag raha tha. Magar divya bechari to pagla gyi thi Amit ki halat ka sun kar . Uske andar k jazbat us par hawi ho gye the aur badhawas ho kar amit ko dekhne ko tarasne lagi .

Kalpana : Aunty please khud ko sambhaliye , wo bilkul theek hai. Hum abhi usi k pas se to aa rahe hain. Wo bilkul theek hai bas kuch choten lagi hain iske ilawa koi ghabrane wali bat nahi hai. Aap khud ko sambhaliye . Wo to keh raha tha k aapko is bare me na bataya jaye . Aur shayad wo sahi keh raha tha .

Divya : main jab tak use dekh nahi leti mujhe chain nahi aayega . Mujhe uske pas le chalo.

Radha : ma hum abhi chalte hain magar aap khud ko sambhalo pehle. Aur amit ne khas taur par kaha hai ye bat kisi ko pata nahi chalni chahiye. Main aap se kuch nahi chhipati par please aap kisi ko mat batana .

Kalpana : Radha theek keh rahi hai Aunty . Abhi aap pehle Radha ko aur khud ko sambhaliye . Isne bhi aram nahi kiya hoga. Amit to wahan aram se hai , aap chinta mat karo main aapko lekar jaungi hospital par pehle zara radha ko sambhaliye .



Hospital me Aunty k phone k kuch der bad Mohit aur uncle dono aa gye .

Uncle : ab tabiyat kaisi hai Amit ?

Amit : ab theek hun uncle .

Uncle : tum kisi bat ki chinta mat karo maine apne wakeel se bat kar li hai kuch nahi hone dunga main tumhe. Aur abhi main college ja raha hun principal se milne . Ye kya bat hui kare koi bhare koi ?

Amit : nahi uncle isme unki kya galti hai . Wo to bahut ache hain .

Uncle : par pata to chale ye sab ho kya raha hai?

Mohit : bilkul , papa aap jao aur unse bat karo . Waise bhi kamp se Radha ka kidnap hua hai ye koi chhoti bat to nahi

Uncle : bilkul theek kaha tumne . Andar to ab un logon ko main karwaunga jinhonne Radha ko uthane ki koshish ki

Amit : nahi uncle rehne dijiye , police isme kuch nahi kar payegi . Ab ye mamala main khud hi dekhunga

Aunty : bilkul nahi , main tumhe kuch nahi karne dungi .

Amit : acha acha main kuch nahi karta par aap bhi koi police complaint nahi karwayenge .

Uncle : par beta

Amit : nahi uncle , aap is bat ko yahin rehne do filhal bad me dekhenge.

Uncle : theek hai par main ek bar principal se bat zarur karunga aur Rama tum bhi mere sath chalo wapsi par divya behan se bhi mil lenge . Wo bhi pareshan hongi .

Aunty : theek hai , Mohit tum Amit k pas hi rehna .

Uncle Aunty ko lekar chale gye . Piche reh gye main aur Mohit .

Amit : kyun be tu college nahi gya aaj ? Kalpana aayi thi abhi usi se pata chala k police mujhe dhoond rahi hai

Mohit : ab aisi shakal le kar college jata kya ? Abhi bhi muh par sujan hai baki sab to kapdon me chhup jata hai, chehre ka kya karen? Waise bhi tum yahan ho minal hospital me apni ma k pas hai to main akela kya karta college me?

Amit : ab kaisi hai uski mom ki tabiyat ?

Mohit : ab theek hain bas plaster laga hai shayad aaj chhutti bhi mil jaye unhe. Meri bat hui thi usse , wo bhi bahut gusse me hain Radha k bare me jan kar. Is monty ka to ilaj karna padega . Aur wo Sheena , sala agar uske sath rape ho jata tab pata chalta use .

Amit : aisa mat kaho , ladki chahe dushman ki bhi kyun na ho izzat sabki ek jaisi hoti hai.

Hum baten kar rahe the tabhi room ka darwaza khula aur samne Manju m khade the ankhon me aansoo liye .

Amit : mam aap yahan ?

Meri bat sun kar Mohit ne bhi yadgar dekha to samne Manju m ko dekh kar uth kar khada ho gya

Mohit : mam aap ?

Manju m tez kadmo se chal kar mere pas aayi aur rote hue mere upar gir gyi

Manju m : rote hue ) ye Kya ho gya ? Pata hai kitna dar gyi thi main ? Ek phone to kar dete kam se kam. Main to tumhare piche udhar bhi ja rahi thi magar fir pata chala tum rat me hi wahan se nikal gye the aur jab Radha ki kidnapping ka pata chala to mera dil ghabrane lga k kahin main tumhe bhi Kho na dun. Mera kya hota ? Main fir se akeli ho jati

Amit : are are khud ko sambhaliye, sab theek hai . Mujhe kuch nahi hua hai. Main phone kaise karta mera to phone hi kharab ho gya tha aur rat me to mujhe apni hi hosh nahi thi.

Mohit hairan hota sab tamasha dekh raha tha. Use to samajh hi nahi aa raha tha k ye chakkar kya hai. Meri nazar Mohit par padi to Maine jaldi se bat badalne ki koshish ki kahin mam koi aisi bat na keh den k Mohit ko kuch pata chal jaye.

Amit : are mam ab uthiye dekhiye Mohit bhi to yahin hai. Ye bhi tha mere sath . Iski aur Neeraj bhaiya ki madad k bina main Radha ko nahi bacha sakta tha.

Meri muh se Mohit ka nam sunte hi Manju m ne khud ko sambhala aur sidhi ho kar apne chehra ponchte hue Mohit ki taraf dekha .

Manju m : thank you Mohit , tum sach me ek ache dost ho ye tumne sabit kar diya .

Mohit : ye to mera farz tha Radha meri bhi to behan hui na ? Apni behan ki hi to jan bachai maine. Waise bhi amit bhi to yahi karta . Par aap yahan ? Aapko kaise pata chala aur aap to hamari teacher hain fir ....

Manju m : wo . Wo Amit mera sirf student hi nahi hai ye mere liye ek family mamber hai. Mera aur to koi hai nahi to Amit hi mere liye sab kuch hai.

Amit : mam ne mujhe apna bhai banaya hai .

Mohit : oh acha , aap baithiye mam main aapke liye kuchh khane ko lata hun. Mohit jaise hi room se nikla to Manju m ne uth kar room loch kar diya. Main Manju m ko sawaliya nazron se dekhne laga . Isse pehle k main kuch kehta mam mere upar jhuk gayi aur mujhe apni bahin me kas liya . Wo diwanawar mere chehre mere gale par har jagah kiss karne lagi

Manju m : main rat bhar so nahi payi kahin tumhe kuch ho jata to main bhi zinda nahi rehti. Pehle hi itni mushkil se khud ko sambhala tha magar ab aur sadma main seh nahi sakti please kabhi mujhe chhod kar mat jana .

Amit : khud ko sambhaliye mam abhi koi bhi yahan aa sakta hai please. Main aapko chhod kar kahin nahi jane wala maine aapse wada kiya tha na. Khud ko sambhaliye agar Mohit ne dekh liya to kya hoga.

Manju m : kya karun khud par kabu nahi ho raha . Main hi janti hun mujh par kya beet rahi thi. Kahan kahan chot lagi hai tumhe dikhai mujhe ?

Amit : chot jyada gehri nahi hai bas khoon jyada nikal gya tha to yahan pada hun. Aaj ya kal main yahan se chhutti le lunga.

Manju m : koi zarurat nahi hai. Jab tak poori tarah theek nahi ho jate tum yahin rahoge ya fir mere sath ghar chalo . Main college se chhutti le kar tumhari sewa karungi.

Amit : sewa to abhi bhi aap kar sakti hain

Manju m : main samjhi nahi ?

Amit : main samjhata hun.

