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Main jab college pahuncha to free lacture tha is liye main sidha canteen me hi chala gya. Mohit aur Minal k sath rima bhi baithi thi magar wo kuch udas dikh rahi thi. Maine jate hi mohit k kandhe par hath rakha.

Amit : kya chal raha hai?

Mohit: tu kahan tha ab tak ? Class me bhi nahi aya?

Maine dekha k mere ate hi rima k chehre par khushi aa gyi thi aur uski udasi gayab ho gyi thi.

Amit : kuch nahi yar zara ek kam tha bas wahi kar k aa raha hun. Tum kaisi ho Minal ?

Minal : main to theek hun magar tumhare na aane se kisi aur ki halat theek nahi thi.

Minal be bat karte hue rima ki taraf ishara kiya.

Rima : mujhe kya hua bhala main to theek hun.

Rima ne Minal ki bat ka jaise jawab diya usse Mohit aur Minal dono hi us par hasne lage aur rima sharma gyi

Amit : achi bhali to hai ise bhala kya hoga

Minal : unke aane se chehre par aa jati hai khushi aur wo samajhte hain mareez ka hal acha hai.

Tumhare aane se pehle iske thobade par 12 baje hue the tum aaye ho to isne koi bat ki hai

Rima fir se sharmane lagi. Maine gaur kiya to rima aaj bhi suit pehen kar aayi thi. Rima bar bar nazar utha kar mujhe dekhti aur mere sath nazar Milte hi sharma kar nazar jhuka leti.

Amit : waise rima main itna bhi bura nahi hun k tum meri taraf dekhti bhi nahi ho.

Rima : Maine Aisa kab kaha wo to ....

Minal : come on yar ab itna bhi Mat sharmao waise to har waqt iski hi bat karti rehti ho aur ab samne baitha hai to bat bhi nahi kar rahi . Mohit kyun na aaj hum bahar chalen movie dekhne?

Mohit: very good idea chalo chalte hain.

Amit : tum teeno jao mujhe kam hai

Minal : chalo na yar tum nahi gye to rima bhi kaise jayegi. Dekho uska kitna dil kar raha hai jane ka.

Mohit : chal na yar kabhi bat man bhi liya kar.

Ab bhala main apne dost ko kaise naraz karta is liye man gya. Uske bad hum charo ek hi car me movie dekhne gye. Mohit aur Minal lights band hote hi premi jode ka kirdar achi tarah nibhane lage yani kissing karne lage. Jabki rima un dono ki is masti ko dekh kar thoda uncomfortable mehsus kar rahi thi. Ab pas baithe jawan ladka ladki aise drishya dikhayen to uska asar hona to natural hai. Sirf mohit minal hi nahi balki is samay aur bhi couples yahi sab kar rahe the. Rima khud ko control karne ki koshish karti kabhi unki taraf dekhti kabhi meri taraf aur kabhi movie ki taraf.

Rima ko is taraf uncomfortable dekh kar maine usko normal karne k liye uska dhyan dusri taraf karne k liye uske hath par apna hath rakha to mujhe mehsus hua k uska jism jaise kamp raha hai. Rima ne meri taraf nigah utha kar dekha to Maine use sehaj rehne ka ishara kiya. Rima meri side ko ho gyi aur mere kandhe se chipak gyi jaise use dusron se dar ho. Maine rima ka hath dhila chhoda magar usne apne dono hatho se mera hath tham liya. Uske bad lights on hone tak rima aise hi mere sath chipak kar baithi rahi. Interval me maine Mohit se kaha k rima ka to khyal karo to usne saf keha diya k Minal ki khushi k liye wo ye sab kar raha hai. Aur interval k bad bhi wahi sab hota raha. Wo dono chonch ladate rahe aur rima mere sath chipak kar baithi rahi. Movie khatam hone k bad jab hum bahar nikle to rima ne ahista se mujhe thanks kaha aur maine bas ishare se uska abhivadan kiya.