Itna keh kar maine mam k surkh gulabi honthon par apne honth rakh liye aur unhe kiss karne laga. Mam bhi mera sath dene lagi par jald hi Maine kiss khatam kar di kyunki Mohit kabhi bhi wapis aa sakta tha.

Amit : ab aap side me baith jaiye Mohit ata hi hoga.

Uske bad Mohit canteen se khane pine ko le aya . Kafi der tak Manju m hamare sath rahi . Unki halat dekh kar hi main samajh raha tha k unhe bhi rest ki zarurat hai to maine unhe wapis bhej diya aram karne ka keh kar halanki wo jana nahi chahti thi par mere force karne par wo chali gyi.



Monty sheena k muh se sachai sun kar ab Ranjit aur uske sathiyon par aag babula tha to wo apne kuch aadmiyon ko lekar apne us farmhouse par gya jahan usne Ranjit aur uske sathiyon ko chhipa kar rakha tha aur unka ilaj karwa raha tha. Monty ne sabki ache se khabar li aur mar mar kar sabke hath paon tod diye . Monty ne kabhi kisi ki jan nahi li thi aur na hi wo is had tak galat tha. Is liye usne sirf un logon k hath paon tudawaye aur unhe bahar fenkwa diya. Police k pas wo mamala lekar nahi jana chahta tha kyunki isme wo khud bhi fass sakta tha. Sheena k kehne par use Amit k khilaf police action rukawana pada no wo nahi chahta tha. Lekin ab uske dimag pehle se bhi jyada gussa bhar gya tha . Wo ise apni shikast man raha tha. Sheena k sath kya hua use isse jyada is bat ki parwah thi k Amit ek bar fir uske war se bach gya . Aur Sheena ko bachane se ab wo us par ehsan jatayega . Monty ab ye hi soch raha tha k ab aage kya kiya jaye. Kyunki ab mamala ulajh gya tha . Chahe monty kisi bhi tarah picture me nahi tha par fir bhi use dar tha k kahin kisi trah wo is chakkar me na fase.



Idhar hospital me Mohit aur main Manju m k jane k bad akele the. Main baitha baitha thak gya tha to fir se pet k bal let gya. Main ankhen band kiye leta tha k darwaza khula aur mujhe laga koi kamre me aya hai magar koi awaz nahi sunai di kisi ki. Mujhe ehsas hua k koi meri lower back par jo patti badndhi hai use koi check kar raha hai. Fir wo hath mere sar par aa gya . Aur mere dil ko ek alag sukoon sa milne laga . Mujhe aisa laga jaise meri ma pyar se mujhe sehla rahi hai . Main ankhen band kiye is ehsas ko feel kar raha tha. Tabhi mere gaal par pani ki boonden giri to main samajh gya k ye pani nahi aansoo hain. Maine aankhen khol kar palatne ki koshish ki to mujhe divya mausi ki awaz sunai di

Divya mausi : leta reh chupchap, kitni chot lagi hai tujhe. Tune ek bar bhi socha k tujhe kuch ho jata to kya hota? Bhaiya Bhabi aur baki sab ka kya hota ? Kya jawab deti main teri ma ko?

Divya mausi ka gala bat karte hue rundhne laga. Main hairan ho raha tha jo hamesha mujh par gussa karti hain wo andar se meri kitni parwah karti hain mujhe ehsas ho raha tha. Unke ehsas se mujhe apni ma ka ehsas ho raha tha . Sach kehte hain sab dono ek jaisi hi hain. Mujhe apni ma to yad nahi thi par unka ehsas jo mere zehan me kahin chhipa hua tha aaj Maine use feel kiya tha. Wo ehsas so mujhe unki god me mere bachapan me mujhe mila tha aaj maine use feel kiya tha.

Amit : agar Radha ko kuch ho jata to kya hota mausi ? Kya tab main khud ko maf kar pata ? Kya tab aap mujhe maf kar pati ? Kya tab meri ma mujhe maf kar pati?

Divya mausi : tu sachmuch kitna acha hai aur main tujh par hamesh gussa karti rahi. Main kitni buri hun

Amit : kaun kehta hai aap buri hain? Aap to sab se achi hain . Janti ho mausi abhi abhi apne mujhe chhua to ek pal ko mujhe laga jaise ma mujhe pyar kar rahi hai. Kya aap fir se mujhe ma ka ehsas dilayengi? Mujhe to wo yad bhi nahi hain par aaj unka ehsas hua mujhe .

Divya mausi : rote hue ) main bhi teri ma hi to hun mere bete . Tu damini ka nahi mera bhi beta hai . Main galat thi jo tujhe itne sal khud se door rakha . Tumhe ma ki zarurat thi aur main tujhe wo pyar nahi de payi jo tumhe milna chahiye tha.

Divya mausi ne rote hue mujhe choom liya aur meri pith par sar rakh kar aansoo bahane lagi. Tabhi Aunty ne unke aansoo ponche aur unhe chup karwaya

Aunty : ro mat divya khud ko sambhalo . Dekho wo bilkul theek hai . Tum ab bhi to use wo pyar de sakti ho na ho use milna chahiye .

Divya mausi : main tumhe bahut pyar dungi mere bete . Main tujhe bahut pyar karti hun. Damini hi nahi main bhi teri ma hun . Tu mera beta hai mera .

Divya mausi k aansoo ruk nahi rahe the aur meri ankhon me bhi aansoo aa gye the. Maine uthne ki koshish ki to mausi ne sahara dekar mujhe bithaya aur mujhe gale laga kar rone lagi. Maine unko chup karwane ki koshish ki . Meri nazar kamare me maujood Mohit , Aunty , uncle aur Radha par padi to sab hamari taraf hi dekh rahe the. Radha ki ankhe bhi bheegi hui thi aur chehre par kbushi bhi jhalak rahi thi .

Amit : bas kijiye mausi ji khud ko sambhaliye main bilkul theek hun kuch nahi hua mujhe.

Divya mausi : mat rok mujhe kab se ye aansoo Maine behne nahi diye the aaj inhe behne de.

Amit : aap aise royengi to kya mujhe acha lagega ?

Aunty : Amit theek keh rha hai divya khud ko sambhalo . Radha divya ko sambhalo zara beti .

Radha aunty ki bat sun kar divya mausi k gale lag kar unhe chup karwane lagi. Aur kuch hi pal me divya mausi k aansoo tham gye . Khud ko theek karne k bad divya mausi se mere pas hi baith gyi . Wo ghar se khana bana kar layi thi aur apne hathon se mujhe khana khilane lagi . Khana khate khate Kalpana Neha didi ko lekar aa gyi. Shayad wo unhe college se ghar le jate waqt idhar hi le ayi thi

Neha didi mujhe is halat me dekh kar ek pal ko wahin jam gyi aur mere sar pal lagi pattiyon ko dekhne lagi . Unke chehre par chinta k bhaw aa gye aur ankhen bhi jaise nam hone wali thi .

Neha didi : nam ankhen ) itna kuch ho gya aur mujhe kisi ne bataya tak nahi ? Ye teri kya halat ho gyi hai meri bhai ?

Neha didi ne akar mujhe gale laga liya .

Amit : acha bhala to hun didi , bas sar par Dr ne badi badi pattiyan laga di hain . Main kaise batata mera to phone bhi toot gya hai. Aap ghabrao mat main bilkul theek hun.

Neha didi : bat mat badal , Kalpana ne sab bata diya hai mujhe.

Maine Kalpana ki taraf dekha to wo samajh gyi main kya kehna chahta hun

Kalpana : aise kya dekh rahe ho ? Ab didi ko na batati to bad me ye mujhse hi naraz hoti tumhe to kuch nahin kehna tha inhone. Aur didi please aap ghar par kisi ko mat batana Amit ne mana kiya tha isi liye kisi ko batane ko.

Neha didi : jyada smart mat bano mausi ko bhi to pata chal hi gya na? Aur mujhe nahi lagta k mausi ne kuch kaha hoga. Balki koi bhi kuch nahi kahega. Sab proud hi karenge tumne jo kuch kiya Radha k liye . Kitna acha hai mera bhai , aisa bhai sabko mile .