Car me pichli seat par baithi Minal pata nahi rima se kya baten kar rahi thi k wo bar bar sharma rahi thi aur uska rang lal gulabi hota ja raha tha. Khair unka lunch ka program bhi tha magar time jyada ho raha tha to college ja kar maine apni bike uthayi aur rima apni car le kar chali gyi magar jate jate bhi wo mujhe hi dekhti rahi. Neha didi aur Radha ja chuki thi aaj main unse nahi Mila tha pata nahi wo kya kahengi kal. Uske bad kuch khas nahi hua. Sham ko jab tuition par gya to Manju m bhi naraz hui class se gair hazir hone ki vajah se magar thodi bahut narazgi k bad fir se man gyi wo bhi mujhse jyada der gusse nahi reh sakti thi. Rat ko fir se aunty ne chudai karne ko kaha magar maine mana kar diya kyunki mere dimag me shalu ko monty k changul se bachane ki baten ghum rahi thi.

Main rat bhar is bare me sochta raha magar mujhe koi bhi safe Rasta nahi mil raha tha. Agar main monty sidha marpit kar k usse videos lene ki koshish karun to ho sakta hai wo mujhe college se niklwa de ya fir apne paison ki takat se mujhe kisi musibat me fasa de iske ilawa wo meri behno ka Jeena mushkil kar sakta hai college me. Mujhe koi tarkeeb nahi mil pa rahi thi magar itna zarur tha k uske pas se wo videos mujhe dimag se nikalwane honge.

‘Tum class se gair hazir rehne ki koi khas vajah bata sakte ho mujhe? Tumne na mujhse pucha na application di tum khud ko samajhte kya ho? Ye indiscipline meri class me nahi chalega. Principal aur kuch prof tumhari support karte hain is vajah se hawa me mat udo warna exam dene se pehle tum college se bahar hoge’

Class me attendance lete waqt Chandarkanta mam ne mujhe poori class k samne khada kar k warning di. Pata nahi mujhse kya khas dushmani rakhne lagi thi mam jabki aur bhi student class se absent hote the magar unhe kabhi kuch nahi kaha. Main sorry bol kar apni seat par baithne laga to Mam ne mujhe khada hi rehne ko kaha lecture khatam hone tak.

Free lacture me hum canteen me baithe the k Neha didi aur Radha canteen me ayi aur mujhe bahar bula kar le gyi.

Neha didi : kal tum kahan the?

Amit : sorry didi wo kal main Mohit k sath bahar gya tha.

Main dekh raha tha k Neha didi bat kar rahi thi aur Radha me muh dusri taraf kar rakha tha . Shayad wo mujhse naraz thi.

Neha didi : kahan gye the ? Tumhe nahi pata k hum tumhe mile bagair jate nahi aur kal ham kitni der tumhara inrzar karte rahe.

Amit : sorry didi meri vajah se aap ko intzar karna pada magar main kya karta Mohit ne meri bat nahi suni aur mujhe uske sath Jana pada

Neha didi : Maine pucha kahan gye the ?

Amit : wo main kal

Radha : movie dekhne gye the janab apni frnds k sath masti karne

Radha ne gusse ye kaha iska matlab usne pata laga liya hai ab to koi bahana nahi chalega . Ab to daant khane k liye taiyari kar Leni chahiye

Neha didi : ab batao kahan gye the

Amit : sorry didi

Neha didi : tum humein bata kar bhi to ja sakte the na . Humein tumhari fikr hoti hai Amit ek to tumne aate hi pange khade kar liye hain upar is Tarah tum bina bataye gayab hote rahoge to ham par kya bitegi.

Amit : wo kya Hai na didi main to khud aap logon k bina kahin Jana pasand nahi karta magar kal class me dil nahi lag raha tha aur Mohit aur Minal me bhi kaha k bahar chalte hain to main unke force karne par chal pada. Agar aap log bhi sath hote to maza ata. Maine unse poocha bhi tha magar unhone kaha k Radha library me pad rahi hai to humne ise disturb nahi kiya.

Radha : kam se kam bata kar to ja sakte the. Mujhe kitna dar lag raha tha kal k kahin fir se tum kisi musibat me na fas gye ho.

Neha didi : it’s ok Radha usne bata diya na ab dosto ki bat bhi kabhi kabhi manni padti hai. Aur Amit tum bhi dhyan rakhna aage se aisi galti nahi honi chahiye pata hai Radha kitni naraz hai tum se.

Itna keh kar Neha didi ne mujhe radha ki taraf ishara kiya use manane ka jo is waqt bhi muh dusri taraf kiye gusse me khadi thi.

Amit : Maine kam hi aisa kiya hai Radha ko to gussa ayega hi sab meri galti hai. Main abhi Radha se Mafi mangta hun.

Main apne dono kan pakad k Radha k samne aa gya. Magar Radha ne fir se dusri taraf muh kar liya. Main fir Radha k samne aa gya aur kan pakade hue ghutno par baith gya. Radha ne khud ko control karne ki koshish ki magar uske chehre par hansi aa hi gyi.

‘ lagta hai college me circus hone wali hai isi liye sare jokar yahin aa gye hain’

‘Aur dekho sath me bandariya bhi hai’

Sheena aur uski dost itna kehte hue apni saheliyon k sath hamara mazak udti hui hamare pas se nikal gyi. Unki bat sun kar mere tan Badan me aag lag gyi usne hamara mazak udaya tha. Sabse jyada mujhe is bat par gussa aya k usne Radha aur Neha didi k bare me bakwas ki. Gusse se meri muthiyan kass gyi aur main sheena k peeche jane laga to Radha ne meri baju pakad li.

Radha : nahi Amit jane do use wo to Hai hi ghatiya tum uski bat par dhyan mat do.

Amit : mujhe apni parwah nahi magar usne tumhare bare me bhi bakwas ki hai. Main ye bardasht nahi kar sakta

‘ I am sorry Amit tum unki bat par dhyan mat do wo Jan bujh kar tumhe uksa rahi hain’

Ye shivani thi jo sheena gang ki hi mamber thi aur unke peeche peeche hi aa rahi thi. Magar uski is bat se main poori tarah hairan tha. Jisne mujhe college se nikalwane k liye itni giri hui harkat ki wo mujhse maafi mang rahi hai wo bhi uski frnds ki baton par. Magar uski ankhon me mujhe sachai nazar aayi . Shivani itna keh kar chali gyi magar mere sath Radha aur Neha didi ko bhi sochne ko majbur kar gyi.

Neha didi: ye to wahi ladki hai na jisne tumhe fasane ki koshish ki thi?

Radha : Han didi ye wahi hai magar aaj ye aise mafi kyun mang rahi hai ? Kahin fir se koi chal to nahi chal rahi ? Please tum (amit) isse dur rehna.

Khair in sab baton se Radha ko apna gussa bhi bhool gya aur hum canteen me sab k sath baith kar baten karte hue khane lage. Mujhe shivani ka ye badla hua roop samajh nahi aa raha tha pehle jo kuch ho chuka hai uski vajah se ab main har bat par 10 bar pehle sochne laga tha. Waise bhi jis Pathar se ek bar thokar lag chuki ho usse dobara thokar khale wala nadan nahi bewakoof hota hai.

Chhutti k waqt jab hum college se ghar k liye nikalne lage to parking me mujhe shivani fir se mil gyi. Wo is waqt akeli thi aur shayad meri hi wait kar rahi thi. Jaise hi main Mohit k sath uski car me baithne laga to shivani ne mujhe bulaya.

Shivani: Amit please kya ek minute main tumse bat kar sakti hun?

Maine Mohit ko jane ka ishara kiya aur khud uske pas chala gya.

Shivani: main apne kiye par bahut shrminda hun please kya tum mujhe dil se maaf kar doge?