Kalpana : ye lo apna phone , main le gyi thi theek karwane .

Kalpana ne mujhe phone diya to maine dekha ye mere mobile jaisa hi tha par bilkul naya lag raha tha .

Amit : ye to naya lag raha hai , tum naya phone le kar aayi ho ?

Kalpana : wo repair nahi ho sakta tha to uske jaisa hi le aayi aur isme sara data transfer karwa diya hai maine .

Amit : par tumhe kya zarurat thi ?

Kalpana : mujhe nahi tumhe zarurat thi. Jyada der phone band rehne se ghar wale pareshan nahi honge kya ?


Kalpana ki bat bilkul sahi thi . Ab tak to shayad koi na koi phone kar bhi chuka hoga . Maine chup chap phone rakh liya Kalpana ko shukriya kaha . Kuch der tak neha didi bhi wahin rahi aur fir Kalpana unhe ghar le jane lagi. Maine Radha ko bhi ghar ja kar aram karne ko kaha halanki wo mere pas rehna chahti thi. Ab Radha ko akela ghar to nahi chhoda ja sakta tha to Maine divya mausi ko bhi jane ko kaha Radha k liye. Divya mausi jana to nahi chahti thi par Radha ki khatir unhe jana pada . Uske bad maine ghar par khud hi phone kar k sab se bat ki . Sham ko Neeraj bhi milne aya Manju m ko Maine phone kar k aane se mana kar diya kyunki kisi ko shak ho sakta tha . Is beech Dr rina fir se aayi aur kuch der mere pas baith kar baten karti rahi. Maine unse chhutti ka pucha tu unhone mujhe ek din aur rukne ka kaha. Aunty mere sath hospital me rukna chahti thi par maine mana kar diya . Rat ka khana bhi divya mausi le kar aayi aur Radha bhi unke sath thi. Apne hathon se mujhe unhone khana khilaya . Divya mausi aur Radha k jane k bad Aunty ko bhi Mohit ghar chhodne chala gya. Rat ko ab hospital me akela tha . Abhi rat k 10 baj rahe the to mere kamre ka darwaza khula aur samne jo khada tha use dekh kar ek pal ko main hairan hua aur agle hi pal mujhe gussa bhi aa gya

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Manju bua se bat karne k bad sheena khud ko kaus rahi thi k wo jiske sath itna galat karne ja rahi thi usi ne uski izzat bachai . Sheena kabhi bhi dil se buri nahi thi aur na hi character se kharab thi . Wo chahe upar se kaisi bhi dikhe par andar se wo bahut achi bhi thi . Uske bachpan me use apne bua se bahut sara pyar aur sanskar mile the par waqt aur halat aise bante gye k wo ek to apni bua se door ho gyi dusra uske upar apne bhai aur ma bap ko dekh kar paise ka ghamand aa gya. Bua se to uske ma bap ne rishta na rakha tha to wo bechari kya karti aur fir Manju bua uski zindagi se hi door chali gyi thi. Itne salon bad college me unhe teacher k roop me dekh kar ek pal to uske andar unke liye pyar jaga par pehle apne ma bap aur fir monty ki vajah se wo Manju bua se door hi rahi. Magar aaj Manju bua se bat karte hue wo khud ko rok nahi payi. Khud ko majbut dikhane wali Sheena andar se kitni komal hai aaj koi dekhta to use pata chalta . Sheena k andar jo guilty ki bhawna aa rahi thi wo uski ankhon se aansoo ban kar bahar nikal rahi thi. Aaj use ek sahare ki zarurat thi magar aisa koi nahi tha. Ab to rima bhi usse kabhi kabhar bat karti thi jabki uski apni ma to jaise kisi aur hi dunia me rehti thi . Sheena ki apni saheliyan bhi sab high society ki ladkiyan thi jinme use kabhi bhi aisi bat nazar nahi ayi thi k wo kisi se dil ki bat kare. Aaj Sheena khud ko akela mehsus kar rahi thi. Wo Amit se mil kar mafi mangna chahti thi par Neeraj ne jaisa kaha wahan jana sahi nahi tha kyunki har koi gusse me hoga jo bhi janta hoga . Aise me jab shivani ka phone aya to usne use ghar par hi bula liya.

Shivani jo ki Sheena k bina bataye gayab ho jane se hairan thi Amit ka gayab hona bhi uske liye shocking tha. Aise me sheena se bat hote hi wo usse milne uske ghar aa gyi . Shivani jab Sheena k kamre me gyi to dekha ki Sheena ki ankhon me aansoo hain. Aisa wo pehli bar dekh rahi thi. Har waqt dusaron par roab jhadne wali Sheena , dusaron ko paon k neeche rakhne wali Sheena aaj ro rahi thi. Shivani to shocked hi ho gyi par jaisi bhi thi wo Shivani ki bachpan ki dost thi is liye usko bhi acha nahi lag raha tha.

Shivani : Sheena !! Tujhe hua kya hai ? Tu ro kyun rahi hai ? Tu kahan thi kal se ? Kya hua tere sath jo teri ankhon me aansoo hain aaj ?

Sheena jo andar se bhari hui thi apne bachpan ki dost ko gale lagate hi foot foot kar rone lagi.

Sheena : main bahut buri hun , bahut buri hun main. Mujhse bahut badi galati ho gyi Shivani .

Sheena : hua kya hai yar kuch batayegi bhi ? Pehle ye rona band kar aur bat kya hai ye bata ?

Sheena : tu nahi janti Shivani main kitni badi galati karne ja rahi thi aur jiske sath main galat karne wali thi usi ne mujhe bachaya

Shivani : bat kya hai ? Kaun si galati aur kisne bachaya tujhe ? Sahi sahi bata.

Sheena : tu to janti hai na main aur monty Amit se badla lena chahte the . Kal main udhar hi gyi thi.

Amit ka nam sunte hi Shivani achanak ghabra gyi

Shivani : kya kiya tum dono ne ? Kahan hai wo ?

Sheena : sab meri galati hai mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha. Monty ne kaha tha k Radha ko camp se kidnap kar k Amit ko wahan bulayenge aur use sabak sikhayenge. Fir use hun college se nikalawa dete. Par janti hai kya hua? Monty ne Jin logon ko bheja tha wo meri aur Radha ki izzat lutne wale the. Par pata nahi kaise Amit wahan pahunch gya aur hum dono ko bacha liya . Ladai me use bahut chot lag gyi aur is waqt wo hospital me pada hai.

Shivani : kyaaa ????? Itna kuch kar diya tumne? Tu kaisi ladki hai ? Aisa kaise kar sakti hai tu? Main janti hun tu gusse wali hai par tujhe ek bar bhi nahi laga k monty Radha ko kyun kidnap kar raha hai? Amit sahi tha , monty Radha ki izzat lutne ki Firak me hai.

Sheena : gusse se ) Shivani !!! Ye tu kya keh rahi hai ? Monty aisa kabhi nahi kar sakta

Shivani : main janti hun tu nahi manegi par yahi sach hai . Amit ne mujhe bataya tha k monty aisa hi kuch karne wala hai isi liye main itne dino se tumhare sath hi thi k mujhe koi bat pata chal sake par afsos main fail ho gyi.

Sheena : to tum meri jasoosi kar rahi thi . Tum to meri best friend ho na ? Fir mere hi khilaf tum uska sath de rahi thi ?

Shivani : main sirf sahi ka sath de rahi thi. Kya nahi kiya tumne aur monty ne uske sath aur main bhi to shamil thi tumhare sath magar fir bhi usne mujhe apna dost banaya aur mujhe maaf kiya. Khud apni taraf dekh usne tujhe bhi to bachaya na ? Aisa hi hai wo, aur tum dono usse badla lena chahte ho . Kis bat ka badla ? Usne apni cousin ko monty se bachaya is bat ka badla ? Ya fir wo tumhari tarah Amir nahi hai is bat ka badla ? Wo paise se ameer na ho chahe par dil ka itna ameer hai k hum sab uske samne bone hain. Ab bhi agar thodi si bhi sharam baki hai to usse mafi manglo jakar wo bade dil wala hai, maaf kar dega. Mujhe to sharam aa rahi hai k tum bhi monty jaisi ban gyi .

Sheena : mujhse galti hui hai par mujhe aise to zaleel na karo. Main bas usse badla lena chahti thi . Main Radha k sath kuch galat nahi hone deti kabhi aur monty bhi aisa nahi hai

Shivani : aisa hi hai monty par tum kya jano . Tumhari nazar me to wo bahut acha hai na. Janti ho kya hai monty ? Ladkiyon ki zindagi se khelna Shonk hai tumhare bhai ka . Na jane kitni ladkiyon ki zindagi barbad kar chuka hai wo ab tak. Bholi bhali ladkiyon ko apne chakkar me dal kar unka istemal karta hai wo. Khud mere sath bhi wo aisa kar chuka hai

Shivani k is khulase se Sheena andar tak hil gyi. Use yakeen nahi ho raha tha k uska bhai itna kameena hai.

Shivani : aur tumhe kya laga k Radha ko kis liye kidnap kar raha hai wo? Uska asli maksad Radha ki izzat lutna hi tha . Tum to bas uska kam asan kar rahi thi. Shukar hai k Radha ko kuch nahi hua warna amit ab tak monty ko jaan se maar chuka hota . Mujhe sharam aa rahi hai k meri dost bhi apne bhai jaisi nikali . Chalti hun main tumhe apni raeesi mubarak.

Sheena jab apni baton se Sheena k muh par tamache mar kar jane lagi to Sheena Shivani k paon me gir gyi.

Sheena : mujhse bahut badi galti ho gyi Shivani . Please mujhe maaf kardo. Main Amit se bhi maafi mangungi . Wo to tumhara dost hai na use keh do k mujhe maaf kar de. Tum to janti ho na mujhe ? Main aise nahi hun. Main radha k sath kuch galat karne ka soch bhi nahi sakti . Mujhe nahi pata tha monty aisa hai. Aur tumne bhi to kabhi nahi bataya mujhe . Please mujhe maaf kar do . Tu hi to meri sachai dost hai. Kya tu meri madad nahi karegi? Main sach me sharminda hun aur usse mafi mangna chahti hun. Tum nahi janti Shivani Amit na ata to wo sab mil kar mere sath pata nahi kya kya karte . Please mujhe maf kar do.

Sheena k aansoo dekh kar Shivani ka man bhi pighal gya aur usne Sheena ko utha kar apne gale se laga liya.

Shivani : mat ro Sheena mat ro. Main janti hun tu galat nahi thi kabhi bhi bas tu thoda ghamandi ho gyi thi aur lagta hai aaj tera ghamand toot gya hai . Amit bahut acha hai wo zarur tumhe maf kar dega . Mujhse wada kar aaj k bad tu kabhi uske khilaf monty ka sath nahi degi

Sheena : main to uske khilaf kuch soch bhi nahi sakti Shivani . Aur monty ko bhi main aisa nahi karne dungi.

Shivani : ab tu khud ko sambhal. Mujhe Amit ko dekhne jana hai. Pata nahi kis halat me hoga wo ? Ek bar main us se mil kar ati hun .

Sheena : main bhi usse mil kar mafi mangana chahti hun . Please mujhe sath le kar chalo.

Shivani : dekho Sheena abhi pata nahi wahan par kaise mahaul hoga ? Jaise hi wo theek hoga to tum mil lena .

Sheena : mujhe chain nahi aayega Shivani . Mujhe khud par gussa aa raha hai k main gusse me kitna galat karne wali thi uske sath fir bhi usne mujhe bataya . Uski wo nafrat bhari nazren mujhe abhi bhi yad hain jab usne mujhe dekha tha wahan. Mujhe ye andar hi andar khaye ja raha hai.

Shivani Sheena ki halat samajh rahi thi is liye wo Sheena k pas hi ruk gyi . Dono saheliyan jab amit se milne gyi to hospital me sab maujood the Amit k pas is liye wo bahar se hi wapis aa gyi. Shivani to mil bhi sakti thi magar Sheena k liye wo bhi ruk gyi . Aur rat ko jab dono dubara milne ayi to tab bhi sab amit k pas maujood the magar ab Sheena Amit se mile bina wapis nahi jana chahti thi is liye dono bahar apni car me baith kar intzar karti rahi. Jaise hi Mohit apni mom ko lekar nikla to dono jaldi se Amit se milne uske kamre me gyi.



Jaise hi darwaza khula same Shivani ko dekh kar main chonka aur uske piche Sheena ko dekh kar mujhe gussa aa gya .

Amit : gusse me ) ab kya lene aayi hi yahan ? Chali jao yahan se

Sheena : rote hue ) I am sorry , I am sorry , mujhe maf karo mujhse galati ho gyi . Please mujhe maaf kar do.

Amit : band karo ye magarmacch k aansoo . Tum jaise paise walon k liye izzat chhoti cheez hogi lekin hamari nazron me ye Anmol hai. Socha bhi hai agar main waqt par na pahunch pata to kya hota ? Radha apni jan de deti tumhe to koi farak nahi padne wala tha . Jaisa tumhara bhai ghatiya hai waise hi tum bhi hoz jane kitne ladkiyon ko barbad kiya hai usne. Ab aur nahi , use keh dena k usne Radha par hath daal kar aakhiri galati kar di hai ab use main nahi chhodne wala . Aur tum bhi dafa ho jao yahan se .

Sheena : please meri ek bar bat to sun lo

Amit : maine kaha na dafa ho jao yahan se, tum jaise ghatiya logon ki main shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahta . Shukar karo k tum ek ladki ho warna Radha k sath jo tumne kiya uske bad main tumhare sath bhi wahi karta jo baki sak k sath kiya tha.

Shivani : please Amit ek bar uski bat to sun lo wo tumse mafi mangne aayi hai

Amit : mujhe kuch nahi sunna , agar tum iski tarafadari karne aayi ho to tum bhi ja sakti ho. In dono ne uske sath galat karna chaha jiski aankh me main ek aansoo bhi nahi dekh sakta .

Sheena mera ye roop dekh kar roti hui kamre se bahar chali gyi . Shivani bhi uske piche jati jati ruk gyi aur mere pas aayi

Shivani : main janti hun tum naraz ho mujhse bhi par wo sach me sharminda hai , isi liye main use yahan lekar aayi thi . In fact hum dono pehle bhi aayi thi magar sab yahaan baithe the to wapis chale gye. Sheena dil ki buri nahi hai . Main use bachpan se janti hun. Wo monty k irade nahi janti thi . Ho sake to use maaf kar dena aur mujhe bhi .

Itna keh kar Shivani jane lagi to mujhe ehsas hua k main gusse me Shivani se bhi galat bol gya tha . Maine shivani ko rokne ki koshish ki

Amit : I am sorry shivani main gusse me tumhe...

Shivani : I know Amit tum gusse me the par please thande dimag se ek bar sochna use maaf kar doge to wo bhi acha banne ki koshish karegi waran wo aisi hi reh jayegi. Aur apna khyal rakhna main chalti hun.

Amit : kya itna naraz ho gyi ho k aise hi chali jaogi ?

Shivani ki ankhon me bhi halki nami aa gyi thi meri vajah se . Mere itna kehte hi Shivani daud kar mere gale lag gyi . Aur mujhe kiss karne lagi .

Shivani : tumhe is halat me dekh kar mujhe kaisa lag raha hai ye sirf main hi janti hun. Itne dino bad mil rahe hain wo bhi aise. Mujhe maaf kar dena k main apna kam poora nahi kar payi .