Amit : main tumhe pehle hi maaf kar chuka hun tum wo sab bhool jao aur galat logon se door raho.

Shivani : mujhe pata hai tumne abhi tak mujhe dil se maf nahi kiya hai. Maine kam hi aisa kiya hai . Tum chaho to mujhe koi bhi saza de sakte ho main mana nahi krungi magar please mujhe maf kardo. Us din office me jo kuch tumne kaha uske bad se main chain se so nahi Pati meri ma ne bhi mujhe bahut khari khoti sunai. wo to tumse itni impress ho gyi hain k har waqt tumhara nam le kar mujhe samjhati rehti hain. Mujhe apni galti ka ehsas hai. Isi liye main is din se monty se bhi nahi mili. Sheena meri bachoan ki dost hai magar wo monty jaisi nahi hai isi liye main usse bat kar leti hun agar tum kahoge to main use bhi chhod dungi. Please ek bar mujhe dil se maaf kar do jab tak tum mujhe maf nahi karoge mere dil ko chain nahi milega . Main tumhare paon padti hun mujhe maf kardo.

Itna keh kar sachmuch shivani ansoo bahati hui mere paon me baith gyi. Mujhe us par Taras aa gya, dil keh raha tha k wo sach keh rahi hai magar dimag abhi bhi keh raha tha k ye koi nayi chal bhi ho sakti hai. Magar is waqt use aise rote hue dekhna bhi mujhe acha nahi lag raha tha.

Amit : utho niche se aur please rona band karo tumhare jaisi khubsurat ladki rote hue bilkul bhi achi nahi lagti. Maine kaha na main tumhe pehle hi maf kar chuka hun. Tumhari tasalli k liye main kasam kha kar kehta hun k main tumhe dil se maf karta hun.

Shivani : thank you thank you so much

Itna keh kar shivani ne mujhe gale laga liya.

Shivani : tum nahi jante k main pal pal apne aap ko hi kosti rehti thi. Ab ja kar kahin main chain se so paungi. Aur Han ab tumhe hamare ghar ana padega. Ma tumse Milna chahti hain unhone specially kaha hai k jab tak tum mujhe maf nahi karoge aur unke sath baith kar Nashta nahi karoge wo mujhe maf nahi karengi. Ab please tum mere ghar chalo.

Shivani ki is bat ne mujhe fir se sochne par majbur kar diya kahin ye koi chal na ho. Magar shivani ki halat dekh kar dil us par yakeen karne ko keh raha tha.

Amit : main tumhare ghar aunga Lekin fir kisi din . Tum chaho to Aunty se meri bat Karwa sakti ho.

Maine aisa is liye kaha k pata to chale k shivani sach bol rahi hai ya jhooth. Shivani ne khush hote hue foran apna mobile nikala aur call lagayi.

Shivani : hello mom ye lijiye amit se bat kijiye

Amit : hello namaste Aunty

Shivani’s mom: jeete raho beta. Kaise ho ? Kab aa rahe ho ghar ? Main kab se tumhara intzar kar rahi hun? Tum aa rahe ho na? Tumne shivani ko maf kar diya na? Please wo nadan hai use maf kardo Maine use samjha diya hai wo kabhi aisi galati nahi karegi dobara.

Amit : Aunty main theek hun aur mujhe shivani se koi gussa nahi hai Maine use maf kar diya hai aap bhi use maf kar dijiye aur main aaj nahi aa sakta fir kisi aur din pakka aunga.

Shivani’s mom: jab tak tum mere pas nahi aaoge mujhe yakeen kaise hoga k tumne shivani ko maf kiya?

Amit : main wada karta hun Aunty main zarur aunga magar aaj mujhe ek kam se kahin Jana hai please fir kisi din milunga ab main chalta hun Aunty bye.

Shivani’s mom: bye beta.

Shivani : ab to yakeen ho gya meri bat par?