Amit : isme tumhari koi galati nahi hai Shivani . Kal shayad mujhe chhutti mil jaye aur fir mujhe gaon jana hai to ab wapis aa kar milunga. Aur please meri bat ka bura mat manna.

Shivani : tumhari kisi bat ka main bura man hi nahi sakti. Han mujhe Sheena k liye bura lag raha hai . Wo sach me tumse mafi mangne hi aayi thi.

Amit : jab tak main monty ko uske kiye ki saza nahi de deta tab tak main kisi ko maaf nahi karne wala. Par main Sheena ko kuch nahi karunga. Use uski galati ka ehsas hai itna hi bahut hai.

Shivani : acha ab main chalti hun tum apna khyal rakhna .

Shivani ne ek bar fir se mujhe kiss kiya aur bahar nikal gyi. Shivani k jane k bad main sheena k bare me sochne laga . Dil keh rah tha k Sheena wakai me maafi mangne aayi thi magar dimag me abhi bhi ye bat thi k kahin ye koi chal na ho. Kahin humse bachne k liye monty ne Sheena ko aage na kiya ho ? Par jo kuch kal hua tha uske bad mujhe Sheena me badlav swabhaawik laga.



Dusari taraf Sheena rote hue bhag kar bahar aa gyi thi aur lagatar rote hue paidal hi chali ja rahi thi. Car ki chabi Shivani k pas thi aur wo wahan rukne ki halat me nahi thi . Sheena k kano me Amit k kadve bol abhi bhi goonj rahe the. Magar reh reh kar use Shivani ki baten bhi yad aa rahi thi. Akhir Amit kahan galat tha ? Shuru se lekar ab tak monty aur wo khud amit ko sabak sikhane me lage the. Aaj tak usne kisi ko kuch samjha hi kahan tha . Har jagah uske baap ka nam aur paisa itna hawi tha k koi kabhi inke samne tikta hi nahi tha. Pehli bar koi samne khada hua tha jisne dono ko hila kar rakh diya tha. Sheena khud to jaise uske ehsan k neeche itna dab gyi thi k Amit k itna bura kehna par bhi wo muh se ek shabd nahi keh payi uske khilaf . Yahan tak k uske dil me bhi amit k khilaf koi bat nahi aa rahi thi. Uske liye to Amit jaise masiha ban gya tha jisne us waqt uski madad ki jab kahin se bhi madad ki koi gunjaish nahi thi . Sheena ki ankhon k aage wo har bat ghum rahi thi jo wo paise k ghamand me aaj tak Dusron k sath karti aayi thi. Kaash k apni zindagi se wo apni sari galtiyon ko delete kar sakti . Ek hi ghatna ne sab kuch badal k rakh diya tha uski zindagi me. Uska paisa takat kuch kam nahi aya tha jab use bed par ghaseet kar nangi kar diya gya tha . Wo manzar yad kar k uski rooh andar se kaamp jati aur agle hi pal use Amit nazar ata. Sheena jo bahut hi jyada khubsurat thi aur har koi use pane ki sochta tha par andar se wo aisi nahi thi . Bahar se fashionable rehne wali ladko ko jute ki nok par samajhne wali Sheena ko dil se aaj tak koi ladka nahi bhaya tha. Asal me use jis ladke ki chah thi wo kabhi use mila hi nahi. Har koi uske paise aur khubsurati ka deewana ban kar uske piche ata tha par wo aisa ladka chahti thi jise na hawas ho na lalach. Aur use aisa ladka pehli bar mila tha jisne na uske paise ki parwah ki na uski khubasurti ki aur wo tha amit . Ulta Amit ne to use kuch samjha hi nahi ye bhi ek vajah thi k Sheena k dil me Amit ki ek alag jagah ban gyi thi . Waise to wo use apne aage jhukana chahti thi par use uska mard ki tarah uske aur monty k samne khade hona bhi acha lag raha tha .

Shivani jab hospital se bahar aayi to Sheena ko car k pas na pakar use tension hone lagi. Sheena kahin gusse me kuch kar na de ye dar use sata raha tha. Usne Sheena ko phone bhi kiya par bell baj rahi thi wo utha nahi rahi thi. Sheena ne jaldi se car ko ghumaya aur tezi se chal padi Sheena ko khojne . Magar jaldi hi use Sheena badhawas so sadak k kinare paidal chalti hui nazar aa gyi. Shivani ne jaldi se car ko was rok kar ek side ne roka aur Sheena ko car me zabardasti bitha diya. Sheena ka chehra aansuon se bheega hua tha aur aisa lag raha tha jaise wo hosh me hi nahi hai.

Shivani : Sheena khud ko sambhalo , tum aisi to nahi thi. Dekho maine pehle bhi tumhe mana kiya tha. Wo is waqt gusse me hai. Zara socho uski behan k sath kya hone wala tha. Ab use gussa to aayega hi na?

Sheena : rote hue ) main to usse maafi mangne hi gyi thi na apni galati ki. Ab main wo sab badal to nahi sakti na. Mere sath bhi to wahi sab hone wala tha. Kya maine jan bujh kar aisa kiya tha?

Shivani : Sheena control karo yaar , wo maaf kar dega tum thoda wait karo. Maine kaha na wo bahut acha hai .

Sheena : wo kyun nahi samajh raha main ab pehle jaisi nahi rahi , kam se kam ek mauka to milna chahiye na apni galti sudharne ka?

Shivani : calm down sheena bas thoda waqt do use . Jab mujhe usne maaf kar diya to kya tumhe nahi karega ? Tum bas khud ko sambhalo.

Shivani Sheena ko tasalli dete hue use uske ghar le gyi. Idhar Mohit bhi wapis aa gya magar maine usse Sheena ka zikar nahi kiya. Mohit ko aaj jaldi hi neend aane lagi thi shayad jyada hi thak gya hoga. Main sara din to bed par hi raha is liye mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi . Main Sheena aur monty k bare me hi soch raha tha k ek bar fir se darwaza khula aur Dr rina room me aa gyi . Dr rina ko is waqt dekh kar main hairan ho gya kyunki wo to day time hi shift me rehti thi fir is waqt kaise ?

Amit : aap is waqt yahan ?

Dr rina : kyun ? Nahi aa sakti kya ? Aaj operation jyada hi lamba chala is liye main rest karne ghar chali gyi thi aur night shift wale dr k sath apna time change kar liya tha . Usne meri jagah duty de di aur ab main uski jagah aayi hun. ( jabki sachai ye thi k Amit k pas rehne ka mauka rina hath se nahi jane dena chahti thi is liye request kar k usne aaj pehli bar night duty li thi. )

Amit : oh acha to isi liye aap milne nahi aayi thi ? Mujhe laga aap bina mile aise hi chali gyi .

Dr rina : aise kaise ja sakti hun? Dost ho tum mere kya itna bhi nahi kar sakti main ? Well ab to main rat bhar tumhare sath hun. Agar neend na aaye to hum baten kar sakte hain.

Amit : sach me ? Waise mujhe bhi neend nahi aa rahi . Sara din to bed par leta hi raha hun .

Dr rina : fir to hum bahut sari baten kar sakte hain.

Amit : han agar aap ko kam na ho to, kya pata kab kisi patient ko dekhne jana pade.

Dr rina : aisa to koi patient nahi hai par keh nahi sakte. Waise ek bat kahun ?

Amit : kahiye apko puchne ki zarurat nahi.

Dr rina : tum bahut ache ho , ek ladki ki izzat bachane k liye tum apni jan par khel gye. Meri nazron me tumhari izzat aur bhi bad gyi hai.

Amit : maine wahi kiya jo aisi situation me koi bhi kar jata .

Dr rina : sab aise nahi hote Amit , maine dekha hai logon ko aurat ki majburi ka fayda uthate hue. Yahan par to apne bhi dushmano se kam nahi hai aaj kal. Ek aurat k liye uski izzat hi sab kuch hoti hai. Tum nahi jante k jab kisi k sath aisi darindagi hoti hai to uski aatma tak ghayal ho jati hai. Aur samaj bhi uske liye aurat ko hi zimmedar thehrata hai. Isi liye to jyadatar ladkiyan khud khushi kar leti hain.

Amit : sahi kaha aapne , aap ye kin baton me pad gyi. Aisi baten sochne se to aapka mood off ho jayega aur aapka mood kharab hua to kisi ka ilaaj kaise karengi ?

Dr rina : acha fir tum hi batao kya bat karen?

Amit : aap kisi injection k bare me bata rahi thi aaj , kya wo aap la sakti hain?

Dr rina : tum karne kya wale ho ? Kahin tum ....

Amit : jis ladke ne Radha ka kidnap karwaya tha , wo aur bhi kai ladkiyon ki zindagi barbad kar chuka hai aur main chahta hun k ab ye bimari door kardi jaye.

Dr rina : agar aisi bat hai to tumara kam ho jayega par ye gairakaanuni hai.

Amit : wo main dekh lunga , aap par koi bat nahi aayegi.

Dr rina : main apni nahi tumhari bat kar rahi hun. Main nahi chahte tum kisi chakkar me fanso.

Amit : aisa kuch nahi hoga filhal mere liye us darinde ko rokna zaruri hai jo pta nahi kab tak masoom zindagiyon se khelta rahega.

Dr rina : kitni lucky hogi wo ladki jo tumhari zindagi me aayegi. Kitni achi soch hai tumhari. Kaash k main .......

Amit : kya ?

Dr rina : kuch nahi , tum coffee piyoge main ghar se bana kar layi thi .

Amit : to aap poori taiyari k sath aayi hain.

Dr rina : socha jab tak tum yahan to tumhare sath thoda waqt spend kar lun.

Amit : iska matlab fir aapne khud hi night shift li hai.

Dr rina : na . Nahi to .. . . . Han aisa hi samajh lo. Waise to tum milne aate nahi to socha ab aaye ho to kyun na thoda time tumhare sath bita lun . Kya pata tum .....

Amit : kya ? Aap bat poori kyu nahi kehti ?

Dr rina : man me ) kya pata tum bhi mujhe pasand karne lago jaise main karti hun. Kya pata tum bhi mujhe pyar karne lago jaise main karti hun)

Dr rina : wo bas aise hi acha main coffee le kar aayi .

Dr rina coffee lene chali gyi aur main unke bare me sochne laga . Rina ka aise mere liye apni shift badalna aur uski baton ka matlab main samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha . Dr rina thodi der me wapis aa gyi aur hum dono ne sath me coffee pi. Unke sath der tak main baten karta raha aur fir wo khud hi mujhe aram karne ka keh kar chali gyi . Agli subah jab aankh khuli to Radha mere samne thi. Usne mujhe sahara dekar bithaya to samne dekha . kalpana Neha didi aur divya mausi bhi thi . Mohit shayad chala gya tha.

Kalpana : good morning, ab tabiyat kaisi hai ?

Amit : acha hun par aap sab itni subah ? Mohit kahan hai ?

Kalpana : maine use bhej diya . Ab hum sab yahan hai to use ghar ja kar rest karne ko keh diya hai.

Amit : mausi aap ?

Divya mausi : 10 baj rahe hain, socha tumhe bhookh lagi hogi to nashta lekar main bhi inke sath aa gyi .

Neha didi : sorry Amit ek problem ho gyi hai

Amit : kya hua?

Neha didi : wo aate waqt galti se ma ne sun liya k tum hospital me ho aur wo bhi aa rahi hain karuna k sath .

Amit : hey bhagwan , ab to sabko pata chal jayega. Ye aapne kya kiya ?

Kalpana : tum to aise dar rahe ho jaise tumne koi chori ki hai? Sab proud karenge tum par aur tum aise dar rahe ho.

Divya mausi : Kalpana sach keh rahi hai beta , koi kuch nahi kahega tumhe. Mujhe bhi phone aya tha Rita didi ka. Maine unhe sari bat bata di hai.

Itne me mera phone bajne laga. Maine dekha to rajani mausi ka phone tha . Ab main kya bat karta maine phone divya mausi ko de diya . Divya mausi ne rajani mausi ka phone attend kiya aur wo bat karte hue bahar chali gyi .

Amit : ho gya kalyan , ab sab mil kar meri watt lagane wale hain . Rajani mausi ka phone tha aur wo abhi ghar bhi bata dengi .

Kalpana : tum ye darna band karo sab tumse pyar karte hain koi kuch nahi kahega.

Neha didi : Kalpana theek keh rahi hai

Amit : waise aaj to Sunday hai , aaj tum yahan kaise ?

Kalpana : kyun ? Sunday ko ghar se bahar nikalne par pabandi hai kya?

Amit : mera matlab tha k Sunday ko to chhutti enjoy karni chahiye thi tumhe aur tum hospital me aa gyi

Kalpana : mera best friend hospital me ho aur main chhutti enjoy karun ? Tum jaldi se theek ho jao fir sath me mil kar hum sab ghumne chalenge .

Amit : Radha tum kaisi ho ?

Radha : main to theek hun par meri vajah se tum is halat me ho mujhe acha nahi lag raha.

Amit : kya hua hai mujhe ? Zara c chot hi to lagi hai . Agar tumhe bachane me jan bhi chali jati to main parwah nahi karta .

Radha ne mere itna kehte hi mere muh par hath rakh diya.

Radha : khabardar jo aisi bat ki to.

‘ maren tumhare dushman , tumhe to hamari bhi Umar lag jaye ‘

Ye awaz Rita mausi ki thi aur unke sath hi karuna didi aur divya mausi bhi thi. Rita mausi tez kadmo se chalke mere pas aayi aur mujhe gale laga liya.

Rita mausi : kya halat ho gyi hai , mujhe kisi ne bataya kyun nahi ? Tu kal se yahan hai aur mujhe aaj pata chal raha hai wo bhi kisi ne khud se nahi bataya . Kya ab main parayi ho gyi hun han ?

Amit : aisi bat nahi hai mausi ji , zara c chot hai to maine socha kyun sabko pareshan karna.

Rita mausi : isme pareshan hone wali kya bat hai?

Karuna didi : kuch jyada hi smart nahi ban raha tu ? Teri sab chinta karte hain kyunki tujhe sab pyar karte hain aur tu itni badi bat sabse chhipa raha tha . Humen to tum par garv hai k tum hamare liye itna kuch kar sakte ho. Ruk tu abhi naina didi bhi aa rahi hain fir tujhe batati hun.

Divya mausi : koi kuch nahi kahega mere bache ko. Maine hi mana kiya tha sabko batane se.

Rita mausi aise divya mausi ko dekhne lagi jaise koi anhoni ho gyi ho.

Rita mausi : divya !!! tu ye keh rahi hai ???

Divya mausi : kya galat kaha maine ? Kya ye mera beta nahi hai? Bhool gyi aap , damini ne khud kaha tha k Amit tumhara beta hai aur Radha meri beti.

Divya mausi ki bat sun kar Rita mausi to hairan thi hi. Radha bhi Sharma gyi unki bat par . Divya mausi chal mere pas aayi . Ab dono taraf divya mausi aur Rita mausi baithi thi . Fir dono ne apne hathon se mujhe nashta karwaya . Kamre me achi khasi raunak lag gyi thi. Kalpana Neha didi Radha aur karuna didi sath baith kar baten karne lagi. Karuna didi to Radha se sari kahani shuru se sun rahi thi . Kuch der bad Aunty uncle bhi aa gye , Sunday tha aur aaj uncle bhi meri vajah se bahar nahi gye the . Uncle aunty k sath Rita mausi aur Radha mausi baten karne lage . Ab bari thi rajani mausi ki . Aur wo bhi daudte hue kamre me aayi , aate hi mujhe gale se laga liya . Unki ankhen bhigi hui thi. Sach me sab se alag thi wo.