Amit : tum aisa kyun keh rahi ho shivani , Maine kaha na main aunga kisi din ab tum Aram se ghar jao main kisi din tumhare ghar pakka aunga. Ab chalta hun bye

Shivani : bye

Iske sath hi main mohit k sath car me baith gya aur shivani apni car me baith gyi.

Mohit : ab kya naya drama kar rahi thi?

Amit : kuch nahi yar bechari mafi mang rahi thi aur ghar bula rahi thi uski mom mujhse milna chahti hain.

Mohit : tune kya kaha? Kahin tu fir se uski baton me to nahi aa gya?

Amit : pata nahi yar mujhe lagta hai wo sach bol rahi hai warna wo apni ma se meri bat nahi karwati. Uski mom se main office me mila tha wo bahut achi hain shayad shivani bhi sudhar gyi hai. Ab chal

Hum baten karte hue Minal ko sath le kar ghar ko nikal liye. Khana khane k bad main apne room me rest kar raha tha k mere mobile par call Ane laga maine dekha to Naina didi ka tha.

Amit : aaj kaise yad aa gyi aapko?

Naina didi : main to har pal tumhe yad karti hun ek tum hi ho jo yad nahi karte

Amit : nice punch kahiye kaise yad kiya.

Naina didi : budhu ( jane kab samjhega)

Amit : kya kaha?

Naina didi: kuch nahi , main Teri vajah se problem me fas gyi hun aur ab mujhe tu hi isse bahar nikal sakta hai. Tujhe meri madad karni hogi.

Amit : meri vajah se musibat me hain aap ? Main kuch samjha nahi

Naina didi: us din wo meri saheli mili thi na theatre me usne sabko bata diya hai tumhare bare me aur ab sab tumse milna chahti hain . Kal Saturday hai aur kal tumhe har hal me Ana hoga warna wo mera jeena haram kar dengi.

Amit : isme musibat wali kaun c bat hai ?

Naina didi : musibat ye hai k wo mere bf se milna chahti hain aur tumhe mera bf ban k ana hai .

Amit : ye aap kya keh rahi hain ? Aap us din sach bata deti to aaj ye musibat na hoti. Ab bhi aap unhe sach bata do

Naina didi : tu kya chahta hai k sare college me wo mujhe behanji keh kar mera mazak udayen .

Amit : mujhe ye sab theek nahi lag raha hai aap unse keh do apka bf kahin bahar gya hua hai koi bahana bana do

Naina didi : tujhe kal Ana hai to Ana hai bas. Main pehle bhi unse 2 bar bahana bana chuki hun ab kal tum na aye to wo mera mazak udana Shuru kar dengi. Agar tujhe meri parwah hai to aa jana aage teri marzi.

Itna keh kar didi ne phone kat diya.ab ye nayi musibat aa gyi main bhala kaise didi ki frnds k samne unhe apni gf keh sakta hun . Pata nahi wo kya kya kahengi . Main ye soch soch kar tension me aa gya. Agar main nahi gya to didi ka mazak udaya jayega jo mujhe bhi acha nahi lagega ab meri jagah didi kisi aur ko bhi nahi le k ja sakti. Jo bhi ho ab mujhe didi ki madad karni hogi . Acting hi to karni hai kaun sa kuch karna hai . Yahi soch kar main kal jane k liye taiyar ho gya. Uske bad maine rest ki aur fir practice k bad mam k pas tuition padne k liye gya. Aaj bhi maine Aunty ko chudai k liye mana kar diya . Agla din Saturday tha aur aaj mujhe Naina didi k pas jana hoga is liye main aaj ghar se Bullet se hi nikla aur college me apna pehla lecture attend kar liya ta ki chandarkanta madam se panga na ho. Manju m ko maine bahar hi bata diya k mujhe zarurj kam se jana hai to unhone bhi kuch nahi kaha. Maine Neha didi ko bhi message kar k bata diya k main kahin ja raha hun taki wo aur Radha bhi tension na le. Uske bad maine Naina didi se time aur address pucha aur nikal gya unse Milne.