Rajani mausi : ye kya ho gya mere bache ko ? Mujhe kisi ne bataya kyun nahi ? Aag lage un logon ko keede paden jinhone tera ye hal kiya hai. Tu theek to hai na ?

Amit : main theek hun mausi ji , kuch nahi hua mujhe .

Rajani mausi : tu chup kar , sab nazar aa raha hai mujhe. Pehle mujhe ye batao k mujhe kisi ne bataya kyun nahi ?

Divya mausi : didi maine mana kiya tha , ghar ke abhi abhi khushiyan aayi hain , aise sab ka mood kharab ho jata.

Rajani mausi : kuch bhi ho chahe , isse zaruri nahi hai kuch bhi . Main bahut naraz hun tujhse .

Amit : mausi ji asal me maine hi mana kiya tha sabko batane ko isme mausi ki galti nahi hai. Aap unse naraz mat hoiye.

Rajani mausi : bachi nahi hai wo , use nahi pata k ek ma k dil par kya bit ti hai. Gauri ko kya acha lagega jab use pata chalega ? Use bhi nahi bataya hoga kisi ne ?

Amit : aap bhi mat batana , ghar par unhe hi to sab dekhna hai . Kamini mami aur Deepika mami to abhi kuch kar nahi sakti.

Rajani mausi : kitna samajhdar hai mera beta . Tu chinta mat kar main use kuch nahi bataungi. Tune kuch khaya k nahi?

Rita mausi : abhi abhi khaya hua usne aur wo bhi divya k hathon se .

Rajani mausi : khush hote hue ) sach !! Divya aaj tune mujhe wo khushi di hai main bata nahi sakti.

Divya mausi : didi ye mera bhi to beta hai na , kab tak main isse door rehti ?

Rajani mausi : shabash meri behan aaj damini bahut khush hogi bahut khush hogi meri behan.

Rajani mausi k sath sath divya mausi ki ankhen bhi bhar aayi thi is bat par aur fir Rita mausi aur Aunty ne dono ko haunsala diya . Ab mausi k hat te hi mere pyari nidhi didi mere pas aa kar baith gyi aur pyar se mere chehre par hath firate hue boli.

Nidhi didi : kaisa hai mera pyara bhai ?

Amit : acha hun didi aur aap ko dekh kar to aur bhi acha ho gya hun.

Nidhi didi : tune jo kiya hai na usse mujhe tujh par aaj aur bhi garv ho raha hai. Lakhon me ek hai mera bhai. Bhagwan har janam me tumhe mera bhai banaye. Tujh jaise bhai k hote kisi ladki k sath galat nahi ho sakta . Tujhe meri bhi Umar lag jaye bhai.

Amit : didi aap sab se pyari ho , mujhe bhi har janam aapka bhai banna hai. Main aapko bahut miss karta hun par aapse mil nahi pata

Nidhi didi : main bhi tujhe bahut miss karti hun bhai . Karan se jyada mujhe tum pyare ho. Tu hamare sath hi kyun nahi reh leta ?

Aunty : ye to hamare sath hi rahega ye main pehle hi keh deti hun beta . Han tum sab chaho to hamare sath reh sakte ho.

Rita mausi : amit ab se mere sath hi rahega . Waise bhi iske mausa to mahine me 20 din bahar hi rehte hain to ghar par koi to mard hona chahiye na

Divya mausi : kya mera koi hak nahi mere bete par . Hum bhi to ma beti akeli hi rehti hain.

Rajani mausi : tumhara hak to hum sab se jyada hai divya . Ab se ye tumhare sath hi rahega .

Rita mausi : par didi kya hamare sath nahi reh sakta ye ? Kyun na hum sab k ghar bari bari se raha kare ye ?

Rajani mausi : bat to theek hai , tum kya kehti to divya ?

Divya mausi : theek hai agar Rama didi ko manzoor hai to. Waise bhi itne dino se ye hi to dhyan rakh rahi hain iska . Inse puchna jyada zaruri hai.

Aunty : main ise kahin aur bhejna to nahi chahti par is par aap sab ka bhi to hak hai to mujhe manzoor hai.

Rita mausi : lo ho gya clear ab se ek ek hafta kar k tu sab k sath rahega .

Ab badon k faisalon me main bhala kya bolta , maine chup chap hami bhar di. Is faisle se sabse jyada khushi Radha k chehre par thi jabki karuna didi bhi shokh nigahon se mujhe dekh rahi thi aur nazron hi nazron me zahir bhi kar rahi thi k wo kya karne wali hain . Kuch der me hi naina didi aur karan bhaiya bhi aa gye. Aur sab ki tarah naina didi bhi mujhse pehle gila karne lagi bad me sabke sath mil kar baten karne baith gyi. Unhe jab mera sabke sath bari bari se rukne ka pata chala to wo bhi khush ho gyi . Maine ek bat aur note ki k Karan bhaiya sirf Kalpana ko hi taad rahe the. Aur shayad Kalpana ne bhi ye note kar liya tha is liye usne unki taraf apni pith kar li. Is dauran Manju m ka mujhe phone bhi aya wo aana chahti thi magar maine mana kar diya . Kyunki sabke wahan hone se mujhe dar tha k kahin koi bat na ho jisse kisi ko shak ho. Ghar se ma ka aur Deepika mami ka phone bhi aya tha mere gaon na jane ki vajah se to Maine bahana bana diya k uncle k sath koi zaruri kam hai .

Karte karte sara din kaise guzar gya pata hi nahi chala. Rat ko fir se Mohit hi mere pas rukne wala tha aur baki sab wapis chale gye. Sham k bad night shift shuru hote hi Dr rina bhi aa gyi. Wade k mutabik wo mere liye wo injection le aayi thi jo maine unse mangwaya tha. Waise to main aaj chhutti lena chahta tha magar fir maine do din aur hospital me rehne ka socha . Sabke jane k bad maine aage ka plan bana kar dara bhaiya ko phone kar diya aur unhe kal aane ko kaha .

Kal ki tarah aaj bhi Dr rina der tak mere sath baten karti rahi . Wo mere bare me hi jyada puchti rahi meri aadton aur zindagi k bare me. Aaj kal k mukable main behtar tha aur chalne firne me asani thi. Dr rina ne bhi kaha k main chahun to chhutti le sakta hun par mujhe aram karne ki salah dete hue unhone aisa karne se mana kiya. Main khud bhi abhi ek do din rehna chahta tha isi liye maine dara bhaiya ko phone kiya tha. Mere dimag me ek plan aa chuka tha jo ab mujhe poora karna tha.

Agla din Monday tha aur aaj Radha bhi college chali gyi. Mohit ko bhi Maine college jane ko kaha. Mere pas Aunty aur divya mausi ruk gyi thi. Dopeher ko mujhse milne dara bhaiya aa gye aur unke sath unka wahi dost . Maine akele me dara bhaiya ko sari bat bata di to unko bhi bahut gussa aya aur mere sath wo bhi sehmat the .

College me principal sir ne Radha ko bula kar sare mamale ki khud se jaanch ki . Kisi bhi tarah monty ya Sheena par koi bat nahi aayi kyunki na to monty wahan khud maujud tha aur Sheena khud bhi shikar hui thi . Fir bhi principal sir ne police k college me aane aur mujhe doshi manne k khilaf shikayat zarur kar di. Shivani ne mujhe phone par bataya k monty 2-3 din se apne farm house par hi hai na wo ghar par aa raha hai na college me. Bas yahi sahi mauka tha jab main apna plan poora kar sakta tha aur maine ise final karne ka soch liya. Main isme kisi aur ko involve nahi karna chahta tha. Is liye Mohit aur Neeraj se Maine is bare me bat nahi ki . Zara c chook hone par wo bhi monty k radar par aa jate aur main unhe kisi khatre me nahi daalna chahta tha . Is kam me mujhe Dr rina ki madad ki zarurat thi aur unhone bhi meri madad karne ka wada kiya .
 

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Jabardasttt update bhai
Too emotional brother.....
Great update bhai
Emotional kar diya kafi iss update ne
Nice update Bhai.

Manju mam ke raj kab khulega amit ke samne.
Mai kab se intazar kr rha hu us pal ka.

Aap har bar aaisa situation create krte hai jaise ab raj khulega but har bar kuch nhi hota.

Dekhte hai aap kab ye raj kholenge.

Ho sake to jaldi raj kholna kyoki abhi amit ko apni maa dad ke naam ke alawa kuch pata nhi hai.
Waiting for next update
SUPERB UPDATE BHAI
LGTA HE SHEENA AGYI HE
A beautiful stunning episode dear friend Raja Bhai.
Abhi bhi kahani mein kayi mod aane baaqi hain
Awesome Update.
Philhal ke liye Police karwai ruk gayi par Sp Ritu ki nazar me chad gaya aur wah Amit ki aisi taisi karne ka mauka nahi chhodegi .
Divya ka payar khul kar samne aaya jo uske pita se uske nafrat ke karan nahi dikhai aaj use Divya se apni maa jaisa pyar mila .
Monty khar kahiye baithe aur Pareshan karne ka naya tarika soch raha hai aur Amit bhi theek hone ke baad use saza dene ki koshish karega dekhte hai kon pahle war karta hai .
Lagta hai sheena aayi hai jisse gussa ho gaya hai.
Ek aur Tabahi update bhai. Chalo jo laga wo laga Divya mausi ka dil jeet liya amit ne ye best reward hai.
Aur lagta hai Sheena aayi hai amit se milne.
राजा भाई बहत हि कमाल का अपडेट ????
और यह लास्ट में सायद शीना ही होगी जो अमित का हाल चाल पूछने आई है ?
Super exordinary
Bhai shaandar update hai...
Hume lagta hai ritu amit ki band baja kar hi manegi 3k thapad se ritu ka dil na bhara hai :slap:
Nice n fantastic update
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aage ka intjaar
Bahut bhadiya aur emotional update bhai. Khaskar divya mausi aur amit ka milna sabse jyada emotional tha. Mujhe lagta he ki ye SP bhi koi na koi jaankaar niklegi. Lekin isaki galat fehmi jaldi thik karni padegi warna amit par koi bhi case laga sakti he. Agle update me ghar baki sadasyon ko bhi pata lagna chahiye ki umke bete ne kya bahaduri ka kaam kiya he.
Aur monty ke liye wo injection wala idea sabse mast he.

Waiting 4 next update
ये पक्का शीना आयी होगी, लेकिन क्या उसने अपनी बहन डॉ रीना को बताया होगा सब। क्या वो भी साथ होगी।
Nice story badhiya agale update intezar
Write your reply...gajab update bhai
Shandar update..?
Shandaar Update..
Ye pata nahi chala ki inspector ritu ko rokne wala kon tha.. Kalpana ya Monty..
Ye sayad Sheena hogi ya fir Rima
Super sy bhi uper
Lovely update

Radha- Amit ki chemistry ab sahi se dikhne wali hai ...... Mousi ji bhi normal ho ho gayi akhirkaar......

Ghar walon ko batao specially choti mami ko

ACP ko bhi milwao Amit se taaki usko bhi sachhayi pataa chale...

sheena kyun aayi hai abhi raat ko 10 baje shayad Amit se maafi mangne aur ho sakta hai ki amit kuch kuch sacchayi bataa de Sheena ko uske bhai k baare mein.


Waiting for the next one
Ye to Sheena aa gayi kyunki Monty ki to himmat na hogi hospital jaane ki
Shandar update raja bhai ,???
Per sp Ritu ki misunderstanding dur hona bahut jaruri hai, lagta h ye sp aage bahut kam aane wali h
koi baat nahi bhai .. agar aapne iss likhne par time jyaada liya to waise he likha bhi bahut acche se gaya hai .. har ek moment ko naap-tol kar likha hai .. aur jo aam-taur par kisi family member ya rishtedaar ke hospital mein admit hone par hota hai .. bilkul waisa he aapne likh kar dikhaya bhi hai ...

waise aaj hospital mein aate he Manju mam ne seedhi chalaang laga di Amit ke upar par bechara Mohit ye sab dekh kar sakte mein aa gaya .. ?

lagta hai ab last mein Sheena aayi hai milne ...
Awesome Bhai
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Ab dekhte hai Sheena kaise maafi mangegi aur kya amit use maaf karega...
Waiting for next update bro ☺☺
Nice update........
Bhai boht hi acha update hai
Diviya mosi ki narazgi khatm ho gai
Lagta hai sheena ayi hai maffi mangny
Amit sheena ko uske bhai ki sachayi bta dy jo monty ne shalu ke sath kiya ta ke sheena ko pata chaly monty kitna bada harami hai
Amit ab sheena ki madad se sab videos hasil kary ga
Super update hai bhai
Behatreen. Jaisa socha visa he kar diya bhai aapne. Positive energy se bharpoor update. Lagta hai sheena apne ko rok nahi pai.
Superb
Superb Raja bhai......
Jarur ye Sheena hi hogi.........ek pal k lye laga tha aaj manju mam apni bhavna mai beh k apna or Amit ka sara raaz khol degi........ Thank God raaj raj rah gaya.....
Wow nyc update bhai lagta hain Sheena heen hogi gate pe...
Mujhe esi feeling aa rahi hai ke jo doctor rina hai vo Monty ki badi behan hai jiska jikar ek baar lekhak mahoday sheena aur rima ke beech baato me kar chuke hai
Nice update, waiting for next update.
Bhai sheena ke kehne par to monty amit se sorry bol dega par iss bhar amit monty par bharosha na kare nhi har bhar phir se amit ka chutiya katega aur bhai lagta hai sheena acchi hai bas use sahi insaan ki jarurat hai usko aur amit ko aur close dikao taki amit sheena ke through monty ke har plan ko fail kar de bhai sheena ka use karo
Excellent mindblowing superb fantastic update.................
keep posting....................
waiting for next update.............
Mind blowing update bhai
Both hi vadiya update Hy raja bahi tareef k liey ilfaz nai hin
Upload to post bhai
Super duper update

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Raja bhai aapki story ka intezar hi nahi kar pate hai hum to, bas yehi lagta hai ki aap likte jaye aur hum padte jaye..........:yourock::yourock::yourock:
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
H

Hero

Merry khiyal SE remi(Rena) Monty ki sister
Super update
Keep posting
Amit se milne walo ki list badhti hi ja rahi hai bhai. Ab toh Sheena bhi line me lag gai bhai aur Divya ka bhi mamatamyi chehra prakat ho hi gaya.
Idhar Monty laga hai naye sadhyantar me Amit ko sabak shikhane ke liye.
Bahot bahot shaandaar mazedaar update bhai
Zabardast update
Raja bhai bohat hi zabardast update specially divya mausi and amit ko zabardast thaa yaar emotional kar diya amit ke sath sath padne walo ko bhi aur yahi writing skills hoti hai acche writer ki apni writing se sab ko apni feeling me bandh lena. Zabardast update.
Nice update
Bhai Aap jaisi soch sabhi lekhako ,ki ho. Aap ki kahani ke updates se ke liye pratiksha rat rahte hai. Laajawab. Waiting for next
Nice update
Waiting for next update
Send the time of the next update. Otherwise every reader keeps checking with in 5-6 hrs
Lovely updates bro
Shandar अपडेट राजा भैया आखिरी के तीनों अपडेट इस कहानी में नई जान ले कर आ गई है मजा आ गया भैया
Super Duper Hit & Awesome & Gajab & Mast & Very Nice Update Bro

Wah aakhir divya man hi gyi ab dekhte h usk baap se nafrat ki kya wajah h

Salayaha to sb ulta complain m yha but sahi time m sahi ho gya pr y sali kyo nafrat kr rhi h

syd seena aayi ho




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