Naina didi aur karuna didi dono girls college me padti thi. College me to main ja nahi sakta tha is liye unhone mujhe ek restaurant me bulaya tha. Main theek time par restaurant me pahunch gya. Restaurant me Naina didi bahar hi mera wait kar rahi thi aur aaj poori pataka lag rahi thi. Main unhe dekh kar ek bar unki khubsurti me kho gya. Didi ne aaj red T-shirt pehni huyi thi jis par heart bana hua tha. Aur uske sath hi skintight blue jeans . Didi ki tight fitting dress me unki poori body shape pata chal rahi thi. Unke bade bade boobs patali kamar k upar alag hi nazar aa rahe the. Gore dudhiya rang Gol chehre par black goggles patali Naak gulabi gaal aur patale gulab ki pankhudiyon se rasbhare patale honth. Lambi surahi dar gardan kano me jhumke T-shirt k border k neeche se jhankti unki nabhi. Main to unki khubsurati ko sar se paon tak dekh dekh kar flat hota ja raha tha. Tabhi didi ne meri ankhon k aage chutki bajayi.

Naina didi: hello kahan kho gye ? Bike se neeche utaro andar bhi chalna hai . Tum to aise dekh rahe ho jaise pehli bar dekha ho.

Amit : aap sach me bahut khubsurat hain

Naina didi : blushing) wo to tumhe dekh kar hi pata chal raha hai. Aur ab please mujhe aap ya didi Mat kehna . Mujhse sirf mere nam se hi bulana warna unko shak ho jayega. Aur Han tum par mere bf ho iska unko tumhe yakeen dilana hai is liye wo kuch bhi karne ko kahen chup chap man Lena main kisi bat ka gussa nahi karungi chahe kuch bhi ho. Is liye tum kuch bhi sochna Mat aur darna to bilkul bhi nahi. Agar tum aaj fail hue to main tumhe maaf nahi karungi. Tumhe kuch bhi karne ki Azadi hai aaj tum Bhul jao k hum Bhai behan hain aaj main sirf tumhari gf hun aur tum mere bf.

Amit : par didi

Naina didi : Maine kaha na mujhe mere nam se bulao aur aaj main tumhari gf hun is bat ko dhyan me rakho aur ek bf ki tarah ab sara din mere sath rehna.

Maine Han me sar hilate hue bike ko side stand par lagaya aur didi k sath andar jane laga to didi ne fir se mujhe toka.

Naina didi: budhu aise nahi . Ek bf ki tarah chalo nahi to wo samajh jayengi tum acting kar rahe ho.


Didi mere sath chipak gyi aur mera hath apni kamar par rakh diya. Kamar par T-shirt aur jeans k beech thoda gap tha jahan par mera hath padte hi mujhe unki body ki softness feel hui aur mere andar ek jhurjhuri si daud gyi sath me didi k jism me bhi ek kampkampi si maine feel ki. Hum dono aise hi ek dusre se chipke smile karte hue andar chale gye.
 
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Ab nikala sahi wala plot bhai ab ayega maza jab Amit vs Monty and gang hoga.Manju k roop mai behan mil gayi usko and I think Rima bhi manjiri ki jagah bhar degi uski life mai and shalu ek achi dost ki jagah bhar degi..wait rahega next update ka
Shaandaar update bhai
Nice update
Nice n fantastic update
Beautifully written. Keep going mate. Waiting for more good stuff from you :reading:
Mast update
Awesome updates
Awesome fabulous update
Sale Monty ko kaise saza dega Amit lakin Jo bhi de thoda hat ke de Matlab different
Keep posting
FABULOUS UPDATE BHAI
Shandar update..
Mast update tha bhai. Thoda emotion bhi tha. Shalu ki kahani bahut dardnak hai.
Lekin us mc monty ko iski saza milni chaiye.
Chut ke badle chut
Ab Shivani aur Sheena ko fasane ka samay aa gaya hai.

Waiting for next update.
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Salu ki life to sach me barbad ki hai. Per hero bhi usko change nahi kar sakta.
Monty ki bahan ke sath ye sab ho to use samaj aayega iska dard..
I think manju bhua hai hero ki....

Nice update
Jabardast. Waiting for next
bahot hi acha update tha bhai
Nice update
Fantastic update bhai
update to bahot achha diya h mitra ab to shalu ki dukhon ki dastan bhi sun li puri ki kya hua h aur kyo wo chah kar bhi kuch nahin kar sakti wese amit bhi jyada kuch to nahin kar sakta samne se agar use montu n team ko line pe lana h dimag ka istemal se hi kuch kar sakta h haan mohit jaroor kuch madad kar de isme par wo bhi jyada to nahin kar payega dekhte hain aage
Very nice update
Waiting for next
Super update hai bhai
Bhai lockdown me kamsekam do update diya karo please
Superb update bro.
duation

Great.....
Waiting for next....
Very nice update ab dekhte hy amit shalu ko un kamino se kese bachata hy yar is matter ko jaldi khtam kro bohat ziyada lamba kheenvh liya hy apne waiting for next update
Very nice update bhai
Story kaffi acchi hai bhai
But ye jo monty wala matter hai esko aap thoda jaldi katam kro
Kaffi lamba ja rha hai
Aise me story ka maza hai wo fika ho rha hai
Baki aapko jo thik lge
Ho ske to 1'2 update me monty our uske dosto ka kissa khatam kro
Bahut badhiya.... Ab kahani ke kirdaar khulkar samne aa rahe hain....
Duniya me kuchh achche bure hote hain.. Aur kuchh ko halaat achchha bura bana dete hain....
Shalu ki jindgi ho ua manju mam ki.... Khatm hi ho chuki hain.... Inhein nayi jindgi dena hi asli hero banayega amit ko
Jaise rama ki jindgi khatm hone se bachai... Lekin use kab tak pakde rahega... Jyada sahara apahij kar deta hai... Use khud khade hone ka raasta dikhakar manju ko sahara de...

Keep it up
Awesome update
Jordaar update bhai

Ab bs radha ki baat aage bdhao thodi nd bdimaa ki koi khabr h nai h aajkal uska bhi kuch zikar karo bhai baki aapki marzi bhai

Vaise aap ko sab pata h he ke kab kya krna h....

Keep going bro ?
Superb update......?
nice update
very nice update
Awesone update bhai
Dheere dheere manju mam ki life bhi patri par aa rahi hain.
Par ye acha suspense hain ke manju mam koun hain, kabhi aisa lagta hain ke hero ke relatives me se hi hain par guess karna mushkil hain ke kis side ke relatives me hongi aur ye bhi confirm nahi hain ke sach ke wo hero ki relative hain ya nahi.
Chalo dheere dheere wo bhi pata lag jayega.
Hero ki maa ( badi mami) ka character bhi samajh me nahi ata, kabhi kabhi uski care karti hain ye bhi dikhta hain jab wo use dekhna chori chupke jati hain par jab samne ata hain to itni bate sunati hain ke amit wahi par suicide karle.
Mast mast update
WAITING FOR UPDATE BHAI
Update???????????
Waiting next update
Waiting for next
Waiting bhai
Waiting Waiting :injail:
Update ki aasha h ?
Awesome update bhai waiting for next
Bhai pehle 2 update aate the daily..
Phir 1 hua..
Ab 2 din me 1 aata hai??
Ab to 2 din ke baad bhi nahi aa raha hai
Bhai koi timetable hi kya
Raja bhai update kab intzar hai
Waiting next update please
Waiting bhai
Raja chouhan bhai i have been reading your story from day 1 and wanted you to know that it is one of the best i have read on this forum.. And know that you give updates regularly if any problems are going on kindly say so..
Please don't take in the wrong way.
I love the story and would enjoy if you give updates regularly.
Bhai bhua bhatije ka milan jaldi karwao ??
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